1. Hard (4.9 stars, 475 notes)
2. Normal (2.68 stars, 214 notes)

1. if there is no reason to use a png file as background, a jpg file should be used instead imo. tell me if you can’t convert.
2. it might be just me, but the 2nd kiai time should be started from 02:34:606 - ?
3. there is no breaktime in both difficulties. considering the length of this song, it will be better to insert one in somewhere.

1. 00:16:069 (1) - extend to the next red tick to make consistent with 00:19:972 (1) - . there is no big difference between their melodies.
   
2. 00:18:752 (3) - shorten by 1/2 beat and then add a note at the white tick instead to complete the piano line.
   
3. 00:42:411 (5) - this’s 100% optional, but it’d be better for the flow to move this note to rightward slightly considering like this (just rotated by 10% though!) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198156
   

   219,37,42411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   291,130,42899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   175,151,43386,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:16:069 (1) - this’s just a suggestion. I prefer to follow the vocal at 01:17:533 - (I mean “ba~by~♪”), so how about placing objects instead of this spinner? please add a NC to (6) if you fix.
   
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198177
   

   368,168,76069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   348,288,76557,2,0,P|240:332|144:260,1,240
   100,156,78020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   192,80,78508,6,0,L|320:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:59:484 (1,2,3) - this flow looks a bit strange for me, so I suggest this pattern instead. it’s more fitting with the vocal line. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198230
   
   

   128,288,119484,6,0,P|64:296|8:280,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   24,160,120459,2,0,P|88:152|144:168,1,120
   240,240,121435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   293,132,121923,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   ^maybe I forgot to add a new combo. ugh..
6. 02:38:996 (7) - if you wanna make a blanket perfectly, move the 2nd way point to rightward by 1 grid and the 3rd one to leftward by 1grid. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198245
7. 02:42:411 (5) - it’d be better to add a new combo considering the vocal line.

1. 00:22:899 (9) - add a whistle to the beginning and the end instead of removing one from the reversal point. it’s more fitting with the song.
2. 00:24:850 (1) - since your pattern is following sounds of the drum in this part, this whistle should be removed to respect them.
3. 00:25:825 (1) - add a whistle like 00:26:801 (1) -
4. 00:27:777 (1) - ^
5. 00:28:752 (1) - same as 00:24:850 -
6. 00:29:728 (1) - same as 00:25:825 -
7. 00:29:972 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel these are kidna bad flow. it will be nice if you fix this placement. btw I prefer to make a larger jump with 00:29:972 (2,3) - .
8. 00:35:094 (7,8) - just a suggestion. how about ctrl+G? considering the flow and the melody, it'd be better to place them in the unequal spacing in that way.
9. 01:05:703 - add an extra note here to follow the vocal. I feel it’s more fun.
10. 02:41:191 (11,12,13) - just a suggestion. but I think the way to place 2 triples in a row damages fun. it'd be better at least to make the spacing of 02:40:947 (10,11) - larger.

1. 02:22:533
2. 02:22:655
3. 02:22:777

SPOILER

1. 00:21:191 (2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you can make this flow better, maybe like this: (If you change it, you have to fix spacing on the next notes)
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:35:581 (5) - Consider a NC here since vocal changes a bit, and also you won't have too long combos, long ones seem bad in a Normal imo.
3. 00:37:533 (7) - I know this is a Normal but this is SUPER boring, why don't you try a rhythm like this one to follow music much better?:
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:947 (3) - Unstack it? since you're not stacking 00:42:411 (5,6) - and it's like the same rhythm.
5. 00:49:240 (3) - I don't like too much how this flows, I think a straight slider doesn't fit very good here, my suggestion is copying 00:47:289 (1) then CTRL+J, and place it with correct spacing, I think it flows better.
6. 00:51:191 (5) - If you followed my NC suggestion, then NC here again.
7. 00:53:142 (8) - Same as 00:37:533 (7) -, this rhythm is ugly and boring.
8. 01:05:338 (4) - Stack it properly.
9. 01:22:411 (5) - NC.
10. 01:24:362 (8) - Same as 00:37:533 (7) -.
11. 01:26:801 (2) - Bad stacking.
12. 01:41:923 (6) - NC, and maybe use 2 notes instead like you did on 01:22:411 (5,6) - ?
13. 01:45:338 (1) - Remove this note and then try this rhythm again, fits much better:
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:58:508 (4) - I'm personally not a big fan of straight sliders, it ruins the flow a bit imo if you place another one before, why don't you try a curved slider here instead?
15. 02:10:703 (5) - Stack it properly.
16. 02:11:191 (6) - Aaaand in this case flows bad again because the straight slider, maybe try this?:
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:30:703 (4) - NC.
18. 02:30:508 (6) - Add Finish and NC, then remove NC on 02:40:459 (5) - and add it on 02:42:411 (5) - since kiai starts and is much better if a new combo starts there.
19. 03:04:850 (5,1,2) -: You can improve this, mainly because that overlap seems awkward, what do you think about this?:
    SPOILER

