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Interactive story game (Episode 5: The comeback) (NEW)

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Manishh
No episode yet, since today I finally finished structuring a good chunk of the story. I’ve paused for now because from this point on, the direction of the story is mostly in your hands, your choices will decide how far and how long it survives.

Don’t get me wrong though. I’m not trying to help your characters survive because thats no fun. I will try harder this time to end the story on lose because you guys won last game.

This thread will be the place where episodes are posted, just like the last story thread.

But before that, I want to explain how the story mechanics work so it doesn't feel like I’m just chilling and doing nothing lol.

This time, the story leans more toward interaction, because we all know that’s the fun part. I don’t really have a word to describe the exact style, so bear with me and try to understand and follow along.

I’ve added a couple of mechanics to make your choices more important and impactful. The two basic ones you should know about are: Fight and Food.

Fight Mechanic
There will be battles that you must take part in to survive on the planet. Think Pokemon-style, turn-based fights.
You can fight solo, but most of the time you’ll be with others assuming they survive too, lol.

Each of you has been assigned an HP and ATK stat, which will determine how fights play out. I won’t spoil too much more here, since I want to keep things interesting.

Food Mechanic
Obviously, you need food to survive.
Each character has a certain food requirement to stay energetic, and that need has to be met somehow. How you meet it will depend on your choices.

I hope you all find this system fun and interesting And don’t worry, there will be dialogue and interaction between characters. That’s still a big part of the story. For me, it’s the balance between character moments and game mechanics that’s going to make this concept really fun.

Expect the first episode tomorrow (if I’m free), or within the next day or two! Also let me know if you have feedback or questions.
Characters info

Fujiya = Fujiya Sayo

Mangagrumpy = Manga M. Grumpy

JLuca913 891 = Luca

Osudroid96 = Droid

Corne2Plum3 = Corne2Plum3

Blushing = Atlas

DM FOR MUTUAL = Yro

179bpm = 179bpm

Noreu = Xonte

almonds = shiroverra
Fujiya

Manishh wrote:

question
is this story the peak of your story-thing, or one of many to come tho (in other words: you did an experiment and is this the final thing or the beginning) I wanna know.....
Topic Starter
Manishh

Fujiya wrote:

Manishh wrote:

question
is this story the peak of your story-thing, or one of many to come tho
High chance of this being the last since I will get real busy after this month which will shrink my free time.

So you can say this be the peak for now.
JLuca913 891
another question

what if im not active in the forums when you posted the episode?

I mean we all have different timezones
MangaGrumpy
Woah this actually seems really interesting
Topic Starter
Manishh

JLuca913 891 wrote:

another question

what if im not active in the forums when you posted the episode?

I mean we all have different timezones
You have 24hours to reply. If for some reason you are not able to reply then I will touch you
JLuca913 891

Manishh wrote:

JLuca913 891 wrote:

another question

what if im not active in the forums when you posted the episode?

I mean we all have different timezones
You have 24hours to reply. If for some reason you are not able to reply then I will touch you
omg creepy :shocked: :shocked:
DM FOR MUTUAL

Manishh wrote:

I will touch you
what
Topic Starter
Manishh
I meant I will make contact with you
DM FOR MUTUAL

Manishh wrote:

I meant I will make contact with you
physical contact???? please don't hurt me please contact me gently at least
JLuca913 891

Manishh wrote:

I meant I will make contact with you
what contact

eye contact?
social media contact?
physical contact?
diddy contact
wait what
Osudroid96

JLuca913 891 wrote:

Manishh wrote:

I meant I will make contact with you
what contact

eye contact?
social media contact?
physical contact?
diddy contact
wait what
banana contact
Topic Starter
Manishh
direct message.... contact...
MangaGrumpy
Bump
Corne2Plum3
Where story?
JLuca913 891
um
Fujiya
nvm hes not dead
Topic Starter
Manishh
uhh there is some technical difficulty

it will be posted soon...
Topic Starter
Manishh
Title: The Kaltheos Expedition
Year: 2182


Seventy years ago, humanity discovered wormholes scattered across the solar system, gateways that defied the limits of space and time. What was once the realm of science fiction became reality: flying cars glided between skyscrapers, nanomedicine eradicated disease, and interplanetary travel was as common as taking a train.

