Secretpipe wrote:

[Flower and Priti's Normal]
00:45:298 (4) - x:364 y:232 Ruins flow and ruins the overlap with the slider on it, no.

[Nemis and Priti's Hyper]
00:52:537 - I found thatweird ! Make sth ? I likey this..
This diff looks actually pretty good o3o

[Another]
00:23:434 - You can add a note here Ruins the emphasis of the next note.
01:36:477 - ^ ^
01:41:858 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - For that moment , you should add some jumps imo , it's more fun to play I honestly don't feel like they are needed.

I found that map good as always ! o3o
Good job to the mappers Good luck

Lizzy wrote:

Whoa what wait, hold it right there

[Flower & Priti's Normal]
You have a lot of 1/2 action going on here in this map. I extremely strongly recommend using OD4. Okie okie

00:30:119 (1) - Seriously? If this stays, increase by 1/2 beat, please. You can clearly hear the cymbals in the background land 1/2 beat later. Fien meanie
00:30:852 - In combination with that above, add a circle here. This timestamp doesn't make sense
00:31:423 (1) - This spinner should start at 00:31:749 - and end at 00:32:727 - and also, this isn't too hard to play (with OD4). Okieokie
00:54:901 - The silent slider heads on every 2. slider make it a pain to play this part since there is no audio-feedback for the player. Either raise volume or use drumnormals instead of softnormals. Added drumnormals on most of these.
01:06:641 (1) - Imperfect blanket; you can improve it with one more node. Tweaked it a bit
01:17:564 (4,5,6,1) - This combination is questionable. (5,6) suddenly change the way the player has to react, not to mention make it considerably harder as to the completion of the previous slider and then immediately clicking 1/2. Changing them to a single slider would greatly contribute to maintaining a certain consistence over the section. Changed to a slider
01:27:999 (4,5,6,1) - Then again, you have had a lot of 1/2 going on before, so you might keep these the way they are. Your call. Removed 01:28:651 (6) -
01:31:423 (1,1) - These slider shapes are random and not even beautiful. I believe you can get something else going. Keeping for now, Will see what others think

mhhm

[Blahblah Hyper]
Priti:
00:05:662 (2) - Ctrl G for better flow. Done, great idea
00:28:651 (1,1,1,1) - Brilliant idea! ikr
00:50:662 (4) - Actually, Ctrl G here works just as well. Done
00:53:597 (1) - I don't know, you might wanna place this somewhere else, I keep mistaking it for a 1/2. Slightly unstacked them, should be better now

but otherwise, well done guys o3o

Secretpipe wrote:

[Alu's Extra]
01:36:151 (8) - NC
01:46:994 (15) - ^
There's a lot of streams owo But you did a good job
Due to new rule , rename into Alu's Impact ?

1. 00:14:467 (1) - blanket
2. 00:15:934 (2,3) - ctrl+g? plays better
3. 01:09:738 (4) - blanket
4. 01:12:510 (4) - ^^^^
5. 01:51:151 (2,3) - ctrl+g? don't forget about hitsounds

onotoleonide wrote:

really ExTReME dIfFicULIty

Priti wrote:

onotoleonide wrote:

really ExTReME dIfFicULIty

I saw that u wrote extra n den edited
nub

Yoeri wrote:

[eXtreme]
The HP drain is rather high. The parts without streams do not restore HP.
00:12:592 (7) - Why is this a slider? Seems a bit silly to me. Either make (6) a slider and (7) a circle or just make it all circles.
00:50:499 (4,5) - Blanket?
00:58:977 (2,4) - ^
01:07:130 (3,4) - ^
01:11:858 (1,3,4) - ^
01:29:793 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This bit could use better flow in my opinion.
01:36:641 - You could just as well fill up these breaks with long sliders or spinners, or just remove the circle in the middle like in the other diffs.

