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Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve

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fartownik
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fartownik
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 23 sierpnia 2009 at 18:26:15

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Mirai no Eve
Tags: Hatsune Miku Vocaloid Miki no Ivu Mirai no Eve
BPM: 140
Filesize: 5226kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,87 stars, 291 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 418 notes)
  3. Matma Rex's Normal (4,23 stars, 173 notes)
  4. WyndII (5 stars, 301 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi.
Last edited by fartownik , edited 32 times in total.
adam2046
1,653 posts
Joined April 2008
adam2046
I feel it's something like:
BPM: 140.00
Ofsset: 2,026
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Thanks adam2046.
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
hi :)

random mod:

[hard]
00:05:240 spinner - start at 00:05:454 is better
00:57:311 (1) - end at 00:57:847, and move (2,3,4) a grid backward, spinner start at 00:58:597

some spacing wrong and different Beat snap spacing problems, anyway, it's not a big problem
few erratically Beat snap spacing is OK, to many so that...
here I list them, you have the choic to fix them or just ignore them

00:08:026 (3) - jump on here is confused
00:10:597 (1) - ^

and there're some spacing wrong, all the wrong spacing at note 1 is acceptable, at other notes are confused:
00:26:026 (1) - wrong spacing
00:32:240 (1) - ^
00:33:740 (3) - ^
00:36:311 (4) - ^
00:45:497 (1) - ^
01:08:883 (2,4) - ^
01:10:383 (1) - jump on here is confused
01:12:740 (2) - even a jump need a distance snap, note 1 is 1.1x Beat snap spacing so 2 and 3 should be the same, or it be confused
01:14:454 (2) - ^
01:16:597 (1) - wrong spacing
01:17:454 (1) - ^
01:18:311 (3,4) - ^
01:20:240 (1) - ^
01:20:883 (1) - ^
01:22:224 (1) - ^

[insane]
00:09:526 (1) - jump too much
ohers seems OK


nice map
I think it's hard to me to pass ;_;

starred
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Fixed some places from your list Breeze. Thanks for modding.
skratch
104 posts
Joined November 2008
skratch
good
K2J
872 posts
Here since the beginning
K2J
[Hard]
00:31:38 (1) - You'll need some sort of indication from the design tab that you're going to speed up like this.
01:03:41 (1) - Too short (the one after it is pretty close, too). I suggest just two circles, each with its own combo, and a jump between them.
01:32:88 (3) - New combo.
I'm uncertain about having notes fade out... a spinner might work, but not a whole bunch of notes for something that's fading away.

[Insane]
01:02:24 (1) - Same as the previous difficulty.
01:36:31 (1) - Same issue as previous difficulty. This is the spot at which I would either switch to a spinner or just stop mapping.

Overall, the map is sort of all over the place, but that's likely due to how hard both difficulties are. Add an easier difficulty, tone down Hard a bit, and look at the issues I've presented, and I think you'll be well on your way to a good map.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
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tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Move it to WIP?

[Hard]
I disagree with speed up.
00:02:45 (3) - Nazi. Down a bit.
00:09:95 (4) - Finish.
00:24:74 (2) - Clap on start.
00:57:31 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:17:24 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:25:81 (6,1) - Omg...
00:52:70 (2,1) - Spacing.

It's creative, so I star.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Zrobię diffa :D

[Normal]
WIP?
00:11:34 (3,4), 00:13:06 (3,4) - usunąłbym te czwórki. Tym bardziej w Normalu.

[Hard, Insane]
Zmień szybkość tych sliderów. Jedyne słowa na określenie tego przyspieszenia to "do dupy".

[Insane]
Blaa, trudne. Przeszedłem może 10 sekund.


Poza tym mi się podoba. Starred :D

PS. Kopiowanie tytułu i wykonawcy w tagach jest niepotrzebne.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Blah. I made a diff. Called it Normal. And it has 4.56 stars. Gotta do something with it.

WIP:Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [Matma Rex's Normal].osu

WIP#2:Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [Matma Rex's Normal].osu

Ready:Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [Matma Rex's Normal].osu


I trochę modowania:
01:38:99 (1)/01:39:09 (1) - wywalilbym tego spinnera.

