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abalee
overall: personally i think you should not map the beginning of the music coz the piano sound are randomly :?

beginner:
00:14:10 (X) - try insert breaktime (about 3 seconds blank)

advanced:
fine

17th October, 1991:
some note are obviously off beat in the beginning :cry:
01:34:33 (7,1) - well, IMO it is not a good jump :|

Happy Birthday:
00:12:33 (4) - this note is obviously off beat.
00:14:78 (1) - compare to the same slider in "advanced" it is 1/4 beat longer. which one is right? :?

star for sure. ;)
Breeze
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alvisto

abalee wrote:

overall: personally i think you should not map the beginning of the music coz the piano sound are randomly :? Yea, I do noticed that, its BPM is fluctuating and it's very random, but.... but....

beginner:
00:14:10 (X) - try insert breaktime (about 3 seconds blank) Done

advanced:
fine


Happy Birthday:
00:12:33 (4) - this note is obviously off beat. Fixed, and used Azure_Kyte's beat placing instead.
00:14:78 (1) - compare to the same slider in "advanced" it is 1/4 beat longer. which one is right? :? Orz, thanks for pointing this out... XD

star for sure. ;)
Thanks... =D

Breeze wrote:

star 8-)
Breeze~~~ = 3=~~~
Alace
Pretty cool mapset
Overall 8 + BPM 185 is awesome XD
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alvisto

Alace wrote:

Pretty cool mapset
Overall 8 + BPM 185 is awesome XD
Thanks Alace. Kudosu for irc modding. =P
Kytoxid
[Beginner]

00:44:055 (1,2) - These silenced slider ends are slightly surprising.
00:48:011 (7) - Extend this by 1/1?
01:20:022 (1,2,3,4) - Silenced slider starts are confusing, in my opinion.

[Azure]

01:14:087 (1) - Spinner starts before the notes end.

[Advanced]

Nothing. :)

[Alvisto]

I don't think Rarely Stack is rankable.

00:23:030 (1,2,3) - Funny-looking stack.
00:59:047 (1,2,3) - Stack onto the blue 8?

Starred, very nice.
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alvisto
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Shinxyn
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alvisto

Shinxyn wrote:

Wow, pretty nice song~ Thanks shinxyn !

Beginner- I think -2 on Overall diff and +2-4 on hp drain, your choice, cuz I think the overall diff doesn't make the map "Beginner", and low hp drain... is too low Increase Hp drain, but not decreasing Overall diff. =P
00:37:009 (2) - remove one repeat, the last one sounds odd, (plus the actual beat is on 00:38:022) Partially remap this part, and the u-turn is shortened. =P
00:48:011 (7) - plus two repeats? it ends in a weird place as it is I know, but I am scared it would be too hard... xD
01:00:076 (1) - not so beginner friendly jump ORZ, THIS IS NOT SUPPOSED TO BE A JUMP ! Thanks for pointing that out. =P



Advanced-[/b]
Nicely done
I can still make note of some nazi-
SPOILER
00:18:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the effect is kinda weakened without hitsounds (since it is your own beats), but the timing panels work well
00:21:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^Actually there's very subtle beats here in the BG if you hear it carefully with your hands pressing your earphone towards your ear, lol, anyway, I think adding soft whistles here might be weird, so I will let it stay as it is.
01:12:076 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - after all that intense clapping, I would expect -some- here... Maybe? Please look at my comment on alvisto's diff there. =P
01:31:074 (5,9) - up a tick xD Sure ! Can't believe I missed those. orz

alvisto's (your own~)
Nice and intense
Nazi + ultra nazi - (therefore, none of this really matters)
SPOILER
00:09:094 (7) - was this supposed to be a flip or on purpose? I don't understand the word "flip" here, but whateva you're referring to, I was forced to do it on purpose. xD
00:12:040 (4) - maybe add finish? Sure !
00:13:083 (7) - maybe remove finish? have to say no here. =P
00:19:057 (4) - to be safe, move this down a tick, some BATs are picky if notes are off grid a bit like this Sure and the one after that is fixed too.
00:18:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Advanced
00:21:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as Advanced
00:22:017 (4) - ^ up a tick though Yea, look ^
01:01:009 (2,3) - down a tick (so 2,3 look like they're vertical flips) yea lol, thanks . Fix
01:02:071 (1,2,3) - this is just like the last jump, but 1 and 2's distance is much more extreme o_o maybe fix? (and 2,3 down a tick for same reason) True true, change the position of 2, and the alignment too.
01:05:030 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - play around with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J a bit here... Sure, Fix, and now looking more neat !
01:12:076 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -same as Advanced, doesn't really matter though This is those part where you would feel "no matter how people are against it, I won't change it !" and yea, won't change it. xD
01:28:001 (1,2) - eh? double clap? why? Oops, remove, also remove claps at here too 01:20:071 (2)
01:30:060 (1) - down two ticks, 01:30:076 (2) - right one tick, 01:31:074 (5) - down one tick O_o~
01:34:033 (8) - ultra nazi- up+right so 2,4,6,8 are equal fixed, should look :3 now

Good job, as far as I can tell, none of which I pointed out really matters They do shinxyn, and I do request a nazi modding from ya, and I think you have done a good job at it. xD
Thanks for the mod, appreciate it. =P
gdeath
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Mystearica
Definitively not my style of map but I don't really have anything major to complain about. If you want me to discuss your map, see me on IRC or MSN.

You can have my star.

