Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost

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Squichu
Sorreeey, mod comes late, but at least it's here! ><
I'm lazy.. orz

[General]
  1. the resolution of bg.png is fine, it doesn't get deformed, but overscaled extremely. really, if you play with fullscreen it's not nice to look at.. :\
    I'd suggest lookin for a background that's the maximum size, cause it's last pixelated then.
  2. also, the Audio Quality is acceptable, buuut it could be better. I know the song is a few years old, but still you might be able to get your hands on a higher quality file..
  3. SB files look fine, but the bg.png file is there twice, you can delete one, I think? cause it's useless to have it two times if it's exactly the same.
    oh, and the black borders in text1 and text2 are pixelated as well, doesn't look nice. :c
  4. SB load is far too high though. I think up till 5,00 it's okay, but 6 is not.. while testplaying you can see the SB load flashing in red.. gotta change that.
  5. cause of SB you should display epilepsy warning in all difficulties
  6. and check your tags, they're not the same in all diffs (or at least AIMod says so)


[Kurokami's Normal]
this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal.. but I guess that's fine once an Easy is added. :D
  1. Preview Time hast to be the same as in other diffs
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - align sliders like 1 perfectly to 2, you can use the approach circle as a template
    that's just a matter of taste, though.. some people do it that way intentional.. I do prefer the 'perfectly round' shape though, looks more structured to me.
    00:48:526 (2) - same here
    00:52:632 (4) - and here, the end is too close to 00:52:000 (2)
    00:54:842 (3,1,2)
    and many more, I won't point all of them out
  3. 00:46:632 (3) - move further down to 260|236, 00:45:684 (1,2,3) match with 00:45:368 (6) then
  4. 00:50:421 (4,1) - has a nicer feeling if you switch them around or just move 4 to the same place as 1, cause the movement of 00:49:474 (3) indicates an object there, the way it it now it's disrupting the flow
  5. 01:08:263 (3) - why does this start on a red tick? it doesn't match the beat
  6. 01:28:632 (1) - the shape looks weird.. is there any reason to use this? .o.
  7. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - this break is definitely too long


[Hard]
  1. DS is broken at some parts unnecessarily, example: 01:13:316 (7,1) - the mini-jump doesn't increase difficulty at all, cause it's only visually disturbing the flow of the diff. play-wise it's totally okay, but it doesn't look good.
  2. 01:36:842 (5,6,7) - looks crampled, make sure the distance between the slider borders and cirlce is the same everywhere
    that does apply to a few more parts, if you pay attention to stuff like that the diff looks more structured and thought-out, less random
  3. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - same as in Normal, too long

hmh, overall this diff lacks structure, imo.. DS needs to be more consistent I think. the diff is too full of jumps, I guess. s:
personal taste!! >o<

[Insane / Death]
Only thing: same as in Hard - imo even Insanes need more consistent spacing. I'm not saying this is bad or anything, I just like creative structure and this seems overloded with jumps.. or maybe I just don't notice structure.. well, can't really say anything about this style of mapping, cause I don't have that much experience in modding yet.. sorry. :\
Also, I don't know if
Also, do not use the same color twice consecutively.
applies to combocolours after breaks, but I think it doesn't.. cause it should be readable.. but I don't know for sure, you should ask a BAT about this sometime, cause of the consecutive usage of red c-colour at the end of the diff..

well, wasn't that useful, sorry. Dx
Good luck with this! ^__^/
Asphyxia
Hi, mod from my queue! Sorry I'm a bit late but o well, let's get started!

[General thoughts]

  1. There is inconsistency with stuff:
  2. Combo colours
  3. Other stuff:


[Kurokami's Normal]

  1. Please turn up the volume a bit, I can't hear any kind of hitsounds. :s
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - This could be a better blanket
  3. 00:45:684 (1,2,3) - Why didn't you add a bit more curve to this? You could curve it little more by moving (3) more down?
  4. 00:48:526 (2) - Slider middlepoint at x:168 y:336 and endpoint at x:112 y:348 to make a better blanket
  5. 00:50:737 (1,3) - You could improve this blanket also a bit. You probably see where I am going with these blanket suggestions, if you fixed these please make sure to fix every blanket in the map because I wont bother mentioning these again because there's a slight chance you don't want them to be fixed or so.
  6. 01:23:579 (1) - You could try to make this slider more symmetrical, it looks ugly when it's not. Here's a way to do it, press CTRL + Shift + R and put the slider like this. (should be rotated by 34 degrees clockwise or so)
    You see now that it's not very beautiful actually so try to make it symmetrical like this
    And then rotate it back!
  7. 01:26:105 (1,2,3) - I could see this curving like this one here 01:27:684 (4,5,6) - but that's up to you really.
  8. 02:15:368 (4) - Slider redpoint 1 grid right to make it more symmetrical I assume?
  9. Otherwise fine.