PS. Ten drugi kolor combo jest strasznie ciemny, może zamień na ten, który ja ustawiłem? :)


Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [Matma Rex's Normal].osu

Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [Matma Rex's Normal].osu
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WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [WyndII].osu

Download: soft-hitfinish.rar
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
+hitsounds, some little things prettified.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [Matma Rex's Normal].osu
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
lukewarmholiday
Matma's Normal
01:08:02 (7) - unfortunately you can not have the start and endpoints on a slider overlap like this.

Hard

Nothin

WyndII
00:58:59 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - from what I gathered from this you got bored and decided to arbitrarily put sliders and streams.
01:05:02 (14) - new combo
01:08:88 (27,28,29,30,31) - align these with the pattern before jesus

Insane
Nothing other than I hate random sliders in streams.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
This is the complete one..
hope you'll like it all.
Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [WyndII].osu
kiais... is next lol
Teara
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Teara
Starry!
fartownik
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fartownik
Added skin elements.
Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Normal]
Add hitsounds when you have the time
01:07:16 (5) - Slider could be confused with the fading slider
01:12:95 (2) - Slider sounds better shortened to the blue tick and white tick
01:14:66 (4) - ^
01:19:81 (2) - ^
01:21:52 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:24:74 (2) - Finish on the beginning instead
00:45:09 (1,2) - Timing feels off
00:50:88 (4) - Stack of fading 1?

[Insane]
Raise the hitsound volume up a bit
00:34:59 (5) - Sounds better on the white tick and ending on the red tick
00:35:77 (6) - Blue Tick to red tick?
00:36:84 (6) - Delete
00:45:20 (2) - ^
00:47:02 (5) - White Tick?
00:47:99 (8) - Delete
01:19:70 (4) - ^
01:21:41 (4) - ^
01:23:24 (4) - ^
01:23:99 (4) - ^
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Didn't found anything to mod ^^
Anyways, good map :D
Star~
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
all fine,i can not find any mistakes.
star~
Armin
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Armin
Good beatmap.

[Matma's Rex's Normal]
This difficulty is boring. :)
But..anyway, I suggest to you that things:
00:09:31 (6) Finish, like (1), (4) and (9)
01:08:88 (1) SPACING.
01:17:45 (1) Whistle.
01:17:88 (3) Whistle.
01:18:52 (6) Whistle.

[Hard]
This difficulty is very good. :)
00:04:38 (3) whistle?
00:09:09 (2) whistle at the end (I don't like the finish in this part, sorry)

[WyndII]
00:03:31(4) 1 square to the right
I don't see other errors.

[Insane]
Perfect.

Starred.
fartownik
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fartownik
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
cool

click here for my mod results (would take a full page)
SPOILER
:lol:
Derekku
COOL DUDE
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Joined March 2009
Derekku
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:04:16 (3) - Expected a whistle here. XP
00:27:74 (1,2) - Why are these spaced differently than 00:29:45 (5,6) ?
00:32:02 (3) - Extend by a 1/4th? Then fix spacing to the next (1)
00:33:74 (3) - ^
00:35:45 (3) - ^
00:45:74 (3) - ^
00:47:45 (3) - ^
00:49:16 (3) - ^
01:08:02 (1) - Uh, I don't think is is allowed. Especially not for an easy difficulty. :/

[Hard]
00:31:38 (4) - If you're going to have a BPM change, then at least make this a new combo. :X
Hard? Those sliders make it feel more like an Insane to me ._.;

[WyndII]
Scratch that @ above comment. fffffffff streams

[Insane]
Aaaand scratch that. fffffffffffffffffffff D:

So yeah, pretty much just stuff for [Normal]. Nice skin, etc, *star* :P
minyeob
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minyeob
[Your maps]
The final part thing
Sound is going quiter that's good but I can't hear any sound effects after 1:36:63 Timing toggle.

[Matma Rex]
00:04:59 (5,6,7,8,9) - Too hard for Normal players

[Hard]
00:33:41 (2) - In my opinion, stacking this circle is not good
01:26:02 (1) - 1 more U-turn please

[Wynd]
00:20:66 (1,2) - Swap New Combo

[Insane]
00:29:45 (5) - Make closer from 00:30:63 (1).
00:32:56 (10) - Overlapped?

