Sayonara Ponytail - Shinsekai Koukyougaku [Osu|Taiko]

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lolia

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
00:18:842 (1) - I really don't get what are you following with this slider, try something like this? Well, current rhythm is better IMO,,I followed the just music..Sorry

01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - This is a bit harsh imo, I agree with Leader, a 5-note stream here would fit better with the build-up in the music. I prefer the current slider, sorry

That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
Thanks for modding~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, I like this song and your map so take a free mod :) lol Thank you so Much!!

[General]
Nothing looks wrong.

[Insane]
00:03:842 (1,2) - This one doesn't play bad, but it somehow breaks your spacing consistency you used for previous patterns, maybe fix it? it's intention. :P
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/6 isn't very intuitive, better keeping the 1/4. consider it. but i want to keep to 1/6
00:26:134 (2,3) - Maybe use a rhythm like this instead, this 3/4 spacing could be a bit tricky. good, fixed

00:43:425 (5,6,1) - The circle there kills a bit the flow given by the first slider, maybe make this a bit smooth?
01:00:092 (6,7,1) - ^
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - ^ no, sorry :P
01:23:634 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider here, the sound in 01:23:842 feels a bit weird being ignored. ok,fixed!

[Hard]
00:00:821 (2) - This drum sample doesn't fit too much here, remove it, you don't have it in Insane. This applies for similar spots when you used the drum sample. no,i want to add drum sound like staccato. and added drum sound in Insane,too.
00:25:509 (2,3,4) - Maybe use something like this, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky here. Not bad sound. but i want to keep.i consider it.

00:27:175 (1,2,3) - Maybe align the triple, it'd look better. no,sorry. :P
00:28:842 (1) - Ctrl+G, improves the flow :3 fixed!
00:38:425 (2,1) - Why don't you use a slider-circle-slider pattern, it'd fit better, the custom tick is a bit misleading imo. consider it. not bad!
00:46:550 (4,5,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth? no, sorry :P
00:55:509 (1) - Remove NC? no
00:55:925 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit more here imo. no vocal here xD
01:06:342 (1) - Remove NC. ok
01:08:425 (3,4,1) - Maybe align the triple. hmm..no!
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth? little fixed!
01:24:988 (2,3) - I'd suggest to use the 1/4 slider for the 4 notes, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky so a circle wouldn't be hit accurately. using only 1/4 slider is little constant. so i swaped it

[Normal]
The spot where you begin the diff feels a bit weird as it's in the middle of the intro, I'd suggest you to begin the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175. fixed!
00:35:509 (3) - I'd suggest to make this a 1/1 slider, it'd fit with vocals better, or using 2 circles in 1/1, that works too. ok,fixed to 2 circles!
00:37:175 (1) - whoa, I' really suggest you to end this in the red tick, this would throw off many players, also this would fit better with vocals. no,i want to follow drum sound. :p
00:51:550 (5) - This slider feels a bit off, maybe try a rhythm like this, it's more intuitive imo, you could add a reverse to the last slider. i thought it is not bad. my rhythm is good! suggestion thanks!


[Easy]
Same suggestion about beginning the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175. ok. add spin starting 00:00:509
00:53:425 (3,1) - I'd suggest you to delete this circle and beginning the spinner here. This spinner would end in 00:54:675. Then add a note in 00:55:509. This way would play better as the player would hit along with the beginning of the kiai, which feels good :)not bad sound. but i followed guiter sound. and after spinner,hit circle is so close.
01:23:425 (6) - It looks like you forgot a NC here, also you should try a rhythm like this, fits better with vocals. good, fixed!


That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
Thanks mod! (づ'0')づ
TKS

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, I like this song and your map so take a free mod :)
[TK's Muzukashii]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is a bit confusing ;~; Maybe try something like this? This goes for the patterns after this too. - i following the hi-hat drum sound. but that is a bit confusing pattern indeed. i deleted some notes.