[Hard]

  1. +1 HP to make diff spread more equal
  2. 01:03:368 (1) - Spacing pls
  3. 01:13:474 (1) - ^
  4. 01:18:526 (1) - ^
  5. 02:04:000 (1) - Maybe lower it spacing a bit
  6. 01:45:053 (3) UNSNAPPED SLIDER
  7. 03:16:474 (6,9) - Overlaps
  8. Otherwise fine


[Insane]

  1. +1 For this also
  2. 01:45:053 (9) Unsnapped slider (end)
  3. I like it, no problems for me here


[Death]

  1. Not really good at finding stuff in this kind of insane so I wont mod it, sorry =(
  2. 01:45:184 (2) Unsnapped circle tho


Nice mapset, best of luck with this :)
Topic Starter
Tidek

Squirrel wrote:

Sorreeey, mod comes late, but at least it's here! ><
I'm lazy.. orz

[General]
  1. the resolution of bg.png is fine, it doesn't get deformed, but overscaled extremely. really, if you play with fullscreen it's not nice to look at.. :\
    I'd suggest lookin for a background that's the maximum size, cause it's last pixelated then. Will consider this, if there will be more suggestions about it
  2. also, the Audio Quality is acceptable, buuut it could be better. I know the song is a few years old, but still you might be able to get your hands on a higher quality file.. I dont think that i will be able to find that version in 192kpbs, because for example version from youtube sounds different (here all sounds are way more clearly)
  3. SB files look fine, but the bg.png file is there twice, you can delete one, I think? cause it's useless to have it two times if it's exactly the same.
    oh, and the black borders in text1 and text2 are pixelated as well, doesn't look nice. :c Im not SB maker, so idk i can delete bg.png ;d About texts, like in resolution of bg file, will consider this
  4. SB load is far too high though. I think up till 5,00 it's okay, but 6 is not.. while testplaying you can see the SB load flashing in red.. gotta change that.
  5. cause of SB you should display epilepsy warning in all difficulties
  6. and check your tags, they're not the same in all diffs (or at least AIMod says so) fixd tags


[Kurokami's Normal]
this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal.. but I guess that's fine once an Easy is added. :DEasy will be added (still looking for GD, its really hard to find mapper who will like that kind of song and will make for beginner mapper like me xD)

[Hard]
  1. DS is broken at some parts unnecessarily, example: 01:13:316 (7,1) - the mini-jump doesn't increase difficulty at all, cause it's only visually disturbing the flow of the diff. play-wise it's totally okay, but it doesn't look good. Will write about my mapping style on the end (in your example, i accented strongest beats)
  2. 01:36:842 (5,6,7) - looks crampled, make sure the distance between the slider borders and cirlce is the same everywhere fixd
    that does apply to a few more parts, if you pay attention to stuff like that the diff looks more structured and thought-out, less random
  3. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - same as in Normal, too long Well, not my fault at all, there are no sounds, I wont make "hitsound rhythm"

hmh, overall this diff lacks structure, imo.. DS needs to be more consistent I think. the diff is too full of jumps, I guess. s:
personal taste!! >o< I thought that a little jumpy is only kiai part ; ) (well, kiai should be that "boss" part)

Squirrel wrote:

[Insane / Death]
Only thing: same as in Hard - imo even Insanes need more consistent spacing. I'm not saying this is bad or anything, I just like creative structure and this seems overloded with jumps.. or maybe I just don't notice structure.. well, can't really say anything about this style of mapping, cause I don't have that much experience in modding yet.. sorry. :\
Also, I don't know if
Also, do not use the same color twice consecutively.
applies to combocolours after breaks, but I think it doesn't.. cause it should be readable.. but I don't know for sure, you should ask a BAT about this sometime, cause of the consecutive usage of red c-colour at the end of the diff..

well, wasn't that useful, sorry. Dx
Good luck with this! ^__^/
My mapping style: I always put notes in places where i can hear sound in music, I never make "hit sound rhythm" that means, putting random triplets or streams or whateva just to make map more difficulty without any accent with music. Also, my DS changes are in places where music "tells" me to do it, stronger beat/drum/any sound = higher DS.

About colours, I think that there is nothing wrong with using the same colour after break. But yea, will ask BAT about that.


EDIT: next mod

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue! Sorry I'm a bit late but o well, let's get started!

[General thoughts]

  1. There is inconsistency with stuff:
  2. Combo colours Hmm, I think that i can use different combo colour on some diffs. On insane and death I was using red colour only for slider speed changes, on hard diff i dont need this
  3. Other stuff: fixd tags before, rest probably Kurokami will fix



[Hard]

  1. +1 HP to make diff spread more equal Ok
  2. 01:03:368 (1) - Spacing pls
  3. 01:13:474 (1) - ^
  4. 01:18:526 (1) - ^
  5. 02:04:000 (1) - Maybe lower it spacing a bit
  6. 01:45:053 (3) UNSNAPPED SLIDER No, its 1/12 rhythm (yea was hard to find that) listen on 25% playback
  7. 03:16:474 (6,9) - Overlaps fixd
  8. Otherwise fine


[Insane]

  1. +1 For this also Ok
  2. 01:45:053 (9) Unsnapped slider (end) look hard
  3. I like it, no problems for me here


[Death]

  1. Not really good at finding stuff in this kind of insane so I wont mod it, sorry =(
  2. 01:45:184 (2) Unsnapped circle tho look above : )


Nice mapset, best of luck with this :)
Thank you : )
BounceBabe
Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue (:

General

- You should consider adding a super Easy, the spread atm is on the hard side and the Normal isn't very Easy, so beginners don't have an easy starts on your map and can't play something simple. The rythm in Normal and the BPM make it especially harder. The rythm is quiet hard for an Easy but if you focus on the white ticks you can make a simple Easy.
- The SB coding is a little off, you should fix the tiny difference in ms.
- The hitsounds are barely hearable. You need to higher the volume of the hitsounds in the time sections. They totally go under in this powerful song.
- The epilepsy warning isn't enabled in every difficultie.

