Finally got to your request on my modding queue lol .w.
[Rose]
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Fix, there's a lot of it
There's a bit of over-mapping, for example in the first part of the song there is notes like 00:42:082 (2) - which really could just be a long note, to match the vocals
01:35:081 (2,3,4,5,1) - consider changing, notes need to be on ticks and it is overly symmetrical
01:38:678 (1) - Putting a slider here is pretty lacking imo since you're missing a bunch of beats, it's inconsistent to what you have been doing.
01:59:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Consider changing, the way this is set up is pretty dull
02:07:507 (2) - NC maybe? The line leading up from the 1 makes it look ugly imo
02:07:507 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Consider changing pattern, spacing for the 1 that follows 11 is inconsistent with the rest of the spacing on 2-11
02:09:309 (2) - Consider moving this farther to match the music
02:54:371 (4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing needs work
02:55:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest working on this, it's unappealing to the eye, some of the of the streams (would they be called streams? They are kinda stacked :l) or whatever they are called don't really match the beat
I'm not going to look too far into part II but just know that it needs spacing and pattern changes
05:00:118 (3,4,5) - It's a square but lopsided :l
06:01:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - at this point you really just don't want anyone but like the top ranked people to play it .3.
When the vocals say "Red like Rose" or when the vocals slow down, I would put an inherited point with a slightly slower slider velocity followed by a the one to put it back to the slider velocity you were using to match the vocals which also goes back the the speed it was singing .3.
Sometimes simple sliders are good too, remember that
Anyways I hope this mod helped, it's a lot longer than I usually give but given that it's been a few weeks, I think it's reasonable
[Rose]
Fix, there's a lot of it
There's a bit of over-mapping, for example in the first part of the song there is notes like 00:42:082 (2) - which really could just be a long note, to match the vocals
01:35:081 (2,3,4,5,1) - consider changing, notes need to be on ticks and it is overly symmetrical
01:38:678 (1) - Putting a slider here is pretty lacking imo since you're missing a bunch of beats, it's inconsistent to what you have been doing.
01:59:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Consider changing, the way this is set up is pretty dull
02:07:507 (2) - NC maybe? The line leading up from the 1 makes it look ugly imo
02:07:507 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Consider changing pattern, spacing for the 1 that follows 11 is inconsistent with the rest of the spacing on 2-11
02:09:309 (2) - Consider moving this farther to match the music
02:54:371 (4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing needs work
02:55:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest working on this, it's unappealing to the eye, some of the of the streams (would they be called streams? They are kinda stacked :l) or whatever they are called don't really match the beat
I'm not going to look too far into part II but just know that it needs spacing and pattern changes
05:00:118 (3,4,5) - It's a square but lopsided :l
06:01:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - at this point you really just don't want anyone but like the top ranked people to play it .3.
When the vocals say "Red like Rose" or when the vocals slow down, I would put an inherited point with a slightly slower slider velocity followed by a the one to put it back to the slider velocity you were using to match the vocals which also goes back the the speed it was singing .3.
Sometimes simple sliders are good too, remember that
Anyways I hope this mod helped, it's a lot longer than I usually give but given that it's been a few weeks, I think it's reasonable