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J*Dee'Z - The X Strait and the Y Scenery

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Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
Hi, modding here because I like the song :3

General

Good.

Easy

00:50:188 (1) - Nazi, move to x109 y138

01:01:217 (5) - What about http://puu.sh/6CTWP.png

why don't map the beginning

Normal

00:34:305 (1) - Ctrl + H? http://puu.sh/6CUjl.png

why don't map the beginning

Hard

00:02:540 (1) - Move to x84 y188

00:50:188 (1) - The end of the slider.

asdasdad's Insane

Nothing

Just a fast mod, good luck :3
Cosmolade
1,289 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Kuron-Kun wrote:

Hi, modding here because I like the song :3

General

Good.

Normal

00:34:305 (1) - Ctrl + H? http://puu.sh/6CUjl.png Fix :3

why don't map the beginning because it's only a normal >.<

Hard

00:02:540 (1) - Move to x84 y188 Fix n.n

00:50:188 (1) - The end of the slider. Fix ;o;

asdasdad's Insane

Nothing

Just a fast mod, good luck :3
Thanks for the mod~ (˘◡˘✿)
Neku Okazaki
Neku Okazaki
Easy

00:50:188 (1) - Nazi, move to x109 y138 ok ~

01:01:217 (5) - What about http://puu.sh/6CTWP.png No, lo prefiero haci

why don't map the beginning Bueno bueno, lo hare
R801
220 posts
Joined April 2013
R801
Buena canción :)

Me habría gustado participar siquiera con una diff para o!m; pero soy demasiado novato mapeando :(
Espero que puedas hallar a alguien que te ayude (y que logres rankearlo) :D

Que estés bien :)

toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
Hi. Taiko Mod fron Rondom (?)

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Widscreen Support Remove ( This beatmap not SB )

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[ Futsuu]
  1. HP OD -1 ? ( Bigginer player difficult HP & OD 5 )
  2. fine.
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[ Oni]
  1. 00:04:526 - add k Here ? ( take the timing here )
  2. 00:53:055 (305) - Change d ? ( 00:53:055 (305,306,307,308) - I feel dk kd patten
  3. 00:57:136 (331,332) - swap ? ( 00:57:136 (331) - Sound here is different )
  4. 00:58:349 (338) - Delete ?

    that's all. Nice map :3
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@Do you not make Muzu? ( Futsuu . Oni = Unrankable...? )


GL :3
-Kazu-
687 posts
Joined June 2011
-Kazu-

toara_fict wrote:

Hi. Taiko Mod fron Rondom (?)

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Widscreen Support Remove ( This beatmap not SB ) not sure if i should do this



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[ Futsuu]
  1. HP OD -1 ? ( Bigginer player difficult HP & OD 5 ) ok
  2. fine.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -



[ Oni]
  1. 00:04:526 - add k Here ? ( take the timing here )
  2. 00:53:055 (305) - Change d ? ( 00:53:055 (305,306,307,308) - I feel dk kd patten
  3. 00:57:136 (331,332) - swap ? ( 00:57:136 (331) - Sound here is different )
  4. 00:58:349 (338) - Delete ?
    Applied everything
    that's all. Nice map :3
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@Do you not make Muzu? ( Futsuu . Oni = Unrankable...? ) You're wrong lol. Rules say when you want to have taiko diffs into a standard mapset, it should be 2 and one of them should be easier to make it able to play by newbies. Don't believe me? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/65505.


GL :3

Thx for mod :D
Futsuu: http://puu.sh/7otFT.osu
Oni: http://puu.sh/7otG8.osu
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
donde está mi GD? .. si se trata de conseguir mods de frutillas lo hago XD
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

xtrem3x wrote:

donde está mi GD? .. si se trata de conseguir mods de frutillas lo hago XD
Le hiciste GD de fruticas??? yo quiero ver D:
desudesud
118 posts
Joined December 2013
desudesud
Any available diffs you may need for a GD? I could probably do a Taiko Easy, Kantan, whatever thing
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
ES: aqui actualizo mi Diff ya con el modding que me recomendó Cosmo-chan -w-

EN: Here I update my beatmap with modding of Cosmo-chan -w-

:!: Click Here
:!:


y estoy haciendo 2 diffs de osu!mania en Easy y Hard a modo 5-keys
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hola , Cosmolade . Hace tiempo eru y tu me pidieron este mod , siento modearlo tarde :p

Okazaki's Easy

  1. 00:08:717 (5) Olvidaste poner un Clap , se siente raro imo . Además es necesario por consistencia
  2. 00:11:364 - 00:14:011 Podrias agregar un spinner en esta sección como en la normal diff , se siente muy vacío imo
  3. 00:21:952 (1) Remueve ese clap del comienzo de este slider , suena realmente mal en mi opinion . Reemplazalo por un Finish , es el comienzo de un kiai time , eso le dará un mejor toque
  4. 00:25:483 (1) Un Finish aqui tambien , el alza de voz lo requiere
  5. 00:36:070 (1) Reemplazalo por Finish
  6. 00:43:129 (1,2) Arregla el spacing de (2) , se siente como un pequeño jump . Recuerda que en una easy diff. , el spacing debe ser constante en toda la dificultad
  7. 00:50:188 (1,2) Aqui es lo opuesto , arregla el spacing de (2) , hiciste un antijump ahí
  8. 01:01:217 (3,4) Lo mismo aqui , arregla el spacing de (4)
  9. 00:59:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) Pon un New Combo en (5) , ya que tus patrones de combo aqui son muy largos comparados al resto del mapa
  10. 01:05:188 (1) Finish al comienzo del slider
  11. 01:05:188 (1) Este slider realmente no luce nada bien , intenta algo como esto :
    SPOILER
  12. 01:17:540 (1) Este spinner se siente muy corto . No estoy seguro , pero en mi opinion deberías cambiarlos a un slider grande que luzca bien
Necesitas trabajar mas en como usas los hitsounds , y nada mal para ser aun nuevo con el mapeo :3

Normal

  1. 00:04:746 (4,5) Arregla el spacing de (5) con respecto a la anterior nota
  2. 00:32:540 (3,4) Esto está mal , el slider (4) rompe el spacing con (3) , ademas (4) está casi fuera del area de trabajo , se que lo quieres dejar para hacer un buen blanket , pero está mal . Intenta arreglarlo
  3. 00:38:276 (2) Remueve este whistle , se siente muy raro . Es el unico que usaste en esta seccion , ademas suena muy innecesario
  4. 00:42:688 (5,1) Esto es muy dificil para una normal diff honestamente . Cambialo por un 1/2 slider y 1 circle , estará mejor :
  5. 00:43:129 (1) Un Finish suena mucho mejor aqui en mi opinion , ademas el kiai time comienza aqui . El finish le daría un buen toque
  6. 00:47:982 (3) Arregla el spacing , se que quieres hacer un buen blanket , pero el spacing es mas importante
  7. 00:52:835 (1) Esto está mal , la flecha de reserva esta siendo opacada un poco por el slider anterior . Para ser una normal diff , la flecha de la reversa debe estar 100% visible
  8. 01:11:805 (7) Muy dificil de leer para principiantes , reemplazalo por un 1/2 slider
  9. 01:19:085 (x) Un circulo aqui le caería a pelo a esta parte imo , sigue muy bien el final
Necesitas trabajar mas en los hitsounds tambien , y mas que todo como posicionas los circles y sliders . Ya que hay muchos patrones , que no fluyen nada bien .

Hard

  1. 00:03:423 (3) Siguiendo la música y por consistencia , agregar un clap solo al comienzo del slider
  2. 00:05:188 (7) Lo mismo de arriba
  3. 00:17:540 (1) Remueve el New Combo de aqui , es realmente innecesario
  4. 00:25:261 (3,4) Este jump realmente se siente raro , no tiene sentido . Sería mejor si mantienes el spacing constante aqui
  5. 00:43:349 (x) ¿Porque estas obviando este lugar ? . La música resalta mucho ahi , obviamente este lugar necesita un circle . Ponlo por favor
  6. 00:43:790 (x) Lo mismo que arriba
  7. 00:43:129 (1) Como lo dije en las otras dificultades , cuando comienze un kiai time , lo mejor sería que la primer nota tenga un Finish , asi resaltaria mejor el kiai time
  8. 00:47:320 (2) Convierte este slider a circular , se siente raro un slider recto con un circular haciendo un blanket
No mencione nada de blankets , ni estetica o me pasaria todo el dia . Podrias trabajar mas en eso y en los hitsounds . El mapa no está mal , pero podrias intentar trabajar en ello

EruJazz's Insane

  1. 00:21:952 (1) Este spinner no fluye bien en mi opinion . Seria mejor reemplazarlo por un slider
  2. 00:23:055 (1,2) Este antijump , no se siente bien . Pero si no deseas cambiarlo agrega un New Combo a (2) para distinguir el antijump y si haces lo de arriba más , agregas un combo a la primera nota que usaste para reemplazar el spinner
  3. 00:26:364 (3) Este 1/2 slider se siente algo overmapped , escuchala en 25 % de velocidad y esa ultima parte del slider no sigue nada en la musica . Reemplazalo por un circle , sonará mejor
  4. 00:45:114 (2) Podrias hacer un CTRL+G en este slider , crearía un jump divertidos y mejoraría el flow en esta parte
  5. 00:49:306 (3) Un Whistle en este circle , seguiría muy bien la música
  6. 00:56:915 (2,3) Estas notas las siento realmente mal , no siguen nada en la música . Al momento de jugar la diff , senti que al presionar estas notas , es como si no presionara nada , ni siguiera nada en la música . Intenta arreglarlo de alguna manera
  7. 01:08:717 (1) Finish al comienzo del slider , le da un buen toque
Bueno no está mal , pero pueda mejorar :p

