1. BG: you should change BG size to 1024*768 or 1366*768
2. normal-diff(easiest diff) is too difficult for beginner. you should make normal-diff easier or add easy-diff
3. I suggest to add AudioLeadin 2000~3000 because of starting suddenly
4. ComboColor 2 and 3 are too similar to distinguish
5. I suggest to add soft sliderslide.wave of silence

1. for easiest-diff, you should not change SV(SliderVelocity). expecially, SVx1.20 is very hard
2. for easiest-diff, you should conform DS(DistanceSpacing). for example, 00:05:171 (4,1) - is not good

1. 00:15:015 (4) - I prefer slider: 00:15:015~00:15:171
2. 00:24:702- whistle?
3. 01:16:265 (3) - I prefer slider: 01:16:265~01:16:733
   
4. 02:17:202 (3,4,2) - avoid overlap
5. 03:24:390 (2,3) - I prefer to make symmetric
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:38:452 (3,4,2) - avoid overlap

1. 01:06:108- add a note
2. 01:14:702- clap
3. 01:31:265- whistle
4. 01:31:577- normal-hitnormal?
5. 02:10:796 (5,6) - exchange their position
6. 02:19:077 (6) - x:264 y:308 (stack correctly)
7. 03:31:733 (4,5,6,7,1) - it looks awkward. how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   336,234,211733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   229,101,211890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   394,146,212046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   234,207,212202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   328,64,212358,5,2,0:0:0:0:

RandomEffect wrote:

[General]

1. BG: you should change BG size to 1024*768 or 1366*768 done
2. normal-diff(easiest diff) is too difficult for beginner. you should make normal-diff easier or add easy-diff I'll try to make one ;w;
3. I suggest to add AudioLeadin 2000~3000 because of starting suddenly finally figured out how to do this haha
4. ComboColor 2 and 3 are too similar to distinguish made 3 lighter...hope that helps
5. I suggest to add soft sliderslide.wave of silence done

[Normal]

1. for easiest-diff, you should not change SV(SliderVelocity). expecially, SVx1.20 is very hard not fixed for now
2. for easiest-diff, you should conform DS(DistanceSpacing). for example, 00:05:171 (4,1) - is not good some fixed, not all for now

[Hard]

1. 00:15:015 (4) - I prefer slider: 00:15:015~00:15:171 i think that makes it too hard ><
2. 00:24:702- whistle? added
3. 01:16:265 (3) - I prefer slider: 01:16:265~01:16:733] added
   
4. 02:17:202 (3,4,2) - avoid overlap tried to fix
5. 03:24:390 (2,3) - I prefer to make symmetric fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:38:452 (3,4,2) - avoid overlap fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:06:108- add a note not fixed, seems overmapped that way
2. 01:14:702- clap oops. fixed
3. 01:31:265- whistle fixed
4. 01:31:577- normal-hitnormal? fix~
5. 02:10:796 (5,6) - exchange their position fix for now
6. 02:19:077 (6) - x:264 y:308 (stack correctly) fix!
7. 03:31:733 (4,5,6,7,1) - it looks awkward. how about this? did something a little different
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   336,234,211733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   229,101,211890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   394,146,212046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   234,207,212202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   328,64,212358,5,2,0:0:0:0:

I'm glad if you reply to my modding
~Good Luck~

Tuxdude143 wrote:

For normal I'm noticing some minor timing issues. The beats just sound "off". Listen through the whole thing and you'll probably see what I mean.
can you point out which notes are offbeat? I'm not very good at rhythm ;~;

Some of the designs just seem odd to me. At one point I didn't even see a hit circle that was hiding under another one. fixed this.

Last thing to mention is the grid. A lot of the beats and hit circles are nearing the edge of the grid. If they go off the grid then they will actually disapear off the screen of an osu player playing osu in a 4:3 screen res. Your map is playable in a 4:3 res but the hit objects are getting a little close to the edge of the grid. Just keep in mind that if its off the grid, its off the screen. I've tested the map multiple times on 4:3 screen, nothing seems wrong

I can't see much wrong with hard except that grid issue again so just keep that in mind. same as above

Sellenite wrote:

[Insane]
00:25:171 (4,5,6,1) - actually slience these is not good not fixed

RatedNC17 wrote:

[Normal]
I think SV change and spacing makes this quite hard. Should get more opinions on this diff
what happened was I mapped hard diff first which started with 0.75 SV then went onto 1.00 SV. Then I mapped Normal with the same timing points and adjusted the SV to be slow enough at 0.75, forgetting I had a 1.00 change later on... Then I mapped 1.00 without realizing this and now it's really fast ; w ;

[Hard]
00:51:577 (4,1,2,3) - this is pretty bland. you should space them by 0.10x distance so it looks something like this

SPOILER

made all of them into triangles at 1.00 distance

00:43:140 to 00:43:608 - why not map this? I didn't know the rhythm at that part because I'm not very good...I had left it empty because I was scared Hopefully it's all good now. I put spinners on Normal during those parts as well...hopefully there's enough of a pause for recovery ^^;;

1. 00:08:608 (1,1) - Gap too short for an Easy?
2. 01:49:390 (1,1) - Gap also too short? (Why not make similar to 00:43:765 (1) - ?)

1. As much as possible, spacing should be kept consistent throughout a Normal.
2. Also, SV changes are a bit difficult for players in the 'Normal level'. (This makes your normal look a bit more like Hard-)
3. 00:12:358 (3,4,5) - Is this pattern not too difficult for a Normal? (Why not Ctrl+G on slider 4 and adjust a bit?)
4. 00:47:827 (4) - Slider end can be adjusted to better approach next object (for spacing consistency)
5. 01:01:890 - This sounds like a good beat to fill with a circle.
6. 01:29:077 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Varying spacing makes this pattern painful for a Normal. (First 2 sliders are two far apart, while slider 3 and circle 1 are too close.)
7. 01:35:952 (3) - (Nazi) Blanket can be better (adjust slider head left 1 grid and slider end 1 grid down and right.)
8. 01:39:390 (1) - (Nazi) Blanket can also be made better (especially since this is a long slider). (You can move the circle back by a 1/4 tick to check blanket.)
9. 03:05:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon pattern can be made neater (use Create Polygon Circles function in Compose menu) (You might have to modify some succeeding objects a bit if applied.)

1. 00:21:265 - You can add a spinner here if you like.
2. 00:56:733 (4) - NC here instead of preceding slider 1?
3. 02:02:358 (4) - ^
4. 02:22:046 (1) - Move spinner start to 02:22:358 then change 02:21:890 (3) into a 1/1 slider?

1. 00:04:858 (5) - NC
2. 01:01:890 (1,2,3) - The stack feels dead to the right hand (or it's just me)
3. 02:22:046 (1) - Pretty much the same suggestion as Hard. Move slider start a bit further in time and map the ensuing gap.

