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Sayonara Ponytail - Shinsekai Koukyougaku [Osu|Taiko]

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Ringating
from my bg modding queue:

Well, you have since found a new bg from the one you asked me to mod (which was probably a good idea, the bg you had at the time wasn't nearly as good as the one you now have), but i still went ahead and changed the old one.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Cosmolade wrote:

Random Mod o3o)/

[General]

  1. So cute song! :)
  2. Add Mankanshoku Mako to the tags?
[Easy]

Good.

  1. 01:23:217 (1,2,3) - How about this?
[Normal]

Nice.
CS -1

  1. 00:37:175 (1) - End the slider in > 00:37:592
  2. 01:23:009 (1) - Move to > 01:23:217 - and end the slider in white tick.
  3. 01:24:259 (2) - Move to > 01:24:675 - end the slider in white tick, and add a circle in > 01:24:259
[Insane]
Cool (っ´▽`)っ

  1. 00:20:509 (1) - Very straight, maybe curving slightly the shape of the slider?
  2. 00:33:425 (1) - How about this?
  3. 00:49:467 (2) - Move to > 00:49:675 -end the slider in the white tick, and add a note in > 00:49:467
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that's all ( ouo)/
Good luck with the map! ٩( ᐛ )و
sorry,i don't want to change my rhythm. added mankanshoku mako!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Ringating wrote:

from my bg modding queue:

Well, you have since found a new bg from the one you asked me to mod (which was probably a good idea, the bg you had at the time wasn't nearly as good as the one you now have), but i still went ahead and changed the old one.
thanks and sorry ┗( ̄▽ ̄ㆀ)┓=33
Mei
Hihihi this is for m4m

[insane]
  1. 00:02:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since you missed an obvious sounds there 00:02:592 , I suggest you to try this
  2. 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - ummm....1/6 stream fits there....but I think change it to repeated silder will be better since no much people can do 1/6 streams really well when there's 1/4 before
  3. 00:07:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you missed a drum in 00:08:113 ,....although there is also a tune in 00:08:217 ... I think change to this way will sounds better
  4. 00:08:842 (1,2,3,4) - how about this
  5. 00:09:675 (5,6,7) - something heard strange there... try this rhythmn
  6. 00:12:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find this fit better. try it
  7. 00:51:112 (4,5) - what happened....
  8. 00:56:550 (5) - move to x240 y300
  9. 01:22:175 (1,2) - ctrl+g better flow for me


[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:16:967 (3) - according to you donot put a note in 00:16:134 , I think you followed vocal. so maybe remove this note cuz it is kind overmapped
  2. 00:44:467 (4) - move to x44 y96?
  3. 00:51:112 (4,5) - same problem with insane... what happened
  4. 01:11:342 (3,4,5) - maybe kind too hard for a hard diff?


[hard]
  1. 00:33:009 (1,2,3) - how about this

    umm others are fine... but one thing is that you use to many 1/4 rhythm , like what you did in insane. If you reduce the useage of 1/4 I think the difficulty spread will be better, such as 00:10:404 (5,6) - 00:15:821 (5) - 00:21:238 (3) - 00:23:738 (5) - 00:27:488 (2) - they are all not really correspond to the music. Ummm this is just a suggestion anyway and the reason I put this is because some BAT really care these issues


[normal]
  1. 00:22:592 (3,4,1) - how about this
  2. 00:42:800 (4) - replace this by a note on 00:43:009
  3. 00:51:550 (5) - how about change this to a 1/2 slider


[easy]
  1. 00:11:342 (2) - replace this by a 1/2 slider or a note
  2. 00:48:842 (1,2) - for better flow , try this
  3. 01:03:842 (2) - kind weired.... use 1/1 slider and a note on 01:05:092 ?
  4. 01:19:259 (2,3,4) - try this?

all diff are neat. this song is also good. so star☆~
good luck
lolia

Neta wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:23:217 (1) - NC? 여긴 뉴콤이 없어도 문제되진 않을것같아요

Cancel wrote:

[Karia's Hard]

  1. 00:10:925 (2) - Copy and paste this slider 00:10:509 (1) - in order to make it look better, and then Ctrl+J and Ctrl+G it. I want to keep current placement, sorry
  2. 00:20:509 (1,2) - Ugly overlap. Maybe clean it up a little? I like this overlap, sorry
  3. 00:40:925 (2) - Make this slider a good blanket with the slider end of 00:41:342 (3) - . Well, current one is better to me, sorry
  4. 00:45:300 (1) - Make it a better blanket by bending the last two points a little. fixed
  5. 00:48:842 (1) - ^ np IMO, sorry
  6. 00:53:425 (1) - Maybe move the spinner to 00:53:529 - and place a beat at 00:53:425 - ? The spinner just doesn't feel right where it currently is. I prefer current time,,sorry
Nice diff, but needs work on the sliders and blankets.

Cosmolade wrote:

[Karia's Hard]

Nice! :)

  1. 01:23:217 (3) - Move further away? (only a suggestion, the diff is so beatiful, btw) Sorry, I want the current placement.

