OctagonCollaboration - 8 Awesome Angles of YouTube [Osu|Taik

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Project Railgun wrote:

octathon
wendao
why inverness isn't included in tags? :(
Frostings
I was not prepared for this
ExGon
good map and song
Tuxxy
whata
Irreversible
http://puu.sh/aMIKr.txt

update please~ Priti modded it
-kevincela-
Avena
IRC modded with everyone but Chewin and Kyshiro, All the logs were either lost or had tons of trash talking so I'd rather not post them.
Also, combo colors
[Colours]
Combo1 : 190,253,149
Combo2 : 180,220,250
Combo3 : 250,175,198
Combo4 : 252,224,167
MidSoul
hi/
From taiko modding queue. thanks!

[Octaikon]

00:47:081 (205,206,207) - kkd
・because no sound to change (207) for k,should unify 00:45:748 (197,198,199) - .

05:27:741 - add d
・for vocal. 'cause just before this part from vocal.

06:18:067 - add d or k
・06:17:900 (94,95,96,97) - this double isn't fit for songs..

06:22:067 (130,131,132,133) - k_dkd or k_dk_
・for vocal acculately.

06:53:567 (174,175,176,177) - kkdd
・vocal tone.

07:00:400 -
07:01:733 -
・add k or d

07:30:939 (41,42,43,44) - kddd
・because this k(44) seems no reason for k, change for some reasonable.

07:34:200 (55,56) - switch
・^same


good map with so noisy song lol I like it. GL!
Jenny
Few first-glance things, please consider.

For below-mentioned slider issues, please refer to my userpage boxes about Active/Passive Hitsounding and osu! "hit"object understanding, as those are proper- and lengthily worded etc etc.





RLC & Chewin:

  1. You have a lot of weird sliderends, namely, sliders ending on stronger beats than they start on/mapping clear doubles in the song as one 1/4.. that doesn't make sense since you leave the important beats out of play entirely (in case of the former) or only make the player hit half of the soundpattern (the latter), in which case, you might aswell be using only a circle to see what you're actually clicking and well.. that's kind of not fitting. I'll point to a few examples below.
  2. RLC: 00:27:081 (2,3) - examples of latter
  3. RLC: 00:37:081 (7) - again, two equally strong beats put into one 1/2 slider, practically leaving the stronger accentuated part of the soundpattern to be the least actively played
  4. RLC: Also, a lot of examples in the section starting at 05:11:385
  5. Chewin: 04:16:833 (1,2) - the actual 1/3 soundpattern starts at 04:16:653 and currently, you make the player hit on less pronounced beats in the wub-rhythm;

    ^this'd put the focus much better
  6. Chewin: 04:19:355 (4) - ends on a finish, which is arguably the loudest and most accentuating hitsound you could use, yet, it's being played the least out of all the beats this slider lands on, simply because it's an end
  7. Chewin: 04:20:256 (2) - you start the slider on the second sound of a double, which is okay, but ending it on a finish again, which is much stronger and more dominant, does not make any sense, hitobject-wise




-kevincela-:

  1. I found the Almagest part to feel too.. lacking of scale? Like it's spaced and everything like it's just like the other sections, just with more 1/4, while it has quite the huge load of momentum going into it, and I much rather would have had more cursorswinging and the likes here as to go with it.




Irreversible:

  1. 03:39:896 (3,4,5,6) - you don't want things like these.. you know, stacking leniency and stuff





BD:

