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Kirsty Hawkshaw - Fine Day (Mike Koglin Mix)

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Jesss
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Jesss
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 09 de mayo de 2010 at 07:17:18 p.m.

Artist: Kirsty Hawkshaw
Title: Fine Day (Mike Koglin Mix)
Tags: opus III 3
BPM: 137
Filesize: 12365kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Intense (5 stars, 464 notes)
  2. Relax... (1,87 stars, 97 notes)
  3. Rhythmic (4,3 stars, 254 notes)
Download: Kirsty Hawkshaw - Fine Day (Mike Koglin Mix)
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NOTICE:People who have downloaded this map before MAY 9, 2010, please download again, Minor SB fix!!

Hi There! :) here's my second creation after announcing officially my beatmap career with Symphonious feat. Rossini - Tell.

Info about this song (copy and paste...lol):
Kirsty Hawkshaw's 02 trance remake version of Opus III's original dance version of "It's A Fine Day" which featured Kirsty's vocals (Itself being a cover of Edward Barton's vocal song in 1984 entitled "It's a Fine Day" sung by his wife named Jane). This ISN'T Miss Jane/ATB drivel, this is the dance version that was done right. The band "Miss Jane" was NOT the original artist of this song, they simply stole the vocals. Hopefully this will set the record straight and redeem a great track.
Last edited by Jesss , edited 25 times in total.
Kytoxid
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1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Needs an easier difficulty. OH NO, NOT AGAIN! :S xDDD i suck making easy maps u.u
Preview points need to be set. New Preview Point has been Set up
Source? Tags? DONE
Consider setting the background colour to black or dark blue. Dark blue

Combos in general were a bit scattered; I'd make them a bit more consistent to the musical patterns, such as 01:02:025 (9) vs. 00:58:053 (1). Won't specifically point out where throughout the map though.

Please use Bezier sliders. Catmull are bleh. Bezier are ugly for me and also very hard to build

[Relaxing]

00:11:078 (4,4) - These notes on the 1/4 felt a bit out of place. Replacing 3,4 with a slider might prepare the player a bit better for the pattern. I disagree with you >.>
00:44:008 - Timing sections should be placed before the note they are meant to affect. No BAT complained about timing section set in the beginning note, so i ignore this sugestion :3
01:23:027 (2,3) - Add an extra repeat, move the 3? DONE
01:27:065 (1) - Timing section.
01:34:066 (1) - ^
02:17:058 (1) - Remove new combo? DONE
03:09:026 (1) - Looks kinda ugly, lol. DONE
03:12:076 (1) - Make this quieter? Silenced

I thought the parts that followed "the sky~" echoes were a bit tough to read. if i remove the notes in that parts, the song will become boring, and i luv this song so much!!! >.<

[Intense]

03:12:087 (1) - Why does this end 4/1 later than Relaxing? Also, make it quieter?

Don't really star WiPs, so poke me once it's in Pending for a second look.
Nerv_Mario
146 posts
Joined October 2008
Nerv_Mario
muy bello map jesus :D
me gusto, sobre todo el relaxing xd
Star! y sigue asi :3
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Storyboard]
2:12:657 - there's a section-fail on the pass layer

j35u5891221 wrote:

Kytoxid wrote:

00:44:008 - Timing sections should be placed before the note they are meant to affect. No BAT complained about timing section set in the beginning note, so i ignore this sugestion :3
No, really. Change it, it makes the map nicer. Just because it won't prevent it from being ranked doesn't mean you shouldn't do it. If you just put the bare minimum for ranking into a map, why bother?

[Relaxing]
00:59:062 (4,5) - Use Bezier curves and make them look like this (the lines should be at right angles). It's nicer and less blocky.
01:43:042 (3) - Do something similar for this? You can rotate the ones from above.
01:58:031 (3) - ^
02:00:006 (5) - ^
02:48:024 (1) - ^ (It's the slider police!)
02:44:073 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hitsounds?
02:58:075 (1) - Finish on beginning
02:59:019 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - Hitsounds?
03:12:076 (1,1) - "Quieter" doesn't mean silence the thing, more like 50% volume (and a fade-out effect; new timing section each beat of the spinner lowering the volume by 10% each, cumulative?) Also, the new timing section should be 1/4 or 1/2 beat before the note.

