This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 18, 2011 at 9:55:11 AM

Artist: SHK
Title: Identity Part II
Source: O2Jam
Tags: NoHItter wanhyrzh id2
BPM: 149.97
Filesize: 4161kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.63 stars, 344 notes)
2. Insane (4.98 stars, 481 notes)
3. NoHItter's Easy (1.45 stars, 141 notes)
4. Wanh's Normal (3.7 stars, 184 notes)

Download: SHK - Identity Part II
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Herp derp

Download: SHK - Identity part II (Chacha17) [Hx5-test4-xiumeibpmandoffset].osu

Well, your timing is off.

BPM:149.94
Offset: 14,456

After that, resnap your notes and re-do your sliders

Multiple Timing Sections:

BPM: 149.5
Offset: 20

Timing Sections:

00:14:44 - BPM: 149.5

00:30:09 - BPM: 149.5

00:46:45 - BPM: 149.5

01:21:62 - BPM: 149.5

02:08:07 - BPM: 149.5

02:34:91 - BPM: 149.5

Note: Uncheck the box with the "Inherit previous time settings".

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Download: SHK - Identity part II (Chacha17) [Nx4].osu

thanks nohitter, :>

how bout Hx5, i know it has a lot of problems

btw, u mean offset 200, not 20, right?

First off on Normal (Nx4)
- For your rollers try changing your roller type. (In top of the edit window, you will see "|File|Edit|View|Options|Timing|Web|Help|" You can go into options and the first thing you should see is slider curve type. Experiment with these until you find one that suits you and your beatmap!) They should be able to swerve without catching someones eye so easily. But notice you'll have to select each one and change it.
- Some hitsounds maybe? Never forget that you can always ADD hitsounds where the song does actually use them, sometimes clap sounds good even when there isn't a clap in the song. Same goes for finish and whistle, don't forget to use hitsounds.
- Spinners? Clearly you have blank areas left for what you're going to figure out next/later. There are some parts that never seem to work with anything, try a spinner! I used to joke around before I beat mapped, "a spinner is a beatmapper's easy way out." It would seem that it could be so, and make sure to make use of break times too, no one likes a beat map that runs on for hours and hours without any breaks.
--Tip: For the empty spots, try running through a couple times and just click the beat you think would work in one spot, rearrange it later.--

And on to Hard (Hx5)
- Again hitsounds, don't forget finish can be used more than just at the end, just don't over do it. --Note: Don't forget about custom hitsounds, ask some friends (*coughmecough*) if they could do any, they help your chances of getting accepted even if you only use it once such as at the beginning, end, or an odd change in the song.--
- You need a few spinners if you can, your beat map is clearly a challenge but spinners decide the difference between pros, and suber uber haxorz. :3
- I noticed that you have a lot of super clicks where you'd end up left right clicking to get them all, it's ok for them to be stacked but ever think of unstacking one or two and making a simple square or something? (hint hint. )


---Personal Mark?---
I have always been a fan of putting your own personal mark in a song and there is a number of ways. One way is having a set skin with your song and having one of the things include your symbol. Other times you can make it with rollers or normal circles. This is never required and it never really does anything but it just reminds people who made it. (My symbol is a roller S starting at the bottom. :3)

comments please.

Chacha17 wrote:

thanks nohitter, :>

how bout Hx5, i know it has a lot of problems

btw, u mean offset 200, not 20, right?

You can apply the same timing sections on nx4 in hx5.

And sorry the offset is 200.

Here's the file for hx5

Download: SHK - Identity part II (Chacha17) [Hx5].osu

NoHItter wrote:

Chacha17 wrote:

thanks nohitter, :>

how bout Hx5, i know it has a lot of problems

btw, u mean offset 200, not 20, right?

You can apply the same timing sections on nx4 in hx5.

And sorry the offset is 200.

Here's the file for hx5

ok i'll fix it, but is the offset fine in Hx5?

Offset?

The same song has the same BPM/offset

NoHItter wrote:

Offset?