Mei wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:16:967 (3) - according to you donot put a note in 00:16:134 , I think you followed vocal. so maybe remove this note cuz it is kind overmapped Well, I don't understand why this is overmapping..
  2. 00:44:467 (4) - move to x44 y96? Sorry, I like current jump
  3. 00:51:112 (4,5) - same problem with insane... what happened fixed
  4. 01:11:342 (3,4,5) - maybe kind too hard for a hard diff? Not so hard IMO. Cuz bpm is low..
Thanks for modding~

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TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Ponytail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill la Kill
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148,120,58634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,24,58842,6,0,P|328:28|368:120,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,59467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,248,59675,2,0,L|329:356,2,82,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,60300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,220,60509,6,0,L|496:216,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,136,60925,2,0,L|304:144,1,164,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,61550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,61759,2,0,L|64:216,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,62175,6,0,L|324:184,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,304,62592,2,0,L|206:297,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,63009,2,0,P|140:148|148:108,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,137,63425,2,0,P|266:181|258:221,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,63842,6,0,L|380:100,2,164,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,340,64884,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,65092,2,0,P|116:288|68:308,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,368,65509,6,0,P|240:311|220:230,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,66134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,234,66342,2,0,L|320:228,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,148,66759,2,0,L|214:153,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,120,67175,6,0,B|96:88|36:100|36:100|-4:144,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,216,67800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,292,68009,2,0,B|36:332|36:332|96:344|140:312,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,276,68634,2,0,L|272:280,1,41,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,258,68842,6,0,L|196:164,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,84,69259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,64,69467,2,0,P|440:68|479:86,2,82,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,68,70092,2,0,L|180:72,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,92,70509,6,0,L|28:88,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,70925,2,0,L|12:216,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,166,71342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,168,71446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,171,71550,2,0,L|271:165,1,41,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,166,71759,2,0,L|324:171,3,41,10|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,171,72175,6,0,L|426:166,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,248,72592,2,0,L|333:252,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,281,73009,2,0,L|90:273,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,205,73634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,205,73842,6,0,P|170:279|105:357,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,343,74467,2,0,P|16:269|81:191,1,164,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,183,75092,2,0,L|228:186,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,75509,6,0,P|366:135|379:79,2,82,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,185,76134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,76342,2,0,L|435:175,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,294,76759,2,0,L|311:288,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,264,77175,6,0,B|141:252|141:252|90:291|15:265,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,152,77800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,33,78009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,152,78217,2,0,L|234:196,1,164
303,227,78842,6,0,P|345:232|400:218,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,154,79259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,227,79467,2,0,L|307:319,2,82,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,154,80092,2,0,L|335:53,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,16,80509,5,2,0:0:0:0:
193,8,80717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,35,80925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,109,81134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,189,81342,2,0,L|87:242,2,41,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,138,81759,2,0,P|197:133|246:144,1,82,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,171,82175,6,4,L|385:165,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,174,82592,2,0,P|469:200|482:233,1,61.5000023460389
476,252,83217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,305,83425,1,8,0:3:0:0:
349,356,83634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,315,83842,6,0,L|273:247,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,206,84259,2,0,P|146:199|69:229,2,123.000004692078,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,206,85196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,206,85300,1,8,0:3:0:0:
256,192,85509,12,2,88634,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Mei wrote:

Hihihi this is for m4m

[insane]
  1. 00:02:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since you missed an obvious sounds there 00:02:592 , I suggest you to try this no,there is no rhythm.
  2. 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - ummm....1/6 stream fits there....but I think change it to repeated silder will be better since no much people can do 1/6 streams really well when there's 1/4 before no,sorry
  3. 00:07:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you missed a drum in 00:08:113 ,....although there is also a tune in 00:08:217 ... I think change to this way will sounds better
    no,sorry

  4. 00:08:842 (1,2,3,4) - how about this no,sorry
  5. 00:09:675 (5,6,7) - something heard strange there... try this rhythmn no,sorry
  6. 00:12:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - i find this fit better. try it no,sorry
  7. 00:51:112 (4,5) - what happened....god! thanks!
  8. 00:56:550 (5) - move to x240 y300 blanket checked!
  9. 01:22:175 (1,2) - ctrl+g better flow for me no,keep anticlockwise


[hard]
  1. 00:33:009 (1,2,3) - how about this blanket checked!

    umm others are fine... but one thing is that you use to many 1/4 rhythm , like what you did in insane. If you reduce the useage of 1/4 I think the difficulty spread will be better, such as 00:10:404 (5,6) - 00:15:821 (5) - 00:21:238 (3) - 00:23:738 (5) - 00:27:488 (2) - they are all not really correspond to the music. Ummm this is just a suggestion anyway and the reason I put this is because some BAT really care these issues
    i want to keep.sorry :P


[normal]
  1. 00:22:592 (3,4,1) - how about this no,following vocal
  2. 00:42:800 (4) - replace this by a note on 00:43:009 no
  3. 00:51:550 (5) - how about change this to a 1/2 slider no


[easy]
  1. 00:11:342 (2) - replace this by a 1/2 slider or a note no
  2. 00:48:842 (1,2) - for better flow , try this no
  3. 01:03:842 (2) - kind weired.... use 1/1 slider and a note on 01:05:092 ? no
  4. 01:19:259 (2,3,4) - try this? no

all diff are neat. this song is also good. so star☆~
good luck
Thanks mod and star ;)
yurunneram


From Lion's Modding Queue :3

EASY

00:47:592 (2,3,4) - Try this arrangement. It seems neater with (1) and the previous (2)


NORMAL

00:23:634 (1) - I don't find this jump very decent. After all it's still a normal diff

00:38:009 (2) - Not very nice to hit for normal

00:42:800 (4,5) - Symmetry would be nicer


HARD

00:48:321 (4) - I find this overmap

I'm not very good at modding hards sry :P

That's all OwO)/ Not bad desu

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

yurunneram wrote:



From Lion's Modding Queue :3

EASY

00:47:592 (2,3,4) - Try this arrangement. It seems neater with (1) and the previous (2) no, because of overlaping, it looks like bad


NORMAL

00:23:634 (1) - I don't find this jump very decent. After all it's still a normal diff Distance 1.4x is not bad in normal. it's not huge jump.