[Intense]
01:52:018 (1) - Bezier it. It is not hard.
03:09:026 (3,4) - Not nice-looking; at least make them symmetrical.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss
[Storyboard]
2:12:657 - there's a section-fail on the pass layer CORRECTED

j35u5891221 wrote:

Kytoxid wrote:

00:44:008 - Timing sections should be placed before the note they are meant to affect. No BAT complained about timing section set in the beginning note, so i ignore this sugestion :3
No, really. Change it, it makes the map nicer. Just because it won't prevent it from being ranked doesn't mean you shouldn't do it. If you just put the bare minimum for ranking into a map, why bother?

[Relaxing]
00:59:062 (4,5) - Use Bezier curves and make them look like this (the lines should be at right angles). It's nicer and less blocky.
01:43:042 (3) - Do something similar for this? You can rotate the ones from above.
01:58:031 (3) - ^
02:00:006 (5) - ^
02:48:024 (1) - ^ (It's the slider police!)
02:44:073 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hitsounds?
02:58:075 (1) - Finish on beginning
02:59:019 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - Hitsounds?
03:12:076 (1,1) - "Quieter" doesn't mean silence the thing, more like 50% volume (and a fade-out effect; new timing section each beat of the spinner lowering the volume by 10% each, cumulative?) Also, the new timing section should be 1/4 or 1/2 beat before the note.

[Intense]
01:52:018 (1) - Bezier it. It is not hard.
03:09:026 (3,4) - Not nice-looking; at least make them symmetrical.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Heavenly Easy
01:06:063 (spinner) - lower this spinner's hitsound volume to 0

Relaxing
00:17:069 (spinner) - remove hitsounds's volume on this spinner
00:30:072 (4,5,6,7) - lower hitsounds's volume for this sliders, from 1st (louder) to 4th (less louder)
01:06:063 (spinner) - lower this spinner's hitsound volume to 0
02:30:083 (spinner) - ^

Intense
[General] Try to add more hitsounds to this mode...
00:17:069 (spinner) - no hitsound's volume on this spinner
01:06:074 (spinner) - ^
02:30:083 (spinner) - ^
03:12:087 (spinner) - ^

This good map with catchy rhythm NEEDS more stars... ;3
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Nazi mod

Intense - check spacing of all notes. you might have to turn grid snap off for some of them.
00:06:525(3,4) - spacing
00:07:730(4) - ^
00:08:606(3) - ^
00:09:044(5) - spacing
00:11:452(5,6,7) - ^
00:24:920(3,2) - ^
00:46:051(4) - ^
00:46:817(7,1) - ^
01:04:117(2,3) - ^
01:50:649(3) - spacing
01:54:810(1,2,3) - ^
01:55:029(3) - ^
02:45:065(2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:47:146(5,6,7) - ^
02:54:701(3,4,5) - ^

Rhythmic
00:13:533(4) - hidden partially
01:31:160(2) - is the SB'ed "hold" really necessary


Overall
i like the map.

You might want to SB the "holds" and the "normal speed" signs on each difficult seperately ( intenses sB is fine just map it specific to that diff and fix the SB for rhythmic) The 2 harder diffs are too linear for my taste.
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
SOFT mod is go

[Relax...]

slider tick rate needs to be 2, 4 feels waaaaay too odd

[Rhythmic]
01:31:016 (2) - new combo so that this follows your combo pattern
02:20:086 (4,1) - spacing, move them closer
02:57:000 - sb'd doublespeed sign why? i see no point to this
same with the normal speed one after
no need for the holds either >_>

[Intence]
01:03:078 (2) - spacing, move closer to (1)
just recheck all your spacing for tiny problems,
also i feel for most of the song your doing the same thing too much, mainly with the streams tbh i got bored of the way they was done :/ maybe map some parts different so its more fun

anyway i'll star this on the merit that i cant find anything unrankable ;)
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
I'll give you a map for mod4mod when I finish it ;)


~Relax...~
SliderTickRate should be 2

~Rhythmic~
01:27:065 - Hold!! is instantly appeared
01:29:040 - ^
01:31:016 - ^
02:18:460 - recommend to add break time
03:09:026 - Hold!! is instantly appeared
03:11:001 - ^

~Intense~
02:21:041 (7,8) - confused
02:57:000 - Double Speed!!! is not much clearly
03:09:026 - Hold!! is instantly appeared
03:11:001 - ^


+Star
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
lthefuryl
[Relax]

Suggestions:
01:22:401 (2) - move up 1 square for align with the previous slider
01:25:905 (2) - ^
01:32:912 (2) - move down 2 squares for make it the same of that: 01:29:409 (2)