  1. 05:46:622 (1,2,3,4) - you'd want to put the sliderends at a lower volume (half the one of what you're using in this section should do, no need to all the way to 5%), it feels sort of weird having the double sound here
  2. 05:52:321 (3,4) - would like to see this CTRL-G'd, going upwards again seems appropriate at this point rather than repeating the same motion at a different position; probably because you had an up-and-down movement in the previous sliderpattern, so since this is still just about the same in the song, sticking with it would make sense
  3. 05:57:516 (2,4,6,8) - HP-bar overlap, ew. not pretty, fix please
  4. 06:00:030 (1,2,3,4) - I don't feel like 1/4 sliders make sense on 2 and 4; the accentuated points are at 1 and 3, so those, yes, but it'd feel better if you just have 2 and 4 as circles, specifically since it feels much more pair-patterned and stop-and-go like this, rather than a constant back and forth (yes, even though the effective playing is the same, that's how it feels with short sliders..)
  5. 06:03:382 (5,6,7,8) - actually, it'd make sense to engage a different pattern at this point because the previously squeaky rhythm is changing to a much darker tone here and playing the exact same patter at the same place just with like 10% more scaling doesn't really express that
  6. 06:04:890 (7) - would put an 1/4 slider here, simply because it has the same "vocal" accentuation as the ones afterwards and therefore kinda belongs into the pattern; also, the strong beats end at this point, so spamming more circles doesn't really have that much background in the song
  7. 06:05:393 (3,4) - sliderends take away accentuated beat in the song, much like with previous examples in other parts
  8. 06:37:233 (12) - this one shouldn't be overlapping with 11, simply because you didn't do that before and it takes away the movement and momentum that you previously established for this part of the rhythm; this is also the only time you do this
  9. 06:44:567 (3,4,5,6,7) - uneven spacing throughout this, also appears rather clunkily curved #justnazimodthings (I'd suggest you put 4 to 327|340, 5 to 291|334, 6 to 256|345 and 7 to 229|369
  10. 06:49:400 (1,2) - why do you skip those 1/4?




Kyshiro:

  1. 06:23:900 (4,5,6) - no musical background to the tripple here; the hasty "octagon" is covered by the previous slider, so there's really nothing to hear here
  2. 07:04:067 (1,2,3,4) - make this more of an.. octagon shape?
  3. 07:08:567 (5,6) - suddenly, 1/2 stack. kinda unexpected with all the previous parts and doesn't differ a lot from anything in the music to make it natural at this stage
  4. 07:10:067 (5) - looks meh with this being just CTRL-H'd, CTRL-J it aswell please, just feels much more like a pattern and "union" like that, which it is, since it completes the "vocal" pattern




Leader:

  1. 07:20:805 (3) - why a reverse slider here? you mapped this soundpattern as three circles afterwards - in the same combo, actually -, so it feels rather weird to have it switch so seemingly random
  2. 07:22:305 (7) - ^
  3. 07:23:505 (1,3) - these have strong beats on both their starting and endpoint and having them as sliders kind of ruins the momentum and correctness..
  4. 07:26:781 (1) - very very close to HP bar, would rather see this a little more downwards (like, two grids size 4?)
  5. 07:33:018 (4,6) - again, these sliders cover two accentuated (drum-?)beats on both their start and end, unlike 3 and 5; I can see it's following the guitar, but still, it felt weird to me
  6. 07:39:734 (1,2,3,4,1) - I can see this as being the same soundpattern, so I'd suggest a pentagon/star shape instead of having a rather wide-spaced square and a close-spaced slider next to it, which, to be honest, looks rather weird





tl;dr kd pls
69653863
fixed sayaka sprites

Also, please delete 15WOND-Leader-nobg.png and do the following in both diffs (part is mapped by you in both diff)

  1. Remove these
    Sprite,Foreground,BottomLeft,"angles\titles\15WOND-nobg.png",0,370
    S,0,439605,,0.75
    F,0,439605,439855,0,0.99
    M,0,439605,444553,-8,370,-4,370
    F,0,444553,,0
    Sprite,Foreground,BottomLeft,"angles\collab parts\15WOND-Leader-nobg.png",0,420
    S,0,439605,,0.75
    F,0,439605,439772,0,0.99
    M,0,439605,444553,-8,420,-4,420
    F,0,444553,,0
  2. Replace last 2 codeset of 15WOND with this
    Sprite,Foreground,BottomLeft,"angles\titles\15WOND.png",0,370
    S,0,439605,,0.75
    F,0,439605,439772,0,0.99
    M,0,439605,449353,-8,370,0,370
    F,0,446781,447375,0.99,0
    Sprite,Foreground,BottomLeft,"angles\collab parts\15WOND-Leader.png",0,420
    S,0,439605,,0.75
    F,0,439605,439772,0,0.99
    M,0,439605,449353,-8,420,0,420
    F,0,446781,447375,0.99,0
Mismagius