Eyenine wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:08:608 (1,1) - Gap too short for an Easy? made spinner one whole bar ahead
2. 01:49:390 (1,1) - Gap also too short? (Why not make similar to 00:43:765 (1) - ?) oops fixed

[Normal]

1. As much as possible, spacing should be kept consistent throughout a Normal. x_x i get bored and put jumps everywhere
2. Also, SV changes are a bit difficult for players in the 'Normal level'. (This makes your normal look a bit more like Hard-) this was due to poor planning ;w; i might have to remap based on BAT post...
3. 00:12:358 (3,4,5) - Is this pattern not too difficult for a Normal? (Why not Ctrl+G on slider 4 and adjust a bit?) fix
4. 00:47:827 (4) - Slider end can be adjusted to better approach next object (for spacing consistency) fix
5. 01:01:890 - This sounds like a good beat to fill with a circle. added
6. 01:29:077 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Varying spacing makes this pattern painful for a Normal. (First 2 sliders are two far apart, while slider 3 and circle 1 are too close.) fix.. changed the rhythm in order to do so
7. 01:35:952 (3) - (Nazi) Blanket can be better (adjust slider head left 1 grid and slider end 1 grid down and right.) fix
8. 01:39:390 (1) - (Nazi) Blanket can also be made better (especially since this is a long slider). (You can move the circle back by a 1/4 tick to check blanket.) fix
9. 03:05:015 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon pattern can be made neater (use Create Polygon Circles function in Compose menu) (You might have to modify some succeeding objects a bit if applied.) oh that's how people make stars. fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:21:265 - You can add a spinner here if you like. not added. specifically mapped for a little pause
2. 00:56:733 (4) - NC here instead of preceding slider 1? fix
3. 02:02:358 (4) - ^ fix
4. 02:22:046 (1) - Move spinner start to 02:22:358 then change 02:21:890 (3) into a 1/1 slider? i'm not good at long sliderss.... tried to add anyways... the rhythm is better but my slider looks bad ;w;

[Insane]

1. 00:04:858 (5) - NC not fixed
2. 01:01:890 (1,2,3) - The stack feels dead to the right hand (or it's just me) not sure what you mean. didn't change anything because 1 and 3 are fixed, meaning 2 is limited to where it can go.. I supposed maybe top left corner but didn't apply
3. 02:22:046 (1) - Pretty much the same suggestion as Hard. Move slider start a bit further in time and map the ensuing gap. same as hard

pkmnyab wrote:

[Easy]

• 
  Looks to be well-mapped overall

1. 02:47:515 - , 02:50:015 - maybe have some timing points with increasing volume to match the increasing volume of the music/vocal added
   
   [Hard]
   I have a couple of suggestions for flow below. Note that the suggestions also apply to other parts of the map that are mapped similarly to the parts I mentioned. some parts were fixed throughout the map. not all because of intended effect
   
2. 00:04:077 (2) - try ctrl+g for better flow
   
3. 00:44:077 (4) - same here, see if ctrl+g makes it flow better. I personally think it's more fun to play that way
   
4. 00:45:015 (1) - , 00:45:483 (2) - , 00:45:796 (3) - try ctrl+g (each of them individually), the only reason I suggest this is because the transition from (3) into 00:46:108 (4) - feels a bit weird.
   
5. 00:55:952 (2) - see if ctrl+g makes the flow better
   
6. 01:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can add a timing point at 01:11:890 (1) - with a low volume (maybe around 10-20%), then increase it on every slider head for a cool effect made a little bit different.. i don't really like 10~20% hitsounds at loud parts
   
7. 01:56:421 (2) - for effect (to sort of match the vocal) you can move this to around x 248 y 92 (almost stacked with (1) ) and move 01:56:733 (3) - somewhere far away, maybe stacking it with the head of 01:55:640 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
   ok. applied on some instances
   
8. 03:30:952 (6) - maybe ctrl+g not fixed
   
   [Insane]
9. 00:08:608 (1) - instead of just a hitcircle followed by mini break, you can have a spinner here that ends on 00:08:608 (1) - not applied.. specifically mapped for a little pause
   
10. 01:29:390 - maybe you could have a timing point with slower slider velocity here since this part feels a bit slower than the rest of the song i kept SV fast, so that the speed contrasts the part at 01:39:390 where it actually is slow. I feel like if i make this part slow, then the next part won't feel as slow (unless I make that part even slower). I changed the mapping style at this part instead of slowing it down to provide contrast with the previous mapped section
    
11. 03:30:952 (5) - try ctrl+g and see if it makes the flow better oo kinda nice
    
12. 03:53:452 (12) - maybe place this somewhere around x 416 y 48 for better flow
    SPOILER

    
    yep fixed

Kibbleru wrote:

17:58 Kibbleru: 01:00:483 (5,6) - for here try something like this instead http://puu.sh/7W7w9.jpg i think i'm mapping vocals? not sure ><

No Dap wrote:

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examination wrote:

Hihi~ From my NM Queue~~

[General]
00:11:108 Add a red timing point here.Reset the metronome. And remove other red timing points after it.
actually if i do that, i'll need another red timing point around here 00:21:264 - because the metronome resets again. if i do this, i still need to keep my other timing points. I didn't add timing point where you suggested because it isn't necessary.

[Easy]
AIMOD problems
00:03:608 (3,4) - DS distance is fine
00:20:015 (2,3) - DS ^

01:52:358 (2,3) - You'd better move the slider 2 since it hides part of 3. this really isn't a big deal ... fixed anyways
03:13:608 (2,3) - ^ also fixed
03:24:077 (1) - move the tail to 88,148 fixed

[Normal]
Many DS problems and I won't pick them out here,move those stuffs by yourself. fixed on some instances. aimod says distance problem from other instances because of SV changes I think. i intentionally changed the distance snap at those parts so that the objects appear to be equal distance throughout

00:21:186 (1) - move to 00:21:108 not sure about this.. what i have is awkward to play but i think it matches the song. no change for now
00:28:140 (3,1,2) - A regular triangle is needed here.

SPOILER

ok fix
00:50:015 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:53:140 (3,4,1) - make them on a line seems better. fix
00:57:202 (1,2,3) - A symmetrical pattern seems better. alright

SPOILER

03:50:796 (5) - should be moved to 248,156 alright

[Hard]
I believe that this Hard Diff is too hard! ;w; I get too excited when I map and put objects everywhere...

Since I can't play Hard and Insane by myself, I think I can't give useful suggestions,sorry.
Good luck~ Your mapsets seem very nice~

tellertheworld wrote:

Insane

1. 00:01:265 - to 00:07:671 - rhythm too fast (too many note). i might change distance spacing later based on other mods
2. 00:46:890 - remove red line metronome actually resets here. Having red line here makes large white tick lineup with first beat of each bar in the song.
3. 00:57:358 - add note. there is connection with 00:57:202 (3,4) - . actually no vocals and no instruments here
4. 01:02:358 - add note or not. if you add note ,you can move 01:01:890 (1) - overlap with 01:01:108 (7) - . no change. note doesn't add to the song
5. 01:16:733 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain fix
6. 01:52:046 (2) - remove the slider. not sure why this is necessary
7. 01:52:515 - remove red line same as above. another timing reset to match first beat of song with first white tick
8. 02:42:515 - volume 50%~ 60% ok
9. 02:45:015 - ^ ok
10. 03:01:577 - break end no change
11. 03:26:577 (2,3) - CTRL + G changed placement of 2
12. 03:43:452 - remove green line oops
13. 03:43:608 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain alright
14. 03:48:765 - add note. doesn't contribute to song i think
    　　
15. 01:39:702 - to 01:48:296 - nice mapping~

Hard

1. 00:50:483 (1,2) - ↓↓↓ should not use spacebeat too muxh in the kiai time. following vocals here. i'll keep in mind for next time
   
2. 00:51:890 (1,2) - slider here. yep
3. 00:57:358 - add note not fixed. doesn't contribute to song
4. 01:00:483 (1,2) - slidre here yep
5. 01:01:890 (1,2) - slider here no drums no vocals here.. not fixed
6. 01:04:858 (2,3) - slider here fix
7. 01:06:108 - add note yep
8. 01:56:108 (1,2) - slider here and try it↓↓↓. no fix. makes it needlessly complicated
   
9. 01:57:515 (1,2) - slider here. no vocals no drums here
10. 02:02:983 (3) - add note sorry i don't understand
11. 02:06:108 (4,5) - slider here no vocals/drums
12. 02:07:515 (1,2) - slider here^
13. 02:10:952 - add note alright
14. 02:11:733 - add note no fix. putting note here makes this section too hard
15. 02:42:671 - volume calm. Please put volume up here. fix
16. 03:24:233 - add note doesn't contribute to song
17. 03:27:358 (1,2) - slider here^
18. 03:28:765 (5,1) - slider here^
19. 03:32:202 - add note added
20. 03:32:983 - add notemakes section too hard
    　
21. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.it's useful i think

Normal

1. 00:46:265 (1) - circle here. It can make 00:46:733 (2) - outstanding . there's already a 1.2 SV here... don't think it needs any more emphasis
2. 00:56:577 - No.5 rebound slider following vocals here
   
3. 00:58:296 (1) - slider here. don't really like rhythm
4. 01:46:890 (1) - like this?↓↓↓ almost unrankable in my opinion
   
   　
5. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.no fix here

Kibbleru wrote:

Part II!