[Rhythmic]

Suggestions:
01:03:131 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:525 (1) - ^
01:27:657 (1) - put a WARNING for speed down because this situation becomes misleading without it :oops:
02:28:533 (6) - new combo
02:49:555 (1) - remove new combo
02:56:124 (7) - new combo
02:58:752 (1) - from here to the end WARNINGS "double time" and "normal time" are useless
02:53:496 (1) - remove new combo
02:54:372 (3) - new combo

[Intense]

I'm waiting that you finish this difficult for modding it :) star for you ;)

EDIT: sorry for my bad english xDD i hope you will understand
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss

lthefuryl wrote:

[Relax]

Suggestions:
01:22:401 (2) - move up 1 square for align with the previous slider Done!
01:25:905 (2) - ^ Done!
01:32:912 (2) - move down 2 squares for make it the same of that: 01:29:409 (2) Done!

[Rhythmic]

Suggestions:
01:03:131 (1) - remove new combo Done!
01:21:525 (1) - ^
01:27:657 (1) - put a WARNING for speed down because this situation becomes misleading without it :oops: I'll think it or asking for more advices
02:28:533 (6) - new combo hhmmm i didn't like your new combo position but i planned a better Distribution
02:49:555 (1) - remove new combo Done!
02:56:124 (7) - new combo
02:58:752 (1) - from here to the end WARNINGS "double time" and "normal time" are useless Oh Thanks for making me remember to make full submit ^^"
02:53:496 (1) - remove new combo Done!
02:54:372 (3) - new combo Done!

[Intense]

I'm waiting that you finish this difficult for modding it :) star for you ;)

EDIT: sorry for my bad english xDD i hope you will understand
Thanks for modding...i fixed little details in Relax and i'll make full submit
Kudo for you :)
Guzzzzm4n
177 posts
Joined October 2008
Guzzzzm4n
Strella Pa Ti :)
Suerte!
Rosa1339
29 posts
Joined November 2008
Rosa1339
Star :D
3ly_S
188 posts
Joined March 2008
3ly_S
omg el intense me encanto xd , una estrella para tu tu :3
y Mucha suerte con el map ^^
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
*star for now
will mod later, if i don't forget
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[Rhythmic]
01:32:474 (2) - look too far from (1)

[Intense]
- add tag to this diff
01:02:255 (1) - Spacing? Too far from 01:02:146 (5)

*w* Star ~
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss

orioncomet wrote:

[Rhythmic]
01:32:474 (2) - look too far from (1) Done!

[Intense]
- add tag to this diff Thanks for making me remember ^^ Done!
01:02:255 (1) - Spacing? Too far from 01:02:146 (5) Done!

*w* Star ~
Thanks!!~~ Kudo for you
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
General:

-Skin skinner-background.png

Relax...:

00:12:328 (3) - Align with (2)
00:50:868 (3) - Align with (2)
01:00:941 (4) - Align with the endpoint of (3)
01:41:671 (1) - Align with the endpoint of (2)
02:00:503 (2) - Align with the endpoint of (1)

Rhythmic:

00:06:197 (4) - Align with (3)
01:01:160 (6) - Spacing, and align with (5)
01:37:730 (3) - Align with (1)
02:18:022 ~ 02:19:993 - Add a break?
02:59:628 (3) - Spacing, and align with (2)

Intense:

-Use inherited timing sections for the 2x sliders

01:36:415 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:55:247 (1) - This might look nicer symmetrical, but it's fine as is

Very nice! I especially liked Intense. :) *star*
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[Relax]

  • • You might want to consider bringing down the slider velocity a bit. Might be a bit too fast for beginners.
[Rhythmic]

  • • Overall Difficulty: 5
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
The only thing I could see;

Easy;
00:12:328 (3) - In line with the 2.

Star.
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
[Relax...]
np.
[Rhythmic]
OA+2
I think some parts and notes didn't fit the music...
[Intense]
HP Drain,lol
OA-1
00:49:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these kinds of stream are very hard to beat,you should chang them
00:43:423 (1,1,1) - these 2X slider are very sudden.
02:02:255 (1) - ^
02:21:524 (1,1,1) - ^
and...since your slider speed is 2.0X,so your 2X speed parts are very hard to beat...just for me.

anyway,star.
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
General:
the skin's pretty good (If unoriginal) , though I'd add a spinner background or delete the spinner meter so it doesn't conflict with custom skins
I don't really like the use of kiai just for spinners

Relax:
Fine, although the wavy sliders aren't all exactly even. Make sure the zigzags are all the same size.

