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Toshinori Hiramatsu - Happy Birthday

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alvisto
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alvisto
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, December 04, 2009 at 12:05:48 PM

Artist: Toshinori Hiramatsu
Title: Happy Birthday
Source: Sword of Justice
Tags: Azure_Kyte Azure Kyte
BPM: 110
Filesize: 3266kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (4.79 stars, 257 notes)
  2. alvisto's Birthday (4.99 stars, 326 notes)
  3. Azure's Birthday (4.76 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Beginner (2.98 stars, 134 notes)
Download: Toshinori Hiramatsu - Happy Birthday
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Osu needs a birthday map !

This map is a dedication to all my fellow osu friends, comrades and players for their birthday. No matter when is your birthday, there's always a place for you and your osu friends to celebrate it, and that's osu! xD

Happy playing. xD

SPECIAL THANKS to :
Guess difficulty - Azure_Kyte
Awesome skin - Shinde

Other credits can be found in the following post. =D
Last edited by alvisto , edited 35 times in total.
alvisto
881 posts
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alvisto
CREDITS (Again~~)

Azure_Kyte - For awesome guess difficulty, thanks bud~ <3
Shinde - Disco like skin. :3
Zekira - Timing help ( ^o^ )
pete2528 - Mod and support and encouragement. xD
Nachopiggy - Star and mod, <3 =D
Blissfulyoshi - HAI YOSHI <3
Abalee - Thanks for replying to my PM mod request. =P
Breeze - STAR ! \^.^/
Alace - Mapping tips and advices. <3
Kytoxid - Yo yo yo \o/
Shinxyn - Very good mod and nazi mod too. >w<
gdeath - YAY *run out of emoticon*
Mystearica - Thanks for the honest feedback. Appreciate it. :D
rust45 - Thanks for accepting my request in #mod. :3------o
ztrot - Thanks ztrot for reassuring me... :3
Mafiamaster - Thanks for being able to tolerate me *LOL* and >w< I just LOVE your avatar. Oh yea, thanks for bubble too. :3
Starrodkirby86 - Thanks for noticing those small yet fatal errors, xD, and of course rebubble. We should take a pic together with your kirby and my mushroom. O.O
Last edited by alvisto , edited 3 times in total.
Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira
First Offset: 605 RESNAP (...whole beats landing on red ticks = X_X)
Second Offset: 14713

That's all I can find for now... Well, I'm kinda having a hard time modding a WIP map lol.
alvisto
881 posts
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alvisto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
hi alvis
your map is very fun, i like your map too much.

[Happy birthday]

00:34:497 (3) new combo
00:35:145 (5) ^
00:35:794 (7) ^
00:50:875 (9) ^
00:53:470 (8) ^

[Advanced]
ok all

[beginner]
ok all

if i can find BG, i will give it to you XD
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion Red = Change this


[Beginner]
00:36:44 (1) - I personally think this should be replaced with more one beat sliders. They fit the beat so well.
00:41:95 (1) - A clap would fit well here
00:44:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd make all of these claps
01:00:76 - Maybe a note here?
No Problems Found :)

[Advanced]
No Problems Found :)

[Happy Birthday]
00:09:96 (7) - Move 1/6 Note forward.
No other Problems Found :)

A great beatmap, and My Birthday is coming soooooon :3 Starred
alvisto
881 posts
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alvisto

pete2528 wrote:

hi alvis
your map is very fun, i like your map too much. Awww, you make me so happy... lol

[Happy birthday]

00:34:497 (3) new combo
00:35:145 (5) ^
00:35:794 (7) ^
00:50:875 (9) ^
00:53:470 (8) ^

Sure, as I think these combo mod is logical, fixed all these. =D

[Advanced]
ok all

[beginner]
ok all

if i can find BG, i will give it to you XD :3 :3 :3 :3

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod ^^ ======| :D Azure's BLUE mod <3

Blue = Suggestion Red = Change this


[Beginner]
00:36:44 (1) - I personally think this should be replaced with more one beat sliders. They fit the beat so well. Ahh, of course, the reason the spinner is here is because this difficulty is original an EASY, but since now it's changed to Beginner, I will remap this part. ^ ^
00:41:95 (1) - A clap would fit well here Thanks !
00:44:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Thanks ! Cause I was in quite a dilenma whether to clap these beats. orz[/color]
01:00:76 - Maybe a note here? Sure ! It fits well.
No Problems Found :)

