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DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA - switch

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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, November 07, 2009 at 6:16:26 PM

Artist: DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA
Title: switch
Source: DDR Bemani konami
Tags: Shulin Xgor DDR Dance Dance Revolution DanceDanceRevolution Supernova2 DDR project
BPM: 152
Filesize: 4434kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.3 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Hard (4.85 stars, 258 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 392 notes)
  4. Normal (4.36 stars, 182 notes)
  5. Shulin's-Sane (4.96 stars, 252 notes)
Download: DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA - switch
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
finished hard

Thank you shulin for you diff and xgor for the skin

BAT READY
Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 62 times in total.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Offset (about) : 362
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
that sounds alot better
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA - switch (ouranhshc) [Shulin].osu
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Ok here is the mod of Insane I promised, I can't believe I'm going to suggest making this harder:

Insane

00:01:738 - Add a beat
00:02:03 - ^
00:02:533 ^
00:02:82 - ^ - I think this makes the intro even better.
00:04:90 - ^
00:06:28 (2,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe you need to reduce the space between these slightly.
00:10:82 (10,11,12) - ^ [This applies to all the triplets.]
00:22:07 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I love this :D
00:36:38 - Beat?
00:36:48 - Beat?
00:37:26 (13) - Right one.
00:40:03 - ^
00:49:11 - ^
00:57:00 - ^
00:57:302 ^
00:57:79 - ^
01:06:08 (7) - Left one square.
01:06:57 - Beat?
01:06:875 ^
01:10:52 - ^
01:12:79 - ^
01:14:37 - ^

This is nice, I forgot to add my star before so here it is now, oh and rename my difficulty "Shulin's Hard" I was too lazy to do it lol :D
Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
Nice map ^.^
But i you need an easier diff <3

Have a Star~
kratoskitten
kratoskitten
I really can't see anything wrong with the map. spacing is fine.. hit sounds are used perfectly..
The only thing i can think of is there isn't a preview point yet.
Only thing i can do is star. :)
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
I simply switch this box saying starred cuz of this map :D

it does need an SB tough ask larto/happy30 or ultimate they should be great for this kind of songs
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- You need an easier difficulty.

[Normal]

00:37:86 (8) - New combo.
01:31:94 (1) - Place kiai time on all the spinner.

[Shulin's Hard]

Seems insane, not hard.

00:21:87 (7,8) - Spacing.

[Insane]

00:48:51 (7) - New combo.
01:31:54 (1) - Place kiai time on all the spinner.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Normal
SPOILER

00:08:84 (x) : Add a beat here.
00:09:24 (x) : Add a beat here.

Excellent

Shulin's Hard
SPOILER

01:31:64 (1) : I suggest a slider instead of a spinner here.

Insane
SPOILER

Excellent
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
990 posts
Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Meh, it's fine.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Current SB. Go fk yourself.

SPOILER
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//Break Periods
2,22469,27188
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

Images:

THIS




Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
[Shulin's Hard]

Hard? come on, this is clearly insane (4.95 Star), it has some lovely jumps, on top of the jumps some are tricky and two nice death streams, please rename the diff.

For a insane this plays nicely.

But

For a hard? Way to hard. :/

[Insane]

I cant find anything wrong with the placements.

Just beyond insane. Its these types of maps that give me nightmares.

Here is my suggestion, rename Shulins diff to Insane, and yours to something appropriate, like... Beyond InSaNe

~

Star

Good Beatmap :) Will take me awhile to fc insane/hard :s

~PS
An Hardish hard would be nice, not a hellish hard :))
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
hito stop bubbling low stared map tho :p this one was fine but try to get the higher ups.

Bubble repair
and offset fix
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
nice map

star~ :) :)
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.6.00 Go~

Osz. File Scan

[Current] Size: 4.33 MB / 10.00 MB
Extra/Duplicated Objects: None
Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
SB (Story Board) Scan: N/A
Background: Yes
Source: Yes ([Shulin's-Sane] is missing the Source.)
Tags: Yes ([Shulin's-Sane] is missing the Tags.)


