Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas - Take Me Out!! · forum

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-08T02:45:14+00:00

DX5536 wrote:
M4M

[Normal]
00:07:876 (6,1) - del 1 and repeat 6 one time nope
is yes, 00:08:521 (7) - NC
00:12:230 (1,2,3,4,1) - these sliders are confusing. maybe like this Fixed
SPOILER
00:39:166 (1,2) - del 2 and start 1 at white tick after

[Hard]
00:15:456 (1) - remv NC nope
00:25:134 (1,2) - these are kinda off screen
Well made, my friend xD

[Insane]
Sorry, i can't mod insane with high BPM ;_;

That's all. This song rapes my ears T^T but good map. P A N T S U's Easy should use more white ticks since it's Easy.
Good luck~

Thanks for m od!

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-08T02:59:32+00:00

litoluna wrote:
hi~
thanks request from game pm

[General]
I think AudioLeadIn: 1500
Fixed

[Normal]
02:14:650 (6) - finish?yep
02:16:101 (3) - finish at begin yep
02:17:230 (5) - ^ ^
[Hard]
00:34:811 (2) - Ctrl+G? fun jump Fixed
00:45:779 (2,3,4) - like that? back sound in all drums sounds good but i thought about shape
02:18:682 (5) - NC Fixed

[Insane]
01:32:876 (6,7,8,9,1) - Spacing 01:33:118 (7,8) - 0.8x
ohhh fixed
sorry poor English
cool song~
Good Luck

Thanks Litoluna! <3

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-08T03:05:30+00:00

P A N wrote:

oh god so many mod lazy to reply D:
but fixed almost all for all

thanks

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Take Me Out!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47022
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 109005
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:Dance & Scream
Tags:jpop P_A_N electronicore
BeatmapID:298178
BeatmapSetID:115358

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,67914,76597
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Updated~ i love your Easy GD

[ Insane ]

[ Insane ] 2013-09-08T03:12:53+00:00

8mods in one day?!?!

caren_sk

782 posts

Joined October 2010

caren_sk 2013-09-08T16:25:53+00:00

good luck !!

Pizza Kun

455 posts

Joined March 2011

Pizza Kun 2013-09-08T16:32:12+00:00

Mod from your modding queue [M4M]

I love this background, and when i have a kudosu i'll shot you a star!

[Insane]

00:10:617 (5,2) - Fix blanket
00:11:424 (2,2) - Ctrl+G I think it is better in this way
00:14:488 (5) - Move in 236||144
00:29:650 (4,6) - Fix blanket
00:31:424 (4) - Move in 236||140
00:31:908 (5) - 2° anchor point in 24||208 and: 00:32:230 (6,8) - Ctrl+G
00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - <3 love this
00:48:682 (4,6) - Stack better
00:55:617 (7,2) - ^
01:21:424 (6,1) - Stack on end
01:59:811 (5) - Move to 332||84
I think is better this: 01:59:972 (5) - in 256||24 and this rithm:

02:19:005 (2) - Ctrl+G

This map is awesome ^^

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-08T17:09:52+00:00

caren_sk wrote:
good luck !!

Thanks~

i like stars lol

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-08T17:22:24+00:00

Pizza Kun wrote:
Mod from your modding queue [M4M]

I love this background, and when i have a kudosu i'll shot you a star!

[Insane]

00:10:617 (5,2) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:11:424 (2,2) - Ctrl+G I think it is better in this way Fixed
00:14:488 (5) - Move in 236||144 Fixed
00:29:650 (4,6) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:31:424 (4) - Move in 236||140 Fixed
00:31:908 (5) - 2° anchor point in 24||208 and: 00:32:230 (6,8) - Ctrl+G nor fixed
00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - <3 love this
00:48:682 (4,6) - Stack better Fixed
00:55:617 (7,2) - ^ Fixed
01:21:424 (6,1) - Stack on end Fixed
01:59:811 (5) - Move to 332||84 change similar
I think is better this: 01:59:972 (5) - in 256||24 and this rithm: for shape

02:19:005 (2) - Ctrl+G Fixed

This map is awesome ^^ thanks><

Thank you for modding~

Kinomi

1,229 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-09-13T07:37:04+00:00

Hi~hi~
as your req>.<

General
awesome as usual

P A N's Easy
01:50:295 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider
01:56:747 (2) - add finish
00:40:617 (1) - remove nc
00:39:972 (3) - nc here

Normal
00:52:230 (6) - finish
00:57:392 (1) - ^
01:02:553 (6) - ^
01:18:037 (1) - ^
01:56:747 (5) - ^

Hard
check finish in this diff and insane
01:28:117 (6) - remove it,the triplet start at white tick is not awesome
01:33:279 (7) - ^
or try other patterns

Insane
00:02:392 (6) - awesome

SPOILER

00:11:101 (2,2) - add whistle
00:11:747 (2,2) - add clap
02:00:940 (7) - make it straight
02:16:262 (2,2,2) - add clap
in kiai,I suggest you use default normal whistle

star~~

_AI

225 posts

Joined February 2013

_AI 2013-09-13T09:28:04+00:00

[P A N's Easy]
Great~ no problem

[Normal]
4.39star for a normal difficult are kinda too high..
try to reduce it as much as possible

[Hard]
00:44:005 (2,3) - Ctrl + G , switch them
00:53:682 (2,3) - ^
02:13:682 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:14:650 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:811 (7) - Add NC
00:45:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Increase DS and make it better curve (Suggestion)

Great mapset!
doesn't seem to have any much problem to me
;w; maybe this's my shortest mod ever
GL for the map to be ranked~ >.o/

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2013-09-13T10:44:41+00:00

Love this artist =w= Mod requested in-game
Wow how great would it be to have a girlfriend with that accent

EASY

00:23:198 (5) - Move one grid square right (sry for being useless)

00:30:617 (2) - Extend to 00:31:424 ?

