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Hinsvar wrote:

>neonat's Normal
  1. 02:08:393 - Why don't you map this cymbal? It's very noticeable, yet you decided to skip it. Try using a 1/2 slider? I shifted the circle to 02:08:393 to allow the gap to make a greater effect for the cymbals
  2. 02:24:578 (1) - Use a 1/2 slider here too, instead, to map the note at 02:24:953? Not really a good decision to end the map (if we exclude the spinner) at 02:24:578, considering the instrument at 02:24:953 is (once again) very noticeable. Honestly, if you asked me, it wouldn't be much different, because the main beat which is 02:24:578 is already mapped to. But I just made the slider since it doesn't really affect anything else
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 04 mirror night.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 79511
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.8500004

[Metadata]
Title:mirror night
TitleUnicode:mirror night
Artist:V.K
ArtistUnicode:V.K
Creator:TestApple
Version:neonat's Normal
Source:Deemo
Tags:reflection rayark games collection book one 1 vanros kloud yurunneram blocko lzenxl neonat lordraika Sun Rainbow
BeatmapID:493309
BeatmapSetID:174927

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"deemo mirror night background.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Hinsvar wrote:

>yurunneram's Easy
  1. 00:15:569 (3) - Briefly overlaps 00:18:392 (1) partially; just saying. changed
  2. 00:17:687 (1,1) - Remove the NC from the second (1) and make the first (1) curved like this? The second NC is unnecessary, and the flow will be better with another curved slider instead of a straight one. changed
  3. 01:22:334 (3) - NC to keep a consistency in the combo pattern? Right now, the length of the combo where this object is in is too long. k
  4. 02:02:216 (2) - What's with the whistle? Feels very out of place compared to your usual hitsounding here.
  5. 02:22:772 (1,1,1) - Are you sure new players will be able to read this? Try placing them farther from each other. Right now, the spacing is pretty much inconsistent. tried desu
hora hora test kun -w-

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posted
God damn it test
Y u let this grave ;w;
Edit:Hype :O
posted
For like 2 weeks, I've been wondering why this has not been ranked. This is one of the cleanest jump maps I have ever seen.
posted

Gleipnir wrote:

For like 2 weeks, I've been wondering why this has not been ranked. This is one of the cleanest jump maps I have ever seen.
Revive it please ;__;
+title shouldn't be "Reflection (mirror night)" or just "Reflection"? Every source says this uh.
posted

Hinsvar wrote:

Slap me if I don't get to this by Christmas. Will start to recheck soon.

Okay.

>General
  1. Look out for unsnapped notes. Nothing I can see in AI :D
  2. Why does the SB only go grey-ish the moment the song begins? I believe it should begin from the lead-in, or at least have a natural-looking transition from the original BG to the grayscale one. How do I do this ;w; I'll go consult z3nx or someone.
  3. I honestly really don't like the sparseness of the whistles, especially at the end of TestApple's diffs. Probably just me, but they could've had more whistles placed there to decrease the "void" feel when you play through the ending of the map. Added a few whistles. Not too many.


>Hard
  1. 00:21:922 (4) - Replace the finish with a clap? Fits better with the instrument, IMO. No, claps sound like a fist through the peace of mirror night here.
  2. 00:26:863 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this is quite a big series of jumps for a Hard diff? Consider making this part a lot easier. No fun without a bit of challenge. I don't feel that it's too hard, it's within a Hards player's capabilities within a few tries. Having all the Hards equally difficult would also be real boring.
  3. 00:48:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I'm just slightly concerned about the square after this, all the testplays I've received have managed to do it so I'll just leave it as it is unless it causes trouble in the future
  4. 00:52:275 (3,4) - ...Seriously? The flow is okay, but the way (3) and (4) cross is just... really awkward to see. Works fine, I think the players wouldn't feel awkward when playing, because it plays out nicely, and they won't be focusing 100% of their focus on aesthetics.
  5. 00:54:745 (1,2,3,4) - I'm also unsure with a pattern like this, honestly. It's basically a consistent series of 1/2 jumps. Yes which should work fine because mirror night is a relatively slow map.
  6. 01:29:393 (1) - Split into two 1/2 sliders with the first slider being faster than the second? That'd fit the song better than this. What I intended was for players be able to feel the decrease of the sound clearly in the hard diff, so I put repeat slider which I feel is very effective here.
  7. 01:54:099 (1,3) - Swap NC? I can't really see any reason to begin a new combo at 01:54:099. Good point, removed.
  8. 01:54:805 (3,4) - Oh wow, wait. This is a pretty big jump for a Hard diff. Consider nerf-ing this. And while we're at that, make (4) similarly curved to (3), but flipped horizontally for a better flow here? I think you might've selected the wrong beats? 3 and 4 are spaced 1.28x
  9. 02:10:334 (5) - Use a Soft finish instead of a normal Drum hitsound? Fits better with the instrument (again). Agreed, changed.


