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Wiklund - Whip the Blip

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Ultimate
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Ultimate
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zondag 4 oktober 2009 at 23:45:30

Artist: Wiklund
Title: Whip the Blip
Tags: whip blip Pulse Traveller Wing Beats wiklund chiptune
BPM: 170
Filesize: 8776kb
Play Time: 02:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,6 stars, 136 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 446 notes)
  3. Normal (4,37 stars, 276 notes)
  4. nullPointLOL's Insane (5 stars, 527 notes)
Download: Wiklund - Whip the Blip
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Edit: Finished Hard Diff | Sweet!
Edit: Storyboard changes | Normal Diff changes.
Edit: Osuplayer111 changes | Working on the Storyboard.
Edit: Storyboard 99% done!
Edit: Finished Normal Diff | Sweet!
Edit: Added some more jumps to Hard Diff | Rena-chan advice
Edit: Added the "Slow Down Sign" for the "Hard" diff Storyboard.
Edit: Added allot of my own skin.
Edit: Fixed the "Slow Down Sign" for the "Hard" diff Storyboard ONLY. ( I forgot to specify it. )
Edit: Added DJPop changes | w00t
Edit: Added fartownik changes | check Backpost
Edit: Waiting for nullPointLOL's diff | no rush :P
Edit: Added Symbolic's changes | Spleet!
Edit: Added more jumps and reorganized some notes.
Edit: Added diff: Easy | SFG's Idea
Edit: Added SFG's changes | bubble plox xD!
Edit: Added Doomsday93's changes | more starzz
Edit: Added Zekira's changes | no backpost needed
Edit: Added nullPointLOL's diff | took me a long time to add it
Edit: Added whymeman's changes | ty
Edit: Added Sir Minelli's changes | spleet
Edit: Updated nullPointLOL's Diff
Edit: Added Tags
Edit: Fixed some storyboard errors for nullPointLOL's Diff
Edit: Fixed border errors on storyboard
Edit: Added Lokamp's changes | nice notice!
Edit: Added 0_o's changes | ty ^^
Edit: Added JarJarJacob's changes | My facking head hurts man ,, AaAaaa
Edit: Did not add yeahyeahyeahhh's changes | It isnt wrong, and its not my map :P
Edit: Added "Beatmap by nullPointLOL" to nullPointLOL's Insane.
Edit: Added eMkay's changes | ok ok,,
Edit: Added Xgor's changes | Easy diff
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!!! For the people who've already downloaded this map, pls remove the version (Entire folder) you have now. !!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Redownload for the changes to make effect.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Nice map and storyboard.

i almost can't wait this map getting rank.

timing is fine for me.

shoot a star here. :)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Timing]

Awesome.

[Normal]

00:50:82 (5) - 1 square up please?

[Hard]

01:21:18 (1) - This need a storyboard warning !!! SLOW DOWN !
01:22:59 (1) - ^

Love the storyboard and the map. ANDRYSTAR <3
eMkay
136 posts
Joined November 2008
eMkay
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Awesome map!

Loved the story board

Starred.
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

eMkay wrote:

AWESOME Map! ;)
Timing also fine for me.
Cool Idea with the lights at the bottom ;)
This must be ranked! :D
TY =D, i love these comments xD.
But the lights at the bottom,, Peppy's idea.

Waiting for more starz or bubblez ^^
eMkay
136 posts
Joined November 2008
eMkay
Starz and Bubbles would also be very cool :P Disco Disco!!! xD
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

eMkay wrote:

Starz and Bubbles would also be very cool :P Disco Disco!!! xD
Checking if the Starz match the SB, i prolly will add them
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Normal~
00:15:18 (6,7) - offscreen a bit, not sure they pass or not

~Hard~
00:37:24 (3) - offscreen a bit, not sure it pass or not
01:13:24 (8,1) - high jump D:


GJ :)
+Star
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

DJPop wrote:

~Normal~
00:15:18 (6,7) - offscreen a bit, not sure they pass or not
~ Changed =D

DJPop wrote:

~Hard~
00:37:24 (3) - offscreen a bit, not sure it pass or not
~ Close to bottom, but not offscreen

DJPop wrote:

01:13:24 (8,1) - high jump D:
~ Is this bad? xD .. 75% of the ppl that i spectated managed to make that jump :P

DJPop wrote:

GJ :)
+Star
~ TY!
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Normal]
SPOILER
I don't like whistles sounds in some parts. Ex: 01:40:241.
02:07:947 (6) - Move 1/4 forward and make it 1/4 shorter.

