neonat wrote:

Insane

00:05:188 (3) - NC here instead of 00:05:408 (1) sorry, idont agree

Good Luck

CLSW wrote:

[General]
Offset fix for Platter diff : 776.
Its combo color doesn't sync with other diffs, so why don't you use current one in std difficulties?

[Platter]
00:02:095 (4) - Ctrl + G for better flow and consistency.
00:07:610 (5) - Replace it on right side. It looks like a lack of movements, x : 408 is better.
00:21:948 (1,2) - Add a weak jump between those. I felt like a bit boring.
00:23:713 (5,6) - same as above.
00:26:801 (3,4) - Its pitch goes high, so why don't you add a right-way jump for nice flow? x : 444 for (4) is my recommendation.
00:27:242 (5) - Add NC.
00:28:786 (8,1) - Personally think this one shall be more jumpy.

try this

00:30:330 (5) - Why don't you stack it with (3) ?
00:30:771 (1,2) - Make more movements please. It seems boring.
00:31:212 (4,5) - same as above.
00:31:433 (5,1) - same as above.
00:37:169 (2,3,4) - You can give longer distance. Try to fix them with more jumpy like!
00:37:830 (1,2) - Make more movements, but if you have applied above, you don't have to do this suggestion.
00:40:919 (3,4) - Personally think Ctrl + G is better.
00:46:654 (1,2,3,4) - Way too much similar as 00:44:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6) , why don't you try with others?
00:49:301 (3,4,5) - Not a good idea imo.

try this

00:51:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

try this

00:55:698 (2,3) - Seems a bit hard to manage its jump. Reduce a bit please.
00:58:677 (3,4) - Make more movements. Try to Ctrl + H 00:59:007 (4) this single one.
01:00:330 (4) - Ctrl + G and replace it on x : 220.
01:01:654 Missing beat here! and add NC.
01:01:874 (3,4) - Do not stack them. It doesn't lookin good.
01:10:036 (3,4) - Ctrl + G for better flow.
01:11:691 (6,7) - Use slider instead of circles.
01:12:904 (2,3) - Make more movements.
01:13:786 (6) - Use circles instead of slider,

try this overall.

01:14:669 (3,4) - Add a jump here.
01:15:551 Missing beat here,

try this overall.

01:16:433 (2,3) - Add a jump here.
01:16:874 (4) - Delete the beat and add a beat 01:16:985 here instead.
01:17:536 (1) - Add NC.

That's all for now, I hope this map gets more improvements than now. Keep work!

neonat wrote:

General

xtrem3x Platter's Uninherited (Red) Timing point differs from all the other difficulties, please fix that fix

You enabled Countdown on the standard difficulties, but not the Taiko difficulties Taiko diffs don't need Coutdown

Easy

00:08:717 (5) - remove the whistle, it doesn't match up with what you did beforehand
00:19:305 (3,1,2) - make the curve wider, it would move better:

SPOILER

00:23:717 (3,4) - blanket these, would look better
00:43:129 (1) - I don't think the finish on the end of this slider is necessary
00:51:070 (2,4) - you can blanket them
01:13:129 (3,4) - ^
01:15:776 (1) - wouldn't it be better to end the spinner with the vocals at 01:19:085

All fix

Normal

00:02:540 (1,2) - the blanket isn't made that well here
00:06:070 (1,2) - they can relate to each other better if their patterns matched up, and they look related to each other if you blanket something here or made something matching
00:15:335 (2,3) - could be a better blanket
00:19:305 (5,6) - ^
00:33:423 (4,1) - ^
00:39:599 (1,2) - the slider doesn't cover the circle well, it doesn't blanket perfectly
00:49:746 (5,1,2) - blanket them nicely, it would look better
00:53:717 (2,3) - ^
00:54:599 (3,5) - ^
00:58:129 (1,2,4) - ^
01:04:746 (5,1) - ^
01:06:511 (2,1) - ^
01:09:599 (3,4) - ^

All fix

Things look unpolished because the patterns look like they are trying to curve and cover around each other, but they do not, the blankets are not made right, though it is perceived as one due to the nature of how they are placed, it makes things look less structured well. haii ;u;

Hard

00:02:540 (1,2) - why not have the whistles you had for 00:04:305 (5,6)
00:15:335 (2,3,4) - the flow at 00:15:996 (4) after this pattern is weird, it goes against the way the flow was moving, you should shift or rotate 00:15:996 (4) to improve movement
00:28:790 (6) - at least place it in the middle of 00:28:129 (5) - it looks awkward right now
00:34:746 (2,3) - the circle looks really close to 00:34:746 (2) - which makes the pattern less neat, make the gap in spacing between them the same as how the gap is between 00:35:188 (3,4,5)
00:38:496 (6,7) - cover the circle perfectly
00:39:379 (1,2) - ^
01:02:982 (4,1) - blanket them
01:08:276 (3,1) - ^
01:09:379 (2,4) - ^
01:14:673 (2,3) - ^
01:15:776 (1,2) - ^
01:17:320 (4,1) - ^

Some blankets won't hurt you, and it would make things look much more neater

All fix and applied some changes

Good Luck

Genocide wrote:

where is the muzukashii diff one?
i think, its unrankable

please use my suggestion, change the diff name to Muzukashii and remapping a several part or delete the futsuu one and use my muzukashii
but its up the GD's too
so good luck!