Yet, despite this golden age, leaving the solar system remained a privilege for the elite, until now.

The World Space Travel Program had just confirmed the discovery of Kaltheos Prime, an Earth-like exoplanet deemed safe for human visitation. To celebrate, the government selected ten high school students for an all-expenses-paid expedition—an opportunity of a lifetime.

Departure
Location: Interstellar Launchport 7, Terminal 7-B
Time: 06:30 AM

The terminal hummed with energy, bathed in the soft glow of holographic displays. Massive shuttles towered like metallic giants, their hulls shimmering under the artificial dawn. Security drones patrolled overhead, their scanners flickering as they processed the crowd.

Among the throng of travelers, ten individuals stood out, destined for Flight 09X: Kaltheos Prime.

The First Arrival: Corne2Plum3
A hush fell over the security line as a towering humanoid wolf stepped forward. His fur, a mix of deep blues and grays, bristled slightly under the fluorescent lights. He didn’t speak—didn’t need to. The scanning machine stuttered, then beeped green.

"What even is that thing?" a security officer muttered.

Corne2Plum3’s golden eyes flicked toward the voice, nostrils flaring as he absorbed the scents of steel, ozone, and human sweat. He said nothing.

The Second Arrival: Manga M. Grumpy
A lanky teen shuffled in, dragging a patch-covered duffel bag behind him. His dark circles rivaled his disheveled hair, and he groaned as he stretched.

"Why in the interstellar name of soggy fishsticks did I agree to this…" Manga grumbled, rubbing his shoulder. "Space air gives me joint pain already."

Spotting Corne, he raised a hand. "Yo, what’s up?"

Silence.

"…Did I say something wrong?" Manga thought, suddenly self-conscious.

The Third Arrival: Manishh (The Guide)
A cheerful young man in a World Space Travel uniform approached, clapping his hands. "Ah, I’m not the first! Nice to meet you two, you must be Corne and Manga, right? I’ll be your guide for this trip."

Both nodded.

"Yes, I’m Manga M. Grumpy," Manga said, forcing a smile. "Nice to meet you too."

The Rest of the Crew Arrives
One by one, the others appeared:

Luca burst in, breathless. "Heyyy! I’m finally here! This place is a maze-I thought you’d leave without me!"

179bpm stumbled in, looking half-dead. "I’m finally here…" he wheezed.

Manishh blinked. "You look terrible-are you okay?"

"Caffeine," 179bpm muttered. "Haven’t slept in 38 hours."

Luca gasped. "How are you alive?!"

179bpm grinned weakly. "Sheer spite."

Droid, Shiroverra, Xonte, and Atlas arrived together, chatting among themselves.

Droid adjusted his glasses nervously. "I didn’t expect so many cameras… Should’ve finished that cloaking module."

Shiroverra eyed Corne suspiciously. "Is that thing going with us?"

Corne’s ear twitched. "Thing?" he thought, claws flexing slightly.

Xonte crossed his arms. "So this is the crew. Huh."

Atlas stormed in last. "WHY AM I LAST?? WHO WROTE THE SCRIPT??"


A commotion erupted near security. A girl on a hover-skateboard, laughing as guards chased her.

"What’s going on?" Manishh sighed, jogging over. After a long, painful negotiation, Yro was allowed to join with a warning.

"Don’t ride a skateboard in a launchport," Manishh scolded.

"Hah, won’t happen again!" Yro grinned, not sorry at all.

Manishh did a headcount. "1, 2, 3… 9. Wait, where’s Fujiya?"

A small voice came behind Corne2plum3

"I was here from the start."

Corne2plum3 jumped. Fujiya had been standing there the whole time, silent as a shadow.