    
20. 03:18:020 (2) - Stack it properly.
21. 03:21:191 - Add a 1/4 slider here or a note at least, feels empty and music still sounds here.

1. 00:40:947 (4) - Uuuugly overlap, maybe try moving it to x:152 y:256?
2. 00:42:899 (9) - I'd like to see a 1/2 slider here instead, this feels a bit empty and boring without notes or something to press, and also I can hear music here, so it will fit.
3. 00:45:094 (4) - Improve this blanket, like this:
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:48:752 (5) - CTRL+G?
5. 00:51:191 (7) - NC.
6. 01:13:142 (2) - ^
7. 01:20:459 (7) - Once again a ugly overlap, why don't you try to stack it with 01:19:484 (5) - ? seems nice imo (and if you do it you'll have to fix spacing on the next pattern).
8. 01:23:386 (3,4,5,6) - First two sliders are fine but this ones... there's no need to have them all imo, makes your pattern really boring and rhythm is a bit weird, I know you can change this.. like replacing some sliders with notes instead to make it more fun, also these 1/3 sliders don't fit with the song.
9. 01:26:313 (5) - NC and Finish.
10. 01:47:533 (6) - CTRL+G?
11. 01:58:508 (1) - I don't see why you added a NC here, remove it and add it on 01:59:484 (6) - instead.
12. 01:59:484 (6) - Finish.
13. 02:15:094 (2) - Stack it properly and add Finish.
14. 02:34:606 (2) - Finish.
15. 02:39:240 (4) - CTRL+G?
16. 02:40:409 (7) - ^
17. 02:50:216 (1) - Finish.
18. 02:58:020 (1) - Two repeats are booooring, also you didn't use them on 03:01:923 (1) - so I guess you can change rhythm here, maybe like this?:
    SPOILER

    
19. 03:21:191 - Same I pointed on Normal diff, but here you could add 2 1/4 notes instead.

1. 00:49:240 (3) - move to 200, 316 will be better
2. 01:09:728 (6) - make reverse point watching 5th note. it's little out of step
3. 02:00:947 (2) - 240, 244 will be better
4. 02:35:581 (3,4,5) - make same shape this three
5. 03:00:947 (4) - as same as second mod http://puu.sh/79Cw7.jpg
6. 03:14:606 (2) - ^http://puu.sh/79CxT.jpg

1. 00:37:533 (6,7) - make same?
2. 01:13:142 (2) - Ctrl + G?
3. 01:29:972 (5) - move to 296, 312 will be better
4. 01:53:630 (7,9) - better make same shape
5. 02:18:020 (10,11) - ^

Hollow Wings wrote:

F妹

1. 因為有SB的緣故可以把Letterbox勾掉

1. 00:57:777 (9) - 後面都14combo了 TAT 這裡NC吧, 01:00:703 (6) - 這個地方也是
2. 01:19:972 (6) - 基於01:20:216 - 是新lyric的原因, 用一個滑條尾巴帶過去太隨便了! 至少要拆成兩個note才行 (或者是拆成兩個note之後從01:20:216 - 拉個滑條出來, 後面的節奏也得改就是惹..)
3. 01:23:874 (4,5,6) - 這裡的vocal起點不是都是在紅線嗎 為什麼三個滑條都是在白線啊!! 最好改一下
4. 02:41:191 (11,12,13) - 可以跟02:40:459 (7,8) - 擺個正三角形 (?
5. 02:48:264 (8) - 同前面 NC
6. 03:21:191 - 這後面還有音, 加個1/4滑條如何?