Normal

01:34:947 (2) - I think you can create a better looking and fitting slider than this. It doesn't look so attractive and the shape is a little disturbing towards 01:33:684 (1) - , which might confuse a little. You could simply just 01:33:684 (1) - copy paste this and horizintal swap it. It gives a better effect and play nicer. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056769
01:38:421 (6,1) - Blanket this better.
01:42:842 (4,1) - These two together look a little weird. If you curve it a little into the other direction the flow gets better and it also goes hand in hand with 01:44:421 (2) - this slider. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056774
02:06:526 (1,2) - Blanket this better so it suits to the previous slider.
02:14:105 (1,2,3,4) - That's a nice way of combining slider and circle. It looks very nice!
02:25:474 (4,5) - The blanket here also looks a little unattractive. You should rotate this slider 02:26:421 (5) - a little so it fits to the previous one and looks better. You can simply copy paste and horizontale swap this again. Of course without a repeat. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056788
03:12:842 (3,4) - You could shape them better to each other.
03:22:947 (2,3) - The right left movement is not easy for new players. The only get used to more rythms and simple flow and shouldn't play things like this. The flow 03:22:947 (2) - of this goes right so when you have to move left after it might be hard to play. Patterns like this go better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056796 Ofc you have to adjust the following then, or you make it different.#
03:27:368 (1) - When the slider reverse is so close to the end of 03:26:737 (6) - it might be missclicked. You should move the sliderpoint of the repeat slider left.
03:41:737 - Tbh, a slider would work better here for the ending. It fits to the song and plays better.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056798

Hard

- Take care of your comboing. Sometimes 00:43:158 (1,1) - they are short and then they go long 00:46:000 (1) - . Don't use both.

01:08:263 (7) - Move the circle a little right so you have a nice triangle pattern. You have consistant spacing so far so don't destroy it by one circle.
01:13:316 (7,1) - , 01:18:368 (7,1) - Same, the little spacing difference is unneeded and feels odd when playng.
01:25:316 (5) - It will play better if you unstack these, since the sliders aren't stacked either.
01:35:579 - On this white tick should be an element due to it being clearly hearable its an important beat. Maybe something like that, or you could find something better. http://puu.sh/4YaU2.jpg (starting point is 01:35:895 - )
02:08:895 (8,1) - , 02:13:947 (8,1) - , 02:19:000 (9,1) - , 02:24:053 (6,1) - , 02:29:105 (7,1) - , 02:31:474 (9,1) - , 02:34:158 (7,1) - , 02:39:211 (9,1) - Again, this jump is unneeded and not fitting and i see no point of making one.
02:20:421 (3,4,5,6) - The placement is very random and confusing at this part. You should replace them proper in a better shape. Maybe something similar to this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056818
02:40:000 (2,3) - Tiny spacing mistake, move it further away.
02:40:632 (4) - And here its too far away, move it closer.
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - You truly expect this to be the same 1/1 as the previous pattern 03:39:368 (5,6,7,8) - . You should make something different here or else its missunderstood and playerd wrong.
03:42:526 (1) - Unstack this so its more readable and people know its an 1/1 circle.

Extra (Consider this on the Insane difficultie as well, please. Same mistakes)

- The ending of the difficultie is different from the other difficulties and should be the same, also i dont understand why you have such weird patterns at the end, when there is nothing much to play to anymore in the song. You really should remove this. If not, make something playable.
- There are too many breaks at the end which are unneeded.
- 03:47:579 (1) - Sliders like those are unrankable and not allowed.
- You need to fix up your comboing again, it's very random at times and should be consistant. There are combos up to 17.
- 00:45:842 (2,3,4,5) - Such spacing is really disturbing when playing. First you have 00:45:368 (7,8,1) - big jumps and then tiny spacing and clustered pattern. You should make this clear how to play since its the same 1/2 rythm pattern and when you have it so clustered it might be missunderstod.
- 00:48:526 (2,3) - You have the same spacing as 00:48:211 (1,2) - . Yet the rythm placement is totally different. You should again make it clear how to play this, since how it is now, is not readable enough.
- 00:54:526 (6) - This is a hidden note and is not readable, playable and visible enough.
- 01:05:895 (4) - Slider is not clearly visible and hidden due to the previous slider, you have to fix this and make it readable enough so it can be played.
- 01:07:789 (11,17) - Done for symmetry and the spacing, even though its the same 1/2 pattern, is not consistatn with 01:07:947 (12) - . You need to make your decision how you use jumps and spacing changes.
- 01:09:053 (3,4,5) - Again the same
- 01:26:737 (4,5) - Very close to the previous pattern and also not clearly visible to play. Move them further away or so you can clearly see the difference.
- 01:31:158 (1) - Spacing mistake, needs to be further away or else it will be played as 1/2 circle.
- 01:35:737 (7) - Same again

You need to fix things up which i advised in the whole difficultie. It's really not readable and playable enough sometimes. The whole difficultie needs more work on spacing and placement. Currently it's not on a good standard.

I hope this makes you better prepared for further mapping and away from such mistakes and makes you more aware of things. The Extra and Insane is really messed up and makes no sense sometimes.