En General el mapset no está mal , pero como les digo , todo puede mejorar con mods . Suerte con este proyecto ! :)
Cosmolade
1,289 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

XinCrin wrote:

Hola , Cosmolade . Hace tiempo eru y tu me pidieron este mod , siento modearlo tarde :p
No te preocupes, me alegro de que te dieras el tiempo de hacerle un mod *u*

Normal

  1. 00:04:746 (4,5) Arregla el spacing de (5) con respecto a la anterior nota ✔
  2. 00:32:540 (3,4) Esto está mal , el slider (4) rompe el spacing con (3) , ademas (4) está casi fuera del area de trabajo , se que lo quieres dejar para hacer un buen blanket , pero está mal . Intenta arreglarlo Lo siento QwQ Fix.
  3. 00:38:276 (2) Remueve este whistle , se siente muy raro . Es el unico que usaste en esta seccion , ademas suena muy innecesario ✔
  4. 00:42:688 (5,1) Esto es muy dificil para una normal diff honestamente . Cambialo por un 1/2 slider y 1 circle , estará mejor :
    ✔
  5. 00:43:129 (1) Un Finish suena mucho mejor aqui en mi opinion , ademas el kiai time comienza aqui . El finish le daría un buen toque ✔
  6. 00:47:982 (3) Arregla el spacing , se que quieres hacer un buen blanket , pero el spacing es mas importante ✔
  7. 00:52:835 (1) Esto está mal , la flecha de reserva esta siendo opacada un poco por el slider anterior . Para ser una normal diff , la flecha de la reversa debe estar 100% visible ✔
  8. 01:11:805 (7) Muy dificil de leer para principiantes , reemplazalo por un 1/2 slider
    ✔
  9. 01:19:085 (x) Un circulo aqui le caería a pelo a esta parte imo , sigue muy bien el final ✔ xD
Necesitas trabajar mas en los hitsounds tambien , y mas que todo como posicionas los circles y sliders . Ya que hay muchos patrones , que no fluyen nada bien . Okay uwu

Hard

  1. 00:03:423 (3) Siguiendo la música y por consistencia , agregar un clap solo al comienzo del slider ✔
  2. 00:05:188 (7) Lo mismo de arriba ✔
  3. 00:17:540 (1) Remueve el New Combo de aqui , es realmente innecesario ✔
  4. 00:25:261 (3,4) Este jump realmente se siente raro , no tiene sentido . Sería mejor si mantienes el spacing constante aqui ✔
  5. 00:43:349 (x) ¿Porque estas obviando este lugar ? . La música resalta mucho ahi , obviamente este lugar necesita un circle . Ponlo por favor ✔
  6. 00:43:790 (x) Lo mismo que arriba ✔
  7. 00:43:129 (1) Como lo dije en las otras dificultades , cuando comienze un kiai time , lo mejor sería que la primer nota tenga un Finish , asi resaltaria mejor el kiai time ✔
  8. 00:47:320 (2) Convierte este slider a circular , se siente raro un slider recto con un circular haciendo un blanket ✔
No mencione nada de blankets , ni estetica o me pasaria todo el dia . Podrias trabajar mas en eso y en los hitsounds . El mapa no está mal , pero podrias intentar trabajar en ello Cambié muchas cosas en esta diff, ojalá estén bien ouo)7

En General el mapset no está mal , pero como les digo , todo puede mejorar con mods . Suerte con este proyecto ! :)
¡Muchas gracias!
(っ´▽`)っ
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
Hello~
SPOILER

[General]

Your video dimensions can't exceed 800 x 600 @_@
Personally, I don't think the first 2 kiai sections are needed. They don't sound like the chorus or climax of the song, and it's more powerful to have one long kiai section
I also suggest putting in a custom clap... imo, the default soft-hitclap doesn't really suit this song :/

[Insane]

Throughout the kiai, it'd be nice to have a claps on 2/4 beats to fit the music and help the player stay in the correct rhythm! Actually in general, the whole map except the beginning could use some more 2/4 claps

00:02:982 (2,3,4,5) - To be honest, i'm not sure what beat you're mapping to D: When I listen to the music here, all I hear are 1/2 beats @_@ If you want to put a 1/4 rhythm, you can put it at 00:03:754 since I hear some sort of beat there
00:06:952 (2) - since there's a heavy beat here, how about normal sampleset instead of soft whistle?
00:17:540 (5,6) - consider removing the claps from these sliders, it sounds a bit noisy to me
00:19:967 (4) - to match beat in the music, remove clap from here and place it on 00:19:636 (2)'s tail instead
00:20:188 (1) - drum sampleset for consistency with 00:19:305 (1)
00:20:629 (2,3) - i suggest swapping these on timeline to better match vocals
00:21:401 - i understand you want to put jumps here, but I think it'd be cool to put a note here to fit vocals
00:23:055 (1,2) - placing the slider so close to the circle with a 1/1 rhythm in between might confuse players, consider stacking them like an anti jump? it would fit well with the longggg singing here
00:23:938 (3,4) - move clap from 3 to head of 4? would fit song better imo
00:25:040 (3) - whistle here to match the sound in the bg
00:26:915 - add a note here? i hear a sound
00:26:805 (5) - maybe add a clap or normal sampleset?
00:29:011 (1) - i think having a normal sampleset instead of a drum sampleset would be more powerful
00:29:453 (4) - ^
00:34:747 (2,3) - maybe arrange like this for better flow?
SPOILER
00:36:070 - the hitsounds in this section sound pretty soft D: consider raising the volume to maybe 50%?
00:37:393 (3) - normal sampleset on head to match beat?
00:38:938 (7) - maybe a normal sampleset on tail to match the beat
00:40:702 (2) - normal sampleset on head?... actually it's more of a clap hitsound, but if you put a clap here, i recommend using a custom clap rather than the default soft hitclap. IMO, it doesn't suit the song @_@
00:48:423 (1) - whistle on end to maintain your hitsound pattern
00:49:306 (3) - add whistle
00:52:835 (1,2,3) - placing the pattern this way looks a bit clustered and not neat :( Try this?
SPOILER
00:56:915 (2,3) - i don't think these match the vocals or any sort of beat in the background D: Consider removing these and adding a note at 00:57:026
00:57:467 (4) - mmmm i think it'd better match the beat and vocals if this was taken out D:
00:59:452 (3) - not sure a finish here is necessary, a whistle will do the job just fine :D
01:02:871 - add a note to match the very fast singing?
01:08:056 (4,5) - whistles on head, tail, and the circle?
01:11:033 (3) - make the pattern less cluttered and confusing by moving it out some:
SPOILER
01:12:908 (3,4,5) - consider using this rhythm to better fit the drawn out singing:
SPOILER
01:17:540 (1) - curve the slider the other way for better circular flow and so it blankets 01:18:423 (1) ?
SPOILER

[Hard]

I think AR 8 is a bit high for this diff D: Consider lowering it to 7
Also, I think normal hit-normal as the default is a bit.. heavy for this light hearted song. Maybe change all your green lines to soft in the timing panel?
I don't think the normal whistles fit this diff personally D:

00:04:746 (6) - angle this way for better flow?
SPOILER
00:07:173 (5,6,7) - i think spacing should be more consistent here because the music stays the same level of intensity and pitch D:
00:17:099 (2,3) - arrange like so for better flow
SPOILER
00:17:982 (5,2) - this overlap is a bit messy imo D: try moving 2 up some?
00:23:717 (6) - arrange for better blanketing
SPOILER
00:24:820 (1,2,3) - add soft hit whistles to match sound in the bg?
00:25:482 (4) - maybe move up some for better flow?
SPOILER
00:26:364 (6) - make the wave more even:
SPOILER
00:26:364 (6,1) - actually i recommend switching these on the timeline to better fit vocals :P
00:31:217 (3) - the overlap with 00:30:114 (4) looks a bit messy even with AR 8 D: Maybe stack the head of this slider on the tail of 00:30:114 (4) ?
00:42:246 (4) - the overlap looks messy here as well D: angle the slider more left?
SPOILER
00:49:085 - to better match the vocals here, consider putting a circle here or making 00:48:864 (7) a 1/2 slider
00:50:188 (1,3) - to make the pattern less crowded, angle 3 differently?
SPOILER
00:51:952 (1) - this overlappp isn't very neat here :( maybe move this somewhere else?
00:54:599 (4,5,1) - make this pattern neater by improving blankets~
00:57:467 (1) - as far as i can listen, there isn't actually a beat here D: maybe make 00:57:246 (5) a slider that leads into this stream?
00:58:129 (1,2,3) - personally i think the jump should occur from 2 to 3 because the singing gets louder & more powerful
01:02:540 (9,10) - the gap here seems too empty to me considering the really fast singing lol
01:12:246 (1,2) - for consistency with the later sliders, there should be a jump here (or reduce the jumps on the next few sliders)
01:15:555 (8) - for better flow, angle the slider leftward:
SPOILER
01:16:658 (3) - ctrl+G so the jump isn't as drastic

[Normal]

Same comment about using Normal hit-normal as the default D:
00:16:658 (1) - arrange like this for better flow?
SPOILER
00:34:305 (1) - blanket a bit better~
SPOILER
00:39:599 (1) - move up and left for a more diamond-like shape i guess
00:46:217 (1,2,3,4) - i think having a circle first and then 3 sliders would fit the vocals better than what you have now D:
01:00:776 (5) - i think a more gradual zigzag would improve the look of this pattern:
SPOILER
01:18:864 (4,5) - since your previous stacks were 1/1 rhythm, consider just making this a slider so beginners won't confuse this for 1/1

[Easy]

I think normal hit-normal as the default is a bit.. heavy for this light hearted song. Maybe change all your green lines to soft in the timing panel?