00:39:884 (142) - Remove this, the drums are only 2 hits in 1/4. - youre right. but i have used the simple triplet intentionally for Muzukashii.
00:41:967 (150) - It's better to start the spinner along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the spinner here. - ummnnnn, i dont think so. i prefer that the spinner and slider is start from the 1/1 line.
00:45:300 (9) - As above. Aditionally, you could move 00:44:884 (7) 1/2 beat forward to fit vocals more in this part.

[TK's Oni]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This doesn't follow the song nicely ;~; Try this. This goes for the next similart parts too. - i have improved it thanks to your great idea!

00:17:800 (91) - Maybe put a don here, it plays better imo. - fixed.
00:26:550 (132) - Maybe remove, it'd be better to strictly follow drums in this part, 2 hits in 1/4. - kept. i want to use a triplet here.
00:41:967 (211) - It's better to start the slider along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the slider here. - same reason as the Muzu. i prefer the slider of simple rhythm.
00:45:300 (224) - ^

Nice job TK-sama, but please fix at least the start and the spinners/sliders ;~; - gomen nasai ;~;

That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
thanks for mod! (灬ºωº灬)
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ougaku.rar
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated! (づ'0')づ
Neta
안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[General]
  1. 하드만 와이드 스크린 서폿 체크 되있습니다!


[Easy]
  1. 01:13:009 (2) - 480, 276 으로 옮겨주세요 ( 블랭킷 )
  2. 으.. 딱히 잡을게 없네요



[Normal]
  1. 00:23:634 (1) - 이거도 184, 16 으로 하시면 00:22:800 (4) 하고 배치가 잘 맞을꺼같네요
  2. 01:07:592 (2) - 376 320 으로 옮겨보세요. 지금 prev 랑 next랑 0.02 차이나는데 옮기시면 거리가 같아질듯 하네요
  3. 01:20:509 (3) - 모양새가 1번하고 약간 안맞는 느낌인데 슬라이더 중앙 포인트를 280, 268 으로 옮겨보세요!



[Hard]
  1. 01:17:071 (4) - 모양 약간 이상한 느낌인데 424 , 160 추천드려요~ 만약 고치셧다면 뒤쪽2개 노트 디스턴스 약간 고치시면됨
  2. 01:24:988 (2,3) - 플레이 할때 약간 이상한 느낌인데 차라리 3번을 지우고 2번 슬라를 한번더 반복하게 하는게 어떨까 싶네요


[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:23:217 (1) - NC?



[Insane]
  1. 딱히 찾을수가 없네요



맵 너무 잘만드셧음 ㅠㅠ

별 하나 드리고 갈게요 도움은 별로 못됬네요
HabiHolic
[Easy]

00:08:425 - 노트를 추가하시는게 어떠신가요 없으니까 허전하기도 하네요
00:19:259 - 휘슬 추가

[Normal]

서클크기 왜 작나요 이지랑 똑같은크기가 좋을것같아요

00:26:654 (3) - 리듬 다르게 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아요
00:30:509 (1) - 잘 감싸지지 않않네요

00:32:175 (3) - 위에꺼 수정시 대칭되게 똑같은 모양으로.. 복붙해주세요
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이런 리듬이 왜 있는지 모르겠네요 리듬 쉽게 바꾸세여
00:42:800 (4) - 제안입니다

[Hard]

00:55:509 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제
00:58:425 (4) - ctri + g?
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - 그냥 반복슬라로 부탁드립니다.
01:13:425 (5) - ctri + g

[Karia's Hard]

Fine~

good luck
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Neta wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[General]
  1. 하드만 와이드 스크린 서폿 체크 되있습니다!


[Easy]
  1. 01:13:009 (2) - 480, 276 으로 옮겨주세요 ( 블랭킷 )
  2. 으.. 딱히 잡을게 없네요



[Normal]
  1. 00:23:634 (1) - 이거도 184, 16 으로 하시면 00:22:800 (4) 하고 배치가 잘 맞을꺼같네요
  2. 01:07:592 (2) - 376 320 으로 옮겨보세요. 지금 prev 랑 next랑 0.02 차이나는데 옮기시면 거리가 같아질듯 하네요
  3. 01:20:509 (3) - 모양새가 1번하고 약간 안맞는 느낌인데 슬라이더 중앙 포인트를 280, 268 으로 옮겨보세요!



