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Z-Ramm
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Topic Starter
Senbon

Z-Ramm wrote:

Quick comments! A good deal of this is combo stuff - you can ignore my specific suggestions on combos, especially if you have a better idea of when to place them, but right now I think they're inconsistent and need changing.

Normal:
00:08:56 (6,7,8,9) - Opinion: This seems kinda fast compared to how you mapped the rest of this difficulty. If you were going for that intentionally, it's fine, but it's almost a little out of place. Yeah, it's intentional. xD Anything else wouldn't look right, IMO :lol:
00:16:16 (10,11) - I'd make one of these (but not both, obviously) a new combo. Made (10) new combo!
00:18:28 (1) - If you make the change above, remove this new combo. Done!
00:30:11 (10) - Possible new combo. Done
00:31:37 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
00:34:75 (6) - New combo? Done
01:01:37 (4) - Maybe shorten this to emphasize the vocal note at 01:02:22? No change. :(

Hard:
00:18:49 (1) - Remove new combo or move it elsewhere. Done
00:33:91 (1) - Remove combo and move to 00:34:33 (2)? Done
There are other weird combo points here, just try and stay consistent in how you do it. I say that because sometimes a combo is really short, followed by a pretty long one, etc. I tried to fix some.. hope I didn't screw it up. :lol:

Overall:
Lots of weird decisions on when to start new combos on Normal and Hard, including some that I didn't mention, since I'm not the best combo modder around. Luckily everything else, such as patterns/placement, is pretty solid. Starred.
Lol this all proves I'm a failure at combo. :( :lol: :lol: Thanks!
Breeze
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Senbon
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Sleep Powder
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Topic Starter
Senbon

animask wrote:

[Easy]
01:13:63 (2) - Remove clap Done

[Normal]
Raise Circle Size maybe? No :x :x :x :x :oops: :lol:
00:07:71 (1) - Add New Combo Done
00:54:19 (6) - ^ Done

[Hard]
00:05:60 (11) - Add New Combo Done
00:06:45 (1) - Remove New Combo Done
00:30:53 (3) - Add a clap at the end? Done! Plus WHISTLE
00:31:80 (4) - New Combo Done
01:13:63 (1) - ^ Done

You seem to be pretty good with hitsounds~
Thanks~! :P
Sleep Powder
Nobody likes it when I tell them to change the circle size lol...
tieff
My favorite Hell Girl ending. <3
Can I create a diff?

[Easy]
01:13:63 (2) - Remove note.

[Normal]
00:02:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:03:49 (3) - Add new combo.
00:17:43 (3) - Remove finish from start of slider.

[Hard]
00:18:28 (9) - New combo. Becouse of jump.

Star!
Topic Starter
Senbon

tieff wrote:

My favorite Hell Girl ending. <3
Can I create a diff? Go ahead! :D

[Easy]
01:13:63 (2) - Remove note. Done

[Normal]
00:02:64 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
00:03:49 (3) - Add new combo. Done
00:17:43 (3) - Remove finish from start of slider. Done

[Hard]
00:18:28 (9) - New combo. Becouse of jump. Done

Star!
Thankss! n_n
XepherX3
great usage of custom hitsounds

at first i tought they were in the mp3 itself :lol: :lol: :lol:

starred
Symbolic
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Topic Starter
Senbon

Symbolic wrote:

[Easy]

Lack of hitsounding :( Add more hitsounds

01:00:95 (2) - New combo.


[Normal]

00:34:33 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:34:75 (2) - New combo.


[Hard]

Couldn't find anything here.


Fun map to play + mod,
Starred *
All done, thanks!
Mafiamaster
I saw nothing wrong :]
minyeob
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Azure_Kite
woo~ Hell Girl! <3

[Easy]
No Problems Found :)

[Normal]
No Problems Found :)

[Hard]
No Problems found :)


Starr'd for being awesome
Topic Starter
Senbon

minyeob wrote:

This map is so cool~

[Easy]
00:57:57 (1) - How about adding a note on here? Done
Thanks!