00:20:188 (1) - move this out so it's not so close to 00:18:864 (2) ?
00:34:746 (4) - angle slider this way for better flow?
SPOILER
00:40:923 (3,4) - maybe switch these on timeline to match the long vocals?
00:46:658 (1,2) - move both of these down to avoid overlap with 00:45:776 (5)
01:02:982 (5,6,7) - it'd be nice if you could find a way to avoid overlap D: try this?
SPOILER

cute song! Good luck~
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
From my queue.
[General]
The kiai is overused in this mapset. There's completely no need to use it at 00:21:952 and 00:36:070­. These are parts of a verse, and shouldn't be used with kiai. Leave your only kiai at 00:43:129 and end it 00:56:805­ (even though it's not a big white tick on the timeline, you can clearly hear that this is the moment where the impact of this song ends).

[Okazaki's Easy]
01:17:540 (1) - This spinner it way too short to be in the easiest difficulty. If you want a spinner at the end of this map, start it at 01:15:776­, or don't add it at all.

[Normal]
00:35:629 (2) - Just for the future: avoid unnecessary overlapping the previous/sliders with next notes. The way your (2) is placed is kinda bad and doesn't play smooth and clean. Other than that, this map's seems fine.

[Hard]
There's a lot of inconsistencies in spacing and hitsounds on this map. Some parts have hitsounds that are taken from pretty much anywhere. I'd suggest you self-modding this map, taking a closer look at the distance snap meter (it's at the right-upper corner of the screen) and minding the hitsounds used.
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00:04:305 (5) - Is too close to (4), check the distance snap.
00:29:011 (6,1) - This jump doesn't make any rhythmical sense. Move (6) closer to the other notes, and give it a new combo.
00:32:982 (4) - Also too close to (3).
00:44:893 (7) - If you want to keep them jumps, use a new combo here so they're easier to distinguish.


[EruJAZZ's Insane]
00:04:305 (1,2) - These could be moved a little bit further from each other for aesthetics.
00:06:070 (4) - New combo here instead of the current (1).
00:17:540 (5) - New combo here.
00:23:055 (1) - Move it a little higher, especially due to the fact that the distance between (1) and (2) is quite short.
00:50:188 (1,2,3) - Move them a little bit further from each other, the notes don't have to cover each other.


I guess this mapset requires some more work. Good luck!
Cosmolade
1,289 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Cosmolade
Raose

Raose wrote:

Hello~
SPOILER
lol xD

[General]

Your video dimensions can't exceed 800 x 600 @_@ The Ranking Criteria says: "The video's dimensions must not exceed 1280x720." so the dimensions of the video are fine :3
Personally, I don't think the first 2 kiai sections are needed. They don't sound like the chorus or climax of the song, and it's more powerful to have one long kiai section
I also suggest putting in a custom clap... imo, the default soft-hitclap doesn't really suit this song :/ hm... I thought that too, but i don't know which sound-clap made him look better, any recommendations?

[Hard]

I think AR 8 is a bit high for this diff D: Consider lowering it to 7
Also, I think normal hit-normal as the default is a bit.. heavy for this light hearted song. Maybe change all your green lines to soft in the timing panel? I tried to change it to soft, but the notes not heard good, so I preferred to leave it :c
I don't think the normal whistles fit this diff personally D:

00:04:746 (6) - angle this way for better flow? Fix
SPOILER
00:07:173 (5,6,7) - i think spacing should be more consistent here because the music stays the same level of intensity and pitch D: but the Vocal allows a beautiful zig-zag D:
00:17:099 (2,3) - arrange like so for better flow Fix
SPOILER
00:17:982 (5,2) - this overlap is a bit messy imo D: try moving 2 up some? Fix
00:23:717 (6) - arrange for better blanketing Fix
SPOILER
00:24:820 (1,2,3) - add soft hit whistles to match sound in the bg? Fix
00:25:482 (4) - maybe move up some for better flow? Fix
SPOILER
00:26:364 (6) - make the wave more even: Fix
SPOILER
00:26:364 (6,1) - actually i recommend switching these on the timeline to better fit vocals :P It follow the music, not the vocal :P
00:31:217 (3) - the overlap with 00:30:114 (4) looks a bit messy even with AR 8 D: Maybe stack the head of this slider on the tail of 00:30:114 (4) ? Fix
00:42:246 (4) - the overlap looks messy here as well D: angle the slider more left? Fix
SPOILER
00:49:085 - to better match the vocals here, consider putting a circle here or making 00:48:864 (7) a 1/2 slider Fix
00:50:188 (1,3) - to make the pattern less crowded, angle 3 differently? Fix
SPOILER
00:51:952 (1) - this overlappp isn't very neat here :( maybe move this somewhere else? Fix
00:54:599 (4,5,1) - make this pattern neater by improving blankets~ Fix
00:57:467 (1) - as far as i can listen, there isn't actually a beat here D: maybe make 00:57:246 (5) a slider that leads into this stream Fix -w-
00:58:129 (1,2,3) - personally i think the jump should occur from 2 to 3 because the singing gets louder & more powerful Fix :)
01:02:540 (9,10) - the gap here seems too empty to me considering the really fast singing lol I think the notes follow the drums line, because if they followed the voice, i would put too much notes, lol xD
01:12:246 (1,2) - for consistency with the later sliders, there should be a jump here (or reduce the jumps on the next few sliders) Fix
01:15:555 (8) - for better flow, angle the slider leftward: Fix
SPOILER
01:16:658 (3) - ctrl+G so the jump isn't as drastic Fix :3

[Normal]

Same comment about using Normal hit-normal as the default D: D:
00:16:658 (1) - arrange like this for better flow? Fix
SPOILER
00:34:305 (1) - blanket a bit better~ Fix
SPOILER
00:39:599 (1) - move up and left for a more diamond-like shape i guess Fix
00:46:217 (1,2,3,4) - i think having a circle first and then 3 sliders would fit the vocals better than what you have now D: Fix
01:00:776 (5) - i think a more gradual zigzag would improve the look of this pattern: Fix
SPOILER
01:18:864 (4,5) - since your previous stacks were 1/1 rhythm, consider just making this a slider so beginners won't confuse this for 1/1 Sorry, no change :c

cute song! Good luck~

rEdo

rEdo wrote:

From my queue.
[General]
The kiai is overused in this mapset. There's completely no need to use it at 00:21:952 and 00:36:070­. These are parts of a verse, and shouldn't be used with kiai. Leave your only kiai at 00:43:129 and end it 00:56:805­ (even though it's not a big white tick on the timeline, you can clearly hear that this is the moment where the impact of this song ends).

[Normal]
00:35:629 (2) - Just for the future: avoid unnecessary overlapping the previous/sliders with next notes. The way your (2) is placed is kinda bad and doesn't play smooth and clean. Other than that, this map's seems fine. Fix

[Hard]
There's a lot of inconsistencies in spacing and hitsounds on this map. Some parts have hitsounds that are taken from pretty much anywhere. I'd suggest you self-modding this map, taking a closer look at the distance snap meter (it's at the right-upper corner of the screen) and minding the hitsounds used.
­ don't worry, I'll try to look some more hitsound that fits the beatmap
00:04:305 (5) - Is too close to (4), check the distance snap. Fix
00:29:011 (6,1) - This jump doesn't make any rhythmical sense. Move (6) closer to the other notes, and give it a new combo. Fix
00:32:982 (4) - Also too close to (3). Fix
00:44:893 (7) - If you want to keep them jumps, use a new combo here so they're easier to distinguish. Okay

I guess this mapset requires some more work. Good luck!