21:17 Kibbleru: how long has this mod been going for o_O
21:18 FlawlessTea: i have no idea
21:23 Kibbleru: r u guys on hard right now?
21:23 FlawlessTea: i think so
21:23 FlawlessTea: i don't even know anymore
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:12:827 - why these empty ._. 00:13:452 - same reason 00:17:827 - 00:18:452 - are empty ><
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:26:265 (1,2) - and dammit fix this overlap plis nooooooooooooo (fixed)
21:25 FlawlessTea: wat
21:25 Kibbleru: doesn't looks gud imo :<
21:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/82Lvz.jpg ew ugly suggestion
21:28 FlawlessTea: am i receiving
21:28 FlawlessTea: two mods at the same time right now
21:29 Kibbleru: 01:51:890 (1) - just something that may be interesting http://puu.sh/82LBG.jpg make any kind of jump http://puu.sh/82LCd.jpg
21:29 Kibbleru: a jump and the antijump emphasizes the w/e vocal part lowered hitsound volume for emphasis instead (also there's an extra slider somewhere)
21:30 Kibbleru: 02:20:640 (4) - i think flow better if curved other way instead? parallel to this 02:21:108 (1) -
21:31 Kibbleru: 03:13:140 (1) - same as previous one what. ok
21:32 Kibbleru: 03:17:671 (6,2) - u can try stacking? not very relevant tho i like jumps ^^
21:32 FlawlessTea: i can't even
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:34:702 (4,5) - i cant agree to this stack here, stops flow and i hear no pause in music fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:37:202 (3,4) - ^ fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:47:827 (1,2) - why not make symmetrical? i hate symmetry. jk fix ;w;
21:34 Kibbleru: 03:53:140 (7) - overlap not too good i think this one is fine
21:36 FlawlessTea: can you uh post this later
21:36 Kibbleru: sure no kd tho
21:37 Kibbleru: actualy im just gunna post it on an edit from my previous post
21:38 Kibbleru: 01:07:827 (4,5) - yo whats with these stacks man not reeeealy sure why stacking is bad but i fix anyways because i dunno
21:52 FlawlessTea: did this save o3o
21:52 FlawlessTea: i gotta go
21:54 Kibbleru: oh
21:54 Kibbleru: leme upload then

FlawlessTea wrote:

tellertheworld wrote:

Insane

1. 00:01:265 - to 00:07:671 - rhythm too fast (too many note). i might change distance spacing later based on other mods
2. 00:46:890 - remove red line metronome actually resets here. Having red line here makes large white tick lineup with first beat of each bar in the song.
3. 00:57:358 - add note. there is connection with 00:57:202 (3,4) - . actually no vocals and no instruments here
4. 01:02:358 - add note or not. if you add note ,you can move 01:01:890 (1) - overlap with 01:01:108 (7) - . no change. note doesn't add to the song
5. 01:16:733 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain fix
6. 01:52:046 (2) - remove the slider. not sure why this is necessary
7. 01:52:515 - remove red line same as above. another timing reset to match first beat of song with first white tick
8. 02:42:515 - volume 50%~ 60% ok
9. 02:45:015 - ^ ok
10. 03:01:577 - break end no change
11. 03:26:577 (2,3) - CTRL + G changed placement of 2
12. 03:43:452 - remove green line oops
13. 03:43:608 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain alright
14. 03:48:765 - add note. doesn't contribute to song i think
    　　
15. 01:39:702 - to 01:48:296 - nice mapping~

Hard

1. 00:50:483 (1,2) - ↓↓↓ should not use spacebeat too muxh in the kiai time. following vocals here. i'll keep in mind for next time
   
2. 00:51:890 (1,2) - slider here. yep
3. 00:57:358 - add note not fixed. doesn't contribute to song
4. 01:00:483 (1,2) - slidre here yep
5. 01:01:890 (1,2) - slider here no drums no vocals here.. not fixed
6. 01:04:858 (2,3) - slider here fix
7. 01:06:108 - add note yep
8. 01:56:108 (1,2) - slider here and try it↓↓↓. no fix. makes it needlessly complicated
   
9. 01:57:515 (1,2) - slider here. no vocals no drums here
10. 02:02:983 (3) - add note sorry i don't understand
11. 02:06:108 (4,5) - slider here no vocals/drums
12. 02:07:515 (1,2) - slider here^
13. 02:10:952 - add note alright
14. 02:11:733 - add note no fix. putting note here makes this section too hard
15. 02:42:671 - volume calm. Please put volume up here. fix
16. 03:24:233 - add note doesn't contribute to song
17. 03:27:358 (1,2) - slider here^
18. 03:28:765 (5,1) - slider here^
19. 03:32:202 - add note added
20. 03:32:983 - add notemakes section too hard
    　
21. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.it's useful i think

Normal

1. 00:46:265 (1) - circle here. It can make 00:46:733 (2) - outstanding . there's already a 1.2 SV here... don't think it needs any more emphasis
2. 00:56:577 - No.5 rebound slider following vocals here
   
3. 00:58:296 (1) - slider here. don't really like rhythm
4. 01:46:890 (1) - like this?↓↓↓ almost unrankable in my opinion
   
   　
5. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.no fix here

Kibbleru wrote:

Part II!

21:17 Kibbleru: how long has this mod been going for o_O
21:18 FlawlessTea: i have no idea
21:23 Kibbleru: r u guys on hard right now?
21:23 FlawlessTea: i think so
21:23 FlawlessTea: i don't even know anymore
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:12:827 - why these empty ._. 00:13:452 - same reason 00:17:827 - 00:18:452 - are empty ><
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:26:265 (1,2) - and dammit fix this overlap plis nooooooooooooo (fixed)
21:25 FlawlessTea: wat
21:25 Kibbleru: doesn't looks gud imo :<
21:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/82Lvz.jpg ew ugly suggestion
21:28 FlawlessTea: am i receiving
21:28 FlawlessTea: two mods at the same time right now
21:29 Kibbleru: 01:51:890 (1) - just something that may be interesting http://puu.sh/82LBG.jpg make any kind of jump http://puu.sh/82LCd.jpg
21:29 Kibbleru: a jump and the antijump emphasizes the w/e vocal part lowered hitsound volume for emphasis instead (also there's an extra slider somewhere)
21:30 Kibbleru: 02:20:640 (4) - i think flow better if curved other way instead? parallel to this 02:21:108 (1) -
21:31 Kibbleru: 03:13:140 (1) - same as previous one what. ok
21:32 Kibbleru: 03:17:671 (6,2) - u can try stacking? not very relevant tho i like jumps ^^
21:32 FlawlessTea: i can't even
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:34:702 (4,5) - i cant agree to this stack here, stops flow and i hear no pause in music fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:37:202 (3,4) - ^ fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:47:827 (1,2) - why not make symmetrical? i hate symmetry. jk fix ;w;
21:34 Kibbleru: 03:53:140 (7) - overlap not too good i think this one is fine
21:36 FlawlessTea: can you uh post this later
21:36 Kibbleru: sure no kd tho
21:37 Kibbleru: actualy im just gunna post it on an edit from my previous post
21:38 Kibbleru: 01:07:827 (4,5) - yo whats with these stacks man not reeeealy sure why stacking is bad but i fix anyways because i dunno
21:52 FlawlessTea: did this save o3o
21:52 FlawlessTea: i gotta go
21:54 Kibbleru: oh
21:54 Kibbleru: leme upload then

also No Dap threatened to kill me only 12 times during his mod !