"Haha, I was joking!" Manishh lied poorly to avoid awkward situation. "Alright, let’s board!"



The shuttle roared to life, pressing them into their seats as Earth shrank behind them. The stars blurred. then darkness swallowed them whole.

They had entered the wormhole.


After the initial thrill faded, silence settled.

"Alright, let’s break the ice!" Luca clapped. "I’ll start. I’m Luca. I game, I talk, I distract people. Sometimes it’s useful, sometimes annoying. Oh, and I’m terrified of blood. Like really really terrified"

One by one, they shared:

Fujiya (arms crossed): "I like solving problems. Logic. Details. Working in groups? Not my thing. But I’ll try not to get in the way."

Yro (grinning): "I like skate, I film stuff, and I hate serious talks. Life’s too short for frowns."

179bpm (slouched): "Call me 179. I like melee combat and running. Also, caffeine."

Xonte (bored): "I pick locks. That’s it." (Awkward clapping.)

Shiroverra (excited): "Call me Shiro! I’m a biology nerd ask me about anything bio related!"

Atlas (smiling): "I love history. Oh, and I’m good at first-aid. I'm blind but that doesn’t stop me."

Droid (nervous): "I, uh, build robots. And tech. Yeah."

All eyes turned to Corne2Plum3.

The wolf took a deep breath, as if preparing for battle.

"I’m Corne."

Long Silence.

Then applause.


The shuttle hummed steadily as the wormhole spat them out into open space. The cabin lights flickered back on, revealing a massive, swirling blue-green planet looming in the viewport.

Manishh’s voice crackled over the intercom: "Everyone, you can now see Kaltheos Prime from the windows! We’ll begin descent in five minutes. Please return to your seats."

The group rushed to peer outside.

Luca pressed her face against the glass. "Whoa… it’s like Earth, but… shinier?"

Shiroverra adjusted her glasses, analyzing. "The atmospheric composition seems stable. look at that cloud formation!"

Yro smirked. "Bet I could grind those mountain ranges."

Corne2Plum3 remained silent, but his ears twitched taking in every detail.

The shuttle tilted, engines roaring as it entered the planet’s atmosphere.

Then, everything went wrong.

A violent shudder rocked the ship. Alarms blared, lights flickered, and the floor lurched beneath them.

Manga slammed into a wall. "WHAT THE HELL--?!"

179bpm grabbed a seatbelt, eyes wide. "Are we crashing?!"

Droid frantically tapped at a panel. "Systems are glitching, something’s messing with our descent!"

Manishh’s voice boomed, strained but firm: "EVERYONE, STAY CALM! Get to the safe room-NOW!"

The group scrambled, stumbling as the ship bucked like a wild animal.

Atlas grabbed Fujiya’s arm, pulling her forward. "Move!"

Xonte cursed, nearly tripping over a loose panel. "This is why I hate space!"

They piled into the reinforced safe room. A small chamber lined with emergency supplies. Manishh did a quick headcount.

"Good, everyone’s---"

CRACK.

A window shattered.

The vacuum of Kaltheos’ atmosphere roared, metal groaning as the air ripped out of the ship.

Manishh was standing too close.

Luca screamed. "MANISHH--!"

Corne2Plum3 lunged, claws digging into the floor-grabbing Manishh’s wrist at the last second.

Yro and 179bpm grabbed Corne, trying to anchor him.

But the pull was too strong.

"HOLD ON!" Atlas yelled.

A second explosion rocked the ship.

Corne’s grip slipped.

Manishh’s terrified eyes met theirs--

--and then he was gone.

White.

Silence.

..

..

...

....

..

Consciousness returned in fragments.

A pounding headache.

Smoke in the air.

The distant beep of dying machinery.

Luca groaned, pushing herself up. "Ugh… what…?"

The safe room door had been jammed open, revealing a nightmare.

The shuttle was destroyed.

Walls bent inward.

Sparks sputtering from torn wires.

Sunlight streaming through a cracked hull.