I don't know what I'll do with the kia time, if I should change it or not.
I'll talk to the other mappers that make this map, to make sure I don't make any error.

btw
Thanks for the mods!
(っ˘ ³˘)っ♥
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
yo por eso quité los Kiai Time en mi diff por que sabia que no serian correctos y por que duran menos de 15 segundos... y el que dice que está desde el 00:43:129 - 00:56:805 si está mas adecuado.
ErunamoJAZZ
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2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

XinCrin wrote:

Hola , Cosmolade . Hace tiempo eru y tu me pidieron este mod , siento modearlo tarde :p

XinCrin
EruJazz's Insane

  1. 00:21:952 (1) Este spinner no fluye bien en mi opinion . Seria mejor reemplazarlo por un slider mm.. lo pensaré, aunque por ahora lo dejaré así.
  2. 00:23:055 (1,2) Este antijump , no se siente bien . Pero si no deseas cambiarlo agrega un New Combo a (2) para distinguir el antijump y si haces lo de arriba más , agregas un combo a la primera nota que usaste para reemplazar el spinner
  3. 00:26:364 (3) Este 1/2 slider se siente algo overmapped , escuchala en 25 % de velocidad y esa ultima parte del slider no sigue nada en la musica . Reemplazalo por un circle , sonará mejor fix aunque la intención era seguir la voz, tienes razón es que está overmapped.
  4. 00:45:114 (2) Podrias hacer un CTRL+G en este slider , crearía un jump divertidos y mejoraría el flow en esta parte ugg, no me gustó como queda xD
  5. 00:49:306 (3) Un Whistle en este circle , seguiría muy bien la música done
  6. 00:56:915 (2,3) Estas notas las siento realmente mal , no siguen nada en la música . Al momento de jugar la diff , senti que al presionar estas notas , es como si no presionara nada , ni siguiera nada en la música . Intenta arreglarlo de alguna manera Es probable que no alcances a escuchar nada, pero sí estoy siguiendo unos sonidos que se oyen un poco bajos, pero que están ahi.
  7. 01:08:717 (1) Finish al comienzo del slider , le da un buen toque done
Bueno no está mal , pero pueda mejorar :p Gracias Xin :)
En General el mapset no está mal , pero como les digo , todo puede mejorar con mods . Suerte con este proyecto ! :)
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Raose wrote:

Hello~
SPOILER

Raose
[Insane]

Throughout the kiai, it'd be nice to have a claps on 2/4 beats to fit the music and help the player stay in the correct rhythm! Actually in general, the whole map except the beginning could use some more 2/4 claps

00:02:982 (2,3,4,5) - To be honest, i'm not sure what beat you're mapping to D: When I listen to the music here, all I hear are 1/2 beats @_@ If you want to put a 1/4 rhythm, you can put it at 00:03:754 since I hear some sort of beat there lel, i added the note
00:06:952 (2) - since there's a heavy beat here, how about normal sampleset instead of soft whistle? done
00:17:540 (5,6) - consider removing the claps from these sliders, it sounds a bit noisy to me sorry, but nope
00:19:967 (4) - to match beat in the music, remove clap from here and place it on 00:19:636 (2)'s tail instead oks
00:20:188 (1) - drum sampleset for consistency with 00:19:305 (1) done
00:20:629 (2,3) - i suggest swapping these on timeline to better match vocals o.o sorry, but no
00:21:401 - i understand you want to put jumps here, but I think it'd be cool to put a note here to fit vocals xD
00:23:055 (1,2) - placing the slider so close to the circle with a 1/1 rhythm in between might confuse players, consider stacking them like an anti jump? it would fit well with the longggg singing here I like how I assigned this part, although I have already given several suggestions (it seems that nobody likes it xD). I may change this in the future, but for now, no.
00:23:938 (3,4) - move clap from 3 to head of 4? would fit song better imo humm.. done
00:25:040 (3) - whistle here to match the sound in the bg done
00:26:915 - add a note here? i hear a sound yep, mwahahaha!! NO
00:26:805 (5) - maybe add a clap or normal sampleset? humm, no
00:29:011 (1) - i think having a normal sampleset instead of a drum sampleset would be more powerful
00:29:453 (4) - ^ hahaha, yep, but i dont like 'powerful' in this section ^^U
00:34:747 (2,3) - maybe arrange like this for better flow? okay
SPOILER
00:36:070 - the hitsounds in this section sound pretty soft D: consider raising the volume to maybe 50%?
00:37:393 (3) - normal sampleset on head to match beat?
00:38:938 (7) - maybe a normal sampleset on tail to match the beat
00:40:702 (2) - normal sampleset on head?... actually it's more of a clap hitsound, but if you put a clap here, i recommend using a custom clap rather than the default soft hitclap. IMO, it doesn't suit the song @_@
00:48:423 (1) - whistle on end to maintain your hitsound pattern done
00:49:306 (3) - add whistle done of Xin mod
00:52:835 (1,2,3) - placing the pattern this way looks a bit clustered and not neat :( Try this? "difficult to read, easy to follow.", so... no.
SPOILER
00:56:915 (2,3) - i don't think these match the vocals or any sort of beat in the background D: Consider removing these and adding a note at 00:57:026 u.u
00:57:467 (4) - mmmm i think it'd better match the beat and vocals if this was taken out D: nahh, hehe
00:59:452 (3) - not sure a finish here is necessary, a whistle will do the job just fine :D
01:02:871 - add a note to match the very fast singing?humm.. o... kay NO
01:08:056 (4,5) - whistles on head, tail, and the circle? yep
01:11:033 (3) - make the pattern less cluttered and confusing by moving it out some: 1/4 slider patterns abuse :v hahaha, but, good idea, thx
SPOILER
01:12:908 (3,4,5) - consider using this rhythm to better fit the drawn out singing:
SPOILER
01:17:540 (1) - curve the slider the other way for better circular flow and so it blankets 01:18:423 (1) ? done
SPOILER

cute song! Good luck~
lol, very long. THX!!

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rEdo wrote:

From my queue.

rEdo
[EruJAZZ's Insane]
00:04:305 (1,2) - These could be moved a little bit further from each other for aesthetics. okay
00:06:070 (4) - New combo here instead of the current (1). ups, fix xD
00:17:540 (5) - New combo here. done
00:23:055 (1) - Move it a little higher, especially due to the fact that the distance between (1) and (2) is quite short. nope
00:50:188 (1,2,3) - Move them a little bit further from each other, the notes don't have to cover each other. done (?)

I guess this mapset requires some more work. Good luck!


VERY THX TO ALL!!! :3

GuestDiff updated
EruJazz's Insane
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128,152,48202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,68,48423,6,0,P|80:68|40:180,1,191.999994140625,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,232,49085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,49306,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,208,49526,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,120,49746,1,4,0:1:0:0:
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418,314,50629,2,0,L|514:354,1,95.9999970703126
380,252,51070,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,216,51290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,51511,2,0,L|108:216,1,95.9999970703126
32,168,51952,2,0,L|128:128,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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221,47,52835,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,52945,2,0,L|216:100,2,47.9999985351563,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,52,53276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,104,53496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,172,53717,6,0,L|391:246,1,95.9999970703126
332,172,54158,2,0,L|269:245,1,95.9999970703126
176,232,54599,2,0,L|240:156,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,136,55040,2,0,L|212:64,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,36,55482,6,0,L|352:72,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
448,164,55813,2,0,L|396:208,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,56143,1,0,3:0:0:0:
276,312,56254,1,0,3:0:0:0:
252,332,56364,2,0,B|216:360|216:360|196:368|164:360,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,56805,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,56915,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,212,57136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,184,57246,1,2,1:2:0:0:
276,100,57467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,72,57577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,57688,2,0,P|212:40|164:68,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,160,58129,5,2,0:0:0:0:
379,160,58570,2,0,L|415:136,2,40,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,176,58901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,192,59011,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,260,59232,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,324,59452,1,6,0:0:0:0:
136,324,59893,6,0,L|84:252,1,80
72,236,60224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,60335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,100,60555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,52,60776,6,0,L|84:4,2,40
148,72,61107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,61217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,160,61438,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,228,61658,5,2,0:0:0:0:
364,228,61768,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,61879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,308,62099,2,0,L|208:320,2,40
392,312,62540,5,2,0:0:0:0:
392,312,62651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,62761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,252,62982,2,0,L|472:216,1,40
440,168,63202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,40,63423,6,0,P|296:60|200:84,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,63864,2,0,L|148:56,2,40
252,180,64305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,272,64526,2,0,L|256:320,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,312,65188,6,0,P|48:200|188:92,1,320,4|0,3:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,112,66291,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,143,66511,2,0,P|295:178|248:191,1,80
252,112,66953,5,0,3:0:0:0:
208,44,67173,2,0,P|131:35|85:96,1,160,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,116,67835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,112,68056,2,0,P|300:140|332:176,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,214,68497,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,292,68717,6,0,P|200:208|76:304,1,320,4|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,328,69820,2,0,L|240:272,1,80
284,240,70261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,72,73570,1,2,1:2:0:0:
112,124,73790,2,0,P|96:168|64:216,1,80,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,340,74452,1,0,1:0:0:0:
288,300,74673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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92,128,76107,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,212,77320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,224,77982,1,0,1:0:0:0:
164,124,78202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Voxnola
729 posts
Joined May 2013
Voxnola

Mod from queue~
7/8th time modding something.
[General]
rawr
Throughout most of the mapset it seems that the hitsounds are random. I think you should find a pattern with the hitsounds and stick to it. Throughout kiai's I think you should put claps on 2 and 4 and nothing else unless something is strong ||| consistency>filled randomness

get someone to check the timing of this. The offset seems late and it gives it a "dragging feel."
tags conflict with the mania diff

Just suggestions... nothing to see here o-o

[Okazaki's Easy]
00:07:835 (4) - curve outward to match 2 better?
00:29:011 (1) - inconsistent spacing. I suppose you could lower the other circles so it can fit on the screen
00:45:776 (5,1,2,5) - avoid these overlaps please. This portion of the map is reallly condensed
00:51:070 (2,5) - maybe have these so that they stack?
00:43:129 (1) - finish on head?
01:05:188 (1,2) - maybe delete 2 so that you can make 1 a reverse slider to emphasize that there's strong vocal there?
00:31:658 (3) - finishes like these seem random to me. Unfortunately these are consistent throughout the map

and that's it for this

[Normal]
00:02:540 (1,2) - maybe blanket?
00:03:864 (3,5) - maybe make it so that the heads stack for a cleaner feel?
00:19:305 (5) - why finish here?
00:36:070 (1) - finish on head?
00:46:217 (7) - add clap
00:46:658 (1) - remove clap from head
00:54:599 (3,6) - stack these?
01:18:864 (4,5) - won't these be a bit confusing to stack like this? Why not make a slider like in the hard?

and that's it for this one~

[Hard]
00:20:408 (2) - Is this jump necessary?
00:43:129 (1,2,3,4) - these would look better with equal spacing
00:45:555 (3,4,5) - maybe put 4 closer to 3? It feels weird jumping and then going to an anti jump that's further away in time. It get confusing
00:48:423 (6) - NC?
00:48:423 (6,7,8) - same with this. They're almost equal spacing and from 7 to 8 there's less time to get to it. It doesn't make sense for a things to be equal spacing but unequal spacing in time
00:58:129 (1) - that jump is huge
00:58:790 (2,3,4,5) - these would look cleaner with equal circle spacing
01:01:658 (7) - NC?
01:04:526 (2) - awkward anti jump

that's it for this one~

[ErunamoJAZZ's Insane]
00:20:188 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit ugly. Stack them?
00:23:496 (2) - weird anti jump maybe add a note here? 00:23:276 -
00:52:393 (7) - ctrl + G ?

aannd done

Sorry for the bad mod >.> I lost all of my mod before so this is my second mod of this map lol

Goodluck~
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Mod as requested.