Kibbleru wrote:

lol how long did it take u to count?

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Normal]
Also for 00:06:108 - 00:08:765, try using this rhythm for better follow with the vocals:
deleted this entire section

00:13:608 (4,1) - Are too close together. these distances are fine.
00:15:952 (4,1) - ^
00:35:952 (4,1) - ^

00:31:265 (1,2) - Are too far apart.
...Ahh too much DS changing in this diff @_@ stuck to using only one DS (eg 1.1) and stick to it throughout the entire map.

1. second combo colour is a tiny little bit to bright for my taste, you might wanna decrease intensity a bit
   this still work's really nice w the other colours

   suggestion
   this is the original
   (changed code to 130,255,255)

1. 00:11:108 (1) - could start off with a nicer movement/flow here if you curve this slider
   screen

   
2. 00:14:077 (1) - ^, it works better here tho, cause this angular slider matches better with the following object here 00:14:077 (1,2) -
3. 00:16:577 (1,2) - why do you change from 1.5 DS to 1.4 here? I can't make out any particular reason for the change.
4. 00:19:858 (2,1) - fix DS, if it's just 0.1 difference I won't say anything, but changing to 2.0 is a jump which is a no-no in Easy x:
   plus, the circle is snapped to 1/4 beat, which is considered "offbeat" (not follwing the actual bpm-beat) and makes this unreadable for beginner players
5. 00:53:140 (3) - move to 328|204 for nicer triangle \:D/
6. 01:14:390 (1) - move last anchor to 434|80 for better blanket
7. 01:16:265 (4) - this is slightly "off-flow", move to 252|320
8. 01:37:827 (2) - move two grids to the right for better symmetry
9. 01:54:390 (3,1) - red/white tick changes are hard to read and here I'm not sure what you're following?
   anyway, I'd prefer if 1 starts on the white tick not the red, but that's up to you. c:
   similar here - 02:32:515 (1,2) - and 03:15:640 (3,1) -
10. 02:12:515 (1,2,3) - difference in DS is extremely noticeable, please disable Grid Snap here and move the circle to 222|27
11. 03:19:077 (1,2,3) - flow from 2 to 3 is rather meh, imo, you could improve it a lot if you rotate those sliders
    example

    
12. 03:24:077 (1,2) - fix DS
13. 03:56:108 (1) - move last anchor one grid up

1. DS should be consistent in Normal diff as well, imo.. |:
2. 00:20:640 (3,1) - fix DS here
3. 00:31:265 (1,2,3) - ^ really, jumps in E/N are unreadable
4. 00:55:171 (2) - flow is better if you don't place that far on the right, move to 0|212?
   same goes for the mirrored part at the end
5. 01:31:890 (2,3) - cause of the shape they totally break the flow here, try a different one maybe?
   bad example

   
6. 01:43:140 (2,3) - fix DS
7. 01:46:890 (1,1) - ^
8. 02:36:890 (4,1) - ^
9. 03:02:515 (1,2) - try to blanket them?
10. 03:45:483 (3) - move two grids to the right for better symmetry

Squirrel wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:54:390 (3,1) - red/white tick changes are hard to read and here I'm not sure what you're following?
   anyway, I'd prefer if 1 starts on the white tick not the red, but that's up to you. c:
   similar here - 02:32:515 (1,2) - and 03:15:640 (3,1) -

Tari wrote:

Mod here

As told :3

[Easy]

1. 00:28:765 (1) - You need to move this note down, it touches the hp bar! which isn't good/allowed. and you need to adjust the previous and next note and make sure the previous slider still blankets this after you move this note down.
2. 00:41:265 (1) - Add a finish for a start of this note, the tempo of the song starts to change here and you want to signal that with a finish, to the start of the note.
3. 01:46:890 (1) - ^
4. 00:42:202 (1) - No need for a new combo to this note, there no special beat here that really signals it.
5. 01:47:827 (1) - ^
6. 00:59:233 (1) - Remove the finish, you don't need to finish the start of every new combo here, that ruins the purpose of the finish. You only do it for the strongest and most important beats in that music section.
7. 01:11:890 (1) - Finish would work great here, since this is where the instrument beats change, you don't need the whistle if you keep the finish here because it will overpower it.
8. 00:23:452 (2) - Going deeper into the map, I notice you put a new combo before the start of the actual vocals, can you do it here too? like you did at 01:29:077 (1) -
9. 01:39:390 - The green liner here could be decreased even more to 30% , I think it fits better because this part is quiet
10. 01:53:140 (2) - The blanket looks really bad for this slider, fix it up a bit?
11. 03:14:390 (2) - ^
12. 02:21:265 (3) - Reverse needs to clap with your hitsound pattern.
13. 03:53:452 (3) - Move down, slider end is super close to touching the hp bar.
14. I'm not sure this is the best way to map the easy, you should of mapped to just white tick, that way you can add hitsounds especially the clap to every other white tick, and to make it easier to follow for beginners, the only reason its easy to follow is slider leniency but that's all really, switching from hitting notes on red tick to white tick can be really difficult and hard for beginners, so please keep that in mind for your next maps.

[Normal]

1. 00:42:202 (1) - Same as easy, no need for a new combo
2. 00:41:265 (1) - Same as easy, needs a finish.
3. 00:46:733 (2) - New combo here, to match with the easy diff please.
4. 01:52:358 (1) - ^
5. 01:16:265 (5) - Add a finish to the end of the slider please.
6. 01:40:952 (3,4) - Why do such complex rhythm for a slow part? how about turn this all into 1 slider would be better?
7. 01:46:890 (1) - Finish start like previously.
8. 01:47:827 (1) - Add new combo like previously.
9. 01:57:515 - Why skip note here? the kiai should have continuous notes coming at ya
10. 02:20:952 (3,4) - The flow is better like this http://puu.sh/8eykQ.jpg
11. 04:03:452 (3) - New combo to follow the easy.
    
    [Hard]
    
    
    1. 00:10:640 (2) - New combo, here the drain starts to hurt in harder diffs if you put such a big pause.
       
       [Insane]
       
       [[list]
    2. 00:48:921 (7) - No need to space them so closely, you can enlarge the spacing here so it fits well with the overall spacing and jumps of the map, just place them much farther from the previous note please. http://puu.sh/8ez0H.jpg
    3. 01:05:483 (8) - New combo here, because it starts to repeat here.
    4. 01:06:108 - Add a note here if you do the above.
    5. 01:06:265 (1) - Remove new combo if you do the above.
    6. 01:12:827 (4) - New combo, these can be split into two and this is part of the next pattern so it needs a new combo.
    7. 01:15:483 (5) - ^
    8. 02:02:983 (4) - Note here, put it stacked at the end of the next slider.
    9. 02:16:577 (4,5) - Try using a slider? http://puu.sh/8eznd.jpg
    10. 02:21:108 (1) - Repeat, add a new combo here.
    11. 03:22:358 (4) - ^

The hard diff is fine and my favorite diff, so I only had 1 thing to say about it. good luck!

ids wrote:

A little reminder，using plural timing points on one time section is an unrankable issue.

http://img226.poco.cn/mypoco/myphoto/20140423/13/5625031920140423133241042.png

1. i suggest using 6 combo colour like this
   
   first and second using for the time like this00:23:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - .
   5th and 6th using for KIAItime .third and fourth for nomal time

1. 00:08:608 (1,2) - i think its not suit a break here
2. 00:24:858 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont use that many short slider here,its more suit long slider and slowly rhythm i think.maybe like this
   
   
3. 00:26:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
4. 00:41:577 (3,4) - Ctrl+G,and 00:42:202 (1) - under 00:41:733 (4) - ，00:42:358 (2) - under 00:41:577 (3) - ，00:42:515 (3) - up angle
5. 00:57:046 - what about this
6. 01:37:515 (7) - del this circle?if you do ，dont forget 01:37:046 (4,5,6) - set looks like a Triangle and set 01:37:358 (6) - where as 01:37:515 (7) - used be

1. 00:11:577 (2,3,4) - this more suit i think
2. 00:55:483 (3) - more far to 00:54:858 (2) -
3. 01:08:452 (6) - Ctrl +G?
4. 01:09:077 (8) - ^
5. 01:13:452 (6) - ^
6. 02:14:702 (8) - and 02:14:077 (6) - and 03:35:327 (6) - 03:35:952 (8) - ^

Okoratu wrote:

My M4M attempt

General

• 
  

1. dun' like your Stack leniency at times but whatever..
2. what's with the face of the right character...