00:34:166 (1) - Should start at 00:34:005

00:40:617 (1) - How about

00:54:811 (2) - Should make it curved like (1) since there's repetition in the music

That's all for easy

NORMAL

00:00:618 (1,2) - Move to x 284 y212 or hide it under (4) because it looks weird where it is now

02:14:650 (6,7) - How about slider first then circle

Your other two diffs had no problem to me (especially enjoyed hard) Star~ ;3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Betsuto

395 posts

Joined August 2011

Betsuto 2013-09-13T13:30:15+00:00

from M4M

[Insane]
00:04:972 (9)- I think you can NC for epic jump http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981248
00:08:359 (1,2,3,4)- make it epic jump (place 1 to 3, place 2 to 1, place 3 to 2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981255
00:26:263 (1)- forgot a Finish sound ?
00:36:585 (5)- NC here
00:41:747 (5)- forgot a Finish sound ?
00:42:553 (1,2,3,6)- forgot a Finish sound ?
01:02:553 (8)- NC here and remove NC at 01:02:876 (1)-
01:29:005 (3)- too slow note ... NC it
01:40:617 (1)- so epic stop the note remove it ?, then add NC here 01:41:263 (2)-
02:10:134 (1)- fhuu ~ so many NC spamming remove here and here 02:10:779 (1)-

[Hard]
00:15:456 (1)- epic NC remove it ?, then add NC here 00:15:940 (2)- and remove here too 00:16:424 (1)-
00:17:392 (4)- then ... NC here
01:18:843 (1)- I think remove NC will be better
01:34:166 (1,2,)- forgot a Finish sound ?

good mapping
Good luck ^^

[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-09-13T14:29:19+00:00

모딩하러 왔습니다~XD
부족하지만..도움됬으면..ㅎ

[Normal]

00:11:908 (4) - 디스턴스 1.0로 전 노트들이랑 유지하는게 좋을꺼 같네여(별차이 없지만..)

00:47:714 (3) - ^

00:57:714 (2) - x:206 y:130 (디스턴스 유지관련)

00:58:037 (3) - x:316 y:130(^)

00:58:359 (4) - x:407y:68(^)

01:07:714 (6) - 디스턴스 유지

01:43:843 (8) - ^

[Hard]

00:44:005 (2,3) - 박자 위는 바꾸는건 어떨까여?? 더 자연스러울꺼 같은데

01:49:166 (2,3) - ^

02:13:682 (2,3) - ^

솔직하게 하드 잡을게 없는듯;; 제 실력으로는ㅠㅠ

이지는 잡을게 없고..인세인은 내가 완전 못하고;;그래서 패스합니다.