[Platter]

This map is way to easy to be called "Platter", maybe Cup. I only used dash twice but I guess I just failed to catch the right timing. So first of all, you need to use more dash (higher DS). And second, more slider. \o/ 219 against 43 circle is not really balanced. Try to map 50 more slider to make it better. I'll give some suggestion and ideas to make it better.

Let's get started.

For me it seem the offset is kinda off, maybe 2535 will be better but ignore this if you are sure about the current one.
AR6 is too low. Yes the bpm is low but still its possible to use 8 to make it finer.

00:00:776 (1,2,3) - These can be a slider with a repeat since the sound at the red tick is not loud enough for a circle. But it can be covered with a droplet.
00:01:438 (4) - Can be deleted since goes after nothing.
00:01:658 (5,6,7) - Slider, same as before.
(These can be altered to 00:00:776 (1,2) - slider, 00:01:217 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/1 slider with a repeat.)
00:03:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - (2,3) slider, (4,5) slider, (6,7) slider, (8,9,10) repeat slider.
00:05:408 (11,12,13) - This triplet follows nothing. Please only use notes when they are after something in the music or vocal.
00:06:952 (3,4) - Add repeat to the slider.
00:08:165 (8,9) - You can merge them to a slider since they are basically after two parts of the same word (matte).
00:12:246 (4,5,6,7) - You can use two short slider here.
00:15:996 (4,5) - Ctrl+g them to create a triangle jump.
00:21:070 (7,8,9,10,11) - (8) and (10) are after nothing, please remove them and change it to a repeat slider.
00:33:864 (7,8,9) - Delete the middle one and maybe use a slider?

I won't mod the rest since the rhythm is mostly the same. Please use the above mentioned ones to make it better. Since this is Platter, you can make jump and some HDash too. I tested the distance between 1/2 notes for you, that's 2,4 for a calm jump, 3,6 is the HDash starter distance and in the middle of these two you can create tricky jumps. Use HDashes only during kiai since this is a calm song and this way it will be unique compared with the rest. HDashes mostly appear at big white ticks aka main beats, (00:44:011 (2,3) - Here is a good place for it), but you still need to watch for the rhythm to avoid useless spam.
[]

I hope this is understandable enough. Please call me back after you changed everything and got a few more mods. Or if you need some more help feel free to pm me. Catchy song and short so I will have time to take a look again. :3 Good luck. o/ (I will give you a star when it will be better. :3)
Sey
1,406 posts
Joined October 2010
Sey
NO KDS; THIS IS JUST A RECHECK AND NOT A MOD YET!

  1. To create a more or less proper difficulty spread as you have in the other modes, you should create a 2nd CtB difficulty. The difficulty you have atm is a Cup, it's not even close to a Platter. So if you create a 2nd difficulty it should be a Salad. Before you start with mapping it I highly recommend you to read my information about distinction between CtB difficulties. Also you should consider reading more information about CtB mapping in the following Threads: CtB mapping tutorial, CtB modding academy. Also please take a look on the CtB Ranking Criteria.
  2. Let's make it clear. This simply is not a Platter. Here a few that you can take as reference to compare with your CtB difficulty: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/107009 , https://osu.ppy.sh/s/118690. Please take a look on them. If you ever want to get this ranked, rename it first of all to "Cup", after that we have to change all the song setup settings to the following (these are the song settings for a Cup!):
    HP Drain Rate: 3
    Circle Size: 2
    Approach Rate: 5
    Overall Difficulty: 5 (You also find the distinction of song setup settings between CtB difficulties here(second post).
  3. The perfect offset would be 772 (776 is a bit off to the first beat) here, the first note appears at 00:00:772 - and this is also the section where the offset should start (first beat of the song). I already tested this and the offset works fine throughout the whole song. Singer voice starts at 2540 btw, so 2541 is slightly wrong as well. Anyway, 772 works much better here.
I cannot really mod this until you say me what are your plans with this difficulty. Do you want to keep this as Platter or will you change this to a Cup? Depending on whether you decide I will mod it like a Cup or like a Platter. But to be honest, if you want this as Platter it needs A LOT of improvement. I still can help you pretty well to make this to a Cup.
CrazyErrorMan
110 posts
Joined February 2013
CrazyErrorMan
Mod from my Que.
The only thing I could find is that some of the diffs have no video while other diffs does.
That's all I can say.
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

Naitoshi wrote:


[ErunamoJAZZ's Insane]
00:20:188 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit ugly. Stack them? mm.. no, is more difficult
00:23:496 (2) - weird anti jump maybe add a note here? 00:23:276 - sorry, no.
00:52:393 (7) - ctrl + G ? done

Goodluck~
i made some improves.
Diff updated: http://puu.sh/7XxN5.osu
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Umm, not sure if you've finished applying the fixes from the previous mods :? I'll mod later.
Cosmolade
1,289 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Naitoshi wrote:


Mod from queue~
7/8th time modding something.
[General]
rawr
Throughout most of the mapset it seems that the hitsounds are random. I think you should find a pattern with the hitsounds and stick to it. Throughout kiai's I think you should put claps on 2 and 4 and nothing else unless something is strong ||| consistency>filled randomness :?

get someone to check the timing of this. The offset seems late and it gives it a "dragging feel."
tags conflict with the mania diff Mania diff?

Just suggestions... nothing to see here o-o

[Normal]
00:02:540 (1,2) - maybe blanket? ok
00:03:864 (3,5) - maybe make it so that the heads stack for a cleaner feel? ok
00:19:305 (5) - why finish here? fix
00:36:070 (1) - finish on head? ok
00:46:217 (7) - add clap ok
00:46:658 (1) - remove clap from head ok
00:54:599 (3,6) - stack these? fix
01:18:864 (4,5) - won't these be a bit confusing to stack like this? Why not make a slider like in the hard? sorry, no change

and that's it for this one~

[Hard]
00:20:408 (2) - Is this jump necessary? yep
00:43:129 (1,2,3,4) - these would look better with equal spacing fix
00:45:555 (3,4,5) - maybe put 4 closer to 3? It feels weird jumping and then going to an anti jump that's further away in time. It get confusing fix
00:48:423 (6) - NC? fix
00:48:423 (6,7,8) - same with this. They're almost equal spacing and from 7 to 8 there's less time to get to it. It doesn't make sense for a things to be equal spacing but unequal spacing in time fix
00:58:129 (1) - that jump is huge no change ;u;
00:58:790 (2,3,4,5) - these would look cleaner with equal circle spacing fix
01:01:658 (7) - NC? fix
01:04:526 (2) - awkward anti jump ñe ok

that's it for this one~
-
aannd done

Sorry for the bad mod >.> I lost all of my mod before so this is my second mod of this map lol Don't worry :3

Goodluck~
Thanks for the mod~
(*´╰╯`๓)

Sey wrote:

I cannot really mod this until you say me what are your plans with this difficulty. Do you want to keep this as Platter or will you change this to a Cup? Depending on whether you decide I will mod it like a Cup or like a Platter. But to be honest, if you want this as Platter it needs A LOT of improvement. I still can help you pretty well to make this to a Cup.
I talked with the creator of the difficulty of ctb, and he decided to change some things, and leave it as Platter.
Probably in a few days he will publish an update~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Umm, not sure if you've finished applying the fixes from the previous mods :? I'll mod later.
Sorry for the delay D: but I applied all mods :)

------
I change the hitsounds in the Hard diff!
(◕‿◕✿)
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
SPOILER

Kurokami wrote:

Mod as requested.

[Platter]

This map is way to easy to be called "Platter", maybe Cup. I only used dash twice but I guess I just failed to catch the right timing. So first of all, you need to use more dash (higher DS). And second, more slider. \o/ 219 against 43 circle is not really balanced. Try to map 50 more slider to make it better. I'll give some suggestion and ideas to make it better.

Let's get started.

For me it seem the offset is kinda off, maybe 2535 will be better but ignore this if you are sure about the current one.
AR6 is too low. Yes the bpm is low but still its possible to use 8 to make it finer.