Azure_Kyte wrote:

woo~ Hell Girl! <3

[Easy]
No Problems Found :)

[Normal]
No Problems Found :)

[Hard]
No Problems found :)


Starr'd for being awesome
Thanks!
bmin11
Wow, nice hitsounds

[Hard]
00:08:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Kinda confusing. The spacing I see is 3 notes stream each, but it happens to be a 9 notes stream


That was all I guess... I like how you edit the hitsounds. So beatiful

Starred~
Topic Starter
Senbon

bmin11 wrote:

Wow, nice hitsounds

[Hard]
00:08:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Kinda confusing. The spacing I see is 3 notes stream each, but it happens to be a 9 notes stream It's like that mainly because of distance snap... fixed


That was all I guess... I like how you edit the hitsounds. So beatiful

Starred~
Thanks. ^^
gdeath
[EASY]
fine

[NORMAL]
increase 1 circle size(suggestion)

[HARD]
00:35:18 (5) - move 1 grid to down
00:49:54 (8) - new combo
00:50:81 (14) - move 1 grid to right

nice map.
starr'ed*
Topic Starter
Senbon

gdeath wrote:

[EASY]
fine

[NORMAL]
increase 1 circle size(suggestion) Ok... 2 said it so I guess I'll do it

[HARD]
00:35:18 (5) - move 1 grid to down ? Looks bad.
00:49:54 (8) - new combo done
00:50:81 (14) - move 1 grid to right done

nice map.
starr'ed*
thanks
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:67 (1) - Maybe 1/4 later and then cut by 1/4?,
  2. 00:58:42 (2) - Move end's tick 1 grid up.
[Normal]
  1. Fine.
[Hard]
  1. Fine.
Nice hitsounds :o.
Topic Starter
Senbon

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Easy]
  1. 00:40:67 (1) - Maybe 1/4 later and then cut by 1/4?, done
  2. 00:58:42 (2) - Move end's tick 1 grid up. I tried the best I could on that
[Normal]
  1. Fine.
[Hard]
  1. Fine.
Nice hitsounds :o.
Thanks!
MaxSalsa_old
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dkey
star~ :)
tieff
Topic Starter
Senbon

tieff wrote:

Sorry for delay.
Lol, no problem. 8D

I love it~! <3
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.4.5 Go~

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: Yes
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 13.3 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 71.000 / 112 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.3 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 48 ( 27 Circles / 19 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 82
[Current] Max Score: 61,786
[Current] Star Rating: 0.78
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.2
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.2

00:37:08 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:01:80 (2) - The timing marks look a bit odd.... Try moving the one at the start of the slider at least 1/4 back and the one at the end foward 1/4.
01:14:05 (1) - Check the timing mark at this spinner. Its not 100% at the spinner start point.

Notes: Clean and nicely made. Only minor stuff to look at.

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 71.000 / 112 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.3 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 105 ( 75 Circles / 28 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 153
[Current] Max Score: 307,540
[Current] Star Rating: 2.76
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4

Misc. Note: Make sure to resnap all of the timing marks so that they are 100% with the map.

00:40:67 (1) - I noticed this doesn't start at 00:40:46 like on [Easy]. You should check into that.

Notes: Nothing really wrong with this map. Just the timing marks to check into.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 71.000 / 112 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 185 ( 166 Circles / 17 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 238
[Current] Max Score: 1,031,864
[Current] Star Rating: 4.58
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7

Misc. Note: Make sure to resnap all of the timing marks so that they are 100% with the map.

Notes: No errors on the map. Just the timing marks to deal with.

[Baka tieff] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 71.000 / 112 ms (Sounds good so far)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 2.60
Distance Snap Average: x2.0 + Manually Snapped
[Current] Objects: 152 ( 102 Circles / 49 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 217
[Current] Max Score: 921,148
[Current] Star Rating: 4.59
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7

00:23:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The spacing is not evenly scaled.
00:43:42 (6,7,8,9) - Not lined up with (5)
00:51:45 (2,3) - Looks a bit too close together.
01:12:78 (6) - It ends here? I thought it could have the spinner at the end like [Hard] did....

Notes: Just some minor stuff to look at. Nicely made. Though the name [Baka tieff] sounds odd to have for this song, I was thinking more like [tieff's Karinui] or something? Well, just a thought.

