06:45:618 (3) -
07:58:190 (5) -
there aren't actually any beats here...Though it flows with the beats around it so i'll let it pass, i doubt anybody would notice it without going into editor
00:27:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - you're mixing 1/2 and 1/1 spacing on a slow section, it honestly feels incredibly inconsistent and very crappy to play this section
00:27:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - same as above
00:54:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this part gets a bit more intense, same as above also.
01:36:885 (2,3,4,5,6) - this sounds very off, are you sure this section is timed properly?
01:38:546 (1) - would sound a lot better on the distinctive beat that comes a bit after it...
02:08:107 (6,7) - these would probably play better as a stacked jump
02:15:310 (4,5,6,7) - in theory it may play good, but realistically it doesn't. use 1/3 spacing instead of 1/4
02:27:016 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - make the spinner end on the beats, not start on them.
02:37:832 (1) - add a break after this? to make it signify the different part of the song, and the warning arrows is like a preparation for the intense part
02:44:611 (1) - the buildup actually starts half a tick before this
06:01:261 (1) to 06:19:405 (16) - - as much as i love this part of the map, and the idea fits with the map perfectly with the whole buildup or whatnot, but the jumps just get ridiculous, it goes past what is difficult relative to the rest of the map. This section has like, the hardest jumps AND no rest time. Even at the peak spacing of these jumps it'd be hard to fc without the buildup of 1/2s before it. I suggest changing 06:14:976 (1,2), 06:17:261 (1,2) to be like 06:03:547 (1,2) and 06:12:690 (1,2), where the jumps start at 0x ds and build up
I feel as if part1 was rushed, putting all these zig zags and beats without a distinctive flow. Most of the patterns look forced and there isn't a consistency in how you mapped it other than a lot of the notes were placed with ds in curves/straight lines. Basically, the note placement is placed generically and the rhythm is just awkward
all in all, everything past 03:34:976 (1) is mapped fucking amazingly, could use a bit of tweaking with the sliders (most of them are boring) and some of the streams are funky looking, but the map is incredibly fun and has perfect flow throughout the section
tl;dr part1 mapped terribly part2 mapped like god
