hello sir i'm from mod queues I have 2 Thing mod here

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

All .osu file
Kiai
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [galvenize] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Nemis' Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:381

- [Pagno's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:538, ends on 00:42:557
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:22:538, ends on 01:32:538 << This is problem

My Mod ^^

[Easy]
Excellent

[Normal]
00:18:788 stop at 00:18:475 it correctly beat
00:23:788 stop at 00:23:475 too
00:50:038(1) try to snap with 00:47:850(2) so it is hard to understand let's look at picture


01:19:100 try this once // i think it isn't harder in normal mode


[Nemis' Hard]
Impassive I like it

[galvenize]
00:48:944 no sound enough for jump this one try to do same 00:46:444
00:56:522 this one too ^^
01:24:413 (3),(6),(9) no whistle
this diff it very good jumping map but i think some 3 hit are stopped too much your song is continues overtime let's try to move slowly it a good reason for this diff, Do your best man

[Insane]
Impassive I love this diff, but i can't still play it

Finish Modding map see you next queues ^^

@o0ohitomio0o:
[Normal]
00:17:538 (2) - 00:22:538 (3) - okay i made these sliders 1/2 shorter
Not changing the tap patterns

[Insane]
00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i'm keeping this one
00:57:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - big change here, it took me a good part of my afternoon to get here, your mod gave me a huge input!
01:04:725 (4,5) - repositioned
01:24:100 (2) - reduced distance snap

[NSER]-Zazalng wrote:

[Normal]
00:18:788 stop at 00:18:475 it correctly beat changed
00:23:788 stop at 00:23:475 too changed
00:50:038(1) try to snap with 00:47:850(2) so it is hard to understand let's look at picture It's not a big deal, 00:47:850(2) is MUCH before, it's not worth to fuck up distance snap and following patterns for a hardly noticeable thing btw if others complain about this i will try and find a solution

01:19:100 try this once // i think it isn't harder in normal mode I like that pause

[Insane]
Impassive I love this diff, but i can't still play it Thank you!

Really nice mapset. Didn't find much wrong with anything so I gave you a star :3c

silverboxer wrote:

Normal

00:50:038 (1) - curve this a bit more to make more room for slider 2: http://puu.sh/5jjr1.jpg done

Insane

A few parts of the streams can be moved to look a bit better:
01:29:933 (12) - x316,y108 moved (11) to make smoother curve
01:30:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - smooth this a bit more? circle 6 sticks out if you listen carefully to these points 01:29:100 - 01:30:038 - 01:30:663 - 01:31:288 you'll see that the changes in direction make much sense

Thanks for your mod!

Heeeeeeeeeeeello~
Mod from #modreq

General:

Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox, they are unnecessary. The rest is okay!

Insane:

1. 00:55:194 (3) - *Nazi: This slider shape don't fit with the rhythm of the song and, for consistency and esthetics I recommend make it more curve or straight, like 00:49:725 (4,2) - blah blah.
2. 01:08:006 (2) - This note is outside of the grid
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:10:663 (3) - *Nazi: http://i.imgur.com/QIpfrjv.png / (3) touches (1) making them awful, I know you can make a better blanket here.
4. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - NC, because of downbeat.

galvenize:

1. 01:32:381 (4) - NC because of downbeat. Imo.

Nemis

1. kawia, chugoi.

Normal

1. I found too high the HD, I suggest decrease 1 tick on it.
2. 00:51:288 (3) - I see this slider out of the grid. take a look at your diff!
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:51:288 (3,4) - are you sure these both sliders are the same? o.o Just asking.

Pagno's Easy

1. I found this diff quite boring, circle, circle, circle, slider, circle...1/1 patterns everywhere. you can use 1/2 patterns for make something different <: An Easy diff can be funny as well!
2. 01:22:538 (1,2,1,1,2) - weird flow o3o
3. Overall isn't a bad diff, new combos are okay, hitsounds too.. but the rhythm is poor. It just need more mods, don't worry!

Nice song and map! good luck on ranking

Cloudchaser wrote:

Mod from #modreq This is the best day of my life, WILL YOU MARRY ME?

General:

Disable Widescreen Support and Letterbox, they are unnecessary. The rest is okay! Done!

Insane:

1. 00:55:194 (3) - *Nazi: This slider shape don't fit with the rhythm of the song and, for consistency and esthetics I recommend make it more curve or straight, like 00:49:725 (4,2) - blah blah. Yeah it never convinced me
2. 01:08:006 (2) - This note is outside of the grid Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:10:663 (3) - *Nazi: http://i.imgur.com/QIpfrjv.png / (3) touches (1) making them awful, I know you can make a better blanket here. (3) and (1) don't touch, the blanket looks good to me :O
4. 01:24:413 (3,4,5) - NC, because of downbeat. Fixed

Normal

1. I found too high the HD, I suggest decrease 1 tick on it. Ok HP3 it is
2. 00:51:288 (3) - I see this slider out of the grid. take a look at your diff! Fixed!
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:51:288 (3,4) - are you sure these both sliders are the same? o.o Just asking. okay now i'm sure they are!