00:00:776 (1,2,3) - These can be a slider with a repeat since the sound at the red tick is not loud enough for a circle. But it can be covered with a droplet.
00:01:438 (4) - Can be deleted since goes after nothing.
00:01:658 (5,6,7) - Slider, same as before.
(These can be altered to 00:00:776 (1,2) - slider, 00:01:217 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/1 slider with a repeat.)
00:03:423 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - (2,3) slider, (4,5) slider, (6,7) slider, (8,9,10) repeat slider.
00:05:408 (11,12,13) - This triplet follows nothing. Please only use notes when they are after something in the music or vocal.
00:06:952 (3,4) - Add repeat to the slider.
00:08:165 (8,9) - You can merge them to a slider since they are basically after two parts of the same word (matte).
00:12:246 (4,5,6,7) - You can use two short slider here.
00:15:996 (4,5) - Ctrl+g them to create a triangle jump.
00:21:070 (7,8,9,10,11) - (8) and (10) are after nothing, please remove them and change it to a repeat slider.
00:33:864 (7,8,9) - Delete the middle one and maybe use a slider?

I won't mod the rest since the rhythm is mostly the same. Please use the above mentioned ones to make it better. Since this is Platter, you can make jump and some HDash too. I tested the distance between 1/2 notes for you, that's 2,4 for a calm jump, 3,6 is the HDash starter distance and in the middle of these two you can create tricky jumps. Use HDashes only during kiai since this is a calm song and this way it will be unique compared with the rest. HDashes mostly appear at big white ticks aka main beats, (00:44:011 (2,3) - Here is a good place for it), but you still need to watch for the rhythm to avoid useless spam.
[]

I hope this is understandable enough. Please call me back after you changed everything and got a few more mods. Or if you need some more help feel free to pm me. Catchy song and short so I will have time to take a look again. :3 Good luck. o/ (I will give you a star when it will be better. :3)

SPOILER

Sey wrote:

NO KDS; THIS IS JUST A RECHECK AND NOT A MOD YET!

  1. To create a more or less proper difficulty spread as you have in the other modes, you should create a 2nd CtB difficulty. The difficulty you have atm is a Cup, it's not even close to a Platter. So if you create a 2nd difficulty it should be a Salad. Before you start with mapping it I highly recommend you to read my information about distinction between CtB difficulties. Also you should consider reading more information about CtB mapping in the following Threads: CtB mapping tutorial, CtB modding academy. Also please take a look on the CtB Ranking Criteria.
  2. Let's make it clear. This simply is not a Platter. Here a few that you can take as reference to compare with your CtB difficulty: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/107009 , https://osu.ppy.sh/s/118690. Please take a look on them. If you ever want to get this ranked, rename it first of all to "Cup", after that we have to change all the song setup settings to the following (these are the song settings for a Cup!):
    HP Drain Rate: 3
    Circle Size: 2
    Approach Rate: 5
    Overall Difficulty: 5 (You also find the distinction of song setup settings between CtB difficulties here(second post).
  3. The perfect offset would be 772 (776 is a bit off to the first beat) here, the first note appears at 00:00:772 - and this is also the section where the offset should start (first beat of the song). I already tested this and the offset works fine throughout the whole song. Singer voice starts at 2540 btw, so 2541 is slightly wrong as well. Anyway, 772 works much better here.
I cannot really mod this until you say me what are your plans with this difficulty. Do you want to keep this as Platter or will you change this to a Cup? Depending on whether you decide I will mod it like a Cup or like a Platter. But to be honest, if you want this as Platter it needs A LOT of improvement. I still can help you pretty well to make this to a Cup.

I had a super-absence and will modify the beatmap based their modding, Thanks and Greetings. :o
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, long last mod from queue 8-)
[EruJAZZ's Insane]
00:17:982 (3) - Slider sounds weird here, mainly because it's end tail is at 00:18:423, where it actually hits the first word of the lyrics "Pikachu". I'd recommend removing the reverse end, then moving 00:18:533 (1) - to 00:18:423, or adding a note here (And the rest is up to you).

00:20:629 (2,3) - Undo the blanket, the slider is wayy to small to be forming a blanket here. It only makes the flow look funny.

00:32:100 (3) - Same issue as 00:17:982 (3) - . Please remove the reverse, and move slider or add a note on 00:32:540.

00:52:945 (2) - Why not replace this slider with 3 notes? A stream can actually work here (And, this is an Insane diff).

[Hard]
00:30:555 (1) - Should remove the note, in breaks the rhythm consistency with the previous cycle. In the last rhythm, there is a space at 00:28:790

00:38:496 (6,7) - Fix the blanket here...

00:45:776 (4,5) - Personally, replacing these notes with a slider will actually sound better, because the slider can follow the vocals long hold on the
'to'.

00:52:835 (4,5,6,7) - lol I find it funny how in the Insane diff, the mapper decides to use a slider /w reverse. Yet here...
Meh, nothing you can really do about it :|

00:57:577 (2,3) - and 00:57:908 (5) - can have a a drum clap, it definitely suits those unique beats heard in the music.

01:02:540 (3,4) - Wow, rhythm consistency destroyed here too. Why the sudden 1/1 spacing here? Consider using this rhythm here:


[Normal]
00:19:305 (5) - Nazi suggestion here, please move it away from 00:18:423 (3) - , so it makes the spacing between your objects more neater.

00:25:482 (1,2) - Bad blanket found. Fix it.
00:29:893 (2,3,1) - ^
00:31:658 (2,3) - ^
01:06:511 (2,1) - ^

The flow in this diff would've been so nice, if it weren't for those terrible blankets :(

[Okazaki's Easy]
00:27:246 (4,1) - I can understand that there's no way you could obviously keep the spacing here between these notes, because they're too far apart in beats. A friendly tip for the future, an easy way to fix this is to have the objects overlap :P Overlaps do not count as inconsistent spacing, plus no one can really complain about stacking these notes in this diff, because the objects are already too far apart in rhythm.

00:43:129 (1) - Remove finish on the tail, it's not necessary here.

00:55:923 (4,1) - Remember my suggestion for 00:27:246 (4,1) - . Don't worry you, won't need to fix this if you don't want to.

01:10:482 (3,1) - Are slightly too far apart.

Good luck!
ErunamoJAZZ
osu! Alumni
2,693 posts
Joined August 2012
ErunamoJAZZ

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[EruJAZZ's Insane]
00:17:982 (3) - Slider sounds weird here, mainly because it's end tail is at 00:18:423, where it actually hits the first word of the lyrics "Pikachu". I'd recommend removing the reverse end, then moving 00:18:533 (1) - to 00:18:423, or adding a note here (And the rest is up to you).

00:20:629 (2,3) - Undo the blanket, the slider is wayy to small to be forming a blanket here. It only makes the flow look funny.

00:32:100 (3) - Same issue as 00:17:982 (3) - . Please remove the reverse, and move slider or add a note on 00:32:540.

00:52:945 (2) - Why not replace this slider with 3 notes? A stream can actually work here (And, this is an Insane diff).
I apply all. Very thx crystalmask ^^


To Cosmolade: Me percaté que el nombre de mi diff decía "EruJAZZ" en vez de "EruJazz", que es como tengo ahora todas mis GDs. Ya lo corregí, pero te aviso por si las moscas xD


Updated Guestdiff: http://puu.sh/81FPj.osu
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
My update based in Kurokami and Sey's Modding

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Cosmolade
1,289 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, long last mod from queue 8-)
[Hard]
00:30:555 (1) - Should remove the note, in breaks the rhythm consistency with the previous cycle. In the last rhythm, there is a space at 00:28:790 Fix

00:38:496 (6,7) - Fix the blanket here... Fix

00:45:776 (4,5) - Personally, replacing these notes with a slider will actually sound better, because the slider can follow the vocals long hold on the
'to'. Fix

00:52:835 (4,5,6,7) - lol I find it funny how in the Insane diff, the mapper decides to use a slider /w reverse. Yet here...
Meh, nothing you can really do about it :| lol it's true o:

00:57:577 (2,3) - and 00:57:908 (5) - can have a a drum clap, it definitely suits those unique beats heard in the music. Fix

01:02:540 (3,4) - Wow, rhythm consistency destroyed here too. Why the sudden 1/1 spacing here? Consider using this rhythm here:
Awesome, fix :)

[Normal]
00:19:305 (5) - Nazi suggestion here, please move it away from 00:18:423 (3) - , so it makes the spacing between your objects more neater. Fix

00:25:482 (1,2) - Bad blanket found. Fix it. Fix
00:29:893 (2,3,1) - ^ nope
00:31:658 (2,3) - ^ Fix
01:06:511 (2,1) - ^ Fix

The flow in this diff would've been so nice, if it weren't for those terrible blankets :( Sorry for my noob-mapping technique ;_;

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod! ∩(＾ヮ＾∩)

Updated EruJazz's Insane & xtrem3x Platter!
(￣^￣)ゞ
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
No kudosu this time please or at least ask a BAT first since this is my second mod post and I already got once.

[General]

I found 776 as offset much better since the first beat is there.

[Platter]

HP6 is okay, but why AR/OD is 6 too? They should be at least 8. It is still very good for this bpm.