179bpm sat up, clutching his ribs. "Did we… crash?"

Fujiya was already on her feet, scanning the damage. "Affirmative. Emergency systems failed. We’re lucky to be alive."

Yro let out a shaky laugh. "Lucky? Our guide just got yeeted into space!"

Silence.

Then--panic set in.

Manga hyperventilated. "We’re stranded. We’re actually stranded."

Droid muttered, "No signal… no comms… we’re off-grid."

Shiroverra hugged herself. "What if the air is toxic? What if--"

"ENOUGH."

Corne2Plum3’s voice cut through the chaos-deep, commanding.

Everyone froze.

Atlas took a breath, steadying himself. "He’s right. Panicking won’t help. We need to assess our situation."

Xonte crossed his arms. "And do what? Build a house out of wreckage?"

Fujiya adjusted her glasses. "First, we check supplies. Then, we scout. Then, we survive."

A beat.

Luca clapped her hands together. "Alright, team! Let’s get organized."

After salvaging what they could, they decided to split up:


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This is the part, where you will have couple option to decide what your character will do. So please choose carefully.

A: Team 1: Ship Inspection (To gather what is left in the ship and to check if any equipment still works)
B: Team 2: Food & Water (To search for Food and water)
C: Team 3: Area Recon (To search the area around the crash site)

Each option is useful and will provide certain items and information that might be useful for survival. Its up to you if you want to discuss with others and if you dont want to, that is fine as well. Once you have decided, send me a DM on what option you are choosing for your character.

You have 24hours to submit me the choice
DM FOR MUTUAL
I need some fresh air after that, I'll be heading out to check our surroundings. Anyone come with?
DM FOR MUTUAL
I just remembered my username isn't yro but fucking DM FOR MUTUAL so maybe rping like this isn't the best idea lol

Can we get a list of who is what character?
Osudroid96
As the tech guy I'm going to stay in the ship and try to gather whatever is useful
JLuca913 891
I'm male. WHY IS IT A HER
ok maybe I filled the form like my character was a female but whatever pls change it 🗿

change it manish thx

answer
as the most useless character, I'm just gonna follow droid and help him do stuff

(stay in the ship and try to gather whatever is useful)
Topic Starter
Manishh
Btw, once you all have decided, make sure to DM me with the choice.


DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

I just remembered my username isn't yro but fucking DM FOR MUTUAL so maybe rping like this isn't the best idea lol

Can we get a list of who is what character?
uh what? what do you mean? You submit your character with the name Yro.

Also yeah I will add that list.




JLuca913 891 wrote:

I'm male. WHY IS IT A HER
ok maybe I filled the form like my character was a female but whatever pls change it 🗿

change it manish thx

answer
as the most useless character, I'm just gonna follow droid and help him do stuff

(stay in the ship and try to gather whatever is useful)
My bad for that. Luca sounded like a female name to me. Now I have to increase your health and attack level.
Osudroid96

JLuca913 891 wrote:

I'm male. WHY IS IT A HER
(Thinking inside character): Female Luca kinda hot...
DM FOR MUTUAL

Manishh wrote:

DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

I just remembered my username isn't yro but fucking DM FOR MUTUAL so maybe rping like this isn't the best idea lol

Can we get a list of who is what character?
uh what? what do you mean? You submit your character with the name Yro.
Because my osu name and character name are different someone reading what I wrote might have no idea which character I was, or at least it might not be immediately obvious
Corne2Plum3
My eyes are red not golden :3

Anyways team 3 anyone?
MangaGrumpy
Off to a great start
Anybody want to join team 2 with me?
Topic Starter
Manishh

DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

Manishh wrote:

DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

I just remembered my username isn't yro but fucking DM FOR MUTUAL so maybe rping like this isn't the best idea lol

Can we get a list of who is what character?
uh what? what do you mean? You submit your character with the name Yro.
Because my osu name and character name are different someone reading what I wrote might have no idea which character I was, or at least it might not be immediately obvious
Yeah that make sense xD, i got scared that i messed up characters


