Hi, I like this song and your map so take a free mod
[General]
Nothing looks wrong.
[Insane]
00:03:842 (1,2) - This one doesn't play bad, but it somehow breaks your spacing consistency you used for previous patterns, maybe fix it?
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/6 isn't very intuitive, better keeping the 1/4.
00:26:134 (2,3) - Maybe use a rhythm like this instead, this 3/4 spacing could be a bit tricky.
00:43:425 (5,6,1) - The circle there kills a bit the flow given by the first slider, maybe make this a bit smooth?
01:00:092 (6,7,1) - ^
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - ^
01:23:634 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider here, the sound in 01:23:842 feels a bit weird being ignored.
[Karia's Hard]
00:18:842 (1) - I really don't get what are you following with this slider, try something like this?
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - This is a bit harsh imo, I agree with Leader, a 5-note stream here would fit better with the build-up in the music.
[Hard]
00:00:821 (2) - This drum sample doesn't fit too much here, remove it, you don't have it in Insane. This applies for similar spots when you used the drum sample.
00:25:509 (2,3,4) - Maybe use something like this, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky here.
00:27:175 (1,2,3) - Maybe align the triple, it'd look better.
00:28:842 (1) - Ctrl+G, improves the flow :3
00:38:425 (2,1) - Why don't you use a slider-circle-slider pattern, it'd fit better, the custom tick is a bit misleading imo.
00:46:550 (4,5,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth?
00:55:509 (1) - Remove NC?
00:55:925 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit more here imo.
01:06:342 (1) - Remove NC.
01:08:425 (3,4,1) - Maybe align the triple.
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth?
01:24:988 (2,3) - I'd suggest to use the 1/4 slider for the 4 notes, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky so a circle wouldn't be hit accurately.
[Normal]
The spot where you begin the diff feels a bit weird as it's in the middle of the intro, I'd suggest you to begin the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175.
00:35:509 (3) - I'd suggest to make this a 1/1 slider, it'd fit with vocals better, or using 2 circles in 1/1, that works too.
00:37:175 (1) - whoa, I' really suggest you to end this in the red tick, this would throw off many players, also this would fit better with vocals.
00:51:550 (5) - This slider feels a bit off, maybe try a rhythm like this, it's more intuitive imo, you could add a reverse to the last slider.
[Easy]
Same suggestion about beginning the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175.
00:53:425 (3,1) - I'd suggest you to delete this circle and beginning the spinner here. This spinner would end in 00:54:675. Then add a note in 00:55:509. This way would play better as the player would hit along with the beginning of the kiai, which feels good
01:23:425 (6) - It looks like you forgot a NC here, also you should try a rhythm like this, fits better with vocals.
[TK's Muzukashii]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is a bit confusing ;~; Maybe try something like this? This goes for the patterns after this too.
00:39:884 (142) - Remove this, the drums are only 2 hits in 1/4.
00:41:967 (150) - It's better to start the spinner along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the spinner here.
00:45:300 (9) - As above. Aditionally, you could move 00:44:884 (7) 1/2 beat forward to fit vocals more in this part.
[TK's Oni]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This doesn't follow the song nicely ;~; Try this. This goes for the next similart parts too.
00:17:800 (91) - Maybe put a don here, it plays better imo.
00:26:550 (132) - Maybe remove, it'd be better to strictly follow drums in this part, 2 hits in 1/4.
00:41:967 (211) - It's better to start the slider along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the slider here.
00:45:300 (224) - ^
Nice job TK-sama, but please fix at least the start and the spinners/sliders ;~;
That'd be all from my part good luck \o/
[General]
Nothing looks wrong.
[Insane]
00:03:842 (1,2) - This one doesn't play bad, but it somehow breaks your spacing consistency you used for previous patterns, maybe fix it?
00:06:550 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/6 isn't very intuitive, better keeping the 1/4.
00:26:134 (2,3) - Maybe use a rhythm like this instead, this 3/4 spacing could be a bit tricky.
00:43:425 (5,6,1) - The circle there kills a bit the flow given by the first slider, maybe make this a bit smooth?
01:00:092 (6,7,1) - ^
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - ^
01:23:634 (2) - I'd suggest to use a 1/2 slider here, the sound in 01:23:842 feels a bit weird being ignored.
[Karia's Hard]
00:18:842 (1) - I really don't get what are you following with this slider, try something like this?
01:11:342 (3,4,5,6) - This is a bit harsh imo, I agree with Leader, a 5-note stream here would fit better with the build-up in the music.
[Hard]
00:00:821 (2) - This drum sample doesn't fit too much here, remove it, you don't have it in Insane. This applies for similar spots when you used the drum sample.
00:25:509 (2,3,4) - Maybe use something like this, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky here.
00:27:175 (1,2,3) - Maybe align the triple, it'd look better.
00:28:842 (1) - Ctrl+G, improves the flow :3
00:38:425 (2,1) - Why don't you use a slider-circle-slider pattern, it'd fit better, the custom tick is a bit misleading imo.
00:46:550 (4,5,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth?
00:55:509 (1) - Remove NC?
00:55:925 (2) - A 1/2 slider would fit more here imo.
01:06:342 (1) - Remove NC.
01:08:425 (3,4,1) - Maybe align the triple.
01:16:759 (3,4,1) - Maybe do this a bit more smooth?
01:24:988 (2,3) - I'd suggest to use the 1/4 slider for the 4 notes, the 3/4 may be a bit tricky so a circle wouldn't be hit accurately.
[Normal]
The spot where you begin the diff feels a bit weird as it's in the middle of the intro, I'd suggest you to begin the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175.
00:35:509 (3) - I'd suggest to make this a 1/1 slider, it'd fit with vocals better, or using 2 circles in 1/1, that works too.
00:37:175 (1) - whoa, I' really suggest you to end this in the red tick, this would throw off many players, also this would fit better with vocals.
00:51:550 (5) - This slider feels a bit off, maybe try a rhythm like this, it's more intuitive imo, you could add a reverse to the last slider.
[Easy]
Same suggestion about beginning the map either in 00:00:509 or 00:07:175.
00:53:425 (3,1) - I'd suggest you to delete this circle and beginning the spinner here. This spinner would end in 00:54:675. Then add a note in 00:55:509. This way would play better as the player would hit along with the beginning of the kiai, which feels good
01:23:425 (6) - It looks like you forgot a NC here, also you should try a rhythm like this, fits better with vocals.
[TK's Muzukashii]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm is a bit confusing ;~; Maybe try something like this? This goes for the patterns after this too.
00:39:884 (142) - Remove this, the drums are only 2 hits in 1/4.
00:41:967 (150) - It's better to start the spinner along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the spinner here.
00:45:300 (9) - As above. Aditionally, you could move 00:44:884 (7) 1/2 beat forward to fit vocals more in this part.
[TK's Oni]
00:00:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This doesn't follow the song nicely ;~; Try this. This goes for the next similart parts too.
00:17:800 (91) - Maybe put a don here, it plays better imo.
00:26:550 (132) - Maybe remove, it'd be better to strictly follow drums in this part, 2 hits in 1/4.
00:41:967 (211) - It's better to start the slider along with the vocals, so remove this and begin the slider here.
00:45:300 (224) - ^
Nice job TK-sama, but please fix at least the start and the spinners/sliders ;~;
That'd be all from my part good luck \o/