[Hard]
  1. 01:17:071 (4) - 모양 약간 이상한 느낌인데 424 , 160 추천드려요~ 만약 고치셧다면 뒤쪽2개 노트 디스턴스 약간 고치시면됨
  2. 01:24:988 (2,3) - 플레이 할때 약간 이상한 느낌인데 차라리 3번을 지우고 2번 슬라를 한번더 반복하게 하는게 어떨까 싶네요


[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:23:217 (1) - NC?



[Insane]
  1. 딱히 찾을수가 없네요



맵 너무 잘만드셧음 ㅠㅠ

별 하나 드리고 갈게요 도움은 별로 못됬네요
하드 배치 모딩 빼고 수정!
Thanks!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

[Easy]

00:08:425 - 노트를 추가하시는게 어떠신가요 없으니까 허전하기도 하네요 NO
00:19:259 - 휘슬 추가 2번 노트에 휘슬 들어가있는데요? :?

[Normal]

서클크기 왜 작나요 이지랑 똑같은크기가 좋을것같아요 제 마음!

00:26:654 (3) - 리듬 다르게 바꾸시는게 좋을것같아요 제 마음!
00:30:509 (1) - 잘 감싸지지 않않네요 수정!

00:32:175 (3) - 위에꺼 수정시 대칭되게 똑같은 모양으로.. 복붙해주세요 수정!
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이런 리듬이 왜 있는지 모르겠네요 리듬 쉽게 바꾸세여 제 마음이고요, 드럼 사운드있잖아요
00:42:800 (4) - 제안입니다 패스

[Hard]

00:55:509 (1) - 뉴콤보 삭제 전 모딩에서도 제안받은 사항인데, 일단 패스함
00:58:425 (4) - ctri + g? 패스
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - 그냥 반복슬라로 부탁드립니다. 패스
01:13:425 (5) - ctri + g 패스

[Karia's Hard]

Fine~

good luck
Cancel
M4M~

[General]
  1. Maybe usethisas your background?


[Easy]

  1. 00:10:509 (1) - Make it a good blanket


Thats it really. Nice diff

[Normal]

  1. 00:23:634 (1) - The whistle sounds off. Maybe place a custom slidertick on the first slidertick?
  2. 00:26:654 (3) - Move ending point to x=348 y=132
  3. 00:28:009 (2,4) - Maybe curve these two sliders, so that 00:29:675 (4) - fits with 00:30:509 (1) - ?
  4. 00:31:759 (2) - Move to x=256 y=232
  5. 00:33:842 (1) - Move to x=156 y=272
  6. 00:38:009 (2) - Doesn't really fit in a normal diff. Maybe extend 00:37:175 (1) - to this beat?


Nice diff, and I like the flow. But for a normal diff its kinda Hard...

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:592 (5) - Make a better blanket with the slider end of 00:16:759 (3) - .
  2. 00:39:675 (3) - Replace slider with a slightly adjusted 00:39:259 (2) - ?


Nice diff~!

[Karia's Hard]

  1. 00:10:925 (2) - Copy and paste this slider 00:10:509 (1) - in order to make it look better, and then Ctrl+J and Ctrl+G it.
  2. 00:20:509 (1,2) - Ugly overlap. Maybe clean it up a little?
  3. 00:40:925 (2) - Make this slider a good blanket with the slider end of 00:41:342 (3) - .
  4. 00:45:300 (1) - Make it a better blanket by bending the last two points a little.
  5. 00:48:842 (1) - ^
  6. 00:53:425 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 00:53:529 - and place a beat at 00:53:425 - ? The spinner just doesn't feel right where it currently is.


Nice diff, but needs work on the sliders and blankets.

[Insane]

Well, I couldn't play it, so its hard to make a mod about it. But it looks really nice ^^

Thats it! Good luck~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Cancel wrote:

M4M~

[General]
  1. Maybe usethisas your background?


[Easy]

  1. 00:10:509 (1) - Make it a good blanket checked!


