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40mP - Cocoro Palette

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captin1
[Easy]
01:19:610 (4) - seems you added the finish on this note though, and it does work well. Might also be good to nc here instead of 01:19:999 (1) - since this is where the new phrase is.

I get that you're adding finishes on the trumpet sound and that works well, but there is a cymbal sound on the note before it that I think deserves the finish too.

Just want to make sure you understand what I mean
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luxoDeh

captin1 wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:610 (4) - seems you added the finish on this note though, and it does work well. Might also be good to nc here instead of 01:19:999 (1) - since this is where the new phrase is. lol, that was the finish I forgot to delete while trying to fix in your mod XD

I get that you're adding finishes on the trumpet sound and that works well, but there is a cymbal sound on the note before it that I think deserves the finish too.

Just want to make sure you understand what I mean
Ok, I think I understand. My only problem was that adding a finish there there would have been 2 finishes one near the other and I thought it didn't sound that good (eaven if I knew there was the cymbal sound, I just heared and I thought it was better without the finish). I tryed to put a notmal finish insted of a soft one and it seem a better to hear maybe... so I think this is fixed now XD
captin1
Great, glad we cleared that up!

Rebubbled! Shouldn't be too much longer now
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

captin1 wrote:

Great, glad we cleared that up!

Rebubbled! Shouldn't be too much longer now
Thank you!! :)
Zero__wind
Hopefuly a mod will be here soon
Be prepared to add tons of claps
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Zero__wind wrote:

Hopefuly a mod will be here soon
Be prepared to add tons of claps
LOL ok XD
Zero__wind
sorry to be a bit late, quite busy and kinda under the weather

General
preview point unsnapped, recommended to reset at 01:07:045 -

Easy
HP2 for better diff spread?
00:13:181 - a soft finish is preferred at this point instead of the drum one, there's quite obvious cymbal crash sound in the music
00:36:752 (2) - maybe CTRL+G for better flow?
00:52:337 - need a drum finish? referring to 00:55:454 -
00:54:675 - ^ to be consistent with 00:51:558 (1) -
01:00:908 (1) - may add drum finish on head?
03:28:181 (1) - the clap should be moved from its end to its head according to the music
03:30:129 - better remove the clap as there's no such drum in the music
03:33:246 (2) - ^
03:30:908 (4,5) - similar issue, I think you should remove the clap on 4 and 5's tail, and add a clap on 5's head instead
03:34:025 (3) - the clap on head should be moved to the end to match with the music

Normal
00:13:181 - same as Easy
00:54:675 - all the same, need drum finish here, and more for this section
01:18:636 (4) - need a clap at its end just like 01:17:856 (3) - , they share the same drum sound in the music
01:31:103 (5) - ^
02:58:376 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
03:12:402 (4) - ^
03:09:480 (5) - the clap on head is out of place, should be quite the same as 03:07:921 -
03:24:869 (5) - make this slider 1/2 shorter like other similar ones? and add a circle with clap at 03:25:454 -

Hard
00:48:636 (1) - a clap would the drums here nicely
00:50:194 - ^
01:19:025 - ^
01:15:713 (5) - redundant clap, better remove it
01:33:246 - ^
02:14:350 - ^
02:07:337 (3,4) - rhythm a bit awkward, considering you're mostly following the guitar in this part. you'd better start a slider from 02:07:726 - to catch that strum of guitar, maybe like
02:30:324 (5) - need a clap at end
02:57:597 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
02:58:181 (3) - tooooo cureved, better adjust its shape a bit
02:58:765 (4) - ^ also a bit and need a clap on head to go with the snares
03:11:233 (3) - need a clap on head
03:12:402 (5) - need a clap at end
03:24:480 - ^

Insane
00:05:194 - redundant clap, better remove it
00:12:791 - need a clap to go with the dums
00:13:181 - same as other diffs, better use soft finish instead
00:19:707 (4) - I recommend you use a clap here as you're exactly mapping to that drum sound. Also I'd say there're tons of similar points in this diff like 00:20:291 (8) - , 00:22:824 (3,6) - and so on. plz make them al consistent if you decide so
00:25:649 (3) - need a clap at end
00:49:804 (1) - ^
01:30:324 (1,3) - ^
01:33:441 (1) - ^
02:30:324 (3) - ^
03:11:623 (1,3) - ^
03:24:090 (1,3) - ^
00:52:434 (5) - maybe clap for this, and similar ones, 00:53:993 (5) - , 00:55:551 (5) - and 00:57:110 (4) -
02:07:726 (6) - better replace it with a 1/2 slider with same shape as 02:07:142 (5) - . the blank at 02:07:921 - feels really weird to me as the music in this part is quite coherent and smooth, so shall the rhythm be
02:34:220 (1) - I recommend to remove this circle, it's really too close to the spinner, considering it's in a soft part

