1. Easy (1,39 stars, 71 notes)
2. Hard (3,08 stars, 197 notes)
3. Normal (2,14 stars, 139 notes)

Kenssai wrote:

[Hard]
00:20:869 (1) - delete and replace it by a slider starting at 00:20:596 Fixed.~
00:31:778 (7) and 00:32:050 (8) - replace it by a reverse slider, start at 00:31:778 , reverse at 00:32:050 to 00:32:323 Fixed.~
00:43:505 (14) - replace it by a slider to 00:44:050 did thata while ago too, i think i reverted it for some reason. xD
00:44:323 (15,16) - replace it by one slider
00:44:869 (1,1) - replace it by one slider
00:46:232 (1) - replace it with 3 circles
00:47:323 - add circle here i'd rather stay with the gap in here, it fits good to the music.
00:47:596 - ^ ^
00:48:960 (1) - delete this and add 4 circles starting at 00:48:823 i suppose you mean with 1/4 beat snap. I don't like it for this diff really, but I'll keep it in mind.
00:49:505 (1) - could replace spinner for some note, except if you want to leave it for the voice I'll leave it how it is. :3
00:56:596 (7,8) - replace it by a slider Fixed~
00:57:141 (1) - make it reverse slider, same lenght I like the slider+circle more on this diff, i did the same on the normal diff already (which should actually be easy as well as this one should be normal).
00:59:732 - add circle done~
01:00:687 - ^ done~
01:00:959 (6) - replace it by a 1/2 sliderdon't like it this way, but I'll try some other thing out.
01:06:414 (6,7) - switch place

[4423]
hmm noo more video on this level? O.O it should still have, probably a bug.
00:33:687 (4,5) - replace it by a slider fixed~
00:38:050 (6,7) - switch place That sounds wrong to for me, but i have another idea on this part. :3
00:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you could replace this with circles It's fine how it is. :3
00:57:414 (8) - move this on this 00:57:141 (7) , delete the 7th note and make your slider a reverse slider don't really like it this way, i'll reconsider it.
00:57:959 (9,10) - switch places ^, just more probable to happen
00:59:050 (11,12) - delete the circle and make the slider end at the 00:59:323 sounds boring, i'm orientating on the 'alien' sound in the background for this part btw.
00:59:596 (13) - delete put a circle i changed the part a bit different, thanks for noting it out anyway.
00:59:869 - start a slider here to 01:00:141 , so you'll have to delete 01:00:141 (14) ^
01:00:414 - add circle ^
01:06:005 - ^ would heighten up the mini-stream, yes, but it doesn't seem to fit for me here. Might reconsider that.
01:06:141 (4) - reverse slider fixed
01:06:687 (1,2) - switch places will probably fix it in near future, the whole placement is kind of awful in the kiai part. xD
01:18:687 (1) - could be a slider to 01:19:232 There's actually no sound behind the note, why add?


WOAH GG I think you just did a huge update! GJ is so much better then before Thanks mate

1. You second red timing point should be at 00:54:687 -
2. Use distance snap more, especially in normal and hard.
3. Avoid strange shap sliders and reduce the angles of sliders, i personally want the sliders to be smooth.
4. Reduce the use of sliders that return too many times.
5. Reduce the pause in the map.
6. Reduce overlaps
7. Reduce DS space on streams
8. Avoid circles going straight up/down/left/right