[Hard]
SPOILER
Perfect?
Starry~
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

fartownik wrote:

[Normal]
SPOILER
I don't like whistles sounds in some parts. Ex: 01:40:241.
02:07:947 (6) - Move 1/4 forward and make it 1/4 shorter.
~ Whistle = taste, ~checking for offbeat whistles~\
~ 02:07:947 (6) made it 1/2 forward (1/4 makes no sense) and 1/2 shorter.

[Hard]
SPOILER
Perfect?
Starry~
~ TY
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
Can't understand really why but reminds me of Mad World (From donnie darko :o )


Pretty much amazing!
Reeeaally.........

01:19:770 (5,6,7) - distance thing, new combo on 6 maybe?
01:31:061 - same
01:34:061 - same

If you like, and it's not much trouble, can I make one difficulty? (It would be for next weekend)

Fairly star'd~~ :P
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
Awesome map

I like this style ~
Star
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

nullPointLOL wrote:

Can't understand really why but reminds me of Mad World (From donnie darko :o )


Pretty much amazing!
Reeeaally.........

01:19:770 (5,6,7) - distance thing, new combo on 6 maybe?
01:31:061 - same
01:34:061 - same

If you like, and it's not much trouble, can I make one difficulty? (It would be for next weekend)

Fairly star'd~~ :P
The combo's you discribe all have thesame distance snap within the combo, so no need for making a new combo.

As for nullPointLOL's diff sounds interresting! I'm not easy to please, but if you follow the storyboard, there's almost nothing to worry about. Whisper me ingame when you're done and upload the diff in a new post.
TY!
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
Die bruine kleur past niet bij de rest van de kleuren, die zijn allemaal beetje licht-fel en flets, is vetter als je dan nog zo'n fletse kleur neemt (van dat pastel licht groene bijv.) in plaats van dat bruine :)


[Normal]

Put Overall Difficulty 1 or 2 easier.

00:05:65 (9) - New combo goes here.
00:08:47 (4) - ^
00:09:88 (8) - ^
00:11:30 (11) - ^
02:40:94 (3) - New combo.
02:42:35 (5) - ^
02:43:77 (7) - ^


[Hard]

Perfect :)


I love this map + storyboard :$
Starred *
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

Symbolic wrote:

Die bruine kleur past niet bij de rest van de kleuren, die zijn allemaal beetje licht-fel en flets, is vetter als je dan nog zo'n fletse kleur neemt (van dat pastel licht groene bijv.) in plaats van dat bruine :)


[Normal]

Put Overall Difficulty 1 or 2 easier.

00:05:65 (9) - New combo goes here.
00:08:47 (4) - ^
00:09:88 (8) - ^
00:11:30 (11) - ^
02:40:94 (3) - New combo.
02:42:35 (5) - ^
02:43:77 (7) - ^


[Hard]

Perfect :)


I love this map + storyboard :$
Starred *
Changed it all my man ^^ thx for your time and ,, the STArry star xD
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
GOD, how I love this song and your storyboard !!

There's a thing I noticed just now,
You're adding sprites as many effects you want. I made a lot of SBs for other maps (not finished though ;_;), and these maps of mine tend to get slowly (Am I explainig right?). Could it be that adding as many sprites as you did, solves this issue I have?

Another thing: there are various eq1,2,3 that aren't fully resized in the screen. In game you see a really fine line at the sides.

I enjoy mapping in your SB.

Thanks!

Edit: something else, can I change combo colors for my difficulty?
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Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
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Cillu
50 posts
Joined September 2008
Cillu
Nice map and good storyboard. Have a star for all your hard work!
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thx ppl for all the comments, xD just love them =D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Ultimate
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Topic Starter
Ultimate
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nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL

Ultimate wrote:

1: I'm going to check all the eq1,2 and 3 for inside border errors. Ty for notice.
2: It's ok to add allot of sprites, just dont overuse. When you have a sprite, put in on the timeline and use it as long as possible. If you put in new sprites for every movement, it will tend to lag a bit. ( I mean this in common, pls dont add or delete any sprite of the original storyboard. If you want to add sprites (that already excist in the .osz file) Diff specify them pls. )
3: You can change the combo colors. If i dont agree with them, i'll let you know.
Thanks! But the SB thing was just only a doubt I had, I definitely won't change anything from your SB.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:24:00 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - hitsounds plz
00:40:24 - epilepsy warning?
01:09:53 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - hitsounds
o.o are you trying to one-up Baby Cruising Love????
also this isnt really...a very good lowest diff. It's too hard, bpm changes, a lot of 1/2 beat triplet streams...have a lowest diff
Download: Wiklund - Whip the Blip (Ultimate) [SFG's Easy].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922
nice map &SB! :)
star~ ( ´∀｀)つ☆
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
nice SB work as usual. always good to have some nice effects going on :)

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[EASY]

if this is the easy from SFG, perhaps you should rename this "SFG's Easy" to credit the mapper

the map itself is all good.