Insane

• 
  

1. Seems ok to me, not the map I'd preferably play though (because you do skip some streams :<) Gonna look into your rhythm in the following
2. 00:21:186 (8) - might consider replacing this one with an 1/4 slider to map 00:21:265 - aswell (i think this is fitting the music better) fix
   
   Example

   
3. 00:26:890 (3) - I removed this slider in order to listen for what it snaps to, because i couldn't find anything it snaps to, i found sth else though errr no fix
   
   Example

   
   the "fffading" actually starts on the blue tick, might go with a slider instead of circles though
4. 00:43:140 - why did you decide to not map the "better world" here? It'd even be something simple like this: fix
   
   Example

   
5. 00:46:265 (1,2) - I know that this might be your intention but i think it's a ranking criteria that all hitsounds must be audible so i think you should do sth about that: fix
   
   Actual Criteria

   
6. 01:25:640 (7) - by the way you mapped these sounds the rhythm here should be something like this:fix
   
   Example

   
7. 01:26:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reducing this 8 circle stream to 2 triplets is kinda cruel imo, may consider making such a stream out of them..?uhhh no fix ;w; i like these Q_Q
8. 01:27:358 (2) - the rhythm here is similar to 01:26:890 (1) - and therefore should be mapped similarlyno fix
9. 01:31:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - dunno i removed it to see the sounds that 01:31:968 (2,4) - snap to for myself, but i couldn't find such sounds, so i decided to list that here as overmapping and the rhythm here should be reduced to 01:31:890 (1,3,5) - changed my own way
10. 01:32:827 (1,2,3,4,5) - something similar with this stream: couldn't find a sound that 01:33:061 (4) - snaps to, so i suggest this:
    
    Example

    
    same as above
11. 01:40:327 (3) - Dunno if you intend to do this: If you want to map the shi of shitoku, because the shi lands on the 1/3 snap: fix
    
    Example

    
    so if you want to map the vocal correctly i think this is the way to go about it, if that wasn't your intention, ignore this suggestion
12. 01:44:702 (2) - if you want to map the vocals, please do it like this fix
    
    Example

    
13. 01:51:890 (1,2) - already talked about this one fix
14. 01:56:108 (4) - to cover the vocal, this slider should repeat somehow like this: no fix
    
    Example

    
15. 02:07:827 (1) - the vocal goes like Maru and you only mapped the ma, might consider mapping the ru aswell?fix
    
    Example

    
16. 02:08:608 (2) - In order to cover the vocals again, this should be something like this:no fix
    
    Example

    
17. 03:06:265 (6) - might consider mapping the vocal at 03:06:421 - fix
18. 03:08:765 (5) - ^ 03:08:921 - fix
19. 03:13:140 (1,2) - putting this here so you don't miss it fix
20. 03:29:077 (1) - already mentioned something similar, might consider mapping it with an 1/2 slider, fits and sounds better fix
21. 03:52:515 (7) - should be something like this to follow the rhythm: fix
    
    Example

    
22. 03:53:140 (10,11,12,13) - pls don't reduce the stream to a triplet D:
23. 03:53:999 - just saying that this sound is so loud that you could consider mapping it
24. 04:02:515 (7) - to follow the rhythm better this should also be an 1/2 slider which either repats or has a circle in 04:02:827 -
25. 04:03:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - ........ pls map the streams D: errr ok ;w;
26. 04:03:608 (6) - lastly i would move this slider to 04:03:686 - to have it (1) end on a white tick (2) map the sound that is there no fix
    
    Example

    

LZCSC wrote:

for M4M
my english isnt so good ,sorry ;x;

General

1. i suggest using 6 combo colour like this uhhhh needlessly complicated x_x
   
   first and second using for the time like this00:23:452 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - .
   5th and 6th using for KIAItime .third and fourth for nomal time

Insane

1. 00:08:608 (1,2) - i think its not suit a break here transitioning from mapping vocals -> mapping instrumentals here
2. 00:24:858 (3,4,5,6,7) - dont use that many short slider here,its more suit long slider and slowly rhythm i think.maybe like this i think it's ok
   
   
3. 00:26:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
4. 00:41:577 (3,4) - Ctrl+G,and 00:42:202 (1) - under 00:41:733 (4) - ，00:42:358 (2) - under 00:41:577 (3) - ，00:42:515 (3) - up angle hmm what i have is ok i think. if i change to what you suggest then next pattern's flow is a little broken :C
5. 00:57:046 - what about this added
6. 01:37:515 (7) - del this circle?if you do ，dont forget 01:37:046 (4,5,6) - set looks like a Triangle and set 01:37:358 (6) - where as 01:37:515 (7) - used be strong drums here so i mapped it

Hard

1. 00:11:577 (2,3,4) - this more suit i think no fix. i think rhythm rhythm is fine
2. 00:55:483 (3) - more far to 00:54:858 (2) - fix
3. 01:08:452 (6) - Ctrl +G? these are all for specific patterns
4. 01:09:077 (8) - ^
5. 01:13:452 (6) - ^
6. 02:14:702 (8) - and 02:14:077 (6) - and 03:35:327 (6) - 03:35:952 (8) - ^

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi. I'm kinda new at modding so you don't have to take my mod seriously. And there could be some mistakes that I overlooked. no problem~

Normal
01:16:265 (5) - It's just my point of view, but what about to extend this slider to 01:16:890. mmmm large sound is where i have it now. If i extend it to your suggestion, then I miss that large sound with the end of the slider
01:41:108 (4) - Extend the slider from 01:40:952. Your suggestion makes the slider start a weaker vocal part in my opinion, and then it would miss the stronger vocal at 01:41:108

Hard
00:11:890 (3) - Isn't it kinda big jump for hard diff? - Try to move it little bit closer to (2). I moved 2 closer to 3
02:00:483 (2) - Reverse selection? fixed

I know it's small mod, but I'm not good at modding easy & insane diffs.
Hope I helped you.
If not, then sorry.