좋은 맵이에여!! 이런맵에는 별을 딱!!
랭 기대합니다+_+

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2013-09-13T14:49:56+00:00

ㅠㅠ갑자기 서버 터졌네요 ㅠ

IRC MOD CHAT

22:43 TaMul: 전반적으로 힛사 소리가 너무 작은 거같아요
22:43 [ Sana ]: 앗
22:45 TaMul: 인세인입니다
22:45 TaMul: 00:05:134 (1,2,3,4) - 휘슬
22:45 TaMul: 00:05:456 (5) - 클랩
22:46 [ Sana ]: 00:05:456 (5) -
22:46 [ Sana ]: 피니쉬는 뺼까요?
22:46 TaMul: 안 빼도 괜찮을것같아요
22:46 [ Sana ]: 예압
22:47 TaMul: 00:12:392 (2) -
22:48 TaMul: 드럼 클랩힛사 넣는거
22:48 TaMul: 제안이요
22:48 TaMul: 00:12:714 (5) -
22:48 [ Sana ]: 드럼!
22:48 TaMul: 여긴 드럼 피니쉬 힛사 넣는거
22:48 [ Sana ]: 기본 드럼으로해도되죠??
22:48 TaMul: 00:14:327 ,00:14:488 -
22:48 TaMul: 옙 기본 드럼
22:49 TaMul: 00:12:392 (2) -
22:49 TaMul: 클릭하고
22:49 TaMul: 왼쪽에
22:49 TaMul: sampleset
22:49 TaMul: 에서 드럼만 맞추시면
22:49 TaMul: 타이밍포인트 추가할필요없이
22:49 TaMul: 드럼 힛사 넣을수있어요
22:50 [ Sana ]: 아 글쿤
22:51 TaMul: 00:14:327 -
22:51 TaMul: 하고
22:51 TaMul: 00:14:488 -
22:51 TaMul: 소리 증가시켜주세요
22:51 [ Sana ]: 네
22:51 TaMul: 60%,70%
22:51 TaMul: 요런식으로
22:51 TaMul: 00:18:924 - 노트 추가
22:53 TaMul: 00:24:488 (7) -
22:53 TaMul: 뉴콤보
22:53 TaMul: 드럼 클랩 힛사로 처리
22:53 TaMul: 00:24:811 (8) - 드럼 피니쉬 힛사로 처리
22:54 [ Sana ]: 다 피니쉬요??
22:54 [ Sana ]: 리버스까지?
22:55 TaMul: 음
22:55 TaMul: 그게 나을것같네요
22:55 TaMul: 음악 소리를 잘 들어보면
22:56 TaMul: 글자로는 표현 못하겠는데
22:56 TaMul: 음..그래요
22:56 [ Sana ]: 아 그런듯요
22:56 TaMul: 드럼 소리가 같은 음은 아니잖아요?
22:56 TaMul: 두두두두다다다다?
22:56 [ Sana ]: 네네
22:56 [ Sana ]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
22:56 TaMul: 00:26:263 (1) -
22:56 TaMul: 피니쉬
22:57 [ Sana ]: 휘슬은요?
22:58 TaMul: 휘슬은..
22:58 TaMul: 소리가 파묻쳐서
22:58 TaMul: 안넣는게 나을것같아요
22:58 [ Sana ]: 아
22:58 [ Sana ]: 넵!
22:58 TaMul: 00:35:779 (3) - 클랩 뺴주세요
22:59 TaMul: 휘슬로 처리
22:59 TaMul: 00:36:263 (3) - 이것도
22:59 TaMul: 00:39:972 (4) - 클랩 제거
22:59 [ Sana ]: 우와 이런거 어케잡지 신기ㄷ
23:00 [ Sana ]: 햇어용
23:00 TaMul: 00:40:940 (2) - 클랩
23:00 TaMul: 00:41:747 (5) - 피니쉬
23:01 TaMul: 00:42:230 (2) - 클랩 빼고 휘슬
23:01 TaMul: 00:42:553 (1) - 슬라이드 머리,아니 시작부분에 클랩
23:01 TaMul: 그리고 끝 부분 클랩 제거
23:02 TaMul: 00:45:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:03 TaMul: 이런 부분도 드럼 힛사로 처리해주세요
23:03 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:03 [ Sana ]: 일반 드럼이요?
23:03 TaMul: 넵넵 당연
23:03 TaMul: 00:52:230 (7) - 피니쉬?
23:03 [ Sana ]: 아..제가
23:04 [ Sana ]: 스킨에 잇는 드럼 힛사를 노말힛사로 바꿔버려서
23:04 [ Sana ]: 무슨 소리가 나는지 모르겟어요ㅋㅋㅋ
23:05 TaMul: ㄴㄴ
23:05 TaMul: 타이밍포인트 추가할필요없이
23:05 TaMul: 힛사 넣을 노트 클릭하고
23:05 TaMul: 왼쪽에 샘플셋으로 드럼 힛사 넣으면되요
23:05 TaMul: 드럼 힛사라는건
23:05 [ Sana ]: 헐
23:06 TaMul: 기본 힛사말하는건데
23:06 TaMul: ㅇ;
23:06 [ Sana ]: 헐 저게 그거였구나
23:06 [ Sana ]: 처음알앗네요;;
23:06 TaMul: 00:57:069 (5) - 클랩
23:06 TaMul: 00:59:650 (7) - 클랩
23:07 TaMul: 01:07:069 (1,5) -
23:07 TaMul: 이걸 드럼 힛사로
23:09 [ Sana ]: 님님
23:10 TaMul: 네
23:10 [ Sana ]: 왼쪽에 두개있는데
23:10 [ Sana ]: 에디션은 뭐죠??
23:10 TaMul: 끙..
23:10 TaMul: 저도 잘 모르겠어요
23:10 TaMul: 업뎃 잘보면 있을것같은데
23:10 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:11 TaMul: 매핑하다가 어쩌다가 샘플셋 사용법을 알게되서
23:11 TaMul: 에디션이 추가라는 뜻이니까
23:11 TaMul: 더 추가적으로 힛사를 넣는...그런건가..?
23:12 TaMul: 01:25:456 (5) - 클랩
23:12 [ Sana ]: 아..
23:12 [ Sana ]: 두 가지소리가 한꺼번에 나는건가..
23:13 TaMul: 01:28:682 (2) - 클랩 뺴고 휘슬
23:13 TaMul: 01:29:005 (3) - 클랩 추가
23:13 TaMul: 01:30:295 (10) - 머리에 클랩
23:13 TaMul: 01:35:456 (10) -
23:13 TaMul: ^
23:14 [ Sana ]: !?
23:14 TaMul: 똑같이 클랩
23:15 TaMul: 02:14:972 (4) - 클랩 빠졋어요
23:15 [ Sana ]: 우와
23:17 TaMul: 하드~
23:17 TaMul: 00:14:327 (5,6,7) -
23:17 TaMul: 이부분도 소리 올려주세요
23:17 TaMul: 00:42:069 (9,10) -
23:17 TaMul: 휘슬로
23:18 TaMul: 00:44:327 (4) - 클랩 제거
23:18 TaMul: 00:57:392 (4) - 뉴콤보
23:18 TaMul: 00:58:682 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거?
23:19 TaMul: 01:07:069 (2,3) - 슬라 첫부분만 드럼 클랩 힛사
23:19 TaMul: 01:07:714 (4) - 피니쉬
23:20 [ Sana ]: 인세인도 피니쉬넣을까요?
23:20 TaMul: 음 .ㅇㅇ
23:20 [ Sana ]: 오키
23:22 TaMul: 01:50:456 (7) - 뉴콤보
23:23 TaMul: 02:00:940 (6,2) - 드럼 클랩
23:24 TaMul: 02:09:811 (2,3,4) - 클랩
23:24 TaMul: 슬라 끝
23:25 TaMul: 02:11:747 (5) - 클랩지우고 휘슬
23:25 TaMul: 잠시 앞으로 가서
23:25 TaMul: 00:51:424 (2) -
23:26 TaMul: 가운데 슬라이드 포인트 1 그리드 아래로
23:27 TaMul: 01:48:198 (4) -
23:27 [ Sana ]: 예ㅂ
23:27 TaMul: http://puu.sh/4qc0x.jpg
23:28 TaMul: 이런식으로 해서 5번 노트를 지긋히 안아주세요
23:28 TaMul: 01:59:488 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
23:28 [ Sana ]: 지긋히ㅋㅋㅋ
23:30 TaMul: 노멀 갑시다
23:30 [ Sana ]: 고고
23:30 TaMul: 아 그리고
23:31 TaMul: 보니까 osb파일 있던데
23:31 TaMul: SB안 썻죠?
23:31 [ Sana ]: 네
23:31 [ Sana ]: 이상하게
23:31 TaMul: 지워주세요
23:31 TaMul: 그냥
23:31 [ Sana ]: 지웟는데 자꾸 생기네요/.
23:31 TaMul: 그래요?
23:31 TaMul: 쩝
23:31 [ Sana ]: 네ㅠ
23:31 TaMul: 그냥 둬요
23:31 TaMul: 디자인 탭 건들면 그런가보네
23:31 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:33 TaMul: 00:12:230 (5,6,7) -
23:33 TaMul: 노멀엔 좀 어려운 패턴같네요
23:33 [ Sana ]: 00:12:714 (6) - 지울까요?
23:33 TaMul: 네
23:34 TaMul: 00:14:811 (5) -
23:34 TaMul: 슬라이드 몸통에 휘슬
23:34 TaMul: 00:17:392 (4) - 뉴콤보?
23:34 TaMul: 00:21:908 (2,3) -
23:34 TaMul: 이건 넘어가도되고
23:35 TaMul: 어려운 패턴인데
23:35 TaMul: 음
23:35 TaMul: 슬라로 처리?
23:35 [ Sana ]: 몸통에 휘슬이면
23:35 [ Sana ]: 하안줄말씀하시는거?
23:36 TaMul: 하얀줄?
23:37 [ Sana ]: 00:15:134 -
23:37 TaMul: 그부분이라고도 해도되고
23:37 TaMul: 구지 말하다면 00:14:892 ~00:15:376 -
23:37 TaMul: 이런 부분
23:38 TaMul: 00:42:069 (6,7) - 휘슬으로
23:39 TaMul: 00:46:263 (5,6,1) - 이 패턴도 노멀엔 힘들다고 봐요
23:39 TaMul: 5,6번을 슬라이드로 하는건 어떨까요
23:39 [ Sana ]: 네네
23:39 TaMul: 00:57:392 (1) - 피니쉬
23:40 TaMul: 01:07:069 (4) - 뉴콤보?
23:40 TaMul: 01:33:359 (5) - 피니쉬
23:40 [ Sana ]: http://puu.sh/4qcps.jpg
23:41 [ Sana ]: 이렇게되는건가..
23:41 TaMul: 네
23:43 TaMul: 02:11:585 (3) -
23:43 TaMul: 머리에 클랩
23:44 [ Sana ]: ㅇㅋ
23:46 TaMul: 음 여기까지 ㅎ

넵 굿럭!