[NORMAL]

01:31:77 (x) - a beat here maybe?

[HARD]

seems fine

very nice map. definately rankable in by books

star'd
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

Doomsday93 wrote:

nice SB work as usual. always good to have some nice effects going on :) ~ I'm flattered :$

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me ~ =D

[EASY]

if this is the easy from SFG, perhaps you should rename this "SFG's Easy" to credit the mapper

the map itself is all good.~ It's not SFG's easy

[NORMAL]

01:31:77 (x) - a beat here maybe? ~ ok then :P

[HARD]

seems fine ~ spleet

very nice map. definately rankable in by books ~ Cupcakes!

star'd~ yar!
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
Perfect.

<3

Star
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
Star.
Uzriel
19 posts
Joined August 2009
Uzriel
I was playing only on normal and I didn't noticed any bugs or something.
Nice map at all and song is awesome. Waiting for aproval (Starred)
aopst
13 posts
Joined December 2008
aopst
nice beatmap and storyboard :D
definitely worth my star.

gj
taNa
312 posts
Joined January 2009
taNa
very fun map :)
star~☆
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Starred.
*Modding failed orz
varq
104 posts
Joined February 2008
varq
Can't wait 'til this gets ranked, wonderful map. ;D

star+
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
naruti
cool sb and bg lol what the whole map is awsome
some bat forgot to rank this <_<
cmon bats do your job XD

star~
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
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nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
My difficulty is almost finished :)!!

In about a couple of hours it's done. Sorry for the delay ._. ^^

Byes ~~


Finished :)

Download: Wiklund - Whip the Blip (Ultimate) [nullPointLOL's Insane].osu


Hope you'll like it ~
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
nice beatmap :D
★ 4 u~
Urqhart
32 posts
Joined February 2009
Urqhart
Love it. Timed perfectly

Very well mapped indeed.
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Ultimate

nullPointLOL wrote:

My difficulty is almost finished :)!!

In about a couple of hours it's done. Sorry for the delay ._. ^^

Byes ~~


Finished :)

[attachment=0:f7f0b]Wiklund - Whip the Blip (Ultimate) [nullPointLOL's Insane].osu[/attachment:f7f0b]

Hope you'll like it ~
I wanna thank you for putting efford into your diff. I really appriciate it.
The map itself gives 13mil, wich is 3 mil over the limit :(.
The style is totally different compared to my diffs ( not really a problem to me.. )
It kills me to say, that i think its best not to add your diff. I hope you can forgive me for this....
talk to you soon man..

After alloooooot of thinking, i decided to add it. Even if this means i have to wait 2 months more.

Ultimate
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nullPointLOL
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nullPointLOL
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Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
It's fine to have a score that's around this area as long as the map itself is hard enough. I mean, we don't want the 13mil to be THAT easy to obtain. I haven't played this myself, but I think the difficulty seems hard enough to justify it a bit. Of course, it's still up to the mapper's decision to add it into the pack. If it still gets rejected, oh well, enjoyable mapping for the win. ;)
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL

Well, thanks!
I could only hope for Ultimate to approve it then ^^

:o
Malar
70 posts
Joined October 2008
Malar
Woooooow man i love Winklud songs but the beatmap is beather than this song :D
Take a star ;)
whymeman
osu! Alumni
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding Go~

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: No
SB (Story Board): Yes (The SB is done really well, though the "white flashes" might be a bit too strong. Just something to take note of.)
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 8.3 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source to all difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)

[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 170.000 / 1,418 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 0.80
Distance Snap Average: x0.7 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 136 ( 82 Circles / 54 Sliders / No Spinners ) (Could add a spinner for scoring reasons since the scores are going to be extremely solid when this is ranked which can lower replay factors...)
[Current] Max Combo: 401
[Current] Max Score: 704,714
[Current] Star Rating: 1.60
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.4

00:01:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I noticed the spacing here is not the same compared to the other parts of the map. Not with the non-grid snapping but the spacing overall.
00:18:53 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:13:41 (7) - Not lined up with 01:12:00 (5).
01:19:77 (1) - Doesn't exactly appear where 01:16:94 (3) was.

