I don't see why the Insane is AR9. AR8 fits this great. Tick Rate 2 fits the song best.
Also give more recovery time after your spinners in the Easy/Normal.

Garven wrote:

I don't see why the Insane is AR9. AR8 fits this great. Tick Rate 2 fits the song best.
Also give more recovery time after your spinners in the Easy/Normal.

Thank you for checking ^.^
everything fixed. and I put AR7 on hard also because I couldn't leave AR8 like the insane.
And I just fixed a couple of spinners in easy and normal, because I thought the most of them were ok.

...

hi
quick check to rebub since Garven can't for a bit

[Easy]
AR3 would fit the spread better
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:14:350 (1,1) - This is probably one of the gaps after spinners Garven was talking about. You could just have a 1/1 slider starting on 00:18:830 - to help
2. 00:42:207 (1) - This would look better if you curved it to blanket the end of 00:41:038 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:713 (1) - x236 y88? so it blankets 00:44:934 (3) - better
4. 01:19:220 (3) - would be best if you changed to two circles, so that the downbeat on 01:19:610 - has a click.
5. 01:24:675 (3,1) - blankets not quite there, double check these
6. 02:31:493 (1,1) - Probably another small gap, you could do this to fix it.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 03:12:986 (2) - same as 01:19:220 (3) -

Hitsounding

1. 00:09:480 (3) - remember to fix your slidertick hitsound lines to work with your new tick rate, since I don't think you want all of these snare hits. Happens a lot throughout the diff so check them all.
2. 00:54:675 (1) - drum finish or clap on head? would fit with your pattern
3. 01:19:610 - normal addition finish here? if you changed or not it should still be here
4. 03:13:376 - ^

[Normal]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 01:04:025 (1,1) - Since this gap is a bit short, I'm more worried about how far this note is from the center where most people spin. I think you should move it closer.

Hitsounding

1. 01:09:090 - since you now have more sliderticks you could add a clap here. check other spots for this as well
2. 01:19:610 (1) - same as easy
3. 03:13:376 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:13:571 (5,1) - check your stack here
2. 02:05:973 (6,7) - looks a bit weird with the two different shapes. Also the NC should be 02:06:363 (7) - not 02:06:752 (1) -
3. 02:26:428 (5,6) - space out at 1.2 like you had the notes before

Hitsounding

1. 00:16:103 - same as I mentioned in normal
2. 01:19:610 (1) - same as easy
3. 03:13:376 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Could go OD -1 to match with your new AR (will also fix the old star rating)
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:12:207 (5,6) - check your stack here, quite a few of these in this diff, and with how you patterned it might be a good idea to make sure they're all exactly right

Hitsounding

1. 01:19:610 (1) - same as easy
2. 03:13:376 (1) - ^

call me back~

captin1 wrote:

hi
quick check to rebub since Garven can't for a bit

[Easy]
AR3 would fit the spread better ok
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:14:350 (1,1) - This is probably one of the gaps after spinners Garven was talking about. You could just have a 1/1 slider starting on 00:18:830 - to help ok, anyway I didn't thought it was a big problem since there was a white thick before the slider... anyway changed
2. 00:42:207 (1) - This would look better if you curved it to blanket the end of 00:41:038 (4) -
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:713 (1) - x236 y88? so it blankets 00:44:934 (3) - better ok
4. 01:19:220 (3) - would be best if you changed to two circles, so that the downbeat on 01:19:610 - has a click. ok
5. 01:24:675 (3,1) - blankets not quite there, double check these fixed
6. 02:31:493 (1,1) - Probably another small gap, you could do this to fix it. ok
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 03:12:986 (2) - same as 01:19:220 (3) - fixed

Hitsounding

1. 00:09:480 (3) - remember to fix your slidertick hitsound lines to work with your new tick rate, since I don't think you want all of these snare hits. Happens a lot throughout the diff so check them all. fixed all
2. 00:54:675 (1) - drum finish or clap on head? would fit with your pattern ok added finish
3. 01:19:610 - normal addition finish here? if you changed or not it should still be here hm... not sure about this, because there should be some more place to put finish, but I added them all where there it the trumpet sound so... I'm not sure about changing here
4. 03:13:376 - ^

[Normal]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 01:04:025 (1,1) - Since this gap is a bit short, I'm more worried about how far this note is from the center where most people spin. I think you should move it closer. hm... I didn't thought it was a problem (maybe it's because I am one ot the people that don't spin in the centre, that's probably because I'm still a mouse player) anyway fixed

Hitsounding all fixed

1. 01:09:090 - since you now have more sliderticks you could add a clap here. check other spots for this as well added in all diff where needed
2. 01:19:610 (1) - same as easy same as easy
3. 03:13:376 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:13:571 (5,1) - check your stack here ok
2. 02:05:973 (6,7) - looks a bit weird with the two different shapes. Also the NC should be 02:06:363 (7) - not 02:06:752 (1) - ok
3. 02:26:428 (5,6) - space out at 1.2 like you had the notes before tryed O.o