Nice song and map! good luck on ranking

I love you have my babies! also very good mod

hello~!! from my queue's M4M ><
i have late for one day :<






sorry,this not a good mod ;_; i can't mod anymore...
also since your map is very neat
Good Luck~!!!!!

bigfrog wrote:

Normal
01:17:538 (1) - more bending looks better : Awesome!

01:18:475 (2) - what about reserve this slider and make a triangle like this : i don't want a beat there

Insane
01:03:475 (5,1) - blanket better this blanket is good enough
01:08:163 (3) - bent like 01:07:538 (1)? just since i think that'll looks better :< Fixed!

so much stream ~!!! but great :3

sorry,this not a good mod ;_; i can't mod anymore...
also since your map is very neat
Good Luck~!!!!!

Thanks for your mod!

Updated

http://puu.sh/5jXBW.rar

From my queueueue

Sorry this is late

Very nicely mapped! Good luck with rank!

As for general I think the piano plays it's last note at 01:32:433
Remember that most of my mod are suggestions.
Don't forget to check AIMod for general mistake (unsnap, preview, etc)
Good luck.

Lust wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:44:413 (4) - angle slider end inwards a bit done
2. 01:11:913 (6) - ^ this is ok
3. 01:19:413 (3,1) - try this for better flow this would mess with distance snap a lot

Loli Cjj wrote:

Insane

1. 00:43:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/5kFpH.jpg ; idk what I'm doing lol this one flows better imo
2. 01:24:413 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1107057 i've thought about doing this too, but they're single notes there

Thank you both for your mods!

Hello, from #modreqs

[General]
MuryokuP <3
[Pagno's Easy]
Pretty good map. Didn't see any problems here.
[Normal]
Set tick rate to 2. Especially on the intro, the ticks match to the piano notes in the song.
[Nemi's Hard]
The slider velocity is too slow on the intro. 0.75x would be better.
01:08:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very confusing pattern. >< I suggest changing this to another one.
[Conlusion]
That's it for me. Sorry if this mod isn't that very helpful at all. Your map is very good.
Good luck. ><

Yo, from my Queue.

My god, what beautiful music

Easy
01:30:038 (1) - Doesn't really need a finish
01:31:288 (3) - ^
01:31:913 (4) - Remove finish, add clap

Normal
00:17:538 (2) - Blanket maybe?

galvenize
01:24:413 - For the stream, the whistles aren't necessary.

Honestly, this is pretty damn good in my opinion. Go get it ranked already, I'll be happy to dl and star it (Don't got any stars atm...)
Oh, don't kudos me if this isn't helpful.

Oriance wrote:

Normal
00:17:538 (2) - Blanket maybe? good idea, done!

Thanks for your mod, i'm glad you like my map

m4m from like a century ago. Hi.

[General]

1. Fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:53:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I can see what you're trying to do with the combo here, but it looks really weird when the strong beat at 00:55:038 - isn't a new combo. Consider removing NC from 00:54:256 (1) - and 00:54:725 (1) - , then add it at 00:55:038 (2) -
2. 01:10:975 (4) - Make this a copy of 01:10:663 (3) - . Currently looks kinda off ingame.
3. 01:32:225 (1) - End this at 01:32:498 - (1/8) ?

[galvenize]

1. 00:53:163 (4,5) - Feels too close imo. You generally use a jump for this part, so yeah.
2. 01:00:663 (4,5) - Same as above. ^
3. 01:10:038 (1) - Missed a finish on head here.
4. 01:24:100 (2) - Might just be personal preference, but a triple feels better to me here than a slider.
5. 01:32:381 (4) - Make this a slider ending at 01:32:498 - (1/8) ? That is, if Sephibro does so in Insane.

[Nemis' Hard]

1. I like the whistles, but they're a bit too loud for my tastes. Consider adding a custom whistle with lowered volume.
2. 01:13:006 (2) - Stack with 01:12:225 (4) - ?

[Normal]

1. 01:31:913 (4) - Same as Insane.

[Pagno's Easy]

1. 00:16:288 (1) - Might as well move this so it's horizontally centered, seeing as 00:21:288 (1) - is more or less symmetrical.
2. 00:31:288 (2) - New combo.
3. 01:20:038 (3) - Same as above. ^
4. 01:31:913 (4) - Considering ending this at 01:32:498 - (1/8), if Sephibro decides to do so in his diffs. 1/8 should be fine as it's the end of a slider, at the end of the map.

