- Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
- Comment/Opinion
Storyboard
- 03:35:561 - The orginal Song is from a Game called "Yume Kōjō: Doki Doki Panic" which was later used as a model for Super Mario Bros. 2 outside of Japan. So please use Super Mario Bros. 2 as source and not Super Smash Bros. 2 since that isn't an actual game's title (the second smash Bros. was calles "Super Smash Bros. Melee")
- 04:27:752 - Please, the original game's name is "Super Mario Land 2: 6 Golden Coins" not Super Mario Bros. Land 2
- Is that thing that happens in the last section intentional or just a bug/something unfinished? owo
Leader
- 00:02:581 (1,2,3,4,5) - The whole pentagon feels a bit compressed since the spacing is kinda messed up between the Circles. Please make some adjustments here to keep the spacing even (you can also use Create Polygon Circles).
- 00:03:748 (6) - Is the missing clap intentional here? It seems that the sound emphasized by the other ones is present here as well.
- 00:06:748 (1) - The flow from the previous object into this could be sooo much better if you'd place it lower (somewhere around 168|308 for example) due to a smoother transition between the objects.
- 00:16:081 (1,2,3,4) - /Comment/ - Compared to the other patterns this one feels a bit slow due to the way lower spacing here which hinders the flow here imo. If you agree with me on this just simply enlarge the spacing to 1,80 or something like this.
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - Oh my, Super Mario Land 2 <3
- 04:29:123 (1,2,3) - /Minor/ - Inconsistent triplet Spacing o/
- 04:35:295 (2) - The low DS feels a bit out of place here since you didn't use anything lower than 0,70 in this part before/afterwards.
- 04:38:723 (1) - Perhaps you can move this to 15|240 in order to build a line with the previous circles. That would make the flow here much better due to a fluent transition between the Circles and the Slider.
- 04:45:409 (9) - Ignoring the downbeat with this feels so weird as it is so strong as we can hear on the actual finish on the music. Changing this would make this feel way more natural (and fitting to the rest as well since you didn't ignore other less emphasized downbeats as well).
- 04:48:323 (1,2,3) - /Comment/ - I've actually mistaken this for 1/2 lol Dunno, probably just my reading :'D
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 07:21:405 (4) - /Minor/ - Watch your symmetry with 07:22:005 (1) - . Also if it wasn't intentional to be symmetrical, just do it since that would look pretty neat here.
- 07:26:781 (1) - Perhaps you can move this to 85|65 to get it in a line with the previous objects. The line would be followed by this slider's track which would create a really nice and smooth flow here *o*
- 07:31:533 (4) - How about moving this a bit downwards to get an oval-ish shape together with 07:30:642 (3) - ? That would be really cool imo (:
- 07:37:404 (3) - I don't really see what you are following with this Slider's head. There's neither an instrument playing nor vocals hit this tick since they are in a hold. A Circle + a 1/1 Slider starting at 07:36:821 - would fit the music way better here.
RLC
- 00:23:415 (4,5,6) - The spacing of this pattern is inconsistent with the rest of your 1/4 Spacing used in this section since the notes here aren't really special and pretty similiar to 00:24:248 (2,3,4,5) - for example so that they don't really need the emphasis of a bigger spacing. Please reduce it to fit the rest.
- 00:24:748 (4,5) - This might me just me not fully understanding what you are following here but ignoring the note at 00:24:915 - feels really weird to me since it was mapped for all the previous and following patterns (e.g. 00:26:248 - ; 00:27:581 - etc.). I'd suggest you to use one of the two rhythms seen in the Snapshot below.
- 00:27:581 (4,5,6) - /Minor/ - I personally think this would feel much more natural if you'd move it to the left due to the zigzag movement between 00:27:081 (2,3) - . Even though I know they are placed in a line I think this would feel way better because you'd give the player a wider range to aim (4).
- 00:39:248 (3) - Try to move this to 303|47 in order to even out the spacing here. That would 1. improve the flow since the jump to (4) felt a bit too big and fast to me as there isn't a that strong note that would need to be emphasized and 2. make the triangle look even as well as improve the aethetics of the "curve" formed by 00:38:915 (1,2,3) - .
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 05:15:284 (6) - This note is similiar to 05:15:962 (3) - for example where you've used low spacing. Please consider to go for lower spacing here as well since this note isn't really strong as you can hear if you listen closely so it doesn't really need the special emphasis.