1. CS+1 usually cs3 for normal diff
2. SV is a bit high now (1.3*1.2=1.56) I prefer lower SV (around 1.4) and higher DS (1.2x or 1.3x) to make the map clear.
3. 00:12:141 (1,2) - overlaps
4. 00:12:141 (1,2,3) - flow change from going ↘ to straight ← not a good idea
5. 00:14:323 (4) - head/tail of the slider unclear, might be unrankable.
6. 00:18:687 (7) - NC, and I don't like the unreasonable curve. Doesn't fit the music and makes the shape ugly
7. 00:27:414 (4) - make it more smooth
8. 00:29:596 (6) - change to may be better (need to re-arrange previous and later notes' positions.)
9. 00:33:960 (1) - return times unpredictable.
10. 00:35:869 (3,4,5,6,7) - hard to read and the flow is broken. easily improves your flow, but I like more.
11. 00:37:232 - this is what I called pause. Make some noise here. Largest gap in this normal diff should not exceed 1 beat (time between two white ticks.)
12. 00:39:141 (4,5) - change to a long slider, avoid the pause and improve the flow.
13. 00:40:505 (1,2,3,4,5) - add sliders or improve the shape.
14. 00:53:596 (2,3) - 2NC, and put the head of 2 and tail of 3 at exactly the same place, you can use Ctrl-G to reverse 3 and make your change.
15. 00:54:823 (4,5) - 4NC, I prefer 2 return sliders like this
16. 00:56:323 (6,7,8,1) - all horizontal or vertical. it breaks the flow
17. 00:59:869 - miss a note here.
18. 01:02:323 (1) - returning too many times. I think you can just follow the rhythm at 00:53:596 -
19. 01:03:960 (2,3,1,2,3) - horizontal or vertical. not good.
20. 01:04:778 (1,4,5,6) - overlaps
21. 01:07:778 (3,1,2,3) - horizontal
22. 01:14:050 (2) - return once

1. CS+1
2. 00:13:505 (6,8) - overlaps
3. 00:16:505 (3,1) - overlaps
4. 00:20:869 (8) - NC
5. 00:27:141 (7,8,1) - lower DS on stream (same thing happens a lot in both hard and insane diff, not gonna mention all of them)
6. 00:33:687 (1,1,1) - smooth the sliders. tho you don't need to move, more smooth sliders make the map look better.
7. 00:52:096 (3) - no reason to shape this little tiny thing like this, copy 00:51:687 (2) - and Ctrl-H Ctrl-G
8. 00:53:596 (1,2,3) - not on the same curve, adjust 3
9. 00:56:596 (7) - I'll shape it like this to improve the flow
10. 00:58:232 (1) - put it a little bit down to improve the flow.
11. 00:57:687 (9,2) - overlaps
12. 01:01:778 (9) - change to a slider ends at 01:02:050 -

1. CS+1
2. 00:11:596 (5,3) - overlaps
3. 00:12:960 (4) - you may need another control point to improve the shape. stop at 00:13:505 - and use the approach circle of 5 as a reference
4. 00:13:778 (5,1,2,3,4) - DS changed when space is almost the same. not a good idea
5. 00:16:505 (3) - stop at 00:16:164 - and improve the shape
6. Next comes a lot of notes that goes horizontally or vertically
7. 00:31:096 (4) - no reason to use red point change the SV and make it ugly. just use a normal long slider
8. 00:33:687 (4,1,2,3,5,6) - overlaaaaaps
9. 00:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - just a normal stream containing 8 circle and ends with a slider is fine.
10. 01:04:505 (1,2,3) - long DS jump stream with blanketing... too difficult compared with the rest of your map.
11. 01:07:232 (2) - reduce the angle and make it smooth
12. 01:11:050 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - DS change when space is the same and long DS jump streams... NO! hard to read

The Girls wrote:

Easy

00:18:687 (1) - Clean up the shape of the slider by making the last horizontal line parallel to the first horizontal line.
It won't change too much, but fixed.

00:35:596 (5, 6) - Make those into a slider, since she sings on an offbeat, it would reduce the likelihood of someone hitting the 6 too early. Also would sound nicer with more fluidity to the beat rhythm. I just fixed the 4 & 5 circle to small sliders. I'd miss the first tone of the singer if I'd put them in one slider. Don't expect too much fluidity, it's an easy map, and additionally a nice smooth song.

01:04:505 - Move the slider half a beat to the right. Matches the song that way. Would fit to the voice, but not what I intended. I think this is more comfortable to play.