[Easy]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00 (Sounds good)
4. Offset: 63,322ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) (This can be removed since it is not being used.)


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No (At least add in 1 second of lead-in time.)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.00
[Current] Max Combo: 165
[Current] Max Score: 245,984
[Current] Star Rating: 2.27
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.3
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.3
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

-No Layout Errors Found-

Notes: The main concern I have on this difficulty is the fact that the song starts right away and could use some lead-in time.

[Normal]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No (At least add in 1 second of lead-in time.)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.20
[Current] Max Combo: 243
[Current] Max Score: 1,016,696
[Current] Star Rating: 4.34
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

00:08:65 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:09:05 (3,4) - ^
00:15:16 (1,2) - ^

Notes: Make sure to double check the spacing. Also, look into the audio lead-in issue as well.

[Shulin's-Sane]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: Yes (1.55 Seconds)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.80
[Current] Max Combo: 361
[Current] Max Score: 1,990,426
[Current] Star Rating: 4.96
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

00:22:47 (1) - This spinner sounds like its 1/4 too short.

Notes: Just a minor thing to look into. It sounded really odd after with the spinner ending too early.

[Insane]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No (At least add in 1 second of lead-in time.)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.00
[Current] Max Combo: 413
[Current] Max Score: 5,069,340
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

00:23:65 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stack stream is less compacted than the stream at 00:22:07. Please check into this as this can really cause some playability issues.
01:25:23 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:81 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:35:10 - Maybe the 2nd spinner can end here silently since adding any hitsounds to this point would easily stand out.

Notes: Make sure to double check the spacing around the beatmap. Odd, irregular spacing that is not intentional in a insane map makes it hard and less fun to play. Plus. this difficulty needs lead-in time as well.

Overall: Make sure to check into those small errors but also look around to see what can be fixed up before the map is ranked. For the audio lead-in, i'd suggest setting it to about the same time as Shulin's difficulty to make the beatmap play in a more organized manner. Once everything you need to fix is done, let me know and i'll recheck for a rebubble.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.6.00 Go~

Osz. File Scan

[Current] Size: 4.33 MB / 10.00 MB
Extra/Duplicated Objects: None
Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
SB (Story Board) Scan: N/A
Background: Yes
Source: Yes ([Shulin's-Sane] is missing the Source.)
Tags: Yes ([Shulin's-Sane] is missing the Tags.)


[Easy]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00 (Sounds good)
4. Offset: 63,322ms BPM: Inhereted (1x) (This can be removed since it is not being used.)


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No (At least add in 1 second of lead-in time.)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.00
[Current] Max Combo: 165
[Current] Max Score: 245,984
[Current] Star Rating: 2.27
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.3
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.3
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

-No Layout Errors Found-

Notes: The main concern I have on this difficulty is the fact that the song starts right away and could use some lead-in time.

[Normal]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00


[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No (At least add in 1 second of lead-in time.)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.20
[Current] Max Combo: 243
[Current] Max Score: 1,016,696
[Current] Star Rating: 4.34
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

00:08:65 (1,2) - Too close together.
00:09:05 (3,4) - ^
00:15:16 (1,2) - ^

Notes: Make sure to double check the spacing. Also, look into the audio lead-in issue as well.

[Shulin's-Sane]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: Yes (1.55 Seconds)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.80
[Current] Max Combo: 361
[Current] Max Score: 1,990,426
[Current] Star Rating: 4.96
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

00:22:47 (1) - This spinner sounds like its 1/4 too short.

Notes: Just a minor thing to look into. It sounded really odd after with the spinner ending too early.

[Insane]

Timing (Offset / BPM):

1. Offset: 367ms BPM: 152.00

[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No (At least add in 1 second of lead-in time.)
[Currently] with Audio Preview Point: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.00
[Current] Max Combo: 413
[Current] Max Score: 5,069,340
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
[Current] Preffered Skin: User's preference (No Change)
[Current] Stacking Leniency: Lv.6

00:23:65 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This stack stream is less compacted than the stream at 00:22:07. Please check into this as this can really cause some playability issues.
01:25:23 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:26:81 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:35:10 - Maybe the 2nd spinner can end here silently since adding any hitsounds to this point would easily stand out.

