Yo
The colors are self-explanatory (I think)
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General]
00:35:277 (1) - I'm pretty sure the bpm changes here. Maybe get someone experienced in timing to check?Unsnapped kiai and kiai ends. The kiai in Futsuu till Oni should start at 01:11:740 while ending at 01:30:332 Also, the preview time is unconsistent between diffs. Its 71740ms in Kantan and Futsuu while being 71748ms in Muzu and Oni. You should make the preview time 71740 (01:11:740) as it will snap correctly to the beatYour bg size is 1365x768, You should resize it to 1366x768
Disable widescreen support. It's only enabled when you have a SB (which you don't )Maybe move the bg lower to somewhere 0,40 ?
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Btw dat crappy bg name. Change it to something not so screenshot-ish pls ;w;
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Kantan]
Why the hell is Kantan HP5 while Futsuu is HP400:19:105 - make this a k? well the pitch is similar to 00:15:901 and ddk kdk generally flows better than ddk kdd to me :3
also that "wa" in the lyrics sounds more of a k ww00:31:922 - ^
00:51:459 until 00:57:797 -
It isn't a good idea to switch between vocal mapping to beat mapping in a Kantan, especially here you mapped the notes on backbeats which makes it even harder for beginners to grasp the rhythm. I would recommend to continue follow the vocals here, but you can change it to something like d k dkk d k dkk ...(in 1/1) to make it consistent to the previous part but has some variety
01:05:402 until 01:10:473 - It happens here too. I really hope you'll change it. It might be distracting to Kantan players hm
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Futsuu]
See Kantan for the HP issue00:41:740 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - that kd dkkd doesn't really well with the song D: maybe move 00:42:163 and 00:43:642 1/2 later ?
00:47:022 - just saying k feels much better here while testing
00:50:402 - same as above, especially there's also a ddk before this
01:00:543 - ^
01:03:923 - ^
01:11:318 - maybe delete this note to emphasize the pause better?
01:13:642 - Well you're following the vocals for the whole map so there's no reason to overmap stuff in Futsuu right senpai? RIGHT?
01:20:402 - ^
01:27:374 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - same as 00:41:740
Have to say, nice vocal mapping =w=b
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Muzukashii]
00:19:105 - same as Kantan yo suddenly you went from Futsuu pitch mapping to Kantan kinda beat mapping ;w;
00:41:529 - add a d for consistency with 00:38:149 ?
00:53:254 - This 1/4 is kinda overmapped to me, but meh you could keep it if you want since it plays fine
Some parts (especially the kiai) is a bit random to me but eh it works so I'll let it pass
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Oni]
00:31:321 -
If you wanna map to the instrument here at least be more consistent :/ some places like 00:27:516 and 00:29:118 is really missing a k while i'm testing
00:43:747 - change this to k for the crash?
01:16:811 (229,230,231,232,233,234,235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245) - WTF simplify this stream pls D: its too big of a difficulty spike from Muzu AND the other parts of the map
Oni sounds pretty good. You might want simplify the map though as its pretty hard compared to Muzu D:
That's all then. Good luck for ranking!