Very good luck on this o/
Kurokami
Man, I guess I need to get to work. lol

Edit:

Squirrel wrote:

[Kurokami's Normal]
this feels more like a Hard diff than a Normal.. but I guess that's fine once an Easy is added. :D
  1. Preview Time hast to be the same as in other diffs Tidek forgot to change it. \o/
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - align sliders like 1 perfectly to 2, you can use the approach circle as a template
    that's just a matter of taste, though.. some people do it that way intentional.. I do prefer the 'perfectly round' shape though, looks more structured to me.
    00:48:526 (2) - same here
    00:52:632 (4) - and here, the end is too close to 00:52:000 (2)
    00:54:842 (3,1,2)
    and many more, I won't point all of them out I changed to ones above but I'm lazy to search after these, bear with them. /me runs
  3. 00:46:632 (3) - move further down to 260|236, 00:45:684 (1,2,3) match with 00:45:368 (6) then k.
  4. 00:50:421 (4,1) - has a nicer feeling if you switch them around or just move 4 to the same place as 1, cause the movement of 00:49:474 (3) indicates an object there, the way it it now it's disrupting the flow Done.
  5. 01:08:263 (3) - why does this start on a red tick? it doesn't match the beat It is, you just need to listen more, but w/e, changed.
  6. 01:28:632 (1) - the shape looks weird.. is there any reason to use this? .o. Yes, I'm tired of useing only curved ones.
  7. 02:41:895 to 03:02:105 - this break is definitely too long Maybe yes, but please tell me what I can map there. Completely silenced hitsounds are not alloved but other way you can't hear the music nor rhythm if I map there something. And not speaking about it freaking hard to map something there. x.x

Asphyxia wrote:

[Kurokami's Normal]

  1. Please turn up the volume a bit, I can't hear any kind of hitsounds. :s Okay. o.o
  2. 00:43:158 (1,2) - This could be a better blanket Done with the previous mod.
  3. 00:45:684 (1,2,3) - Why didn't you add a bit more curve to this? You could curve it little more by moving (3) more down? Done, I guess.
  4. 00:48:526 (2) - Slider middlepoint at x:168 y:336 and endpoint at x:112 y:348 to make a better blanket Done.
  5. 00:50:737 (1,3) - You could improve this blanket also a bit. You probably see where I am going with these blanket suggestions, if you fixed these please make sure to fix every blanket in the map because I wont bother mentioning these again because there's a slight chance you don't want them to be fixed or so. I changed this place due the previous mod, and I can't do blanket here w/o overlapping or DS breaking.
  6. 01:23:579 (1) - You could try to make this slider more symmetrical, it looks ugly when it's not. Here's a way to do it, press CTRL + Shift + R and put the slider like this. (should be rotated by 34 degrees clockwise or so) Done I guess.
    You see now that it's not very beautiful actually so try to make it symmetrical like this
    And then rotate it back!
  7. 01:26:105 (1,2,3) - I could see this curving like this one here 01:27:684 (4,5,6) - but that's up to you really. Its impossible if I want to keep the blanket between two notes before.
  8. 02:15:368 (4) - Slider redpoint 1 grid right to make it more symmetrical I assume? Done.
  9. Otherwise fine.

BounceBabe wrote:

Normal

01:34:947 (2) - I think you can create a better looking and fitting slider than this. It doesn't look so attractive and the shape is a little disturbing towards 01:33:684 (1) - , which might confuse a little. You could simply just 01:33:684 (1) - copy paste this and horizintal swap it. It gives a better effect and play nicer. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056769 Done.
01:38:421 (6,1) - Blanket this better. Done.
01:42:842 (4,1) - These two together look a little weird. If you curve it a little into the other direction the flow gets better and it also goes hand in hand with 01:44:421 (2) - this slider. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056774 Done.
02:06:526 (1,2) - Blanket this better so it suits to the previous slider. Done.
02:14:105 (1,2,3,4) - That's a nice way of combining slider and circle. It looks very nice! :3
02:25:474 (4,5) - The blanket here also looks a little unattractive. You should rotate this slider 02:26:421 (5) - a little so it fits to the previous one and looks better. You can simply copy paste and horizontale swap this again. Of course without a repeat. Like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056788 Done but not the distance between 02:26:421 (5,1) - is 1,12x. o.o I'm not sure if this is allowed. q.q
03:12:842 (3,4) - You could shape them better to each other. Done. I hope. Well, the repeat is want to be in the previous "combo"s center.
03:22:947 (2,3) - The right left movement is not easy for new players. The only get used to more rythms and simple flow and shouldn't play things like this. The flow 03:22:947 (2) - of this goes right so when you have to move left after it might be hard to play. Patterns like this go better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056796 Ofc you have to adjust the following then, or you make it different.# Done.
03:27:368 (1) - When the slider reverse is so close to the end of 03:26:737 (6) - it might be missclicked. You should move the sliderpoint of the repeat slider left. I'm not sure if I did it right but I hope so.
03:41:737 - Tbh, a slider would work better here for the ending. It fits to the song and plays better.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056798 Done.
Thanks for the mod guys (or girls/both) they were really helpful. I learned some "new" things again. :3

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 121474
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami
BeatmapID:310894
BeatmapSetID:117450

[Difficulty]
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Topic Starter
Tidek

BounceBabe wrote:

Hey, from my "non-japanese" Queue (:

General

- You should consider adding a super Easy, the spread atm is on the hard side and the Normal isn't very Easy, so beginners don't have an easy starts on your map and can't play something simple. The rythm in Normal and the BPM make it especially harder. The rythm is quiet hard for an Easy but if you focus on the white ticks you can make a simple Easy. still looking for easy GD ;_;
- The SB coding is a little off, you should fix the tiny difference in ms.
- The hitsounds are barely hearable. You need to higher the volume of the hitsounds in the time sections. They totally go under in this powerful song. im not fan of hitsounds, but ok, i will do it
- The epilepsy warning isn't enabled in every difficultie. fixd

Hard

- Take care of your comboing. Sometimes 00:43:158 (1,1) - they are short and then they go long 00:46:000 (1) - . Don't use both.