Thats it really. Nice diff

[Normal]

  1. 00:23:634 (1) - The whistle sounds off. Maybe place a custom slidertick on the first slidertick? checked!
  2. 00:26:654 (3) - Move ending point to x=348 y=132 checked!
  3. 00:28:009 (2,4) - Maybe curve these two sliders, so that 00:29:675 (4) - fits with 00:30:509 (1) - ? checked!
  4. 00:31:759 (2) - Move to x=256 y=232 checked!
  5. 00:33:842 (1) - Move to x=156 y=272 checked!
  6. 00:38:009 (2) - Doesn't really fit in a normal diff. Maybe extend 00:37:175 (1) - to this beat? sorry, i followed drum sound.


Nice diff, and I like the flow. But for a normal diff its kinda Hard...

[Hard]

  1. 00:17:592 (5) - Make a better blanket with the slider end of 00:16:759 (3) - .checked!
  2. 00:39:675 (3) - Replace slider with a slightly adjusted 00:39:259 (2) - ?checked!


Nice diff~!

Thats it! Good luck~
Thanks! i'll check yours later :D
Cosmolade
Random Mod o3o)/

[General]

  1. So cute song! :)
  2. Add Mankanshoku Mako to the tags?


[Easy]

Good.

  1. 01:23:217 (1,2,3) - How about this?


[Normal]

Nice.
CS -1

  1. 00:37:175 (1) - End the slider in > 00:37:592
  2. 01:23:009 (1) - Move to > 01:23:217 - and end the slider in white tick.
  3. 01:24:259 (2) - Move to > 01:24:675 - end the slider in white tick, and add a circle in > 01:24:259


[Hard]

Wow, perfect for me :)


[Karia's Hard]

Nice! :)

  1. 01:23:217 (3) - Move further away? (only a suggestion, the diff is so beatiful, btw)


[Insane]
Cool (っ´▽`)っ

  1. 00:20:509 (1) - Very straight, maybe curving slightly the shape of the slider?
  2. 00:33:425 (1) - How about this?
  3. 00:49:467 (2) - Move to > 00:49:675 -end the slider in the white tick, and add a note in > 00:49:467


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that's all ( ouo)/
Good luck with the map! ٩( ᐛ )و
Ringating
from my bg modding queue:

Well, you have since found a new bg from the one you asked me to mod (which was probably a good idea, the bg you had at the time wasn't nearly as good as the one you now have), but i still went ahead and changed the old one.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Cosmolade wrote:

Random Mod o3o)/

[General]

  1. So cute song! :)
  2. Add Mankanshoku Mako to the tags?


[Easy]

Good.

  1. 01:23:217 (1,2,3) - How about this?


[Normal]

Nice.
CS -1

  1. 00:37:175 (1) - End the slider in > 00:37:592
  2. 01:23:009 (1) - Move to > 01:23:217 - and end the slider in white tick.
  3. 01:24:259 (2) - Move to > 01:24:675 - end the slider in white tick, and add a circle in > 01:24:259


[Insane]
Cool (っ´▽`)っ

  1. 00:20:509 (1) - Very straight, maybe curving slightly the shape of the slider?
  2. 00:33:425 (1) - How about this?
  3. 00:49:467 (2) - Move to > 00:49:675 -end the slider in the white tick, and add a note in > 00:49:467


-------

that's all ( ouo)/
Good luck with the map! ٩( ᐛ )و
sorry,i don't want to change my rhythm. added mankanshoku mako!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Ringating wrote:

from my bg modding queue:

Well, you have since found a new bg from the one you asked me to mod (which was probably a good idea, the bg you had at the time wasn't nearly as good as the one you now have), but i still went ahead and changed the old one.
thanks and sorry ┗( ̄▽ ̄ㆀ)┓=33
Mei
Hihihi this is for m4m