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The difficulties in the mapset must be in a consecutive order. Easy or Normal can be skipped if the gap in the star rating spread allows it. The order can be seen in the chart below. If your mapset has two difficulties, one of them cannot be an Insane or Expert. The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars. The difficulty level of Taiko-specific and osu!mania-specific difficulties must also follow a well-designed spread and might contain an Hard/Insane only, if there are standard difficulties present

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:34:746 (4,1) - Check spacing. Fix
00:44:893 (4,5) - These parallel sliders feel way too close each other. It can be solved by curving each by a little. http://puu.sh/fsZ1b/9f451e059f.jpg Fix
01:02:099 (3) - 01:03:423 (6) - Add New comboes each. You were previosly setting NCs in a short basis. Fix

Normal:

00:04:746 (4) - 00:06:070 (1,2,3,4) - Why are spacing so random here? Please maintain the distance value as 0.8x as you've mostly selected this difficulty. Fix
00:30:776 (1,2) - These feel a bit too far. Fix
00:38:717 (3) - Remove clap. It feels too spammed here. Fix
00:40:040 - 00:40:923 (2) - Clap. Fix
00:47:540 - Why the soft-sampleset? because I copy the hitsounds from Insane, sorry and fix
00:52:835 (1,2) - Starting the combo from (2) will fit the song better than now. Fix
01:06:952 (1,2) - ^ Fix
01:17:982 (2,3) - Keep your spacing consistent please. ;u; Fix

Hard:

00:23:717 (6,1) - I don't mind the jump of previous (5), but these distance is close too much. Fix
00:27:026 (1,2) - This jump feels too large considering the overall map. Suggest reducing the distance a little bit. Fix
00:44:011 (5,6) - Switching the rhythm fits the song in a better way. Fix
00:57:246 (6,1) - Start the combo from (6) since they are all tied up as a stream. Fix
00:59:673 (6) - Two Finish in a row was a little spam. Remove the Finish here. Fix
01:04:526 (2) - Check spacing. Fix
01:08:055 (2) - Check spacing. Fix
01:14:011 (1,2) - This doesn't fits nicely. Reduce spacing, or even make a regular distance please. Fix
01:18:423 (3) - Consider NC to emphasize the jump. Fix

Vhy wrote:

[xtrem3x's Platter]
00:02:540 (1) - remove finish on this tail of slider. it doesn't sounds good at this part << ok .-.
00:03:423 (2) - instead of having no movement, how about move this note to x:184? it does emphasize finisher here also with your little break before
00:05:849 (5) - the movement on this part feels kinda force you to stop follow the music badly. move this note to x:172 to keep having movement here as it's good to follow the prev pattern it self
00:06:070 (1) - remove finish on tail. should be the same reason as 00:02:540 (1)
00:08:551 (4) - move this to x:228 to balance the movement a little because the next note is a long slider so it can be easier to follow with the given spacing
00:20:187 (1) - move to x:276 << a bit
00:27:246 (1) - this could be separated into more object to highlight your hitsound pattern more. it sounds weird you put a finisher on the middle of repeat like that <<< is a long voice.... finish moved until "finish"
00:29:011 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing of 00:29:894 (3,4) should be higher than 00:29:011 (1,2) to highlight the vocal better. here' the example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2589697 << ok
00:30:995 (2,3,4) - this is triplet and should be placed nearby each other. the position of (3) is to far for this level and makes the movement quite bad. move the circle of (3) to x:416
00:31:437 (5,6,7,8) - the movement here so bad. the spacing here looks unorganized well with the pattern. try this pattern instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2589715
00:37:173 (2) - this spacing is a bit too much and unexpected comparing your general spacing before. move to x:432
00:43:128 (1) - remove finish on tail
00:44:231 (4) - to balance the movement since nothing in the music is change, rotate this slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2589723
00:45:114 (2,4) - move this both circle more to the right to give some movement. i would say x:432 works nicely
00:45:996 (6) - make it like this so a HDash will spawn here as it fits nicely with the music http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2589733
00:47:981 (5,6) - move to x:168 and x:336
00:51:952 (1,2,3,4) - lack of movement and this is fine but honestly they could be placed more separately to keep it interesting
00:54:378 (3) - move to x:232
00:58:570 (2,3,4) - try this regular triplet instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2589759
01:00:114 (2,3,4) - move all of these object together to the left until the circle of (2) placed on the center of the playfield. the current spacing of 01:00:334 (4,1) is killed the flow badly
01:04:525 (2) - i prefer this reverse is headed to left
01:11:915 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - what is this stream follow? i don't see any in the music that support this stream so better to make it a regular 1/2 rhythm << are claps in low volume ...
01:12:908 (2) - move to x:256
01:13:790 (6,7,8,9,10) - and unnecessary stream that follow nothing << very low volume but is experimental, deleted .-.
01:15:555 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ <<< is more notable D:

nice diff but some part still need a little adjustment to make it more decent, also the kiai part could be more harder a bit.