Corne2Plum3 wrote:

My eyes are red not golden :3

Anyways team 3 anyone?
Nah bruv they are golden now
almonds
can i like not pick the option? my character is not a very front and confident character i think she would wait for others to tell her what to do and go with the flow of thing

edit:but i think she would also be interested in studying corne like try to be close to him to study him but try to not make it obvious
idk manishh can you make the decision for me ( ❛ ֊ ❛)?
Topic Starter
Manishh
I do wanna mention that some character will benefit more by choosing places or things which they are skilled at.
Osudroid96

almonds wrote:

can i like not pick the option? my character is not a very front and confident character i think she would wait for others to tell her what to do and go with the flow of thing

edit:but i think she would also be interested in studying corne like try to be close to him to study him but try to not make it obvious
idk manishh can you make the decision for me ( ❛ ֊ ❛)?
An interactive story where you don't interact is kinda boring. Try to role as you character and say something like "I gess choose team 3, i think corne is... interesting"
almonds
but sometimes to stick within an option can kinda make your character break their character a bit tho like in this case if i pick an option means my character in the story will thought of this decision herself and spoke it to others out loud it would be out of character for her, but in this case i think i can pick an option without making her go out of character by going where corne goes to study him(without making it obvious)

okie decision made! i go where corne goes because as nerd in biology seeing something that's alive and interesting that you haven't seen before, who wouldn't want to take a closer look to study them(without making it obvious)
Corne2Plum3
My character can be good for exploration/fighting and can even hunt for food. For social stuff I'm sure very bad (idk how much Manishh nerfed my character)

That's why I'm going team 3, I shouldn't be bad at fighting if needed
Fujiya
I definitely want to see what happened to the ship
Topic Starter
Manishh

almonds wrote:

can i like not pick the option? my character is not a very front and confident character i think she would wait for others to tell her what to do and go with the flow of thing

edit:but i think she would also be interested in studying corne like try to be close to him to study him but try to not make it obvious
idk manishh can you make the decision for me ( ❛ ֊ ❛)?

almonds wrote:

but sometimes to stick within an option can kinda make your character break their character a bit tho like in this case if i pick an option means my character in the story will thought of this decision herself and spoke it to others out loud it would be out of character for her, but in this case i think i can pick an option without making her go out of character by going where corne goes to study him(without making it obvious)

okie decision made! i go where corne goes because as nerd in biology seeing something that's alive and interesting that you haven't seen before, who wouldn't want to take a closer look to study them(without making it obvious)
Hey, I get where you're coming from, true character’s personality is important.

But just to clarify, the main concept of this thread is giving players the freedom to guide their own routes. That not only makes the story more fun for the readers, but also for me when writing it.

I can’t choose a route for your character because, as the writer, I already know which choices lead where, what’s most beneficial or what might be a trap. So if I were to make a choice for your character, it wouldn’t be fair or unbiased, even if unintentionally.

You're totally free to follow Corne or anyone else. Just make sure to send me your decision via DM, even if it's simply "I follow Corne." That way, I can continue writing while keeping everything consistent.


Corne2Plum3 wrote:

My character can be good for exploration/fighting and can even hunt for food. For social stuff I'm sure very bad (idk how much Manishh nerfed my character)

That's why I'm going team 3, I shouldn't be bad at fighting if needed
Hard nerf, so let's see how you perform


Fujiya wrote:

I definitely want to see what happened to the ship
Spoilers:
the ship crashed
Corne2Plum3
I hope I'm very good at fighting to compensate the social nerf
Fujiya

Manishh wrote:

Fujiya wrote:

I definitely want to see what happened to the ship
Spoilers:
the ship crashed
I think about the real situation, not as a game (mistake?), would be #1 priority to check what damage the ship received, whether it was the impact of some kind of weapon, and if so, what to prepare for - I think the chosen ones from earth population are able to analyze that and on the way collect resources from it

unexpected separation, and "we need to hunt," raises questions about the IQ of some of the participants in our expedition...
179bpm
i'll be 2, searching for food and water sounds the most important right now
Osudroid96

Manishh wrote:

Spoilers:
the ship crashed
I was scared of the spoiler lol
MangaGrumpy

Osudroid96 wrote:

Manishh wrote:

Spoilers:
the ship crashed
I was scared of the spoiler lol
Me too even though I knew it was prolly gonna be a joke
Topic Starter
Manishh
shit its been 48hours already.