1. 00:23:452 (2,1) - swap the nc because the vocal start at 00:23:452.
2. 00:28:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - cause this part is not the upsurge of the song,so a more simple rhythm may better to me,especially in this normal diff.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:46:265 (1) - make the slider end in 00:46:421 to follow the vocal,same suggestions at 01:51:890(1),03:13:140(1).
4. 01:16:265 (5) - move the anchor point of the sldier right a bit to put the sldier's tail between 01:15:015(2) and 01:15:327(3)?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:37:671 (1) - maybe try this rhythm,blank the redline as you did at 02:35:171 and 02:40:171
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:09:390 (4,5,1) - just a suggestion
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:05:483 (6) - remove the finish
2. 00:23:452 (2,1) - swap the nc
3. 00:31:265 (1,2) - move this two sldier down a bit may better to me,maybe like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:046 (2) - i think there are no need to use a kickslider here.
5. 01:00:796 (5) - use circle here instead of the slider
6. 01:47:827 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+h and move to (83,118)for a better flow.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:02:671 (2) - same as 00:57:046(2) 0.0
8. 02:21:890 (8,9) - its a little strange if 02:22:436 is blank
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:09:233 (7,8) - same rhythm suggestion as normal diff
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:10:640 (2,3,4) - i think the distance between 00:10:952(4,1) are a little big,you can ctrl+g 00:10:640(2,4) to balance the ds.
2. 00:19:858 (5) - move to (256,120)
3. 00:47:202 (2,4) - make slider4's tail stack with sldier2?
4. 01:09:390 (1) - clap
5. 01:10:327 (3) - ^
6. 01:14:233 (1,3) - maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   

Melt wrote:

Hi
request from BMT queue
sorry for delay

[Normal]

1. 00:23:452 (2,1) - swap the nc because the vocal start at 00:23:452. no change because I prefer NC on downbeat
2. 00:28:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - cause this part is not the upsurge of the song,so a more simple rhythm may better to me,especially in this normal diff. changed a little
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:46:265 (1) - make the slider end in 00:46:421 to follow the vocal,same suggestions at 01:51:890(1), 03:13:140(1). no thanks. slider is 1/1 for instrumentals
4. 01:16:265 (5) - move the anchor point of the sldier right a bit to put the sldier's tail between 01:15:015(2) and 01:15:327(3)? how did this happen
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:37:671 (1) - maybe try this rhythm,blank the redline as you did at 02:35:171 and 02:40:171 ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 03:09:390 (4,5,1) - just a suggestion mm no thanks
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:05:483 (6) - remove the finish ok
2. 00:23:452 (2,1) - swap the nc nah
3. 00:31:265 (1,2) - move this two sldier down a bit may better to me,maybe like this nice
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:046 (2) - i think there are no need to use a kickslider here. changed to two hitcircles
5. 01:00:796 (5) - use circle here instead of the slider nah
6. 01:47:827 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+h and move to (83,118)for a better flow. ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:02:671 (2) - same as 00:57:046(2) 0.0 ok
8. 02:21:890 (8,9) - its a little strange if 02:22:436 is blank ok
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:09:233 (7,8) - same rhythm suggestion as normal diff nah
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:10:640 (2,3,4) - i think the distance between 00:10:952(4,1) are a little big,you can ctrl+g 00:10:640(2,4) to balance the ds. distance is ok
2. 00:19:858 (5) - move to (256,120) ok
3. 00:47:202 (2,4) - make slider4's tail stack with sldier2? did something different
4. 01:09:390 (1) - clap how did i miss this
5. 01:10:327 (3) - ^ thanks
6. 01:14:233 (1,3) - maybe try this? maybe if i was a better mapper i would do that....
   
   SPOILER

   

thats all from me
good luck :3

No Dap wrote:

senpai pls rank this already

1. add FlawlessTea to tags since its a way for people to find your maps if they only knew you before the name change (psst tell kibbleru to do it for HOME too o3o.. and towa yori~... im no stalker)
   some examples for that ^ andrea was osuplayer111... nichiyouki was nich95

1. all o.k. ... ...

1. 00:46:265 (1) - replace with a hitcircle at 00:46:265 - stacked ontop of 00:46:733 (1) - slider head for more supense before the blaaarrring of the instruments?
2. 01:51:890 (1) - ^
3. 03:13:140 (1) - ^
4. hella tired from modding this . skimmed over. sorry :c im sure its fine lol

1. 00:15:327 (4,5) - loooool this is the same thing as the first thing i talked about in insane xD you have your triplets inbetween the actual triplets~ listen closely at 25% D:
2. 03:47:827 (7,8) - ^ try this rhythm? remove note at 03:47:671 - , move everything afterwards except the slider back 1/2. stack a note at 03:48:296 - ontop of the slider (only a suggestion)
   SPOILER

   
3. 03:57:827 (5,6) - ^ is this in between the triplets thing intentional? frostings pls
   
4. 01:13:452 (6) - !!!!11! you usually have your max level rotating here like in the insane lol. should keep it going in hard? by ctrl-g this slider.
5. 02:21:890 (8) - because of 01:16:265 (8) - ending on a red tick, some players might assume that 02:22:515 (9) - is also ending on a red tick. so they release the kick slider too early. imo to avoid confusion you should make 2 kick sliders like at 02:11:890 (7,8) -
6. 02:22:671 (1) - same as the one in insane. copy and paste! this kinda ending in a weird spot because it started because of the vocal but continued on long past the vocal. i know youre trying to end it on a large white tick but maybe try this? you could have the spinner end at 02:24:390 - to capture the strong guitar sound there and have it closer to where the vocals and move your break start point to 02:25:015 - heheh you taught me that frostings
7. 02:45:640 (4,5,6) - make distance between these shorter? for consistency with the entire section in the music
   
8. 03:53:140 (7) - replace with 1-reverse kickslider to represent the veeeerryyyy strong sound here better

1. 00:15:171 (7,1,2,3) - i think you misheard this. the triplet is from 00:15:171 - to 00:15:327 -
2. 00:15:483 - theres also a triplet here from 00:15:483 - to 00:15:640 -. you put the triplet right in between the 2 triplets xD catching neither LOL
   
3. 00:18:999 - add note and move 00:19:077 (2) - so you have a triplet that follows the music? similar to what you did at 00:13:608 (1,2,3) -
4. 00:16:577 (2) - same as 00:18:999 -. now that i think about it you also have it in previous places like here. a stronger pitch is starting at 00:16:733 - that is stronger than the one at the slider head at 00:16:577 - . imo you should maybe try this rhythm? it fits the music better imo
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:11:499 - ^
   
6. 00:20:015 (1) - i dont know what instruments making that sound youre following lol but it plays a note at 00:20:171 - . the slider skips right over it. imo you should set it as a 1/2 slider with a reverse to catch that sound and keep the clap hit at the tail
   
7. 00:45:952 (4) - curve this a bit more like 00:45:640 (3) - ? what im seeing is 00:44:233 (3,4) - being a pair, 00:45:015 (1,2) - being a pair, and then these two 00:45:640 (3,4) - wot. its not the same! D: i also think it would flow better to 00:46:265 (1) -
   
8. 00:49:702 (2) - i think this would look and flow nicer if this was straightened out. it flows pretty well with 00:50:015 (3) - but its a bit awkward with 00:49:233 (1) - . maybe try this?
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:01:890 (1,1) - wot. this is the same as 00:51:890 (1,2) - 01:57:202 (7,1) - 03:18:452 (10) - but the sudden pauses and NC really kill the flow :/ NCs also mess with the hp drain for people who are struggling so far. its like a random health fountain not indicated in the music >.< i say let them die! remove both NCs and maybe turn 01:02:202 (1) - into a 1/2 slider and move it somehwere else with 01:01:890 (1) - stacked ontop of it? the antijump between the two should be fine
10. 02:07:515 (1,1) - NCs why D:
11. 03:28:765 (1,1) - NCs frosting pls
    
12. 01:15:327 (4) - stack properly with 01:14:702 (2) - tail
    
13. 01:33:452 (5,6,7) - have these 3 sliders blanket 01:32:983 (2) - better
    
14. 01:36:890 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - these jumps are kinda huge compared to the previous ones with a similar pattern in the music. make the squares smaller? the jumps arent indicated in the music either. theyre even bigger than the hyped parts like 01:46:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - which should have bigger jumps lol
    
15. 01:57:202 (7) - this anti jump doesnt fit imo since theres no pause in the music and the vocals are being held throughout the entire time o3o
    