PAN's Easy is noting to check! sorry~

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-13T15:48:31+00:00

baldrace wrote:
SPOILER
Hi~hi~
as your req>.<

General
awesome as usual

P A N's Easy
01:50:295 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider
01:56:747 (2) - add finish
00:40:617 (1) - remove nc
00:39:972 (3) - nc here

Normal
00:52:230 (6) - finish
00:57:392 (1) - ^
01:02:553 (6) - ^
01:18:037 (1) - ^
01:56:747 (5) - ^

Hard
check finish in this diff and insane
01:28:117 (6) - remove it,the triplet start at white tick is not awesome
01:33:279 (7) - ^
or try other patterns

Insane
00:02:392 (6) - awesome
[spoilerbox][spoilerbox]
00:11:101 (2,2) - add whistle
00:11:747 (2,2) - add clap
02:00:940 (7) - make it straight
02:16:262 (2,2,2) - add clap
in kiai,I suggest you use default normal whistle

star

_AI wrote:
SPOILER
[P A N's Easy]
Great~ no problem

[Normal]
4.39star for a normal difficult are kinda too high..
try to reduce it as much as possible

[Hard]
00:44:005 (2,3) - Ctrl + G , switch them
00:53:682 (2,3) - ^
02:13:682 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:14:650 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:811 (7) - Add NC
00:45:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Increase DS and make it better curve (Suggestion)

Great mapset!
doesn't seem to have any much problem to me
;w; maybe this's my shortest mod ever
GL for the map to be ranked~ >.o/

yurunneram wrote:
SPOILER
Love this artist =w= Mod requested in-game
Wow how great would it be to have a girlfriend with that accent

EASY

00:23:198 (5) - Move one grid square right (sry for being useless)

00:30:617 (2) - Extend to 00:31:424 ?

00:34:166 (1) - Should start at 00:34:005

00:40:617 (1) - How about

00:54:811 (2) - Should make it curved like (1) since there's repetition in the music

That's all for easy

NORMAL

00:00:618 (1,2) - Move to x 284 y212 or hide it under (4) because it looks weird where it is now

02:14:650 (6,7) - How about slider first then circle

Your other two diffs had no problem to me (especially enjoyed hard) Star~ ;3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Betsuto wrote:
SPOILER
from M4M

[Insane]
00:04:972 (9)- I think you can NC for epic jump http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981248
00:08:359 (1,2,3,4)- make it epic jump (place 1 to 3, place 2 to 1, place 3 to 2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981255
00:26:263 (1)- forgot a Finish sound ?
00:36:585 (5)- NC here
00:41:747 (5)- forgot a Finish sound ?
00:42:553 (1,2,3,6)- forgot a Finish sound ?
01:02:553 (8)- NC here and remove NC at 01:02:876 (1)-
01:29:005 (3)- too slow note ... NC it
01:40:617 (1)- so epic stop the note remove it ?, then add NC here 01:41:263 (2)-
02:10:134 (1)- fhuu ~ so many NC spamming remove here and here 02:10:779 (1)-

[Hard]
00:15:456 (1)- epic NC remove it ?, then add NC here 00:15:940 (2)- and remove here too 00:16:424 (1)-
00:17:392 (4)- then ... NC here
01:18:843 (1)- I think remove NC will be better
01:34:166 (1,2,)- forgot a Finish sound ?

good mapping
Good luck ^^

user-RiSa wrote:
SPOILER
모딩하러 왔습니다~XD
부족하지만..도움됬으면..ㅎ

[Normal]

00:11:908 (4) - 디스턴스 1.0로 전 노트들이랑 유지하는게 좋을꺼 같네여(별차이 없지만..)

00:47:714 (3) - ^

00:57:714 (2) - x:206 y:130 (디스턴스 유지관련)

00:58:037 (3) - x:316 y:130(^)

00:58:359 (4) - x:407y:68(^)

01:07:714 (6) - 디스턴스 유지

01:43:843 (8) - ^

[Hard]

00:44:005 (2,3) - 박자 위는 바꾸는건 어떨까여?? 더 자연스러울꺼 같은데

01:49:166 (2,3) - ^

02:13:682 (2,3) - ^

솔직하게 하드 잡을게 없는듯;; 제 실력으로는ㅠㅠ

이지는 잡을게 없고..인세인은 내가 완전 못하고;;그래서 패스합니다.