Jenny wrote:

BD:

  1. 05:46:622 (1,2,3,4) - you'd want to put the sliderends at a lower volume (half the one of what you're using in this section should do, no need to all the way to 5%), it feels sort of weird having the double sound here k
  2. 05:52:321 (3,4) - would like to see this CTRL-G'd, going upwards again seems appropriate at this point rather than repeating the same motion at a different position; probably because you had an up-and-down movement in the previous sliderpattern, so since this is still just about the same in the song, sticking with it would make sense broke my pattern but k found a way to fix
  3. 05:57:516 (2,4,6,8) - HP-bar overlap, ew. not pretty, fix please stupidly useless but w/e
  4. 06:00:030 (1,2,3,4) - I don't feel like 1/4 sliders make sense on 2 and 4; the accentuated points are at 1 and 3, so those, yes, but it'd feel better if you just have 2 and 4 as circles, specifically since it feels much more pair-patterned and stop-and-go like this, rather than a constant back and forth (yes, even though the effective playing is the same, that's how it feels with short sliders..) i prefer it my way honestly
  5. 06:03:382 (5,6,7,8) - actually, it'd make sense to engage a different pattern at this point because the previously squeaky rhythm is changing to a much darker tone here and playing the exact same patter at the same place just with like 10% more scaling doesn't really express that it's not about being a 'darker tone' or not, it's about the constant "oh" 1/2 beat which is more intense. but then again, i guess i found a way to fix it
  6. 06:04:890 (7) - would put an 1/4 slider here, simply because it has the same "vocal" accentuation as the ones afterwards and therefore kinda belongs into the pattern; also, the strong beats end at this point, so spamming more circles doesn't really have that much background in the song looking at the playability side here, doesn't seem to work nicely
  7. 06:05:393 (3,4) - sliderends take away accentuated beat in the song, much like with previous examples in other parts not really
  8. 06:37:233 (12) - this one shouldn't be overlapping with 11, simply because you didn't do that before and it takes away the movement and momentum that you previously established for this part of the rhythm; this is also the only time you do this true, fixed
  9. 06:44:567 (3,4,5,6,7) - uneven spacing throughout this, also appears rather clunkily curved #justnazimodthings (I'd suggest you put 4 to 327|340, 5 to 291|334, 6 to 256|345 and 7 to 229|369 k
  10. 06:49:400 (1,2) - why do you skip those 1/4? ask leader
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436,164,399317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,120,399400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,88,399483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,44,399567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,8,399650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,0,399733,2,0,L|328:16,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,64,399900,2,0,L|212:48,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,24,400067,6,0,P|156:84|144:140,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,172,400317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,400400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,232,400483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,276,400567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,400650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,352,400733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,336,400817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,400900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,352,400983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,376,401067,2,0,L|296:356,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,401233,2,0,L|276:276,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,224,401400,6,0,P|224:168|244:112,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,84,401650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,72,401733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,80,401817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,108,401900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,401983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,402067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,224,402150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,268,402233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,312,402317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,402400,2,0,P|376:364|364:360,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,296,402567,2,0,P|308:296|282:308,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,344,402733,5,4,0:0:0:0:
312,192,402900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,352,403067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,403233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,172,403317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,403400,2,0,P|124:120|128:88,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,20,403567,2,0,P|224:52|220:84,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,188,403733,2,0,P|288:156|292:124,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,56,403900,2,0,P|388:88|384:120,1,56.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,192,404067,6,0,L|416:284,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,372,404400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,356,404567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,340,404650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,334,404733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,345,404817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,369,404900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,296,405067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,344,405233,6,0,L|4:384,2,45,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,228,405567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,120,405733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,136,405900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,136,405983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,136,406067,2,0,L|160:124,2,45,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,28,406400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,228,406567,5,0,0:0:0:0:
44,228,406650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,228,406733,2,0,P|88:260|128:260,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,407067,2,0,P|280:232|314:261,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,407317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,407400,2,0,L|424:364,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,264,407733,2,0,L|380:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,212,407983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,184,408067,6,0,P|352:139|381:105,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,105,408400,2,0,P|159:139|164:184,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,212,408650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,240,408733,2,0,L|68:228,2,45,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,336,409067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,268,409233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,409317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,409400,6,0,L|364:296,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,188,409733,2,0,L|344:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,140,410067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,60,410233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,410400,2,0,P|204:260|172:232,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,144,410733,6,0,L|36:196,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,292,411067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,380,411233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,376,411400,2,0,P|188:328|176:276,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,256,411650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,228,411733,2,0,L|224:164,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,104,412067,6,0,P|288:164|368:244,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,268,412567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,164,412733,2,0,L|480:76,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,12,413067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,12,413150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,12,413233,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,60,413400,6,0,P|244:64|192:52,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,160,413733,2,0,P|184:156|236:168,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,414067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,336,414233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Leader