these should be all
call me back
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Zero__wind wrote:

sorry to be a bit late, quite busy and kinda under the weather

General
preview point unsnapped, recommended to reset at 01:07:045 -

Easy
HP2 for better diff spread?
00:13:181 - a soft finish is preferred at this point instead of the drum one, there's quite obvious cymbal crash sound in the music
00:36:752 (2) - maybe CTRL+G for better flow?
00:52:337 - need a drum finish? referring to 00:55:454 -
00:54:675 - ^ to be consistent with 00:51:558 (1) -
01:00:908 (1) - may add drum finish on head?
03:28:181 (1) - the clap should be moved from its end to its head according to the music
03:30:129 - better remove the clap as there's no such drum in the music
03:33:246 (2) - ^
03:30:908 (4,5) - similar issue, I think you should remove the clap on 4 and 5's tail, and add a clap on 5's head instead
03:34:025 (3) - the clap on head should be moved to the end to match with the music

Normal
00:13:181 - same as Easy
00:54:675 - all the same, need drum finish here, and more for this section
01:18:636 (4) - need a clap at its end just like 01:17:856 (3) - , they share the same drum sound in the music
01:31:103 (5) - ^
02:58:376 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
03:12:402 (4) - ^
03:09:480 (5) - the clap on head is out of place, should be quite the same as 03:07:921 -
03:24:869 (5) - make this slider 1/2 shorter like other similar ones? and add a circle with clap at 03:25:454 -

Hard
00:48:636 (1) - a clap would the drums here nicely
00:50:194 - ^
01:19:025 - ^
01:15:713 (5) - redundant clap, better remove it
01:33:246 - ^
02:14:350 - ^
02:07:337 (3,4) - rhythm a bit awkward, considering you're mostly following the guitar in this part. you'd better start a slider from 02:07:726 - to catch that strum of guitar, maybe like
02:30:324 (5) - need a clap at end
02:57:597 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
02:58:181 (3) - tooooo cureved, better adjust its shape a bit
02:58:765 (4) - ^ also a bit and need a clap on head to go with the snares
03:11:233 (3) - need a clap on head
03:12:402 (5) - need a clap at end
03:24:480 - ^

Insane
00:05:194 - redundant clap, better remove it
00:12:791 - need a clap to go with the dums
00:13:181 - same as other diffs, better use soft finish instead
00:19:707 (4) - I recommend you use a clap here as you're exactly mapping to that drum sound. Also I'd say there're tons of similar points in this diff like 00:20:291 (8) - , 00:22:824 (3,6) - and so on. plz make them al consistent if you decide so
00:25:649 (3) - need a clap at end
00:49:804 (1) - ^
01:30:324 (1,3) - ^
01:33:441 (1) - ^
02:30:324 (3) - ^
03:11:623 (1,3) - ^
03:24:090 (1,3) - ^
00:52:434 (5) - maybe clap for this, and similar ones, 00:53:993 (5) - , 00:55:551 (5) - and 00:57:110 (4) -
02:07:726 (6) - better replace it with a 1/2 slider with same shape as 02:07:142 (5) - . the blank at 02:07:921 - feels really weird to me as the music in this part is quite coherent and smooth, so shall the rhythm be
02:34:220 (1) - I recommend to remove this circle, it's really too close to the spinner, considering it's in a soft part

these should be all
call me back
Thank you!!! All fixed :D
Zero__wind
Ranked.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Zero__wind wrote:

Ranked.
Thank you!!! :D
Secretpipe
Gratz~
Melophobia
Unranking due to the title being badly translated not romanized, the correct title is "Cocoro Palette".
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Melophobia wrote:

Unranking due to the title being badly translated not romanized, the correct title is "Cocoro Palette".
fixed
Asphyxia
Rebub~
Melophobia
Reranked.
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
Thanks again :)
Satellite
Gratz~~
Ozato Fumika
gratz~~
Kettlerr
Nice map but I lost 13pp for playing it first time ._.
AruOtta
Congratz :D
Gexigamma
congratz luxo :D
Lanturn
wow... It's been forever since I've seen this song. Congrats on finally getting this ranked!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
Yey! Thank you everyone!!! :)

(and... I'm terribly sorry for who lost his score... >.< if only we noticed the title was wrong before.. :( )
KantoKun
congratz!!
MakixnicoLove
You've really written "cocoro" with "c" and not "k"...
:facepalm:
But thanks :)
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Pedomoustachu wrote:

You've really written "cocoro" with "c" and not "k"...
:facepalm:
But thanks :)
Melo told me.. he/she(?) is japanese.. I think he/she know it better than us -.-
thank you anyway
sennank
40mP songggg \ ^o^ / Thanks for make this, i really likeee ittt ^^
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