01:08:263 (7) - Move the circle a little right so you have a nice triangle pattern. You have consistant spacing so far so don't destroy it by one circle. Ok, after few suggestions, i will fix all of these spacing changes, hope u guys were right
01:13:316 (7,1) - , 01:18:368 (7,1) - Same, the little spacing difference is unneeded and feels odd when playng. ^
01:25:316 (5) - It will play better if you unstack these, since the sliders aren't stacked either. fixd
01:35:579 - On this white tick should be an element due to it being clearly hearable its an important beat. Maybe something like that, or you could find something better. http://puu.sh/4YaU2.jpg (starting point is 01:35:895 - ) Actually main beats are quiet on that white tick, will stay with my pattern atm
02:08:895 (8,1) - , 02:13:947 (8,1) - , 02:19:000 (9,1) - , 02:24:053 (6,1) - , 02:29:105 (7,1) - , 02:31:474 (9,1) - , 02:34:158 (7,1) - , 02:39:211 (9,1) - Again, this jump is unneeded and not fitting and i see no point of making one. ^
02:20:421 (3,4,5,6) - The placement is very random and confusing at this part. You should replace them proper in a better shape. Maybe something similar to this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1056818 That placement wasnt random xD, but yea i fixd it
02:40:000 (2,3) - Tiny spacing mistake, move it further away. fixd
02:40:632 (4) - And here its too far away, move it closer. fixd
03:40:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - You truly expect this to be the same 1/1 as the previous pattern 03:39:368 (5,6,7,8) - . You should make something different here or else its missunderstood and playerd wrong. fixd that part
03:42:526 (1) - Unstack this so its more readable and people know its an 1/1 circle. not sure about that, but ok, fixd

Extra (Consider this on the Insane difficultie as well, please. Same mistakes)

- The ending of the difficultie is different from the other difficulties and should be the same, also i dont understand why you have such weird patterns at the end, when there is nothing much to play to anymore in the song. You really should remove this. If not, make something playable. You mean kiai part or last 5 notes?
- There are too many breaks at the end which are unneeded. ^ (and read description : P)
- 03:47:579 (1) - Sliders like those are unrankable and not allowed.
- You need to fix up your comboing again, it's very random at times and should be consistant. There are combos up to 17. Im making new combos almost always at the same beat, some times it can be longer or shorter cuz of 1/4 reverse sliders, but yea, i will fix some of them
- 00:45:842 (2,3,4,5) - Such spacing is really disturbing when playing. First you have 00:45:368 (7,8,1) - big jumps and then tiny spacing and clustered pattern. You should make this clear how to play since its the same 1/2 rythm pattern and when you have it so clustered it might be missunderstod.
I knew that some1 finally will mention that, honestly idk why I lowered DS here. fixd
- 00:48:526 (2,3) - You have the same spacing as 00:48:211 (1,2) - . Yet the rythm placement is totally different. You should again make it clear how to play this, since how it is now, is not readable enough. moved 3-circle further
- 00:54:526 (6) - This is a hidden note and is not readable, playable and visible enough. ok, made longer 1/4 repeater here, but in some similar places on that map it fits.
- 01:05:895 (4) - Slider is not clearly visible and hidden due to the previous slider, you have to fix this and make it readable enough so it can be played. changed curve of previous slider
- 01:07:789 (11,17) - Done for symmetry and the spacing, even though its the same 1/2 pattern, is not consistatn with 01:07:947 (12) - . You need to make your decision how you use jumps and spacing changes. it has higher spacing because of 2 strong sounds there, i think its reasonable
- 01:09:053 (3,4,5) - Again the same ok, here i agree, fixd
- 01:26:737 (4,5) - Very close to the previous pattern and also not clearly visible to play. Move them further away or so you can clearly see the difference. fixd
- 01:31:158 (1) - Spacing mistake, needs to be further away or else it will be played as 1/2 circle. its easily readable
- 01:35:737 (7) - Same again ^

You need to fix things up which i advised in the whole difficultie. It's really not readable and playable enough sometimes. The whole difficultie needs more work on spacing and placement. Currently it's not on a good standard.

I hope this makes you better prepared for further mapping and away from such mistakes and makes you more aware of things. The Extra and Insane is really messed up and makes no sense sometimes.

Very good luck on this o/
Also, fixd some NCs in all (my) diffs

Thanks
Kurokami
Okay, I adjusted the sb to the current timing.

SB
And here is the sb changes only for the two hardest diff:
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You need to put bellow Foreground in text editor.
Nwolf
woof

[Kurokami's Normal]

00:42:684 (5) and 00:45:211 (5) - delete them, might be a bit better for a Normal diff and most people that start playing Osu can't click three 1/2 in a row : D (and it's the only part in the map where you used 1/2 triplets, except for one time at the end but the end can be a little bit harder than the beginning imo)
00:46:474 (2,3) - Convert to slider
00:54:211 (2) - the clap at the end sounds pretty weird to me, replace with whistle or finish
01:13:474 (1,2) - Use same slider design so it looks a bit better


hm... can't find anything in the hard diff... and the other two diffs are too hard for me^^

gl for rank : D
Kurokami

Nwolf wrote:

woof

[Kurokami's Normal]

00:42:684 (5) and 00:45:211 (5) - delete them, might be a bit better for a Normal diff and most people that start playing Osu can't click three 1/2 in a row : D (and it's the only part in the map where you used 1/2 triplets, except for one time at the end but the end can be a little bit harder than the beginning imo) k.
00:46:474 (2,3) - Convert to slider What?
00:54:211 (2) - the clap at the end sounds pretty weird to me, replace with whistle or finish k.
01:13:474 (1,2) - Use same slider design so it looks a bit better Maybe, but that way it is impossible to place there, so no.


hm... can't find anything in the hard diff... and the other two diffs are too hard for me^^

gl for rank : D
Thanks for the mod.

