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J*Dee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 2 de abril de 2017 at 22:36:21

Artist: J*Dee'Z
Title: The X Strait and the Y Scenery
Source: ポケットモンスター XY
Tags: Ending TV Size Pokemon Pocket Monsters Pokémon XY Kalos Nintendo Game Freak 3DS pikachu ErunamoJAZZ xtrem3x Hazu- HappyRocket88
BPM: 136
Filesize: 20032kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,36 stars, 69 notes)
  2. EruJazz's Insane (3,5 stars, 278 notes)
  3. HaHalade's Advanced (2,3 stars, 164 notes)
  4. Hard (3,26 stars, 206 notes)
  5. Normal (1,8 stars, 131 notes)
Download: J*Dee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery
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kanocchi
nada malo que decir, esta perfecto, no hay ningun fallo captado por mi, que te valla bien, que lo rankeen, sere uno de los primeros en jugarlo
ErunamoJAZZ
Hola.

Tal y como te lo prometí, aquí está el kiai:
[TimingPoints]
2541,441.176470588235,4,1,0,66,1,0
21952,-100,4,1,0,66,0,1
29011,-100,4,1,0,66,0,0
36070,-100,4,1,0,66,0,1
42246,-100,4,1,0,66,0,0
43129,-100,4,1,0,66,0,1
57246,-100,4,1,0,66,0,0

Y el IRCmod:
IRCmod
19:50 Cosmolade: Hola :3
19:50 ErunamoJAZZ: Hola
19:52 Cosmolade: etto, ¿estas libre? necesito un poco de ayuda :c
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: Con cual mapa?
19:53 *Cosmolade is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/336755 JDee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery]
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: :o
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: que bien, empezaste uno más corto
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: o eso aparevta (?)
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: aparenta *
19:53 Cosmolade: Si :3
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: ?np
19:54 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/336755 JDee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery]
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: espectame
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: el timing parece bueno
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
19:56 Cosmolade: gracias a dios(? :3
19:56 Cosmolade: estoy mejorando uwu
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: dije que parece
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: pero acabo de ver y...
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
19:56 Cosmolade: oh :c
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: has olvidado un par de cosas importantes
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: tocas algun instrumento?
19:57 Cosmolade: D:
19:57 Cosmolade: no :c
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: pero hs tenido cursos de musica en la escuela o asi?
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: has*
19:57 Cosmolade: no u.u
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: ok, tons asumiré que no sabes nada y empezaré de cero xD
19:58 Cosmolade: perdón uwu
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: La musica se divide en: melodía, armonía, y ritmo
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: la melodía es generalmente lo se que canta... o lo que lleva como el hilo principal de la canción
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: la armonía es el acompañamiento de la melodía, y es lo que llena lo que la melodía deja vacío
20:00 ErunamoJAZZ: el ritmo es lo que mantiene a la melodía y a la armonía juntas xD
20:00 Cosmolade: ok :o
20:01 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora, la forma de describir el timo de una canción es con lo que se conoce como Compás (Signature en inglés)
20:02 ErunamoJAZZ: en osu, el compás se ve aqui: http://puu.sh/5KQjO.jpg
20:02 ErunamoJAZZ: los ritmos se escriben como 3/4, 4/4, 5/4, 6/4 y 7/4
20:03 ErunamoJAZZ: la mayoría de las canciones son a 4/4, por lo que en general no hay que cambiarlo
20:03 ErunamoJAZZ: de hecho, en esta canción, es 4/4, así que por ese lado está bien
20:03 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
20:03 Cosmolade: :D
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: piensa entonces en el tap tap tap tap tap tap...
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: osea, los golpes, ...
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: si yo digo que esto tiene 4/4
20:05 ErunamoJAZZ: significa que cada 4 golpes, irá un golpe principal
20:05 ErunamoJAZZ: que en el osu suena Tip tap tap tap Tip tap tap tap Tip tap tap tap....
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: ese Tip, es el el golpe principal
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: aveces hay canciones donde el ritmo será 3/4 (Tip tap tap Tip tap tap Tip tap tap...)
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: y así con los demás
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: la cosa con tu canción es...
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: que el primer golpe de la canción no concuerda con el offset que pusiste\
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: lo pusiste como en el 20% de la canción
20:08 ErunamoJAZZ: aun cuando el primer golpe fuerte se oye en como a las dos segundos
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: ...
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: o.O
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: estás vivo?
20:09 Cosmolade: sip
20:09 Cosmolade: ¿y cómo arreglo eso? :o
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: xd
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: perdona que te diera la explicación así larga
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, es mejor saber esas cosas, quizas más adelante lo necesites :P
20:10 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, lo primero
20:10 ErunamoJAZZ: es que el bpm creo que debería ser 136.000
20:10 ErunamoJAZZ: no 136.080
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KQQB.jpg
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: y ese sería el offset correcto
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: luego que modifiques todo eso, vas al menú Timing, y en la primer opción roja que dice "resnap all notes"
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: le das ahi para que se resnapeen las notas
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: XD
20:13 Cosmolade: Oki doki :3
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: me avisas cuando ya
20:14 ErunamoJAZZ: y creo que cuando lo tengas, lo subes de nuevo xD
20:18 Cosmolade: Listo :3
20:19 ErunamoJAZZ: ok
20:19 ErunamoJAZZ: Bueno.. primero que nada..
20:19 ErunamoJAZZ: esto será un normal, correcto?
20:20 Cosmolade: em si
20:20 Cosmolade: o así lo cataloga el osu
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: porque el HP drain es demasiado alto.... tiene un HPdrain para un insane xD
20:20 Cosmolade: ok xD
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: y el Overall Dificulty también es bastante alto, como para un hard
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: y el Aproach rate, igual es muy alto...
20:21 Cosmolade: yo también creo que es mas un hard que un normal
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: el AR no es una configuración que realmente haga más dificil o facil un mapa, de forma directa
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: no, el mapa es un normal
20:22 Cosmolade: ok :o
20:22 ErunamoJAZZ: pero los stats de dificultad no estaban acordes xD
20:22 Cosmolade: ¿en que configuración le dejo entonces? xD
20:22 ErunamoJAZZ: el AR se le debe subir, hasta el punto en que no haya exceso de notas en el mapa
20:22 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KRt6.png <-- LOL
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: xD, pon esa mientrastanto, yo tampoco soy muy bueno escogiendo eso :P
20:23 Cosmolade: oka xD
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, tienes un grave problema con el spacing
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: Tienes esto activado? http://puu.sh/5KRxX.jpg
20:24 Cosmolade: D:
20:25 Cosmolade: no x.x
20:25 ErunamoJAZZ: #Epicfail
20:25 Cosmolade: esque cuando lo activo queda todo demasiado pegado
20:25 Cosmolade: y no me gusta :c
20:25 ErunamoJAZZ: ajá
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: y sabes porqué te queda todo pegado?
20:26 Cosmolade: pero tendré que activarlo igual x-x
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: porque tienes el spacing automatico en 0.5x
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
20:26 Cosmolade: por la separación en la linea de tiempo, no?
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: no
20:27 ErunamoJAZZ: si dejas la tecla Alt apretada, te saldrá esto: http://puu.sh/5KREZ.jpg
20:27 ErunamoJAZZ: Ponlo en 1.0x
20:27 Cosmolade: oh...
20:28 Cosmolade: no sabía eso :o
20:28 ErunamoJAZZ: también, creo que el Slider velocity a 1.4 es un poco alto para el normal
20:28 ErunamoJAZZ: le harás lvl eazy?
20:28 Cosmolade: en eso está sensualdango xD
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: wtf
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: se te ofreció para hacer el eazy?
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: tengoq ue hablar con él
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: XDD
20:29 Cosmolade: yo le pedí ayuda uwu
20:29 Cosmolade: lol ok :3
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: no está online aahora
20:30 Cosmolade: también necesito que alguien haga el hard y el insane :c
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, creo que postearé esto y le dejo el mensaje a él el el foro
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: has tí el hard
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: y no hagas insane
20:30 Cosmolade: ok :3
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: la canción realmente no da para un unsane
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: insane*
20:30 Cosmolade: pero no sé hacer hard D:
20:30 Cosmolade: ok :3
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: o no almenos para un buen insane
20:31 ErunamoJAZZ: pon el slider velocity en 1.2
20:31 ErunamoJAZZ: no te preocupes, no te dañará nada
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: y...
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a ir a cenar
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: pls, ve leyendo esto: http://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
20:33 Cosmolade: ok :3
20:39 ErunamoJAZZ: volví
20:40 Cosmolade: vale :3
20:40 ErunamoJAZZ: creo que luego de leer eso, te darás cuenta que ... tienes muy mal flow
20:40 ErunamoJAZZ: XD
20:40 Cosmolade: u.u
20:40 ErunamoJAZZ: afortunadamente el mapa es corto
20:41 ErunamoJAZZ: así que por la hubicación de los sliders y de los circulos, no te diré nada, ya que tendrás que cambiarlo practicamente todos
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: así que... vamos a hablar del ritmo
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:21:952 (1) -
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: ese slider que se repite queda mal ahí
20:43 Cosmolade: okay :o
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KSuO.jpg has esto mejor
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. una cosa super importante
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: pon el Beat Snap Divisor en 1-2
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 1/2 *
20:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:25:482 (4) - http://puu.sh/5KSAy.jpg
20:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:34:305 (5) - los sliders que se repiten es mala idea hacer que se repitan más de dos veces
20:46 ErunamoJAZZ: la razón es que eso siempre confunde, y... si un slider se repite muchas veces, ¿no es mejor hacer otros patrones?
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: es decir, si da el tiempo para que se repita tanto, es porque algo más suena ahi, y se pueden hacer más cosas
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: en ese sentido, puedes hacer esto: http://puu.sh/5KSHm.jpg
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: y de hecho, suna mejor :D
20:50 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:36:070 (7) - lo mismo aquí: http://puu.sh/5KSPB.jpg
20:50 ErunamoJAZZ: a partir de ahi, tienes bastantes cosas raras
20:51 ErunamoJAZZ: prodiucto del timing que tenías, creo
20:51 ErunamoJAZZ: debes de acomodar bien los tiempos de los sliders y los circulos
20:52 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:03:202 (9) - lo mismo de las 3 repeticiones
20:53 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:05:188 (1,2) - esos sliders tan largos creo que no son buena idea
20:53 ErunamoJAZZ: puedes aprovechar mejor lo que suena
20:54 ErunamoJAZZ: aun estás?? D:
20:54 ErunamoJAZZ: me siento hablando solo ._.
20:55 Cosmolade: asdf lo siento
20:55 Cosmolade: ando editando el mapa, y por eso no hablo u.u
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: osea que si estaba hablando solo?? X.x
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. lol
20:55 Cosmolade: sigo tus intrucciones lo mejor que puedo D:
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: no te preocupes, como te dije una vez, todos hacemos las cosas mal al principio
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: toma un poco de tiempo aprender como hacer las cosas bien
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
20:56 Cosmolade: oki doki :33
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: Ahora, con respecto a los combos...
20:57 ErunamoJAZZ: lol, otro error: 00:23:496 (3) -
20:57 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTd5.jpg debería ser así
20:58 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje, ya, con respecto a los combos... debes hacerlos más seguidos
20:59 Cosmolade: ¿cada cuanto mas seguidos?
20:59 ErunamoJAZZ: como es un normal, almenos cada dos compases deberías agregar un nuevo combo
20:59 ErunamoJAZZ: un compás empieza donde hay un tick blanco más largo que los otros
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTmi.jpg
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: o cada compas
21:00 Cosmolade: ok, :3
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:16:658 (4) - ahí podrías poner uno nuevo
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:25:482 (4) - acá también
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:29:011 (8) -
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: y por ultimo...
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: no tienes un slider
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: spiner*
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: XDD
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: ie: que todo el mundo tendrá el mismo puntaje
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: con los spinners aseguras que habrán pequeñas diferencias en los puntajes
21:03 Cosmolade: ¿donde podría poner un spinner? ¿al principio?
21:03 ErunamoJAZZ: no lo sé
21:03 ErunamoJAZZ: es que relamente... dejas mucho espacio sin mapear
21:04 ErunamoJAZZ: deberías hacer la parte del principio también, supongo
21:04 Cosmolade: D:
21:04 ErunamoJAZZ: oh, acabo de percatarme de algo también
21:04 ErunamoJAZZ: los kiai time están como raros...
21:06 Cosmolade: yo también los veo algo raros
21:06 Cosmolade: ¿como arreglo eso?
21:07 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a eliminar los que tienes, y te digo como creo que irían mejor
21:07 Cosmolade: ok
21:09 Cosmolade: ah, por cierto, pregunta nub xD ¿como cambio la velocidad del slider en todo el mapa?
21:10 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTTd.jpg
21:11 Cosmolade: lol, gracias :'3
21:11 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTWB.jpg
21:11 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora que suba la converzación te paso el código del timing seccions
21:11 ErunamoJAZZ: :3
21:12 Cosmolade: okay :3
21:12 ErunamoJAZZ: asi no tenés que poner vos eso manualmente
21:12 Cosmolade: ah, y cambié el slider velocity, pero al mapa se le fue todo el ritmo :c
21:13 ErunamoJAZZ: debes arreglarlo manualmente
21:13 ErunamoJAZZ: por eso te lo dije al principio antes de todo lo demás xD
21:13 Cosmolade: DD:
21:13 ErunamoJAZZ: debiste preguntarme en el momento que te dije ^^U
21:13 Cosmolade: pero creo que la velocidad va bien :c
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: pero ánimo!!, solo dura 1:20min
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: la mayoría de mis mapas duran 4 o 5 min
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: u.u
21:14 Cosmolade: u.u
21:15 Cosmolade: creo que no tocaré la slider velocity... ahora cambiaré lo del kia a ver si va mejor uwu
21:15 ErunamoJAZZ: Creo que eso sería todo por ahora
21:15 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje,. ya suvo esta converzación entonces
21:15 ErunamoJAZZ: y de ahi copias el kiai
21:16 Cosmolade: Vale, muchas gracias :3
21:16 ErunamoJAZZ: ve al menu File
21:16 ErunamoJAZZ: casi al final donde dice Open .osu in Notepad
21:16 ErunamoJAZZ: y dejalo abierto
21:16 Cosmolade: listo n.n
21:17 ErunamoJAZZ: Shit, le diste kudosu al Stop Trance D:
21:17 ErunamoJAZZ: no debes dar kudosus a cualquiera
21:17 ErunamoJAZZ: luego lo denegarán
21:18 Cosmolade: pero el modeo el mapa
21:18 Cosmolade: se lo merecía(?
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: solo debes darle kudosus a los que mdoeen el mapa, y te den cosas ultiles
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: hay cómo comprobarlo?
21:18 Cosmolade: etto, ok
21:18 Cosmolade: D:
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: cuando te hagan irc mod, deben de pegar la converzación en el foro
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: o luego lo denegarán
21:19 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, ya posteo lo mío xD
21:19 Cosmolade: ok, disculpa :c
21:19 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. para guardar llos chat, se usa /savelog


