Priti wrote:

Kenterz9 wrote:

Another

00:55:896 (6,7) - These 2 sliders can be confusing. The first time I played this, I thought the (7) was at 00:56:140 (because of the rythm)
So maybe you can remove 00:56:222 (1) and place the (7) where I said
or you can delete (7) and place a circle at 00:56:140 (on (1)'s head maybe) Like here 01:21:657 (6,7)
Same for all these paterns (except this one 01:03:722 (6,7) This section isn't too hard if you are at the level of finishing the rest of the map and if you are at the level of FCing it you should be able of doing so after playing the map once.

Kenterz9 wrote:

Alu's Extra

00:12:526 (4) - Auto sampleset sound better imo =3
00:55:896 (6,7) - Here I said something to Priti's Another, but I don't think it's nessecary here because of the flow (I guess)
01:14:483 (1,2) - Why Normal sampleset ? It sounds better with soft sampleset... Also there's no change with 01:13:178 (for the music)

1. the diffs are so smooth, I like them
2. The mp3 size must be 192kbps, the current size is 234 kbps.
3. I'm not sure but the source should be beatmania IIDX TROOPERS

1. The diff seems good for me but I've seen some bad stacks.
2. 00:50:189 (2) - I suggest this rhythm:
   example

   
3. 01:08:776 (4) - move down this note
4. 01:11:548 (6) - ctrl+g
5. 02:09:265 (17) - NC

1. 00:46:276 (2) - This slider don't fit so much here because of this: ( 00:46:439 - )

1. 00:56:222 (2) - Stack this note correctly with 00:54:265 (2) -

Cloudchaser wrote:

dildos. ye

General

1. the diffs are so smooth, I like them o3o
2. The mp3 size must be 192kbps, the current size is 234 kbps. FUCKING HELL ALU
3. I'm not sure but the source should be beatmania IIDX TROOPERS It's already in the tags

Nemis & Priti blah blah blah hyper

1. 00:46:276 (2) - This slider don't fit so much here because of this: ( 00:46:439 - ) But I like it.. And the sound is pretty minor anyways.

sorry for my noob mod :c gl Noob goat <3

Priti wrote:

sorry for my noob mod :c gl Noob goat <3

No Dap wrote:

Timing check!

offset : 2728

1. The Combo Colour 3 blends in with the backgroud which makes some pattern (like 01:21:901 (7,8) in the Another difficulty for example) hard to read. Find an alternative please!

1. 00:17:091 (3) - This slider goes a bit too close to the bottom border of the playfield, it even overlaps the score metre bar (at its default size). Consider oving it up a little but.
2. 00:54:917 (1) - This slider goes under 00:52:309 (1), that doesn't look good you know :/
3. 00:54:917 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - You used consecutive 3/2 slider with a reverse for 18 seconds o.o that's kind of boring at some point you know :/ Try to diversify a little bit please >.<
4. 01:23:613 (1) - The reverse of this slider almosts goes under the HP bar move it a bit away please, that's a easy fix and it play better + look nicer !
5. 01:26:222 (1) - Move the last gray point 1 grid left for a better blanket !
6. 01:48:396 (1) - I know this slider blankets around the last slider, and it looks very nice. But don't forget this is an easy difficulty and you must use a consistent spacing everywhere. Otherwise new players will be confused and will hit the slider too early because the note is too close that what it is supposed to be. So don't put this slider that close from 01:45:787 (3).
   
   Example of something that'd be more appropriate

   

1. 00:07:309 (6) - Why does this slider ends 1/1 before the next slider while 00:04:700 (6) does 1/2 earlier, the two sounds are similar, for the sake of connsistency, I'd do the same things for those patterns.
2. 00:30:135 (1) - End this slider 1/2 later, to match the drums ? That feels more natural to play and that keeps consistency with 00:28:830 (2).
3. 01:03:559 (2,3) - Don't put those 2 circles under 01:02:417 (3), the slider hides them when they start appearing. :/
4. 01:36:330 (4) - Just my personnal opinion, but I wouldn't put this circle so close from 01:35:189 (4). Doesn't look nice imo. >w<

1. 01:25:570 (5) - The end of the slider is completely under the HP bar :/
2. I'm not really fond of patterns like this one 00:54:917 (1,2,3), but that's just me, despite that, I really lied this dif !

1. Hey, this is an extra difficulty, why does it only has HP drain rate 6 ? That's an extra, don't make it too easy to pass please, it's supposed to be challenging, increase it to 7 ! :3

Kurai wrote:

[General]

1. The Combo Colour 3 blends in with the backgroud which makes some pattern (like 01:21:901 (7,8) in the Another difficulty for example) hard to read. Find an alternative please! Tweaked both 1 and 3 a bit, should be better now.

[Normal]

1. 00:07:309 (6) - Why does this slider ends 1/1 before the next slider while 00:04:700 (6) does 1/2 earlier, the two sounds are similar, for the sake of connsistency, I'd do the same things for those patterns. Changed the first one to 1/1
2. 00:30:135 (1) - End this slider 1/2 later, to match the drums ? That feels more natural to play and that keeps consistency with 00:28:830 (2). Intentional, I did this because a single finish sounds awkward and to give more time before the Spinner, I'll wait for other people's opinions though
3. 01:03:559 (2,3) - Don't put those 2 circles under 01:02:417 (3), the slider hides them when they start appearing. :/ I honestly didn't find any issues with this, I'll wait for other modders to say what they think.