PS: Nice song.
Shinde
If you decide to use these, I suggest adding that sliderborder line into the color sections of the .osu's to make the slider track black. I think these hitcircles work best with a lighter color/BG and more neon-y combo colors. I don't think they're terribly relevant to the song, but also don't think they're that off? I didn't feel like the song needed skinning really. A cake hitcircle would probably just look weird, lol. xd (Believe me I tried.)

SPOILER
[Colours]
Combo1 : 31,211,207
Combo2 : 234,70,0
Combo3 : 0,89,6
Combo4 : 242,0,121
SliderBorder : 0,0,0
Download: Hitcircle.rar

As for the actual map, I didn't look at it in detail, but when I played it it was pretty nice. I primarily played Azure's and the Advanced difficulty.
rust45
[Beginner]
00:18:028 (1,2) - I'm no pro with hitsounds, but those are begging for finishes.
00:20:087 (1,2) - ^
00:23:030 (1,2,3) - ^

[Azure's Birthday]
Same notes need finishes please.

[Advanced]
Same notes should have finishes IMO

[alvisto's Birthday]
Same thing, but I'm sure you guessed that.
01:09:020 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - o.o Great mapping but very hard.

This is awesome, you get a star.
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alvisto

gdeath wrote:

Overall:why do you add two same name in your tags?
tags:Azure_Kyte Azure Kyte??
remove one of them,plz.

Coz I guess some may lazy enough to search only azure in th search box ? xD Anyway, removed.
[Beginner]
HD Drain & Overall diff are too high for this Beginner diff.plz decrease this setting. Change a little. =P
Thanks for the mod gdeath. :3

Shinde wrote:

SKIN
Yea, I would definitely use this ! ^.^ Thanks Shinde... Anyway, I remove 1 combo colour there coz I don't like neon pink (lol) and also change the BG to a guitar BG to match more with the hitcircles (I guess ?) xD

rust45 wrote:

[Beginner]
00:18:028 (1,2) - I'm no pro with hitsounds, but those are begging for finishes.
00:20:087 (1,2) - ^
00:23:030 (1,2,3) - ^
Yea, I tried these before, but it's very noisy. xD So, have to say no there. =P
[Azure's Birthday]
Same notes need finishes please.

[Advanced]
Same notes should have finishes IMO

[alvisto's Birthday]
Same thing, but I'm sure you guessed that.
01:09:020 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - o.o Great mapping but very hard.
Yea, it is. But some manage to pass it. =P

This is awesome, you get a star.
Thanks for the voluntary mod rust ! ^.^ Appreciate it.
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alvisto
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ztrot
Ki toggles are bad and only in easy.

Azure:00:41:146 (6,1,2,3) - ewwww and all the others like it.

Ask me to mod when I'm not dead tired plz thxs

Timing is meh
Mafiamaster
Lower overall difficulty on Beginner

Azure's Party
00:41:632 (3) - No.
00:46:821 (5) - No.
01:39:120 (1,2) - No. Don't put 1/4 notes right after a spinner.
Azure_Kite
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alvisto

ztrot wrote:

Ki toggles are bad and only in easy.

Azure:00:41:146 (6,1,2,3) - ewwww and all the others like it.

Ask me to mod when I'm not dead tired plz thxs

Timing is meh

Mafiamaster wrote:

Lower overall difficulty on Beginner

Azure's Party
00:41:632 (3) - No.
00:46:821 (5) - No.
01:39:120 (1,2) - No. Don't put 1/4 notes right after a spinner.
All fix, and Azure's part fix too...
Mafiamaster
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alvisto

Mafiamaster wrote:

Stack Leniency: Rarely stacked is currently unrankable. Please move the tick away from the left.
Fix ! xD
Mafiamaster
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Azure_Kite
It can be changed, but I'd like to point out that to the best of my knowledge, this is perfectly rankable.
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alvisto
xD Alright then, it is now fixed and proper~
Mafiamaster
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alvisto

Mafiamaster wrote:

Azure's Birthday is now harder than Advanced by 0.01 difficulty stars. Make Advanced a tiny bit harder by moving some of the difficulty settings. It's only reasonable to have the higher of the two total max points to have a higher difficulty rating.
Hrmm... Raised HP drain by 1 tick, hopefully it won't be too cruel then... xD

Mafiamaster wrote:

Azure's Birthday~
00:09:968 (7) - This note is a little late. Resnap to a 1/8 tick like in alvisto's Birthday and move farther away from 6.
Fix. :3

Thanks Mafiamaster.
Mafiamaster
Bubbled.
Starrodkirby86
IRC chat ~

Resnapped a few notes and removed a non-existent custom override.

Happy (re)bubble to you!
Takuma
Happy Rank.
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alvisto
=O

FINALLY. Thanks Takuma~ ;_; (tears of joy)

:lol:
RemmyX25
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Real1
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alvisto

Real1 wrote:

Beginner - 2.94 Stars. Contains "fast", stacks "large" spacing (For a Beginner map). Also contains slider spam and more. No beginner can handle this.
In whose world is this a Beginner diff? :(
Have to say sorry to you, coz my concept of "Beginner" at the time of mapping this is kinda "Normal+", plus this a fast song, hence my concept of Beginner is "the simplest difficulty of this song", not necessarily parallel with "Easy" form the other maps.

But now, I really mapped "Beginner" as in really Beginner and easy in more recent maps of mine. Hence, I apologize and thanks for the comment ! ^.^
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