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EDIT: y ya que me dijiste que Sensualdango iba a hacer el easy, DANGO, LEE ESTO:
Hola, Quiero que para el easy que le harás, primero que nada, tengas mucho cuidado con el spacing, y con el beat snap divisor... debes usar 1/1


Si vas hacer sliders largos, hazlos bien... yo ya ten enseñé cómo se hacen, así que no tienes excusa :v
jejej, suerte ^_^

Y para los dos, ojo con el flow: http://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
Neku Okazaki

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hola.

Tal y como te lo prometí, aquí está el kiai:
[TimingPoints]
2541,441.176470588235,4,1,0,66,1,0
21952,-100,4,1,0,66,0,1
29011,-100,4,1,0,66,0,0
36070,-100,4,1,0,66,0,1
42246,-100,4,1,0,66,0,0
43129,-100,4,1,0,66,0,1
57246,-100,4,1,0,66,0,0

Y el IRCmod:
IRCmod
19:50 Cosmolade: Hola :3
19:50 ErunamoJAZZ: Hola
19:52 Cosmolade: etto, ¿estas libre? necesito un poco de ayuda :c
19:52 ErunamoJAZZ: Con cual mapa?
19:53 *Cosmolade is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/336755 JDee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery]
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: :o
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: que bien, empezaste uno más corto
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: o eso aparevta (?)
19:53 ErunamoJAZZ: aparenta *
19:53 Cosmolade: Si :3
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: ?np
19:54 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/336755 JDee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery]
19:54 ErunamoJAZZ: espectame
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: el timing parece bueno
19:55 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
19:56 Cosmolade: gracias a dios(? :3
19:56 Cosmolade: estoy mejorando uwu
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: dije que parece
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: pero acabo de ver y...
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
19:56 Cosmolade: oh :c
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: has olvidado un par de cosas importantes
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: tocas algun instrumento?
19:57 Cosmolade: D:
19:57 Cosmolade: no :c
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: pero hs tenido cursos de musica en la escuela o asi?
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: has*
19:57 Cosmolade: no u.u
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: ok, tons asumiré que no sabes nada y empezaré de cero xD
19:58 Cosmolade: perdón uwu
19:58 ErunamoJAZZ: La musica se divide en: melodía, armonía, y ritmo
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: la melodía es generalmente lo se que canta... o lo que lleva como el hilo principal de la canción
19:59 ErunamoJAZZ: la armonía es el acompañamiento de la melodía, y es lo que llena lo que la melodía deja vacío
20:00 ErunamoJAZZ: el ritmo es lo que mantiene a la melodía y a la armonía juntas xD
20:00 Cosmolade: ok :o
20:01 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora, la forma de describir el timo de una canción es con lo que se conoce como Compás (Signature en inglés)
20:02 ErunamoJAZZ: en osu, el compás se ve aqui: http://puu.sh/5KQjO.jpg
20:02 ErunamoJAZZ: los ritmos se escriben como 3/4, 4/4, 5/4, 6/4 y 7/4
20:03 ErunamoJAZZ: la mayoría de las canciones son a 4/4, por lo que en general no hay que cambiarlo
20:03 ErunamoJAZZ: de hecho, en esta canción, es 4/4, así que por ese lado está bien
20:03 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
20:03 Cosmolade: :D
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: piensa entonces en el tap tap tap tap tap tap...
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: osea, los golpes, ...
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: si yo digo que esto tiene 4/4
20:05 ErunamoJAZZ: significa que cada 4 golpes, irá un golpe principal
20:05 ErunamoJAZZ: que en el osu suena Tip tap tap tap Tip tap tap tap Tip tap tap tap....
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: ese Tip, es el el golpe principal
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: aveces hay canciones donde el ritmo será 3/4 (Tip tap tap Tip tap tap Tip tap tap...)
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: y así con los demás
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: la cosa con tu canción es...
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: que el primer golpe de la canción no concuerda con el offset que pusiste\
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: lo pusiste como en el 20% de la canción
20:08 ErunamoJAZZ: aun cuando el primer golpe fuerte se oye en como a las dos segundos
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: ...
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: o.O
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: estás vivo?
20:09 Cosmolade: sip
20:09 Cosmolade: ¿y cómo arreglo eso? :o
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: xd
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: perdona que te diera la explicación así larga
20:09 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, es mejor saber esas cosas, quizas más adelante lo necesites :P
20:10 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, lo primero
20:10 ErunamoJAZZ: es que el bpm creo que debería ser 136.000
20:10 ErunamoJAZZ: no 136.080
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KQQB.jpg
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: y ese sería el offset correcto
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: luego que modifiques todo eso, vas al menú Timing, y en la primer opción roja que dice "resnap all notes"
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: le das ahi para que se resnapeen las notas
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: XD
20:13 Cosmolade: Oki doki :3
20:13 ErunamoJAZZ: me avisas cuando ya
20:14 ErunamoJAZZ: y creo que cuando lo tengas, lo subes de nuevo xD
20:18 Cosmolade: Listo :3
20:19 ErunamoJAZZ: ok
20:19 ErunamoJAZZ: Bueno.. primero que nada..
20:19 ErunamoJAZZ: esto será un normal, correcto?
20:20 Cosmolade: em si
20:20 Cosmolade: o así lo cataloga el osu
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: porque el HP drain es demasiado alto.... tiene un HPdrain para un insane xD
20:20 Cosmolade: ok xD
20:20 ErunamoJAZZ: y el Overall Dificulty también es bastante alto, como para un hard
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: y el Aproach rate, igual es muy alto...
20:21 Cosmolade: yo también creo que es mas un hard que un normal
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: el AR no es una configuración que realmente haga más dificil o facil un mapa, de forma directa
20:21 ErunamoJAZZ: no, el mapa es un normal
20:22 Cosmolade: ok :o
20:22 ErunamoJAZZ: pero los stats de dificultad no estaban acordes xD
20:22 Cosmolade: ¿en que configuración le dejo entonces? xD
20:22 ErunamoJAZZ: el AR se le debe subir, hasta el punto en que no haya exceso de notas en el mapa
20:22 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KRt6.png <-- LOL
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: xD, pon esa mientrastanto, yo tampoco soy muy bueno escogiendo eso :P
20:23 Cosmolade: oka xD
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, tienes un grave problema con el spacing
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: Tienes esto activado? http://puu.sh/5KRxX.jpg
20:24 Cosmolade: D:
20:25 Cosmolade: no x.x
20:25 ErunamoJAZZ: #Epicfail
20:25 Cosmolade: esque cuando lo activo queda todo demasiado pegado
20:25 Cosmolade: y no me gusta :c
20:25 ErunamoJAZZ: ajá
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: y sabes porqué te queda todo pegado?
20:26 Cosmolade: pero tendré que activarlo igual x-x
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: porque tienes el spacing automatico en 0.5x
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
20:26 Cosmolade: por la separación en la linea de tiempo, no?
20:26 ErunamoJAZZ: no
20:27 ErunamoJAZZ: si dejas la tecla Alt apretada, te saldrá esto: http://puu.sh/5KREZ.jpg
20:27 ErunamoJAZZ: Ponlo en 1.0x
20:27 Cosmolade: oh...
20:28 Cosmolade: no sabía eso :o
20:28 ErunamoJAZZ: también, creo que el Slider velocity a 1.4 es un poco alto para el normal
20:28 ErunamoJAZZ: le harás lvl eazy?
20:28 Cosmolade: en eso está sensualdango xD
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: wtf
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: se te ofreció para hacer el eazy?
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: tengoq ue hablar con él
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: XDD
20:29 Cosmolade: yo le pedí ayuda uwu
20:29 Cosmolade: lol ok :3
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje
20:29 ErunamoJAZZ: no está online aahora
20:30 Cosmolade: también necesito que alguien haga el hard y el insane :c
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, creo que postearé esto y le dejo el mensaje a él el el foro
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: has tí el hard
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: y no hagas insane
20:30 Cosmolade: ok :3
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: la canción realmente no da para un unsane
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: insane*
20:30 Cosmolade: pero no sé hacer hard D:
20:30 Cosmolade: ok :3
20:30 ErunamoJAZZ: o no almenos para un buen insane
20:31 ErunamoJAZZ: pon el slider velocity en 1.2
20:31 ErunamoJAZZ: no te preocupes, no te dañará nada
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: y...
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a ir a cenar
20:32 ErunamoJAZZ: pls, ve leyendo esto: http://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
20:33 Cosmolade: ok :3
20:39 ErunamoJAZZ: volví
20:40 Cosmolade: vale :3
20:40 ErunamoJAZZ: creo que luego de leer eso, te darás cuenta que ... tienes muy mal flow
20:40 ErunamoJAZZ: XD
20:40 Cosmolade: u.u
20:40 ErunamoJAZZ: afortunadamente el mapa es corto
20:41 ErunamoJAZZ: así que por la hubicación de los sliders y de los circulos, no te diré nada, ya que tendrás que cambiarlo practicamente todos
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: así que... vamos a hablar del ritmo
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:21:952 (1) -
20:42 ErunamoJAZZ: ese slider que se repite queda mal ahí
20:43 Cosmolade: okay :o
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KSuO.jpg has esto mejor
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. una cosa super importante
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: pon el Beat Snap Divisor en 1-2
20:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 1/2 *
20:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:25:482 (4) - http://puu.sh/5KSAy.jpg
20:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:34:305 (5) - los sliders que se repiten es mala idea hacer que se repitan más de dos veces
20:46 ErunamoJAZZ: la razón es que eso siempre confunde, y... si un slider se repite muchas veces, ¿no es mejor hacer otros patrones?
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: es decir, si da el tiempo para que se repita tanto, es porque algo más suena ahi, y se pueden hacer más cosas
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: en ese sentido, puedes hacer esto: http://puu.sh/5KSHm.jpg
20:47 ErunamoJAZZ: y de hecho, suna mejor :D
20:50 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:36:070 (7) - lo mismo aquí: http://puu.sh/5KSPB.jpg
20:50 ErunamoJAZZ: a partir de ahi, tienes bastantes cosas raras
20:51 ErunamoJAZZ: prodiucto del timing que tenías, creo
20:51 ErunamoJAZZ: debes de acomodar bien los tiempos de los sliders y los circulos
20:52 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:03:202 (9) - lo mismo de las 3 repeticiones
20:53 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:05:188 (1,2) - esos sliders tan largos creo que no son buena idea
20:53 ErunamoJAZZ: puedes aprovechar mejor lo que suena
20:54 ErunamoJAZZ: aun estás?? D:
20:54 ErunamoJAZZ: me siento hablando solo ._.
20:55 Cosmolade: asdf lo siento
20:55 Cosmolade: ando editando el mapa, y por eso no hablo u.u
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: osea que si estaba hablando solo?? X.x
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. lol
20:55 Cosmolade: sigo tus intrucciones lo mejor que puedo D:
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje
20:55 ErunamoJAZZ: no te preocupes, como te dije una vez, todos hacemos las cosas mal al principio
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: toma un poco de tiempo aprender como hacer las cosas bien
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
20:56 Cosmolade: oki doki :33
20:56 ErunamoJAZZ: Ahora, con respecto a los combos...
20:57 ErunamoJAZZ: lol, otro error: 00:23:496 (3) -
20:57 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTd5.jpg debería ser así
20:58 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje, ya, con respecto a los combos... debes hacerlos más seguidos
20:59 Cosmolade: ¿cada cuanto mas seguidos?
20:59 ErunamoJAZZ: como es un normal, almenos cada dos compases deberías agregar un nuevo combo
20:59 ErunamoJAZZ: un compás empieza donde hay un tick blanco más largo que los otros
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTmi.jpg
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: o cada compas
21:00 Cosmolade: ok, :3
21:00 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:16:658 (4) - ahí podrías poner uno nuevo
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:25:482 (4) - acá también
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:29:011 (8) -
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: y por ultimo...
21:01 ErunamoJAZZ: no tienes un slider
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: spiner*
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: XDD
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: ie: que todo el mundo tendrá el mismo puntaje
21:02 ErunamoJAZZ: con los spinners aseguras que habrán pequeñas diferencias en los puntajes
21:03 Cosmolade: ¿donde podría poner un spinner? ¿al principio?
21:03 ErunamoJAZZ: no lo sé
21:03 ErunamoJAZZ: es que relamente... dejas mucho espacio sin mapear
21:04 ErunamoJAZZ: deberías hacer la parte del principio también, supongo
21:04 Cosmolade: D:
21:04 ErunamoJAZZ: oh, acabo de percatarme de algo también
21:04 ErunamoJAZZ: los kiai time están como raros...
21:06 Cosmolade: yo también los veo algo raros
21:06 Cosmolade: ¿como arreglo eso?
21:07 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a eliminar los que tienes, y te digo como creo que irían mejor
21:07 Cosmolade: ok
21:09 Cosmolade: ah, por cierto, pregunta nub xD ¿como cambio la velocidad del slider en todo el mapa?
21:10 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTTd.jpg
21:11 Cosmolade: lol, gracias :'3
21:11 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5KTWB.jpg
21:11 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora que suba la converzación te paso el código del timing seccions
21:11 ErunamoJAZZ: :3
21:12 Cosmolade: okay :3
21:12 ErunamoJAZZ: asi no tenés que poner vos eso manualmente
21:12 Cosmolade: ah, y cambié el slider velocity, pero al mapa se le fue todo el ritmo :c
21:13 ErunamoJAZZ: debes arreglarlo manualmente
21:13 ErunamoJAZZ: por eso te lo dije al principio antes de todo lo demás xD
21:13 Cosmolade: DD:
21:13 ErunamoJAZZ: debiste preguntarme en el momento que te dije ^^U
21:13 Cosmolade: pero creo que la velocidad va bien :c
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: pero ánimo!!, solo dura 1:20min
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: xD
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: la mayoría de mis mapas duran 4 o 5 min
21:14 ErunamoJAZZ: u.u
21:14 Cosmolade: u.u
21:15 Cosmolade: creo que no tocaré la slider velocity... ahora cambiaré lo del kia a ver si va mejor uwu
21:15 ErunamoJAZZ: Creo que eso sería todo por ahora
21:15 ErunamoJAZZ: jeje,. ya suvo esta converzación entonces
21:15 ErunamoJAZZ: y de ahi copias el kiai
21:16 Cosmolade: Vale, muchas gracias :3
21:16 ErunamoJAZZ: ve al menu File
21:16 ErunamoJAZZ: casi al final donde dice Open .osu in Notepad
21:16 ErunamoJAZZ: y dejalo abierto
21:16 Cosmolade: listo n.n
21:17 ErunamoJAZZ: Shit, le diste kudosu al Stop Trance D:
21:17 ErunamoJAZZ: no debes dar kudosus a cualquiera
21:17 ErunamoJAZZ: luego lo denegarán
21:18 Cosmolade: pero el modeo el mapa
21:18 Cosmolade: se lo merecía(?
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: solo debes darle kudosus a los que mdoeen el mapa, y te den cosas ultiles
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: hay cómo comprobarlo?
21:18 Cosmolade: etto, ok
21:18 Cosmolade: D:
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: cuando te hagan irc mod, deben de pegar la converzación en el foro
21:18 ErunamoJAZZ: o luego lo denegarán
21:19 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, ya posteo lo mío xD
21:19 Cosmolade: ok, disculpa :c
21:19 ErunamoJAZZ: a.. para guardar llos chat, se usa /savelog