Great map in general, I enjoyed playing the Another difficulty a lot ! o3o

Cloudchaser wrote:

dildos.
Alu's Extra

1. The diff seems good for me but I've seen some bad stacks.
2. 00:50:189 (2) - I suggest this rhythm:
   example

   
3. 01:08:776 (4) - move down this note
4. 01:11:548 (6) - ctrl+g
5. 02:09:265 (17) - NC

Kurai wrote:

[Extra]

1. Hey, this is an extra difficulty, why does it only has HP drain rate 6 ? That's an extra, don't make it too easy to pass please, it's supposed to be challenging, increase it to 7 ! :3

Secretpipe wrote:

[Flower and Priti's Normal]
00:45:298 (4) - x:364 y:232 Ruins flow and ruins the overlap with the slider on it, no.

[Nemis and Priti's Hyper]
00:52:537 - I found thatweird ! Make sth ? I likey this..
This diff looks actually pretty good o3o

[Another]
00:23:434 - You can add a note here Ruins the emphasis of the next note.
01:36:477 - ^ ^
01:41:858 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - For that moment , you should add some jumps imo , it's more fun to play I honestly don't feel like they are needed.

I found that map good as always ! o3o
Good job to the mappers Good luck

Lizzy wrote:

Whoa what wait, hold it right there

[Flower & Priti's Normal]
You have a lot of 1/2 action going on here in this map. I extremely strongly recommend using OD4. Okie okie

00:30:119 (1) - Seriously? If this stays, increase by 1/2 beat, please. You can clearly hear the cymbals in the background land 1/2 beat later. Fien meanie
00:30:852 - In combination with that above, add a circle here. This timestamp doesn't make sense
00:31:423 (1) - This spinner should start at 00:31:749 - and end at 00:32:727 - and also, this isn't too hard to play (with OD4). Okieokie
00:54:901 - The silent slider heads on every 2. slider make it a pain to play this part since there is no audio-feedback for the player. Either raise volume or use drumnormals instead of softnormals. Added drumnormals on most of these.
01:06:641 (1) - Imperfect blanket; you can improve it with one more node. Tweaked it a bit
01:17:564 (4,5,6,1) - This combination is questionable. (5,6) suddenly change the way the player has to react, not to mention make it considerably harder as to the completion of the previous slider and then immediately clicking 1/2. Changing them to a single slider would greatly contribute to maintaining a certain consistence over the section. Changed to a slider
01:27:999 (4,5,6,1) - Then again, you have had a lot of 1/2 going on before, so you might keep these the way they are. Your call. Removed 01:28:651 (6) -
01:31:423 (1,1) - These slider shapes are random and not even beautiful. I believe you can get something else going. Keeping for now, Will see what others think

mhhm

[Blahblah Hyper]
Priti:
00:05:662 (2) - Ctrl G for better flow. Done, great idea
00:28:651 (1,1,1,1) - Brilliant idea! ikr
00:50:662 (4) - Actually, Ctrl G here works just as well. Done
00:53:597 (1) - I don't know, you might wanna place this somewhere else, I keep mistaking it for a 1/2. Slightly unstacked them, should be better now

but otherwise, well done guys o3o

Secretpipe wrote:

[Alu's Extra]
01:36:151 (8) - NC
01:46:994 (15) - ^
There's a lot of streams owo But you did a good job
Due to new rule , rename into Alu's Impact ?

1. 00:14:467 (1) - blanket
2. 00:15:934 (2,3) - ctrl+g? plays better
3. 01:09:738 (4) - blanket
4. 01:12:510 (4) - ^^^^
5. 01:51:151 (2,3) - ctrl+g? don't forget about hitsounds

onotoleonide wrote:

really ExTReME dIfFicULIty

Priti wrote:

onotoleonide wrote:

really ExTReME dIfFicULIty

I saw that u wrote extra n den edited
nub

Yoeri wrote:

[eXtreme]
The HP drain is rather high. The parts without streams do not restore HP.
00:12:592 (7) - Why is this a slider? Seems a bit silly to me. Either make (6) a slider and (7) a circle or just make it all circles.
00:50:499 (4,5) - Blanket?
00:58:977 (2,4) - ^
01:07:130 (3,4) - ^
01:11:858 (1,3,4) - ^
01:29:793 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This bit could use better flow in my opinion.
01:36:641 - You could just as well fill up these breaks with long sliders or spinners, or just remove the circle in the middle like in the other diffs.

I tried, really. T~T

Kurai wrote:

Looks ready to me ! ~

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Kurai wrote:

I forgot about that :U

DJNightmare wrote:

Kurai wrote:

I forgot about that :U

http://puu.sh/875W5.rar

ITZ FINALLY DONE!~
(The only triggers are Finish Hitsounds which has almost no gaps with each other's difficulties or maps so they stay :3)

DJNightmare wrote:

Hyper's difficulty specific sb is already done, so i did not include it

Alumetorz wrote:

inb4 this will get graveyarded with a bubble