[Advanced]
No Problems Found :) =D

[Happy Birthday]
00:09:96 (7) - Move 1/6 Note forward. Mentioned in IRC. Used 1/8 instead, but still it's off, xD. Don't know what's the problem here though... XD
No other Problems Found :)

A great beatmap, and My Birthday is coming soooooon :3 Starred Yay ! Looking forward both to your birthday and BIRTHDAY. Lol. =D
Thanks for the mod and support guys. ^.^
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
[Beginner]
Fine :)

[Advanced]
Fine :)

[Happy Birthday]
I'm not entirely sure, maybe it's just me, these parts feels weird
00:16:98 (1,2,3) - Spacing feels weird
00:23:30 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion, how about stacking these?
00:23:79 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing again, seems weird

Great map, star'd~
alvisto
881 posts
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alvisto

NachoPiggy wrote:

[Beginner]
Fine :)

[Advanced]
Fine :)

[Happy Birthday]
I'm not entirely sure, maybe it's just me, these parts feels weird
00:16:98 (1,2,3) - Spacing feels weird
00:23:30 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion, how about stacking these?
00:23:79 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing again, seems weird
I know what you mean, lemme find some opinions from others first... =D
Great map, star'd~
Thanks for the mod nacho ! = 3=~~
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Beginner: Fine

Advanced: Fine. Just one Suggestion.
01:37:25 (1) - I think it is a better ending if you extend the spinner till 01:40:16

Happy Birthday: Fine, but I have 2 suggestions this time.
01:34:49 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Can you make these jumps different? They feel like exact replicas or reflections of advanced. Also they feel quite easy in comparison to the rest of your diff.
01:37:25 (1) - same as advanced

Nice map. Star.
alvisto
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alvisto

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Beginner: Fine

Advanced: Fine. Just one Suggestion.
01:37:25 (1) - I think it is a better ending if you extend the spinner till 01:40:16 I think it's fine the way it is. =P

Happy Birthday: Fine, but I have 2 suggestions this time.
01:34:49 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Can you make these jumps different? They feel like exact replicas or reflections of advanced. Also they feel quite easy in comparison to the rest of your diff. Ahh, thanks for pointing that out. Changed a little BIT I hope ? lol.
01:37:25 (1) - same as advanced

Nice map. Star.
Thanks for the mod yoshi, and also, remap some parts.
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Toshinori Hiramatsu - Happy Birthday (alvisto) [17th October, 1991].osu
abalee
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abalee
overall: personally i think you should not map the beginning of the music coz the piano sound are randomly :?

beginner:
00:14:10 (X) - try insert breaktime (about 3 seconds blank)

advanced:
fine

17th October, 1991:
some note are obviously off beat in the beginning :cry:
01:34:33 (7,1) - well, IMO it is not a good jump :|

Happy Birthday:
00:12:33 (4) - this note is obviously off beat.
00:14:78 (1) - compare to the same slider in "advanced" it is 1/4 beat longer. which one is right? :?

star for sure. ;)
Breeze
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alvisto
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alvisto

abalee wrote:

overall: personally i think you should not map the beginning of the music coz the piano sound are randomly :? Yea, I do noticed that, its BPM is fluctuating and it's very random, but.... but....

beginner:
00:14:10 (X) - try insert breaktime (about 3 seconds blank) Done

advanced:
fine


Happy Birthday:
00:12:33 (4) - this note is obviously off beat. Fixed, and used Azure_Kyte's beat placing instead.
00:14:78 (1) - compare to the same slider in "advanced" it is 1/4 beat longer. which one is right? :? Orz, thanks for pointing this out... XD

star for sure. ;)
Thanks... =D

Breeze wrote:

star 8-)
Breeze~~~ = 3=~~~
Alace
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Alace
Pretty cool mapset
Overall 8 + BPM 185 is awesome XD
alvisto
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alvisto

Alace wrote:

Pretty cool mapset
Overall 8 + BPM 185 is awesome XD
Thanks Alace. Kudosu for irc modding. =P
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[Beginner]

00:44:055 (1,2) - These silenced slider ends are slightly surprising.
00:48:011 (7) - Extend this by 1/1?
01:20:022 (1,2,3,4) - Silenced slider starts are confusing, in my opinion.

[Azure]

01:14:087 (1) - Spinner starts before the notes end.

[Advanced]

Nothing. :)

[Alvisto]

I don't think Rarely Stack is rankable.

00:23:030 (1,2,3) - Funny-looking stack.
00:59:047 (1,2,3) - Stack onto the blue 8?