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EDIT: y ya que me dijiste que Sensualdango iba a hacer el easy, DANGO, LEE ESTO:
Hola, Quiero que para el easy que le harás, primero que nada, tengas mucho cuidado con el spacing, y con el beat snap divisor... debes usar 1/1


Si vas hacer sliders largos, hazlos bien... yo ya ten enseñé cómo se hacen, así que no tienes excusa :v
jejej, suerte ^_^

Y para los dos, ojo con el flow: http://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
ÑAÑAÑA estoy haciendo un Easy medio normal no easy easy xD
kanocchi
la difficultad de dango esta perfecta, aunque algunos beats no estan bien snappeados, arregla eso, pero lo demas esta bien, saludos
Neku Okazaki

Stop Trance wrote:

la difficultad de dango esta perfecta, aunque algunos beats no estan bien snappeados, arregla eso, pero lo demas esta bien, saludos
Algunos o todos? xD, corrigiendo ~
kanocchi

Sensualdango wrote:

Stop Trance wrote:

la difficultad de dango esta perfecta, aunque algunos beats no estan bien snappeados, arregla eso, pero lo demas esta bien, saludos
Algunos o todos? xD, corrigiendo ~
te tiene que salir en ese lugar del mapa, velos con el AiMod, saludos
kanocchi
en Raichu!, el kiai tiene problemas con la distacia de snappeado, arregla eso y si nesecitas que haga alguna otra cosa dimelo, ah, y trata de cambiarle el nombre de Sensualdango, dile al Sensualdango que lo cambie, o sino podria perjudicarte en otras cosas, saludos


ESTO FUE MODEADO A TRAVEZ DE LLAMADA SKYPE
Gero
@Stop Trance para algo existe el boton de editar! no hagas doble post , lo cual son innecesarios aqui.

Para el mapper: no des kudosu a cualquier persona, solo cuando obtengas alguna ayuda dirigida para el mapa.

btw llamada en skype no vale .-. solo por post mod o IRC mod!

ah y otra cosa, esos custom names son unranked t/169960/start=0 , lamento decir eso pero tienes que cambiarlos a Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Insane consecutivamente.
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Gero wrote:

@Stop Trance para algo existe el boton de editar! no hagas doble post , lo cual son innecesarios aqui.

Para el mapper: no des kudosu a cualquier persona, solo cuando obtengas alguna ayuda dirigida para el mapa.

btw llamada en skype no vale .-. solo por post mod o IRC mod!

ah y otra cosa, esos custom names son unranked t/169960/start=0 , lamento decir eso pero tienes que cambiarlos a Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Insane consecutivamente.
¡Gracias por el dato!
Y lastima que ya no se puedan poner custom names :'<
Nombres de las diffs cambiados~ ✔
ErunamoJAZZ
Otro mod.

IRCmod
16:30 Cosmolade: ya terminé la diff hard, aunque no sé si está del todo bien n.n
16:30 ErunamoJAZZ: :
16:30 ErunamoJAZZ: :o
16:30 ErunamoJAZZ: Hola
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: viste donde saqué 50?
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: tiene mal el flow
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: para ser sincero, me gusta como le hiciste
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: a ups./..
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: shit
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: chat equivocdo
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: ando ayudando a otro chico ahora ._.
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: en un rato miro el tuyo
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: ^^U
16:52 Cosmolade: lol, ok xD
16:53 Cosmolade: no te preocupes :3
17:17 ErunamoJAZZ: ya
17:17 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora si
17:17 Cosmolade: ok :3
17:17 ErunamoJAZZ: sensualdango si modificó lo de el?
17:18 Cosmolade: am, el me dijo que si, y luego me paso la diff modificada
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: ok...
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: so..
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: me vas a espectar ene l hard?
17:18 Cosmolade: tengo miedo(? D:
17:18 Cosmolade: pero si :3
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: teme >:D (?)
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: hahaha
17:19 Cosmolade: D:
17:19 ErunamoJAZZ: ok, ahi voy
17:20 ErunamoJAZZ: Primer dato: hay partes overmaped
17:22 Cosmolade: oh :c
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: osea... está bien que seguiste el ritmo
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: peeero, hay partes donde definitivamente haces overmap
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: es decir, que colocas notas donde al parecer no suena nada
17:23 Cosmolade: D:
17:23 Cosmolade: ¿en cuales?
17:24 Cosmolade: te dije que soy horrible haciendo hards D:
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: mejor vamos en orde, y te doy mis opiniones \
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
17:24 Cosmolade: ok :3
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:14:893 (1,2,3,4) - me parece que desaprovechan el "pikachu puchachu" pindemo
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: lo haces muy plano, cuando podría hacer un par de sliders pequeños
17:25 Cosmolade: oh ok :o
17:26 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5NT5Y.jpg
17:26 ErunamoJAZZ: así
17:27 ErunamoJAZZ: de ahi en adelante hasta 00:27:246 (2) - , me parece muy bien como le hiciste
17:27 ErunamoJAZZ: pero...
17:28 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:27:467 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - estos, creo que es mejor que los elimines, y oigas con más atención a ver que más puedes poner
17:28 ErunamoJAZZ: ya que es ahi el primer lugar donde se siente overmapped
17:29 Cosmolade: ok :3
17:29 ErunamoJAZZ: la idea es que oigas la musica a 50% de velocidad
17:30 ErunamoJAZZ: sabes como se hace?
17:30 Cosmolade: si
17:32 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:34:305 (1) - haz mejor esto: http://puu.sh/5NTuj.jpg
17:34 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:44:011 (3,4,5,6) - eliminalos, y haz lo de oir a 50% para ver que cosa puede hacer que sea mejro; está overmapped.
17:37 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:48:643 (5,6,7,8) - en vez de lo que tienes, haz esto: http://puu.sh/5NTLV.jpg
17:37 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:52:835 (4) - juassssssss
17:38 ErunamoJAZZ: que es eso xD
17:39 ErunamoJAZZ: está unsnaped.
17:39 ErunamoJAZZ: Hazlo más cortico, y le pones un circulo en el tick azul
17:39 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5NTV1.jpg
17:41 ErunamoJAZZ: y bueno... quizas la parte maaaaaaaaassss over mapeada del mapa, y que suena bien raro, es en...
17:41 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:55:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
17:42 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5NU7e.jpg algo así creo que queda mejor
17:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:59:673 (6) - esta sobra, elimina solo esta nota, no es necesaria
17:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:04:967 (4) - ^
17:44 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:15:776 (2,3,4) - puedes reemplazar estas 3 notas facilmente por un slider
17:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:17:540 (1) - ^, algo así http://puu.sh/5NUkX.jpg
17:49 ErunamoJAZZ: y en general, sigues teniendo unos patrones feos
17:49 ErunamoJAZZ: :/
17:50 Cosmolade: perdón :c
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: quiero que descargues este mapa
17:50 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/312122 Lady Gaga - Applause]
17:50 Cosmolade: ya lo tengo
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: y que observes en el editor como está hecho
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: ese mapa es un muy bien ejemplo de un mapa sencillo, y bien hecho
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: por ahora creo que el ritmo lo tienes bien
17:51 Cosmolade: ok :D
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, el diseño del flujo del mapa, y los sliders, y eso, es bastante deficiente
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: parece hecho a la loca
17:51 Cosmolade: D:
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: es decir, hecho de cualquie manera
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: como saliera
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: XD
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: a partir de ahora,debes preocuparte porque el mapa se vea bonito\
17:52 Cosmolade: :c
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: y la unica forma de hacer mapas bonitos, es ver mapas bonitos xD
17:53 Cosmolade: ah, ok xD
17:53 Cosmolade: cuando haga un avance, te lo diré vale? :3
17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: haha
17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: wait\
17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora, miraré el normal
17:54 Cosmolade: ah, pero ese está tal cual
17:54 Cosmolade: tengo que editarlo con el distance snap
17:54 Cosmolade: :c
17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: eso me di cuenta
17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:05:188 (1) - este slider, creo que debería ir solo hasta donde empieza el Nyan\
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: solo sería eso, en cuanto a ritmo
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: porque ya sabes... lo del distance snap XD
17:56 Cosmolade: si lo sé xD
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: y tambien, el que se vea bonito :3
17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: jo... ahora el de dango...
17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: tengo miedo D>
17:57 Cosmolade: :o
18:00 ErunamoJAZZ: hummm.....
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: ohhh
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: una cosa importante con el hard
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: ponlo con Overall Dificulty en 7
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 5 es demasiado poco
18:02 Cosmolade: ok~
18:02 ErunamoJAZZ: y el normal, ese si ponlo en 5
18:04 Cosmolade: listo :3
18:06 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, el del dango lo modeo en el foro ya que no está online XD

