KSHR wrote:
SPOILERmodding (did this about 1 month ago)
[General][Fionana’s Normal]
- if there is no reason to use a png file as background, a jpg file should be used instead imo. tell me if you can’t convert.
- it might be just me, but the 2nd kiai time should be started from 02:34:606 - ? yes.
- there is no breaktime in both difficulties. considering the length of this song, it will be better to insert one in somewhere.
good ( ´;゚;ё;゚;)キモー变人 mod dayo! Fixed all of them.
- 00:16:069 (1) - extend to the next red tick to make consistent with 00:19:972 (1) - . there is no big difference between their melodies.
- 00:18:752 (3) - shorten by 1/2 beat and then add a note at the white tick instead to complete the piano line.
- 00:42:411 (5) - this’s 100% optional, but it’d be better for the flow to move this note to rightward slightly considering like this (just rotated by 10% though!) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198156
219,37,42411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,130,42899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,151,43386,1,0,0:0:0:0:- 01:16:069 (1) - this’s just a suggestion. I prefer to follow the vocal at 01:17:533 - (I mean “ba~by~?”), so how about placing objects instead of this spinner? please add a NC to (6) if you fix.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198177368,168,76069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,288,76557,2,0,P|240:332|144:260,1,240
100,156,78020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,78508,6,0,L|320:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:59:484 (1,2,3) - this flow looks a bit strange for me, so I suggest this pattern instead. it’s more fitting with the vocal line. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198230
128,288,119484,6,0,P|64:296|8:280,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:^maybe I forgot to add a new combo. ugh..
24,160,120459,2,0,P|88:152|144:168,1,120
240,240,121435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,132,121923,1,0,0:0:0:0:- 02:38:996 (7) - if you wanna make a blanket perfectly, move the 2nd way point to rightward by 1 grid and the 3rd one to leftward by 1grid. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1198245
- 02:42:411 (5) - it’d be better to add a new combo considering the vocal line.
[Hard]
- 00:22:899 (9) - add a whistle to the beginning and the end instead of removing one from the reversal point. it’s more fitting with the song.
- 00:24:850 (1) - since your pattern is following sounds of the drum in this part, this whistle should be removed to respect them.
- 00:25:825 (1) - add a whistle like 00:26:801 (1) -
- 00:27:777 (1) - ^
- 00:28:752 (1) - same as 00:24:850 -
- 00:29:728 (1) - same as 00:25:825 -
- 00:29:972 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel these are kidna bad flow. it will be nice if you fix this placement. btw I prefer to make a larger jump with 00:29:972 (2,3) - .
- 00:35:094 (7,8) - just a suggestion. how about ctrl+G? considering the flow and the melody, it'd be better to place them in the unequal spacing in that way.
- 01:05:703 - add an extra note here to follow the vocal. I feel it’s more fun.
- 02:41:191 (11,12,13) - just a suggestion. but I think the way to place 2 triples in a row damages fun. it'd be better at least to make the spacing of 02:40:947 (10,11) - larger.
good luck~ kansya desu! wwwwwwwwwwwwww
______VOSE wrote:
SPOILERww娜娜~~ 喵!
Normal
00:16:069(1) slide尾部拉到下一个红线上(00:16:801) 改了哦~
01:14:606(6) 多加一次reverse
01:16:069(1) 整个拖到下一个长白线(01:16:557)
Hard
02:17:045(7) note移动到x:366 y:285 包住之前跟之后note的位置会比较美观点
02:22:167(1) spin移动到02:22:899 再在之前的02:24:850结束
02:22:167 加上1/2拍的滑条
然后以下各加上note=v=最后就会像图中一样了
- 02:22:533
- 02:22:655
- 02:22:777
[spoilerbox]
forgive my poor modding GOODLUCK! (」???)」 谢谢 (」???)」喵喵!
-Chata- wrote:
SPOILERhello
via your new combo request =3=
[General]
check widescreen support in hard
where is grid? and hit sound =w= In my stomach =v=
[Normal]
00:16:069 (1) - 00:16:801 slider's end here?
00:18:752 (3) - ^ 00:19:240
00:23:874 (1) - put in drum finish here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1310279 sure.