• 找不出東西TAT

KSHR wrote:

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modding (did this about 1 month ago)

[General]

1. if there is no reason to use a png file as background, a jpg file should be used instead imo. tell me if you can’t convert.
2. it might be just me, but the 2nd kiai time should be started from 02:34:606 - ? yes.
3. there is no breaktime in both difficulties. considering the length of this song, it will be better to insert one in somewhere.

[Fionana’s Normal]

1. 00:16:069 (1) - extend to the next red tick to make consistent with 00:19:972 (1) - . there is no big difference between their melodies.
   
2. 00:18:752 (3) - shorten by 1/2 beat and then add a note at the white tick instead to complete the piano line.
   
3. 00:42:411 (5) - this’s 100% optional, but it’d be better for the flow to move this note to rightward slightly considering like this (just rotated by 10% though!) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198156
   

   219,37,42411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   291,130,42899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   175,151,43386,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 01:16:069 (1) - this’s just a suggestion. I prefer to follow the vocal at 01:17:533 - (I mean “ba~by~?”), so how about placing objects instead of this spinner? please add a NC to (6) if you fix.
   
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198177
   

   368,168,76069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   348,288,76557,2,0,P|240:332|144:260,1,240
   100,156,78020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   192,80,78508,6,0,L|320:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 01:59:484 (1,2,3) - this flow looks a bit strange for me, so I suggest this pattern instead. it’s more fitting with the vocal line. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198230
   
   

   128,288,119484,6,0,P|64:296|8:280,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   24,160,120459,2,0,P|88:152|144:168,1,120
   240,240,121435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   293,132,121923,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   ^maybe I forgot to add a new combo. ugh..
6. 02:38:996 (7) - if you wanna make a blanket perfectly, move the 2nd way point to rightward by 1 grid and the 3rd one to leftward by 1grid. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198245
7. 02:42:411 (5) - it’d be better to add a new combo considering the vocal line.

good ( ´;ﾟ;ё;ﾟ;)ｷﾓｰ变人 mod dayo! Fixed all of them.

[Hard]

1. 00:22:899 (9) - add a whistle to the beginning and the end instead of removing one from the reversal point. it’s more fitting with the song.
2. 00:24:850 (1) - since your pattern is following sounds of the drum in this part, this whistle should be removed to respect them.
3. 00:25:825 (1) - add a whistle like 00:26:801 (1) -
4. 00:27:777 (1) - ^
5. 00:28:752 (1) - same as 00:24:850 -
6. 00:29:728 (1) - same as 00:25:825 -
7. 00:29:972 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel these are kidna bad flow. it will be nice if you fix this placement. btw I prefer to make a larger jump with 00:29:972 (2,3) - .
8. 00:35:094 (7,8) - just a suggestion. how about ctrl+G? considering the flow and the melody, it'd be better to place them in the unequal spacing in that way.
9. 01:05:703 - add an extra note here to follow the vocal. I feel it’s more fun.
10. 02:41:191 (11,12,13) - just a suggestion. but I think the way to place 2 triples in a row damages fun. it'd be better at least to make the spacing of 02:40:947 (10,11) - larger.

good luck~ kansya desu! wwwwwwwwwwwwww

______VOSE wrote:

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ww娜娜~~ 喵!

Normal
00:16:069(1) slide尾部拉到下一个红线上(00:16:801) 改了哦~
01:14:606(6) 多加一次reverse
01:16:069(1) 整个拖到下一个长白线(01:16:557)

Hard
02:17:045(7) note移动到x:366 y:285 包住之前跟之后note的位置会比较美观点
02:22:167(1) spin移动到02:22:899 再在之前的02:24:850结束
02:22:167 加上1/2拍的滑条

然后以下各加上note

1. 02:22:533
2. 02:22:655
3. 02:22:777

=v=最后就会像图中一样了
[spoilerbox]

forgive my poor modding GOODLUCK! (」???)」 谢谢 (」???)」喵喵!

