Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Normal
00:53:04 (5) - sounds good without this note, it's up to u True.Fix

Hard
01:07:19 - what's this timing section for? For the silent end of the slider. Anyway, you make realize there's a timing error here. Fix

Insane
00:13:04 (8,9,10) - move half beat later 1/2 ? It sound too weird for a 1/2 adjustment... Or maybe I misunderstand you ?
00:23:98 (5) - move to the next blue tick, and..... Nice one !
00:24:17 (6) - move to the next red tick, end the slider at 00:24:55 Fix !
00:25:49 (5,6) - same as above Fix
00:27:00 (5) - move to the next blue tick Fix
00:27:19 (6) - remove this note (dot forget fix spacing if you make the changes) Fix
All fix on INSANE are nice ! Thanks !

Nice map!
Star

m980 wrote:

[Hard]
02:24:36 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Hitsounds for this don't really flow well. I kinda understand why you don't like it. Ok, I make the hitsounds louder, but I still let them gradually lose sounds. See whether you think this flows better or not. XD

[Insane]
00:16:25 (1,2,3) - Completely confused me. Fix
01:04:17 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is RIDICULOUSLY close and is VERY confusing Fix
01:26:44 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - v Don't understand this part
01:38:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like how you didn't map this to the music. Uhm... I forgotten the previous edit already, might have fix this part already, take a look again please ?
02:21:34 (1) onwards - Hitsounds for this section doesn't really flow.Fix this part by deleting 2 notes. Please check again whether this fits or not ? =D
HP Drain rate is less harsh than Hard XD Coz I myself can't pass this map you see. XD Fix ! (Change to same level as Hard, or you think it's better to be more harder than this ?
Random Stacks and Streams AREN'T FUN. Ok ! Completely remap some of the stacks, random streams part of the map. Can replay again and comment again ? Thanks ! =D

[All Difficulties]
01:56:63 - I don't really like silent sections. Please atleast make it quiet. Ok, fix this. XD
02:26:63 - I really don't like how you end the maps at this time. It doesn't really make sense and feels weird. Maybe you should end it 02:57:00. That's just my opinion though :p Many people have voiced this opinion before already, so, I guess it is weird then. XD Ok, I shortened EASY & NORMAL, semi lenghtened HARD to a later part, and of course, super lengthened INSANE to 02:57:00. Please help me recheck those lenghtened part ? XD

[Storyboard]
You have 2 osbs.. Delete "Motoi Sakuraba - Battle with God Syndrome -Valkyrie Profile- (alvisto).osb".
Your filepaths are screwed up.
""Songs\1.14 - Battle with God Syndrome\1.jpg""
Get rid of "Songs\1.14 - Battle with God Syndrome\"
This does for all of them Thanks for this tips ! I didn't know that ! >.<
"White.jpg" Isn't the right size, resize if to 640x480 and delete all Size related transformations. =O 640x480 is perfect ! I fix Black too.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[Normal]
-01:30:59 (2,3) - The spacing n this looks wierd; try moving the slider and beat to match the picture below. Good eye ! Thanks !

Starred! Thanks for the star !

kingcobra52 wrote:

-All difficulties end at a weird spot. It might be better to end at 02:20:78 instead. Fix that already, can please recheck my map ? =P

-Lighten the dark blue and purple combo colors a bit. The approach circles are hard to see when the bg is all black. Hmmm.... Totally fix that, coz I just put in Breeze's skin and changed the hit circle colour too. Please see whether those approach circles is still hard to see ?

Hard

01:27:19 (4) - New combo.
01:28:70 (4) - ^ Fix !

Starred. Thanks for the star !

animask wrote:

[Easy]
Maybe lower overall difficulty by 1 tick Ok ^o^
01:49:83 (3) - New Combo
01:50:21 (1) - Remove New Combo Good Eye !

[Normal]
00:13:23 (3) - Add a Clap? Ahh ! Good Ear ! Fix
00:14:74 (2) - ^ Fix
00:27:57 (1) - New Combo? Fix
00:51:53 (1) - Remove New Combo Fix
01:06:63 (2) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider maybe? Definitely sound better with whistle XD Fix !
01:55:87 (5) - Add a Clap on the beginning of the slider Ya, sound better. Fix

[Hard]
01:49:65 (1) - Remove New Combo and Clap Ahhh !! I mistime the clap ! =P Thanks, and fix
01:49:83 (1) - Add a Clap and Remove New Combo
01:53:04 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:54:55 (1) - ^ Actually the purpose of me adding all new combo at these particular weird spots is to emphasize that lonely new combo is the clap sound. XD However, if many think it's unnecessary, I may remove it. =)
02:31:53 (1) - Extend to next white tick Fix

[Insane]
00:35:87 (4) - Stack it properly on 3 Nice eye
00:36:44 (6) - Stack it properly on 1 Nice Eye !
01:06:44 (5) - Add a Clap? Ah~~~ I forgot to clap this... nice ear !
02:19:08 (18) - Add New Combo The purpose I don't want to put a combo here is to let player know they have to continuous hit the beats for 17 times. Please tell me whether this is necessary or not, coz I am not a very good INSANE player. XD
02:19:27 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:22:85 (1) - ^ I believed I remove this notes already ? =O You are modding the old version of my map ! XD
02:23:61 (1) - ^ ^
02:55:49 (1) - Extend to next white tick Fix

Nice Job for your first beatmap~ Ah~~ I get pink ! Means affetionate & loving ? Thanks !