>Insane
  1. About the whistles... it's not only about the end, but the beginning could have a little more whistle, especially at 00:22:628 - 00:42:392, where most of the prominent instrument sounds aren't emphasized with any special hitsounding. Mirror night is a relaxing simple song, whistling on every strong beat doesn't sound great. I did hitsound a few of the stuff you pointed out though, the really really significant ones.
  2. 00:09:040 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make a perfect pentagon? The way these circles look and play are not quite appealing, honestly. Nope they don't look nice at all, changed it into perfect pentagon.
  3. 00:50:863 (1) - Make it look like this for a better flow? Flow works equally fine as it is now.
  4. 00:58:451 (2) - Not adding whistles at the beginning and the end of the slider? Goes well with the notes of the instrument there. Added only on the beginning of 1, 2 and 3. Makes a nice gap in hitsound
  5. 01:27:981 (5) - NC this? The combo is too long right now. Changed.
  6. 01:33:628 (7,1) - Swap NC to keep a sense of consistency in combo patterning? vChanged.
  7. 01:35:040 (5) - Same as 01:27:981 (5). Changed.
  8. 01:36:981 (1) - Uh, is an NC really necessary here? Changed. Moved NC to the slider before it.
  9. 01:48:099 - Strongly consider to use a 1/1 slider here to map the noticeable instruments. There's not really any reason to leave this empty. I like the feeling of suspense here, the higher pitched tune goes away, the map goes away.
  10. 01:53:922 - 01:56:040 - This part can use more whistles. It's jarring to only hear a very low amount of hitsounding for a part like this. Consider adding them at 01:53:922 (1), 01:54:805 (6), 01:55:334 (3), and 01:55:687 (5), and use a Drum finish for 01:55:510 (4) instead. Added the whistles, not the drums, changed NC slightly too.
  11. 02:10:334 (1,2) - You know, you can just combine them into a slider... The previous pattern was very tricky, but while this is less difficult, it's still pretty hard to hit them. The slider will be really short and people might mistake them for 2 circles, causing an early release and losing 1 combo. With 2 approach the circles they merely have to tap both buttons.


Contact me once you think the map is really ready for ranking. Will do. Actually, I've always thought it was since a while back.
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IT LIVES!
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Actually Pappy is right, according to deemo wiki (http://deemo.wikia.com/wiki/Collection_1) title was Mirror Night, but then it was changed to Reflection (Mirror Night) in version 1.2
Either way title shouldn't be lowercase, so change it unless you have any proofs that current title is correct
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-Kamikaze- wrote:

Actually Pappy is right, according to deemo wiki (http://deemo.wikia.com/wiki/Collection_1) title was Mirror Night, but then it was changed to Reflection (Mirror Night) in version 1.2
Either way title shouldn't be lowercase, so change it unless you have any proofs that current title is correct
actually i'm not sure
this isn't exactly the same as deemo's one i think

correct me if i'm wrong i don't know things like this ;~;
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This is the same thing. I'm playing Deemo and this is totally the same song. Just composer (V.K.) wanted to change title. D:

Believe in polish metadata checkers B)
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alright i'll change it next time I update
now everyone needs to redownload after I do it :<
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Still waiting for update

;w;
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Cough test cough
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hi revive
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Mirror Night is right.
This song's name:镜夜
镜【镜子】:Mirror
夜【夜晚】:Night
So Mirror Night
If you want you can add this Chinese title in this map's title.
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This map must be ranked...its so good.
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Sun Rainbow wrote:

Mirror Night is right.
This song's name:镜夜
镜【镜子】:Mirror
夜【夜晚】:Night
So Mirror Night
If you want you can add this Chinese title in this map's title.
no not exactly, this is the deemo version so i think the name is acctually reflection (mirror night) or something along the lines of that i dont even know awfdsx
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[Insane]
  1. 00:50:510 (3,4,1) - flow a bit bad imo, i prefer 00:50:863 (1) - start on x128 y336 or some where
  2. 01:48:452 - add a note?
  3. 02:10:334 (1,2) - too fast i think, slider is better


[Hard]
  1. Check AImod, some unsnap
  2. 00:21:216 (3) - remove drum hitsound from the slider? because here didn't have any drum sound on insane, also you can change this slider too 1/1 like insane
  3. 01:40:687 (1,1) - kinda close i think


[neonat's Normal]
  1. 01:33:628 (5) - nc


overall not bad
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Rizia wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:50:510 (3,4,1) - flow a bit bad imo, i prefer 00:50:863 (1) - start on x128 y336 or some where Now it starts 179 238, flows better yeah.
  2. 01:48:452 - add a note? Hmm, added.
  3. 02:10:334 (1,2) - too fast i think, slider is better Nah, 2 beats is completely manageable by player I've seen, I've tried otherwise and a small slider is actually confusing, throws people off.


[Hard]
  1. Check AImod, some unsnap
  2. 00:21:216 (3) - remove drum hitsound from the slider? because here didn't have any drum sound on insane, also you can change this slider too 1/1 like insane Agreed, changed.
  3. 01:40:687 (1,1) - kinda close i think Made it further apart.


[neonat's Normal]
  1. 01:33:628 (5) - nc

I'll ask neo about this!


overall not bad Thanks~
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