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Mira-san
Hi. From my modding queue.

[Kurokami's Normal]
Found nothing here.

[Hard]
02:06:211 (7)
- Rotate this clockwise by -30 degrees but it's up to you. Just my suggestion.
03:21:053 (1,2,3,4,5)
- Make this a perfect pentagon.
03:31:158 (4,5,6,7,8)
- ^

[Death]
Put NC on these notes. (You can ignore this one.)
00:55:000 (9)
00:57:684 (8)
01:02:895 (14)
01:07:947 (12)
01:10:789 (16)
...

02:41:737 (12)
- Move this to x:328 y:96


[Insane]
02:30:684 (6,7,8,9,10)
- Make this a perfect pentagon (if possible).
02:38:105 (4,5,6,7,8)
- wat. Change this to a square jump or triangle. (or move 02:38:263 (5) to x:236 y:232)


That's all I can find.
Not much, forgive me lol.

ECG sliders are awesome :D
Losertic
Hello!

From Modding Queue.

General

  1. It's too hard song for me-.

Kurokami's Normal

  1. 00:52:632 (4) - change this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1075528
  2. 01:18:842 (1) - move tail point (368,352) perpect blanket
  3. 01:22:316 (2) - move (352,90) , 01:22:947 (3) - move (412,195) maybe much better~
  4. 01:45:053 (3) - move (358,130)
  5. 02:16:632 (1) - move (444,152)
  6. 03:07:158 (1) - move (296,60)

Hard

  1. 01:00:211 (1) - NC?

Death

  1. Pass. hardcore map.

Insane

  1. 01:04:632 (5,6) - change four note?
  2. 01:29:737 (3) - move (242,232) more jump-
  3. 02:25:474 (7,8) - change four note?


hooooaa

really hard rythem.

wait, 03:47:579 (1,1,1,1,1) - it's heartbeat!

..

nice mapset- and hard rythem :o .

S.T.A.R ;)
Kurokami
Changed everything. Thanks for the mod.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Twenty Knives - Crow's Ghost.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 121474
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crow's Ghost
TitleUnicode:Crow's Ghost
Artist:Twenty Knives
ArtistUnicode:Twenty Knives
Creator:Tidek
Version:Kurokami's Normal
Source:
Tags:Breakcore 20 Knives rhythm accuracy dark death Kurokami
BeatmapID:310894
BeatmapSetID:117450

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,111252,120154
2,162095,180785
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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3,100,163,162,255

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240,216,217158,1,2,3:0:0:0:
136,152,217474,6,0,P|96:120|80:56,1,120,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,32,218105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,218421,1,2,3:0:0:0:
368,192,218737,2,0,L|408:144,2,60,2|2|2,3:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,219368,2,0,L|208:144,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,220000,6,0,P|312:344|392:312,2,180,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,221263,2,0,L|64:320,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,221737,2,0,P|188:148|156:68,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222526,12,0,225053,0:0:0:0:
[Seraphin]
Mod? What's that?
sorry about late

SB load is over 5x in some places!


[SB]
Fade in and out break.png?

[Kurokami's Normal]
This is a very unique diff, so I can't mod quite the same way as others orz
I don't want to ruin it.

Inconsistent setting: Letterbox in breaks


00:54:842 (3) - More like http://puu.sh/56IVO.jpg?
01:08:105 (3) - Also, more like http://puu.sh/56IZw.jpg?
03:16:947 (5) - x340y216
01:01:316 (2) - 1/2 earlier and resnap
01:18:526 (7) - finish
01:47:579 (3) - Do the same thing you did to this slider you did to 01:46:316 (1) - with the hitsounds o3o
02:06:526 (1) - Add finish to head of slider
02:11:579 (1) - ^
02:14:105 (1) - ^
02:21:684 (1) - ^
02:29:263 (1) - ^
02:34:947 (2) - Remove finish from end of slider and add to repeat
02:36:842 (1) - Add finish to head of slider
02:39:368 (1) - ^
yay finishes
[Hard]
I think you should go over the hitsounds once more.

01:00:447 (4) - 1/4 forward
02:02:737 (6) - Remove repeat

Great and unique.
[Insane]
Genius
OD-1

[DeatH]
how2mod
god's mapset

03:38:026 (14) - Add NC

I approve of this mapset.
sorry about bad mod orz
Topic Starter
Tidek

Mira-san wrote:

Hi. From my modding queue.

[Hard]
02:06:211 (7)
- Rotate this clockwise by -30 degrees but it's up to you. Just my suggestion. fixd - made blanket
03:21:053 (1,2,3,4,5)
- Make this a perfect pentagon. fixd
03:31:158 (4,5,6,7,8) fixd
- ^

[Death]
Put NC on these notes. (You can ignore this one.)
00:55:000 (9)
00:57:684 (8)
01:02:895 (14)
01:07:947 (12)
01:10:789 (16)
... After few suggestions, fixd most of these NCs

02:41:737 (12)
- Move this to x:328 y:96 fixd


[Insane]
02:30:684 (6,7,8,9,10)
- Make this a perfect pentagon (if possible). fixd
02:38:105 (4,5,6,7,8)
- wat. Change this to a square jump or triangle. (or move 02:38:263 (5) to x:236 y:232) fixd that pattern


That's all I can find.
Not much, forgive me lol.