I tried, really. T~T

Kurai wrote:

Looks ready to me ! ~

(｡ ◕‿‿◕)

Kurai wrote:

I forgot about that :U

DJNightmare wrote:

Kurai wrote:

I forgot about that :U

http://puu.sh/875W5.rar

ITZ FINALLY DONE!~
(The only triggers are Finish Hitsounds which has almost no gaps with each other's difficulties or maps so they stay :3)

DJNightmare wrote:

Hyper's difficulty specific sb is already done, so i did not include it

Alumetorz wrote:

inb4 this will get graveyarded with a bubble

1. 00:13:162 (1) - I would add a 60% finish on this slider's head because, if you can notice, new melody section is starting from here. The finish would fit better there instead of whistle (I'd remove whistle with adding the finish)
2. 00:28:814 (1) - This is not symmetric. Just use this code:
   

   312,208,28814,6,0,P|256:100|212:216,1,300,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   152,272,30119,2,0,P|116:212|140:76,2,200,4|0|4,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:35:336 (2) - Why don't you keep consistency here with all other following parts with the same rhythm? I mean, rhythm should be this one, without mapping that red tick: http://puu.sh/8yB2R.jpg

1. OD -1 for consistency between diffs
2. 00:13:162 (1) - Same of Beginner
3. 00:31:749 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1 and add additions: Soft effect. It'd be consistent with 00:35:988 (6)'s head and so on. Actually, it's very bad. It fills nothing and the Normal sampleset is too loud for that.
4. 00:46:260 (7) - I'd use Normal sampleset on this slider's head and tail because the head has the sound of 00:45:771 (6)'s head and actually that soft setting sounds so weird o.o
5. 00:53:597 (1) - This spinner could be too short considering that the 00:54:901 (1) is just set 1/1 after it for this diff. I would change this spinner with some 1/1 circles to make it easier (the diff is already hard :\ so let's try to make this part more playable for beginners): http://puu.sh/8yBwv.jpg

1. 00:03:054 (3) - CTRL + G to keep the same flow of 00:03:380 (4,5,6) (and it plays much better)
2. 01:15:282 (6,7,8) - This kind of linear jumping patterns are so bad to play.. I suggest you something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1572918 (stacking 6 with
3. 01:14:467 (1)'s head, 7 with 01:14:711 (2) 's head and 8 with 01:14:141 (5))
4. 01:25:717 (2,3,4) - No. This should be an up-down-up-down pattern starting from the 01:25:390 (6). If the 01:25:554 (1) is down the 01:25:717 (2) must be placed up. How you mapped it, with this inconsistency, the pattern could confuse player because they'd play this pattern naturally in the same way I suggested you to fix. Or maybe.. there is a better way to fix it if you don't want to change this completely. 01:25:554 (7) Add new combo here 01:25:717 (2) and remove it from 01:25:554 (1). The combo warn players about the "kind of pattern" change.
5. 01:41:858 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Hi Rin pattern xD
6. This map looks so weird to play idk lol

1. 01:25:880 I got your intention but no, you really should add a circle here. This big break could confuse a player between the previous stream and next one. I'd make a 1/4 triple starting from here till 01:26:043

1. 00:19:358 (7,8) - This big jump and inconsistent jump doesn't convince me because of the foollowing 00:19:521 (8,1) small spacing.. I highly suggest you to fix this with an other pattern, but I thought about that but I don't have idea D: Just try to fix this by yourself ;c
2. 01:25:880 - Same of Alu's Extra
3. 01:36:641 (1) - This circle shouldn't be placed here. You are using the same logic jumping pattern of 01:35:662 (4,5,7,8). These ones are 1/2 and the
4. 01:36:314 (10,1) is 1/1. This needs a bigger spacing.

Chewin wrote:

Ami's Beginner

1. 00:13:162 (1) - I would add a 60% finish on this slider's head because, if you can notice, new melody section is starting from here. The finish would fit better there instead of whistle (I'd remove whistle with adding the finish) Added the finish in addition to the whistle.
2. 00:28:814 (1) - This is not symmetric. Just use this code: Fixed.
   