00:38:009 (2) - Not very nice to hit for normal hmm..no

00:42:800 (4,5) - Symmetry would be nicer i don't want to make symmetry.. :P


HARD

00:48:321 (4) - I find this overmap ok,fixed

I'm not very good at modding hards sry :P

That's all OwO)/ Not bad desu

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
thanks mod!
10crystalmask01
Hey, testplay from my queue 8-)

Easy


Cool.

Normal


Circle size -1? There doesn't seem to be any conflict with spacing or overlapswhatsoever, so show mercy for the noobs :cry:

Hard


Uhh didja know that the spacing in Normal diff is way bigger then this diff? O~O

Anyways it's not bad either, it's just that how the objects are tightly placed together makes me uncomfortable.


Karia's Hard


I like it!

Insane
No pass...as usual :cry:

Oh, and it's because of this part:
00:50:925 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing here Nope it's the flow. The flow here is really awkward, because you're either tricked to thinking that 00:51:029 (4) - is actually 3, or that it's 1/2 beat away from 00:50:925 (3) - I couldn't figure out the rhythm here eat all. Couldn't you just go for something more simple like this?

Good luck.
Coro
From Lions' Modding Queue~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[TK's Muzu]
01:25:300 - add k, there's a drumbeat here

[TK's Oni]
00:06:863 (37) - maybe move to 00:06:967 ? I think mapping rhythmically here will play better than mapping strictly to the synthesizer...

that's all I can find orz, nice map~
good luck for rank~
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, testplay from my queue 8-)

Easy


Cool.

Normal


Circle size -1? There doesn't seem to be any conflict with spacing or overlapswhatsoever, so show mercy for the noobs :cry:

Hard


Uhh didja know that the spacing in Normal diff is way bigger then this diff? O~O

Anyways it's not bad either, it's just that how the objects are tightly placed together makes me uncomfortable.


Karia's Hard


I like it!

Insane
No pass...as usual :cry:

Oh, and it's because of this part:
00:50:925 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing here Nope it's the flow. The flow here is really awkward, because you're either tricked to thinking that 00:51:029 (4) - is actually 3, or that it's 1/2 beat away from 00:50:925 (3) - I couldn't figure out the rhythm here eat all. Couldn't you just go for something more simple like this?

Good luck.
Thanks you for playing! and i don't want to change that. :P
TKS

CoroQuetz wrote:

From Lions' Modding Queue~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[TK's Muzu]
01:25:300 - add k, there's a drumbeat here - i dont follow it.

[TK's Oni]
00:06:863 (37) - maybe move to 00:06:967 ? I think mapping rhythmically here will play better than mapping strictly to the synthesizer... - no. i want to respect this song.

that's all I can find orz, nice map~
good luck for rank~
thanks for mod!
Evening
Mod request from my Queue and Lion's Modding Queue i guess?

[TK's Oni]

00:04:050 - The mapped pattern here conflicts with note 2-18 | I'm not sure if this is intended or not, the previous pattern you used is mapping towards the synths while this pattern here is different
00:34:884 (180,181,182,189,190,191) - These 2 triplets do not loop in a pattern, again, I'm not stating this is wrong, I'm pointing it out so that I can confirm that this is intended

[TK's Muzu]

01:15:091 (106) - d > k | Ending the kat rhythm on 105 feels incomplete I suggest to add a kat here to finish the rhythm on a white line

No other problems I can find

Good luck o/
-Neipezi
hi owo

[General]
Source of "Kill la Kill" and "キルラキル" change.

[Easy]
01:06:759 - 서클 추가?
01:10:092 (2,3,4) - 이렇게 변경..?
01:24:259 - 클랩 삭제

[Normal]
00:37:175 (1,2) - 1/4...?
01:01:759 (4) - 슬라이드 뒤에 가립니다.

[Karia's Hard]
00:56:967 (5,1) - ctrl + g 보컬패턴으로 바꿔주세요.
00:57:800 (2,3) - ^
01:11:342 (3,4,5) - 패턴 수정바랍니다..

[Insane]
00:00:509 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2) - 드럼힛트 말고 소프트 휘슬 사용하는게 좋을꺼 같네요. 드럼히트소리구간도 아닌데 사용하신건가요?
00:06:759 (4) - 자세히 들어보니 1/2슬라이드네요.
00:09:050 (2,3,4) - 패턴 변경해보는 것이 어떨까요?
00:25:509 (1) - ctrl + g?
01:02:800 (2) - x256 y224쪽으로 이동했으면 좋겠네요. 위에 있으면 뭔가 이상한..

맵은 잘 만들으셨는데, 이동패턴이 뭔가 이상한 느낌이네요..
그리고 하드 하나는 빼도 될꺼 같아요

Edit : 스타 드릴려고 했는데 쿠도스가 없네요 orz (잡을게 없네요 굇)
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

-Neipezi wrote:

hi owo

[General]
Source of "Kill la Kill" and "キルラキル" change.

[Easy]
01:06:759 - 서클 추가? 보컬에 맞춰서 서클 안 넣었습니다
01:10:092 (2,3,4) - 이렇게 변경..? 체크!
01:24:259 - 클랩 삭제 클랩이 들어가야될것같아요.