ECG sliders are awesome :D

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From Modding Queue.

General

  1. It's too hard song for me-.

Hard

  1. 01:00:211 (1) - NC?
previous combo will be way too short

Death

  1. Pass. hardcore map.

Insane

  1. 01:04:632 (5,6) - change four note? Idk what u excatly mean here, but if u wanted to make 4slider shape symmetrical to 5 and 6, then nope ;d
  2. 01:29:737 (3) - move (242,232) more jump- I dont like that overlap :P
  3. 02:25:474 (7,8) - change four note?


hooooaa

really hard rythem.

wait, 03:47:579 (1,1,1,1,1) - it's heartbeat! Yup, it is : )

..

nice mapset- and hard rythem :o .

S.T.A.R ;)Thanks, but you didnt give it :x

[Seraphin] wrote:

Mod? What's that?
sorry about late

SB load is over 5x in some places!


[SB]
Fade in and out break.png? Fade in doesnt fit for sudden breaking screen : P

[Hard]
I think you should go over the hitsounds once more.

01:00:447 (4) - 1/4 forward It will break rhythm
02:02:737 (6) - Remove repeat Did u mean correct place? there is no repeat : P

Great and unique.
[Insane]
Genius
OD-1 Noooooo, OD6 for acc insane? nope

[DeatH]
how2mod
god's mapset

03:38:026 (14) - Add NC added

I approve of this mapset.
sorry about bad mod orz
Thanks for mods guys.
bigfrog
hello~ from queue :3

Kurokami's Nomal
hey,first,i think your Normal is too hard,since your mapset has no Easy,your Normal must be under 3.25 star.
00:42:526 (4) - more bent plz,just like (1,3)
00:55:789 (1,2) - blanket perfect
01:28:632 (1) - not use so many point? like this :
01:44:421 (2) - bent like this to get flow :
02:05:263 (3,1) - maybe (3) can be blanket (1) start?
02:29:895 (2,1) - (2) end and (1) start stack
02:36:842 (1) - try this? :
03:34:316 (4) - 412|244 for blanket please
Hard
01:22:947 (4,5) - not stack perfect?
01:29:895 (4,5) - i highly recommended to let them with same shape,it'll be better
02:24:053 (6,1) - i think this looks more neat :
Insane
02:04:000 (1) - try this? :
03:12:684 (5,6) - (5) reversion 20 degrees clockwise to make a straight line.
03:47:579 (1,1,1,1,1) - so cool!!!!!! ><

sorry can't mod Death,this song make me feel my chair is also shaking @口@
and nice story board !! Good luck >3<
Topic Starter
Tidek

bigfrog wrote:

hello~ from queue :3

Kurokami's Nomal
hey,first,i think your Normal is too hard,since your mapset has no Easy,your Normal must be under 3.25 star.
Read description, Easy GD is in progress atm : ).
Hard
01:22:947 (4,5) - not stack perfect?
fixd
01:29:895 (4,5) - i highly recommended to let them with same shape,it'll be better You are right, it looks a lot better, fixd
02:24:053 (6,1) - i think this looks more neat :
not big difference at all, but fixd ;3

Insane
02:04:000 (1) - try this? :
I like it, fixd
03:12:684 (5,6) - (5) reversion 20 degrees clockwise to make a straight line. ok, fixd
03:47:579 (1,1,1,1,1) - so cool!!!!!! >< ;3

sorry can't mod Death,this song make me feel my chair is also shaking @口@ hahaha : D
and nice story board !! Good luck >3<
Thank you : )
Silverboxer
from my modding queue

Normal

This diff is way too hard for Normal. Try to avoid using more than one 1/2 note in a row because most Normal players aren't able to play 190bpm

00:45:684 (1,2,3) - too hard for normal, replace some circles with sliders: http://puu.sh/57WeJ.jpg
00:59:579 (2,3,1,2) - doesn't fit the music. rearrange the sliders to match the notes. perhaps this: http://puu.sh/57WFT.png
02:05:263 (3) - same as above. shorten this slider and add a new one: http://puu.sh/57X3B.png
02:14:579 (2) - remove this circle
02:15:368 (3) - end of slider doesn't match any beat. shorten or extend to a red tick
02:24:684 (2) - remove this circle?
02:39:053 (3,4,1) - change circles to one short slider
03:20:263 (2,3) - doesn't fit music, switch slider and circle: http://puu.sh/57XmM.png
Insane

Distance snap is very inconsistent. Pick a number and stick with it unless you're making streams or jumps

01:01:789 (3,4,5) - too close to previous slider
01:03:842 (2) - ^
01:06:842 (3,4,5) - ^
01:08:895 (2,3,4) - ^
01:10:000 (9,10) - this little combo here plays very awkwardly. move sliders 10 and 11 somewhere higher up in the play area
01:11:895 (3) - too close to previous slider
01:13:474 (1) - ^
01:13:947 (2,3,4) - ^
01:19:000 (2,3,4) - ^
01:48:842 (5,6) - overlapping sliders doesn't look good
02:24:684 (2,3,4) - too close to previous slider
02:27:684 (3,4,5) - ^
02:29:737 (2) - ^
02:32:737 (3,4,5) - ^
02:34:789 (2) - ^
02:37:789 (3) - ^
02:39:842 (2,3,4) - ^
03:07:474 (3,4,5) - too far apart for 1/4 notes
03:41:737 (3,4,5,6,1) - looks like it's meant to be symmetrical, but isn't centered at x:256
If you really want to keep the ending part, add a spinner from 04:20:421 to 04:24:211
Death

There are a few problems that appear quite often, like in Insane.

