^w^
[Overall stuff]Why the forced default skin?
Suggestions, suggestions~~
[Easy]The slider speed is kinda fast, and the map is long~~ D:
01:12:082 (1,2) - Stack?
02:08:075 (1,2,3) - Don't have the slider overlapping these
02:17:023 (3,4,5,6) - confusing?
02:18:058 - Weird place to put Kiai
02:40:028 (1) - Fast spinner?
[Normal]Some parts are a little bit hard to read. Use a higher distance snap?
00:54:034 (2) - Move this to the white tick to the right, and remove this 00:54:085 (4)?
01:45:070 (1) - You could move this inside the 01:44:034 (5)
02:11:046 (9) - New combo
02:11:046 (9,13) - Look at the first suggestion
02:18:058 - Weird place to put Kiai
02:30:045 (1,2) - Move back to the white tick, then add a note at 02:32:082
[fartownik's Hard]Some parts of this is kinda cramped, yes
00:22:099 (1) - Fix timing sections
00:42:099 (4,5,6) - Think this part sounds a bit weird, but could be me.
00:46:038 (6) - Move this down a bit so it makes this circular path?
00:49:077 (1) - Remove this
00:54:017 (1,2) - These slow sliders caught me offguard x.x Maybe add a warning?
00:55:019 (3) - Distance snap
01:10:011 (1) - Remove new combo
01:10:062 (2) - New combo
01:10:062 (2,8) - Move everything right in the timeline, delete the last slider and put a note there instead
01:21:012 (9) - Remove this and start the spinner here
02:01:097 (1) - x.x
02:03:016 (1) - ^
02:08:007 (1) - You could try mapping this part instead? I think it would be better if this part where mapped now xD
02:14:068 (2) - Move the endpoint a bit upwards
02:22:082 (2) - Sounds weird to me
02:27:056 (5) - ^
02:30:011 (6) - Finish?
02:34:051 (7,8,9,10) - I don't think this part should be in 1/2
02:50:078 (1,1) - Is this part necessary? Or remove this break 02:47:006 and map this part :3
[Insane]HP drain D:
01:02:065 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - x.x <-- Actually, this is fine. I just suck :3
01:03:092 - Add a note here, making a triplet
01:05:002 (1,9) - This part doesn't flow too well for me
01:11:080 - Sneak in a spinner or repeating slider thing?
01:15:070 (11) - Move this a tad bit to the right
01:19:094 (7,8) - Finish?
01:21:012 (12) - Remove finish and add whistle
01:36:004 - Add note here?
01:39:026 - ^
01:45:070 (1) - Remove whistle
01:46:038 (3) - ^
01:46:072 (4) - ^
01:46:089 - Add note here with whistle
01:47:006 (5) - Remove whistle on the slider, then add only at the start
^The above You could also use claps instead of whistles, seing you do that in the next part
01:54:000 (1) - Move this spinner to the white tick before it, then extend so the endpoint stays the same
01:57:090 (9) - Why does this end on 1/8?
01:59:026 (2) - Make this a slider, ending at 01:59:060 and remove 01:59:043 (3)
02:18:041 (1) - Move this to the white tick before, and extend so the endpoint stays the same. Add finish.
02:30:011 (1)- 02:38:041 (11) - This part has a lot of claps. Try not use so many, and I liked the way you used finish instead at 01:12:082 (1)
02:32:048 (9,12) - Distance snap
02:39:077 (1) - Err, startpoint at the 8? Oh, and I think you should map this part instead of ending with a spinner
x.x - This means I combo breaked
Here's a star~~