Jenny wrote:

Leader:

  1. 07:20:805 (3) - why a reverse slider here? you mapped this soundpattern as three circles afterwards - in the same combo, actually -, so it feels rather weird to have it switch so seemingly random I placed a reverse slider here since it follows the music correctly, right? The reason why I placed three circles afterwards is just for the sake of making a cooler build-up
  2. 07:22:305 (7) - ^ ^
  3. 07:39:734 (1,2,3,4,1) - I can see this as being the same soundpattern, so I'd suggest a pentagon/star shape instead of having a rather wide-spaced square and a close-spaced slider next to it, which, to be honest, looks rather weird I wanted to leave (1) alone since it's part of a different pattern
Fixed my stuff from MidSoul, I can't remember what I fixed from previous mods (I remapped my parts several times too), thank you anyway~
Irreversible
Leader can you fix the Point for me?
Gezoda

bbj0920 wrote:

04:28:609 (12) - d rather keep that for a 1/2 k kkk rhythm.
04:32:381 (41) - k "awesome" stays in the same level of pitch, which gives ddd
04:34:609 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - Some streams are needed in this part well one more note doesn't hurt
06:15:900 (82,83,84) - kkk or kdk it's basically the same as the previous occurences of kkd
06:18:650 - How about adding a note? (d) not really my taste here, i'd rather have a separation between instrumoctagons and vocal
06:19:067 (103,106) - k i'd rather conserve a d d dxd ddd pattern so it plays well as the pitch doesn't move up in terms of vocal
06:28:567 (187) - ^ same as above except that i'd prefer ddddd in that thing.
fixed all of midsoul with a twist explained above

timing points to add:
276666,-95.2380952380952,4,1,0,80,0,0
277352,-90.9090909090909,4,1,0,80,0,0
278895,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0

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128,288,267066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,267409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,267752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,267923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,268009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,268095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,268266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,268609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,268952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,269295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,269466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,269809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,270066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,270323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,270495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,270752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,271009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,271523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,274181,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,274952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,275123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,275295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,275381,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,275467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,275981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,276323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,276666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,276837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,276923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,277008,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,277352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,277523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,277609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,277694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,278038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,278295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,278381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,96,278723,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,279238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,279581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,279752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,280095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,280266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,280781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,281038,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,281466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,281981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,282066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,282152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,282323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,282666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,282752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,282838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,283009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,283181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,283352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,283438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,283523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,283695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,283866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,284209,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,288,284381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,284466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,284552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,284723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,284895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,284981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,285066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,285238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,285581,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,288,285752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,285838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,285923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,286095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,286266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,286352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,286438,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,286609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,286952,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,288,287123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,287209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,287295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,287466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,287638,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,288,287809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,287895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,287981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,288152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,96,288323,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,96,288666,1,12,0:0:0:0:
128,96,289009,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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128,64,366734,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,366984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,367567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,367900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,368400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,368900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,369122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,369234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,370234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,370567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,370900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,371067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,371234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,372234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,373066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,373567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,377900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,378400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,379234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,379400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,379734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,288,379900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,379984,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,380400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,380650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,381234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,381400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,381567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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128,288,381734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,381817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,381900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,288,381984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,288,382067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,382234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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my notes are easy to find they're not even 256,192
Zare
Clean Mapping Compilation 2014