Rythmic:
00:30:722 (1,2,3,4) - Move these back a half beat and extend them by half a beat.
00:43:423 (1) - What the fuck the warning appears at the same time as the slider starts. Move it back aso it appears during the last sider.
00:49:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the zigzags make this stream absurdly difficult
01:03:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:51:744 (1,2) - I personally don't like silenced beats
02:02:255 (1) - How the hell are you meant to see that warning in time
02:21:524 (1) - ^
02:58:750 - The 2x speed bit adds a ridiculous amount of difficulty and NOTHING CHANGES IN THE MUSIC
03:05:757 (5) - How the hell are you meant to see that warning in time

I would star this but the 2x sections are too retarded. I'd remove them entireley, but at least make the warnings sensible :/
Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Foster Don
:3 buen mapa
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
BIVUENDO!!!!

[Skin]
You need a spinner-background

[Relax...]
00:14:080 (1) - It's ugly make a same slider like 00:05:321 (1)
00:15:832 (1) - ^
00:59:628 (3) - Make symetric?

[Rhythmic]
00:10:576 (1,2) - Looks ugly
01:06:635 (6,1) - Delete the object at 01:06:635 (6), and then move the spinner to 01:06:635 and extend to 01:08:387
03:12:766 (1,1) - Delete the object at 03:12:766 (1), and then move the spinner to 03:12:766 and extend to 03:14:518

[Intense]
03:12:764 (1,1) - Delete the object at 03:12:764 (1), and then move the spinner to 03:12:764 and extend to 03:14:954

Not bad
STAR
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss

Leorda wrote:

BIVUENDO!!!!

[Skin]
You need a spinner-background i uploaded that item today ^^"

[Relax...]
00:14:080 (1) - It's ugly make a same slider like 00:05:321 (1) Done!
00:15:832 (1) - ^ Done!
00:59:628 (3) - Make symetric? Done!

[Rhythmic]
00:10:576 (1,2) - Looks ugly i don't agree with this u.u
01:06:635 (6,1) - Delete the object at 01:06:635 (6), and then move the spinner to 01:06:635 and extend to 01:08:387 Done!
03:12:766 (1,1) - Delete the object at 03:12:766 (1), and then move the spinner to 03:12:766 and extend to 03:14:518 Done!

[Intense]
03:12:764 (1,1) - Delete the object at 03:12:764 (1), and then move the spinner to 03:12:764 and extend to 03:14:954 Done!

Not bad
STAR
Thanks for modding~~...Kudosu Deserved!
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
Relax...

volume a little too high

[00:19:33] maybe stop kiai here?
[00:31:16] spacing wrong
[00:47:35] remove the whistle
[01:08:37] maybe stop kiai here?
[01:21:96] sound weird to clap here, remove it
[01:25:46] ^
[01:28:97] ^
[01:29:40] ^ and add finish
[01:34:66] start kiai here
[01:47:80] maybe stop kiai here?
[01:48:56] useless kiai, delete
[02:02:69] stop kiai here

Rhythmic

like [relax] .green line for kiai time's start or end needn't be set before / later the note
but when volume & bpm need a changing , you have to set green line before the note

Intense

[01:48:67] useless kiai, delete
[03:00:50] (1,2,3,4) too far 1/4.

in fact i think such a soft song should not add so much clap

but good ,star
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss

LKs wrote:

Relax...

volume a little too high

[00:19:33] maybe stop kiai here?
[00:31:16] spacing wrong
[00:47:35] remove the whistle
[01:08:37] maybe stop kiai here?
[01:21:96] sound weird to clap here, remove it
[01:25:46] ^
[01:28:97] ^
[01:29:40] ^ and add finish
[01:34:66] start kiai here
[01:47:80] maybe stop kiai here?
[01:48:56] useless kiai, delete
[02:02:69] stop kiai here

Rhythmic

like [relax] .green line for kiai time's start or end needn't be set before / later the note
but when volume & bpm need a changing , you have to set green line before the note

Intense

[01:48:67] useless kiai, delete
[03:00:50] (1,2,3,4) too far 1/4.

in fact i think such a soft song should not add so much clap

but good ,star
Well i'm lazy to be writing...most of your stuff ...DONE! Kudosu Deserved!
Xeno_old
120 posts
Joined June 2009
Xeno_old
Nice!