[Normal]
00:37:175 (1,2) - 1/4...? 고치라고 많이 듣긴했지만...패스
01:01:759 (4) - 슬라이드 뒤에 가립니다. 고려사항으로 둘께요 패스

[Insane]
00:00:509 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2) - 드럼힛트 말고 소프트 휘슬 사용하는게 좋을꺼 같네요. 드럼히트소리구간도 아닌데 사용하신건가요? 드럼 노멀에 짧은 히트음을 썻어요.
00:06:759 (4) - 자세히 들어보니 1/2슬라이드네요. 패스
00:09:050 (2,3,4) - 패턴 변경해보는 것이 어떨까요?
00:25:509 (1) - ctrl + g? 좋네요 수정
01:02:800 (2) - x256 y224쪽으로 이동했으면 좋겠네요. 위에 있으면 뭔가 이상한..수정

맵은 잘 만들으셨는데, 이동패턴이 뭔가 이상한 느낌이네요..
그리고 하드 하나는 빼도 될꺼 같아요

Edit : 스타 드릴려고 했는데 쿠도스가 없네요 orz (잡을게 없네요 굇)
모딩 감사합니다 :D
lolia

-Neipezi wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
00:56:967 (5,1) - ctrl + g 보컬패턴으로 바꿔주세요. 보컬만 따라가는것보다는 지금이 전 더 맘에드네요..일부러 안따라간거라..
00:57:800 (2,3) - ^ 전 보통 보컬보단 비트를 중십으로 리듬을 짜서.. 이것도 일부러 이렇게 한거라 일단 패스할게요
01:11:342 (3,4,5) - 패턴 수정바랍니다.. 음..비피엠이 꽤 낮아서 그렇게 어렵진 않다고 생각하네요..
Thanks for modding!
Sonnyc
Easy:

00:05:925 (2) - 시작에 휘슬?
01:24:675 (2) - (1)이랑 완벽한 평행이 아닌 느낌입니다.

Normal:

00:20:509 (1) - 머리에 휘슬이 빠졌습니다. 리버스에도 없는거 같네요.
00:26:654 (3) - 노말에 1/4을 살리는게 좋을지는 모르겠습니다. 가사 따라 일반적으로 00:26:759에만 노트 넣는게 안전할것 같긴 합니다.
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이거는 꼭 고쳐주세요. 노말에서 1/4 연타는 무리입니다.
00:50:925 (4) - 뉴콤? 좀 콤보가 길어지는 기분이..

Hard:

00:15:717 (4,5,1) - 게임상 00:15:092 (3)와 겹치는데 조절 바랍니다.
00:27:488 (2) - 모양 별로 같은데 그냥 무난하게 (108,278)에 놓는게 어때요?
00:55:509 (1) - 개인적으로 키아이 시작이라는 이유로 뉴콤한거는 연타에 묻혀서 효과가 별로인것 같습니다.
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - 하드 치고 어려운 패턴이 아닌가 생각해봅니다.

Insane:

00:25:092 (8) - 휘슬 잘 안어울린거 같은데 빼거나 머리로 옮겨주세요?
00:49:467 (2) - 노트-1/2슬라이더로 끊는게 박자상 나을거 같아요. 이거 슬라이더 모양 조금 아쉽기도 하고..
01:24:884 (2) - 클랩 대신 피니시가 어울릴듯요.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:05:925 (2) - 시작에 휘슬? checked!
01:24:675 (2) - (1)이랑 완벽한 평행이 아닌 느낌입니다. 잉...평행으로 만든거같은데...체크했어요

Normal:

00:20:509 (1) - 머리에 휘슬이 빠졌습니다. 리버스에도 없는거 같네요. 머리 휘슬 추가. 리버스는 의도적인거구요.
00:26:654 (3) - 노말에 1/4을 살리는게 좋을지는 모르겠습니다. 가사 따라 일반적으로 00:26:759에만 노트 넣는게 안전할것 같긴 합니다. 일단은 고려해볼께요
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이거는 꼭 고쳐주세요. 노말에서 1/4 연타는 무리입니다. 연타는 아니잖아요 Z키 누르고있다가 X키만 딱! 누르면 되는 건데..어렵지 않아보여요...^^;
00:50:925 (4) - 뉴콤? 좀 콤보가 길어지는 기분이..ok!

Hard:

00:15:717 (4,5,1) - 게임상 00:15:092 (3)와 겹치는데 조절 바랍니다. 체크!
00:27:488 (2) - 모양 별로 같은데 그냥 무난하게 (108,278)에 놓는게 어때요? 체크!
00:55:509 (1) - 개인적으로 키아이 시작이라는 이유로 뉴콤한거는 연타에 묻혀서 효과가 별로인것 같습니다. 체크!
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - 하드 치고 어려운 패턴이 아닌가 생각해봅니다. 일단은 고려사항으로 둘께요

Insane:

00:25:092 (8) - 휘슬 잘 안어울린거 같은데 빼거나 머리로 옮겨주세요? 체크!
00:49:467 (2) - 노트-1/2슬라이더로 끊는게 박자상 나을거 같아요. 이거 슬라이더 모양 조금 아쉽기도 하고..이 부분도 많이 들었어요 수정..ㅠ
01:24:884 (2) - 클랩 대신 피니시가 어울릴듯요.체크!
감사합니다!