Notes: Make sure to double check the spacing around the beatmap. Odd, irregular spacing that is not intentional in a insane map makes it hard and less fun to play. Plus. this difficulty needs lead-in time as well.

Overall: Make sure to check into those small errors but also look around to see what can be fixed up before the map is ranked. For the audio lead-in, i'd suggest setting it to about the same time as Shulin's difficulty to make the beatmap play in a more organized manner. Once everything you need to fix is done, let me know and i'll recheck for a rebubble.
done,
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Don't Kudosu this post

[Shulin's-Sane]

I like this one.

00:22:077 (7) - Too close to the previous 6. Intentional
00:22:472 (1) - The spinner starts on the slider, this is a no-go. Move it one tick forward. Moved to the yellow tick (1/8)
00:58:393 (4) - New combo? Left as it is
00:59:972 (7) - ^ Done
Here's the update (tweaked some hitsounds to).

Download: DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA - switch (ouranhshc) [Shulin's-Sane].osu
H1ko
367 posts
Joined December 2008
H1ko
Nice map :3
Starrr
Daru
osu!painter
866 posts
Joined August 2008
Daru
[Insane]
00:58:059 (12) - New combo
00:59:077 (17) - Strange placement/ a bit awkward. Try leading up to this with a slider.
01:10:053 (4) - Inconsistent with previous two. Either remove this, or add notes on blue ticks before 01:09:084 (2,3)

[Shulin's-Sane]
00:22:007 (7) - Too close to 00:21:068 (4,5,6)
The streams seem a bit out of place and too hard when compared to the rest of the map. It just feels a bit off, so you might want to consider that.

[Normal]
-

[Easy]
-

Overall
There seems to be a large difficulty gap between Normal and Shulin's-Sane, considering the streams and jumps. You may want to consider adding another difficulty that incorporates a bit of each, perhaps toning down the streams of Shulin's-Sane with triplets or something similar. Overall, though, I quite like the maps, and I wouldn't mind if they were ranked as-is. Also, add the tag to your skin.ini so the sliderball mirrors the image when it hits the reverse arrow.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
done

Daru wrote:

[Insane]
00:58:059 (12) - New combo
00:59:077 (17) - Strange placement/ a bit awkward. Try leading up to this with a slider.
01:10:053 (4) - Inconsistent with previous two. Either remove this, or add notes on blue ticks before 01:09:084 (2,3)

[Shulin's-Sane]
00:22:007 (7) - Too close to 00:21:068 (4,5,6)
The streams seem a bit out of place and too hard when compared to the rest of the map. It just feels a bit off, so you might want to consider that.

[Normal]
-

[Easy]
-

Overall
There seems to be a large difficulty gap between Normal and Shulin's-Sane, considering the streams and jumps. You may want to consider adding another difficulty that incorporates a bit of each, perhaps toning down the streams of Shulin's-Sane with triplets or something similar. Overall, though, I quite like the maps, and I wouldn't mind if they were ranked as-is. Also, add the tag to your skin.ini so the sliderball mirrors the image when it hits the reverse arrow.
jmaeshawn
170 posts
Joined May 2008
jmaeshawn
Very good song and map :) Very fun to play, (and nice skin btw... like the DDR arrow as the ball :D )

Here's my mod:

Yellow = Hitsounds
Green = Timing/Beat Placement
Red = Snapping/Spacing
Blue = Misc/Suggestion


Easy:
00:42:209 (4): End of this slider is unsnapped, you should shorten it so it either ends on the red tick at 00:42:406, or on the blue tick at 00:42:505.
00:55:235 (2): This slider might sound better you moved it over so it started at 00:55:038, then lengthened it so it still ended at 00:56:024.

Normal:
00:18:130 (8): Might sound better at 00:17:932, so it starts with the vocals. (Move closer to 7 if you do this.)

Hard:
Didn't find anything on this one.

Shulin's Sane:
Nor on this one.