WyndII wrote:

I, still can't import your map in my osu! but the music is great and you have enough stars that says "This map is food good." Awww, that's bad. Anyway, thanks for your star ! But sorry, I can't kudosu you, but I think I modded your map already right ? =P

Star for you~

Symbolic wrote:

I didn't see anything of the skin? At my osu! it just loaded the default skin..


[Easy]

Remove the timing sections where u stopped mapping lolol.

kingcobra52 wrote:

Easy

-Remove kiai time from the end where you had notes before. Otherwise you get a skip prompt at the end. (basically what Symbolic said above)

Symbolic wrote:

00:10:21 (5) - Shorten this slider by 1/4. Previously I have this shorten, but someone said it is too hard for EASY. Guess I will shorten it back then. XD
01:32:85 (1) - Let this start 1/2 earlier and extend it by 1/2. Fix

I'll mod the rest later, have a star for now. Thanks for the Star !
*

kingcobra52 wrote:

Hard

00:10:21 (1,2) - Line up with 3. Fix. Good Eye !

Insane

01:07:19 (3) - Line up with 2. Good Eye !
02:51:72 (4) - New combo. Fix

Much better combo colors. ^^ Thanks. ^o^

whymeman wrote:

(Only checking the skin like you asked.)

Errors:

1.) The hit circle...

[attachment=0:95c72]hitcircle.png[/attachment:95c72]

The image on the hit circle is a bit too large. I can see it extending slightly out of the circle overlay as well.

2.) The Score bar...

Nothing really wrong with this but..... why does it say "Enemy HP"? I thought "Your HP" or just "HP" might work since having "Emeny HP" kinda makes it feel backwards to me. (Only a suggestion though).


That's all. I normally don't do this without fully modding, but i'll drop my star in.

arken1015 wrote:

How many it get stars?
I don't know
But this is good XD

Star this

DeathxShinigami wrote:

First off...

Starred.

[Easy]

Lower HP drain by 1. Feels to life drain for an easy and most easy's I've seen ahve lower drain than that sadly.

[Normal]

Looks fine.

[Hard]

Fine here to.

[Insane]

I really don't care but raise HP drain by 1?

alvisto wrote:

Jeffro wrote:

This map is awesome!

Starred.

Couldn't really find problems in this map

Thanks ! And oops, I accidentally gave kudosu to ya. XD

Jeffro wrote:

I will probably be denied them soon so I need to withdraw myself from shooting a star @ my map.

Wojjan wrote:

I told you in chat what to do with Easy. Thanks ! I didn't know about that DS tips at all. I learned a new thing from ya. =D

Normal
00:06:44 (5,1) - spacing Good eye !
00:27:57 (7) - Space correctly by putting the DS to x1.6. And it should go 'till the white tick after the end Good eye and ear !
00:50:02 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is quite chellenging for Normal. Changed to slider
02:15:49 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Place on the grid, and the 3,4 in the middle of the grid Fix !


Hard
00:13:61 (2,5) - Place on the blue ticks. Why I didn't sense this earlier ? lol. Good ear
01:05:31 (1,3) - Place their ends on blue ticks
01:06:82 (1) - Slider end goes on the white tick after end.
02:26:06 (1,2,3) - Remove Kiai. It's too sudden
02:28:14 (4,5) - That's too much of a jump Totally missed that. That was not intentional i assure you.
All fix

I don't like Insane at all. In the least, lower the HP drain with combo's like this =( Ok, I will try adjusting INSANE again, since you are the 2nd one who complain that INSANE is not fun. =D

x3ns0r wrote:

alright here is a new spinner

Alace wrote:

As i said in IRC
Soft-clap doesn`t fit the song
I will take a look again after you fixing hitsounds
great map

Alex0686 wrote:

[attachment=0:afed7]stuff.rar[/attachment:afed7]

Gens wrote:

Here comes a lazy mod!

[Overall]
- Check that the Kiai Time is the same on all difficulties.
- 3secs of Lead-In is too much... Ok. Will fix that after I get back from school.

[Skin]
- Maybe force default skin and get rid of the hitcircleoverlay.png you have there? I dunno.
- Some skinning elements still need polishment, like the Ki and the Healthbar. Oh no, photoshop thingy again. Will see what can I do about this... (I am a total PS noob)

[Easy]
01:32:66 (1) - Doesn't sounds good at all. Fix

Everything else seems fine to me. Thanks for the mod & star !

minyeob wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:29 (3) - Make closer from (2). Good eye !

[Insane]
00:29:08 ( ) - Add a circle on here. (Like Hard) Good eye !

Very Nice.
This map is worth taking some kudo stars. Oh my gawd~~~ You spent so much kudosu on my map... I am plesantly and excitedly speechless... XD Thanks a lot a lot !!

Here you are! Good luck =D

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

All right~

We did an IRC mod. Fixed some miscellaneous problems here and there.

Here's your SB fixed. Extract in your song folder. Check if everything is good and yeah.

Larto wrote:

Overall:
- Remove the Audio Track from the video please, just to save filesize
- Remove the Countdown (from Easy at least). Song Setup -> Storyboarding. =O Thanks !

Insane:
02:40:59 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent. I mean, I didn't really have a problem with it while playing, but think about redoing that pattern Redone ! I accidentally missed this when I resnap all the notes. XD

Hard:
02:27:38 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't stack these notes, it's pretty confusing. Fix !

Normal is good

Easy is good.

Lizbeth wrote:

nice, congrats on your first ranked map n_n

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Someone will need a brighter side.

Lissette wrote:

congrats alvisto!!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Wow! I'm very impressed to see how far this came the last time I saw this. SB-wise
This is very good and congrats on your first ranked map!