01:06:414 (7) & 01:08:596 (8) - Should be stacked. Can't see any reason why.

Normal

00:32:869 (3, 4) - They are too far apart. I did this for the symmetry. It's just one small jump, it should be fine.

00:33:687 - The distance between these sliders are all too far apart. I mean in terms of consistency, the time-space equality has to be very strict in order for the song to be intuitive to the player. Maybe the distances are really a bit off. Gonna fix that!

00:34:232 (1, 1 ) - The two on the side could be rotated so their center is on the X-axis as well. Would look nicer. Ctrl + Alt + R --rotate

00:54:687 (4, 5 ) - Bracket symmetry. Ctrl + C one of them and Ctrl + H it across. Use Ctrl + G if you need to. The 5-slider is actually a bit longer than the 4-one. I'll leave it as it is, doesn't have to be necessarily symmetric imo.

00:57:414 (8) - Center the 8 between the two bracket sliders. Fixed

01:01:505 (10) - Find another place to put it, it will look like it is twice as fast as the diamond beats before it. Fixed, pushed it a bit to the right.

01:07:232 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Pentagon it Don't really want to, because the slider wouldn't fit to the earlier slider anymore. I may fix it later.

4423

00:35:323 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Space closer, too much like the 1/2 beats. Fixed.

00:36:141 - Offmap. Fixed.

00:51:823 (2, 3) - Gap needs to be closer. It's supposed to be a jump, I think it's fine.

00:54:687 - The sliders can have a better pattern if you try this: I'd rather have a consistent DS in the kiai mode than to change this one pattern to make it look better.I'd have to use this DS in the prelude to the liai mode as well, which would make this part inappropriately faster htthan it should.

01:01:778 (5) - DISTANCE! Please turn on snap distance and map it that way, its really hard to follow otherwise.

It was distance snapped already May be confusing though, I'll change this pattern a bit.[/box]

Regraz wrote:

Hi!~
[General]
Uncheck WideScreen Support if you dont have a storyboard.
Uncheck Letterbox during breaks if you have no break time in this map.
About hitsounds:
As to the first part of this song. The music are very soft andin low volumn. So claps are not appropriate, you can use soft-whistle instead.
[Easy]
00:12:141 (4) - NC [color=#BF8000 I'll leave it as it is.[/color]
00:14:323 (7) - NC fixed
00:17:596 (2) - make it end at 255|282 for a perfect stack.It already stacks perfectly
00:18:687 (3) - NC because the vocals begin here. ^
00:36:141 (6) - NC and you can add Finish here. ^
00:38:323 (1) - Dont do such stack in Easy. Newbies cant handle this. I'm gonna change this back to Normal, so i leave it as it is.
00:40:505 (1) - ^ ^
00:44:869 (4) - ^ ^
00:45:687 (1,3) - Try to make the blanket better. (Fit more with the hitcircle approach ring.) I made it fitting to the inner curve of the slider.
00:47:869 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:54:687 (3) - NC because KIAI begins.Fixed.
00:57:687 (6) - Dont stack. This is even a 1/2!! You stacked 1/1 just now and here you stack 1/2, this can cause misleading. ^
[Normal]
I think your Easy should be Normal
Normal should be Hard.
You know, accordng to the current ranking creteria, it is a must to obey distance snap in Normal. And the Normal should be below 2.25 stars. At first it was actually Normal, Hard, Semi-Insane(4423), i thought it would have been too easy to fit these diffs, so i put it down. Guess I'll go back to the roots then.^^
00:20:869 (7) - NC fixed.
00:22:232 (10,2) - blanket Rearranged the whole patter after this.
00:25:232 (2) - 343|225 for a better stack. Included.
00:32:869 (2,3) - Avoid this kind of overlap. added a circle between 1 & 2 to make it look symmetrical (was like this at first)
00:33:687 (1,1,1,1) - Dont spam NC here./ Looked nicer this way, but ok.~
00:59:869 (5) - NC
01:15:141 (3) - NC No.