Starred, very nice.
alvisto
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alvisto
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Shinxyn
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alvisto
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alvisto

Shinxyn wrote:

Wow, pretty nice song~ Thanks shinxyn !

Beginner- I think -2 on Overall diff and +2-4 on hp drain, your choice, cuz I think the overall diff doesn't make the map "Beginner", and low hp drain... is too low Increase Hp drain, but not decreasing Overall diff. =P
00:37:009 (2) - remove one repeat, the last one sounds odd, (plus the actual beat is on 00:38:022) Partially remap this part, and the u-turn is shortened. =P
00:48:011 (7) - plus two repeats? it ends in a weird place as it is I know, but I am scared it would be too hard... xD
01:00:076 (1) - not so beginner friendly jump ORZ, THIS IS NOT SUPPOSED TO BE A JUMP ! Thanks for pointing that out. =P



Advanced-[/b]
Nicely done
I can still make note of some nazi-
SPOILER
00:18:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the effect is kinda weakened without hitsounds (since it is your own beats), but the timing panels work well
00:21:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^Actually there's very subtle beats here in the BG if you hear it carefully with your hands pressing your earphone towards your ear, lol, anyway, I think adding soft whistles here might be weird, so I will let it stay as it is.
01:12:076 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - after all that intense clapping, I would expect -some- here... Maybe? Please look at my comment on alvisto's diff there. =P
01:31:074 (5,9) - up a tick xD Sure ! Can't believe I missed those. orz

alvisto's (your own~)
Nice and intense
Nazi + ultra nazi - (therefore, none of this really matters)
SPOILER
00:09:094 (7) - was this supposed to be a flip or on purpose? I don't understand the word "flip" here, but whateva you're referring to, I was forced to do it on purpose. xD
00:12:040 (4) - maybe add finish? Sure !
00:13:083 (7) - maybe remove finish? have to say no here. =P
00:19:057 (4) - to be safe, move this down a tick, some BATs are picky if notes are off grid a bit like this Sure and the one after that is fixed too.
00:18:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Advanced
00:21:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Advanced
00:22:017 (4) - ^ up a tick though Yea, look ^
01:01:009 (2,3) - down a tick (so 2,3 look like they're vertical flips) yea lol, thanks . Fix
01:02:071 (1,2,3) - this is just like the last jump, but 1 and 2's distance is much more extreme o_o maybe fix? (and 2,3 down a tick for same reason) True true, change the position of 2, and the alignment too.
01:05:030 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - play around with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J a bit here... Sure, Fix, and now looking more neat !
01:12:076 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -same as Advanced, doesn't really matter though This is those part where you would feel "no matter how people are against it, I won't change it !" and yea, won't change it. xD
01:28:001 (1,2) - eh? double clap? why? Oops, remove, also remove claps at here too 01:20:071 (2)
01:30:060 (1) - down two ticks, 01:30:076 (2) - right one tick, 01:31:074 (5) - down one tick O_o~
01:34:033 (8) - ultra nazi- up+right so 2,4,6,8 are equal fixed, should look :3 now

Good job, as far as I can tell, none of which I pointed out really matters They do shinxyn, and I do request a nazi modding from ya, and I think you have done a good job at it. xD
Thanks for the mod, appreciate it. =P
gdeath
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gdeath
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Mystearica
Mystearica
Definitively not my style of map but I don't really have anything major to complain about. If you want me to discuss your map, see me on IRC or MSN.

You can have my star.

PS: Nice song.
Shinde
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Shinde
If you decide to use these, I suggest adding that sliderborder line into the color sections of the .osu's to make the slider track black. I think these hitcircles work best with a lighter color/BG and more neon-y combo colors. I don't think they're terribly relevant to the song, but also don't think they're that off? I didn't feel like the song needed skinning really. A cake hitcircle would probably just look weird, lol. xd (Believe me I tried.)

SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 31,211,207
Combo2 : 234,70,0
Combo3 : 0,89,6
Combo4 : 242,0,121
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
Download: Hitcircle.rar

As for the actual map, I didn't look at it in detail, but when I played it it was pretty nice. I primarily played Azure's and the Advanced difficulty.
rust45
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rust45
[Beginner]
00:18:028 (1,2) - I'm no pro with hitsounds, but those are begging for finishes.
00:20:087 (1,2) - ^
00:23:030 (1,2,3) - ^

[Azure's Birthday]
Same notes need finishes please.

[Advanced]
Same notes should have finishes IMO

[alvisto's Birthday]
Same thing, but I'm sure you guessed that.
01:09:020 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - o.o Great mapping but very hard.

