1. Easy (2,81 stars, 196 notes)
2. Hard (4,9 stars, 453 notes)
3. Normal (4,4 stars, 301 notes)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Normal:

SPOILER

You might want to add kiai timing to the ending for aesthetics.

Combo mod: (you seem to be pretty inconsistent with combos at parts)
00:23:41 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:99 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:91 (1) - ^
00:35:05 (1) - ^
00:37:37 (6,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 6 (swap new combo)
00:50:82 (4) - new combo?
00:59:10 (4) - ^
01:04:01 (1,2) - swap new combo
01:05:82 (1,2) - swap new combo?
01:16:68 (1,4) - swap new combo
01:20:56 (1) - remove new combo
01:35:05 (5,1) - swap new combo
01:49:53 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with previous occurrences
02:14:10 (4) - new combo for consistency
02:21:34 (3) - ^ (you seemed to change your style at this point so you might want to look back to previous points in the song and make them all consistent)
02:30:39 (4) - ^
02:38:15 (2) - ^
most part fixed
The constant streams in this song are a quite hard for your easiest diff. I advise you make a shorter easy. well, you're second person, who advice me to make easy, so i think to do it.

Hard:

SPOILER

You might want to make sb warnings for the large double speed slider section because that section was sort of unexpected for me.
Also you might want to add kiai.

Combo mod:
00:20:56 (10,1) - swap new combo
I really could not find too much of a pattern with your combos so I would just follow the same combo style I recommended for normal. some fixes performed

Timing section mod:
00:36:58 and 00:37:36 -What are these 2 timing section for? There are no sliders inbetween them to 2x the BPM for. Please remove them if they don't serve a purpose this timing section is for stream of 3 hitcicrcles, that sound a little bit wreid on standart bmp
00:52:75 and 00:53:91 - ^ fixed
01:56:63, 01:58:31, ..., 02:09:89 - all the timing sections here are not needed because there are no other sliders here besides the ones you 2x the BPM, so you do not need to turn on and off the 2x BPM till it ends
01:56:008-02:12:759 is intended time section with 2x sliders. Other sections fixed)

Nice map. Star.Thx for modding^^

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod ^^

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
02:22:63 (1,2,3) - I'd probably turn off grid snapping temporarily to make these sliders line up perfectly to the next slider's end fixed
No Problems Found

[Hard]
01:52:63 (8) - I'd probably turn off grid snapping temporarily to make these sliders line up perfectly to the next slider's end fixed

Armin wrote:

[Normal]
00:25:223 Remove whistle?
00:26:258 ^
00:29:361 Add a whistle
00:38:413 Remove new combo
00:41:775 Add a finish
00:43:068 ^
01:09:447 whistle on the start
01:15:137 Weird Slider. Move the last way-point on the left.
02:20:051 Add whistle or finish

[Hard]
00:34:016 Align with 3 and 7
02:24:965 remove whistle
02:25:482 ^
02:26:258 Add a whistle
most part ixed

NoHItter wrote:

Nice beatmap.

Although try adjusting the video offset to 6858. it's a bit asyncronous in whole original video, so i dicide to keep it. Anyway, thx for suggestion, mod & star =)

1. 00:28:84 (7) - ^
2. 00:37:63 (7) - ^
3. 00:46:43 (9) - ^
4. 00:57:80 (1) - Suggestion: Add a clap at the beginning?
5. 01:04:53 (9) - New combo.
6. 01:18:49 (7) - ^
7. 01:35:05 (7) - New combo.
8. 01:43:84 (4) - ^
9. 02:16:94 (7) - ^
10. 02:25:22 (7) - ^
11. 02:33:49 (6) - ^
12. 02:39:70 (2) - Suggestion: ^
13. 02:41:77 (5) - ^

1. Imo, you should place the Overall Difficulty slider tick to the middle. (1 tick to the left)

1. 00:46:43 (5) - New combo.
2. 00:47:46 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 01:16:94 (7) - Suggestion: New combo.
4. 01:51:21 (2,3) - Move to closer to 1 for even spacing like 01:51:60 (4,5,6)
5. 01:57:93 (8,9,10) - Move 8 closer to 7.
6. 02:03:49 (6) - Move closer to 5.

