1. Destiny (4.38 stars, 727 notes)
2. Easy (1.45 stars, 194 notes)
3. Hard (2.71 stars, 503 notes)
4. Narcissu's Insane (3.47 stars, 801 notes)
5. Normal (1.87 stars, 313 notes)

thx for help

OblivioN
Cyc17-
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Pho</span>
Narcissu
Zweib
Nozhomi
Frey(moe4d)
Sellenite
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Zero__wind</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Fycho</span>
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Mei
-Nanaka-
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Atrue</span>
Melt
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
<span style='color:#FF0000'>TicClick</span>
[Kamiya]
emorhconom
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<span style='color:#FF0000'>lkx_Shore</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Cherry Blossom</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Graven</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Okoratu</span> help me at hitsounds and anymore
LordRaika help me at hitsounds
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Rakuen</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Konei</span>

gxytcgxytc wrote:

丧心病狂的开坑少年

zengdaen wrote:

好歌……

03:39:383 (1) - ……よ……lol

不打算找mod继续修吗？

Cherry Blossom wrote:

awh you revived it

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Well, i'm here prpr !!!

General

1. Disable letterbox during breaks. done
2. Your BG dimension is 1229*768, it must be 1366*768 or 1024*768. i know..but the origin size is 1920x1200

Normal

1. Reduce AR to 4.5, ar6 looks a bit extreme for a lower diff ok
2. Reduce OD to 3 if you dit it ^ ^
3. Star rating is 2.00x, and the lowest diff must be lower than 2.00 stars lol ?, try to undermap your diff a bit, to decrease the star rating. Try to undermap sections which have a lot of 1/2 gaps, and use more 1/1. hmmm i'm try
4. 00:13:836 (2) - Looks a bit weird to play because of the previous patterns you used, and you can simplify more this pattern, i mean avoiding 2 reverses and using 1 instead, why don't to try this ? : nice
   
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5. 00:31:197 (6,1) - it might be better if you unstack these notes, because you already used stacks for 1/1 notes, it might be a bit confusing. ..maybe fine..
6. 00:32:474 (3,4) - polarity issue here, try this pattern to avoid it fixed
   
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7. 00:43:708 (1,2) - there is also a polarity issue here, hmm if you want to follow vocal it should be better if they are introduced with a 1/2 gap, try this ok
   
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8. 00:53:921 - here you can add a spinner which ends here 00:55:453, it may be fine hmm. uhh, maybe too short in normal?
9. 02:16:900 (1,2,3) - transition between these objects can be improved, try this o/ oh,great i did
   
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10. 02:20:985 (2,3) - there is a polarity issue here again, hmm try this pattern ok
    
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11. 02:27:878 (3) - Add a NC here, because your started a new section.
12. 03:15:368 (1) - here, you can make this slider curved to introduce the second slider and make a smooth movement, so try this ok
    
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13. 03:24:559 - add a note here to make this strong note played, and stack it on 03:24:814 (4) - ok
14. 03:27:112 (6) - Add a NC here to emphazise the end. added
15. 03:49:325 (2,3,1) - this is not suitable for a normal diff, this is extreme, add a reversed 1/4 slider or a simple 1/2 slider instead. be reversed 1/4 slider now
16. 03:50:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - SV and spacing are too high for a calm part imo, it does not fit the calm atmosphere here. use 1.0sv and 1.0ds now
    
    Well, concerning structure and rhythm, this looks well mapped, but as i said above, you should really undermap some "fast" parts, i mean parts which has a lot of 1/2. And you should add 1/1 instead. this mapset is not rankable if you don't do it. 1/2 in 117.5bpm's normal maybe fine? i will try undermap

Hard

1. Reduce AR to 7, AR7.5 may be too fast for this diff. yea
2. 00:08:729 - add a note here, you can hear something on this red tick, and it will allow you to use triplet instead of doublets which are really hard to play for a Hard player. ok
3. 00:13:836 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rip, baka pururut, you're so hentai !!! D:, well let's be serious now, a stream is not really suitable for a hard and this stream is a bit long even if the BPM is low. Make this instead hahaha RIP
   
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4. 00:31:963 (2,3,4) - it should be better this you unstack these notes from 00:31:453 (1) -, because it might be confusing since you use stacks everywhere with the same gap. ok
5. 00:41:666 - This strong note should be clicked since you made this strong note clicked 00:43:708, so swap these objects like this :D fixed
   
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6. 01:09:240 (1,2) - this is extreme and not expected, hentai pururut !!!, just add a simple note here 01:09:240 and remove this slider 01:09:240 (1) - lol Made some changes
7. 01:18:432 (1,2,3,4,5) - this also looks extreme, try to avoid this stream and make this instead ok
   
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8. 01:35:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - also here, try to make this instead can't open this image i do some adjustment
   
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9. 02:20:219 (7) - there is no link here, i mean, the player can be lost because there is a 3/2 gap, so add a 1/1 slider instead of this note 02:20:219 (7) - ok
10. 02:50:346 (6,7,8,9,10) - same as 01:18:432 (1,2,3,4,5) ^
11. 03:04:134 (5,6,7) - it should be better if you unstack these notes, it allows a better reading. ok
12. 03:05:666 (9,10) - same as here ^ ^
13. 03:06:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You know what i will say baka prpr ;w; idk /run
14. 03:09:751 (5,6) - Increase the spacing between these notes, it looks a bit confusing. ??
15. 03:17:155 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You are definitly more hentai than me ;w; well, this also looks extreme, so make this instead ok
    