[4423]
00:15:278 (1) - Too short spinner. Changed it with a longer slider fitting to the circle slider.
00:21:414 (4) - Make this end at 316|216 for perfect stack. Stacks perfectly already?
00:27:414 (1) - Doesn fit the vocal much. I was orientating on the background instruments.
00:28:914 (5) - ^ The vocal doent fall on the end nor the start of the slider. ^. I can't focussing on vocal in this diff since she's holding the notes too long and it would just result long sliders.
00:40:505 (1,5) - Recheck the stack. It is perfectly stacked?
00:45:687 (3) - make this symmetric What happens when you skid down a grid cell Fixed!
00:45:414 (2,5) - Make them at the same position. I like where the circle is now.
01:03:414 (9) - NC Fixed.
01:15:141 (1,1,1,1,1) - Though this s creative, it doesnt fit the music much. So dont spam NC here.Not sure about this, I'd rather let it be. Probably need more opinions on this decision.

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Good luck!~ Thanks!

DavidEd wrote:

Normal

00:11:050 - move up 1 and left 2
00:11:596 - move the note so it looks like this http://i.imgur.com/Y0zGupQ.png Fixed~
00:12:141 - move down 5 snaps
00:13:232 - move up 2 snaps

00:20:323 - move it to the middle of those 2 sliders http://i.imgur.com/ZGhvAMP.png
00:26:050 and 00:26:323 - make some room between those notes http://i.imgur.com/fjWwp3S.png
00:32:869 - move this up 6 snaps and 2 snaps to the left
00:34:505 , 00:34:778 and 00:35:050 - move them so they look like this http://i.imgur.com/2ftH4zF.png

No major flaws, altho the only thing i think you should do is to increase the distance snap to 1,3x and move those tight notes
Not much i can fix here, i'll sticfk to the 1.2x DS, so i can't implement some suggestions you made.
Hard

00:22:232 and 00:22:505 - move them like this http://i.imgur.com/e1xmvTx.png fixed~
00:59:732 - delete this note
01:02:868 - distance snap to 1,4x and move it like this http://i.imgur.com/3URhOdS.png
01:04:232 - move this slider down a bit http://i.imgur.com/x1PJpLg.png
01:05:050 - distance snap to 0,9x

01:07:232 - move it down a little (distance snap 0,9x)
01:13:777 - move it up a little (distance snap 1,4x)
01:14:869 - move it out from the slider just a bit (distance snap 1,4x)

Really enjoyed modding this map. It didn't have too many major flaws. Good job and good luck! Thanks!

Hitorikko wrote:

Hard
00:59:732 (4) - Delete this note Need a 3rd opinion on that lol

4423
00:26:050 (5) - Move it to x:276 y:64 not much of a difference, but i make it more rounder with the slider
00:25:914 (4) - ^ x:308 y:76
00:28:778 (4) - ^ x:376 y:104
00:30:823 (6) - ^ x:356 y:60
00:30:960 (7) - ^ x:384 y:88

This beatmap is tooo good for me to look for flaws. Good luck !

Churcheell wrote:

Hi!

Normal

00:16:505 - Overlap, doesn't seem neat, maybe elevate one of the sliders Fixed~
00:42:687 - I don't like this single combo, make it part of the previous combo to make a 6 That wasn't supposed to be a slingle combo fixed~
00:43:232 - Put that circle here http://puu.sh/ajybj/06903a9f4c.jpg , It doesn't seem very nice stacked onto the slider Fixed

Hard

00:27:141 - NC here instead of 00:27:414 i'll stay to what i have atm, fits mroe to the vocal
00:30:414 - Shift this up slightly, it's a bit confusing as it's in the same position as a previous circleI don't like overlap here. I increased AR+0.5 to compensate that.
00:33:687 - Put a triplet here instead of a backslider Backslider is fine. I'll think about that.
00:59:732 - Space this out a bit moreI deleted the circle and spaced it