[General]
rename the creator upon update lol, and you can add 17va in tag, so people will always recognize its your map
[Normal]
03:15:958 (195958|5,196758|1) - add cymbol.wav
00:04:813 (4813|1,5200|1,5587|2,5974|1,6168|0) - add bass.wav
00:09:265 (9265|4) - can remove bass, you don't layer percussion here
00:10:039 (10039|3) - ^
00:11:007 (11007|4) - cymbol.wav
00:12:749 (12749|3) - bass.wav
00:30:652 (30652|4,30942|5) - clap clap
00:34:426 (34426|0,35200|6,35974|5) - cymbol?
00:37:523 (37523|2) - bass.wav
00:39:942 (39942|5,40232|0) - clap?
00:40:620 (40620|1) - add 1 more for bass
00:41:781 (41781|1) - too sudden for 3 notes
00:40:136 (40136|5) - bass
00:43:039 (43039|3,43329|2) - clap
00:43:232 (43232|6) - bass
00:43:716 (43716|1) - add 1 for bass
00:46:426 (46426|3) - can add 1 for clap
00:48:361 (48361|5) - change to bass
00:49:910 (49910|6) - bass
01:01:039 (61039|4) - bass
00:53:007 (53007|0) - 00:56:103 (56103|6) - 00:59:200 (59200|6) - i think you can add bass in storyboard sample..
01:01:716 (61716|3) - reduce to 50%
01:02:007 (62007|4,62200|4) - bass where
01:05:394 (65394|3) - bass
01:08:491 (68491|0) - bass in storyboard sample
01:11:587 (71587|3) - bass
01:14:684 (74684|0,75458|1,76232|1) - can add bass in storyboard sample
01:17:781 (77781|0) - bass
01:20:878 (80878|0) - ^
nice diff
[Hard]
00:03:265 (3265|0) - cymbol
00:04:813 (4813|6,5200|6,5587|0,5974|6,6168|0) - bass?
00:09:265 (9265|2) - remove bass like in NM
00:11:007 (11007|4) - cymbol
00:12:749 (12749|4) - bass
00:24:361 (24361|1,24361|5,24458|4,24458|2,24555|5,24555|1,24749|3) - i think
http://puu.sh/ndLPB.png00:26:394 (26394|5) - incoming ghost note, i honestly don't think this should have been removed though, but otherwise QAT wouldn't agree C:
00:29:491 (29491|5) - ^
00:30:652 (30652|4,30942|3) - clap
00:30:845 (30845|6) - bass
00:31:329 (31329|5) - ^
00:34:426 (34426|6) - 00:35:200 (35200|3) - 00:35:974 (35974|6) - cymbol
00:39:942 (39942|6) - clap
00:40:136 (40136|2) - bass 00:40:232 (40232|6) - clap,
00:43:039 (43039|2,43232|3,43329|2) - ^
00:52:329 (52329|2) - would fit at 00:52:523
00:55:426 (55426|0) - ^ at 00:55:620 in 7th col
01:00:942 - can add for bass, or just add in storyboard.. would make sense tho o3o
01:13:329 - ^
01:14:103 (74103|2) - ^
01:14:684 (74684|6) - & 01:15:458 (75458|6) - ^
01:16:232 (76232|1) - ^
01:20:491 (80491|2) - remove bass
[Insane]
hi RC
00:06:555 (6555|3) - bass
00:12:749 (12749|6) - ^
00:24:361 (24361|5,24361|1) -
http://puu.sh/ndMha.png ww
00:25:232 (25232|1,25232|3) - i don't see why this double is here, remove
00:25:620 (25620|2,25620|4) - ^
00:25:716 (25716|3) - emphasize the vocal with 1/2 LN
00:26:394 (26394|4) - remove
00:26:781 (26781|4,26781|3) - same like above,
00:27:361 (27361|4,27361|2) - ^
00:27:265 (27265|1) - emphasize the vocal again like above
00:27:942 (27942|1) - remove again
00:28:910 (28910|6,28910|5) - ^ like above
00:29:491 (29491|2) - remove
00:40:039 (40039|6,40039|0,40039|1,40039|5) - move to 00:40:136 - & remove 2 notes, this would still create similar pattern
http://puu.sh/ndMz2.pngand don't forget to add kick-clap kick clap in highlighted note
00:43:136 (43136|6,43136|0,43136|1,43136|5) - ^
00:46:523 (46523|3,46716|2) - remove
00:48:361 (48361|1) - bass
00:49:620 (49620|3,49716|2,49716|4,49813|5,49813|1) - ctrl+J, 00:49:910 (49910|3) - to 3 00:49:910 (49910|6) - HOW TO MOVE THIS SOMEWHERE ELSE AAA jk its fine
00:56:587 (56587|5,56587|1,56781|1) - 00:57:361 (57361|1,57361|5) - remove, 00:57:555 add at 2
01:01:136 (61136|0) - add at 4 and add cymbol
01:02:781 (62781|6) - 01:05:878 (65878|0) - idk with this, technically remove
01:12:749 (72749|2) - 01:13:136 (73136|6) - clap then cymbol
01:14:684 (74684|2,75458|1,76232|4) - bass
01:20:491 (80491|2,80684|2) - could be 1/4 trill instead, 00:09:265 (9265|2,9458|2) - too
01:22:232 (82232|6) - cymbol
[Extra noodle inside]
i don't see anything wrong with the pattern arrangement, instead you could utilize some spacing to let the notechart flow with the music rhythm rather than flow with the pattern
00:09:265 (9265|4,9458|4) - could be 1/4 trill
00:17:394 (17394|2) - could add 1 more note for piano
00:25:232 (25232|1,25232|3,25620|2,25620|4) - same pattern as Rc's diff? remove
00:26:394 (26394|4) - ^
00:26:781 (26781|4,26781|3,27361|2,27361|4) - ^
00:27:942 (27942|1) - ^
00:44:007 (44007|6,44200|6,44394|6,44587|6,44781|6,44974|6) - omg these anchor, no wonder its so tiring on the right hand in this spot
00:44:200 (44200|6) - to 6
00:44:781 (44781|6) - to 4
00:50:297 (50297|1) - change to note, 00:50:394 (50394|2) - remove, follow lv. 36 structure
00:53:394 (53394|5,53491|4) - ^
00:56:587 (56587|2,56587|6) - move to 00:56:781 - would make sense, the spacing is quiet doesn't flow with the rhythm here imo
00:57:555 - add 2 more note at 3 & 7, i hear something..
00:57:652 (57652|6) - to 6
00:58:426 (58426|6) - i hear the main instrument has 3/4 rhythm,
http://puu.sh/ndNB3.png could be good?
01:02:007 (62007|5,62200|4) - keecks
01:02:684 (62684|4,62781|5) - change to note and remove like lv.36 again
01:05:781 (65781|1,65878|0) - ^
and then 01:05:394 (65394|2,65491|1,65587|0,66168|4,66265|5,66361|6) -
http://puu.sh/ndNO4.png01:14:394 (74394|1,74587|2) - keeeecks
[Overall]
i might missed some hitsound stuff, please cross-recheck 1 diff to each other by yourself..
OVERALL this should be qualified soon
those important problem i mentioned above should be fixed, and as addition, i just trying to keep the whole o2jam-structured chart as it is, i don't want to alter the structure much.. those patterns are rhythm-wise c:
1 more thing :
[AutoMOD]
[171480 fripSide - black bullet]
• Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitwhistle.wav
wow..
call me again soon, be sure those hitsound are re-arranged as i mention in all diffs by self-mod..