Starred!
Matma Rex
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Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:04:59 (5,6,7,8,9) - It's normal diff, right? Don't use streams.
01:07:81 (6,7,1) - Spacing.

[WyndII]
I love it! <3
00:04:59 (4) - New combo.
00:15:52 (5) - ^
00:50:88 (4) - ^
01:11:66 (6) - ^
01:15:74 (8) - ^
01:18:52 (6) - ^
fartownik
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fartownik

tieff wrote:

[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:04:59 (5,6,7,8,9) - It's normal diff, right? Don't use streams. Fixed.
01:07:81 (6,7,1) - Spacing. Fixed.

[WyndII]
I love it! <3
00:04:59 (4) - New combo. Isn't needed.
00:15:52 (5) - ^ Isn't needed.
00:50:88 (4) - ^ Isn't needed.
01:11:66 (6) - ^ Isn't needed.
01:15:74 (8) - ^ Fixed.
01:18:52 (6) - ^ Isn't needed.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex

fartownik wrote:

tieff wrote:

[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:04:59 (5,6,7,8,9) - It's normal diff, right? Don't use streams. Fixed.
FFFFFFFFFF-
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Great beatmap =]
the skin is pretty awesome I never got so happy on missing a note, miku's face is so cute XD
And man! U did a Fruit catcher!

I just think that the Comboburst got a little weard with a cutted pic =/

Well. star \o/
Alace
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Alace
I only do a quick modding
<Hard>
X2 BPM don`t fit the song
insane+WyndII are 1000 times better
plz redesign those parts

<WyndII>
00:04:59 (4) - new combo here
00:14:66 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - patten like this is confusing (5) new combo or redesign
00:32:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm the spacing is a bit confusing (i guess it`s fine personally)
^some parts have the same issue\
anyway use new combo when you have a new spacing

<insane>
too many claps lol
really crazy map

ibtw
I like normal`s note colors more
more readable
fartownik
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fartownik
Thanks for modding Alace. I've edit some places in [Hard].
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Mirai no Eve (fartownik) [WyndII].osu
deepsea
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deepsea
[WyndII]

00:46:59(2)(3)(4) little confusing IMO
00:47:68(2)(3)(4) ^
01:01:81(3) offscreen?_?

[Insane]

01:32:88(3) new combo?_?
fartownik
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fartownik

deepsea wrote:

[WyndII]

00:46:59(2)(3)(4) little confusing IMO - Hm, sorry but I see only an intuitive jump here :P It's playable.
00:47:68(2)(3)(4) ^ - ^
01:01:81(3) offscreen?_? Fixed

[Insane]

01:32:88(3) new combo?_? Fixed
Submitting is broken, so I can't upload it right now >.< Uploaded.
deepsea
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deepsea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
CheeseWarlock
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CheeseWarlock
I KNEW this song was an ALI Project cover.~

[WyndII]
This map has WAY too much kiai time for the one-section-per-playtime-minute guideline. You can go over that, but not by this much.
00:32:45 (7,1) - Spacing.

[Insane]
00:31:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Some of the hitsounds here are ugly.
01:24:31 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This section contains a lot of oddly timed notes. Think of sliders as only actual "hits" on their start points.

This is a pretty awesome map overall, though. Can't wait to see it fixed up.
fartownik
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fartownik
Done. Check this out.
mrtn
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mrtn
[matma rex's normal]
no problems

[hard]
no probs

[wyndii]
00:46:16 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - NO
01:11:66 (6,7) - bad jump
01:18:52 (6,7) - ^
01:18:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - NO

[insane]
no probs
fartownik
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fartownik
[wyndii]
00:46:16 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4) - NO - FIXED
01:11:66 (6,7) - bad jump - - FIXED
01:18:52 (6,7) - ^ - - FIXED
01:18:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - NO - What is wrong here? It's playable and intuitive...
mrtn
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mrtn
[wyndII]
00:15:52 (1,2,3) - out of place jump
00:32:66 (8,1,2,3) - ^
00:33:52 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:74 (1,2,3) - ^
00:37:59 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:16 (1,2,3) - ^
00:47:66 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:95 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - remap this. These jump feel very weird.
01:24:74, 01:26:45, 01:32:88 - these kiai time toggles are not allowed. The general rule is 1 kiai time for each minute of play time.

edit: bubbled
deepsea
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