-Chata- wrote:

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hello

via your new combo request =3=

[General]

check widescreen support in hard

where is grid? and hit sound =w= In my stomach =v=

[Normal]

00:16:069 (1) - 00:16:801 slider's end here?
00:18:752 (3) - ^ 00:19:240
00:23:874 (1) - put in drum finish here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1310279 sure.
00:35:581 (5) - New combo
01:22:411 (5) - ^
01:49:728 (6) - ^
02:11:191 (6) - ^
02:30:703 (4) - ^
02:42:411 (5) - ^


[Hard]

00:49:728 (1,7) - swap NC
01:09:728 (6,7) - strange. not bit hard
01:11:679 (3,4,5) - ^ it's too, not playable
01:39:728 (6) - New combo
01:58:020 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ =3=
01:59:972 (7) - New combo
02:03:386 (5) - ^
02:40:459 (7) - ^
02:55:581 (5) - ^
03:05:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^^^^^=3= idk but..it probably should be fine x-x ?


over =3= ?????!!

Hollow Wings wrote:

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F妹 鸡翅姐好

General

1. sber请受我一拜，看上去太专业简直目害，估计AE水平也是触爆。。。

Hard

1. 00:29:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个跳再摆个其他的吧，连跳直接接大距离antijumpstream在hard里感觉有点难了
2. 01:25:338 (1,5) - nc移动
3. 全图blanket似乎都不是很在意，不过感觉也没差
4. 难度方面好像比hard的水平难一些，不过既然bpm那么低那估计还是可以接受的吧
5. 我还真不知道找些什么写在这了。。。一直在看sb噗

Normal

1. 00:26:801 (5,1) - 这overlap想办法搞掉吧 故意的，应该还好吧
2. 01:24:362 (8,2) - 这边stack吧，01:26:313 (1) - 的ds变化太明显了
3. 03:16:801 (5,2) - stack 如何T T..

就只有一个kd了不然我多射几个

谢谢☆和mod啦

go rank

Potential wrote:

SPOILER

HARD---------------
00:19:484 移到　00:19:728 ?
00:51:191 new combo ?
00:56:801 ^
01:00:947 ^
01:08:752 移除new combo ?
01:08:996 new combo?
01:20:459 ^
01:35:825 ^
01:39:728 ^
01:47:533 ^
02:05:094 ^
02:17:045 ^
02:36:069 ^
02:48:264 ^
02:56:313 ^



NORMAL--------------------
00:35:581 new combo?
00:51:191 ^
01:41:923 ^

基本上都改了，感谢您的 摸得！！

不會MOD嗄 好難

所以全+了?哦 了解啦~

Darksonic wrote:

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Hey! here is your mod for modding my map ^^ hi hi~

[Normal]

1. 00:21:191 (2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you can make this flow better, maybe like this: (If you change it, you have to fix spacing on the next notes) actually yes
   
2. 00:35:581 (5) - Consider a NC here since vocal changes a bit, and also you won't have too long combos, long ones seem bad in a Normal imo.
3. 00:37:533 (7) - I know this is a Normal but this is SUPER boring, why don't you try a rhythm like this one to follow music much better?: let's make it funner then..
4. 00:40:947 (3) - Unstack it? since you're not stacking 00:42:411 (5,6) - and it's like the same rhythm.
5. 00:49:240 (3) - I don't like too much how this flows, I think a straight slider doesn't fit very good here, my suggestion is copying 00:47:289 (1) then CTRL+J, and place it with correct spacing, I think it flows better.
6. 00:51:191 (5) - If you followed my NC suggestion, then NC here again.
7. 00:53:142 (8) - Same as 00:37:533 (7) -, this rhythm is ugly and boring.
8. 01:05:338 (4) - Stack it properly.
9. 01:22:411 (5) - NC.
10. 01:24:362 (8) - Same as 00:37:533 (7) -.
11. 01:26:801 (2) - Bad stacking.
12. 01:41:923 (6) - NC, and maybe use 2 notes instead like you did on 01:22:411 (5,6) - ?
13. 01:45:338 (1) - Remove this note and then try this rhythm again, fits much better:
14. 01:58:508 (4) - I'm personally not a big fan of straight sliders, it ruins the flow a bit imo if you place another one before, why don't you try a curved slider here instead? because i'm a big fan of straight sliders..just kiddin'
15. 02:10:703 (5) - Stack it properly.
16. 02:11:191 (6) - Aaaand in this case flows bad again because the straight slider, maybe try this?: [spoilerbox]
17. 02:30:703 (4) - NC.
18. 02:30:508 (6) - Add Finish and NC, then remove NC on 02:40:459 (5) - and add it on 02:42:411 (5) - since kiai starts and is much better if a new combo starts there.
19. 03:04:850 (5,1,2) -: You can improve this, mainly because that overlap seems awkward, what do you think about this?: great.
20. 03:18:020 (2) - Stack it properly.
21. 03:21:191 - Add a 1/4 slider here or a note at least, feels empty and music still sounds here.