00:05:849 (10) - This part of the song is not loud, remove the clap please.
00:06:070 (1,2) - I rather not want to separate the two part of the vocal. Repeat slider with higher SV is good to map it. (Around 2,5.)
00:06:952 (3,4) - As for these try to add a repeat to (3) and use a single circle at 00:07:614
00:08:055 (2,3,4,5) - To be honest this part is kinda off. Use 1/8 and place (2) to 00:08:110, (3) to 00:08:276, (4) - 00:08:552 and (5) should start at 00:08:717. Try it, I think it sounds much better. :3
00:13:124 (6) - Leaving 00:13:570 empty is a bad idea. I know you mapped different rhythm with this sliderend, but that beat is much stronger than this. I suggest you to add a circle there at least, but maybe make (6) longer is a better idea.
00:17:872 (9) - I don't think this really needs there.
00:19:526 (5,6) - This part sound really awful. Change(5,6,7) into a slider.
00:20:629 (4,5) - Slider or add a circle between them.
00:23:938 (5,6) - Using two slider instead of these should be better. Remove the repeat, start the second slider at 00:24:599 and end where (6) is.
00:31:658 (11) - Really boring to play on this difficulty and not even goes after rhythm, or more like the 3rd repeat is follows nothing.
00:33:422 (4,5,6,7) - Same rhythm as before please.
00:38:056 (5,6) - Same as I stated before at the similar rhythm.
00:43:129 (1) - Separate into two slider with a jump between them.
00:44:011 (2) - This is also awkward since the first part follows vocal then music and at the end back to vocal. This is not really a wise choice. You have a few options to map it. 1st: 1/2 slider - circle - circle. 2nd: circle - 1/2 repeat slider. 3rd: same as 2nd except instead of a repeat slider just use one longer 1/1 slider (red to red). I prefer the 3rd option but try them out then decide for yourself.
00:45:335 (5,6,7,8) - You can use 3 1/2 slider here.
00:46:658 (1,2) - Add repeat to (1) then place a circle after it.
00:47:540 (3,4) - ^
00:53:055 (12,13) - It would be a wise choice to add one more circle to 00:53:276.
00:55:040 (5,6) - Slider. There is already too many circle.
00:58:496 (2,3,4,5) - Snap them. Unsnapped objects are unrankables.
01:00:335 (4,5) - Slider?
01:07:173 (5,6) - I told you before.
01:13:680 (5) - Move to 01:13:570.
01:14:783 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I found much problem here so I decided instead of trying to correct them, better if I try something new. I can't do screenshot so I hope my instructions will be clear enough. Start (10) at 01:14:893 end at 01:15:224, 01:15:335 - circle, 00:15:445 - circle, 00:15:610 - 01:15:776 1/8 stream.
01:16:658 (17) - This is just a simple 1/2, do not map extra stuff please.
01:18:092 (24) - This follows nothing here since there the rhythm is 1/2 later or sooner than this one.
[]

Okay, basically I re-maped your whole diff since what I mentioned above can be use on several parts in the song. This is more like a GD from me. q.q And I still mentioned nothing about patterns. orz Currently this diff is still awful and needs a lot of work. But I'm not here to map it for you if its not my diff, you need to figure out some things for yourself tho I can help you a demo diff which contains useful informations about patterning and rhythm. I hope it will be useful to you.

/And you new combos are still too high. Please try to keep it below 10. Best way to do it is to use NC at every big white tick (main beat). I did it just fine in my example map. :3

SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:Ｘ海峡Ｙ景色
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Tags:Anime Ending pikachu ErunamoJAZZ Neku okazaki -Anhedonia- xtrem3x
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Maybe this map is more like a Rain, but as a pattern example works just fine. I almost ended up finish it anyways. lol Catchy song thats for sure. I personally found 1/2 much better during mapping, just a few place which is actually 1/4 or 1/8 but feel free to keep some of them. But watch the rhythm closely since sometimes you can ignore one or more beat or just use the droplet in the long slider to cover it.

Good luck once more. Feel free to ask me if you need some help just don't give up. Nothing can work at first so just keep trying. Experiment with the editor on this diff, maybe it will end up just awesome.
xtrem3x
1,781 posts
Joined July 2009
xtrem3x
SPOILER
-------
[spoilerbox]

Kurokami wrote:

No kudosu this time please or at least ask a BAT first since this is my second mod post and I already got once.

[General]

I found 776 as offset much better since the first beat is there.

[Platter]

HP6 is okay, but why AR/OD is 6 too? They should be at least 8. It is still very good for this bpm.

00:05:849 (10) - This part of the song is not loud, remove the clap please.
00:06:070 (1,2) - I rather not want to separate the two part of the vocal. Repeat slider with higher SV is good to map it. (Around 2,5.)
00:06:952 (3,4) - As for these try to add a repeat to (3) and use a single circle at 00:07:614
00:08:055 (2,3,4,5) - To be honest this part is kinda off. Use 1/8 and place (2) to 00:08:110, (3) to 00:08:276, (4) - 00:08:552 and (5) should start at 00:08:717. Try it, I think it sounds much better. :3
00:13:124 (6) - Leaving 00:13:570 empty is a bad idea. I know you mapped different rhythm with this sliderend, but that beat is much stronger than this. I suggest you to add a circle there at least, but maybe make (6) longer is a better idea.
00:17:872 (9) - I don't think this really needs there.
00:19:526 (5,6) - This part sound really awful. Change(5,6,7) into a slider.
00:20:629 (4,5) - Slider or add a circle between them.
00:23:938 (5,6) - Using two slider instead of these should be better. Remove the repeat, start the second slider at 00:24:599 and end where (6) is.
00:31:658 (11) - Really boring to play on this difficulty and not even goes after rhythm, or more like the 3rd repeat is follows nothing.
00:33:422 (4,5,6,7) - Same rhythm as before please.
00:38:056 (5,6) - Same as I stated before at the similar rhythm.
00:43:129 (1) - Separate into two slider with a jump between them.
00:44:011 (2) - This is also awkward since the first part follows vocal then music and at the end back to vocal. This is not really a wise choice. You have a few options to map it. 1st: 1/2 slider - circle - circle. 2nd: circle - 1/2 repeat slider. 3rd: same as 2nd except instead of a repeat slider just use one longer 1/1 slider (red to red). I prefer the 3rd option but try them out then decide for yourself.
00:45:335 (5,6,7,8) - You can use 3 1/2 slider here.
00:46:658 (1,2) - Add repeat to (1) then place a circle after it.
00:47:540 (3,4) - ^
00:53:055 (12,13) - It would be a wise choice to add one more circle to 00:53:276.
00:55:040 (5,6) - Slider. There is already too many circle.
00:58:496 (2,3,4,5) - Snap them. Unsnapped objects are unrankables.
01:00:335 (4,5) - Slider?
01:07:173 (5,6) - I told you before.
01:13:680 (5) - Move to 01:13:570.
01:14:783 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I found much problem here so I decided instead of trying to correct them, better if I try something new. I can't do screenshot so I hope my instructions will be clear enough. Start (10) at 01:14:893 end at 01:15:224, 01:15:335 - circle, 00:15:445 - circle, 00:15:610 - 01:15:776 1/8 stream.
01:16:658 (17) - This is just a simple 1/2, do not map extra stuff please.
01:18:092 (24) - This follows nothing here since there the rhythm is 1/2 later or sooner than this one.
[]

Okay, basically I re-maped your whole diff since what I mentioned above can be use on several parts in the song. This is more like a GD from me. q.q And I still mentioned nothing about patterns. orz Currently this diff is still awful and needs a lot of work. But I'm not here to map it for you if its not my diff, you need to figure out some things for yourself tho I can help you a demo diff which contains useful informations about patterning and rhythm. I hope it will be useful to you.

/And you new combos are still too high. Please try to keep it below 10. Best way to do it is to use NC at every big white tick (main beat). I did it just fine in my example map. :3

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SPOILER
Maybe this map is more like a Rain, but as a pattern example works just fine. I almost ended up finish it anyways. lol Catchy song thats for sure. I personally found 1/2 much better during mapping, just a few place which is actually 1/4 or 1/8 but feel free to keep some of them. But watch the rhythm closely since sometimes you can ignore one or more beat or just use the droplet in the long slider to cover it.

Good luck once more. Feel free to ask me if you need some help just don't give up. Nothing can work at first so just keep trying. Experiment with the editor on this diff, maybe it will end up just awesome.


I liked your example, I will add to my map and try to do according to that, and then help me define that difficulty would be correct, and thanks for the modding.

I will 2 test versions, one in platter (with your modding) and rain considering your example.
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,913 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
From my insane / Extra queue:
[EruJazz's Insane]
Ever considered using custom colours? ;o

  1. 00:07:835 (1,2) - i think those 2 should be shortened to the next smaller 1/6 tick
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:717 (3) - this one looked kinda uneven to me, so you might try to recreate an even form by using Grid lvl 2 and then rotate it afterwards to make something nice and even something like that:
    SPOILER

    i think that looks nicer.
  3. 00:18:423 (1) - placing this one underneath 00:17:982 (3) - creates some strange flow, you might want to try sth like this
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:540 (4) - maybe put a NC there? :D
  5. 00:32:540 (4,5,6,7) - might also consider moving this one because of flow
  6. 00:54:599 (3,4) - might want to have the gabs between those parallel slider the same as here: 00:53:717 (1,2) -
  7. 01:02:871 - consider mapping this vocal aswell because you did that all the other times too (might make 01:02:761 (3) - an 1/4 slider therefore)
  8. 01:05:188 (1) - might move this so it properly stacks with the 01:03:864 (2) - in the editor?
    SPOILER
That's all.