좋은 맵이에여!! 이런맵에는 별을 딱!!
랭 기대합니다+_

TaMul wrote:
SPOILER
ㅠㅠ갑자기 서버 터졌네요 ㅠ

IRC MOD CHAT
22:43 TaMul: 전반적으로 힛사 소리가 너무 작은 거같아요
22:43 [ Sana ]: 앗
22:45 TaMul: 인세인입니다
22:45 TaMul: 00:05:134 (1,2,3,4) - 휘슬
22:45 TaMul: 00:05:456 (5) - 클랩
22:46 [ Sana ]: 00:05:456 (5) -
22:46 [ Sana ]: 피니쉬는 뺼까요?
22:46 TaMul: 안 빼도 괜찮을것같아요
22:46 [ Sana ]: 예압
22:47 TaMul: 00:12:392 (2) -
22:48 TaMul: 드럼 클랩힛사 넣는거
22:48 TaMul: 제안이요
22:48 TaMul: 00:12:714 (5) -
22:48 [ Sana ]: 드럼!
22:48 TaMul: 여긴 드럼 피니쉬 힛사 넣는거
22:48 [ Sana ]: 기본 드럼으로해도되죠??
22:48 TaMul: 00:14:327 ,00:14:488 -
22:48 TaMul: 옙 기본 드럼
22:49 TaMul: 00:12:392 (2) -
22:49 TaMul: 클릭하고
22:49 TaMul: 왼쪽에
22:49 TaMul: sampleset
22:49 TaMul: 에서 드럼만 맞추시면
22:49 TaMul: 타이밍포인트 추가할필요없이
22:49 TaMul: 드럼 힛사 넣을수있어요
22:50 [ Sana ]: 아 글쿤
22:51 TaMul: 00:14:327 -
22:51 TaMul: 하고
22:51 TaMul: 00:14:488 -
22:51 TaMul: 소리 증가시켜주세요
22:51 [ Sana ]: 네
22:51 TaMul: 60%,70%
22:51 TaMul: 요런식으로
22:51 TaMul: 00:18:924 - 노트 추가
22:53 TaMul: 00:24:488 (7) -
22:53 TaMul: 뉴콤보
22:53 TaMul: 드럼 클랩 힛사로 처리
22:53 TaMul: 00:24:811 (8) - 드럼 피니쉬 힛사로 처리
22:54 [ Sana ]: 다 피니쉬요??
22:54 [ Sana ]: 리버스까지?
22:55 TaMul: 음
22:55 TaMul: 그게 나을것같네요
22:55 TaMul: 음악 소리를 잘 들어보면
22:56 TaMul: 글자로는 표현 못하겠는데
22:56 TaMul: 음..그래요
22:56 [ Sana ]: 아 그런듯요
22:56 TaMul: 드럼 소리가 같은 음은 아니잖아요?
22:56 TaMul: 두두두두다다다다?
22:56 [ Sana ]: 네네
22:56 [ Sana ]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
22:56 TaMul: 00:26:263 (1) -
22:56 TaMul: 피니쉬
22:57 [ Sana ]: 휘슬은요?
22:58 TaMul: 휘슬은..
22:58 TaMul: 소리가 파묻쳐서
22:58 TaMul: 안넣는게 나을것같아요
22:58 [ Sana ]: 아
22:58 [ Sana ]: 넵!
22:58 TaMul: 00:35:779 (3) - 클랩 뺴주세요
22:59 TaMul: 휘슬로 처리
22:59 TaMul: 00:36:263 (3) - 이것도
22:59 TaMul: 00:39:972 (4) - 클랩 제거
22:59 [ Sana ]: 우와 이런거 어케잡지 신기ㄷ
23:00 [ Sana ]: 햇어용
23:00 TaMul: 00:40:940 (2) - 클랩
23:00 TaMul: 00:41:747 (5) - 피니쉬
23:01 TaMul: 00:42:230 (2) - 클랩 빼고 휘슬
23:01 TaMul: 00:42:553 (1) - 슬라이드 머리,아니 시작부분에 클랩
23:01 TaMul: 그리고 끝 부분 클랩 제거
23:02 TaMul: 00:45:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:03 TaMul: 이런 부분도 드럼 힛사로 처리해주세요
23:03 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:03 [ Sana ]: 일반 드럼이요?
23:03 TaMul: 넵넵 당연
23:03 TaMul: 00:52:230 (7) - 피니쉬?
23:03 [ Sana ]: 아..제가
23:04 [ Sana ]: 스킨에 잇는 드럼 힛사를 노말힛사로 바꿔버려서
23:04 [ Sana ]: 무슨 소리가 나는지 모르겟어요ㅋㅋㅋ
23:05 TaMul: ㄴㄴ
23:05 TaMul: 타이밍포인트 추가할필요없이
23:05 TaMul: 힛사 넣을 노트 클릭하고
23:05 TaMul: 왼쪽에 샘플셋으로 드럼 힛사 넣으면되요
23:05 TaMul: 드럼 힛사라는건
23:05 [ Sana ]: 헐
23:06 TaMul: 기본 힛사말하는건데
23:06 TaMul: ㅇ;
23:06 [ Sana ]: 헐 저게 그거였구나
23:06 [ Sana ]: 처음알앗네요;;
23:06 TaMul: 00:57:069 (5) - 클랩
23:06 TaMul: 00:59:650 (7) - 클랩
23:07 TaMul: 01:07:069 (1,5) -
23:07 TaMul: 이걸 드럼 힛사로
23:09 [ Sana ]: 님님
23:10 TaMul: 네
23:10 [ Sana ]: 왼쪽에 두개있는데
23:10 [ Sana ]: 에디션은 뭐죠??
23:10 TaMul: 끙..
23:10 TaMul: 저도 잘 모르겠어요
23:10 TaMul: 업뎃 잘보면 있을것같은데
23:10 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:11 TaMul: 매핑하다가 어쩌다가 샘플셋 사용법을 알게되서
23:11 TaMul: 에디션이 추가라는 뜻이니까
23:11 TaMul: 더 추가적으로 힛사를 넣는...그런건가..?
23:12 TaMul: 01:25:456 (5) - 클랩
23:12 [ Sana ]: 아..
23:12 [ Sana ]: 두 가지소리가 한꺼번에 나는건가..
23:13 TaMul: 01:28:682 (2) - 클랩 뺴고 휘슬
23:13 TaMul: 01:29:005 (3) - 클랩 추가
23:13 TaMul: 01:30:295 (10) - 머리에 클랩
23:13 TaMul: 01:35:456 (10) -
23:13 TaMul: ^
23:14 [ Sana ]: !?
23:14 TaMul: 똑같이 클랩
23:15 TaMul: 02:14:972 (4) - 클랩 빠졋어요
23:15 [ Sana ]: 우와
23:17 TaMul: 하드~
23:17 TaMul: 00:14:327 (5,6,7) -
23:17 TaMul: 이부분도 소리 올려주세요
23:17 TaMul: 00:42:069 (9,10) -
23:17 TaMul: 휘슬로
23:18 TaMul: 00:44:327 (4) - 클랩 제거
23:18 TaMul: 00:57:392 (4) - 뉴콤보
23:18 TaMul: 00:58:682 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거?
23:19 TaMul: 01:07:069 (2,3) - 슬라 첫부분만 드럼 클랩 힛사
23:19 TaMul: 01:07:714 (4) - 피니쉬
23:20 [ Sana ]: 인세인도 피니쉬넣을까요?
23:20 TaMul: 음 .ㅇㅇ
23:20 [ Sana ]: 오키
23:22 TaMul: 01:50:456 (7) - 뉴콤보
23:23 TaMul: 02:00:940 (6,2) - 드럼 클랩
23:24 TaMul: 02:09:811 (2,3,4) - 클랩
23:24 TaMul: 슬라 끝
23:25 TaMul: 02:11:747 (5) - 클랩지우고 휘슬
23:25 TaMul: 잠시 앞으로 가서
23:25 TaMul: 00:51:424 (2) -
23:26 TaMul: 가운데 슬라이드 포인트 1 그리드 아래로
23:27 TaMul: 01:48:198 (4) -
23:27 [ Sana ]: 예ㅂ
23:27 TaMul: http://puu.sh/4qc0x.jpg
23:28 TaMul: 이런식으로 해서 5번 노트를 지긋히 안아주세요
23:28 TaMul: 01:59:488 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
23:28 [ Sana ]: 지긋히ㅋㅋㅋ
23:30 TaMul: 노멀 갑시다
23:30 [ Sana ]: 고고
23:30 TaMul: 아 그리고
23:31 TaMul: 보니까 osb파일 있던데
23:31 TaMul: SB안 썻죠?
23:31 [ Sana ]: 네
23:31 [ Sana ]: 이상하게
23:31 TaMul: 지워주세요
23:31 TaMul: 그냥
23:31 [ Sana ]: 지웟는데 자꾸 생기네요/.
23:31 TaMul: 그래요?
23:31 TaMul: 쩝
23:31 [ Sana ]: 네ㅠ
23:31 TaMul: 그냥 둬요
23:31 TaMul: 디자인 탭 건들면 그런가보네
23:31 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:33 TaMul: 00:12:230 (5,6,7) -
23:33 TaMul: 노멀엔 좀 어려운 패턴같네요
23:33 [ Sana ]: 00:12:714 (6) - 지울까요?
23:33 TaMul: 네
23:34 TaMul: 00:14:811 (5) -
23:34 TaMul: 슬라이드 몸통에 휘슬
23:34 TaMul: 00:17:392 (4) - 뉴콤보?
23:34 TaMul: 00:21:908 (2,3) -
23:34 TaMul: 이건 넘어가도되고
23:35 TaMul: 어려운 패턴인데
23:35 TaMul: 음
23:35 TaMul: 슬라로 처리?
23:35 [ Sana ]: 몸통에 휘슬이면
23:35 [ Sana ]: 하안줄말씀하시는거?
23:36 TaMul: 하얀줄?
23:37 [ Sana ]: 00:15:134 -
23:37 TaMul: 그부분이라고도 해도되고
23:37 TaMul: 구지 말하다면 00:14:892 ~00:15:376 -
23:37 TaMul: 이런 부분
23:38 TaMul: 00:42:069 (6,7) - 휘슬으로
23:39 TaMul: 00:46:263 (5,6,1) - 이 패턴도 노멀엔 힘들다고 봐요
23:39 TaMul: 5,6번을 슬라이드로 하는건 어떨까요
23:39 [ Sana ]: 네네
23:39 TaMul: 00:57:392 (1) - 피니쉬
23:40 TaMul: 01:07:069 (4) - 뉴콤보?
23:40 TaMul: 01:33:359 (5) - 피니쉬
23:40 [ Sana ]: http://puu.sh/4qcps.jpg
23:41 [ Sana ]: 이렇게되는건가..
23:41 TaMul: 네
23:43 TaMul: 02:11:585 (3) -
23:43 TaMul: 머리에 클랩
23:44 [ Sana ]: ㅇㅋ
23:46 TaMul: 음 여기까지 ㅎ

