Hey there m4mNice song :3[General]
- I don't think your combo colors fit the background at all, try these:
Usually it's much better if they are bright. Here's the code if you want to add them that way:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 247,100,100
Combo2 : 255,139,23
Combo3 : 249,87,192
Combo4 : 19,187,251
- The first offset feels much better at 1035
[Little Party]
SV too high, decrease the SV (1.3 is way too high for easy/normal).Also ummm remember to not break the flow for the sake of making a blanket (
example)
00:17:870 (1) - Looks ugly, move the mid point to x324 y280 and end to x335 y310
00:25:838 (1) - Unnecesary NC
00:26:541 (1) -
http://puu.sh/dLvdW/ad5ebf05de.jpg Don't need to have the short sliders so clustered
00:33:104 (1) - What about soft hitsound with soft whistle at the end of this slider
00:41:307 (2) - Same, I don't know why this slider is so curved, fix like this!
http://puu.sh/dLvly/e2067ecfdd.jpg also for consistency reasons
00:43:182 (2) - Same
00:45:057 (1,2,1) - Fix flow
http://puu.sh/dLvqf/b60c6a2147.jpg[Casual Party]
Super way too high SV00:06:151 (1) - Random NC?
00:06:620 (1) - Here too?
00:08:026 (1) - Here too.. random NCs all over the place so I'll stop pointing them out :3
00:11:307 (1) - Improve the flow
http://puu.sh/dLvzu/6a71fd834d.jpg00:17:870 (1,2,1,2,3) - Soft hitsounds here would fit so much better... on all diffs of course
00:26:541 (3) - Improve flow
http://puu.sh/dLvDJ/8032214113.jpg00:30:995 (1,2) - Same
http://puu.sh/dLvGt/4ee5884649.jpg00:34:745 (1,2,3) - Don't think it's a good idea, doesn't look fun to play and so many repeats tend to confuse new players... also looks like you got lazy xD
00:41:776 (4,2) - Make them not touch each other
[Party Hard]
SV too high... 2,2 SV is... Insane+Also random NCs again!00:04:306 (7) - This slider doesn't fit the music at all
00:05:916 (1) - I hear 3 beats here, instead of a long slider
00:07:791 (1) - Same
00:08:495 (1) - Same..
00:07:791 (1,1,2,1) - Overall this pattern doesn't fit the music at all, it's like randomly mapped
sorry if I sound harsh but it's just that.. the music is not like this
00:11:307 (1) - Move up and left for flow
00:15:291 (1,1) - You could follow the music so much better...
00:17:870 (1) - Move end to 148 144?
00:18:807 (1) - And mirror to this slider of course
00:22:791 (1) - Music, listen to it
00:27:245 (1) - 3 repeat sliders on a hard diff are unnecessary and unfun
00:29:120 (1) - Same
00:30:995 (1,2) - Music..
00:35:916 (1) - Music
00:46:229 (2) - This could be very confusing for a hard diff player (I mean the overlap with the next slider)
Errr... Last 2 diffs were fine, they fit the music really well! But this diff is like you mapped another song with the same BPM or something x.x
[Another Party]
00:01:025 (1) - Why did you use soft hitsounds if you used normal ones on the other diffs
00:04:306 (7) - Again this slider doesn't fit the music at all
Random NCs again x.x
00:04:979 (1,2) - I hear something like this..
http://puu.sh/dLwko/004323518b.jpg00:09:198 (4,5,6) - Overmapped and doesn't fit the music at all
00:10:604 (1) - This is a great idea I like it. The only issue with this slider is that you used such a high SV for the map... Like it doesn't fit at all for a song like this
00:16:698 (4,5,6) - Pretty random tbh
00:17:870 (1,2,3,4) - This curve could be a lot better
00:18:807 (1,2,3,1) - Same
00:19:159 (1) - Try this and see how it fits the music
http://puu.sh/dLwsp/9a8612f79b.jpg00:13:416 (1,2,1,2) - This is.... kinda bad. I mean, they look like they are separated by 1/2 because of your previous spacing. Same thing goes for all patterns like these in your map.
00:30:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Incredibly confusing xD first one looks like a triplet and second one doesn't, quite the opposite of what the map does
00:45:057 (1,2,1,2) - These sliders could be a less clustered
Alright, nice song with a lot of potential, I'd like to see the notes fitting the music a lot more, though :3