[Easy]
Hola amigo dango o3o/ , ahora si, te modearé con toda propiedad... preparate o_ó

OD+1, AR+1.
  1. 00:17:099 (2,3) - Entre estos dos hay una interrupción en el flow que no tiene ninguna razón. Procura que el flow sea completamente consistente en todo el mapa.
  2. 00:20:188 (1,1) - holy cow!!, pero que es eso!!, como sabes, al principio es demasiado fácil perderse con los spinners... Esto está mal por dos razones: 1) el tiempo entre el final del spiner y el slider es muy corto. 2) el slider está en una esquina, cuando debería mejor empezar en la parte central del mapa.
    Aquí tienes varias opciones (como correr el slider hacia el centro), pero creo que lo mejor es que, elimines el slider, y alargues un poco más el spinner:
  3. 00:24:158 (3,4) - Creo que es mejor que cambies estos dos circulos por un slider. La razón es que, de antes ya llevabas el patron de 1Slider-2Circulos, y aquí de repente pones 3 circulos... lo mas probable es que los noobs fallen.
  4. 00:26:365 (2,3,4) - Este en cambio está bien. A diferencia del anterior, aquí no hay sliders, por lo que a los noobs les da tiempo de prepararse para hacer 3 clics y es menos probable que se equivoquen 8-)
  5. 00:31:217 (2,3) - Otro mal flow como el de antes.
  6. 00:33:423 (3,4) - procura que los slides no se sobrepongan unos con otros. La razón es puramente estética: no se ven bien... se ve feo eso: http://puu.sh/5NWuN.jpg
  7. 00:41:364 (3,4,5,6) - Creo que es mala idea que hagas tantos circulos juntos. Eso sin mencionar que están mal espaciados (lo que te aconsejé antes, debes cuidar el espaciado <_< ).
  8. 00:49:305 (5,6) - haz un slider.
  9. 00:50:188 (1) - Dango... plz... ¿porqué haces un slider cuadrado tan largo?... para serte sincero.. no es nada bonito xD. vamos, haz algo que se vea bonito, simetrico, y que sea facil de seguir. jejeje
  10. 00:57:246 - hace falta un circulo acá.
  11. 00:58:129 (1,2) - mal flow.
  12. 00:59:452 (3,1) - ^
  13. 00:59:893 (1,2) - ^
  14. 01:01:217 (3,4) - ^
  15. 01:12:246 (1,2,3) - En este aunque hay 3... casualmente queda bien 8-)
  16. 01:17:540 (1) - quizas deberías acortarle un pedacito a este spinner:
Ahi tienes pa' entretenerte :P
Natsu
solo comentando un modder no puede recibir kudos por modear varias veces el mismo mapa solo hacelo una vez deberías llamar un bat para que deniegue el de stop trance que no ha contribuido en nada y uno a eurazmo que ya recibió uno por el primer post que hizo.

suerte con el mapa
kanocchi

Gero wrote:

@Stop Trance para algo existe el boton de editar! no hagas doble post , lo cual son innecesarios aqui.

Para el mapper: no des kudosu a cualquier persona, solo cuando obtengas alguna ayuda dirigida para el mapa.

btw llamada en skype no vale .-. solo por post mod o IRC mod!

ah y otra cosa, esos custom names son unranked https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/169960/start=0 , lamento decir eso pero tienes que cambiarlos a Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Insane consecutivamente.
trampa :(
kanocchi

Cosmolade wrote:

Gero wrote:

@Stop Trance para algo existe el boton de editar! no hagas doble post , lo cual son innecesarios aqui.

Para el mapper: no des kudosu a cualquier persona, solo cuando obtengas alguna ayuda dirigida para el mapa.

btw llamada en skype no vale .-. solo por post mod o IRC mod!

ah y otra cosa, esos custom names son unranked https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/169960/start=0 , lamento decir eso pero tienes que cambiarlos a Easy -> Normal -> Hard -> Insane consecutivamente.
¡Gracias por el dato!
Y lastima que ya no se puedan poner custom names :'<
Nombres de las diffs cambiados~ ✔
y si parece que se pueden ahora pero hay que ponerle por ejemplo ''Sensualdango's easy''
kanocchi

Natsu wrote:

solo comentando un modder no puede recibir kudos por modear varias veces el mismo mapa solo hacelo una vez deberías llamar un bat para que deniegue el de stop trance que no ha contribuido en nada y uno a eurazmo que ya recibió uno por el primer post que hizo.

suerte con el mapa
sabes que nadie hecho caso, ya quedo entendido con lo que dijo Gero
Mythiax
Ya te lo explicaron Stop Trance. Usa el boton editar y no spammes con post innecesarios.
ErunamoJAZZ
Feliz Navidad :)

Insane
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284,116,78423,6,0,L|228:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,176,78864,2,0,L|408:116,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
ProfessionalBox
Hello! I'll just quickly mod your normal and hard diff. I put things in blue that could make the map better imo, you can decide whether to change or keep it the same

Normal:

>00:17:540 and 00:19:305 I don't like the shape of these sliders. Maybe make them less pointier?
>00:25:482 This slider is the only circular in this map - maybe open it up a bit 8-)
>00:33:643 This is one of those pointy sliders i don't like lol
>00:36:070 Start a new combo here
>00:38:276 Put a note here
>01:01:658 This sliders shape is odd, needs to be changed - Maybe move the anchor point a bit to the right to get the triangle shape I think you've been after? This slider is like the ones i mentioned earlier, needs to be less pointier imo :)


Hard:

>00:44:673 Put a note here
>00:45:555 and here
>00:49:085 and 00:49:526 Move these sliders forward 2/4 steps - The offbeat rhythm just doesn't fit here at all-
>00:49:967 Delete this note

Great maps - enjoyed playing, ciao! :)
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello! I'll just quickly mod your normal and hard diff. I put things in blue that could make the map better imo, you can decide whether to change or keep it the same

Normal:

>00:17:540 and 00:19:305 I don't like the shape of these sliders. Maybe make them less pointier? Done~ I changed the shape of sliders to make it more round :D
>00:25:482 This slider is the only circular in this map - maybe open it up a bit 8-)
>00:33:643 This is one of those pointy sliders i don't like lol
>00:36:070 Start a new combo here Done✔
>00:38:276 Put a note here Done✔
>01:01:658 This sliders shape is odd, needs to be changed - Maybe move the anchor point a bit to the right to get the triangle shape I think you've been after? This slider is like the ones i mentioned earlier, needs to be less pointier imo :) Done✔ I formed a more open triangle~


Hard:

>00:44:673 Put a note here Done✔
>00:45:555 and here Done✔
>00:49:085 and 00:49:526 Move these sliders forward 2/4 steps - The offbeat rhythm just doesn't fit here at all- Done✔
>00:49:967 Delete this note Done✔

Great maps - enjoyed playing, ciao! :)
Thanks for the mod!
_(:D 」∠)_
BigWilly
[Easy]
As it is Easy maybe increase the Circle Size

00:33:423 (3) - Try to Avoid the overlap
01:05:188 (1) - Slider looks weird, consider Changing
01:13:570 (4) - ^
01:17:099 (4) - Move down slightly so it is in-line with 2

Cute background tho :P
Neku Okazaki

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Otro mod.