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16. 03:25:580 (3,4) - You could improve this part, try to make this nice
    
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17. 03:47:538 (2,3,4) - 3/4 objects are really hard to recognize, so make a reversed 3/4 slider instead of these notes. ok.
18. 04:00:814 (1,2,3,4,1) - well i think you will hate me if i tell you to remove this stream, but well, it's spacing is too high and might be extreme, so try to reduce this stream's spacing. use 0.6ds now
19. 04:03:878 (6) - hmm not a good deal, increase the spacing between 04:03:368 (5,6) - , this antijump is really weird imo. hmm
20. 04:12:049 (6,7,8,9) - make the spacing consistent here, spacing looks kinda messy since you didnt use distance snap ? i didddddddddddd.......maybe
    
    Few parts are well mapped, but kiai are not really well mapped, you mapped them as an insane diff and make this diff not balanced, you should make the spacing consistent in kiai parts, and not make big jumps/antijumps, it plays like an insane diff, but this diff is supposed to be hard...
    Don't worry if you undermap, it will not really hurt the diff spread between Insane and Hard. i will try to under map

Destiny

1. Increase circle size to 5, it will make this diff more challenging. Up to you to change. i finally decide to use cs4 /run
2. Increase HP to 6 or 7, same reason as ^ HP7 now
3. 00:08:474 (7) - hmm you missed this strong note here 00:08:985 and it should really be played, so try to make this instead. nice
   
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4. 00:42:814 (3) - this note seems out of place since it does not follow anything, so it might be better if you remove it. delete it
5. 00:46:772 - add a note here, because this strong beat is dodged and it should be played. added
6. 00:56:474 (3,4) - here you should follow vocals instead of beats, because it is more intuitive to follow imo, try this pattern ok
   
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7. 02:18:687 - add a note here, same reason as 00:46:772 ^
8. 02:28:389 (3,4) - also here, you should follow vocals because it is more intuitive to follow them, so, try this ^
   
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9. 02:32:857 - add a note here, same reason as ^ ^
10. 03:25:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here you can improve this shape, try this :( i think is fine /runaway
    
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11. 03:39:368 (1) - ♥ ♥
12. 03:54:559 - you should add a note here for a triplet with 03:54:432 (2,3) - as you did for the previous and next pattern. hao
13. 04:18:176 (1) - error, look at spinner's beginning, baka prpr ;w; i'm not baka
    
    This insane diff is funny, and this is even better than before !!! continue like this.

You need to work more on Hard and Normal.
There are still things to improve but this will be for other modders
I hope my mod was useful !!!
Good Luck and rank this map, baka prpr, and now you are hentai

thank you very much baka cb

Cherry Blossom wrote:

about circle size on Destiny i did a mistake, i meant 3.5 lol.
3.5 fits better than 3 or 4, up to you to change o/

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

Sry that i can't speak chinese, so I will make it as simple as possible

[Hard]
HP4 only? Increase by +1 or +2. hmmm HP5 now

00:58:006 - NC fixed
01:05:155 (5) - ^ fixed
01:08:219 (1) - ^ fixed
01:10:006 (8,1) - set the NC here, the vocals start earlier already fixed
01:12:559 (6) - NC fixed
01:16:389 (7) - ^ fixed
01:24:559 (6) - ^ fixed
01:28:644 (8) - ^ fixed
... there are many more to point out, but this would be overkill for me x.x Don't set combos longer than 9 if possible.
ohhh i will fixed combos by myself
01:46:006 (1) - same as in Insane ok

[Insane]
I don't really agree to the lowered down CS due to inconsistency of difficulty settings, but... well, you just changed it. xD

00:06:942 (3,4) - It's better to select 1,2,3 and stack them on 4 as follows http://puu.sh/aPzui/75e4f9ae06.jpg (AR0, it will look nicer with AR9 of course) hmm i think is fine. /run
00:13:836 (2,3,4,5) - this fits better to the music http://puu.sh/aPzHt/7e0e30c84d.jpg hmmm flow changed
00:15:112 (1,2) - improve the bow http://puu.sh/aPzPh/329481f02b.jpg ok fixed
00:44:985 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't increase the distance from 3 to 4 here, but use the same distance as you did with 1 and 2 ...use 2.0 now
01:03:112 (1) - really long backslider, i would split it up at the beats 01:03:623 - and 01:04:134 - ok i do
01:13:325 (2,3,4) - sharp drop off flow, push slider 4 up a bit fixed
01:46:006 (1) - why don't you let this end on the next white tick? ok
03:15:878 (5) - why don't you put slider 5 on the right side for the star pattern? (x:400, y:184) ok
03:24:559 (4,5) - try the following positions: for circle 4 (x:432, y:248), circle 5 (x:264, y:264) nice
03:39:368 (1) - yo~~~ this MAY be unrankable (burai slider), i'm not sure if this arrow SB will help at all. Nice shape though. it's rankable!!!! maybe
03:47:538 (6) - NC fixed
03:48:559 (9) - too abrupt end, make it end on the next white tick ok
03:50:857 (4,5) - is this supposed to be a blanket? you need to adjust slider 5 nooo i dont wanna blanket

I hope this helps. Pretty good overall flow and nice aesthetics, just as expected from chinese mappers.

Greetings,
paseli

Narcissu wrote:

00:06:432 (1,2) - 1/6 这个改了 低难度就带过了

03:22:517 (6,7) - 1/6 这里不好改准备带过..(不要打我