Notes: Smooth and cleanly mapped. Just some minor things to look into. Good Job. 8-)

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 170.000 / 1,418 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 276 ( 174 Circles / 101 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 509
[Current] Max Score: 3,335,512
[Current] Star Rating: 4.39
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

00:09:53 (3,4,1) - This row of notes doesn't line up with the slider end of 00:08:82 (2). (Idea: Maybe you can highlight and move those notes and those after that row before the break a bit more up on the grid to move up 00:15:18 (6,7) since its quite close to the bottom window.)
00:18:53 (B) - Delete and replace break.
00:58:06 (B) - ^
01:48:88 (B) - ^
02:22:77 (B) - ^

Notes: Just minor errors to look at. Good Job. 8-)

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 170.000 / 1,418 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.9 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 446 ( 277 Circles / 169 Sliders / No Spinners ) (Could add a spinner for scoring reasons since the scores are going to be extremely solid when this is ranked which can lower replay factors...)
[Current] Max Combo: 658
[Current] Max Score: 8,695,910
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.8

00:13:94 (4,5) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
00:27:88 (4,5) - Looks like these should be a bit closer together...
00:37:24 (3) - Just about bottomed out of the grid.
00:56:12 (4,5) - Looks like these should be a bit closer together as well...
01:06:88 (2) - Looks slightly uneven under the slider...

Notes: Just minor stuff but still nicely mapped. 8-)

[nullPointLOL's Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 170.000 / 1,418 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.4 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 526 ( 291 Circles / 235 Sliders / No Spinners ) (Could add a spinner for scoring reasons since the scores are going to be extremely solid when this is ranked which can lower replay factors...)
[Current] Max Combo: 828
[Current] Max Score: 13,076,490 (The score is a bit high, but considering how hard the map is, it would be hard to reach. Still double check into this to make sure.)
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9

00:27:18 (2) - Sounds like the finish hitsound is a bit over done. Maybe two finishes would sound nicer or just one at the end of the slider. (If you still plan to go with two, maybe at 00:27:27 and 00:27:53 would sound fine.)
01:03:44 (2,1) - The finishes here clash together oddly. Maybe taking the finish out of 01:03:44 (2) would make this sound better?
01:20:74 ~ 01:23:47 (?) - Does the "Watch Out!" SB object involve with anything at this part? I can't seem to find what is alerting me to watch out for.
02:09:88 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe its just me but the spacing looks a bit warped in a uneven way.

Notes: Hard hard map, but its really nicely done. Just minor stuff to check into.

Overall: The map overall is nicely done. Just minor fast to fix errors to check into. Though i'm still thinking about the "White flash" SB being a bit too strong but should be easy to fix if there is any complaints. I'm sure this map would get ranked in soon but you may want to check for anymore errors before it is ranked. I'll drop my star in then.
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
Mostly aesthetics


[Easy]

I noticed that 01:46:59 (6) - seems to be short in spacing when playing. The spacing isn't wrong, but if you move 01:45:88 (5) - once to the left, it will fix this problem.



[Normal]

00:06:00 (4) - move once to the right
00:11:65 (2) - finish sound at its end?
00:56:47 (3) - ^
01:09:18 (1) - finish sound?
01:09:53 (2,4,3,6) - whistle these and let me know if you like.
01:12:00 (1) - If you did like, add two whistles here at this slider: 01:12:35 - / 01:12:53 -
01:12:71 (2) - And here on this one: 01:13:06 - / 01:13:24 -
02:42:35 (1) - minor spacing



[Hard]

00:27:88 (4) - minor spacing
01:35:47 (11) - shouldn't new combo start here? If so undo this new combo afterward: 01:36:00 (1) -
02:20:65 (11) - ^



[nullPointLOL'sInsane]


Sb here also sais "Beatmap by Ultimate". Come on, don't steal nullPointLOL's credit :P

00:27:88 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - I see no point in lowering the volume for this pattern.
00:38:82 (1) - Confusing, consider placing this somewhere else.
00:41:65 (3) - new combo, then undo new combo here: 00:41:82 (1) -
00:42:35 (3) - new combo, then undo new combo here: 00:42:88 (1) -
00:57:18 (3) - minor spacing (you were using 2.0 value for this pattern)


Spacing fluctuates WILDLY on this difficulty. No mayor spacing mistakes found though.
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nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Wiklund - Whip the Blip (Ultimate) [nullPointLOL's Insane].osu
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Hmm..... well, with the way the difficulty plays, you might be able to do fine without it, but if anyone else complains, you might have to sacrifice some notes and sliders to fit in a spinner.
WyndII
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Joined October 2008
WyndII
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