Not much to say. Love the hitsounds at the beginning of Hard, Insane and galv.

CXu wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:53:788 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I can see what you're trying to do with the combo here, but it looks really weird when the strong beat at 00:55:038 - isn't a new combo. Consider removing NC from 00:54:256 (1) - and 00:54:725 (1) - , then add it at 00:55:038 (2) - that downbeat without a new combo bugged me too, changed even if it was probably more readable before
2. 01:10:975 (4) - Make this a copy of 01:10:663 (3) - . Currently looks kinda off ingame. done
3. 01:32:225 (1) - End this at 01:32:498 - (1/8) ? i ended it at 01:32:459 - http://puu.sh/5oZxH.jpg and reduced slider velocity to 0,8x

[Normal]

1. 01:31:913 (4) - Same as Insane. same as Insane

Not much to say. Love the hitsounds at the beginning of Hard, Insane and galv.

Thank you! I'm glad you like those hitsounds

There you are, Sephi~

Fixed really a few things, but thanks anyway! Fixed everything from CXu.

Here is the diff, Sephibro is making the normal-hitwhistle for my diff.

Holy moly, CXu is a BAT.

Didn't change the ending slider, I quite like the way it is!

updated - new hitsound for nemis' whistle
everything should be set now

galvenize wrote:

Holy moly, CXu is a BAT.

'Sup.

@galv, you sure you don't want to end it at 01:32:459 - ? Seeing as everyone else did Also might as well end kiai at 01:32:459 - , to be consistent over all diffs. And I still think those first two sliders I mentioned are too close, really.

@pagno, actually, 01:22:538 (1,2) - move this a bit to the right so 01:23:788 (2) - head is centered? for symmetry :p

Other than that, I'm fine with this. Poke me when you're ready I guess.

Fixed!

CXu wrote:

[galvenize]
[list][*]00:53:163 (4,5) - Feels too close imo. You generally use a jump for this part, so yeah.
[*]01:00:663 (4,5) - Same as above. ^

First one plays fine to me, but i kinda agree on the second one, maybe you could move (4) somewhere around 416|52
Regarding the last circle/slider, i guess it's not a big problem, i've seen other maps that have a guest diff with different kiai times

Two jumps it is then!
I really don't want to change the last slider bit though, hope it's not too much of an issue.

Blarb.

k-kawow

Go for rank~

Hello

Well sephi, there are other maps which actually wait for rank even longer, because other BATs don't look at it, but here we go

[Pagno's Easy]

Well xD There are some DS errors, where the DS goes from 0.8 to 1.33 .. Anyway, there are a lot of stacks in that diff, whereas I also can't really understand why you don't follow the flow more naturally.

00:42:538 (1,2,3) - The slider goes to the left side, and the circle is on the right side. I strongly recommend that you change the first slider, to avoid having this weird flow feeling. (for comparison: 00:45:038 (1,2,3) - check that out, you've done this one quite well)
00:47:538 (1) - Due to the new combo here, the flow goes weird again. 00:46:288 (2,3,1) - The flow in that part is all straight, and that bothers me a bit, since I'm not really sure how confortable beginner will feel while playing this. This is very personal though, because I don't feel confortable playing them myself. http://puu.sh/5sXcf.jpg Some ideas, i don't know whether you'll like that or not, just tell me what you think please
00:56:288 (2,3) - That up down isn't really recommended for easy as well.. an easy should be as easy to read as possible, but with that stacks, it's rather hard >_<
01:01:913 (2) - What about something like 251 71? That curvy feeling seems quite funny!
01:02:538 (1,2) - To follow the natural flow better here, I suggest putting (2) UNDER the slider end of (1). http://puu.sh/5sXi5.jpg Something like this, is what I mean. It will grant a better flow for sure.
01:07:538 (1,2,1,2) - Stacks stacks. It would be really nice if you could think of something different here.. 01:10:038 (1,2) - Especially this pattern. I can't recommend that at all.
01:15:038 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/5sXmG.jpg
01:22:538 (1,2,1,2) - ..? What happened with the DS here?

Well, I quite disagree with some parts here, as you can see. I'm sure we can find a solution we both agree on! Just let me know what you think

[Normal]

00:45:975 (2,3) - That blanketing here looks poorly made. Please try it again :O
00:47:538 (1) - Same issue here as in easy, I strongly assume that the natural flow will be better if the circle is above the slider. http://puu.sh/5sXDR.jpg
01:29:725 (4,1,2,3) - Flows weird to be honest, same issue as before (natural flow, slider goes <- the next circle is -> .. you know)

rest is fine~

[Nemis' Hard]

Cool diff!