16. 02:02:827 (3) - replace with 1/2 slider so theres no awkward pause? o3o
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:21:968 (1) - this kinda ending in a weird spot because it started because of the vocal but continued on long past the vocal. i know youre trying to end it on a large white tick but maybe try this? you could have the spinner end at 02:24:390 - to capture the strong guitar sound there and have it closer to where the vocals and move your break start point to 02:25:015 - heheh you taught me that frostings
    
18. 03:18:452 (10) - imo the vocal representation here should be shortened to be a 1/2 slider, especially since the tail ends on a strong large white tick, which is a bit off. it would play more smoothly imo if its was a 1/2 and there is a hitcircle at 03:18:765 - stacked ontop of 03:18:921 (11) - or something
    
19. 03:42:202 (4,5) - honestly i like this combo but i think it needs a bit more variation o3o its pretty much the same as 01:15:327 (4,5) - 02:20:952 (4,5) - .
    maybe something like these
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20. 03:47:515 (4,5) - the first slider doesnt really follow the music well since nothing is held and drawn out while the second slider doesnt really follow anything, esp when nothings emphasized in the second slider's head :c meanwhile, theres a strong sound at both the tails at 03:47:358 - and 03:47:671 - . maybe you could change the rhythm since you have the strong sounds at the tails of both sliders right now? something like
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21. 03:47:671 - skipped over a triplet here. maybe follow up on ^ that with a note added at 03:47:749 - and have both that and the note at 03:47:671 - (if you made the change above) stacked ontop of the head of 03:47:827 (6) - ?
    
22. 03:53:140 (9,10,11,12) - the stream continues throughout this part. add notes at 03:53:374 - and 03:53:530 - ?
    
23. 04:03:608 (7) - NC to have consistency with this part in other diffs
    
24. THERES FROSTINGS COMBOS EVERYWHERE LIKE IN TOWA~!

rank 70k big plays ;-;

Kihhou wrote:

aAaaAAAaaaaAAaAA it's Frostings who made the towa yori towa ni that i love ~ /me faints aaaaaaa senpai noticed me ! >/////<

[General]

1. add FlawlessTea to tags since its a way for people to find your maps if they only knew you before the name change (psst tell kibbleru to do it for HOME too o3o.. and towa yori~... im no stalker)
   some examples for that ^ andrea was osuplayer111... nichiyouki was nich95 yep, why not

[Easy]

1. all o.k. ... ...

[Normal]

1. 00:46:265 (1) - replace with a hitcircle at 00:46:265 - stacked ontop of 00:46:733 (1) - slider head for more supense before the blaaarrring of the instruments? not a bad idea but didn't change because anti-jumps are hard, and if i don't stack them then it loses the effect
2. 01:51:890 (1) - ^
3. 03:13:140 (1) - ^
4. hella tired from modding this . skimmed over. sorry :c im sure its fine lol

[Hard]

1. 00:15:327 (4,5) - loooool this is the same thing as the first thing i talked about in insane xD you have your triplets inbetween the actual triplets~ listen closely at 25% D: uhhhh this makes it so hard to play
2. 03:47:827 (7,8) - ^ try this rhythm? remove note at 03:47:671 - , move everything afterwards except the slider back 1/2. stack a note at 03:48:296 - ontop of the slider (only a suggestion)
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3. 03:57:827 (5,6) - ^ is this in between the triplets thing intentional? frostings pls
   
4. 01:13:452 (6) - !!!!11! you usually have your max level rotating here like in the insane lol. should keep it going in hard? by ctrl-g this slider. no thanks
5. 02:21:890 (8) - because of 01:16:265 (8) - ending on a red tick, some players might assume that 02:22:515 (9) - is also ending on a red tick. so they release the kick slider too early. imo to avoid confusion you should make 2 kick sliders like at 02:11:890 (7,8) - sure
6. 02:22:671 (1) - same as the one in insane. copy and paste! this kinda ending in a weird spot because it started because of the vocal but continued on long past the vocal. i know youre trying to end it on a large white tick but maybe try this? you could have the spinner end at 02:24:390 - to capture the strong guitar sound there and have it closer to where the vocals and move your break start point to 02:25:015 - heheh you taught me that frostings naahhh spinner is fine
7. 02:45:640 (4,5,6) - make distance between these shorter? for consistency with the entire section in the music ok i have no idea how that happened
   
8. 03:53:140 (7) - replace with 1-reverse kickslider to represent the veeeerryyyy strong sound here better if i was a better mapper maybe

[Insane]

1. 00:15:171 (7,1,2,3) - i think you misheard this. the triplet is from 00:15:171 - to 00:15:327 - to be honest i'm deaf and i don't hear anything.. the guitar is too quiet for me to discern. I'm just gonna change it because i dont know
2. 00:15:483 - theres also a triplet here from 00:15:483 - to 00:15:640 -. you put the triplet right in between the 2 triplets xD catching neither LOL alright alright
   
3. 00:18:999 - add note and move 00:19:077 (2) - so you have a triplet that follows the music? similar to what you did at 00:13:608 (1,2,3) - i'm bad
4. 00:16:577 (2) - same as 00:18:999 -. now that i think about it you also have it in previous places like here. a stronger pitch is starting at 00:16:733 - that is stronger than the one at the slider head at 00:16:577 - . imo you should maybe try this rhythm? it fits the music better imo uh i probably fixed this
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5. 00:11:499 - ^
   
6. 00:20:015 (1) - i dont know what instruments making that sound youre following lol but it plays a note at 00:20:171 - . the slider skips right over it. imo you should set it as a 1/2 slider with a reverse to catch that sound and keep the clap hit at the tail apparently i was a really bad mapper when i first made this map 5 months ago... thanks for pointing these out
   
7. 00:45:952 (4) - curve this a bit more like 00:45:640 (3) - ? what im seeing is 00:44:233 (3,4) - being a pair, 00:45:015 (1,2) - being a pair, and then these two 00:45:640 (3,4) - wot. its not the same! D: i also think it would flow better to 00:46:265 (1) - sure
   
8. 00:49:702 (2) - i think this would look and flow nicer if this was straightened out. it flows pretty well with 00:50:015 (3) - but its a bit awkward with 00:49:233 (1) - . maybe try this? i don't even know what happened here
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9. 01:01:890 (1,1) - wot. this is the same as 00:51:890 (1,2) - 01:57:202 (7,1) - 03:18:452 (10) - but the sudden pauses and NC really kill the flow :/ NCs also mess with the hp drain for people who are struggling so far. its like a random health fountain not indicated in the music >.< i say let them die! remove both NCs and maybe turn 01:02:202 (1) - into a 1/2 slider and move it somehwere else with 01:01:890 (1) - stacked ontop of it? the antijump between the two should be fine sure
10. 02:07:515 (1,1) - NCs why D: pls
11. 03:28:765 (1,1) - NCs frosting pls
    
12. 01:15:327 (4) - stack properly with 01:14:702 (2) - tail they are stacked lol
    
13. 01:33:452 (5,6,7) - have these 3 sliders blanket 01:32:983 (2) - better sure why not
    
14. 01:36:890 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - these jumps are kinda huge compared to the previous ones with a similar pattern in the music. make the squares smaller? the jumps arent indicated in the music either. theyre even bigger than the hyped parts like 01:46:890 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - which should have bigger jumps lol made them smaller
    
15. 01:57:202 (7) - this anti jump doesnt fit imo since theres no pause in the music and the vocals are being held throughout the entire time o3o fix
    
16. 02:02:827 (3) - replace with 1/2 slider so theres no awkward pause? o3o yep
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17. 02:21:968 (1) - this kinda ending in a weird spot because it started because of the vocal but continued on long past the vocal. i know youre trying to end it on a large white tick but maybe try this? you could have the spinner end at 02:24:390 - to capture the strong guitar sound there and have it closer to where the vocals and move your break start point to 02:25:015 - heheh you taught me that frostings hmm spinner is fine how it is
    