[Hard]

1. 00:40:947 (4) - Uuuugly overlap, maybe try moving it to x:152 y:256? just preferrrred to place here!
2. 00:42:899 (9) - I'd like to see a 1/2 slider here instead, this feels a bit empty and boring without notes or something to press, and also I can hear music here, so it will fit.
3. 00:45:094 (4) - Improve this blanket, like this:
4. 00:48:752 (5) - CTRL+G?
5. 00:51:191 (7) - NC.
6. 01:13:142 (2) - ^
7. 01:20:459 (7) - Once again a ugly overlap, why don't you try to stack it with 01:19:484 (5) - ? seems nice imo (and if you do it you'll have to fix spacing on the next pattern).
8. 01:23:386 (3,4,5,6) - First two sliders are fine but this ones... there's no need to have them all imo, makes your pattern really boring and rhythm is a bit weird, I know you can change this.. like replacing some sliders with notes instead to make it more fun, also these 1/3 sliders don't fit with the song.
9. 01:26:313 (5) - NC and Finish.
10. 01:47:533 (6) - CTRL+G?
11. 01:58:508 (1) - I don't see why you added a NC here, remove it and add it on 01:59:484 (6) - instead.
12. 01:59:484 (6) - Finish.
13. 02:15:094 (2) - Stack it properly and add Finish.
14. 02:34:606 (2) - Finish.
15. 02:39:240 (4) - CTRL+G?
16. 02:40:409 (7) - ^
17. 02:50:216 (1) - Finish.
18. 02:58:020 (1) - Two repeats are booooring, also you didn't use them on 03:01:923 (1) - so I guess you can change rhythm here, maybe like this?:
19. 03:21:191 - Same I pointed on Normal diff, but here you could add 2 1/4 notes instead.

There are many places where you can use Finish instead Whistle, notes sound much better with Finish, I didn't point them all, just some of them, of course this suggestion is for both diffs, consider it.

Sure, added some finish as you said. That is a rly good mod, thank you!!

Nice map, I love ClariS <3. Good luck!

Neta wrote:

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Hi~ from my modding Queue

I love ClariS XD me too XD

my mod is all suggestion so it can be not helpful


[Normal]

1. 00:49:240 (3) - move to 200, 316 will be better
2. 01:09:728 (6) - make reverse point watching 5th note. it's little out of step
3. 02:00:947 (2) - 240, 244 will be better
4. 02:35:581 (3,4,5) - make same shape this three
5. 03:00:947 (4) - as same as second mod http://puu.sh/79Cw7.jpg
6. 03:14:606 (2) - ^http://puu.sh/79CxT.jpg

[Hard]

1. 00:37:533 (6,7) - make same?
2. 01:13:142 (2) - Ctrl + G?
3. 01:29:972 (5) - move to 296, 312 will be better
4. 01:53:630 (7,9) - better make same shape
5. 02:18:020 (10,11) - ^

NICE SB!!

STAR~

Thank you for the mod and star!!!!!!!!

i love this song good luck~

No Dap wrote:

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Hi~ hey!

[Normal]
Hp-1 OD-1 since it's a slow and calm song. okey dok, make it easier for beginner then~=-=
00:35:581 (5) - NC
00:51:191 (5) - ^
01:22:411 (5) - ^
01:28:264 (4,5,6) - How about doing this? So you can cut Combo according to the vocal.