Some participent have not given me their decision yet but since its the first episode, I have decided to give them another 24hours.

The story is already have a structure but I cannot really add story blocks on it before all the decision are out since the combination of the choices are literally a lot xD. So expect the episode to be release around end of this week
DM FOR MUTUAL

Manishh wrote:

shit its been 48hours already.

Some participent have not given me their decision yet but since its the first episode, I have decided to give them another 24hours.

The story is already have a structure but I cannot really add story blocks on it before all the decision are out since the combination of the choices are literally a lot xD. So expect the episode to be release around end of this week
Do we gotta dm you or is it ok to just say what we intend to do in this thread
Osudroid96

DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

Manishh wrote:

shit its been 48hours already.

Some participent have not given me their decision yet but since its the first episode, I have decided to give them another 24hours.

The story is already have a structure but I cannot really add story blocks on it before all the decision are out since the combination of the choices are literally a lot xD. So expect the episode to be release around end of this week
Do we gotta dm you or is it ok to just say what we intend to do in this thread
I'll answer for him.

Manishh wrote:

Each option is useful and will provide certain items and information that might be useful for survival. Its up to you if you want to discuss with others and if you dont want to, that is fine as well. Once you have decided, send me a DM on what option you are choosing for your character.

You have 24hours to submit me the choice
Topic Starter
Manishh

Osudroid96 wrote:

DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

Manishh wrote:

shit its been 48hours already.

Some participent have not given me their decision yet but since its the first episode, I have decided to give them another 24hours.

The story is already have a structure but I cannot really add story blocks on it before all the decision are out since the combination of the choices are literally a lot xD. So expect the episode to be release around end of this week
Do we gotta dm you or is it ok to just say what we intend to do in this thread
I'll answer for him.

Manishh wrote:

Each option is useful and will provide certain items and information that might be useful for survival. Its up to you if you want to discuss with others and if you dont want to, that is fine as well. Once you have decided, send me a DM on what option you are choosing for your character.

You have 24hours to submit me the choice
Thank you for that xD.

Dm for mutual I did added your choice since you were the first one to post after the episode. But looking for each choice on a thread is more difficult compare to a DM. I just want a DM so I don't miss
Noreu
tbh ill go with 2
Blushing

Atlas wrote:

I know I won't be of much help, but I think I'll go with team B, if there is any food or water that could be used to help with first-aid then I should grab that for when one of us gets hurt. I'll need to hold on to someone to walk with the group.
DM FOR MUTUAL

Manishh wrote:

Osudroid96 wrote:

DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:

Manishh wrote:

shit its been 48hours already.

Some participent have not given me their decision yet but since its the first episode, I have decided to give them another 24hours.

The story is already have a structure but I cannot really add story blocks on it before all the decision are out since the combination of the choices are literally a lot xD. So expect the episode to be release around end of this week
Do we gotta dm you or is it ok to just say what we intend to do in this thread
I'll answer for him.

Manishh wrote:

Each option is useful and will provide certain items and information that might be useful for survival. Its up to you if you want to discuss with others and if you dont want to, that is fine as well. Once you have decided, send me a DM on what option you are choosing for your character.

You have 24hours to submit me the choice
Thank you for that xD.

Dm for mutual I did added your choice since you were the first one to post after the episode. But looking for each choice on a thread is more difficult compare to a DM. I just want a DM so I don't miss
Ok will do
Corne2Plum3
bump
Topic Starter
Manishh
I'm not getting free time sadly
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