This is awesome, you get a star.
alvisto
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alvisto

gdeath wrote:

Overall:why do you add two same name in your tags?
tags:Azure_Kyte Azure Kyte??
remove one of them,plz.

Coz I guess some may lazy enough to search only azure in th search box ? xD Anyway, removed.
[Beginner]
HD Drain & Overall diff are too high for this Beginner diff.plz decrease this setting. Change a little. =P
Thanks for the mod gdeath. :3

Shinde wrote:

SKIN
Yea, I would definitely use this ! ^.^ Thanks Shinde... Anyway, I remove 1 combo colour there coz I don't like neon pink (lol) and also change the BG to a guitar BG to match more with the hitcircles (I guess ?) xD

rust45 wrote:

[Beginner]
00:18:028 (1,2) - I'm no pro with hitsounds, but those are begging for finishes.
00:20:087 (1,2) - ^
00:23:030 (1,2,3) - ^
Yea, I tried these before, but it's very noisy. xD So, have to say no there. =P
[Azure's Birthday]
Same notes need finishes please.

[Advanced]
Same notes should have finishes IMO

[alvisto's Birthday]
Same thing, but I'm sure you guessed that.
01:09:020 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - o.o Great mapping but very hard.
Yea, it is. But some manage to pass it. =P

This is awesome, you get a star.
Thanks for the voluntary mod rust ! ^.^ Appreciate it.
alvisto
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alvisto
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ztrot
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ztrot
Ki toggles are bad and only in easy.

Azure:00:41:146 (6,1,2,3) - ewwww and all the others like it.

Ask me to mod when I'm not dead tired plz thxs

Timing is meh
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Lower overall difficulty on Beginner

Azure's Party
00:41:632 (3) - No.
00:46:821 (5) - No.
01:39:120 (1,2) - No. Don't put 1/4 notes right after a spinner.
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Fixed

Download: Toshinori Hiramatsu - Happy Birthday (alvisto) [Azure's Birthday].osu
alvisto
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alvisto

ztrot wrote:

Ki toggles are bad and only in easy.

Azure:00:41:146 (6,1,2,3) - ewwww and all the others like it.

Ask me to mod when I'm not dead tired plz thxs

Timing is meh

Mafiamaster wrote:

Lower overall difficulty on Beginner

Azure's Party
00:41:632 (3) - No.
00:46:821 (5) - No.
01:39:120 (1,2) - No. Don't put 1/4 notes right after a spinner.
All fix, and Azure's part fix too...
Mafiamaster
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alvisto
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alvisto

Mafiamaster wrote:

Stack Leniency: Rarely stacked is currently unrankable. Please move the tick away from the left.
Fix ! xD
Mafiamaster
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Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
It can be changed, but I'd like to point out that to the best of my knowledge, this is perfectly rankable.
alvisto
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alvisto
xD Alright then, it is now fixed and proper~
Mafiamaster
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alvisto
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alvisto

Mafiamaster wrote:

Azure's Birthday is now harder than Advanced by 0.01 difficulty stars. Make Advanced a tiny bit harder by moving some of the difficulty settings. It's only reasonable to have the higher of the two total max points to have a higher difficulty rating.
Hrmm... Raised HP drain by 1 tick, hopefully it won't be too cruel then... xD

Mafiamaster wrote:

Azure's Birthday~
00:09:968 (7) - This note is a little late. Resnap to a 1/8 tick like in alvisto's Birthday and move farther away from 6.
Fix. :3

Thanks Mafiamaster.
Mafiamaster
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Bubbled.
Starrodkirby86
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IRC chat ~

Resnapped a few notes and removed a non-existent custom override.

Happy (re)bubble to you!
Takuma
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Takuma
Happy Rank.
alvisto
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alvisto
=O

FINALLY. Thanks Takuma~ ;_; (tears of joy)

:lol:
RemmyX25
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Reset thumbnail so it can reflect current background
Real1
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alvisto
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alvisto

Real1 wrote:

Beginner - 2.94 Stars. Contains "fast", stacks "large" spacing (For a Beginner map). Also contains slider spam and more. No beginner can handle this.
In whose world is this a Beginner diff? :(
Have to say sorry to you, coz my concept of "Beginner" at the time of mapping this is kinda "Normal+", plus this a fast song, hence my concept of Beginner is "the simplest difficulty of this song", not necessarily parallel with "Easy" form the other maps.

But now, I really mapped "Beginner" as in really Beginner and easy in more recent maps of mine. Hence, I apologize and thanks for the comment ! ^.^
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