01:41:923 (6) - NC
02:10:703 (5) - ^
02:28:508 (2) - ^
02:30:703 (4) - ^
02:37:533 (5) - ^
02:42:411 (5) - ^

most of them are fixed!! and others it'd be fine because I place the NC by stress accent.

[Hard]
I would definitely suggest HP-1 because of parts like this 02:26:801 (1,1,2,1,2)
00:23:874 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't really know about this. this is gonna be pain in the butt for HR players. If I were you I would remap this part.
00:40:216 (3,4) - I think it will look better if not overlapped like this
00:44:606 (2,4) - blanket properly
00:48:752 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It looked fine when i test played, but still, I think it would look a lot more better if you spread them out.
00:50:947 (6) - NC
00:53:142 (6,1) - why not move 1 to blanket?
00:56:801 (1) - NC
01:00:703 (6) - ^
01:04:362 (6,1,2,3) - this kind seems a bit had
01:09:728 (6,7) - I honestly think this is too much distance. move 7 to somewhere 72:200
01:11:191 (2) - Why not something like this for better flow? http://puu.sh/7a40R.jpg
01:11:923 (4,5) - reduce distance a bit?
01:21:191 (9) - NC
01:23:874 (4,5) - I don't think these 4/3 fit here, if you were following vocal.
01:36:801 (9) - NC
01:39:728 (6) - ^
01:48:508 (8) - ^
01:54:118 (8,9) - reduce distance a bit?
01:59:972 (7) - NC
02:16:557 (6) - ^
02:18:996 (1) - crtl + g for better flow?
02:22:045 (1) - finish with 30~40% volume?
02:40:703 (8) - NC
02:48:508 (9) - ^
02:52:411 (5) - move this somewhere else. it looks very awkward. don't you think it's way more flow than move it to somewhere else~?
02:56:313 (7,8,9) - reduce triple distance + NC on 7

Hope my mod helped >~< yea definitely OvO!



Very nice map and song!! good luck!!! Thank you!!!!!!!

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

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hihi oo/ cryo//

normal

1. 00:16:069 (1) - end slider at 00:16:801
2. 00:18:752 (3) - end at 00:19:240
3. 01:14:606 (6) - remove it, add note + start spinner at 01:14:850
4. 01:22:411 (5) - nc
5. 01:30:216 (6) - nc
6. 01:41:923 (6) - nc
7. 02:03:386 (5) - nc
8. 02:11:191 (6) - nc + curve it a bit http://puu.sh/7cuLv.jpg
9. 02:30:703 (4) - nc
10. 02:42:411 (5) - nc
11. 02:49:240 (5) - maybe change it to http://puu.sh/7cuW6.jpg hm, keep it for now.
12. 03:20:947 (6) - maybe this too http://puu.sh/7cv0O.jpg yes.
    a lot of missing hitsounds, you didnt add them on purpose/havent finished diff yet/dont know where to add o.o?
    rhytm fine

purposely didn't add them, so if that's not rly okay I will add them then o.o! others are fixed.

hard

1. 00:19:484 (8) - i think better without this note
2. 00:44:606 (2) - looks better http://puu.sh/7cvlQ.jpg
3. 00:50:459 (4,5,6) - i think this overlaps unnecessary, http://puu.sh/7cvnW.jpg
4. 00:51:191 (7) - nc
5. 00:57:777 (9) - nc
6. 01:00:948 (7) - nc
7. 01:10:459 (7) - umm i think jump should be on next slider instead of this note, or just equal spacing idk http://puu.sh/7cvDX.jpg
8. 01:20:459 (7) - nc
9. 01:25:338 (1,2,3,4) - looks better http://puu.sh/7cvHA.jpg
10. 01:26:313 (5) - nc
11. 01:35:825 (5) - nc
12. 01:40:703 (8) - nc
13. 01:48:264 (7) - nc
14. 01:59:972 (7) - nc
15. 02:05:094 (8) - nc
16. 02:15:094 (2) - start nc from here instead 02:14:606 (1) -
17. 02:17:045 (6) - nc
18. 02:55:581 (5) - nc
19. 03:21:191,03:21:313 - add 2 notes
    more nc more colorful yey
    A lot of missing hitsounds here aswell, too many to write everything, also a lot of them allready mentioned by previous moders, just catch me in game if you will have some troubles