Hitsounding

1. 00:16:103 - same as I mentioned in normal ok
2. 01:19:610 (1) - same as easy same as easy
3. 03:13:376 (1) - ^

[Insane]
Could go OD -1 to match with your new AR (will also fix the old star rating) good :3
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning

1. 00:12:207 (5,6) - check your stack here, quite a few of these in this diff, and with how you patterned it might be a good idea to make sure they're all exactly right checked all, but the most of them were ok

Hitsounding

1. 01:19:610 (1) - same as easy same as easy
2. 03:13:376 (1) - ^

call me back~

Thank you for checking

[Easy]
01:19:610 (4) - seems you added the finish on this note though, and it does work well. Might also be good to nc here instead of 01:19:999 (1) - since this is where the new phrase is.

I get that you're adding finishes on the trumpet sound and that works well, but there is a cymbal sound on the note before it that I think deserves the finish too.

Just want to make sure you understand what I mean

captin1 wrote:

[Easy]
01:19:610 (4) - seems you added the finish on this note though, and it does work well. Might also be good to nc here instead of 01:19:999 (1) - since this is where the new phrase is. lol, that was the finish I forgot to delete while trying to fix in your mod XD

I get that you're adding finishes on the trumpet sound and that works well, but there is a cymbal sound on the note before it that I think deserves the finish too.

Just want to make sure you understand what I mean

Ok, I think I understand. My only problem was that adding a finish there there would have been 2 finishes one near the other and I thought it didn't sound that good (eaven if I knew there was the cymbal sound, I just heared and I thought it was better without the finish). I tryed to put a notmal finish insted of a soft one and it seem a better to hear maybe... so I think this is fixed now XD

Great, glad we cleared that up!

Rebubbled! Shouldn't be too much longer now

captin1 wrote:

Great, glad we cleared that up!

Rebubbled! Shouldn't be too much longer now

Thank you!!

Hopefuly a mod will be here soon
Be prepared to add tons of claps

Zero__wind wrote:

Hopefuly a mod will be here soon
Be prepared to add tons of claps

LOL ok XD

sorry to be a bit late, quite busy and kinda under the weather

General
preview point unsnapped, recommended to reset at 01:07:045 -

Easy
HP2 for better diff spread?
00:13:181 - a soft finish is preferred at this point instead of the drum one, there's quite obvious cymbal crash sound in the music
00:36:752 (2) - maybe CTRL+G for better flow?
00:52:337 - need a drum finish? referring to 00:55:454 -
00:54:675 - ^ to be consistent with 00:51:558 (1) -
01:00:908 (1) - may add drum finish on head?
03:28:181 (1) - the clap should be moved from its end to its head according to the music
03:30:129 - better remove the clap as there's no such drum in the music
03:33:246 (2) - ^
03:30:908 (4,5) - similar issue, I think you should remove the clap on 4 and 5's tail, and add a clap on 5's head instead
03:34:025 (3) - the clap on head should be moved to the end to match with the music

Normal
00:13:181 - same as Easy
00:54:675 - all the same, need drum finish here, and more for this section
01:18:636 (4) - need a clap at its end just like 01:17:856 (3) - , they share the same drum sound in the music
01:31:103 (5) - ^
02:58:376 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
03:12:402 (4) - ^
03:09:480 (5) - the clap on head is out of place, should be quite the same as 03:07:921 -
03:24:869 (5) - make this slider 1/2 shorter like other similar ones? and add a circle with clap at 03:25:454 -

Hard
00:48:636 (1) - a clap would the drums here nicely
00:50:194 - ^
01:19:025 - ^
01:15:713 (5) - redundant clap, better remove it
01:33:246 - ^
02:14:350 - ^
02:07:337 (3,4) - rhythm a bit awkward, considering you're mostly following the guitar in this part. you'd better start a slider from 02:07:726 - to catch that strum of guitar, maybe like
02:30:324 (5) - need a clap at end
02:57:597 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
02:58:181 (3) - tooooo cureved, better adjust its shape a bit
02:58:765 (4) - ^ also a bit and need a clap on head to go with the snares
03:11:233 (3) - need a clap on head
03:12:402 (5) - need a clap at end
03:24:480 - ^