00:35:581 (5) - New combo
01:22:411 (5) - ^
01:49:728 (6) - ^
02:11:191 (6) - ^
02:30:703 (4) - ^
02:42:411 (5) - ^
[Hard]
00:49:728 (1,7) - swap NC
01:09:728 (6,7) - strange. not bit hard
01:11:679 (3,4,5) - ^ it's too, not playable
01:39:728 (6) - New combo
01:58:020 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ =3=
01:59:972 (7) - New combo
02:03:386 (5) - ^
02:40:459 (7) - ^
02:55:581 (5) - ^
03:05:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^^^^^=3= idk but..it probably should be fine x-x ?
over =3= ?????!!
Hollow Wings wrote:
SPOILERF妹 鸡翅姐好General
- sber请受我一拜,看上去太专业简直目害,估计AE水平也是触爆。。。
Hard
- 00:29:728 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个跳再摆个其他的吧,连跳直接接大距离antijumpstream在hard里感觉有点难了
- 01:25:338 (1,5) - nc移动
- 全图blanket似乎都不是很在意,不过感觉也没差
- 难度方面好像比hard的水平难一些,不过既然bpm那么低那估计还是可以接受的吧
- 我还真不知道找些什么写在这了。。。一直在看sb噗
就只有一个kd了不然我多射几个Normal
- 00:26:801 (5,1) - 这overlap想办法搞掉吧 故意的,应该还好吧
- 01:24:362 (8,2) - 这边stack吧,01:26:313 (1) - 的ds变化太明显了
- 03:16:801 (5,2) - stack 如何T T..
谢谢☆和mod啦
go rank
Potential wrote:
SPOILERHARD---------------
00:19:484 移到 00:19:728 ?
00:51:191 new combo ?
00:56:801 ^
01:00:947 ^
01:08:752 移除new combo ?
01:08:996 new combo?
01:20:459 ^
01:35:825 ^
01:39:728 ^
01:47:533 ^
02:05:094 ^
02:17:045 ^
02:36:069 ^
02:48:264 ^
02:56:313 ^
NORMAL--------------------
00:35:581 new combo?
00:51:191 ^
01:41:923 ^
基本上都改了,感谢您的 摸得!!
不會MOD嗄 好難
所以全+了?哦 了解啦~
Darksonic wrote:
SPOILERHey! here is your mod for modding my map ^^ hi hi~
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:21:191 (2,3,4) - I'm pretty sure you can make this flow better, maybe like this: (If you change it, you have to fix spacing on the next notes) actually yes
- 00:35:581 (5) - Consider a NC here since vocal changes a bit, and also you won't have too long combos, long ones seem bad in a Normal imo.
- 00:37:533 (7) - I know this is a Normal but this is SUPER boring, why don't you try a rhythm like this one to follow music much better?: let's make it funner then..
- 00:40:947 (3) - Unstack it? since you're not stacking 00:42:411 (5,6) - and it's like the same rhythm.
- 00:49:240 (3) - I don't like too much how this flows, I think a straight slider doesn't fit very good here, my suggestion is copying 00:47:289 (1) then CTRL+J, and place it with correct spacing, I think it flows better.
- 00:51:191 (5) - If you followed my NC suggestion, then NC here again.
- 00:53:142 (8) - Same as 00:37:533 (7) -, this rhythm is ugly and boring.
- 01:05:338 (4) - Stack it properly.
- 01:22:411 (5) - NC.
- 01:24:362 (8) - Same as 00:37:533 (7) -.
- 01:26:801 (2) - Bad stacking.
- 01:41:923 (6) - NC, and maybe use 2 notes instead like you did on 01:22:411 (5,6) - ?
- 01:45:338 (1) - Remove this note and then try this rhythm again, fits much better:
- 01:58:508 (4) - I'm personally not a big fan of straight sliders, it ruins the flow a bit imo if you place another one before, why don't you try a curved slider here instead? because i'm a big fan of straight sliders..just kiddin'
- 02:10:703 (5) - Stack it properly.
- 02:11:191 (6) - Aaaand in this case flows bad again because the straight slider, maybe try this?: [spoilerbox]
- 02:30:703 (4) - NC.
- 02:30:508 (6) - Add Finish and NC, then remove NC on 02:40:459 (5) - and add it on 02:42:411 (5) - since kiai starts and is much better if a new combo starts there.
- 03:04:850 (5,1,2) -: You can improve this, mainly because that overlap seems awkward, what do you think about this?: great.
- 03:18:020 (2) - Stack it properly.
- 03:21:191 - Add a 1/4 slider here or a note at least, feels empty and music still sounds here.