Modded via in-game ( Storyboard not working )
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Rhythmic
00:24:482 - elimina esta green line
02:21:525 (1) - no saltos en normal
02:23:496 (1) - ^
02:48:241 (1) - ^
02:58:642 - elimina esta green line
03:00:503 (1) - arregla este espacio aqui
03:09:044 - agrega otra green line aqui para que le pongas el cambio de volumen a esta, y no a la que esta ensima de la sig nota

la otra te la modero por IRC
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
lthefuryl
irc mode for SB and [Intense] difficult...

now it's ok for me :D
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Proto-Bubble
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Relax:

Slider velocity is kinda high.

Rhythmic:

00:13:533 (4) - Move forward to white tick imo (all the others before this do)

Intense:

-- Video offset is different to the others.

00:42:766 (1) - Slow down before a x2 didn't make much sense to me.
00:43:423 (1,1,1) - Imo it's better spaced like 02:21:524 (1,1,1) - because it's much easier to read. (Though after a couple of retries I could do this so...)
00:49:336 (3,4,5,6,7) - Zig zag... meh I think it might play better reducing the distance on these a little
00:50:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:58:749 to 03:04:005 -- Honestly I don't think the x2 was necessary. It plays weird, the slider velocity goes so fast but the spacing between the notes stays the same which just combo breaks/misses all the time especially in parts like 02:59:407 (5,1,2,3) -

Nice overall, more of a feedback mod from playing it lol.
~ Star
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
Relax is on the border of being a Normal instead of an Easy. Though I'm going to let it slip... Just for once... And since I can't really find anything majorly wrong without it being subjective, I'm going to give some general comments.

[Overall]
Get rid of all those short breaks. They aren't needed, whatsoever. Hitsounds for all difficulties are generally good.

[Relax...]
You use of wavy sliders for an Easy seems...unnecessary and possibly very confusing for beginners. But nevertheless.

[Rhythmic]
Nothing...much...

[Intense]
The way some of those warnings were SB'd didn't seem like it would give the player enough time. Also, you might want to change Normal Speed! to Slow Down!

02:21:52 (4,1) - Unfair jump, don't you think?

Sorry if this mod sucks.
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Topic Starter
Jesss

Shulin wrote:

Relax:

Slider velocity is kinda high. Slowing Down and remaking u.u reducing slider speed messes up all the map...

Rhythmic:

00:13:533 (4) - Move forward to white tick imo (all the others before this do) i did it intentionally and goes according to the song...sorry, i won't change those patterns :/

Intense:

-- Video offset is different to the others. Checked and changed equal to other diffs. offset

00:42:766 (1) - Slow down before a x2 didn't make much sense to me. Changed to Normal Slider
00:43:423 (1,1,1) - Imo it's better spaced like 02:21:524 (1,1,1) - because it's much easier to read. (Though after a couple of retries I could do this so...) Spaced better (after changing slider speed in 0:42:766, that sliders looked messed up)
00:49:336 (3,4,5,6,7) - Zig zag... meh I think it might play better reducing the distance on these a little Hmmm i luv this zig-zag streamy part...i didn't have major problems with passing that part and makes more challenging the song
00:50:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:58:749 to 03:04:005 -- Honestly I don't think the x2 was necessary. It plays weird, the slider velocity goes so fast but the spacing between the notes stays the same which just combo breaks/misses all the time especially in parts like 02:59:407 (5,1,2,3) -

Nice overall, more of a feedback mod from playing it lol.
~ Star
Thanks for modding...
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Jesss
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Jesss

MarioBros777 wrote:

Relax is on the border of being a Normal instead of an Easy. Though I'm going to let it slip... Just for once... And since I can't really find anything majorly wrong without it being subjective, I'm going to give some general comments.

[Overall]
Get rid of all those short breaks. They aren't needed, whatsoever. Hitsounds for all difficulties are generally good. i can't get rid of all of that short breaks, speciallly in "Intense" coz the HP Drain is pretty fast and i'm not considering slowing it down or the song will become ridiculously easier.

[Relax...]
You use of wavy sliders for an Easy seems...unnecessary and possibly very confusing for beginners. But nevertheless.

[Rhythmic]
Nothing...much...