@.@
10nya
hi! from my ugokunai super lazy queue :D

[General]
  1. offset 514 is better better.. current one is a bit early ><
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:175 (1)- : remove whistle? it'll fit to music better
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:800 (4)- : extend this slider until 00:23:425 and rearrange? It was bad to let the white tick empty.. orz
  2. 00:26:654 (3)- : a bit hard to catch for beginner >< (specially when DT and the circle was small so HR it will be a bit hard for beginner) so perhaps rearrange like this?
  3. 00:37:175 (1,2)- : no no this is too hard for normal player ;_; please change them
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:404 (5)- : a bit overmapped (I hear nothing at here) remove them please
  2. 00:53:425 (1)- : why dont you add circle here and start spinner at next blue tick? more fit imo
  3. 01:23:425 (4)- : change drum-clap to drum-finish? more fit
[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:53:425 (1)- : same suggestion as TaMuL's Hard
  2. 01:23:425 (4)- : ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:967 (5)- : to follow previous whistle pattern, add whistle here?
  2. 00:56:967 (1)- : it will better to ctrl+g this one, it make the jump flow more good imo~ also add slidertick4 here?
  3. 01:05:509 (1)- : whistle more fit imo
good luck!
lolia

10nya wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 00:53:425 (1)- : same suggestion as TaMuL's Hard I prefer current time, sorry
  2. 01:23:425 (4)- : ^ sure
Thanks for modding~

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TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Ponytail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill la Kill
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280,84,69259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,64,69467,2,0,P|440:68|479:86,2,82,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,68,70092,2,0,L|180:72,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,92,70509,6,0,L|28:88,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,70925,2,0,L|12:216,2,41,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,166,71342,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,168,71446,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,171,71550,2,0,L|271:165,1,41,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,166,71759,2,0,L|324:171,3,41,10|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,171,72175,6,0,L|426:166,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,248,72592,2,0,L|333:252,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,281,73009,2,0,L|90:273,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,205,73634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,205,73842,6,0,P|170:279|105:357,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,343,74467,2,0,P|16:269|81:191,1,164,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,183,75092,2,0,L|228:186,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,75509,6,0,P|366:135|379:79,2,82,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,185,76134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,76342,2,0,L|435:175,1,82,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,294,76759,2,0,L|311:288,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,264,77175,6,0,B|141:252|141:252|90:291|15:265,1,164,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,152,77800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
37,33,78009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
70,152,78217,2,0,L|234:196,1,164
303,227,78842,6,0,P|345:232|400:218,1,82,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,154,79259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
303,227,79467,2,0,L|307:319,2,82,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,154,80092,2,0,L|335:53,1,82,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,16,80509,5,2,0:0:0:0:
193,8,80717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,35,80925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,109,81134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,189,81342,2,0,L|87:242,2,41,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,138,81759,2,0,P|197:133|246:144,1,82,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,171,82175,6,4,L|385:165,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,174,82592,2,0,P|469:200|482:233,1,61.5000023460389
476,252,83217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,305,83425,1,8,0:3:0:0:
349,356,83634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,315,83842,6,0,L|273:247,1,61.5000023460389,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,206,84259,2,0,P|146:199|69:229,2,123.000004692078,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,206,85196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,206,85300,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,192,85509,12,2,88634,0:0:0:0:
Sonnyc
00:37:175 (1,2) - 이거는 꼭 고쳐주세요. 노말에서 1/4 연타는 무리입니다. 연타는 아니잖아요 Z키 누르고있다가 X키만 딱! 누르면 되는 건데..어렵지 않아보여요...^^;
(보통 이런걸 연타라고 하지 않나요?) runs
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

10nya wrote:

hi! from my ugokunai super lazy queue :D

[General]
  1. offset 514 is better better.. current one is a bit early ><
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:175 (1)- : remove whistle? it'll fit to music better no
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:800 (4)- : extend this slider until 00:23:425 and rearrange? It was bad to let the white tick empty.. orz no, sorry
  2. 00:26:654 (3)- : a bit hard to catch for beginner >< (specially when DT and the circle was small so HR it will be a bit hard for beginner) so perhaps rearrange like this? not bad. but no
  3. 00:37:175 (1,2)- : no no this is too hard for normal player ;_; please change them i heard it like you. i think about it.
[Hard]
  1. 00:30:404 (5)- : a bit overmapped (I hear nothing at here) remove them please i don't think so. no
  2. 00:53:425 (1)- : why dont you add circle here and start spinner at next blue tick? more fit imo hmm..no
  3. 01:23:425 (4)- : change drum-clap to drum-finish? more fit clap than finish is fit :P
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:967 (5)- : to follow previous whistle pattern, add whistle here? no
  2. 00:56:967 (1)- : it will better to ctrl+g this one, it make the jump flow more good imo~ also add slidertick4 here? no ctrlG/added slidertick
  3. 01:05:509 (1)- : whistle more fit imo ok,fixed!
good luck!
Thanks mod :D
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Sonnyc wrote:

00:37:175 (1,2) - 이거는 꼭 고쳐주세요. 노말에서 1/4 연타는 무리입니다. 연타는 아니잖아요 Z키 누르고있다가 X키만 딱! 누르면 되는 건데..어렵지 않아보여요...^^;
(보통 이런걸 연타라고 하지 않나요?) runs
역시 그냥 겹쳐져있는 노트들 처리했습니다. I fixed stacking notes.
TKS

lZenxl wrote:

Mod request from my Queue and Lion's Modding Queue i guess?