IRCmod
16:30 Cosmolade: ya terminé la diff hard, aunque no sé si está del todo bien n.n
16:30 ErunamoJAZZ: :
16:30 ErunamoJAZZ: :o
16:30 ErunamoJAZZ: Hola
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: viste donde saqué 50?
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: tiene mal el flow
16:51 ErunamoJAZZ: para ser sincero, me gusta como le hiciste
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: a ups./..
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: shit
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: chat equivocdo
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: ando ayudando a otro chico ahora ._.
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: en un rato miro el tuyo
16:52 ErunamoJAZZ: ^^U
16:52 Cosmolade: lol, ok xD
16:53 Cosmolade: no te preocupes :3
17:17 ErunamoJAZZ: ya
17:17 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora si
17:17 Cosmolade: ok :3
17:17 ErunamoJAZZ: sensualdango si modificó lo de el?
17:18 Cosmolade: am, el me dijo que si, y luego me paso la diff modificada
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: ok...
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: so..
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: me vas a espectar ene l hard?
17:18 Cosmolade: tengo miedo(? D:
17:18 Cosmolade: pero si :3
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: teme >:D (?)
17:18 ErunamoJAZZ: hahaha
17:19 Cosmolade: D:
17:19 ErunamoJAZZ: ok, ahi voy
17:20 ErunamoJAZZ: Primer dato: hay partes overmaped
17:22 Cosmolade: oh :c
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: osea... está bien que seguiste el ritmo
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: peeero, hay partes donde definitivamente haces overmap
17:22 ErunamoJAZZ: es decir, que colocas notas donde al parecer no suena nada
17:23 Cosmolade: D:
17:23 Cosmolade: ¿en cuales?
17:24 Cosmolade: te dije que soy horrible haciendo hards D:
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: mejor vamos en orde, y te doy mis opiniones \
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: :)
17:24 Cosmolade: ok :3
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:14:893 (1,2,3,4) - me parece que desaprovechan el "pikachu puchachu" pindemo
17:24 ErunamoJAZZ: lo haces muy plano, cuando podría hacer un par de sliders pequeños
17:25 Cosmolade: oh ok :o
17:26 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5NT5Y.jpg
17:26 ErunamoJAZZ: así
17:27 ErunamoJAZZ: de ahi en adelante hasta 00:27:246 (2) - , me parece muy bien como le hiciste
17:27 ErunamoJAZZ: pero...
17:28 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:27:467 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - estos, creo que es mejor que los elimines, y oigas con más atención a ver que más puedes poner
17:28 ErunamoJAZZ: ya que es ahi el primer lugar donde se siente overmapped
17:29 Cosmolade: ok :3
17:29 ErunamoJAZZ: la idea es que oigas la musica a 50% de velocidad
17:30 ErunamoJAZZ: sabes como se hace?
17:30 Cosmolade: si
17:32 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:34:305 (1) - haz mejor esto: http://puu.sh/5NTuj.jpg
17:34 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:44:011 (3,4,5,6) - eliminalos, y haz lo de oir a 50% para ver que cosa puede hacer que sea mejro; está overmapped.
17:37 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:48:643 (5,6,7,8) - en vez de lo que tienes, haz esto: http://puu.sh/5NTLV.jpg
17:37 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:52:835 (4) - juassssssss
17:38 ErunamoJAZZ: que es eso xD
17:39 ErunamoJAZZ: está unsnaped.
17:39 ErunamoJAZZ: Hazlo más cortico, y le pones un circulo en el tick azul
17:39 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5NTV1.jpg
17:41 ErunamoJAZZ: y bueno... quizas la parte maaaaaaaaassss over mapeada del mapa, y que suena bien raro, es en...
17:41 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:55:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
17:42 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/5NU7e.jpg algo así creo que queda mejor
17:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 00:59:673 (6) - esta sobra, elimina solo esta nota, no es necesaria
17:43 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:04:967 (4) - ^
17:44 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:15:776 (2,3,4) - puedes reemplazar estas 3 notas facilmente por un slider
17:45 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:17:540 (1) - ^, algo así http://puu.sh/5NUkX.jpg
17:49 ErunamoJAZZ: y en general, sigues teniendo unos patrones feos
17:49 ErunamoJAZZ: :/
17:50 Cosmolade: perdón :c
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: quiero que descargues este mapa
17:50 *ErunamoJAZZ is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/312122 Lady Gaga - Applause]
17:50 Cosmolade: ya lo tengo
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: y que observes en el editor como está hecho
17:50 ErunamoJAZZ: ese mapa es un muy bien ejemplo de un mapa sencillo, y bien hecho
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: por ahora creo que el ritmo lo tienes bien
17:51 Cosmolade: ok :D
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: pero, el diseño del flujo del mapa, y los sliders, y eso, es bastante deficiente
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: parece hecho a la loca
17:51 Cosmolade: D:
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: es decir, hecho de cualquie manera
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: como saliera
17:51 ErunamoJAZZ: XD
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: a partir de ahora,debes preocuparte porque el mapa se vea bonito\
17:52 Cosmolade: :c
17:52 ErunamoJAZZ: y la unica forma de hacer mapas bonitos, es ver mapas bonitos xD
17:53 Cosmolade: ah, ok xD
17:53 Cosmolade: cuando haga un avance, te lo diré vale? :3
17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: haha
17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: wait\
17:53 ErunamoJAZZ: ahora, miraré el normal
17:54 Cosmolade: ah, pero ese está tal cual
17:54 Cosmolade: tengo que editarlo con el distance snap
17:54 Cosmolade: :c
17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: eso me di cuenta
17:55 ErunamoJAZZ: 01:05:188 (1) - este slider, creo que debería ir solo hasta donde empieza el Nyan\
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: solo sería eso, en cuanto a ritmo
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: porque ya sabes... lo del distance snap XD
17:56 Cosmolade: si lo sé xD
17:56 ErunamoJAZZ: y tambien, el que se vea bonito :3
17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: jo... ahora el de dango...
17:57 ErunamoJAZZ: tengo miedo D>
17:57 Cosmolade: :o
18:00 ErunamoJAZZ: hummm.....
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: ohhh
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: una cosa importante con el hard
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: ponlo con Overall Dificulty en 7
18:01 ErunamoJAZZ: 5 es demasiado poco
18:02 Cosmolade: ok~
18:02 ErunamoJAZZ: y el normal, ese si ponlo en 5
18:04 Cosmolade: listo :3
18:06 ErunamoJAZZ: bueno, el del dango lo modeo en el foro ya que no está online XD

[Easy]
Hola amigo dango o3o/ , ahora si, te modearé con toda propiedad... preparate o_ó Hola Erunamo ._./

OD+1, AR+1. Arreglado ~
  1. 00:17:099 (2,3) - Entre estos dos hay una interrupción en el flow que no tiene ninguna razón. Procura que el flow sea completamente consistente en todo el mapa. Arreglado ~
  2. 00:20:188 (1,1) - holy cow!!, pero que es eso!!, como sabes, al principio es demasiado fácil perderse con los spinners... Esto está mal por dos razones: 1) el tiempo entre el final del spiner y el slider es muy corto. 2) el slider está en una esquina, cuando debería mejor empezar en la parte central del mapa.
    Aquí tienes varias opciones (como correr el slider hacia el centro), pero creo que lo mejor es que, elimines el slider, y alargues un poco más el spinner:
    Arreglado ~
  3. 00:24:158 (3,4) - Creo que es mejor que cambies estos dos circulos por un slider. La razón es que, de antes ya llevabas el patron de 1Slider-2Circulos, y aquí de repente pones 3 circulos... lo mas probable es que los noobs fallen. Canviado ~
  4. 00:26:365 (2,3,4) - Este en cambio está bien. A diferencia del anterior, aquí no hay sliders, por lo que a los noobs les da tiempo de prepararse para hacer 3 clics y es menos probable que se equivoquen 8-)
  5. 00:31:217 (2,3) - Otro mal flow como el de antes. Pense que estava bien TwT... canviado
  6. 00:33:423 (3,4) - procura que los slides no se sobrepongan unos con otros. La razón es puramente estética: no se ven bien... se ve feo eso: http://puu.sh/5NWuN.jpg Ups, arreglado ~
  7. 00:41:364 (3,4,5,6) - Creo que es mala idea que hagas tantos circulos juntos. Eso sin mencionar que están mal espaciados (lo que te aconsejé antes, debes cuidar el espaciado <_< ). Arreglado
  8. 00:49:305 (5,6) - haz un slider. Mando TwT... Arreglado xD
  9. 00:50:188 (1) - Dango... plz... ¿porqué haces un slider cuadrado tan largo?... para serte sincero.. no es nada bonito xD. vamos, haz algo que se vea bonito, simetrico, y que sea facil de seguir. jejeje Malo twT xD, arreglado ~
  10. 00:57:246 - hace falta un circulo acá. Ña, es como un coro :3
  11. 00:58:129 (1,2) - mal flow. A
  12. 00:59:452 (3,1) - ^ rre
  13. 00:59:893 (1,2) - ^ gla
  14. 01:01:217 (3,4) - ^ do
  15. 01:12:246 (1,2,3) - En este aunque hay 3... casualmente queda bien 8-)
  16. 01:17:540 (1) - quizas deberías acortarle un pedacito a este spinner:
cierto

Ahi tienes pa' entretenerte :P
Sabee
NaxelCL
for my GD diff of 4KEZ~~~~~

http://puu.sh/69U0T.osu is 34,8%
-Teina-
From my modding queues~
EruJAZZ's Insane
AImod: A preview point for this map is not set. Consider setting one from the Timing menu.
00:06:842 (2,4) - delete. I feel that is not match the rhythm.
00:12:688 (5) - move to X:100 Y:325
00:19:085 (3) - too short
00:22:835 - circle here because here is the main rhythm.
00:55:482 (1,2) - change 2/4 slider each
00:53:276 (3) - delete

quick mod.
uncomfortable in distance.
Good luck~
Bara-
This map is very cool!! Just like the song!
Now the testplays:

O!M is not done, so no Testplay for those, call me again when all mania diffs are done, there have to be TWO or MORE, not one, that's unrankable.

Easy
This map is great

Normal
Very good, but CS -1, and Easy is AR 2, and Normal is Ar 6, maybe lower

Hard
Even better, and very very fun to play.

Insane
Wow, AWESOME, If I say I got this score you wouldn't believe me, Just, WoW!

I kind of expect to see this map gets ranked pretty soon, in a few months maybe, but it is very very good.
Zamaro_old
From my modding queue


General thought about Easy, Normal and Hard : sound effects are a bit loud... You should lower them to 60% or so...
Nothing really wrong here, so everything I write are only suggestions :D


Easy :

00:50:188 (1) - this is waaaaaaaay too long xD, it doesn't fit the rest of the map...


Normal :

01:05:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change this combo, 01:06:952 (2) - and 01:11:805 (8) - feel strange

Hard :

00:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this combo a bit strange, re-do it?
00:53:165 (5) - should probably be deleted and 00:52:835 (4) - extended
00:52:835 (4,5) - Replace thoses by a 3 circle stream (not really sure for this one)

EruJazz's Insane :

00:09:710 (1) - shorten this spinner a bit and add another note at the end instead (for a jump maybe?)
00:09:710 (1) - Flow is kinda bad here. Keep the distances but make it a bit more curvy
00:21:952 (1) - Not sure if this spiner fits here... Sould probably use a slider instead, like you did for 00:36:070 (1) -
00:52:835 (1,2,3) - This part is confusing... either delete 00:53:276 (3) - or make a little stream
01:10:482 (1,2,3) - I also find this a bit confusing...


I'm sure this map will be ranked in the futur ;)
Neku Okazaki

Zamaro wrote:

From my modding queue


General thought about Easy, Normal and Hard : sound effects are a bit loud... You should lower them to 60% or so...
Nothing really wrong here, so everything I write are only suggestions :D


Easy :

00:50:188 (1) - this is waaaaaaaay too long xD, it doesn't fit the rest of the map... Ok xD


Normal :

01:05:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change this combo, 01:06:952 (2) - and 01:11:805 (8) - feel strange

Hard :

00:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this combo a bit strange, re-do it?
00:53:165 (5) - should probably be deleted and 00:52:835 (4) - extended
00:52:835 (4,5) - Replace thoses by a 3 circle stream (not really sure for this one)

EruJazz's Insane :

00:09:710 (1) - shorten this spinner a bit and add another note at the end instead (for a jump maybe?)
00:09:710 (1) - Flow is kinda bad here. Keep the distances but make it a bit more curvy
00:21:952 (1) - Not sure if this spiner fits here... Sould probably use a slider instead, like you did for 00:36:070 (1) -
00:52:835 (1,2,3) - This part is confusing... either delete 00:53:276 (3) - or make a little stream
01:10:482 (1,2,3) - I also find this a bit confusing...


I'm sure this map will be ranked in the futur ;)
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Zamaro wrote:

From my modding queue


General thought about Easy, Normal and Hard : sound effects are a bit loud... You should lower them to 60% or so... Done✔ :3
Nothing really wrong here, so everything I write are only suggestions :D

Normal :

01:05:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Change this combo Done✔, 01:06:952 (2) Done✔- and 01:11:805 (8) - feel strange This goes according to the background melody~

Hard :

00:34:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this combo a bit strange, re-do it? Done✔
00:53:165 (5) - should probably be deleted and 00:52:835 (4) - extended Done✔
00:52:835 (4,5) - Replace thoses by a 3 circle stream (not really sure for this one) Done✔

I'm sure this map will be ranked in the futur ;)
Oh, really? థ౪థ
Thanks for the mod~ 。゚(゚^ω^゚)゚。
ErunamoJAZZ

tellertheworld wrote:

From my modding queues~
EruJAZZ's Insane
AImod: A preview point for this map is not set. Consider setting one from the Timing menu.
00:06:842 (2,4) - delete. I feel that is not match the rhythm. fix, but, deleted (2) and not (4).
00:12:688 (5) - move to X:100 Y:325 why? the next beat would to 1.5x.. sorry, but nope.
00:19:085 (3) - too short fix
00:22:835 - circle here because here is the main rhythm. added hitsound.I think that will be enough.
00:55:482 (1,2) - change 2/4 slider each It goes with the rhythm, sorry.
00:53:276 (3) - delete Why?, This circle is there as a drum sounds there.

quick mod.
uncomfortable in distance.
Good luck~

Zamaro wrote:

From my modding queue
Insane
EruJazz's Insane :