[Intense]
The way some of those warnings were SB'd didn't seem like it would give the player enough time. Also, you might want to change Normal Speed! to Slow Down! uuhhh i discussed with other MAT and planned a better way to SB'ing but delaying appearance of items makes the map way more confussing and stupid and finally unrankable

02:21:52 (4,1) - Unfair jump, don't you think? Fixed

Sorry if this mod sucks.
WyndII
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WyndII
Just found on my Mod Queue. You posted something there but I ignored it.

Give me kudos if I posted something useful.

[General]
- You do not need to add "Kirsty Hawkshaw" in tags since she is already on the

artist. The same with "fine day". You should remove them instead.


[Intense]
- I see no problems in Intense. Hitsound remixz iz gud~.

[Rhythmic]
- same here

[Relax...]
- This not like relax for me >.<

Anyways, Star!
Lissette
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Lissette

j35u5891221 wrote:

April 5, 2010: Relax (The easiest diff.) is now easier!! LOL! due slowing down sliders requests (lissette & Shulin) i remade that Diff. So, needs more modding there, again![/size]
Popping the P-bubble till i recheck the diff you remake u.uU sorry
Jesss
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Jesss

Lissette wrote:

j35u5891221 wrote:

April 5, 2010: Relax (The easiest diff.) is now easier!! LOL! due slowing down sliders requests (lissette & Shulin) i remade that Diff. So, needs more modding there, again![/size]
Popping the P-bubble till i recheck the diff you remake u.uU sorry
No te preocupes liss...ya iba para una PubblePopping

si hacen further modding y detectan más líos...es algo evidentemente claro que las cosas aún no andan bien...^^ más encima que lo revisaron 2 MAT'S seguidos
Lissette
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Lissette
Re-Pubble
Revengexsoyah
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Revengexsoyah
A LALALALAL..... aparte de enamorarme del map esta muy bien echo , mucha dedicacion , muy bien jesus
se ve divertido para ctb , asi que star pra ti y mucha suerte ^^!
mikhe
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mikhe
Buen sonido, buenos hitsounds, en definitiva buen map x3 star!!
Mashley
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Joined September 2008
Mashley
Relax...
Fine (hehe)

Rhythmic
Also... fine ;)

Insane
00:43:423 (1,1,1) - I really don't see the need for 2x sliders here. Sure, you have the warning but it just plays weird.
02:21:524 (1,1,1) - ^
01:23:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uhh why isn't this combo snapped?
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Joined April 2009
Xgor
Great stuff!

[Tags]
I think that "opus III" is the only thing you need in tags :/

[Preview point]
I think 01:46:927 is better as a preview point.

[Skin]
Could you please skin spinner-spin and do it in the same bluish colours as all the other parts in this skin :3

I can't find anything otherwise exept that I'm not that found of the kiai usage but that is not that important ;)

*Star(s)*
minyeob
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minyeob
mmm Arange your streams :D
It will make much easy to hit.

[Intense]
01:04:883 (1) - Make closer from the previous note
01:39:918 (1) - Make closer from the previous note

Maybe there's more lol

Hope this post helped you.
Jesss
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Jesss

minyeob wrote:

mmm Arange your streams :D
It will make much easy to hit.

[Intense]
01:04:883 (1) - Make closer from the previous note
01:39:918 (1) - Make closer from the previous note

Maybe there's more lol

Hope this post helped you.
Thanks for modding...but arranging streams made me fix so many parts of the song (respacing), Needs further Modding in "Intense"...HELP!
Gens
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Gens
You must add a cursortrail...
And resize the "section-pass" and "section-fail" images to 1x1.

[Rhythmic]

00:14:080 (1,2,3) - I think these would sound better if they were shortened by 1/4.

[Intense]

00:43:204 - The warning isn't noticeable at first playthrough... maybe move it above the blue slider?

=3

EDIT: Oh yeah, and the last spinners on Rhythmic and Intense don't end at the same place.
Jesss
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Jesss

Gens wrote:

You must add a cursortrail... Done!
And resize the "section-pass" and "section-fail" images to 1x1. Done!

[Rhythmic]

00:14:080 (1,2,3) - I think these would sound better if they were shortened by 1/4. Done!**

[Intense]

00:43:204 - The warning isn't noticeable at first playthrough... maybe move it above the blue slider? Done!**

=3

EDIT: Oh yeah, and the last spinners on Rhythmic and Intense don't end at the same place. Done!


Thanks for Modding!! ~~ Kudo deserved!!

**...needs to be rechecked, i'm not fully satisfied with newest results
Gens
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