[TK's Oni]

00:04:050 - The mapped pattern here conflicts with note 2-18 | I'm not sure if this is intended or not, the previous pattern you used is mapping towards the synths while this pattern here is different - of course, these are intentional. i want to follow the hi-hat sound a bit.
00:34:884 (180,181,182,189,190,191) - These 2 triplets do not loop in a pattern, again, I'm not stating this is wrong, I'm pointing it out so that I can confirm that this is intended - same as above. these are intentional.

[TK's Muzu]

01:15:091 (106) - d > k | Ending the kat rhythm on 105 feels incomplete I suggest to add a kat here to finish the rhythm on a white line - indeed. i changed to kkddk.

No other problems I can find

Good luck o/
thanks for mod!
i was able to improve some points thanks to your mod.

:) https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ougaku.rar
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated! Thanks ;)
Nofool
Hi' hoping for m4m n_n
I tried my best on both taiko diffs (I'm a bit unexperienced ,_,)
So I hope it'll be a bit usefull :c
both diffs were pretty good already, nothing really important to say, it's all suggestions

[Muzukashii]
00:12:800 (46) remove this d and then add a k at 00:12:904 (47) ? ‘cause I don’t really hear something that could be d at 00:12:800 while there’s a low sound at 00:12:904 - ox xxo might be too hard for a muzu tho ,_,
00:13:842 (51) K instead of D ? sounds like at 00:12:592 (45)
00:33:842 (120) ^ and then change 00:33:634 (119) to d ? ^ same reasons
00:52:384 add k ?
01:07:800 (74) move this d to 01:07:384 ?

[Oni]
00:09:154 (49) k instead of d ?
00:13:842 (76) K instead of D ? (as in the muzu)
00:19:154 add k ? to do like you did at 00:17:488 (93)
00:30:821 add d ? as you did at 00:27:488 (141) - 00:29:154 (150) - 00:34:154 (176) to stay constant
00:33:842 (175) as in the muzu
00:38:321 (196) remove ? or maybe add something at 00:37:800 ?
Remove 00:55:821 (273) and 00:57:488 (284) ? a bit more nested and comfortable to play
01:01:134 (305) k instead of d ?
01:12:488 (363) remove ? or maybe do something like at the 00:55:821 part if you accepted my previous suggestion about it
TKS

Nofool wrote:

Hi' hoping for m4m n_n
I tried my best on both taiko diffs (I'm a bit unexperienced ,_,)
So I hope it'll be a bit usefull :c
both diffs were pretty good already, nothing really important to say, it's all suggestions

[Muzukashii]
00:12:800 (46) remove this d and then add a k at 00:12:904 (47) ? ‘cause I don’t really hear something that could be d at 00:12:800 while there’s a low sound at 00:12:904 - ox xxo might be too hard for a muzu tho ,_, - that pattern is sounds weird to me.
00:13:842 (51) K instead of D ? sounds like at 00:12:592 (45) - the D fits better than K imo
00:33:842 (120) ^ and then change 00:33:634 (119) to d ? ^ same reasons - following the vocal.
00:52:384 add k ? - same reason as above.
01:07:800 (74) move this d to 01:07:384 ? - that pattern is not fit a flow. i shoukd make a break here 01:07:384 -

[Oni]
00:09:154 (49) k instead of d ? - what for? sorry but im not sure.
00:13:842 (76) K instead of D ? (as in the muzu) - nope.
00:19:154 add k ? to do like you did at 00:17:488 (93) - following the tink sound a bit on 00:17:488
00:30:821 add d ? as you did at 00:27:488 (141) - 00:29:154 (150) - 00:34:154 (176) to stay constant - that pattern is not fit a flow. instead, i made a long pattern at 00:30:925 ~ 00:33:842 already
00:33:842 (175) as in the muzu - nope.
00:38:321 (196) remove ? or maybe add something at 00:37:800 ? - nope. its working well already.
Remove 00:55:821 (273) and 00:57:488 (284) ? a bit more nested and comfortable to play - got it.
01:01:134 (305) k instead of d ? - i like the current pattern.
01:12:488 (363) remove ? or maybe do something like at the 00:55:821 part if you accepted my previous suggestion about it - no changed for fun
thanks for mod!!

sorry for late ._. https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... Oni%5D.rar
Dark Fang
퇴물님 이거 해드려야함?
BeatofIke
Modding this map soon. Stay tuned!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

BeatofIke wrote:

Modding this map soon. Stay tuned!
lol..ok! :oops:
BeatofIke
Okay, just a few things to mention before I circle!
Sorry for the delay btw!


[General]
  1. Please revive and re-upload your map. Your map is currently on Graveyard!
  2. On your Oni (Taiko) difficulty, you have an unsnapped slider at 00:45:509 (228).
  3. In addition, I personally prefer 0 stack leniency for your Hard difficulty, but.....yeah not rankable!
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:488 (3,4) - You can blanket this slider slightly better!
  2. 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if it's just me, but this 1/6 stream always gets me every time I test-played this part! >.<
  3. 00:56:967 (1) - Reverse select this slider would improve the circular flow here!
TKS

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]
  1. On your Oni (Taiko) difficulty, you have an unsnapped slider at 00:45:509 (228).
its snapped on 1/16.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

BeatofIke wrote:

Okay, just a few things to mention before I circle!
Sorry for the delay btw!