00:09:710 (1) - shorten this spinner a bit and add another note at the end instead (for a jump maybe?) I think that it unnecessarily complicate, hehehe
00:09:710 (1) - Flow is kinda bad here. Keep the distances but make it a bit more curvy emm.. what?, flow in a spinner?? xD. well, I think you mean 00:08:717 (7) -, hehe, I made a change (now is a pikachu's ear *-* )
00:21:952 (1) - Not sure if this spiner fits here... Sould probably use a slider instead, like you did for 00:36:070 (1) - It could be. But that would leave few spiners, and the variability of the scores would be lower. I prefer to keep it.
00:52:835 (1,2,3) - This part is confusing... either delete 00:53:276 (3) - or make a little stream one stream seems boring for such an interesting part of the song.
01:10:482 (1,2,3) - I also find this a bit confusing... My slogan for insanes is: hard to read, easy to follow.
I'm sure this map will be ranked in the futur ;) i hope this.
Thx for mod guys.

here my diff updated:
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: The X Strait and the Y Scenery.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14892,21946,27237,29001,36056,41347,43110,52811,53251,56779,57661,58102
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:The X Strait and the Y Scenery
TitleUnicode:X海峡Y景色
Artist:JDee'Z
ArtistUnicode:J☆Dee'Z
Creator:Cosmolade
Version:EruJAZZ's Insane
Source:Pokemon XY
Tags:Anime, Pokemon XY Ending, pikachu, ErunamoJAZZ, Sensualdango, NaxelCL
BeatmapID:342967
BeatmapSetID:134232

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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PD:
  1. I removed the countdown for my diff (really distracted much since I started mapping from the beginning).
  2. Cosmo-chan, (spanish) tu eres quien debe poner el timing point en todas las diff. Escoje un lugar de la canción (a mi me gusta 00:43:129 - xD), y vas al menú timing y le das a la ultima opción:
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

here my diff updated:
osu file format v12

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Title:The X Strait and the Y Scenery
TitleUnicode:X海峡Y景色
Artist:JDee'Z
ArtistUnicode:J☆Dee'Z
Creator:Cosmolade
Version:EruJAZZ's Insane
Source:Pokemon XY
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PD:
  1. I removed the countdown for my diff (really distracted much since I started mapping from the beginning).Oh, ok :c
  2. Cosmo-chan, (spanish) tu eres quien debe poner el timing point en todas las diff. Escoje un lugar de la canción (a mi me gusta 00:43:129 - xD), y vas al menú timing y le das a la ultima opción:
Puesto :3


Todo listo~
✲゚。.(╹◡╹)ノ☆.。₀:*゚✲゚*:₀。
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. remove "pokemon XY" from tags. this is already added for source
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:658 (2) - it is better to symmetric curved slider with 00:30:776 (1) -
  2. 00:33:423 (4,1) - make DS 1.0x
  3. 00:34:305 (1) - curve more gently for normal-diff
  4. 00:47:099 (2,3) - avoid overlap
  5. 00:50:188 (7,8) - ^
  6. 00:51:952 (9) - same as 00:31:658 (2) -
  7. 00:59:893 (4,5) - avoid overlap
  8. 01:02:982 (3,4) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:776 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  2. 00:17:982 (2) - I suggest to make symmetric slider with 00:17:540 (1) - (Ctrl+H)
  3. 00:26:364 (6,1) - avoid overlap
  4. 00:50:188 (1,3) - ^
  5. 00:51:952 (1) - in this case, it is better to blanket 00:51:511 (4,5) - correctly
    SPOILER

    194,135,51952,6,0,P|180:171|190:209,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:17:982 (2,3,4) - how about this?
[Sensualdango's Easy]
  1. 00:18:864 (2,1) - avoid overlap
  2. 00:21:952 (1,2) - how about blanketing each other?
    SPOILER

    368,248,21952,6,0,P|424:272|488:248,1,110
    422,161,22835,2,0,P|373:137|320:147,1,110
  3. 00:24:158 (4,1) - make DS 1.0x
  4. 00:45:776 (5,1) - ^
  5. 01:05:188 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:13:570 (4) - confusing slider for beginner. I recommend to make lower angle
  7. 01:17:540 (1) - end at 01:19:085 ?
[EruJAZZ's Insane]
  1. countdown conflicts with other diffs
  2. 00:28:129 (3) - x:334 y:177 (stack correctly)
  3. 00:32:099- clap?
  4. 01:18:423 (1,2) - I prefer to make parallel
    SPOILER

    284,116,78423,6,0,L|228:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    355,176,78864,2,0,L|411:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
What a cute countdown <3
~Good Luck~
ErunamoJAZZ

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. remove "pokemon XY" from tags. this is already added for source
fix in my diff
[EruJAZZ's Insane]
  1. countdown conflicts with other diffs pls, read my last post in "PD"
  2. 00:28:129 (3) - x:334 y:177 (stack correctly) fix
  3. 00:32:099- clap? yep. clap xD
  4. 01:18:423 (1,2) - I prefer to make parallel haaaiii
    SPOILER

    284,116,78423,6,0,L|228:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    355,176,78864,2,0,L|411:104,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
What a cute countdown <3
~Good Luck~

updated diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: The X Strait and the Y Scenery.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43129
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14892,21946,27237,29001,36056,41347,43110,52811,53251,56779,57661,58102
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:The X Strait and the Y Scenery
TitleUnicode:X海峡Y景色
Artist:JDee'Z
ArtistUnicode:J☆Dee'Z
Creator:Cosmolade
Version:EruJAZZ's Insane
Source:Pokemon XY
Tags:Anime, Ending, pikachu, ErunamoJAZZ, Sensualdango, NaxelCL
BeatmapID:342967
BeatmapSetID:134232

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Topic Starter
Cosmolade

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. remove "pokemon XY" from tags. this is already added for source Done✔
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:658 (2) - it is better to symmetric curved slider with 00:30:776 (1) - Done✔
  2. 00:33:423 (4,1) - make DS 1.0x Done✔
  3. 00:34:305 (1) - curve more gently for normal-diff Done✔
  4. 00:47:099 (2,3) - avoid overlap Done✔
  5. 00:50:188 (7,8) - ^ Done✔
  6. 00:51:952 (9) - same as 00:31:658 (2) - Done✔
  7. 00:59:893 (4,5) - avoid overlap Done✔
  8. 01:02:982 (3,4) - ^ Done✔
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:776 (3,4) - avoid overlap Done✔
  2. 00:17:982 (2) - I suggest to make symmetric slider with 00:17:540 (1) - (Ctrl+H) Done✔
  3. 00:26:364 (6,1) - avoid overlap Done✔
  4. 00:50:188 (1,3) - ^ Done✔
  5. 00:51:952 (1) - in this case, it is better to blanket 00:51:511 (4,5) - correctly Done✔ Thanks for the code~
    SPOILER

    194,135,51952,6,0,P|180:171|190:209,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:17:982 (2,3,4) - how about this? Cool owo
What a cute countdown <3
~Good Luck~
Thanks for the mod~ (*゚▽゚)ノ
10crystalmask01
Ello, random mod o̿ ̭ o̿
[General
  1. The volume of your hitsounds are too loud. Try decreasing it from 66% to 30% - 40%. Either one of these would make your objects sound better with the beats
[Easy]
00:02:540 - Honestly you should've started mapping here instead of. I don't see why you started mapping at 00:14:893, since both the beats in the music and vocals started at 00:02:540 - It makes the entire playtime very late.
00:21:952 (1,3) - Hit circle 3 shouldn't be completely overlapped by slider 1 - Especially in a Easy diff. Please re-arrange ur notes here.
00:34:746 (4) - should blanket 00:33:423 (3) - more,something like this:

00:41:805 (4,5,6) - Consider adding a finish on these notes.

This diff still needs a lot of work :( Try to focus on making sure your objects don't touch upon each other, it ruins the overall look of the sliders/hit circles.

[Normal]
AR +1
00:02:540 - Why u no start mapping here? >:[
00:30:335 (3,2) - you need to overlap them better, cause I see this:

00:29:893 (2,3,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Just take a look at the objects and you'll see.
00:19:305 (5,7) - ^
00:47:982 (3,4) - ^
00:50:188 (7) - New combo.
01:03:423 (4,5) - Move apart pleas,e this flow looks confusing.
....

Same big suggestion as Easy mode. Please check that your objects are not overlapping each other, and don't place hit circles beside a tail with a reverse sign on it.

[Hard]
AR - 1
00:02:540 - You really need to start mapping here.
00:47:320 - 00:48:423 rhythm suggestion:

00:50:188 (1,3) - Move them apart please.
01:10:482 (5) - NC

[EruJAZZ's Insane]
You do realize that the SV is the same as Hard mode, right? o.o Since this is Insane, feel free to kick it up to 1.80 - 2.00
00:07:835 (5) - NC
00:15:996 (2) - Can't really see this note since it's still being overlapped by the previous notes 00:15:335 (4,5,6) - .Consider re positioning it.
01:06:511 (3) - Sorry nazi suggestion here, please put less curve for this slider.
01:08:497 (5,1) - Move more apart.

Hope this helps.
ErunamoJAZZ

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, random mod o̿ ̭ o̿
[EruJAZZ's Insane]
You do realize that the SV is the same as Hard mode, right? o.o Since this is Insane, feel free to kick it up to 1.80 - 2.00 thanks for the suggestion, but I did this intentionally.
00:07:835 (5) - NC done
00:15:996 (2) - Can't really see this note since it's still being overlapped by the previous notes 00:15:335 (4,5,6) - .Consider re positioning it. fix
01:06:511 (3) - Sorry nazi suggestion here, please put less curve for this slider. lol, dont worry. fix
01:08:497 (5,1) - Move more apart. fix

Hope this helps.
Updated diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: The X Strait and the Y Scenery.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43129
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14892,21946,27237,29001,36056,41347,43110,52811,53251,56779,57661,58102
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:The X Strait and the Y Scenery
TitleUnicode:X海峡Y景色
Artist:JDee'Z
ArtistUnicode:J☆Dee'Z
Creator:Cosmolade
Version:EruJAZZ's Insane
Source:Pokemon XY
Tags:Anime, Ending, pikachu, ErunamoJAZZ, Sensualdango, NaxelCL
BeatmapID:342967
BeatmapSetID:134232

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
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//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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sheela
Sorry for the late reply. I wasn't in the mood, and a project to do.

[Easy]
00:19:305 (3) - Ctrl+G? If so, move 00:19:305 (3) to x:229 y:109, and 00:20:629 (2) to x:193 y:212.
00:22:835 (2) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:431 y:158, and move 00:23:717 (3) to x:243 y:203.
00:31:658 (3) - Replace this slider by a curve slider, by placing the first point (little square) to x:445 y:133, a second point to x:447 y:182, and last to x:479 y:233.
00:46:658 (1) - Move it to x:125 y:69.
00:48:423 (3) - Move it to x:120 y:346.
00:59:893 (1) - Move the last point to x:244 y:238.
01:00:776 (2) - Move it to x:139 y:240.
01:01:217 (3) - Make a curve slider by placing the first point to x:35 y:201, second to x:19 y:136, and last to x:41 y:94.
01:13:570 (4) - Move the red square to x:396 y:309, and the last one to x:376 y:361.
01:17:540 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:085 .
- Be careful on making patterns. There's some overlap notes, and slider.

[Normal]
00:16:658 (1) - Move it to x:372 y:22, and move the second to x:442 y:47 , and the last one to x:491 y:101. And move 00:17:540 (2) to x:439 y:225.
00:20:629 (6) - Ctrl+G.
00:35:629 (2) - Move it to x:281 y:119.
00:48:864 (4) - Move it to x:309 y:328.
00:47:099 (2,3) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.
00:50:188 (7,8) - ^
00:58:129 (1) - Move the first point to x:322 y:337, second point to x:389 y:350, and last to x:447 y:314.
00:59:893 (4,5) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.
01:03:423 (4) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:205 y:253. And move 01:04:746 (5) to x:302 y:152.
01:05:188 (1,2) - Please follow the same distance. They're really far.
01:12:246 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.
- Look at your difficulty, and what you can change.

[Hard]
00:15:335 (2) - Move it to x:179 y:177.
00:41:143 (1) - On the repeat, add a finish hitsound?
00:41:805 (2,4) - ^
00:42:688 (6) - On the head, add a finish hitsound.

[Insane]
00:02:540 (1) - Ctrl+G.
00:21:511 (3) - Remove the finish hitsound.