18. 03:18:452 (10) - imo the vocal representation here should be shortened to be a 1/2 slider, especially since the tail ends on a strong large white tick, which is a bit off. it would play more smoothly imo if its was a 1/2 and there is a hitcircle at 03:18:765 - stacked ontop of 03:18:921 (11) - or something when i went over your previous suggestions i went through my whole map and changed this part on my own
    
19. 03:42:202 (4,5) - honestly i like this combo but i think it needs a bit more variation o3o its pretty much the same as 01:15:327 (4,5) - 02:20:952 (4,5) - .
    maybe something like these apparently i copy+pasted the same combo three times o-o and the rhythm is wrong too LOL fixed these
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20. 03:47:515 (4,5) - the first slider doesnt really follow the music well since nothing is held and drawn out while the second slider doesnt really follow anything, esp when nothings emphasized in the second slider's head :c meanwhile, theres a strong sound at both the tails at 03:47:358 - and 03:47:671 - . maybe you could change the rhythm since you have the strong sounds at the tails of both sliders right now? something like did something here
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21. 03:47:671 - skipped over a triplet here. maybe follow up on ^ that with a note added at 03:47:749 - and have both that and the note at 03:47:671 - (if you made the change above) stacked ontop of the head of 03:47:827 (6) - ? did something here
    
22. 03:53:140 (9,10,11,12) - the stream continues throughout this part. add notes at 03:53:374 - and 03:53:530 - ? fix
    
23. 04:03:608 (7) - NC to have consistency with this part in other diffs fix
    
24. THERES FROSTINGS COMBOS EVERYWHERE LIKE IN TOWA~!

neonat wrote:

From a request a month ago, totally not late at all nope. sorry

Normal

00:35:015 (3) - the end of the slider is slightly too low, doesn't blanket perfectly to 00:33:765 (1) currently fix
00:40:015 (3) - make it bend at the tick? fix
00:43:765 (1,1) - This could be much better in terms of playing and how it sounds like: 00:43:765 (1) should start at 00:43:608 where she starts holding the word. It currently ends in no mans' land and sounds off, thus I think you should remove 00:46:265 (1) and end the spinner at 00:46:265 - this way you have a nice pause between 00:46:265 - 00:46:733 which has a nice impact fix
00:49:233 (1) - finish on start of slider fix
01:14:390 (1) - 01:15:015 (2,3,4) all have whistles in a row but 01:14:390 (1) only has the whistle on the start so the end has this weird emptiness. You could add whistle to the end of the slider, whether or not you want to keep the whistle on the start is up to you ok
01:49:390 (1,1) - same as 00:43:765 (1,1) mhm~
03:07:515 (1) - how about finish on start of slider hmmm too loud ><;
03:15:171 (4,1) - could blanket better ok
03:25:327 - add a note? Stopping at the vocals leave this awkward longer gap fixed this rhythm
03:28:765 (1) - I hear cymbals here added finsh

Hard

00:06:577 (2,3) - could blanket better fix
00:46:265 (4,5) - separate the combo here? ok
00:47:202 (2) - shift to x:16 y:88 fix
01:51:890 (4,5) - separate combo here?
02:34:077 (5,6) - could blanket better ok
03:24:390 (3) - remove the finish on the start of the slider, it seems out of place yep
03:33:765 (1) - finish on the start of slider ok
03:36:733 (2) - remove the finish on the start of the slider, it is better if it's on the start of 03:36:265 (1) - with it being new phrase and all removed
04:02:358 (4,5) - could blanket better ok

Insane

00:15:796 (13,14) - consider making them closer, I cannot see the rationale for such a jump here for the song ok
00:27:202 (4,6) - not stacked perfectly fix
00:49:702 (2,3) - could blanket better fix
01:02:515 (3) - remove the finish on the start of the slider ok
01:21:733 (8) - being below 01:21:577 (7) the flow isn't good. Place it somewhere above the slider, it just has too much of an abrupt movement right now fix
02:41:108 (4,5) - not stacked perfectly fix
03:33:765 (1) - finish on the start of slider ok
03:47:671 (7) - NC here fix
03:48:608 (13) - finish fix
03:58:608 (11) - ^ fix

Estellia- wrote:

Ok GO!

Easy

01:45:640 (3) - You can shift this note higher, its slightly off flow. ok
01:46:890 (1) - This note can be further from the note before. hmm sure i just centered it
02:22:202 (1) - You should add a note here instead, to duplicate a similar formation from before. not sure i follow
02:37:515 (1) - Shift this note very VERY slightly further away from the previous note. fix
02:38:452 (2) - Shift this note slightly away from the previous note as well. fix
02:50:952 (2) - Make this blanket less loosely. blankets fine
03:05:015 (1) - Move this note slightly further away from the previous note. fix
Quick note: Your back part is basically the same as the front part. So if you do make changes, remember to copy it over to the back!

Amazing Easy! Can barely find mistakes~

Normal

00:25:952 (1) - You can make this note parallel to the next, like this: mm it's ok http://puu.sh/9Gt74/ca87b63cd6.jpg
01:11:890 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this triangle formation a bit more spaced apart. using 0.8 space because nazi-modders everywhere
01:44:702 (2) - This note can blanket less tightly, also, fix up the shape a bit more to fix blanketting blanket is fine
02:04:858 (1) - You can blanket this note less tightly. sure
02:12:515 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a little boring, you can make it the same as the next series of notes instead. fix
02:43:921 (3) - This thing can be parallel to the note before, like: fix http://puu.sh/9Gujl/7d3698a027.jpg

Amazing! Practically no big mistakes! Lovely Normal~

Hard

00:03:608 (1,2,3) - This can look like this: http://puu.sh/9GuzG/ff10158f1c.jpg. This makes flow circular, and much better. nice
00:04:858 (4,5,6) - If you do do that^, then change this into a triangle formation: fixed on my own http://puu.sh/9GuDC/b1122371ec.jpg (something like this)
00:07:983 (5) - You can move this note further out. it's ok
00:35:015 (1,2,3,4) - You can make this kind of a tornado, enlarge this square a little i don't understand
00:41:265 (1,2,3,4) - you can move these notes further from previous note, since its a dramatic moment in the song ok
01:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hitsounds here can get a little annoying. reduced volume
03:41:890 (3) - Make this note bend inwards, like the note before. i'm blanketing here

Generally fine, but a few slider shape problems here and there. I'm not stating it here just because it's fine to keep. Nice beat placement by the way!

Insane

00:15:171 (7) - You can add a new combo here true
00:57:515 (4,5) - These 2 notes look a bit awkward, you can do this instead (don't have to): it's finehttp://puu.sh/9Gvjn/29b9d119db.jpg
01:22:983 (1,2,3) - The transition to note 1 is a bit weird, so I suggest this: transition is okhttp://puu.sh/9GvxH/d289e5e02f.jpg
01:40:327 (3) - This note looks a bit unbalanced. I suggest you either change it, or Ctrl+G it slider is fine ;w;
01:46:577 (7) - Shouldn't you make this note the same as the 2 notes before? (as in not the reverse) Ctrl+g will look better fixed
01:52:046 (2) - I suggest you make the note like this: nah it's ok ;; http://puu.sh/9Gwg4/f0c6cd9f08.jpg
01:53:608 (4) - Ctrl+G this note changed on my own
02:06:108 (5) - This note looks better like this: i like mine better ;w; http://puu.sh/9Gwkl/85eadaa11c.jpg
02:08:140 (3) - This note feels better with Ctrl+G mm no change
02:44:702 (9) - Move this note further away ok
03:04:858 (1) - You can clean this slider up it's fine

It has a nice feel to it, I guess.

Generally good mapping techniques. Your Easy and Normal are very clean, I'm surprised this mapset isn't ranked yet. Keep it up!