- 05:26:809 (2,3,1,2) - This might be just my very personal point of view but I think this feels kinda empty since there's so much not covered by just simply placing Circles here which make it feel so unnatural ;_; Marking this as a comment though~
- 05:28:674 - Ignoring this upbeat sounds really of since there's a really strong "clap-ish" sound on it as well as a start of a hold played by the Instrument you are following :/
Irrefluff
- 00:54:581 (1,2) - Hm, ich weiß nicht. Das kleine Spacing spielt sich mit dem so stark nach unten links gehenden Slider irgendwie doof. Vielleicht könntest du sowas wie im Screenshot machen. Das würde auch von der Betonung dieser komischen Vocals hier viel besser passen imo.
- 00:57:248 (7) - /Comment/ - Auch hier wär ich persönlich für höheres Spacing, einfach damit es sich wegen der Betonung auf 00:57:415 (1) - intuitiver anfühlt :/
- 00:59:415 (7,8,9,10) - Der Rhythm hier mag dem bei 00:54:081 (4,5,1,2) - ähnlich sein, aber wenn du genau hinhörst, hörst du vielleicht, dass das mit 00:54:331 (5) - gemappte "gon" auf dem blauen Tick aufhört, bei 00:59:665 (8) - das "gon" nur ganz kurz gesagt wird und somit schon auf dem weißen endet, wodurch der Slider da für mich einfach keinen Sinn ergibt. Ein 1/4 Slider würde viel besser passen imo. (Und außerdem, wieso ist das Spacing hier so klein, obwohl die Betonung geanu gleich ist? Das wirkt irgendwie inkonsistent ¬¬)
- 01:15:748 (4,5,1) - Das kam in der anfangs doch erst recht ruhigen Section dann doch irgendwie überraschend xD Sowas wie bei 01:16:415 (3,4,1) - wär vielleicht doch die bessere Wahl. Es wäre 1. leichter zu aimen und nicht so überrschend für den Spieler und würde 2. auch gut passen, weil die Stelle 01:16:415 (3,4,1) - auch sehr ähnlich ist (:
- Coole Achtecke und cooler Achteck-Stream <3
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 03:39:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Gwah, das hat sich schwer readen lassen, weil (1) noch sichtbar ist, wenn der Stack schon erscheint und sich das dann so komisch überlappt. Das hat mich total verwirrt ;_;
my reading sucks lolIch weiß nicht, vielleciht wär ein gespacter Stream von (2)s Tail nach unten links cool oder du stackst manually, sodass sich das halt nicht so überlappt. - 03:48:544 (1) - und 03:57:193 (1) - sollten laut folgendem Auszug der Ranking Criteria leider nicht rankable sein :<
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider. - 03:50:436 (4) - /Kommentar/ - Ich persönlich find das kleine Spacing hier schon ein wenig unpassend, weils einfach so winzig ist und nicht richtig ins Bild des Parts passt, wo du eigentlich nie, selbst bei ähnlichen Noten in der Musik, so ein winziges Spacing benutzt hast :/ (selbiges gilt auch für 03:58:815 (3,4) - welcher ja genau das selbe nur flipped ist).
Kevincela
- 01:26:748 (1,2,3,4) - These Sliders feel a bit messy due to the inconsistent spacing between (2) and (3) caused by the fact that they end on the opposite side (on the tail). Considering that you've mapped 01:29:415 (1,2,3,4) - using equal spacingas well as a kind of linear movement I'd go for something like this here as well. This is nothing you have to fix, just an idea of mine here, how to rearrange these a bit so marking this as a Comment~
- 01:30:748 (1) - If we take a closer look at the stream starting with this note you an maybe agree with me that there's an increase starting at 01:31:415 (1) - similiar to the one in the first stream of this section which makes this feel a bit weird that it this just has such a small increase in terms of spacing as well even though this is even stronger due to it being louder than the first one. Please consider to enlarge the spacing a big more.
- 01:39:498 (8) - I kinda disagree with the rhythm here. If we listen closely we can hear there's a kind of fade starting at 01:39:831 - which introduces the new section so that note should be a bit more emphasized by clicking it. Covering the hold by a Slider could give a neat effect as well (:
- 01:57:081 (7) - Considering that all your previous Sliders that were covering this sound (e.g. 01:51:748 (8) - ) were 3/4-Sliders make this one feel a bit out of place. Perhaps you can enlarge this one to 3/4 too ;_;
Cheesiest
- 02:15:056 (9,10,11,12) - Huh, this was actually really hard to read since the 1/4 came pretty fast. Please add NCs at 02:15:056 (9,11) - to make it better readable.
- 02:26:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The zigzag movement didn't really work for me here tbh. It felt just so harsh due to pretty rapid transitions while alternating this. I'd personally go for CTRL+G on 02:26:868 (5,6) - for an oval movement as for the previous ones but you can obviously also rearrange the whole pattern. :/
- 02:30:061 (6) - This is kinda weird since the sound you are following with this actually ends on the red tick. Please shorten this by 1/4 and add a circle onto the blue tick.