[insane]
  1. 00:02:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since you missed an obvious sounds there 00:02:592 , I suggest you to try this
  2. 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - ummm....1/6 stream fits there....but I think change it to repeated silder will be better since no much people can do 1/6 streams really well when there's 1/4 before
  3. 00:07:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you missed a drum in 00:08:113 ,....although there is also a tune in 00:08:217 ... I think change to this way will sounds better
  4. 00:08:842 (1,2,3,4) - how about this
  5. 00:09:675 (5,6,7) - something heard strange there... try this rhythmn
  6. 00:12:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find this fit better. try it
  7. 00:51:112 (4,5) - what happened....
  8. 00:56:550 (5) - move to x240 y300
  9. 01:22:175 (1,2) - ctrl+g better flow for me
[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:16:967 (3) - according to you donot put a note in 00:16:134 , I think you followed vocal. so maybe remove this note cuz it is kind overmapped
  2. 00:44:467 (4) - move to x44 y96?
  3. 00:51:112 (4,5) - same problem with insane... what happened
  4. 01:11:342 (3,4,5) - maybe kind too hard for a hard diff?
[hard]
  1. 00:33:009 (1,2,3) - how about this

    umm others are fine... but one thing is that you use to many 1/4 rhythm , like what you did in insane. If you reduce the useage of 1/4 I think the difficulty spread will be better, such as 00:10:404 (5,6) - 00:15:821 (5) - 00:21:238 (3) - 00:23:738 (5) - 00:27:488 (2) - they are all not really correspond to the music. Ummm this is just a suggestion anyway and the reason I put this is because some BAT really care these issues
[normal]
  1. 00:22:592 (3,4,1) - how about this
  2. 00:42:800 (4) - replace this by a note on 00:43:009
  3. 00:51:550 (5) - how about change this to a 1/2 slider
[easy]
  1. 00:11:342 (2) - replace this by a 1/2 slider or a note
  2. 00:48:842 (1,2) - for better flow , try this
  3. 01:03:842 (2) - kind weired.... use 1/1 slider and a note on 01:05:092 ?
  4. 01:19:259 (2,3,4) - try this?

all diff are neat. this song is also good. so star☆~
good luck
lolia

Neta wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:23:217 (1) - NC? 여긴 뉴콤이 없어도 문제되진 않을것같아요

Cancel wrote:

[Karia's Hard]

  1. 00:10:925 (2) - Copy and paste this slider 00:10:509 (1) - in order to make it look better, and then Ctrl+J and Ctrl+G it. I want to keep current placement, sorry
  2. 00:20:509 (1,2) - Ugly overlap. Maybe clean it up a little? I like this overlap, sorry
  3. 00:40:925 (2) - Make this slider a good blanket with the slider end of 00:41:342 (3) - . Well, current one is better to me, sorry
  4. 00:45:300 (1) - Make it a better blanket by bending the last two points a little. fixed
  5. 00:48:842 (1) - ^ np IMO, sorry
  6. 00:53:425 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 00:53:529 - and place a beat at 00:53:425 - ? The spinner just doesn't feel right where it currently is. I prefer current time,,sorry


Nice diff, but needs work on the sliders and blankets.

Cosmolade wrote:

[Karia's Hard]

Nice! :)

  1. 01:23:217 (3) - Move further away? (only a suggestion, the diff is so beatiful, btw) Sorry, I want the current placement.

Mei wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:16:967 (3) - according to you donot put a note in 00:16:134 , I think you followed vocal. so maybe remove this note cuz it is kind overmapped Well, I don't understand why this is overmapping..
  2. 00:44:467 (4) - move to x44 y96? Sorry, I like current jump
  3. 00:51:112 (4,5) - same problem with insane... what happened fixed
  4. 01:11:342 (3,4,5) - maybe kind too hard for a hard diff? Not so hard IMO. Cuz bpm is low..
Thanks for modding~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mankanshoku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54675
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Shinsekai Koukyougaku
TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Ponytail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill la Kill
Tags:TV Size Karia TKSalt Ending ed キルラキル mankanshoku mako
BeatmapID:385249
BeatmapSetID:157246

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.64
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"koroke.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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453,174,82592,2,0,P|469:200|482:233,1,61.5000023460389
476,252,83217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,305,83425,1,8,0:3:0:0:
349,356,83634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,315,83842,6,0,L|273:247,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,206,84259,2,0,P|146:199|69:229,2,123.000004692078,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,206,85196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,206,85300,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,192,85509,12,2,88634,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Mei wrote:

Hihihi this is for m4m

[insane]
  1. 00:02:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since you missed an obvious sounds there 00:02:592 , I suggest you to try this no,there is no rhythm.
  2. 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - ummm....1/6 stream fits there....but I think change it to repeated silder will be better since no much people can do 1/6 streams really well when there's 1/4 before no,sorry
  3. 00:07:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you missed a drum in 00:08:113 ,....although there is also a tune in 00:08:217 ... I think change to this way will sounds better
    no,sorry
  4. 00:08:842 (1,2,3,4) - how about this no,sorry
  5. 00:09:675 (5,6,7) - something heard strange there... try this rhythmn no,sorry
  6. 00:12:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find this fit better. try it no,sorry
  7. 00:51:112 (4,5) - what happened....god! thanks!
  8. 00:56:550 (5) - move to x240 y300 blanket checked!
  9. 01:22:175 (1,2) - ctrl+g better flow for me no,keep anticlockwise
[hard]
  1. 00:33:009 (1,2,3) - how about this blanket checked!

    umm others are fine... but one thing is that you use to many 1/4 rhythm , like what you did in insane. If you reduce the useage of 1/4 I think the difficulty spread will be better, such as 00:10:404 (5,6) - 00:15:821 (5) - 00:21:238 (3) - 00:23:738 (5) - 00:27:488 (2) - they are all not really correspond to the music. Ummm this is just a suggestion anyway and the reason I put this is because some BAT really care these issues
    i want to keep.sorry :P
[normal]
  1. 00:22:592 (3,4,1) - how about this no,following vocal
  2. 00:42:800 (4) - replace this by a note on 00:43:009 no
  3. 00:51:550 (5) - how about change this to a 1/2 slider no
[easy]
  1. 00:11:342 (2) - replace this by a 1/2 slider or a note no
  2. 00:48:842 (1,2) - for better flow , try this no
  3. 01:03:842 (2) - kind weired.... use 1/1 slider and a note on 01:05:092 ? no
  4. 01:19:259 (2,3,4) - try this? no

all diff are neat. this song is also good. so star☆~
good luck
Thanks mod and star ;)
yurunneram


From Lion's Modding Queue :3

EASY

00:47:592 (2,3,4) - Try this arrangement. It seems neater with (1) and the previous (2)


NORMAL

00:23:634 (1) - I don't find this jump very decent. After all it's still a normal diff

00:38:009 (2) - Not very nice to hit for normal

00:42:800 (4,5) - Symmetry would be nicer


HARD

00:48:321 (4) - I find this overmap

I'm not very good at modding hards sry :P

That's all OwO)/ Not bad desu

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

yurunneram wrote:



From Lion's Modding Queue :3

EASY

00:47:592 (2,3,4) - Try this arrangement. It seems neater with (1) and the previous (2) no, because of overlaping, it looks like bad


NORMAL

00:23:634 (1) - I don't find this jump very decent. After all it's still a normal diff Distance 1.4x is not bad in normal. it's not huge jump.

00:38:009 (2) - Not very nice to hit for normal hmm..no

00:42:800 (4,5) - Symmetry would be nicer i don't want to make symmetry.. :P


HARD

00:48:321 (4) - I find this overmap ok,fixed

I'm not very good at modding hards sry :P

That's all OwO)/ Not bad desu

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
thanks mod!
10crystalmask01
Hey, testplay from my queue 8-)



Cool.


Circle size -1? There doesn't seem to be any conflict with spacing or overlapswhatsoever, so show mercy for the noobs :cry:


Uhh didja know that the spacing in Normal diff is way bigger then this diff? O~O

Anyways it's not bad either, it's just that how the objects are tightly placed together makes me uncomfortable.


I like it!
No pass...as usual :cry:

Oh, and it's because of this part:
00:50:925 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing here Nope it's the flow. The flow here is really awkward, because you're either tricked to thinking that 00:51:029 (4) - is actually 3, or that it's 1/2 beat away from 00:50:925 (3) - I couldn't figure out the rhythm here eat all. Couldn't you just go for something more simple like this?

Good luck.
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