The same song has the same BPM/offset

ok thanks :>

i'll fix spacing later

in 0:53 you must fix the beat timing and also in 2:08 you must add more beat or insert a break.
anyways nice pattern for first timer

rhezimhain wrote:

in 0:53 you must fix the beat timing and also in 2:08 you must add more beat or insert a break.
anyways nice pattern for first timer

u mean, spacing? in 0:53. hehe. okay i'll fix it.

:>

ok hehe. yea in 2:08 it's still empty. :>

i'll be finishing my map now.

anyway maraming thanks for the star

at the timing at 0:27 do not use a spinner use a slidder at 00:36 there is a beat and a slidder put them 2 on the same spot at 01:53 put a break at 02:36 plz use a slidder if the beat goes faster at 02:41 put the 2 beats at the same spot oke something that i see in this beatmap

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

NoHItter wrote:

You didn't change the BPM/ offset and timing sections in Hx5

oyea wait i forgot >_>

thanks for reminding me

NX4

Slider
14:447 - 14:898 -- Shorten it to 14:848.

Overlapping notes.
Please double-check and fix the notes.

Overall
Redo distance snapping.
Shorten distance between notes for normal, and longer distances between notes for hard.

Just my opinion, but the sliders that go straight then curve then straight again don't look too neat.

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
Redo distance snapping.
Shorten distance between notes for normal, and longer distances between notes for hard.

Just my opinion, but the sliders that go straight then curve then straight again don't look too neat.

in Hx5? :>

also Hx5.

If you change the distance between notes then you have to distance snap again.

The distance between notes is up to you of course.

Hx5

54:677 - Move note to 54:476

55:480 - Move note to 55:279

58:389 - Add note here.

1:02:102 - Increase slider length to 1:02:302

1:09:025 - Move note to 1:08:924

1:09:426 - Move note to 1:09:326

1:09:827 - Move note to 1:09:928

1:10:429 - Move the whole combo one tick forwards in 1/4 time section.

1:18:055 - Move the whole combo one tick forwards in 1/4 time section.

1:19:660 - Move note to 1:19:961

1:20:062 - Move to 1:20:162

I'm stopping there.

Suggestion: At 2:37:920 enable Kiai mode.

NoHItter wrote:

Hx5

54:677 - Move note to 54:476

55:480 - Move note to 55:279

i didn't fix this

You didn't update your beatmap. . .

NoHItter wrote:

You didn't update your beatmap. . .

yea i'm working on it. :>

Made an easy diff.

The beatmaps ends at 2:02, so it doesn't actually finish the song, but it's easy diff.

Download: SHK - Identity part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Ex3].osu

NoHItter wrote:

Made an easy diff.

The beatmaps ends at 2:02, so it doesn't actually finish the song, but it's easy diff.

maybe it will take me more time to make normal

but the hard is almost done

will be busy the next days,, so uh, i'm not sure

>>>i''ll be adding your diff in the next update.

I just read about this.

Hit Ctrl+Shift+A. It helps a lot in determining wrong beat spacing.

Nx4-test

27.282 - 29.991 Streams like these are not generally ideal for Normal difficulties. Save them for Hard above difficulties.

NoHItter wrote:

Nx4-test

27.282 - 29.991 Streams like these are not generally ideal for Normal difficulties. Save them for Hard above difficulties.

i just saved a new difficulty out of Hx5-test2

i'll fix it, maybe i'll place a slider

Here.

If it's still too loud, or I made it too soft inform me.

Just replace it in the song folder.

And don't forget to full submit.