- 02:30:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hm, this pattern looks really messed up due to its inconsistent spacing and overall pretty random looking arrangement. A pattern created out of rotated 1/4 Sliders as you've mapped the following ones would be so awesome here *o*
- 02:35:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe this is just a personal preference of mine but enlarging the spacing here would look so much better ingame since the stacks mess the whole spacing up ;w;
- I didn't really like this Part that much due to the whole spacing. I don't know, maybe you should have used a bigger spacing overall since these distance-changing streams just feel so compressed :/
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 03:17:854 (5,6,7,8,9) - Whoa, this is so unintuitive which made this feel so surprising.
This is such a combobreaker within the marathon ;__; - Nothing else to say here tbh, really well done part except this 1/3-Stream :/
Chewin
- 04:04:761 (1,2) - This seems to be pretty similiar to 04:09:085 (1,1) - to me, just that at the first ones that instrument is way louder and stronger. There are two questions I ask to myself now: 1. 04:05:031 (2) - What do you try to emphasize with a lower SV here? I really can't see anything here that gives me the feeling to put a slower Slider here; 2. Why does 04:09:355 (1) - has a NC on it but 04:05:031 (2) - doesn't even though it's SV actually changes?
- 04:10:166 (2) - Probably it's just me but I don't see the point why this ends on the blue tick there even though the sound mapped by the Slider cuts at the red tick. Maybe you could try something as seen in the Screenshot, the Circle at 04:10:639 - is optional though.
- 04:12:689 (6) - I know what you are following with this but the note at 04:12:779 - seems way stronger. Also the tick at 04:12:598 - has a Drum on it followed by a hold. Perhaps you can try something like this:
- Wow, really well done Part <3
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 04:56:131 (5,6,1) - I'm not sure if it's just me but the transition between (6) and (1) feels a bit harsh and compressed. Moving (1) upwards would improve the flot here by a lot.
- 05:11:215 (3,4,1) - /Minor/ - Try to adjust the Curve here a bit. It feels a bit rough which makes it play not so smooth imo and as all your other streams are nice wavy and curvy this one should be like this as well.
Blue Dragon
- 05:53:997 (5) - Meh, this Breaks the Flow a bit for me due to the fluent sqaure movement of the previous objects which should be followed here considering that this is part of the same section in the music. Try to rotate it by 20° (Selection Centre)
- 06:06:064 (5,6,7) - /Minor/ - Consider to even out the Spacing here to get an equal triangle since (7) doesn't really need a higher DS for a bigger emphasis imo.
- Try to get your Triplet Spacing a bit more even. It seems to vary between 0,74 and 0,85 which is 0,10 difference. That's nothing too big but it's noticeable for some of them ingame so it wouldn't hurt doing this :V
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 06:37:067 (11,12,1) - Having this rather small spacing here feels a bit out of place considering that the rest of the actual Section always has bigger spacing with gaps between these Sliders what makes these here feel a bit compressed :/ Try to enlarge the Spacing here because of this reason, I don't know, maybe it's just me though ^^
- 06:47:233 (4,5) - Consider to move this more left to get a kind of curvy shape here. The reason why I want you to do this is that it would feel much more natural to me to go downwards to aim that stream starting at (6) after already aiming a curve facing that direction.
Kyshiro
- 06:09:067 (5,6,1) - Wow, this was really hard to read due to that stack being a bit unintuitively :/ I don't know, the end of the repeat Slider has the same sound as the Circle and the Slider but they aren't stacked as well. So my idea here would either be to unstack (6) and (1) or to make them better visible by a bigger distance.
- 06:20:400 (2) - Try to move this a bit more left so that 06:20:067 (1) - 's head points onto it. Like this the turn to the left would be much more comfortable. Also I'm for rotating (2) slightly to give the player a smooth not to rapid transition into (3) ^-^
- 06:28:734 (9,10,11,12) - Maybe I'm just not used to stuff like this but the overlap between (10) and the stream looks kinda messy to me. Enlarging the Spacing would help a lot here.
Please don't markier me ;___; I'm just a poor little Linie too mark the Abgrenzung - 07:02:400 (4,5,6) - Perhaps it's just me not liking overlaps like this but I think it looks really untidy like this :/ I don't know if you like stacking stuff but my idea would be to stack (5) and (6) with (4)'s tail to avoid that and keep the blanket nice :<
- 07:09:400 (1) - Consider to move this downwards. That kind of zigzag pattern would fit way better here due to the intuitive downwards movement given by 07:08:567 (5,6,7) - here.