i'm totally DISAGREE on this pattern style are not suppose to be this game mode for our future quality terms and this kinda overmapped/abused on this music specifics.
I'm too LAZY to point everything in all difficulties. However, I'm going to take the highest difficulty so that you can get the idea for the lower difficulty too.
[Lv.46]
Is this the rhythm game we want to make?
00:12:749 - to 00:23:200 - I don't see where these triplets came from which instrument ( especially blue timeline ex:00:13:039 - ). So yeah, if you point the piano sounds, I don't think it FITS the current pattern, you should split them to make it in a different way
00:24:555 - the kick was not supposed to be here. it's should be at 00:24:652 -
00:24:749 - Do you feel this part has 1/4 guitar sounds? i don't think so. the guitar stream start from 00:24:361 - to 00:24:749 - exclusively and then back to 1/2
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00:25:136 - to 00:37:426 - I'm going to point out the guitar note first. There are lots of 'ghost notes a.k.a no sound according to the instrument', as far as I know the guitar rhythm follows the piano rhythm as well ( you can hear clearly with off vocal songs ), such as these parts below :
00:26:200 (26200|5,26394|4,26587|3) - What does the purpose of these notes for?
00:29:297 (29297|1,29491|2,29684|3) - ^
00:32:394 (32394|5,32587|4,32781|3) - ^
00:33:361 (33361|4) - ^
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00:25:620 (25620|4,25620|2,25813|0) - There is no sound at all no note should be here
00:39:265 - Why suddenly the double stairs?
00:42:168 - ^
00:43:716 - to 00:45:265 - What streams do you follow?
00:45:265 - these triplets should be on 1/1 snap, not at 1/2 snap
00:46:716 (46716|3) - remove
00:46:716 (46716|3) - I highly recommend you to make single stair because at 00:47:587 - this one is pretty good for double stair indeed
00:49:910 - to 01:17:684 - these pretty sucks tbh. you completely ignore the rhythm flow and making random stream patterns out of nowhere. i recommend you to map off vocal version to analyze instruments/rhythm structure here. your pitch need some revision too ( this is one of the concept of mapping for rhythm games )
overall quality is very poor especially the LN section. i hope you don't make the music 'cry' due to your mapping style.