Download: SHKO2SE - Identity pt 2.mp3

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Download: SHKO2SE - Identity pt 2.mp3

BPM: 150
Offset: 74

Offset may be off but that should work I think

ok first off here is a fixed ver of ex3, i thought it would be easier to give you it modded because there was a few parts what needed a lot of modding
Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Ex3].osu

this ex3 is also too hard to be a easy map so it needs to be a normal map, its a ok map now but theres still some bits i dont like in it, but will refrain from changing them because it aint my map

also timing sorted out in #mod with the help of "O_o"

will mod other difficultys once you have upped the map with timing fixed and also most likely mod this difficulty a lil more too

nice song and will be nice map so star

EDIT
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[nx4] use 1/4 beat snap divisor for these mods

00:30:474 (1,2,3,4) - move this combo more to the left, its ugly next to the stream
00:51:074 (10) - move closer to (9)
01:09:374 (2,3,4,1,2) timing is wrong, move (2,3,4,1,2) back one click then spacing is wrong in
01:10:874 (3,4) timing is wrong, move (3) 2 clicks back and (4) one click back then move the spinner one click back too
01:15:474 - redo this break
01:18:574 (1,2,3,1,2) timing is wrong, move these notes one click back
01:19:274 (3) spacing, move to (1)
01:20:074 (2) spacing, move ferther away from (1)
01:21:974 (1,2) timing is wrong, move notes one click forwerd
01:25:374 (2) timing is wrong, move one click back
01:28:874 - add break here
01:34:074 (1,2) take new combo off (1) and put it on (2)
01:50:474 (2,3) deleate (3) then remake (2) slider to end where (3) did
01:53:174 (7,8) timing is wrong, move both one click back
01:56:374-01:59:874 - this whole area is out of time, move it all one click back then fix the break infront of it
02:20:974-02:37:574 - many many timing probs in here, your best to deleate this part then do it again, it would be faster then finding each note what is out of time
02:39:774-02:50:974 - this whole area is out of time, move it all one click back

jericho2442 wrote:

[nx4]

00:30:474 (1,2,3,4) - move this combo more to the left, its ugly next to the stream

I'll be deleting all the streams, i think they aren't appropriate for a normal diff. ;_;

jericho2442 wrote:

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[nx4] use 1/4 beat snap divisor for these mods

00:30:474 (1,2,3,4) - move this combo more to the left, its ugly next to the stream
00:51:074 (10) - move closer to (9)
01:09:374 (2,3,4,1,2) timing is wrong, move (2,3,4,1,2) back one click then spacing is wrong in
01:10:874 (3,4) timing is wrong, move (3) 2 clicks back and (4) one click back then move the spinner one click back too
01:15:474 - redo this break
01:18:574 (1,2,3,1,2) timing is wrong, move these notes one click back
01:19:274 (3) spacing, move to (1)
01:20:074 (2) spacing, move ferther away from (1)
01:21:974 (1,2) timing is wrong, move notes one click forwerd
01:25:374 (2) timing is wrong, move one click back
01:28:874 - add break here
01:34:074 (1,2) take new combo off (1) and put it on (2)
01:50:474 (2,3) deleate (3) then remake (2) slider to end where (3) did
01:53:174 (7,8) timing is wrong, move both one click back
01:56:374-01:59:874 - this whole area is out of time, move it all one click back then fix the break infront of it
02:20:974-02:37:574 - many many timing probs in here, your best to deleate this part then do it again, it would be faster then finding each note what is out of time
02:39:774-02:50:974 - this whole area is out of time, move it all one click back

Fixed! :>

Yay for my first client to my (secret ) mod queue!

[NoHItter's Ex3]

No problem

[Nx4]
0:17:674 (7,8,9): Flip these horizontally (Three times of the same pattern on the same place is a bit boring), I also suggest that you add a new combo at 7,13 and 21
0:27:274 : Isn't this part a bit too extreme for this difficulty
1:11:174 (4): Shorten this slider by 1/4
1:28:874 : Add break here, please.
1:58:374: Also a bit too extreme
2:06:474: ^ same as above ^
2:08:474: Add break here too (I hate long parts without a break and high HP drain)
2:30:474: I think it should be a BPM change here

[Hx5-test]
1:28:874: Same as Normal
2:08:474: Same as Normal too!