Good Luck on ranking this map.
Neku Okazaki

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, random mod o̿ ̭ o̿
[General
  1. The volume of your hitsounds are too loud. Try decreasing it from 66% to 30% - 40%. Either one of these would make your objects sound better with the beats
[Easy]
00:02:540 - Honestly you should've started mapping here instead of. I don't see why you started mapping at 00:14:893, since both the beats in the music and vocals started at 00:02:540 - It makes the entire playtime very late.
00:21:952 (1,3) - Hit circle 3 shouldn't be completely overlapped by slider 1 - Especially in a Easy diff. Please re-arrange ur notes here.
00:34:746 (4) - should blanket 00:33:423 (3) - more,something like this:

00:41:805 (4,5,6) - Consider adding a finish on these notes.

This diff still needs a lot of work :( Try to focus on making sure your objects don't touch upon each other, it ruins the overall look of the sliders/hit circles.

[Normal]
AR +1
00:02:540 - Why u no start mapping here? >:[
00:30:335 (3,2) - you need to overlap them better, cause I see this:

00:29:893 (2,3,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Just take a look at the objects and you'll see.
00:19:305 (5,7) - ^
00:47:982 (3,4) - ^
00:50:188 (7) - New combo.
01:03:423 (4,5) - Move apart pleas,e this flow looks confusing.
....

Same big suggestion as Easy mode. Please check that your objects are not overlapping each other, and don't place hit circles beside a tail with a reverse sign on it.

[Hard]
AR - 1
00:02:540 - You really need to start mapping here.
00:47:320 - 00:48:423 rhythm suggestion:

00:50:188 (1,3) - Move them apart please.
01:10:482 (5) - NC

[EruJAZZ's Insane]
You do realize that the SV is the same as Hard mode, right? o.o Since this is Insane, feel free to kick it up to 1.80 - 2.00
00:07:835 (5) - NC
00:15:996 (2) - Can't really see this note since it's still being overlapped by the previous notes 00:15:335 (4,5,6) - .Consider re positioning it.
01:06:511 (3) - Sorry nazi suggestion here, please put less curve for this slider.
01:08:497 (5,1) - Move more apart.

Hope this helps.
OK ~ :D
Neku Okazaki

sheela901 wrote:

Sorry for the late reply. I wasn't in the mood, and a project to do.

[Easy]
00:19:305 (3) - Ctrl+G? If so, move 00:19:305 (3) to x:229 y:109, and 00:20:629 (2) to x:193 y:212.
00:22:835 (2) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:431 y:158, and move 00:23:717 (3) to x:243 y:203.
00:31:658 (3) - Replace this slider by a curve slider, by placing the first point (little square) to x:445 y:133, a second point to x:447 y:182, and last to x:479 y:233.
00:46:658 (1) - Move it to x:125 y:69.
00:48:423 (3) - Move it to x:120 y:346.
00:59:893 (1) - Move the last point to x:244 y:238.
01:00:776 (2) - Move it to x:139 y:240.
01:01:217 (3) - Make a curve slider by placing the first point to x:35 y:201, second to x:19 y:136, and last to x:41 y:94.
01:13:570 (4) - Move the red square to x:396 y:309, and the last one to x:376 y:361.
01:17:540 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:19:085 .
- Be careful on making patterns. There's some overlap notes, and slider.

[Normal]
00:16:658 (1) - Move it to x:372 y:22, and move the second to x:442 y:47 , and the last one to x:491 y:101. And move 00:17:540 (2) to x:439 y:225.
00:20:629 (6) - Ctrl+G.
00:35:629 (2) - Move it to x:281 y:119.
00:48:864 (4) - Move it to x:309 y:328.
00:47:099 (2,3) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.
00:50:188 (7,8) - ^
00:58:129 (1) - Move the first point to x:322 y:337, second point to x:389 y:350, and last to x:447 y:314.
00:59:893 (4,5) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.
01:03:423 (4) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:205 y:253. And move 01:04:746 (5) to x:302 y:152.
01:05:188 (1,2) - Please follow the same distance. They're really far.
01:12:246 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.
- Look at your difficulty, and what you can change.

[Hard]
00:15:335 (2) - Move it to x:179 y:177.
00:41:143 (1) - On the repeat, add a finish hitsound?
00:41:805 (2,4) - ^
00:42:688 (6) - On the head, add a finish hitsound.

[Insane]
00:02:540 (1) - Ctrl+G.
00:21:511 (3) - Remove the finish hitsound.

Good Luck on ranking this map.
No ._.
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, random mod o̿ ̭ o̿
[notice][General
  1. The volume of your hitsounds are too loud. Try decreasing it from 66% to 30% - 40%. Either one of these would make your objects sound better with the beats Fix~



[Normal]
AR +1 Done~
00:02:540 - Why u no start mapping here? >:[ because it's normal :c
00:30:335 (3,2) - you need to overlap them better, cause I see this:
Fix~
00:29:893 (2,3,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Just take a look at the objects and you'll see. Fix~
00:19:305 (5,7) - ^ Fix~
00:47:982 (3,4) - ^ Fix~
00:50:188 (7) - New combo. Fix~
01:03:423 (4,5) - Move apart pleas,e this flow looks confusing. Fix~
....

Same big suggestion as Easy mode. Please check that your objects are not overlapping each other, and don't place hit circles beside a tail with a reverse sign on it.

[Hard]
AR - 1 Done~
00:02:540 - You really need to start mapping here. Fix~ :)
00:47:320 - 00:48:423 rhythm suggestion:
Fix and thanks~
00:50:188 (1,3) - Move them apart please. Fix~
01:10:482 (5) - NC Fix~

Hope this helps.
Thanks for the mod~ 。゚(゚^ω^゚)゚。
----

sheela901 wrote:

Sorry for the late reply. I wasn't in the mood, and a project to do. Don't worry :3

[Normal]
00:16:658 (1) - Move it to x:372 y:22, and move the second to x:442 y:47 , and the last one to x:491 y:101. And move 00:17:540 (2) to x:439 y:225 The object leaves the screen D:
00:20:629 (6) - Ctrl+G. Fix~
00:35:629 (2) - Move it to x:281 y:119. Fix~
00:48:864 (4) - Move it to x:309 y:328. Fix~
00:47:099 (2,3) - Change this pattern that could have a flow. Fix~
00:50:188 (7,8) - ^ Fix~
00:58:129 (1) - Move the first point to x:322 y:337, second point to x:389 y:350, and last to x:447 y:314.The object leaves the screen.
00:59:893 (4,5) - Change this pattern that could have a flow.Fix~
01:03:423 (4) - Ctrl+G, and move it to x:205 y:253. And move 01:04:746 (5) to x:302 y:152. Nope.
01:05:188 (1,2) - Please follow the same distance. They're really far. Fix~
01:12:246 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern that could have a flow. Fix~
- Look at your difficulty, and what you can change. :3

[Hard]
00:15:335 (2) - Move it to x:179 y:177.Fix~
00:41:143 (1) - On the repeat, add a finish hitsound? Fix~
00:41:805 (2,4) - ^ Fix~
00:42:688 (6) - On the head, add a finish hitsound. Fix~

Good Luck on ranking this map.
Thanks for the mod~ ∩(^ヮ^∩)
ErunamoJAZZ

sheela901 wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:540 (1) - Ctrl+G.
00:21:511 (3) - Remove the finish hitsound.
humm.. sorry, but nope.

Good Luck on ranking this map. thx :3
KokoroStudiox3
siento que el timing de esta es 2531
creo que vas a tener que quitar la estrellita del artista pero no estoy muí seguro de eso

00:04:085 (4) - aquí tienes diferente espaciado y esto va a confundir a los jugadores
a y en esta igual 00:02:982 (2) -
00:51:070 (3,1) - y los finales de estos dos slider que queden bien apilados :B
00:08:717 (4) - acomoda mas las curvas para que se miren mas bonito http://puu.sh/6l3th
00:17:540 - creo que este new combo no es necesario
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

eLtigreXXx wrote:

00:04:085 (4) - aquí tienes diferente espaciado y esto va a confundir a los jugadores
a y en esta igual 00:02:982 (2) -
00:51:070 (3,1) - y los finales de estos dos slider que queden bien apilados :B
00:08:717 (4) - acomoda mas las curvas para que se miren mas bonito http://puu.sh/6l3th
00:17:540 - creo que este new combo no es necesario
¿A qué diff te refieres? (´・_・`) ?
deejaydray
Hello, NM here from my queue ^^

Firstly, there's a little problem with the countdown. The "enable countdown" button is checked for Easy, Normal and Hard difficulties, but EruJAZZ's Insane doesn't have "enable countdown" button active. You should disable countdown for all difficulties OR enable countdown for Insane too.

Sensualdango's EASY:

00:22:835 (2) - this slider is too close to the last one, you should use Distance Snapping in Easy
00:37:835 (3) - ^ same
01:08:717 (1) - this is again too close to the last one...

NORMAL:

00:47:099 (2) - the flow between this slider and this 00:47:982 (3) is not good, you should re-position it

HARD:

00:49:746 (7) - better use a circle instead of this

That's all, not many mistakes, good job! ^^ Hope you will get it ranked soon, GL! :D
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, NM here from my queue ^^

Firstly, there's a little problem with the countdown. The "enable countdown" button is checked for Easy, Normal and Hard difficulties, but EruJAZZ's Insane doesn't have "enable countdown" button active. You should disable countdown for all difficulties OR enable countdown for Insane too. Fixed~

NORMAL:

00:47:099 (2) - the flow between this slider and this 00:47:982 (3) is not good, you should re-position it I think it's best viewed now

HARD:

00:49:746 (7) - better use a circle instead of this Fix~

That's all, not many mistakes, good job! ^^ Hope you will get it ranked soon, GL! :D
Thanks for the mod! ٩(ˊᗜˋ*
Evening
From Zenx' Mod Queue o/

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Zukisinx's Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:04:526 (11) - d > k | There's too much dons in succession here, making the kats rhythm quite inconsistent, I suggest a kat here to fill the kat rhythm
00:11:254 - I suggest this pattern since the rhythm in the music repeats itself, thus you might want to have a repeating don, kat pattern - http://puu.sh/6q8qr.png
00:53:386 (306,307) - k,d > d,k | It's quite awkward to end a kat rhythm on a blue line here, I suggest to flip these 2 to make the rhythm end on a red line instead
Minor Suggestion: 01:12:246 (422) - d > K OR D | I suggest a big kat or don since during the music it changes from a more "hyper" mood to a less "hyper" mood

Very nice and good spread of kat rhythm for the chart

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

[Zukisinx's Futsuu]

Minor Suggestion: 01:12:246 (422) - d > K OR D | I suggest a big kat or don since during the music it changes from a more "hyper" mood to a less "hyper" mood

No other problems, quite a nice futsuu here
-Kazu-

lZenxl wrote:

[Zukisinx's Oni] Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:04:526 (11) - d > k | There's too much dons in succession here, making the kats rhythm quite inconsistent, I suggest a kat here to fill the kat rhythm okay
00:11:254 - I suggest this pattern since the rhythm in the music repeats itself, thus you might want to have a repeating don, kat pattern - http://puu.sh/6q8qr.png I like it as how it is
00:53:386 (306,307) - k,d > d,k | It's quite awkward to end a kat rhythm on a blue line here, I suggest to flip these 2 to make the rhythm end on a red line instead It's kd since the last stream ends as k, i wont explain this a lot since i dont know how to be concise, but ill say i dont like dk.
Minor Suggestion: 01:12:246 (422) - d > K OR D | I suggest a big kat or don since during the music it changes from a more "hyper" mood to a less "hyper" mood Yeah, it could be a D, but personally i dont think it will be nice here

Very nice and good spread of kat rhythm for the chart Thanks :D <3



[Zukisinx's Futsuu]

Minor Suggestion: 01:12:246 (422) - d > K OR D | I suggest a big kat or don since during the music it changes from a more "hyper" mood to a less "hyper" mood Same as above

No other problems, quite a nice futsuu here It used to be called muzukashii but i thought it was so easy ;w;
Alarido

M4M from The Queue of Everlasting Mutual Help

(See the requesting post)



[EruJAZZ's Insane]
♥ No major complaints ^^ mainly on rhythms.

[Hard]
♥ No complaints here too (: and rhythms feel 100% in (:
* I just need learn to mod aesthetics in non-symmetrical patterns, but looking through the lens of song's spirit, this part fells fit well too.