Insane:
Didn't find anything on this one either. (Although I admittantly find Insane diffs hard to read.)
Good job, and hope your map is ranked soon!

*Star for you~*
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

jmaeshawn wrote:

Very good song and map :) Very fun to play, (and nice skin btw... like the DDR arrow as the ball :D )

Here's my mod:

Yellow = Hitsounds
Green = Timing/Beat Placement
Red = Snapping/Spacing
Blue = Misc/Suggestion


Easy:
00:42:209 (4): End of this slider is unsnapped, you should shorten it so it either ends on the red tick at 00:42:406, or on the blue tick at 00:42:505.
00:55:235 (2): This slider might sound better you moved it over so it started at 00:55:038, then lengthened it so it still ended at 00:56:024.i just left it as is

Normal:
00:18:130 (8): Might sound better at 00:17:932, so it starts with the vocals. (Move closer to 7 if you do this.) i just removed the note and extened the slider

Hard:
Didn't find anything on this one.

Shulin's Sane:
Nor on this one.

Insane:
Didn't find anything on this one either. (Although I admittantly find Insane diffs hard to read.)
Good job, and hope your map is ranked soon!

*Star for you~*
thx
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
I'm new at modding, so you may ignore them all... I take care of the Teara's Hard diff as request from Teara. Anyway, my hitsounds.. are really bad I think.. seriously.. really..

[Teara's Hard]
00:01:055 (1) - Add finish.
00:03:013 (6) - Add finish at the beginning. Add clap at the first repeat and the end.
00:05:000 (2) - Add clap.
00:06:068 (3) - ^
00:07:047 (5) - ^
00:08:065 (1) - ^
00:09:005 (2) - ^
00:09:044 (3) - Add finish.
00:09:074 (4) - Add whistle.
00:10:023 (2) - Add finish.
00:10:053 (3) - Add whistle.
00:11:002 (1) - Add finish
00:11:032 (2) - Add whistle.
00:11:081 (4) - Add whistle at the end.
00:12:060 (2) - Add finish.
00:15:016 (1,2) - Add clap.
00:15:076 (4) - Add finish.
00:16:015 (1) - Add clap.
00:16:094 (3) - Should be on 00:16:084. Add clap.
00:17:034 (2,4) - Add finish.
00:17:063 (3) - Add clap.
00:18:072 (1) - ^
00:18:091 (2) - Add finish.
00:19:031 (3) - Add clap.
00:20:010 (5) - ^
00:21:028 (1,2,3) - Add finish.
00:22:047 (4) - Change this to spinner I guess.
00:28:039 (1) - Add finish.
00:21:028 (1,2) - Add clap.
00:28:039 (1) - Add finish.
00:28:078 (2) - Add clap at the beginning.
00:29:057 (1) - Add clap.
00:30:036 (3) - ^
00:31:015 (1) - ^
00:31:055 (2) - Add finish.
00:31:094 (3) - Add clap at the beginning.
00:32:073 (1) - Add clap.
00:33:052 (4) - ^
00:33:091 (6) - ^ (?)
00:34:070 (1) - Add finish.
00:35:010 (2) - Add clap.
00:35:089 (1) - ^
00:36:068 (3) - ^
00:37:047 (5) - ^
00:37:086 (1) - Add finish.
00:38:026 (2) - Add clap.
00:39:005 (1) - ^
00:39:064 (1) - ^
00:40:003 (1) - Add finish.
00:41:041 (1) - Add clap.
00:42:020 (4) - ^
00:42:060 (1) - Add finish.
00:43:098 (1) - ^
00:44:077 (2) - ^
00:45:056 (2) - ^
00:45:095 (3) - ^
00:46:094 (7) - Remove hitcircle?
00:47:034 (1) - Add finish.
00:47:053 (2) - Add clap at the repeat.
00:48:052 (4) - Add clap.
00:49:031 (1) - ^
00:49:070 (3) - Add clap at the end.
00:50:089 (1) - Add clap.
00:51:068 (4) - ^
00:52:007 (1) - ^
00:53:065 (1,2,3,4) - Add finish.
00:55:003 (1) - Add clap.
00:55:082 (4) - ^
00:56:081 (1) - Add finish.
00:57:011 (2) - Add whistle.
00:57:040 (3) - Add clap.
00:57:060 (4) - Add finish.
00:57:089 (5) - Add whistle.
00:58:019 (6) - Add clap.
00:58:039 (7) - Add finish.
00:58:078 (8) - Add clap.
00:59:077 (11) - ^
00:59:097 (12) - Add finish.
01:00:016 (1) - ^
01:03:013 (1,3,5,7,8) - Add clap.
01:04:070 (1) - Add finish.
01:05:049 (4) - ^
01:06:028 (7) - ^
01:06:068 (1) - Add clap.
01:07:037 (3) - ^
01:08:016 (6) - ^
01:09:024 (1) - ^
01:09:044 (2) - Add finish.
01:09:084 (3) - Add clap.
01:10:063 (5) - ^
01:12:020 (3) - Add clap at the beginning. Add finish at the end.
01:12:089 (1) - Add whistle.
01:13:019 (2) - Add clap.
01:13:039 (3) - Add finish.
01:13:068 (4) - Add whistle.
01:13:098 (1) - Add clap.
01:14:018 (2) - Add finish.
01:14:047 (3) - Add whistle.
01:14:077 (4) - Add clap.
01:14:097 (5) - Add finish. Add whistle.
01:15:056 (1) - Add finish.
01:15:076 (2) - Add finish at the beginning. Add clap at the end.
01:18:032 (1,2) - Add clap.
01:18:091 (3) - Add finsih.
01:19:031 (4,6,9) - Add whistle.
01:20:049 (8) - Add finish.
01:21:097 (1) - Should be on 01:21:088
01:22:007 (2) - Add finish.
01:22:047 (3,5) - Add whislte.
01:24:044 (1) - Add clap.
01:24:084 (3) - ^
01:25:013 (1) - Should be on 01:25:003. Add clap.
01:25:023 (2) - Add finish.
01:28:039 (1) - ^
01:28:078 (3) - Add clap.
01:29:057 (7) - ^
01:29:097 (9) - Add finish.
01:30:026 (2) - Add whistle.
01:30:076 (5) - Add finish.
01:31:005 (1) - Add whistle.
01:31:035 (2,3) - ^
01:31:064 (1) - Should end on 01:31:064. Add finish.
01:36:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove it!
01:39:840 - Remove the break!
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
I took that diff off, ill give you kudosu for your efforts
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
GENERAL
My recent bubbled map got popped because I don't have hitcircleoverlay.png. Don't make this mistake ok ? ^ ^ Either make one or force default skin under song setup -> storyboard.