Insane
00:05:194 - redundant clap, better remove it
00:12:791 - need a clap to go with the dums
00:13:181 - same as other diffs, better use soft finish instead
00:19:707 (4) - I recommend you use a clap here as you're exactly mapping to that drum sound. Also I'd say there're tons of similar points in this diff like 00:20:291 (8) - , 00:22:824 (3,6) - and so on. plz make them al consistent if you decide so
00:25:649 (3) - need a clap at end
00:49:804 (1) - ^
01:30:324 (1,3) - ^
01:33:441 (1) - ^
02:30:324 (3) - ^
03:11:623 (1,3) - ^
03:24:090 (1,3) - ^
00:52:434 (5) - maybe clap for this, and similar ones, 00:53:993 (5) - , 00:55:551 (5) - and 00:57:110 (4) -
02:07:726 (6) - better replace it with a 1/2 slider with same shape as 02:07:142 (5) - . the blank at 02:07:921 - feels really weird to me as the music in this part is quite coherent and smooth, so shall the rhythm be
02:34:220 (1) - I recommend to remove this circle, it's really too close to the spinner, considering it's in a soft part

these should be all
call me back

Zero__wind wrote:

sorry to be a bit late, quite busy and kinda under the weather

General
preview point unsnapped, recommended to reset at 01:07:045 -

Easy
HP2 for better diff spread?
00:13:181 - a soft finish is preferred at this point instead of the drum one, there's quite obvious cymbal crash sound in the music
00:36:752 (2) - maybe CTRL+G for better flow?
00:52:337 - need a drum finish? referring to 00:55:454 -
00:54:675 - ^ to be consistent with 00:51:558 (1) -
01:00:908 (1) - may add drum finish on head?
03:28:181 (1) - the clap should be moved from its end to its head according to the music
03:30:129 - better remove the clap as there's no such drum in the music
03:33:246 (2) - ^
03:30:908 (4,5) - similar issue, I think you should remove the clap on 4 and 5's tail, and add a clap on 5's head instead
03:34:025 (3) - the clap on head should be moved to the end to match with the music

Normal
00:13:181 - same as Easy
00:54:675 - all the same, need drum finish here, and more for this section
01:18:636 (4) - need a clap at its end just like 01:17:856 (3) - , they share the same drum sound in the music
01:31:103 (5) - ^
02:58:376 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
03:12:402 (4) - ^
03:09:480 (5) - the clap on head is out of place, should be quite the same as 03:07:921 -
03:24:869 (5) - make this slider 1/2 shorter like other similar ones? and add a circle with clap at 03:25:454 -

Hard
00:48:636 (1) - a clap would the drums here nicely
00:50:194 - ^
01:19:025 - ^
01:15:713 (5) - redundant clap, better remove it
01:33:246 - ^
02:14:350 - ^
02:07:337 (3,4) - rhythm a bit awkward, considering you're mostly following the guitar in this part. you'd better start a slider from 02:07:726 - to catch that strum of guitar, maybe like
02:30:324 (5) - need a clap at end
02:57:597 (2) - ^
02:59:934 (2) - ^
02:58:181 (3) - tooooo cureved, better adjust its shape a bit
02:58:765 (4) - ^ also a bit and need a clap on head to go with the snares
03:11:233 (3) - need a clap on head
03:12:402 (5) - need a clap at end
03:24:480 - ^

Insane
00:05:194 - redundant clap, better remove it
00:12:791 - need a clap to go with the dums
00:13:181 - same as other diffs, better use soft finish instead
00:19:707 (4) - I recommend you use a clap here as you're exactly mapping to that drum sound. Also I'd say there're tons of similar points in this diff like 00:20:291 (8) - , 00:22:824 (3,6) - and so on. plz make them al consistent if you decide so
00:25:649 (3) - need a clap at end
00:49:804 (1) - ^
01:30:324 (1,3) - ^
01:33:441 (1) - ^
02:30:324 (3) - ^
03:11:623 (1,3) - ^
03:24:090 (1,3) - ^
00:52:434 (5) - maybe clap for this, and similar ones, 00:53:993 (5) - , 00:55:551 (5) - and 00:57:110 (4) -
02:07:726 (6) - better replace it with a 1/2 slider with same shape as 02:07:142 (5) - . the blank at 02:07:921 - feels really weird to me as the music in this part is quite coherent and smooth, so shall the rhythm be
02:34:220 (1) - I recommend to remove this circle, it's really too close to the spinner, considering it's in a soft part

these should be all
call me back

Thank you!!! All fixed

Ranked.

Zero__wind wrote:

Ranked.

Thank you!!!

Gratz~

Unranking due to the title being badly translated not romanized, the correct title is "Cocoro Palette".

Melophobia wrote:

Unranking due to the title being badly translated not romanized, the correct title is "Cocoro Palette".

fixed

Rebub~

Reranked.

Thanks again

Gratz~~

gratz~~

Nice map but I lost 13pp for playing it first time ._.

congratz luxo

wow... It's been forever since I've seen this song. Congrats on finally getting this ranked!

Yey! Thank you everyone!!!

(and... I'm terribly sorry for who lost his score... >.< if only we noticed the title was wrong before.. )

congratz!!

You've really written "cocoro" with "c" and not "k"...
:facepalm:
But thanks

Pedomoustachu wrote:

You've really written "cocoro" with "c" and not "k"...
:facepalm:
But thanks

Melo told me.. he/she(?) is japanese.. I think he/she know it better than us -.-
thank you anyway

40mP songggg \ ^o^ / Thanks for make this, i really likeee ittt ^^