넵 굿럭!

PAN's Easy is noting to check! sorry

Most are fixed! Thanks guys ><

-Neipezi

2,266 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2013-09-13T16:54:52+00:00

hi sana From my M4M

사나님 제가 조언을 드리는 것은 수정하라고 강요하는 것이 아닙니다. "수정은 매퍼 마음이니까요."

[P A N's Easy]
hi PAN o/
00:59:005 (1) - NC remove?
01:33:843 (4) - Circle add?
01:36:747 (2,3) - 1/2 slide change? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981735
01:51:585 - Finishi add

[Normal]
재 생각은 노멀이 조금 어렵다고 느끼는 거같습니다.
예를 들어서 00:12:230 (5,6,7) - 이런거나 00:21:908 (2,3) - ,00:25:134 (4,5,6) - 이런 종류의 패턴이 많습니다.

[Hard]
AR+1
good

00:01:747 (4) - NC 추가?
00:04:327 (6) - ^
00:06:908 (4) - ^

[Insane]
00:10:940 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 멋진 점프십니다.
00:11:747 (2) - Clap 추가
00:26:263 (1,2) - 1번 서클 삭제하시고 2번 슬라이드 앞으로 땡겨주세요.
00:26:585 - , 00:26:666 - 에 연타 넣어도 무관할꺼 같습니다.
00:36:585 (5) - NC 추가?
00:58:601 (2) - x:256 y:324 로 이동
00:58:682 (3) - x:292 y:312 로 이동 : 대각선이 되게 배치해보시는게 어떻십니까?
01:23:037 (1) - x:104 y:248 로 이동
01:23:118 (2) - x:120 y:276 로 이동 : ^
01:30:779 (1) - 앞에 Finish 추가?
01:57:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 세모모양 만들실꺼면 잘 배치해주시길바랍니다.

GL, 역시 프로가 따로 없네요

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-13T17:12:01+00:00

-Neipezi wrote:
hi sana From my M4M

사나님 제가 조언을 드리는 것은 수정하라고 강요하는 것이 아닙니다. "수정은 매퍼 마음이니까요."

[Normal]
재 생각은 노멀이 조금 어렵다고 느끼는 거같습니다.
예를 들어서 00:12:230 (5,6,7) - 이런거나 00:21:908 (2,3) - ,00:25:134 (4,5,6) - 이런 종류의 패턴이 많습니다.
리맵할까 생각중!