[Normal]
:!: 00:19:305 (5,6) - Wondering for this being unintentional. The same mistake gone repeated more twice (as pointed at next). Spacing is unsafe here, because it looks 1/2 while it's 1/1 in truth >< and... also noticed some wrong spacing around 00:21:511 (7) - then to solve this, you can make them 00:20:629 (6,7) - like the figure > http://puu.sh/6tjpv.jpg
00:27:688 (4) - Move to x:72 y:176, for better spacing too.
00:29:011 (1,2) - such positioning remembers me something AnreFM does... and it can be tricky for Normal/Easy players too. You can make spacing a bit clear by following this image > http://puu.sh/6tjDo.jpg (you can stack (2) with (3) or position it elsewhere.
:!: 00:47:982 (3,4) - Same as explained at 00:19:305 (5,6). Fixing here is just moving 00:48:864 (4) - to x:312 y:200, but the ascending line (4,5,6) feels intentional and you might not want undone it >< tbh I dunno how to do something in this case without breaking further patterns I liked so far.
:!: 01:12:246 (1,2) - Same as latter, with same explanation. To solve this, move 01:13:129 (2) - to x:296 y:104 and adjust the last anchor to x:432 y:96. Other possible suggestion is moving the slider to same point and doing like this image > http://puu.sh/6tkr8.jpg
01:16:658 (7) - Would make it clearer by doing this > http://puu.sh/6tkub.jpg
♥ Nice

[Sensualdango's EASY]
¡Hola!
00:15:776 (3) - Move 1 grid to right for better spacing.
00:16:658 (1) - Move 3 grids to right and 1 grid to down, same reason.
00:18:864 (2,1) - Would undo this overlap for better look & feel.
00:18:423 (1,2) - ^
00:30:776 (1,2,3) For (1), the note (3) is nearer than (2), which frequently brings confusion to players. To fix this, place 00:31:658 (3) - as shown on this image > http://puu.sh/6tlvR.jpg
00:44:452 (3,4,5) - For better spacing and clearer positionings, see and apply > http://puu.sh/6tlFz.jpg
00:58:129 (1,2,3) - Arrange them in a better way to make the patterns clearer and avoid confusion. See one possible suggestion here > http://puu.sh/6tlPg.jpg
01:02:540 (5) - Move to x:232 y:192 and move 01:02:982 (6) - to x:344 y:192 for avoiding confusion amongst players.
01:04:305 (8) - Delete one of anchors -- three is enough to make an arc of this size. And, for better look, make like this > http://puu.sh/6tm2I.jpg
01:05:188 (1,2) - For safer spacing, make something like this > http://puu.sh/6tm7m.jpg

Well, let's keep the mapping workout, the way of getting it ranked.
Nice song (:
Good luck ♥
And Thaaanks^^
Att.
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Alarido wrote:

M4M from The Queue of Everlasting Mutual Help

(See the requesting post)



[notice][EruJAZZ's Insane]
♥ No major complaints ^^ mainly on rhythms.

[Hard]
♥ No complaints here too (: and rhythms feel 100% in (:
* I just need learn to mod aesthetics in non-symmetrical patterns, but looking through the lens of song's spirit, this part fells fit well too.
Thanks~(っ˘ ³˘)っ

[Normal]
:!: 00:19:305 (5,6) - Wondering for this being unintentional. The same mistake gone repeated more twice (as pointed at next). Spacing is unsafe here, because it looks 1/2 while it's 1/1 in truth >< and... also noticed some wrong spacing around 00:21:511 (7) - then to solve this, you can make the 00:20:629 (6,7) - like the figure > http://puu.sh/6tjpv.jpg Fix~
00:27:688 (4) - Move to x:72 y:176, for better spacing too. Fix~
00:29:011 (1,2) - such positioning remembers me something AnreFM does... and it can be tricky for Normal/Easy players too. You can make spacing a bit clear by following this image > http://puu.sh/6tjDo.jpg (you can stack (2) with (3) or position it elsewhere. Fix~
:!: 00:47:982 (3,4) - Same as explained at 00:19:305 (5,6). Fixing here is just moving 00:48:864 (4) - to x:312 y:200, but the ascending line (4,5,6) feels intentional and you might not want undone it >< tbh I dunno how to do something in this case without breaking further patterns I liked so far. Fix~
:!: 01:12:246 (1,2) - Same as latter, with same explanation. To solve this, move 01:13:129 (2) - to x:296 y:104 and adjust the last anchor to x:432 y:96. Other possible suggestion is moving the slider to same point and doing like this image > http://puu.sh/6tkr8.jpg Fix~
01:16:658 (7) - Would make it clearer by doing this > http://puu.sh/6tkub.jpg Fix~
♥ Nice
(*/ω\*)

Well, let's keep the mapping workout, the way of getting it ranked.
Nice song (:
Good luck ♥
And Thaaanks^^
Att.
Thanks for the mod :)
_(:D 」∠)_
desudesud
OMFG, POKEMON. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 ESPECIALLY X AND Y. OMFG AKMDASDOKADMSOAMDOASKMD

Oh crap, I still have a mod to do. Love the song though :3

Much kawaii

General -
Great video choice!
Nothing bad to say, really. (I'm not that good at general stuff)



[Sensualdango's Easy]

SPOILER
General - Way too many straight sliders. Could possibly mix it up a bit. Not saying to get rid of all straight sliders, though. Could use some whistle hitsounds to sound similar to the other difficulties, but that's more of a nit picky thing for me.

00:21:952 (1,2) - Could add clap/whistle hitsounds here
00:41:805 (4,5,6) - Could add clap hitsounds here, but not as needed.
00:44:893 (4,5) - Distance Snap error, will want to fix. Easy difficulties should basically follow Distance Snap entirely.
01:06:952 (2,3) - ^
01:13:570 (4) - Reconsider slider shape

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:14:893 (1,2) - Remove stacking
00:29:893 (2,3) - Could add clap hitsounds here
00:39:599 (1) - I changed it to this:



http://i.imgur.com/gMxOqvJ.jpg <-- Link if image doesn't show
00:59:011 (2,3) - Remove stacking

[Hard]
SPOILER
General - Turn down OD by 1, and use less hitsounds. It starts off a bit annoying, then gets better, then goes back to annoying. The annoying part is especially happening during the use of whistle hitsounds.

00:51:732 (5) - Could stack this on top of the upcoming slider for a harder difficulty.
01:12:026 (5) - ^
01:15:555 (1,2) - 1 not too necessary, so if you choose so to delete 1, make 2 NC (durr, obvious, but just making sure I don't sound stupid for not putting it there)

[Taiko Diffs]
I can't mod Taiko, never have I actually fully played a single Taiko map (tis too hard for me ;_;)

[Insane]
I can't mod Insane, never have I actually played an Insane map and completed it, and I've seen from that that my Insane modding is pretty bad.


The maps were generally really good!

xVirtualNinjax sent out Star!
Star used Shoot!
It's super Prioritizing!
Neku Okazaki

Alarido wrote:

M4M from The Queue of Everlasting Mutual Help

(See the requesting post)



[EruJAZZ's Insane]
♥ No major complaints ^^ mainly on rhythms.

[Hard]
♥ No complaints here too (: and rhythms feel 100% in (:
* I just need learn to mod aesthetics in non-symmetrical patterns, but looking through the lens of song's spirit, this part fells fit well too.

[Normal]
:!: 00:19:305 (5,6) - Wondering for this being unintentional. The same mistake gone repeated more twice (as pointed at next). Spacing is unsafe here, because it looks 1/2 while it's 1/1 in truth >< and... also noticed some wrong spacing around 00:21:511 (7) - then to solve this, you can make them 00:20:629 (6,7) - like the figure > http://puu.sh/6tjpv.jpg
00:27:688 (4) - Move to x:72 y:176, for better spacing too.
00:29:011 (1,2) - such positioning remembers me something AnreFM does... and it can be tricky for Normal/Easy players too. You can make spacing a bit clear by following this image > http://puu.sh/6tjDo.jpg (you can stack (2) with (3) or position it elsewhere.
:!: 00:47:982 (3,4) - Same as explained at 00:19:305 (5,6). Fixing here is just moving 00:48:864 (4) - to x:312 y:200, but the ascending line (4,5,6) feels intentional and you might not want undone it >< tbh I dunno how to do something in this case without breaking further patterns I liked so far.
:!: 01:12:246 (1,2) - Same as latter, with same explanation. To solve this, move 01:13:129 (2) - to x:296 y:104 and adjust the last anchor to x:432 y:96. Other possible suggestion is moving the slider to same point and doing like this image > http://puu.sh/6tkr8.jpg
01:16:658 (7) - Would make it clearer by doing this > http://puu.sh/6tkub.jpg
♥ Nice

[Sensualdango's EASY]
¡Hola!
00:15:776 (3) - Move 1 grid to right for better spacing.
00:16:658 (1) - Move 3 grids to right and 1 grid to down, same reason.
00:18:864 (2,1) - Would undo this overlap for better look & feel.
00:18:423 (1,2) - ^
00:30:776 (1,2,3) For (1), the note (3) is nearer than (2), which frequently brings confusion to players. To fix this, place 00:31:658 (3) - as shown on this image > http://puu.sh/6tlvR.jpg
00:44:452 (3,4,5) - For better spacing and clearer positionings, see and apply > http://puu.sh/6tlFz.jpg
00:58:129 (1,2,3) - Arrange them in a better way to make the patterns clearer and avoid confusion. See one possible suggestion here > http://puu.sh/6tlPg.jpg
01:02:540 (5) - Move to x:232 y:192 and move 01:02:982 (6) - to x:344 y:192 for avoiding confusion amongst players.
01:04:305 (8) - Delete one of anchors -- three is enough to make an arc of this size. And, for better look, make like this > http://puu.sh/6tm2I.jpg
01:05:188 (1,2) - For safer spacing, make something like this > http://puu.sh/6tm7m.jpg

Well, let's keep the mapping workout, the way of getting it ranked.
Nice song (:
Good luck ♥
And Thaaanks^^
Att.
Gracias por el mod :3

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

OMFG, POKEMON. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 ESPECIALLY X AND Y. OMFG AKMDASDOKADMSOAMDOASKMD

Oh crap, I still have a mod to do. Love the song though :3

Much kawaii

General -
Great video choice!
Nothing bad to say, really. (I'm not that good at general stuff)



[Sensualdango's Easy]

SPOILER
General - Way too many straight sliders. Could possibly mix it up a bit. Not saying to get rid of all straight sliders, though. Could use some whistle hitsounds to sound similar to the other difficulties, but that's more of a nit picky thing for me.

00:21:952 (1,2) - Could add clap/whistle hitsounds here
00:41:805 (4,5,6) - Could add clap hitsounds here, but not as needed.
00:44:893 (4,5) - Distance Snap error, will want to fix. Easy difficulties should basically follow Distance Snap entirely.
01:06:952 (2,3) - ^
01:13:570 (4) - Reconsider slider shape

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:14:893 (1,2) - Remove stacking
00:29:893 (2,3) - Could add clap hitsounds here
00:39:599 (1) - I changed it to this:



http://i.imgur.com/gMxOqvJ.jpg <-- Link if image doesn't show
00:59:011 (2,3) - Remove stacking

[Hard]
SPOILER
General - Turn down OD by 1, and use less hitsounds. It starts off a bit annoying, then gets better, then goes back to annoying. The annoying part is especially happening during the use of whistle hitsounds.

00:51:732 (5) - Could stack this on top of the upcoming slider for a harder difficulty.
01:12:026 (5) - ^
01:15:555 (1,2) - 1 not too necessary, so if you choose so to delete 1, make 2 NC (durr, obvious, but just making sure I don't sound stupid for not putting it there)

[Taiko Diffs]
I can't mod Taiko, never have I actually fully played a single Taiko map (tis too hard for me ;_;)

[Insane]
I can't mod Insane, never have I actually played an Insane map and completed it, and I've seen from that that my Insane modding is pretty bad.


The maps were generally really good!

xVirtualNinjax sent out Star!
Star used Shoot!
It's super Prioritizing!

Ya cambie la mayoria pero gracias :3
desudesud

Sensualdango wrote:

Ya cambie la mayoria pero gracias :3
Je ne parle pas espagnol. Desole!
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