There are many places where you can use Finish instead Whistle, notes sound much better with Finish, I didn't point them all, just some of them, of course this suggestion is for both diffs, consider it.
- 00:40:947 (4) - Uuuugly overlap, maybe try moving it to x:152 y:256? just preferrrred to place here!
- 00:42:899 (9) - I'd like to see a 1/2 slider here instead, this feels a bit empty and boring without notes or something to press, and also I can hear music here, so it will fit.
- 00:45:094 (4) - Improve this blanket, like this:
- 00:48:752 (5) - CTRL+G?
- 00:51:191 (7) - NC.
- 01:13:142 (2) - ^
- 01:20:459 (7) - Once again a ugly overlap, why don't you try to stack it with 01:19:484 (5) - ? seems nice imo (and if you do it you'll have to fix spacing on the next pattern).
- 01:23:386 (3,4,5,6) - First two sliders are fine but this ones... there's no need to have them all imo, makes your pattern really boring and rhythm is a bit weird, I know you can change this.. like replacing some sliders with notes instead to make it more fun, also these 1/3 sliders don't fit with the song.
- 01:26:313 (5) - NC and Finish.
- 01:47:533 (6) - CTRL+G?
- 01:58:508 (1) - I don't see why you added a NC here, remove it and add it on 01:59:484 (6) - instead.
- 01:59:484 (6) - Finish.
- 02:15:094 (2) - Stack it properly and add Finish.
- 02:34:606 (2) - Finish.
- 02:39:240 (4) - CTRL+G?
- 02:40:409 (7) - ^
- 02:50:216 (1) - Finish.
- 02:58:020 (1) - Two repeats are booooring, also you didn't use them on 03:01:923 (1) - so I guess you can change rhythm here, maybe like this?:
- 03:21:191 - Same I pointed on Normal diff, but here you could add 2 1/4 notes instead.
Sure, added some finish as you said. That is a rly good mod, thank you!!
Nice map, I love ClariS <3. Good luck!
Neta wrote:
SPOILERHi~ from my modding Queue
I love ClariS XD me too XD
my mod is all suggestion so it can be not helpful
[Normal]
- 00:49:240 (3) - move to 200, 316 will be better
- 01:09:728 (6) - make reverse point watching 5th note. it's little out of step
- 02:00:947 (2) - 240, 244 will be better
- 02:35:581 (3,4,5) - make same shape this three
- 03:00:947 (4) - as same as second mod http://puu.sh/79Cw7.jpg
- 03:14:606 (2) - ^http://puu.sh/79CxT.jpg
[Hard]NICE SB!!
- 00:37:533 (6,7) - make same?
- 01:13:142 (2) - Ctrl + G?
- 01:29:972 (5) - move to 296, 312 will be better
- 01:53:630 (7,9) - better make same shape
- 02:18:020 (10,11) - ^
STAR~
Thank you for the mod and star!!!!!!!!
i love this song good luck~
>yukinoharaNo Dap wrote:
SPOILERHi~ hey!
[Normal]
Hp-1 OD-1 since it's a slow and calm song. okey dok, make it easier for beginner then~=-=
00:35:581 (5) - NC
00:51:191 (5) - ^
01:22:411 (5) - ^
01:28:264 (4,5,6) - How about doing this? So you can cut Combo according to the vocal.
01:41:923 (6) - NC
02:10:703 (5) - ^
02:28:508 (2) - ^
02:30:703 (4) - ^
02:37:533 (5) - ^
02:42:411 (5) - ^
most of them are fixed!! and others it'd be fine because I place the NC by stress accent.
[Hard]
I would definitely suggest HP-1 because of parts like this 02:26:801 (1,1,2,1,2)
00:23:874 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't really know about this. this is gonna be pain in the butt for HR players. If I were you I would remap this part.
00:40:216 (3,4) - I think it will look better if not overlapped like this
00:44:606 (2,4) - blanket properly
00:48:752 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It looked fine when i test played, but still, I think it would look a lot more better if you spread them out.
00:50:947 (6) - NC
00:53:142 (6,1) - why not move 1 to blanket?
00:56:801 (1) - NC
01:00:703 (6) - ^
01:04:362 (6,1,2,3) - this kind seems a bit had
01:09:728 (6,7) - I honestly think this is too much distance. move 7 to somewhere 72:200
01:11:191 (2) - Why not something like this for better flow? http://puu.sh/7a40R.jpg
01:11:923 (4,5) - reduce distance a bit?