Gl :D
aabc271
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aabc271
So, some days ago I was requested to mod this, and finally I'm here :3
Sorry for late. I was busy due to busy public exam period x_x
Anyway, let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

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[General]

• (For both taiko diffs) Use 80% volume throughout the diff instead ? 100% seems to be covering the music quite much, esp in Oni.

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[ Zukisinx's Oni]

• 00:25:261 (129) - Delete this ? ( To split the long section at 00:22:283 ~ 00:36:070 )
• 00:28:790 (151) - ^
• 00:39:820 (220) - ^ ( So that kkd becomes kd, which makes patterns more consistent with the 2-plets at 00:36:401 )
• 00:46:438 (264) - ^ ( Splitting long section 00:36:401 ~ 00:58:129 )
• 00:49:967 (286) - ^

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

Maybe it's me, but I think having even-plets x2 in a row sound better than "even-plets, single note, even-plets"

00:26:364 (135~139) - imo oo oo o will fit better ? ( Like this )

00:40:482 (224~228) - oo oo o ? ( Like this )

01:09:599 (408~412) - ^

Hitsounds are fitting closely to drums or creating nice custom patterns
Nice try overall :3

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[ Zukisinx's Futsuu]

• Change SV to 1.4 ? I think for futsuu, 1.6 is probably too fast and should be avoided

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

01:18:423 (230~233) - o o o o ? ( Following pitch of vocal, while still reasonably fitting to the drum. See if you like this )

Overall ok. A rather hard futsuu but within the reasonable range
Patterns are used pretty well and so I think it's ok to keep most things in this diff unchanged

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Seems the taiko diffs are ok for me
I think I'll taiko icon this after checking the above ~
Star and good luck ~ ;)
ErunamoJAZZ
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Okoratu wrote:

From my insane / Extra queue:
[EruJazz's Insane]
Ever considered using custom colours? ;o

  1. 00:07:835 (1,2) - i think those 2 should be shortened to the next smaller 1/6 tick
    SPOILER
  2. 00:08:717 (3) - this one looked kinda uneven to me, so you might try to recreate an even form by using Grid lvl 2 and then rotate it afterwards to make something nice and even something like that:
    SPOILER

    i think that looks nicer.
  3. 00:18:423 (1) - placing this one underneath 00:17:982 (3) - creates some strange flow, you might want to try sth like this
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:540 (4) - maybe put a NC there? :D
  5. 00:32:540 (4,5,6,7) - might also consider moving this one because of flow
  6. 00:54:599 (3,4) - might want to have the gabs between those parallel slider the same as here: 00:53:717 (1,2) -
  7. 01:02:871 - consider mapping this vocal aswell because you did that all the other times too (might make 01:02:761 (3) - an 1/4 slider therefore)
  8. 01:05:188 (1) - might move this so it properly stacks with the 01:03:864 (2) - in the editor?
    SPOILER
That's all.
all apply except 00:18:423 (1) - , i dont agree.
Gl :D
Thx.
Updated: http://puu.sh/8fCbz.osu
-Kazu-
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-Kazu-

aabc271 wrote:

[ Zukisinx's Oni]

• 00:25:261 (129) - Delete this ? ( To split the long section at 00:22:283 ~ 00:36:070 ) Nah, theres a little sound in the background i stuck to
• 00:28:790 (151) - ^ ^
• 00:39:820 (220) - ^ ( So that kkd becomes kd, which makes patterns more consistent with the 2-plets at 00:36:401 ) Both ways feels like having a nice consistence but i prefer kkd as without this note it feels a little empty
• 00:46:438 (264) - ^ ( Splitting long section 00:36:401 ~ 00:58:129 ) ok
• 00:49:967 (286) - ^ W-why..

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

Maybe it's me, but I think having even-plets x2 in a row sound better than "even-plets, single note, even-plets"

00:26:364 (135~139) - imo oo oo o will fit better ? ( Like this ) Most of those patterns are structured in a apart from the song, like putting my own drum patterns into the song

00:40:482 (224~228) - oo oo o ? ( Like this ) I will be honest and i think i should've say this in the previous point but i based in Roko-don's Taiko Oni at 00:31:053

01:09:599 (408~412) - ^

Hitsounds are fitting closely to drums or creating nice custom patterns
Nice try overall :3

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[ Zukisinx's Futsuu]

• Change SV to 1.4 ? I think for futsuu, 1.6 is probably too fast and should be avoided omg you are right, didnt notice this

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

01:18:423 (230~233) - o o o o ? ( Following pitch of vocal, while still reasonably fitting to the drum. See if you like this ) Someone else said this before and i prefer this as it is xD

Overall ok. A rather hard futsuu but within the reasonable range
Patterns are used pretty well and so I think it's ok to keep most things in this diff unchanged

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Seems the taiko diffs are ok for me
I think I'll taiko icon this after checking the above ~
Star and good luck ~ ;)
Zukisinx's Oni
Zukisinx's Futsuu
Cosmolade
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I Change the video! :3
All mods applied!
Kurokami
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aabc, you modded this but not mine tho I requested about half a year ago? /me cries in the corner
waxman
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[EruJazz's Insane]
00:02:982 (2,3) - spacing is wrong. you can change like the same as 00:03:313 (4,5,6,7)
00:08:717 (3) - The end of slider is 00:09:489. I guess...
00:09:710 (1) - The beginning of spinner is 00:09:599
00:11:695 (1) - NC? But Your idea is not too bad for ranked.
00:18:423 (1) - Overlap with 00:17:871 (2). Then you would change 00:18:533 (2,3) for beauty.
00:23:276 - add circle. It's unnecessary a bit. Overlap with 00:23:055 (1).
00:29:453 (4,5,6) - move to x:352 y:304
00:33:423 (1,2) - spacing. you can change like the same as 00:33:754 (2,3,4) (High recommended)
00:43:018 (7,1) - spacing is wrong. you can change like the same as 00:42:467 (4,5,6). Maybe there is no issue to be ranked tho.
00:56:915 (2,3) - 00:57:246 (4,5) - (High recommended) those space between circles is not same distance...
01:02:982 (5,6) - NC. If you like this pattern, add NC.Otherwise, change to correct spacing.
01:15:335 (5,1) - spacing? it's too far. you can change like the same as 01:14:893 (4,5).

[Hard]
00:06:952 (4) - NC. because you took space wider at 00:06:952 (4,5,6,7). It's unarankable because of Hard Diff.
00:20:188 (1,2) - too far. You should follow the spacing rule. because this is Hard Diff and 1st map for ranked. (High recommended)
00:28:129 (5,6,1) - shorter distance. the same as 00:27:026 (1,2,3,4,5). My ideas make me bored... Sorry. But it's for ranked. (uinrankable)
00:29:232 (2,3,4,5) - ^ (uinrankable)
00:43:129 (1,2,3,4) - those spacing are strange. the same as 00:43:790 (4,5,6). (High recommended)
00:45:114 (2,3) - too far.
00:58:790 (2,3,4,5) - move to x:336 y:144
01:00:996 (5,6,1) - Those spacing are too far.
01:13:790 (4) - move to x:60 y:64
01:14:011 (5,6) - too far.

Hard Diff has a lot of issues. Especially, spacing. Why did I say that? Because It's Hard Diff you know. So basically you should follow the spacing rule.
Have you ever used AiMOD? How to use　: File ⇒ Open AiMOD. Sometimes it helps you. :D

GOOD LUCK.
xtrem3x
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xtrem3x
has updated my diff, I sent to Cosmo-chan and is based on the Kurokami's Modding

Also ... Cosmo-chan ... cuando se descarga mi diff se regresa al valor AR=6 y OD=6 y debe ser


HP=5
CS=8
AR=8
OD=9
Last edited by xtrem3x , edited 1 time in total.
ErunamoJAZZ
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waxman wrote:

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[EruJazz's Insane]
00:02:982 (2,3) - spacing is wrong. you can change like the same as 00:03:313 (4,5,6,7) nope, i want a little jump here.
00:08:717 (3) - The end of slider is 00:09:489. I guess... nahh, in 00:09:599 - i listen a beat.
00:09:710 (1) - The beginning of spinner is 00:09:599 ^
00:11:695 (1) - NC? But Your idea is not too bad for ranked.
00:18:423 (1) - Overlap with 00:17:871 (2). Then you would change 00:18:533 (2,3) for beauty. done :)
00:23:276 - add circle. It's unnecessary a bit. Overlap with 00:23:055 (1). sorry, but no.
00:29:453 (4,5,6) - move to x:352 y:304 lol, why?, btw... i overlap thi whit 00:27:246 (1) - was better ;)
00:33:423 (1,2) - spacing. you can change like the same as 00:33:754 (2,3,4) (High recommended), oh, sorry, i think that your suggestion is less readable.
00:43:018 (7,1) - spacing is wrong. you can change like the same as 00:42:467 (4,5,6). Maybe there is no issue to be ranked tho. fix
00:56:915 (2,3) - 00:57:246 (4,5) - (High recommended) those space between circles is not same distance... fix
01:02:982 (5,6) - NC. If you like this pattern, add NC.Otherwise, change to correct spacing. okay
01:15:335 (5,1) - spacing? it's too far. you can change like the same as 01:14:893 (4,5). sorry, but no, for readable.
Arigatou wax-san :)
Updated diff: http://puu.sh/8sl2E.osu
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