   312,208,28814,6,0,P|256:100|212:216,1,300,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   152,272,30119,2,0,P|116:212|140:76,2,200,4|0|4,1:2|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:35:336 (2) - Why don't you keep consistency here with all other following parts with the same rhythm? I mean, rhythm should be this one, without mapping that red tick: http://puu.sh/8yB2R.jpg What Ami did here actually makes sense since the pitch change is every fourth sound unlike most songs which have it as a pitch change every fifth sound, Unchanged.

Flower & Priti's Normal

1. OD -1 for consistency between diffs Okie
2. 00:13:162 (1) - Same of Beginner Added
3. 00:31:749 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1 and add additions: Soft effect. It'd be consistent with 00:35:988 (6)'s head and so on. Actually, it's very bad. It fills nothing and the Normal sampleset is too loud for that. Removed the spinner and changed this pattern instead.
4. 00:46:260 (7) - I'd use Normal sampleset on this slider's head and tail because the head has the sound of 00:45:771 (6)'s head and actually that soft setting sounds so weird o.o Done.
5. 00:53:597 (1) - This spinner could be too short considering that the 00:54:901 (1) is just set 1/1 after it for this diff. I would change this spinner with some 1/1 circles to make it easier (the diff is already hard :\ so let's try to make this part more playable for beginners): http://puu.sh/8yBwv.jpg Changed it up a bit, also removed the spinner.

Alu's Extra

1. 01:25:880 I got your intention but no, you really should add a circle here. This big break could confuse a player between the previous stream and next one. I'd make a 1/4 triple starting from here till 01:26:043 - This anti-jump is heavily emphasised by the cymbals and since It's an extra, anti-jumps like this shouldn't actually be a problem. This isn't an instant fail scenerio and if you are up for FCing it, I doubt you'll actually do it on your first try due to the tough streams.

Another

1. 00:19:358 (7,8) - This big jump and inconsistent jump doesn't convince me because of the foollowing 00:19:521 (8,1) small spacing.. I highly suggest you to fix this with an other pattern, but I thought about that but I don't have idea D: Just try to fix this by yourself ;c Removed (8) For now.
2. 01:25:880 - Same of Alu's Extra Keeping it, Works well imo
3. 01:36:641 (1) - This circle shouldn't be placed here. You are using the same logic jumping pattern of 01:35:662 (4,5,7,8). These ones are 1/2 and the Uncomplete sentence woop woop. Anywhos, added another triplet.
4. 01:36:314 (10,1) is 1/1. This needs a bigger spacing. Isn't needed anymore since I added the triplet.

Chewin wrote:

eXtreme

1. 00:03:054 (3) - CTRL + G to keep the same flow of 00:03:380 (4,5,6) (and it plays much better) nah
2. 01:15:282 (6,7,8) - This kind of linear jumping patterns are so bad to play.. I suggest you something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1572918 (stacking 6 with
3. 01:14:467 (1)'s head, 7 with 01:14:711 (2) 's head and 8 with 01:14:141 (5)) I like it the way it is now
4. 01:25:717 (2,3,4) - No. This should be an up-down-up-down pattern starting from the 01:25:390 (6). If the 01:25:554 (1) is down the 01:25:717 (2) must be placed up. How you mapped it, with this inconsistency, the pattern could confuse player because they'd play this pattern naturally in the same way I suggested you to fix. Or maybe.. there is a better way to fix it if you don't want to change this completely. 01:25:554 (7) Add new combo here 01:25:717 (2) and remove it from 01:25:554 (1). The combo warn players about the "kind of pattern" change. changed nc
5. 01:41:858 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Hi Rin pattern xD wat
6. This map looks so weird to play idk lol Still not as weird as someone's Forza

Mirage wrote:

Chewin wrote:

eXtreme

1. 01:15:282 (6,7,8) - This kind of linear jumping patterns are so bad to play.. I suggest you something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1572918 (stacking 6 with
2. 01:14:467 (1)'s head, 7 with 01:14:711 (2) 's head and 8 with 01:14:141 (5)) I like it the way it is now