Overall: The map overall is nicely done. Just make sure to check for any other errors and then it should be fine. I'll drop my star in then.
Topic Starter
Senbon
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AeonWing
Not many problems with this map.

star~
Yes_old
awesome map n_n i have nothing to complain about
+1 Star for you xD
busterj990
nothing wrong with the map. ~star~ :D
Lizbeth
Hard
00:08:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really dont like this kind of stack..why no place these with the same distance between each (just my opinion) same with the others like these


others diff
fine

Cool map, nice song

Star!
Topic Starter
Senbon

Lizbeth wrote:

Hard
00:08:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really dont like this kind of stack..why no place these with the same distance between each (just my opinion) same with the others like these A stream? Streams don't really fit in this map, even how small. XD *dunno what to do* :(


others diff
fine

Cool map, nice song

Star!
Thanks for your time ^^
Lizbeth

Senbon wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

Hard
00:08:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i really dont like this kind of stack..why no place these with the same distance between each (just my opinion) same with the others like these A stream? Streams don't really fit in this map, even how small. XD *dunno what to do* :(


others diff
fine

Cool map, nice song

Star!
Thanks for your time ^^
00:08:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) if you think about it, this is already a stream (the streams are defined in the time line, not in the map itself)... im just telling that the position in the map isnt comfortable to play, cuz is look like there's a pause in each group of stacks ( and there isn't)
this is just my opinion..
and now that i check this again, i notice that arent snapped to the ticks either.

cya! n_n
Topic Starter
Senbon
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Kurai
Hi~

[Normal]
00:19:97 (1) - Clap?

Very good map
☼STAR☼
jericho2442
hey modding time :)

[Easy]
great map no problems :)

[Normal]

(sugesstion) 00:25:88 (9) - new combo, to me it fits nice :)
00:45:32 (3) - only small prob but this could line up with 2 better and it would look nicer

except them small things its nice :)

[Hard]

00:05:60 (1) - make this in the combo before
00:47:43 (1) - get rid of this new combo and put it on (2)
01:11:09 (5) - this might look better strieght insted of on a tilt
also just check it over and see if theres any other combo's what dont make sence :)

[baka tieff]
(sugesstion) 00:22:29 (4) - this notes placing bugs me, i dont kno why or how but i think it could be better
00:43:42 (6,7,8,9) - lining these up with (5) would look better, atm there a little too low down
_______________________________________________________
all are very nice maps :)
star
Lokamp
Easy
Damn... perfect!

Normal
Perfect also here...

Hard
00:54:19 (1,2,3,4,5) - check spacing between these beats

Baka tieff
[General] If there are awesome custom claps, why don't use them? :3
01:09:40 (3) - start this slider with a finish
01:13:63 - why don't end the mode with a beat near here and a spinner, like the other modes?

Nice custom hitsounds for a calm, cute map. Have a star ;)
Topic Starter
Senbon

jericho2442 wrote:

hey modding time :)

[Easy]
great map no problems :)

[Normal]

(sugesstion) 00:25:88 (9) - new combo, to me it fits nice :) Done
00:45:32 (3) - only small prob but this could line up with 2 better and it would look nicer Fixed

except them small things its nice :)

[Hard]

00:05:60 (1) - make this in the combo before Too high
00:47:43 (1) - get rid of this new combo and put it on (2) I like the other way
01:11:09 (5) - this might look better strieght insted of on a tilt Done
also just check it over and see if theres any other combo's what dont make sence :)

[baka tieff]
(sugesstion) 00:22:29 (4) - this notes placing bugs me, i dont kno why or how but i think it could be better
00:43:42 (6,7,8,9) - lining these up with (5) would look better, atm there a little too low down
_______________________________________________________
all are very nice maps :)
star

Lokamp wrote:

Easy
Damn... perfect!

Normal
Perfect also here...

Hard
00:54:19 (1,2,3,4,5) - check spacing between these beats done

Baka tieff
[General] If there are awesome custom claps, why don't use them? :3
01:09:40 (3) - start this slider with a finish
01:13:63 - why don't end the mode with a beat near here and a spinner, like the other modes?