[Hard]
AR+1 ok
good
00:01:747 (4) - NC 추가? ok
00:04:327 (6) - ^ ok
00:06:908 (4) - ^ ok

[Insane]
00:10:940 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 멋진 점프십니다. 헉,,감사합니다
00:11:747 (2) - Clap 추가 ok
00:26:263 (1,2) - 1번 서클 삭제하시고 2번 슬라이드 앞으로 땡겨주세요. ok
00:26:585 - , 00:26:666 - 에 연타 넣어도 무관할꺼 같습니다. 앞에 스트림이 있어서 안넣는게 좋을거 같네요!
00:36:585 (5) - NC 추가? ok
00:58:601 (2) - x:256 y:324 로 이동 ok
00:58:682 (3) - x:292 y:312 로 이동 : 대각선이 되게 배치해보시는게 어떻십니까? ok
01:23:037 (1) - x:104 y:248 로 이동 ok
01:23:118 (2) - x:120 y:276 로 이동 : ^ok
01:30:779 (1) - 앞에 Finish 추가? ok
01:57:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 세모모양 만들실꺼면 잘 배치해주시길바랍니다. 헉 딱걸렷다ㄷㄷ

GL, 역시 프로가 따로 없네요 어므나><

모딩감사합니다~~

Pretty Rhythm

654 posts

Joined February 2012

Pretty Rhythm 2013-09-14T01:50:33+00:00

Hi 'ㅅ'
[Insane]

OD +1
00:02:392 (6) - 이런 모양보다는 좀더 굽히는게 좋다고 봐요
01:07:714 (6) - 를 01:07:634 (6) - 로 옮기는게 음악 소리랑 맞는거 같은데 ..

[P A N 's Easy]
OD - 1
이지에 3~4정도의 OD는 필요 없는듯

그밖에 제가 딱히 짚을데는 없어보이는듯 ..
GL

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-09-14T04:37:09+00:00

M4M

General

소프트 슬라이더 틱하고 슬라이더 슬라이드 둘다 무음으로 두셧던데 언랭요소에요 둘중 하나는 꼭 들리는 소리여야해요

인센은 오프셋 1초인데 노말,하드는 1.5초네요 겟난이 아닌이상 오프셋은 전부 같아야해요

P A N's Easy

OD -1, too high for Easy diff

00:58:037 (2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/4qLlD.jpg i think this rhythm is much better for vocal
01:51:908 (2) - NC and rearrange NCs on latter
02:00:617 (5) - 1/1 slider and a note 02:01:746 (6) - here fits better imo

Normal

00:12:876 (7) - 별거 아니긴한데 6번노트 위쪽으로 두지 마시고 아래쪽으로 두시는게 동선이 더 깔끔할거 같아요
00:39:166 (1) - 뒤쪽에 클랩
00:52:553 (1) - 이것도 HP바 닿는거 같아요
01:07:714 (3) - 피니시
01:18:037 (1) - 뒤쪽에 피니시는 실수이신듯하네요
01:34:166 (3,4,5) - 여기 휘슬도 실수좀 하신거 같네요
01:42:553 (5) - 뉴콤
01:43:843 (8,1) - 점프 일부러 넣으신건가요?

Hard

하드도 틱레 2 추천드림

00:07:553 (3) - 이건 HP바에 닿는거 같아요
00:44:811 (5) - 클랩 실수로 둘다 두신거 같네요
01:17:553 (1) - 슬라이더 몸통에도 휘슬 두신건데 이건 의도하신건가요?
01:43:843 - 01:51:424 - 인센과 같슴다
02:01:263 (1) - 드럼 피니시 넣으시면 좋을듯
02:11:747 (5,6) - 노래에 따르면 5번에 클랩넣고 6번은 클랩 삭제하셔야할듯
02:17:070 (1) - 이거는 02:17:230 (1) - 여기에 있어야 하는거 아닌가요?

Insane

틱레 2 추천드림여

00:02:392 (6) - 분위기상(?) 여기 앞쪽에도 클랩이 필요할꺼 같아요
00:07:553 (8) - 클랩 넣어주심이?
00:08:037 (10) - 여긴 앞쪽에 피니시
00:14:166 (3) - 앞쪽에 점프 넣는다고 뉴콤보 넣으신거 같은데 그런 이유라면 여기도 넣어주세요
00:25:134 - http://puu.sh/4qKCL.jpg 이런형식의 박자는 어떨까요?
00:44:327 (6,1) - 뉴콤보 위치 바꿔주세요
01:26:021 (2) - 기타 반주 따라서 3연타로 넣으신거면 이거 지우시고 01:25:859 - 여기다가 노트 넣어주세요
01:43:843 - 01:51:424 - 이파트는 2번쨰 하얀틱에만 클랩 넣지 마시고 모든 흰색틱에다가 클랩 넣으시는게 박자감있는거 같아요
02:12:069 (4) - 여기다가 뉴콤보 넣으시고 뒤쪾 뉴콤보들 정리 해주세요
02:14:972 (4) - 클랩 반대로 들어간듯

변속도 잘쓰셧고 배치도 깔끔하네요~ 왠만한 랭커 매퍼들보다 잘만드시는듯 물론 제 기준이지만요 ㅋㅋ

제가 뱃이라면 바로 버블줄꺼같은 맵셋이네요 잘만드셧어요 (한가지 걱정이라면 인센,하드 난이도 격차인데 큰 걱정은 안하셔도 될듯)

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-14T05:04:45+00:00

SPOILER

HelloSCV wrote:
M4M

General

소프트 슬라이더 틱하고 슬라이더 슬라이드 둘다 무음으로 두셧던데 언랭요소에요 둘중 하나는 꼭 들리는 소리여야해요
그렇군요

인센은 오프셋 1초인데 노말,하드는 1.5초네요 겟난이 아닌이상 오프셋은 전부 같아야해요
수정!

Normal

00:12:876 (7) - 별거 아니긴한데 6번노트 위쪽으로 두지 마시고 아래쪽으로 두시는게 동선이 더 깔끔할거 같아요 수정
00:39:166 (1) - 뒤쪽에 클랩 수정
00:52:553 (1) - 이것도 HP바 닿는거 같아요 수정
01:07:714 (3) - 피니시 수정
01:18:037 (1) - 뒤쪽에 피니시는 실수이신듯하네요 수정
01:34:166 (3,4,5) - 여기 휘슬도 실수좀 하신거 같네요 힛사 실수가 왜이래 많지..
01:42:553 (5) - 뉴콤 수정
01:43:843 (8,1) - 점프 일부러 넣으신건가요? 헉 배치하다가 실수로 날라간듯ㅋㅋ

Hard

하드도 틱레 2 추천드림
수정!!