Good luck ★ヾ(･ω･*)ﾉ Thank you cRyooo!! ヾ(*･ ω･)ﾉ

kaminohara orz

Flask wrote:

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Hollow Wings wrote:

F妹

這樣好像在說我啊 lol 本来就是
姊姊我來還債了 >~<

[General]

1. 因為有SB的緣故可以把Letterbox勾掉

[Hard]

1. 00:57:777 (9) - 後面都14combo了 TAT 這裡NC吧, 01:00:703 (6) - 這個地方也是
2. 01:19:972 (6) - 基於01:20:216 - 是新lyric的原因, 用一個滑條尾巴帶過去太隨便了! 至少要拆成兩個note才行 (或者是拆成兩個note之後從01:20:216 - 拉個滑條出來, 後面的節奏也得改就是惹..)
3. 01:23:874 (4,5,6) - 這裡的vocal起點不是都是在紅線嗎 為什麼三個滑條都是在白線啊!! 最好改一下
4. 02:41:191 (11,12,13) - 可以跟02:40:459 (7,8) - 擺個正三角形 (?
5. 02:48:264 (8) - 同前面 NC
6. 03:21:191 - 這後面還有音, 加個1/4滑條如何?

NC都改了哦

[Normal]

• 找不出東西TAT

好評! 是說全程沒clap有點詭異..

感谢F妹的mod!!!!!!!

Flask wrote:

Hollow Wings wrote:

F妹

這樣好像在說我啊 lol
姊姊我來還債了 >~<

Fycho wrote:

SPOILER

Hollow Wings wrote:

F妹

這樣好像在說我啊 lol 本来就是你！

这明显是说我啊>,<难道是花花？

heya~from in-game pm.

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]

• 
  音效太轻太柔了，KIAI之类的可以用用clap（默认的不好听可以找一个合适的），就算是whistle也可以多加点。感觉嘛，音效简陋了点，和SB比起来有点。。。

[Hard]

1. 00:31:679 (1) -头上加finish明显要好吧，音乐里有cymbal音，如果嫌吵可以音量调低
2. 00:47:289 (1) –头上漏finish
3. 01:02:411 (7) –头上加个finish，配合音乐听起来更佳
4. 01:02:899 (1) -^
5. 01:02:899 –这一段怎么不加音效，空空的缺乏打击感
6. 01:34:118 (1) –头上加finish
7. 01:41:923 (1) -^
8. 02:03:386 (1) –头加finish？配合SB一闪效果不错
9. 02:19:972 (3) –这个头上也加finish比较好，因为和音乐里1和5是一样的，甚至比1还强一点
10. 02:32:411 (4) –重音很强，头上加个finish？
11. 03:05:825 (1) –头加finish
12. 03:16:313 –这里可以放个三连做点变化，最后四句节奏一样有点无聊。像normal那样变一下滑条/circle组合也可以。
13. 03:17:777 –这个也是，如果要加三连的话位置可以变化一下
14. 03:21:191 –加circle？这有个音

[Normal]

1. 00:26:801 (5,1) –避免无意义的overlap，把1往左下放点
2. 01:14:606 (6) –加个NC？
3. 02:18:996 (1) –尾巴finish，cymbal音很明显的
4. 02:21:923 (4) –首finish
5. 01:14:606 (6) -转盘后面的圈加whistle跟钢琴？和转盘一样
6. 02:33:630 (8) –节奏上换成一个1/2的折返滑条比较好 先keep吧~
7. 03:15:581 –音效好轻，25%几乎听不见，建议还是35左右
8. 03:17:289 –根据rank criteria，非转盘音效的音量降低到20%以下是unrankable的，建议还是35%左右，没必要逐渐缩减，音乐里的鼓点这里强弱都是一样的。Hard也是，忘记说了
9. 03:16:801 (5) –好萌的滑条><

当然！w
其实很多Hard里的音效建议在Normal也一样，看你hard改了normal没改就说一下了。

其他的全改了都

Good luck. Thank you!!!!!!!!!
(ノ・ω・)ノ for awesome storyboard.