[General]
  1. Please revive and re-upload your map. Your map is currently on Graveyard! ok
  2. On your Oni (Taiko) difficulty, you have an unsnapped slider at 00:45:509 (228). it's snapped on 1/16. that may be intentional.
  3. In addition, I personally prefer 0 stack leniency for your Hard difficulty, but.....yeah not rankable![b] ok, fixed stack leniency to 2.(its minimum is 2!)
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:488 (3,4) - You can blanket this slider slightly better! fixed!
  2. 00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - I don't know if it's just me, but this 1/6 stream always gets me every time I test-played this part! >.< i got comment about that. but i want to use 1/6! >x<
  3. 00:56:967 (1) - Reverse select this slider would improve the circular flow here!fixed!
Thank you! ;)
BeatofIke
Circled!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

BeatofIke wrote:

Circled!
OnosakiHito
Taiko check.

Muzukashii

SPOILER
Some notes doesn't seem to be snapped right. Move some of them and you will see it. AIMod doesn't show them at all.

00:07:488 (24,25) - I would suggest something easier, but I guess on BPM 144 it can be accepted.
00:13:217 (48,49,50) - Unsure about the ddk if you ask me. Yeah, doesn't sound bad, but I'm still the oppinion that we should avoid ddk in most cases. I saw in your maps now several times these kind of patterns and I'm kinda worried aboutit. Recommending a kkk or something easier.
00:38:634 (135,136,137) - Same here. This one is even harder since you have to start with kat. The 1/2 kat makes it a bit harder as well. Please try something easier. Maybe a ddd ?
00:37:592 (131,132,133) - How about deleting (131) and changing (132) to kat? I think you mapped beat-vocal based, so this might fit well. Maybe you like it (would also make it more alternate instead of having 3 times k d kdd).
00:51:967 (15,16,17) - Oh, look. Here you used kkk, not kkd.
01:08:634 (77,78,79) - Same as before.

Muzu is so far okay pattern technically, but I find it still pretty hard if you ask me. You have barley any breaks, patterns go through the map nearly without a pause. Also, when considering this map with your other Muzukashii's, I see no difference in difficulty. High BPM maps have kinda the same amount, while I'm rather expecting in a slow BPM song to have less notes. Please keep that in mind next time. All at one, good map anyway.

Oni

SPOILER
Some notes doesn't seem to be snapped right. Move some of them and you will see it. AIMod doesn't show them at all.

01:02:175 (307) - This finisher stands pretty much alone. Suggesting to add at following points a finishers as well:
01:03:842 (312) -
And maybe at
01:05:509 (320) -
01:06:342 (323) -
and
01:07:175 (327) - if you are able to delete somehow the notes...?
01:20:509 (403) - Another finisher would be good if you ask me. Before and after this note there is one as well. Would fit good to the pattern. Without it has less effect.
01:16:238 (383) - Kat seems to be good here to emphasize the high pitch at 01:16:133 (382) - and the "saa". Plays also nice and acts as abekobe pattern of upcoming ddk.

Nothing to say here anymore. Good job.
Recall me afterwards. :)
TKS

OnosakiHito wrote:

Taiko check.

Muzukashii

SPOILER
Some notes doesn't seem to be snapped right. Move some of them and you will see it. AIMod doesn't show them at all.

00:07:488 (24,25) - I would suggest something easier, but I guess on BPM 144 it can be accepted. - i want to keep this one!
00:13:217 (48,49,50) - Unsure about the ddk if you ask me. Yeah, doesn't sound bad, but I'm still the oppinion that we should avoid ddk in most cases. I saw in your maps now several times these kind of patterns and I'm kinda worried aboutit. Recommending a kkk or something easier. - well generally agree. but there is enough rest point after the ddk. just like you said, this pattern would work on bpm144.
00:38:634 (135,136,137) - Same here. This one is even harder since you have to start with kat. The 1/2 kat makes it a bit harder as well. Please try something easier. Maybe a ddd ? - basically the same as above. but ddd sounds/looks better to me. so changed >.>
00:37:592 (131,132,133) - How about deleting (131) and changing (132) to kat? I think you mapped beat-vocal based, so this might fit well. Maybe you like it (would also make it more alternate instead of having 3 times k d kdd). - mapped on the drum/vocal sound. so 00:37:592 (131) - has the snaredrum sound. i want to follow that.
00:51:967 (15,16,17) - Oh, look. Here you used kkk, not kkd.
01:08:634 (77,78,79) - Same as before. - i will keep this one. the same reason as before. also, should be fine on KIAI.

Muzu is so far okay pattern technically, but I find it still pretty hard if you ask me. You have barley any breaks, patterns go through the map nearly without a pause. Also, when considering this map with your other Muzukashii's, I see no difference in difficulty. High BPM maps have kinda the same amount, while I'm rather expecting in a slow BPM song to have less notes. Please keep that in mind next time. All at one, good map anyway. - BPM of the map is below average maybe. moreover, the rhythm is really simple. well as i said, these patterns would work on the song imo.

Oni

SPOILER
Some notes doesn't seem to be snapped right. Move some of them and you will see it. AIMod doesn't show them at all.

01:02:175 (307) - This finisher stands pretty much alone. Suggesting to add at following points a finishers as well:
01:03:842 (312) -
And maybe at
01:05:509 (320) -
01:06:342 (323) -
and
01:07:175 (327) - if you are able to delete somehow the notes...?
01:20:509 (403) - Another finisher would be good if you ask me. Before and after this note there is one as well. Would fit good to the pattern. Without it has less effect. - current finishers must be fine imo ;_; it fits really well the cymbal sound/flow of my style.
01:16:238 (383) - Kat seems to be good here to emphasize the high pitch at 01:16:133 (382) - and the "saa". Plays also nice and acts as abekobe pattern of upcoming ddk. - cool, applied!

