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Kentaro Ishizaka - Waluigi Pinball

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NoHitter
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 21, 2010 at 8:52:53 PM

Artist: Kentaro Ishizaka
Title: Waluigi Pinball
Source: Super Smash Bros Brawl
Tags: Mario Kart Wii SSBB DS NIntendo MarioKart
BPM: 152
Filesize: 3410kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. 100cc (4.14 stars, 108 notes)
  2. 150cc (4.64 stars, 123 notes)
  3. 50cc (2.64 stars, 78 notes)
  4. MIRROR (5 stars, 247 notes)
Download: Kentaro Ishizaka - Waluigi Pinball
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Super Smash Bros. Brawl Discography

Composer: Kentaro Ishizaka
Based On: Waluigi Pinball
Source: Super Smash Bros. Brawl
Genre: Techno

Taken and remixed from Mario Kart DS, this song is based on the Waluigi Pinball stage of the game.
This song plays in the Mario Circuit stage in Super Smash Bros. Brawl.
Last edited by NoHitter , edited 36 times in total.
Jinxy
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Joined February 2009
Jinxy
I think you should decrease 150's difficulties (overall, circle size and drain) by 1 tick, and make a 150 mirror, with increase of 2 ticks for overall and circle size. Makes it more Mario Kart/EBA like :3


[50]
Nazi: 00:10:54 (4) - Move both red ticks down by 2 grids and the last tick 1 grid right. Then move the entire silder up 2 grids.

[100]
Nothing.

[150]
Nada.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Joined April 2009
Xgor
Ugh i hate lame HARD ROCK difficulty... Please don't add one >.> (That's what i think at least...)

Well...

[mp3]
Cut the mp3 if you not mapping the second loop.

[SB]
I like it but it would be better if the image covered the whole screen :D

[All difficulties]
There is tons of breaks <.< I think the break at 0:46:098 - 0:52:417 is the only necessary in my opinion.

There is also a lot of unused timing sections that don't add anything to the map :roll:
The one at 52 812 offset is the most unnecessary because it's just screwing with the metronome.

I also suggest you make the ending spinner end one white tick earlier :)

[50cc]
It's kinda odd that it's sometime more like a Normal than a easy, 00:33:045 - 00:44:051 is harder (?!= on 100cc
Otherwise good but the breaks are bugging me.

[100cc]
I still don't like the breaks but good otherwise

[150cc]
00:21:060 (3) - You can't see the reverse arrow on this slider D:
00:53:099 (5) - Add one more repeat arrow to this slider (And remove the silent hitsound)
For a insane song like this i expected the hardest difficulty to be harder :P (But it's way better than maps that have only insane difficulties)
Oh and the breaks still bugs me!

Well... the breaks is my main complaint about this map, they just make the map more boring <.<
But still.. star for being a brawl pack ^.^
*star*
askerlate47
45 posts
Joined September 2009
askerlate47
where's 150cc mirror? (sorry...)
star~ ^^
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

Resnap all notes on all difficulties.
First timing section, as well as the last two, are unused on all difficulties.

Consider using custom combo colours.
Change the background colour to black.

Cut the MP3 down so that you only use the area you need.

If possible, especially on the easier difficulties, add breaks between phrases.

On the harder difficulties, map those areas.

I dislike the small circles on MIRROR, lol.

Overall, it played weirdly, especially because of the periods of nothingness. Try to fix that.
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
trimmed mp3, from me to you.

Download: waluigi pinball.zip
Jinxy
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Jinxy
[MIRROR]
Na-fucking-zi: 00:54:88 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - Move 1 grid right.

Starred.

(Don't kudosu this)
Andrea
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Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 3,47MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 151,90 - Offset: 8.286 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[50cc]

Slider velocity is too high for the most easier difficulty. Consider to reduce it.

00:33:055 (1,2) - Hard to read for new players.
00:39:087 (1,2) - ^
01:13:005 (1) - Remove new combo.

[100cc]

00:43:003 (1) - Remove new combo.

[150cc]

00:44:051 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary.

[MIRROR]

01:14:073 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary.
Lokamp
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Joined January 2009
Lokamp
50cc
00:23:029 (4) - add clap on this slider's repeat and remove clap from its end
00:29:061 (4) - ^
00:42:025 (5) - flip this slider horizontally
00:44:072 (spinner) - let it start on 00:45:002 (same end). Plus, set finish on it!
00:54:010 (4) - add clap on the 1st repeat and on the end of this slider
01:00:042 (4) - ^

100cc
00:08:028 (1) - finish on this slider's start
00:43:014 (1) - let it start on 00:43:029 (same end)
00:55:009 (5) - end it with finish (or soft finish...)
01:01:021 (5) - ^

150cc
00:09:007 (5,7) - clap the beat and the slider's start
00:15:039 (3,5) - clap these sliders's start

RORRIM
combo new - (6) 00:09:066
^ - (7) 00:15:098

A funny map from a good race game (and pesky flippers... x3)
Try to set more hitsounds to make this map more rankable ;3
Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset = 8285

[50cc]

It's ok

[100cc]

It's ok

[150cc]

It's ok

[MIRROR]

00:09:086 (8) - New combo
00:16:018 (9) - ^
00:22:049 (7) - ^
00:28:081 (6) - ^
00:54:007 (4) - ^
01:00:039 (8) - ^

Starred~
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
//Overall//
The SB is pretty cool, I just don't really like the black Bg behind the Mario Kart pic D:

//50cc//
  • No problems found :)
//100cc//
  1. 00:34:337(2) - just a little detail: could you please make this slider more circular? Like the previous one. I think that it will be better ^^
  2. 00:37:495(2) - this one too
//150cc//
  1. 00:21:706(3) - I think it's better make on more loop on this slider and delet the note at 00:22:298.
  2. 00:37:692(2) - Direct this slider to another place cuz the way that is now, it's impossible to deduce if this one is going to end at 00:38:482(3 loops) or at 00:38:679(4 loops).
  3. 01:01:377(5) - Sounds better at 01:01:574.
//Mirror//
The combos are too big >_< I'm gonna mod them but you don't have to change if like the way that is now =/
  • Combo mod:
    SPOILER
    00:09:666(6) - New Combo Devil Number o__O'
    00:15:982(7) - ^
    00:22:495(7) - ^
    00:28:811(6) - ^
    00:29:995(new 8) - ^
    00:54:074(4) - ^
    01:00:390(8) - ^

Nothing else. Star~
Teara
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Teara
I cant find anything wrong~

Good job

Star
Leorda
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Leorda
[General]
The Source must be Mario Kart DS. Maybe?

Cool song!! STAR!!!!
NoHitter
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NoHitter
It's the brawl remix of the song.
Zekira
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Zekira
Wow awesome work with the timing. *autostar*

...also, nothing else >_>
Bass
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Bass
Blue = Suggestion, you mustn't fix this
Red = you must fix this



[50cc]

00:39:086 (1) - this is overlapping, and this is unrankable, fix this
00:44:060 (5) - delete this hitcircle, then:
00:44:069 (1) - start this spinner at 00:44:60, end at 00:46:17

[100cc]
naaaazi:
00:16:17 (3) - 1 tick down
00:17:56 (5) - 1 tick left

---------------------
00:43:02 (6) - delete this hitcircle, then:
00:43:012 (1) - start this spinner at 00:43:02 (6) - , end at 00:44:20

[150cc]
00:29:079 (9) - 1 tick left

[MIRROR]
00:23:08 (1) - new combo
00:28:81(1) - ^


Yay! Awesome map! :3
Star~
NoHitter
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NoHitter

Bassmaster wrote:

Blue = Suggestion, you mustn't fix this
Red = you must fix this



[50cc]

00:39:086 (1) - this is overlapping, and this is unrankable, fix this This is rankable...
00:44:060 (5) - delete this hitcircle, then:
00:44:069 (1) - start this spinner at 00:44:60, end at 00:46:17

[100cc]
naaaazi:
00:16:17 (3) - 1 tick down
00:17:56 (5) - 1 tick left

---------------------
00:43:02 (6) - delete this hitcircle, then:
00:43:012 (1) - start this spinner at 00:43:02 (6) - , end at 00:44:20

[150cc]
00:29:079 (9) - 1 tick left

[MIRROR]
00:23:08 (1) - new combo
00:28:81(1) - ^


Yay! Awesome map! :3
Star~
Fixed nazi mod + combo changes
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
As your request. Err.. All diffs are perfect but still have problems with hitsounds, especially on [MIRROR] diff. Try to add some clap pattern. It will be better.

Star for this map. If you need hitsounds mod, post this map again in my queue.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Ephemeral
Offset should be 8,305 (on the correct interval but not on the lowest, it'll do..)

Way too many breaks. It's 1m21s song - it does not need 7 breaks. Map those segments, reduce down to two breaks or something (or the one long one at 46s)

The strobing on the initial xxcc buttons across all difficulties makes no sense whatsoever. Strobe it properly to the beat, it'll look much better.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Ephemeral
Excellent job. Well deserved bubble.
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
150cc
00:36:232 (4) - 1/3 snap this
01:05:344 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - aren't these supposed to be triplets aka 1/3 snaps.

Mirror
01:11:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these are supposed to be 1/3 snapped
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NoHitter
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Popped the bubble
Sushi
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Sushi
Mario Kart <3

I feel that notes are a little late. 8290 suits well.

[150cc]
01:06:199 (3) - this is not 1/3 snapped.goes on blue tick. seems to go on 1/3 because of offset.
01:07:778 (3) - ^
01:09:094 (3) - ^
01:10:673 (3) - ^

[Mirror]
00:19:752 (1,2,3) - Move (3) 1 grid up for perfect symetry with other notes
00:27:844 (3) - maybe align with previous (2) ?
01:05:936 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - improve symetry
01:07:515 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:09:094 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:10:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
(use Ctrl+H or Ctrl+J to verify your symetry)

There. other diffs are fine
NoHitter
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NoHitter
Done
Jinxy
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Jinxy
Proto'd. I swear I will kill you if this gets me in trouble :/
Wuiss
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Wuiss
[100cc]

01:14:211 (4) - This whistle odd

[150cc]

00:08:684 (3) - Finish here (?)
00:09:671 (6) - New combo here
00:16:974 (6) - Clap
00:17:368 (7) - Clap at the begining
00:37:105 (1) - Remove clap
00:37:500 (1) - Clap
00:37:895 (2) - Remove clap

[MIRROR]

00:09:671 (6) - New combo
00:12:829 (6) - ^
00:15:987 (7) - ^
00:25:461 (6) - ^
00:28:816 (6) - ^
00:30:000 (13) - ^
00:54:276 (5) - ^
00:56:842 (6) - ^

Star~
Ephemeral
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Ephemeral
IRC modding and rebubble.

8-)
James
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James
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zekira
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Zekira
...and since there is no rule that a map cannot be ranked even the map has bad sounds.
...ouch lol?
James
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James
Well, its bad. Admit it.
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
ouch..
NoHitter
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NoHitter
I admit it.
I suck at hitsounds.
James
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James
PM me for tutorial ^^
Zekira
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Zekira
I'm not really sure lol; my hitsounding sense is almost fully influenced by my Taiko sense, so I can't really say much.
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