Tbh I really really like this. It's 8 Minutes long and several different mappers worked on this, so it would have been easy for things to get boring or unfitting or messy, but all the mapper transitions are extremely smooth and it has a lot of variation for stuff to stay interesting

Also RIP me @ Map Description
Chewin
thank you ;3

http://puu.sh/aYQnv.txt

Copy it all because I changed some timing points on my parts.
HabiHolic
Ranked plz
Hemmi
For this map, I shoot an OCTAGON because I became addicted. Please make the ranking real!
I wish OctagonCollaboration could do "8 awesome Angles of Osu!"~
Liiraye
Hello! The m4m is finally here! 1 year late but still

General


Set AudioLeadIn: 2000

Leader


00:00:915 (3) - Maybe a pattern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953635 (at least a 1/2 slider and a note after to fit in with the rhythm rather than a long slider that ignores these sounds)
00:05:081 (1,2) - This kinda confused me. Something like this could make it nicer to play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953655
00:17:915 (4) - How about just evening out the distance between the anti jumps and the slider with this note? It's not really important, just a thought :)https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953649
00:19:415 (3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953662 This would fit the music better imo seeing as 00:19:748 (4) - is a loud note for a sliderend, try it out and tell me what you think!

RLC


00:30:414 (6,7) - How about ctrl+G these since the patterns before are big jumps?
00:50:081 (5,6,7,8) - The triple feels kinda weird to play, can't really say why though :o I tried this and it felt much better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953687
00:52:081 (1) - Wouldn't a straight slider sound better here with his voice? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953699

Irreversible


00:55:915 (3) - Felt confusing to play, how about making it all one stream? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953716
01:00:415 (1,2,3) - This distance felt really out of place. Just making it a bit bigger or evening it out with combo 3 would work. Or perhaps just revamp the layout of those two sliders entirely like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953734
01:25:081 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Please do something like this or just change pattern xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953743 it was very hard to read the stack and felt kinda random.

Kevincela


01:59:915 (3) - Only part that confused me was this. It feels like the stream after is going to start right after the slider. Maybe a change of placement for this slider would solve this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953767 Not really that important because it might just be me

Cheesiest


02:19:707 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 02:22:319 (5,6,7,8) - There's nothing wrong with these spacings because it's pretty hard to miss them, they just looked... weird? x) Keep them if you want though!
02:31:997 (7) - Having notes like these stacked right after a massive double hazard threw me off, not sure if it broke flow because it worked as an antijump (probably) or because I'm bad at this game (most likely). I would separate the stack and even the distance like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953803 That goes for the following notes like this as well.

Kevincela


Couldn't find anything here, nice :)

Cheesiest


03:17:854 (5) - only thing I'd want changed is this to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953829 or at least not a double stacked first.

Irreversible


03:37:734 (5,6) - Nothing big, just move this up a little. The spacing just bothered my eyes hue
03:48:544 (1) - xD I think these could be edited a little to look cooler. Sorry for the shit mod but this part was really cool and played excellent!

Chewin


04:12:418 (5) - This doesn't really have any sound to it and it feels kinda off, how about this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953872
04:17:193 (1,2,3) - Try this, I think it plays way better and follows the vocals better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1953914 You could probably make the aesthetics better than I did though


PHEW I'm beat, I never mod so this takes time for me... I'll be back later with the resto
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