[galvenize]

Uhm, I'm a bit confused, 00:16:288 - this hitsound tells me it's 5%, which wouldn't be audible, yet it's really loud? how?

00:43:319 (5) - how is that really really big jump explained? D: I feel that's way too high and breaks the flow quite much, what about http://puu.sh/5sY7U.jpg ?
01:10:819 (2,3,4) - Maybe use another pattern here instead of the stack? The stack doesn't really fit here imo. Triangle, or just normal spacing?

Interesting diff.

[Insane]

00:55:975 (5,6,7,8) - overmap?
01:03:788 (1) - I guess a curve with 1 point is enough xD
01:22:069 (3) - CTRL + G grants better flow i guess
01:04:725 (4,5) - For some reason I like those, but not the stream ones. hm.. Also, I would suggest only to delete the stream where I wrote overmap, and leave the rest, since they actualy sound better.
01:32:225 (1) - You're the only one who uses NC here ;w; I would make it equal to all other diffs (well, no. the others should make it equal to your diff)
00:18:475 (4) - 00:23:475 (7) - Add NC to emphasize those sliders?
Quite jumpy!

Alright.. call me if you have any questions, or so~

Irreversible wrote:

[Normal]

00:45:975 (2,3) - That blanketing here looks poorly made. Please try it again :O ok i used (3)'s approach circle this time, it should look better
00:47:538 (1) - Same issue here as in easy, I strongly assume that the natural flow will be better if the circle is above the slider. http://puu.sh/5sXDR.jpg probably now 00:48:475 (4) flows better with the next slider, thank you!
01:29:725 (4,1,2,3) - Flows weird to be honest, same issue as before (natural flow, slider goes <- the next circle is -> .. you know) if it's not a big problem i would like to keep this, i love these kinds of flow in flashlight

rest is fine~

[Insane]

00:55:975 (5,6,7,8) - overmap? you're right, it should be like this http://puu.sh/5t062.jpg. changed!
01:03:788 (1) - I guess a curve with 1 point is enough xD 01:03:788 (1) - 01:11:288 (1) - i wanted these two slider to have a "weird" blanket (something in the middle between an usual blanket and a slider that flows to the next circle), so i had to put more than 1 node only
01:22:069 (3) - CTRL + G grants better flow i guess i prefer the symmetry
01:04:725 (4,5) - For some reason I like those, but not the stream ones. hm.. Also, I would suggest only to delete the stream where I wrote overmap, and leave the rest, since they actualy sound better.
01:32:225 (1) - You're the only one who uses NC here ;w; I would make it equal to all other diffs (well, no. the others should make it equal to your diff) my mistake there, actually i don't know why did i NC'd it
00:18:475 (4) - 00:23:475 (7) - Add NC to emphasize those sliders? Done!
Quite jumpy! not that much xD

Thank you! <3

Thanks Irreversible for your mod!
I've changed most of the sliders and tried to make some stacks easier to read!

Here's the code, Sephi

Irreversible wrote:

Uhm, I'm a bit confused, 00:16:288 - this hitsound tells me it's 5%, which wouldn't be audible, yet it's really loud? how?

oh about this, those circles were hitsounded through Compose > Sample Import, which allows you to assign an hitsound and a volume to each hitcircle without having to create an inherited timing section every time

how is that really really big jump explained? D:

I wish I could explain it really, it's just the way I map!

I unstacked that bit you mentioned.
http://puu.sh/5ta0s.rar

Everything updated!

Just as a comment (not a mod,) it seems as if at the end 'Kiai' the difficulty increases in every diff except for the Hard, in which there is just a bunch of long sliders.

It seems as if it is a slight inconsistency. It plays fine, just seems off. Otherwise I like the mapset & hope it gets ranked!

Alright, checked everything IRC again.

01:24:413 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - This 1/4 stream in galvenize's diff is slightly overmapped on the 1/2 beat but it helps to build up momentum for the kiai. Therefore it is a rare exception that I am willing to rank this map.

Ranked!

1st

Grats

Congrats again~

Oi congratulazioni Sephibro :3 mi ricordo di questa map ottimo lavoro! ^.^

gratz

omedeto~~ nice hitsound and mapset!

Congrats.. ^^

cool~

grats !

congratz:D/

Gratz!

gratz ~

A new ranked MuryokuP <3
Congratulations :3

But i feel bad about meiikyuu because she also tried to rank this song.

I feel like I've heard this song from an anime before. If anyone knows what it is, I'd like a reply.