NORMAL
fine
01:31:094 (1) - Spinner ends at different place than other diff ?

HARD
01:29:097 (1) - Why you hide it behind the streams ? Very difficult to see it.
01:29:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Imo, these jumps are not well made, but you can keep it as you like, or you could try my suggestion.


INSANE
So hard...

SHULIN's SANE
00:38:006 (2) - Why you are so cruel.... T.T
00:46:074 (5) - align this please ? xD
01:01:015 (4) - Uneven jumps
01:16:074 (6) - Why are you so cruel again ? T.T
01:18:013 (3) - Uneven jumps
01:19:070 (4) - ^
01:29:067 (14) - This note seems weird in the whole design. Move 01:28:039 (1) to left a bit more so that 01:29:067 (14) can fit in a line ?

EASY
01:31:094 (1) - Spinner too short compared to other diff ?

Star. <3 the sldier arrow.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
I'll fix up my difficulty.

SHULIN's SANE
00:38:006 (2) - Why you are so cruel.... T.T That's what makes it fun :D
00:46:074 (5) - align this please ? xD Fixed
01:01:015 (4) - Uneven jumps Fixed
01:16:074 (6) - Why are you so cruel again ? T.T It's challenging.
01:18:013 (3) - Uneven jumps Fixed
01:19:070 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:29:067 (14) - This note seems weird in the whole design. Move 01:28:039 (1) to left a bit more so that 01:29:067 (14) can fit in a line ? Agreed I've fixed this.