Nice custom hitsounds for a calm, cute map. Have a star ;)
Thanks all
Zekira
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Topic Starter
Senbon

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 108 Updated on all including tieff's

That's it for now, but I must say that this is well mapped.
Thanks 8D
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 110 (resnap all notes)

[Easy]

It's ok

[Normal]

It's ok

[tieff]

00:10:882 - Break
00:30:053 (8) - New combo


[Hard]

00:02:022 (8) - New combo
00:02:085 (1) - Remove new combo
00:03:048 (4) - New combo


Starred~
Topic Starter
Senbon

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 110 (resnap all notes) Done on all

[Easy]

It's ok

[Normal]

It's ok

[tieff]

00:10:882 - Break
00:30:053 (8) - New combo[/color] yup

[Hard]

00:02:022 (8) - New combo
00:02:085 (1) - Remove new combo done
00:03:048 (4) - New combo[/color] done

Starred~
thanks 8-)
Dusty
[Easy]
01:14:005 (1) - I don't like silent notes, maybe turn the volume down to only 25% instead of to 0%?

[Normal]
00:10:003 (3,4,5) - Mean for a Normal; why not like (2) and have a repeat slider?
01:14:005 (1) - I don't like silent notes, maybe turn the volume down to only 25% instead of to 0%?

[Hard]
00:08:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I also don't think rapid notes go well in this song. However, it might be better to group these in groups of 4 with 9 sticking out?
01:11:094 (5,6) - Delete 6 and extend 5 to where 6 was?
01:17:001 (1) - I don't like silent notes, maybe turn the volume down to only 25% instead of to 0%?

Nice hitsounds. :D
Topic Starter
Senbon

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
01:14:005 (1) - I don't like silent notes, maybe turn the volume down to only 25% instead of to 0%? done, the small sound makes it nice xD

[Normal]
00:10:003 (3,4,5) - Mean for a Normal; why not like (2) and have a repeat slider?
01:14:005 (1) - I don't like silent notes, maybe turn the volume down to only 25% instead of to 0%? done

[Hard]
00:08:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I also don't think rapid notes go well in this song. However, it might be better to group these in groups of 4 with 9 sticking out? they're already in triples...
01:11:094 (5,6) - Delete 6 and extend 5 to where 6 was? done
01:17:001 (1) - I don't like silent notes, maybe turn the volume down to only 25% instead of to 0%? done

Nice hitsounds. :D
thanksss :)
Takuma
~
whymeman
I'm really sorry for doing this, but I have to pop the bubble since i'm finding errors in the process of modding.

[Normal]

00:10:014 (4,5) - Not snapped properly into the timeline (yes I checked AIMod with 1/8 and it still picked this up...)

[Hard]

00:08:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not snapped properly into the timeline (yes I checked AIMod with 1/8 and it still picked this up...)
00:10:014 (11,12) - ^
00:32:064 (4) - ^
01:01:050 (4,5,6,7) - ^ (These are really off. Its not even snapped to 1/6 or 1/8)
01:03:061 (2,3) - (Same as 01:01:050. Its way off.)

Also, you have two .osb files in the songfolder to check into as well. After that is fixed, i'll rebubble.
Topic Starter
Senbon

whymeman wrote:

I'm really sorry for doing this, but I have to pop the bubble since i'm finding errors in the process of modding.

[Normal]

00:10:014 (4,5) - Not snapped properly into the timeline (yes I checked AIMod with 1/8 and it still picked this up...) snapped

[Hard]

00:08:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not snapped properly into the timeline (yes I checked AIMod with 1/8 and it still picked this up...) snapped
00:10:014 (11,12) - ^ snapped
00:32:064 (4) - ^ snapped
01:01:050 (4,5,6,7) - ^ (These are really off. Its not even snapped to 1/6 or 1/8) snapped
01:03:061 (2,3) - (Same as 01:01:050. Its way off.) snapped hopefully they're fixed

Also, you have two .osb files in the songfolder to check into as well. After that is fixed, i'll rebubble. deleted
thanks a lot :D
whymeman
Alright, you should be good to go now. Bubbled.
minyeob
>A<

Ranked.
yanagichuah
its so damn slow. not rhythmic! :x but still, nice map! :)
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