anyway good luck

1. All in all this difficulty needs a lot of more improvement. I can say for sure that nobody will rank it like that, lots of weird patterns, some overmapping, not even sure if the timing is proper. Highly suggest you to look for some timing expert here and get this solved out as quick as possible. Also not a fan of how stricty you mapped on the vocals here because they are way too fast to follow all the time, it would have been much better if you focused on the music, however that's a matter of taste. I personally dislike it though.
2. This map needs much more New Combos, keep in mind this is CTB mapping, so please try to avoid any too full fruit Ryuuta plate. A few suggestions where you can add them: 00:08:717 (5) - , 00:10:040 (6) - , 00:12:246 (4) - , 00:13:128 (6) - , 00:15:775 (3) - , 00:17:540 (6) - , 00:19:305 (4) - or 00:19:525 (5) - , 00:23:717 (5) - , 00:31:658 (6) - , 00:33:423 (4) - or 00:33:643 (5) - , 00:34:966 (5) - , 00:42:688 (3) - , 00:45:776 (5) - , 00:53:054 (6) - , 00:54:599 (4) - , 00:59:011 (5) - , 01:06:952 (5) - , 01:10:481 (5) - , 01:14:893 (4) - , 01:15:775 (9) - .
3. 00:43:128 - green line of the kiai is not snapped, it starts at 00:43:124 -, move it +4ms.
4. 00:02:540 (1) - CTRL + G this to create a Hyper, fits well the music.
5. Move 00:04:084 (5) - to around x328 and then CTRL + G 00:04:305 (1) - and move it to x40 to create another Hyper.
6. 00:06:070 (1) - CTRL + G this again and move it to x464 afterwards. Will create another Hyper.
7. Move 00:13:790 (7) - to x40 and 00:14:011 (8) - to x344 for another Hyper, again it follows the rhythm very well.
8. First of all select 00:17:540 (6,7,8) - and move this triplet to x32, then select 00:17:982 (9,10,11) - and move it to x432, this will create another Hyper that is more enjoyable to play. Then pick 00:18:423 (1) - and move it to x56 to have some dashy effect just right after the Hyper.
9. 00:21:290 (7) - Get rid of that stupid clap hitsound on the reverse arrow, sounds totally misplaced.
10. 00:21:731 - Add a single note at x44, then move 00:21:952 (1) - to x256, and 00:21:290 (7) - to x372. You will see what it does.
11. 00:25:481 (1) - CTRL + G it for another Hyper.
12. 00:27:246 (1) - For a Platter that is too boring, try the following instead:
    
    Step 1

    
    Step 2

    
13. 00:29:011 (1,2) - Again wipe these clap sounds on these sliders, very annoying, doesn't fit the song at all. Here too: 00:32:540 (1) -
14. 00:32:540 (1) - Move it to x144, 00:32:320 (9) - move it to x404. You will see what it does.
15. 00:39:378 - Add some single note at around x448, another Hyper for this.
16. 00:43:128 (1) - Move it to x164 for some dash and with that a more tense start of the Kiai.
17. 00:44:893 (1,2) - Select both of these together and then press CTRL + G, it will make this part more interesting. Also don't forget it will also change the hitsounds, so fix them just right after.
18. 00:48:423 (1) - CTRL + H, you will see why.
19. 00:53:054 (6,7,8) - Ugh, that really sounds weird, doesn't seem to follow the vocals that clear, please just use a 1/2 slider instead.
20. 00:56:364 (5) - Move this circle to x48 for a cooler ending of this pattern. Also move 00:55:923 (3) - to x124, otherwise the pattern provides no flow at all and plays a bit too awkward. Optionally you can also move 00:56:143 (4) - to x332. It should be looking like this in case you cannot follow this clearly:
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 00:57:908 (4) - x200, 00:58:128 (1) - x484
22. 01:01:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - , 01:02:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - , 01:03:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These are the sections I have the most trouble with. Listening on 25% playback rate the vocals clearly start earlier than the actual tick. I highly advice you to use this part on the music by now and you guys better get some timing check by pishifat or whatever, this part sounds totally off-timed for me. I will also inform the main creator about this issue.
23. 01:08:496 (3) - x364, 01:08:717 (1) - CTRL + H and then move it to x120.
    
    SPOILER

    
24. 01:09:820 (2) - x224, too rough jump, needs a clear nerf.
25. 01:11:915 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Clearly overmapped, wipe the 1/4 notes and leave it as a simple 1/2 rhythm. And the hitsounds suck, too. Get rid of these claps.
26. 01:14:011 (7) - x348
27. 01:15:555 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Eww I just dislike it, consider not making such a weird and especially boring stream.