Thanks for the mod, practice the cruel parts you'll learn to love them :D

Download: DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA - switch (ouranhshc) [Shulin's-Sane].osu
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
ill add teara's hard back to it.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Overall]
- Needs tags
- Needs a source
- Set a map wide preview time (preview times are different between the diffs)

[Easy]
00:58:039 - A note here would make it sound smoother as it goes into the break

No problems found :)

[Normal]
00:52:077 - This break is unnecessary (too short)

No Problems found :)

[Hard]
00:28:019 (15) - Finish here?
Same story with the break in this diff


[Shulin's-Sane]
00:32:073 (4) - anti jump? confusing for me, please respace.
01:06:028 (1) - This seems like a better start for kiai than the one you have now
No major problems found :)

[Insane]
00:17:093 (11) - respace
Same story with the break in this diff

00:59:097 (1) - move the spinner forward 1/4 beat, place a note here and shorten the spinner by 1/4?
01:16:094 (1) - Same thing here
01:31:055 (1) - This spinner is silent in every diff except this one? o_0

overall, a good beatmap so far. Still needs a bit of work but so far it's looking good :) Starred
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Time for a recheck...

[Normal]

00:44:77 (3,4) - Intentionally not lined up?
00:58:39 (1) - A finish can work here...

[Hard]

00:38:65 (5,6) - Intentionally not lined up?
00:49:90 (7,8) - Not lined up.
00:58:39 (1) - A finish can work here...
01:03:13 (7) - Just thought about it 3 times. Shouldn't the new combo start here?

[Insane]

00:04:70 (5,6,7) - Intentionally not lined up?
00:59:77 (13,1) - Sounds kinda odd with the beat like where the spinner is, it fels like there should have been a note there or something, but just letting you know.
01:04:70 - The kiai fountains by itself here wouldn't make much sense with the fact you're going to use it about 2 seconds later. Plus, it would look more like kiai spam here as well.

One more thing..... why is "Shulin Xgor *for skin*" in the Source? You could put "Shulin Xgor" in the Tags instead and add "Thanks to Xgor for the skin" on the main post. Also, why is the Preffered Skin not set to default for the difficulties? Make sure to check into that as well and then forum PM me to do a recheck for a bubble.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
~Shulin's Sane~
00:08:085 (2,3,4,5,6) - move by put 4 on the center This would mess up the pattern so I don't see any need to put in the center.
00:34:070 (1,2,3) - spacings The mild jump is intentional
01:07:047 (4) - start on blue tick Imo this sounds worse.
It's up to ouran if he sees the need to change though, :D
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

DJPop wrote:

~Shulin's Sane~
00:08:085 (2,3,4,5,6) - move by put 4 on the center done
00:34:070 (1,2,3) - spacings nah
01:07:047 (4) - start on blue tick nah
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[Easy]

Fine. One suggestion:

01:22:007 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move it up a bit to line the 4 up with the combo before it?

[Normal]

Same thing as before.

00:31:094 (2) - Maybe line this up with the endpoint of 1 a little better.

[Hard]

00:19:070 (4,5,6,7,8) - These looked too spaced out for 1/4s. (either that, or I just sucked there)
01:05:079 (5) - Looked a bit weird, since you didn't have anything at slight angles before.

[Shulin's-Sane]
00:34:070 (1,2,3) - Weird-looking, although spacially correct. Maybe put the 2 right in the middle, vertically?

[Insane]

Fine.

Star!
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
All maps are perfect for me ;D
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Hmm... looking good now from the recheck. Bubble for you then.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
i like everything the way it is
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
:U
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
how close were you
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
YERRA cry
and i cry
so i make a diff for fun

Download: DAISUKE ASAKURA ex.TERRA - switch (ouranhshc) [Alazy].osu
Mystearica
Mystearica
Terrible, terrible damage.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Mystearica wrote:

Terrible, terrible damage.
whats that supposed to mean

looks like i won't be maapping anytime soon... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu

Alace wrote:

YERRA cry
and i cry
so i make a diff for fun
thank you :D
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