all else fixed. thanks for modding !
Also for 00:06:108 - 00:08:765, try using this rhythm for better follow with the vocals:
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00:13:608 (4,1) - Are too close together. these distances are fine.
00:15:952 (4,1) - ^
00:35:952 (4,1) - ^
00:31:265 (1,2) - Are too far apart.
...Ahh too much DS changing in this diff @_@ stuck to using only one DS (eg 1.1) and stick to it throughout the entire map.