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Hanatan - Uta ni Katachi wa Nai Keredo[General]
Calm song~
What...BG miku? I'm absolutely fine with that but some players might found it's not fit 0.0 (Sorry I'm so bad in suggesting BGs :c)
[Timing]
Basically just add
+42 offset to it all of the timing points
Might wanna have a KIAI time here 01:13:707 - as well for consistency
[Easy]
00:02:457 (3) - Move the tail point of the slider to X:236 Y:204 (1 tiny grid down) to make it fully matched with the angle of 00:00:207 (1) -
00:08:082 (1) - A bit out of 1.0x DS, snap em'
00:09:207 (2,3,4) - I would move 00:09:957 (3) - a bit upper and blanket 00:11:082 (4) - in order to make it looks neat (maybe), refer the image:
00:28:707 (4) - Suggest to move it to around X:376 Y:216 to make it looks snapped (head and tail) with 00:27:957 (3) - , refer pic:
00:34:707 (1) - Try to move this to a few grid to the right (X:448 Y:20) to make it look like snapped better (in my view) with 00:33:957 (3) - (look at the tail of the slider), like this:
00:39:957 (4,5) - Looks like a smile haha...or you din't... (not a mod)
00:39:957 (4) - Could make it a bit more straighter to fit with the shape of 00:41:082 (5) - like a smile ^
00:43:707 (2) - Move the tail point of the slider to X:236 Y:380 (1 tiny grid to the left), make it feels tail of 00:42:957 (1) - is
penetrated snapped in balance (like 00:34:707 (1) - )
00:49:707 (4) - Feels a bit out of space ugh lol, could try start moving from 00:47:832 (2) - to the North, might help
01:04:707 (1) - Move the tail point 1 tiny grid to the left (X164 Y:48) to make it same pointing angle with 01:03:957 (3) -
01:13:707 - Um...sorry to say that but seems it's copy pasted from first KIAI so I'll skip this part
01:58:707 (1) - Remove NC? Because there's still a spinner after that, and I don't see other patterns like 01:10:707 (4) - have NCs applied
02:06:957 (1,2,3) - Might wanna arrange a little bit here to make all the numbers look flow-ed in a straight line, like this 02:18:957 (1,2,3) - , or refer picture:
Easy, readable, play happy
[Normal]
SV is smooth and cool for the music, but since it's not a very fast song and it's normal diff I would give it a slightly lower SV (to prevent high AR too)
^ In another POV maybe you just want to make it 1.0x DS
00:00:207 (1) - I hope you just wanna give a feel to the music...not lazy...right?
^ Could decrease a reverse and start giving players a hit at 00:02:082 - , might bring up the er...feel?
00:27:020 (2) - It's out of constant DS (It's a rule to keep it same DS?), not suggest to force symmetry here as well because a hit at 00:26:832 - could be mapped, feel free to keep it too as your mapping style
^ Or you could try moving 00:25:707 (1) - closer to the middle and make it mirrored
00:35:082 (3) - Move it to around X:510 Y:249 so you can see it's snapped head and tail with 00:34:707 (2) - (for me it looks neater), DS 00:36:020 (4) - if you agree with that
00:39:020 (5) - Haha...no jumps?
00:42:957 (1) - It's not in the flow after 00:42:395 (5) - , usually I would put it after the tail of 00:42:957 (1) - , won't affect the gameplay too much, feel free to keep too :d
01:13:707 - Same with first KIAI so I'll skip, sorry (not a mod)
01:57:020 (3) - A bit out of consistency DS, might wanna snap it
02:02:457 (2) - For me this pattern looks better than 00:27:020 (2) -
Arrangements and SV give a smooth sliding feel
[Hard]
SV is a bit fast for me tho it's pretty fine for the standard
00:00:207 (1) - Move 1 grid to the right X:156 Y:56 to make it perfectly mirrored (can see with Ctrl+H), and then you might have to snap 00:02:270 (1) -
00:09:582 (1,2,3,4) - I like this pattern
, I use it often...but for some mappers they found it "not a flow ftw"
00:45:020 (5,6) - I would make them look same shape with copy and paste + rotate (90+45=135* Clockwise), refer pic:
01:50:457 (4,5,6) - Try to make them same shape too (might look neater), copy and paste and rotate them 120* clockwise separately and snap them, refer pic:
01:54:770 (5) - Put a clap here to make it same hitsound pattern as 01:51:582 (7,8) -
01:57:770 (6) - ^ Here as well if 01:51:770 - wasn't an extra hitsound or you might wanna make it only used once
Well-made patterns and arrangements, simple and not hard to be read
Keep up~