01:21:191 (9) - NC
01:23:874 (4,5) - I don't think these 4/3 fit here, if you were following vocal.
01:36:801 (9) - NC
01:39:728 (6) - ^
01:48:508 (8) - ^
01:54:118 (8,9) - reduce distance a bit?
01:59:972 (7) - NC
02:16:557 (6) - ^
02:18:996 (1) - crtl + g for better flow?
02:22:045 (1) - finish with 30~40% volume?
02:40:703 (8) - NC
02:48:508 (9) - ^
02:52:411 (5) - move this somewhere else. it looks very awkward. don't you think it's way more flow than move it to somewhere else~?
02:56:313 (7,8,9) - reduce triple distance + NC on 7
Hope my mod helped >~< yea definitely OvO!
Very nice map and song!! good luck!!! Thank you!!!!!!!
了解啦
cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
SPOILERhihi oo/ cryo//normalpurposely didn't add them, so if that's not rly okay I will add them then o.o! others are fixed.
- 00:16:069 (1) - end slider at 00:16:801
- 00:18:752 (3) - end at 00:19:240
- 01:14:606 (6) - remove it, add note + start spinner at 01:14:850
- 01:22:411 (5) - nc
- 01:30:216 (6) - nc
- 01:41:923 (6) - nc
- 02:03:386 (5) - nc
- 02:11:191 (6) - nc + curve it a bit http://puu.sh/7cuLv.jpg
- 02:30:703 (4) - nc
- 02:42:411 (5) - nc
- 02:49:240 (5) - maybe change it to http://puu.sh/7cuW6.jpg hm, keep it for now.
- 03:20:947 (6) - maybe this too http://puu.sh/7cv0O.jpg yes.
a lot of missing hitsounds, you didnt add them on purpose/havent finished diff yet/dont know where to add o.o?
rhytm finehard
- 00:19:484 (8) - i think better without this note
- 00:44:606 (2) - looks better http://puu.sh/7cvlQ.jpg
- 00:50:459 (4,5,6) - i think this overlaps unnecessary, http://puu.sh/7cvnW.jpg
- 00:51:191 (7) - nc
- 00:57:777 (9) - nc
- 01:00:948 (7) - nc
- 01:10:459 (7) - umm i think jump should be on next slider instead of this note, or just equal spacing idk http://puu.sh/7cvDX.jpg
- 01:20:459 (7) - nc
- 01:25:338 (1,2,3,4) - looks better http://puu.sh/7cvHA.jpg
- 01:26:313 (5) - nc
- 01:35:825 (5) - nc
- 01:40:703 (8) - nc
- 01:48:264 (7) - nc
- 01:59:972 (7) - nc
- 02:05:094 (8) - nc
- 02:15:094 (2) - start nc from here instead 02:14:606 (1) -
- 02:17:045 (6) - nc
- 02:55:581 (5) - nc
- 03:21:191,03:21:313 - add 2 notes
more nc more colorful yey
A lot of missing hitsounds here aswell, too many to write everything, also a lot of them allready mentioned by previous moders, just catch me in game if you will have some troubles
Good luck ★ヾ(・ω・*)ノ Thank you cRyooo!! ヾ(*・ ω・)ノ
kaminohara orz
Thank you y'all~Flask wrote:
SPOILER這樣好像在說我啊 lol 本来就是Hollow Wings wrote:
F妹
姊姊我來還債了 >~<
[General][Hard]
- 因為有SB的緣故可以把Letterbox勾掉
NC都改了哦
- 00:57:777 (9) - 後面都14combo了 TAT 這裡NC吧, 01:00:703 (6) - 這個地方也是
- 01:19:972 (6) - 基於01:20:216 - 是新lyric的原因, 用一個滑條尾巴帶過去太隨便了! 至少要拆成兩個note才行 (或者是拆成兩個note之後從01:20:216 - 拉個滑條出來, 後面的節奏也得改就是惹..)
- 01:23:874 (4,5,6) - 這裡的vocal起點不是都是在紅線嗎 為什麼三個滑條都是在白線啊!! 最好改一下
- 02:41:191 (11,12,13) - 可以跟02:40:459 (7,8) - 擺個正三角形 (?
- 02:48:264 (8) - 同前面 NC
- 03:21:191 - 這後面還有音, 加個1/4滑條如何?
[Normal]好評! 是說全程沒clap有點詭異..
- 找不出東西TAT
感谢F妹的mod!!!!!!!