Nothing to say here anymore. Good job.
Recall me afterwards. :)
also, resnapped all notes. thanks for checking! :)
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... ougaku.rar
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑Updated!

MMzz
Taking the initiative to bubble this because of Ono's absence. I confirmed that the map has been updated properly according to Ono's mod and TKS' updates.

But first.
Oni:
00:45:509 (228) - Unsnapped slider tail.

Fix that and I can bubble! :)


nvm that. Turns out to be a strange bug with sliders.
Here is a bubble.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

MMzz wrote:

Taking the initiative to bubble this because of Ono's absence. I confirmed that the map has been updated properly according to Ono's mod and TKS' updates.

But first.
Oni:
00:45:509 (228) - Unsnapped slider tail.

Fix that and I can bubble! :)


nvm that. Turns out to be a strange bug with sliders.
Here is a bubble.
Thank you! ;)
DakeDekaane
Dunno why I feel the old BG fit more the song, but well, I'm not going to complain about it.

[Insane]
00:18:842 (1) - A 1/2 slider would fit better here imo, as the sound is stronger there.

[Hard]
00:32:592 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit better here imo, as the sound is stronger there.
00:55:925 (4) - ^

Also wondering why you have stack leniency 2 in Hard but not in the other difficulties, I think I get why, but you still get some ugly overlaps because stacking.
00:05:092 (5,1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9hZXP/e94f2b5db7.png
00:11:342 (4,5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9i05v/86242b1d49.png
00:20:509 (1,2,3,1) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9i08f/3d05b6bcf8.png
01:12:175 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9i0jo/37fd4ae0b8.png
Either you space the triples a bit, like 00:15:717 (4,5,1), manual stack them like I put on the screenshots (everything is snapped to the grid), or increase the spacing a bit there to avoid the overlaps.

Not a big issue, just something that bothered me a bit, so feel free to do it or not. After that maybe put stack leniency back to 7 for consistency.

[Karia's Hard]
01:18:217 (4) - This slider feels a bit weird passing over a strong beat (01:18:425 - ) consider a circle + 1/2 slider here?

Poke me back.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

DakeDekaane wrote:

Dunno why I feel the old BG fit more the song, but well, I'm not going to complain about it. i changed another BG. it will be fine! ;)
[Insane]
00:18:842 (1) - A 1/2 slider would fit better here imo, as the sound is stronger there. no, i followed guitar sound.

[Hard]
00:32:592 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit better here imo, as the sound is stronger there. hmm? although the sound is stronger there, i want to use that rhythm. maybe i want to emphasize next circle note.
00:55:925 (4) - ^ same..

Also wondering why you have stack leniency 2 in Hard but not in the other difficulties, I think I get why, but you still get some ugly overlaps because stacking. that is beatofIke's opinion. maybe because of stacking. but i changed stack leniency 2 to 7 because i can't check difference... :? and i don't know how to resolve that ugly stacking on test.. :(
00:05:092 (5,1,2,3) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9hZXP/e94f2b5db7.png ok, fixed
00:11:342 (4,5,6,7) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9i05v/86242b1d49.png i changed circle to slider.
00:20:509 (1,2,3,1) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9i08f/3d05b6bcf8.png fixed
01:12:175 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion: http://puu.sh/9i0jo/37fd4ae0b8.png http://puu.sh/9i0jo/37fd4ae0b8.png
Either you space the triples a bit, like 00:15:717 (4,5,1), manual stack them like I put on the screenshots (everything is snapped to the grid), or increase the spacing a bit there to avoid the overlaps.

Not a big issue, just something that bothered me a bit, so feel free to do it or not. After that maybe put stack leniency back to 7 for consistency. alright, fixed

Poke me back.
lolia

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
01:18:217 (4) - This slider feels a bit weird passing over a strong beat (01:18:425 - ) consider a circle + 1/2 slider here? sure

Poke me back.
Thanks!

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: mankanshoku.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54675
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Shinsekai Koukyougaku
TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Ponytail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill la Kill
Tags:TV Size Karia TKSalt Ending ed キルラキル mankanshoku mako
BeatmapID:385249
BeatmapSetID:157246

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.64
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"video.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
509,416.666666666667,4,2,5,30,1,0
6342,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,30,0,0
7175,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
12592,-100,4,2,2,40,0,0
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Karia wrote:

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
01:18:217 (4) - This slider feels a bit weird passing over a strong beat (01:18:425 - ) consider a circle + 1/2 slider here? sure

Poke me back.
Thanks!

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Title:Shinsekai Koukyougaku
TitleUnicode:新世界交響楽
Artist:Sayonara Ponytail
ArtistUnicode:さよならポニーテール
Creator:TaMul
Version:Karia's Hard
Source:Kill la Kill
Tags:TV Size Karia TKSalt Ending ed キルラキル mankanshoku mako
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updated! :)
DakeDekaane
Okay, changed a bit the combo colors so they doesn't blend with the new BG.

This song is awesome, as well as the mapset.

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GugUCorn

DakeDekaane wrote:

Okay, changed a bit the combo colors so they doesn't blend with the new BG.

This song is awesome, as well as the mapset.

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TKS
omedetou!
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GugUCorn

TKS wrote:

omedetou!
arigatou!
HabiHolic
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Grats TaMul!
Mao
Gratz ;b
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