A good first map but sometimes it feels like the beat placement is a bit wrong.
Also the mp3 is so loud so you can't hear the hitsounds (and it's Normal on highest volume)
*star*

I was supposed to fix my own map. . .

I knew there were problems in it because the audio was too loud before. . .

Okay... Timing's a mess...

[Timing]
Here:

1. BPM: 150
2. Offset: 14,540

Offset might be off by a few ms, but you can keep mapping with this.

Now now, you might say that the first part sounds off... Well, you're right... But that's because it went 1/2 forward at 00:14:54, and I'm sure this is no musical error.

If you were planning to map the first part (Or already did), and this bothers you too much, you can add an extra non-inhereted timing section:

1. BPM: 150
2. Offset: 340

That'll fix it. I'm not entirely sure if placing notes before the main timing section is allowed, but I'd just add the first section.

(I'd mod this map, but I better wait until it's moved to pending. )

As i promise, i mod Test diff. those suggestions can be ignored as well
1. Change offset and bmp and resnap all notes
2. Than select all notes and move it 1/4 later
3. Diff. suffers of "Bad spacing decease" Use distance snap, 0.7-0.8x will be fine i think
4.01:01:545 - 2 unrankable spinners
5. 01:21:540 - 01:32:840 - some of notes needs to be placed 1/4 earlier due to song's rhythm after 1 and 2 steps. Make that combo shorter, just start new combo in places, where you think it'll looks better
6. 01:34:440 - 01:47:061 - end sliders 1/4 earlier and see how it'll sounds
That's all. More detailed mod will be later. Good luck with te map! Starred

nice map chachy

starred bye bye

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RemmyX25 wrote:

Timing sounds alright for the most part, except that slowdown near the end.

Ill take a look at it. That slowdown is a mess

Otherwise, best of luck

It really is. XD

that was a lame attempt to time the slowdown part..

Try this:
Replace in Slowdown part:

02:27:34 - 145.00
02:28:99 - 140.00
02:30:70 - 125.00
02:32:62 - 100.00
02:34:94 - 150.00

NoHItter wrote:

Try this:
Replace in Slowdown part:

02:27:34 - 145.00
02:28:99 - 140.00
02:30:70 - 125.00
02:32:62 - 100.00
02:34:94 - 150.00

tried this but i see no difference (ewan ko di ko sure... wag moko sisihin XD), except that nao i have less red lines than before XD

triny ko rin iadjust ung ibang notes swak na sila.

Thanks a lot

NoHItters:

-00:36:740 (1.1) Distance snap these
-01:48:740 (2.1) ^^

Nx4:

-01:35:940 (1.29 Distance snap these

Hx5:

-02:28:940 (7) Distance snap this


Didn't found anything else ^^
Nicely mapped, star~

Okay, first modding time xD...

Urm... In the Hx5 diff, there's a slider right in the beggining where it has like 20 reverse arrows at 00:29:040 I think, make a new combo after that one. Will be back if I see anything else. Oh yeah, urm STAR TIME!!!

Get this shit revived

Revived

Kumusta

[File]
1) The MP3 it's too loud, consider to low a bit

[NoHItter's Easy]
To be honest, this diff is not easy for beginner player, the slider velocity is too fast for beginner player, Overall Difficulty is too high, and the HP Drain Rate it's too high ;_;. You need to remap it

[Hard]
In autoplay, the HP Drain is almost half drain, you need to decrease the HP Drain
02:23:140 (4) - Don't stack with 3
02:30:700 (10) - New combo (because the combo is almost too long)
02:32:620 (16) - ^

GREAT SONG!!!
STAR

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.

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[NoHitter's Easy]

• • 00:43:540 (1,2) - Spacing
  • 01:06:540 (2) - The end-slider is partially hidden; make it more visible
  • 01:56:740 (1,1) - There should be no 1/4 notes after spinners. It most likely doesn't play well.

[Hard]

• • 02:30:061 (7) - New combo
  • 02:31:900 (13) - ^
  •