fzeromaster wrote:

easy:
0:20:568 (7) - new combo
0:28:844 (7) - ^
0:37:637 (7) - ^
1:18:499 (7) - ^
2:16:947 (7) - ^
fixed

normal:
0:25:999 - remove new combo
0:35:568 - ^
2:14:102 - ^

Disagree, these combos for consisty so i'll keep it


hard:
0:10:611 (1) - move back 1/8 1/8 back hears a bit early to bass guitar part
0:12:809 (7) - new combo, remove combo on the note after this.fixed
0:14:620 - remove new combo Well, if i do this - i'll be 16 combo, i don't want such long combos even in hard
0:20:568 (10) - new combo, remove combo on the note after this fixed
0:23:672 - remove new combo fixed
0:28:068 - ^fixed
0:28:844 (5) - new combo fixed
0:30:913 - remove new combo fixed
0:35:051 - ^ fixed
0:47:465 - ^ fixed
0:51:344 - ^ every "Up" have a new combo, it's intended
0:51:306 - ^ ^
0:58:585 - ^ fixed
0:59:103 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
0:59:620 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
1:20:568 - ^ fixed
1:40:999 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
1:41:258 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
1:48:758 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
1:48:275 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
2:28:378 - ^ fixed
2:29:103 - ^ fixed
2:37:896 - ^ fixed
2:38:413 - ^ ^ 0:51:344
2:38:930 - ^ ^ 0:51:344

Extra notes:
Try to make short combos on easy mode. Higher difficulties can have longer combo's. At the end of a succesfull performed combo you get an Elite beat (the 300/100 with the japanese symbol above) which give an extra HP boost. You want many of those on easy and less on hard, you see? It's counts on diff on [Hard]. I don't think that [Easy] needs too much new combos 'cuz of low hp drain
Also, doublecheck if the changes dont collide with the HP drain. If the HP drain is too fast (gain<drain), tone down the HP drain or add some extra combo's like halfway a sentence in the song, instead of the full one. Rechecked, all fine

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~

1. 00:28:84 (7) - ^
2. 00:37:63 (7) - ^
3. 00:46:43 (9) - ^
4. 00:57:80 (1) - Suggestion: Add a clap at the beginning?
5. 01:04:53 (9) - New combo.
6. 01:18:49 (7) - ^
7. 01:35:05 (7) - New combo.
8. 01:43:84 (4) - ^
9. 02:16:94 (7) - ^
10. 02:25:22 (7) - ^
11. 02:33:49 (6) - ^
12. 02:39:70 (2) - Suggestion: ^
13. 02:41:77 (5) - ^

All fixed

Normal~

1. Imo, you should place the Overall Difficulty slider tick to the middle. (1 tick to the left)Fixed

Hard~

1. 00:46:43 (5) - New combo.
2. 00:47:46 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 01:16:94 (7) - Suggestion: New combo.
4. 01:51:21 (2,3) - Move to closer to 1 for even spacing like 01:51:60 (4,5,6)
5. 01:57:93 (8,9,10) - Move 8 closer to 7.
6. 02:03:49 (6) - Move closer to 5.

Delete both .osb files in the folder of this beatmap.
Then do a full submit.

eee wrote:

oh, I remember this one
eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]
any reason why this ends later than the others, not a problem, but you can end the others like this, I think.
it's alright by meee
I don't see any problems here) so, i prefer to keep all as now =)
[Normal]
I prefer making the timing sections the same as [Hard]. If there is some problem with that, make it the same as [Easy]. I noticed how the inherited soft sections were sort of "low". Hm.... Fixed
01:56:51 (break) - reinsert break Fixed

[Hard]
I like it, you got some cool rhythmic patterns. TY =)
There should be a break somewhere, but, screw it, it's pretty short. It must be here - 01:55:353 - 01:56:128
But it's really short, so really screw it x)

star+

Alice Margatroid wrote:

sorry there's some hitsound nazi.. take these as suggestions p:
Easy
00:40:22 (5's turnback) - I'd more hear a clap there.
01:26:77 (7
Normal
00:29:62 (4) - 1 tick upper
01:42:03 (4) - 1 tick right
Hard
Nothing special I guess...
Cool map

Matma Rex wrote:

Quick look:

- Video is one, huge WTF. But it's awesome.
xD Same point of view
- Normal is more like Hard (full of tricky patterns, I failed it about halfway), and Hard like Insane (I failed after about 5-10 seconds).
Hm... i named diff following my feelings when i'm played it.
But hard is really inbetween hard and insane
Played by me
Sorry for skin -_- Forgot to change it



- Easy is nice diff. ^^


Starred.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Starts Suggestions:
- Set a preview point on all diff's. What point i must set as a preview point?

[Easy]

00:59:87 (3) - New combo.
01:00:39 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed

[Normal]

00:59:87 (6) - New combo.
01:46:43 (8) - Too close from (7).
01:55:74 (7) - ^
Fixed

[Hard]

Too much change of spacing, players will be confused. It's hard, i really dont see a problem in it. And you're the first person, who pointed me out on it =)
You need to add a break. Break is too short here, so i decided to don't add it

00:42:55 (1) - Too close from (3). Hm, new combo here. As i remember, new combo don't needs to be distance snapped with end of old combo.
01:10:74 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really confused. Why? I think it's really easy to read
01:22:63 (1) - Too close from (12).New combo...
01:56:25 (1) - From here, you need a warning 2x Section. Working on it
02:43:58 (1) - Too close from (7). New combo...