Keep distance snap consistent (when it changes from 1.5x to 1.0x for one section, that's fine. But make sure it's the same for those separate sections)
Overlapping sliders doesn't look good
Add same spinner from 04:20:421 to 04:24:211
Topic Starter
Tidek

silverboxer wrote:

from my modding queue

Insane

Distance snap is very inconsistent. Pick a number and stick with it unless you're making streams or jumps
I did (like 1,5x for first part, 1,0x for more quiet part, 1,8x after break etc. depends of intense of music), I see you mainly mentioned these circles after long sliders where I was lowering DS and yeah I agree with that, maybe its only my 2nd beatmap, but im improving my mapping skills very fast and now it looks weird even for me Oo, will fix it.

01:01:789 (3,4,5) - too close to previous slider fixd
01:03:842 (2) - ^ fixd
01:06:842 (3,4,5) - ^fixd
01:08:895 (2,3,4) - ^fixd
01:10:000 (9,10) - this little combo here plays very awkwardly. move sliders 10 and 11 somewhere higher up in the play area Here I cant agree, it fits a lot better as it is now, up->down->up... fits a lot better for that kind of rhythm
01:11:895 (3) - too close to previous slider fixd
01:13:474 (1) - ^fixd
01:13:947 (2,3,4) - ^fixd
01:19:000 (2,3,4) - ^fixd
01:48:842 (5,6) - overlapping sliders doesn't look good that was really small overlap xD but yea, fixd
02:24:684 (2,3,4) - too close to previous slider fixd
02:27:684 (3,4,5) - ^fixd
02:29:737 (2) - ^fixd
02:32:737 (3,4,5) - ^fixd
02:34:789 (2) - ^fixd
02:37:789 (3) - ^fixd
02:39:842 (2,3,4) - ^fixd
03:07:474 (3,4,5) - too far apart for 1/4 notes for circles, yes, for repeat sliders, no.
03:41:737 (3,4,5,6,1) - looks like it's meant to be symmetrical, but isn't centered at x:256 It is symmetrical (diamond), its isnt centered cuz of lack of space. On gameplay u dont see grid, so its not big change overall.
If you really want to keep the ending part, add a spinner from 04:20:421 to 04:24:211 That spinner doesnt fit there (previous sliders are "heartbeat line"
Death

There are a few problems that appear quite often, like in Insane. I know what u mean, will fix these places where im lowering DS

Keep distance snap consistent (when it changes from 1.5x to 1.0x for one section, that's fine. But make sure it's the same for those separate sections) except these parts I wrote above, DS is consistent
Overlapping sliders doesn't look good examples? Since they are readable and fun to play, its ok
Add same spinner from 04:20:421 to 04:24:211 up
Thanks for mod : )
Fushimi Rio
Sorry for delay.

From queue

[General]
LetterboxInBreaks: 0, you may need to change it in .osu file

[Normal]

00:59:579 (2,3,1) - remove 3, or put it at01:00:447 - and move it by ds
02:36:842 (1) - move the 3rd grid to x20 y44
03:34:316 (4) - move to x416 y244

[Hard]

01:04:632 (4,5) - try this
01:15:211 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow
02:25:947 (5) - ^
01:22:947 (4,5) - stack 5 to 4's end
01:44:105 (1,2) - looks bad. try to change 1's shape?
02:06:211 (7) - move 1st grid to x376 y160 and 3rd grid x356 y60
02:40:632 (4,5,6,7,8) - use ctrl+shift+d to make a better polygon circles
03:21:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:27:368 (10,1) - put 1 further, you may have to move 1、2、3 together

[Insane]

00:49:474 (4,5,6,7,8) - make them a square and put 8 to the center, also ctrl+shift+d
01:25:000 (5,6,7) - not quite readable
01:35:105 (5,6,7) - ^
03:05:737 (5,6,7) - ^
03:22:316 (1) - put it closer to 2

[Death]

01:25:000 (2,3,4) - put them further to avoid stack
02:41:737 (6) - add some SE to it

Pretty good map. I like the sliders in the end :)
Topic Starter
Tidek

Eggache0 wrote:

Sorry for delay.

From queue

[General]
LetterboxInBreaks: 0, you may need to change it in .osu file

[Hard]

01:04:632 (4,5) - try this
looks fine, fixd
01:15:211 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow ok
02:25:947 (5) - ^ ^
01:22:947 (4,5) - stack 5 to 4's end Its stacked, u have old version I think ;d
01:44:105 (1,2) - looks bad. try to change 1's shape? fixd blanked a little
02:06:211 (7) - move 1st grid to x376 y160 and 3rd grid x356 y60 fixd
02:40:632 (4,5,6,7,8) - use ctrl+shift+d to make a better polygon circles I think that here its good enough
03:21:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
03:27:368 (10,1) - put 1 further, you may have to move 1、2、3 together fixd

[Insane]

00:49:474 (4,5,6,7,8) - make them a square and put 8 to the center, also ctrl+shift+d fixd, but i still keep diamond pattern
01:25:000 (5,6,7) - not quite readable Im following rhythm, so it should be readable
01:35:105 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
03:05:737 (5,6,7) - ^ The same, I avoided overlap, so it must be readable
03:22:316 (1) - put it closer to 2 fixd a little

[Death]

01:25:000 (2,3,4) - put them further to avoid stack fixd
02:41:737 (6) - add some SE to it Sorry, but i dont really know what SE is :(

Pretty good map. I like the sliders in the end :)
Thanks : )
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