00:07:553 (3) - 이건 HP바에 닿는거 같아요 수정!
00:44:811 (5) - 클랩 실수로 둘다 두신거 같네요 수정
01:17:553 (1) - 슬라이더 몸통에도 휘슬 두신건데 이건 의도하신건가요? 아뇨!
01:43:843 - 01:51:424 - 인센과 같슴다 수정
02:01:263 (1) - 드럼 피니시 넣으시면 좋을듯 수정
02:11:747 (5,6) - 노래에 따르면 5번에 클랩넣고 6번은 클랩 삭제하셔야할듯 수정
02:17:070 (1) - 이거는 02:17:230 (1) - 여기에 있어야 하는거 아닌가요?그..그러게요;ㅅ;

Insane

틱레 2 추천드림여
수정

00:02:392 (6) - 분위기상(?) 여기 앞쪽에도 클랩이 필요할꺼 같아요 수정
00:07:553 (8) - 클랩 넣어주심이? 수정
00:08:037 (10) - 여긴 앞쪽에 피니시 수정
00:14:166 (3) - 앞쪽에 점프 넣는다고 뉴콤보 넣으신거 같은데 그런 이유라면 여기도 넣어주세요 수정
00:25:134 - http://puu.sh/4qKCL.jpg 이런형식의 박자는 어떨까요? 조은데 모양이 조금 이상해져서 패스!
00:44:327 (6,1) - 뉴콤보 위치 바꿔주세요 수정
01:26:021 (2) - 기타 반주 따라서 3연타로 넣으신거면 이거 지우시고 01:25:859 - 여기다가 노트 넣어주세요 수정
01:43:843 - 01:51:424 - 이파트는 2번쨰 하얀틱에만 클랩 넣지 마시고 모든 흰색틱에다가 클랩 넣으시는게 박자감있는거 같아요 수정
02:12:069 (4) - 여기다가 뉴콤보 넣으시고 뒤쪾 뉴콤보들 정리 해주세요 수정
02:14:972 (4) - 클랩 반대로 들어간듯 수정

변속도 잘쓰셧고 배치도 깔끔하네요~ 왠만한 랭커 매퍼들보다 잘만드시는듯 물론 제 기준이지만요 ㅋㅋ

제가 뱃이라면 바로 버블줄꺼같은 맵셋이네요 잘만드셧어요 (한가지 걱정이라면 인센,하드 난이도 격차인데 큰 걱정은 안하셔도 될듯)

모딩감사합니다~><

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-09-14T05:26:36+00:00

Sorry is late..

레더박스 체크 해제할것

[P A N's Easy]

00:40:617 (1) - Why New Combo? Remove
00:45:134 (2,3,4) - Was not too difficult to beat the same rhythm. It is recommended to create something different
00:50:940 (1) - Remove NC 00:52:230 (2) - NC Here
00:59:005 (1) - Remove NC 01:00:295 (2) - NC Here
01:25:295 (3) - add clap here
02:14:811 - add note Not because the rhythm is to stand out If you want to create an easy fix should feel free

[Normal]

00:12:230 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:13:521 (1) - 클랩 제거 쿵짝짝짝 하면 더 흐름이 좋아질것 같아요
00:17:392 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거 불필요해 보입니다
00:47:069 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
00:49:650 (3) - ^
00:54:005 (3) - 끝부분에 클랩
00:59:972 (3) - 피니쉬 추가
01:22:876 (6) - 리듬의 흐름이 좋아지도록 이부분에 클랩 넣는것도 좋을듯 합니다
02:06:263 (3) - 이부분 일정하게 맞추는건 어떨까요 디스컨스는 일정한데 간격 안맞는경우 종종 있으니까요

[Hard]

00:18:198 (4) - 통일성을 위해 ctrl + g
00:52:230 (4) - 피니쉬
00:53:682 (2) - 클랩 있으니까 리듬이 이상해요 제거하시는게 좋을둣

GL~

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-09-14T07:39:56+00:00

From my queue~
Thanks for M4M!

[P A N's Easy]

02:07:714- add a note

[Normal]

01:36:424 (2) - how about this?

[Hard]

00:10:134- add a note

01:32:230 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - how about regular pentagon?

SPOILER

348,174,92230,5,0,0:0:0:0:
370,257,92392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,259,92553,2,8,L|438:319,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,177,92876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93198,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:06:908 (5) - NC
01:29:005 (1,2,3,4) - DS is too shot imo

01:36:263 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about regular pentagon?

SPOILER

259,201,96263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,96343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,96424,2,8,P|272:154|311:127,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,95,96747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
222,104,96908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,97069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,38,97230,1,0,0:0:0:0:

wow, it's a exciting band like "MAXIMUM THE HORMONE"
~Good Luck~

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-15T03:41:45+00:00

SPOILER

HabiHolic wrote:
Sorry is late..

레더박스 체크 해제할것

[P A N's Easy]

00:40:617 (1) - Why New Combo? Remove
00:45:134 (2,3,4) - Was not too difficult to beat the same rhythm. It is recommended to create something different
00:50:940 (1) - Remove NC 00:52:230 (2) - NC Here
00:59:005 (1) - Remove NC 01:00:295 (2) - NC Here
01:25:295 (3) - add clap here
02:14:811 - add note Not because the rhythm is to stand out If you want to create an easy fix should feel free

[Normal]

00:12:230 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:13:521 (1) - 클랩 제거 쿵짝짝짝 하면 더 흐름이 좋아질것 같아요
00:17:392 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거 불필요해 보입니다
00:47:069 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
00:49:650 (3) - ^
00:54:005 (3) - 끝부분에 클랩
00:59:972 (3) - 피니쉬 추가
01:22:876 (6) - 리듬의 흐름이 좋아지도록 이부분에 클랩 넣는것도 좋을듯 합니다
02:06:263 (3) - 이부분 일정하게 맞추는건 어떨까요 디스컨스는 일정한데 간격 안맞는경우 종종 있으니까요

[Hard]

00:18:198 (4) - 통일성을 위해 ctrl + g
00:52:230 (4) - 피니쉬
00:53:682 (2) - 클랩 있으니까 리듬이 이상해요 제거하시는게 좋을둣

GL~

SPOILER

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
Thanks for M4M!

[P A N's Easy]
02:07:714- add a note
[Normal]
01:36:424 (2) - how about this?
[Hard]
00:10:134- add a note
01:32:230 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - how about regular pentagon?
[spoilerbox]
348,174,92230,5,0,0:0:0:0:
370,257,92392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,259,92553,2,8,L|438:319,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,177,92876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93198,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:06:908 (5) - NC
01:29:005 (1,2,3,4) - DS is too shot imo

01:36:263 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about regular pentagon?

SPOILER

259,201,96263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,96343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,96424,2,8,P|272:154|311:127,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,95,96747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
222,104,96908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,97069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,38,97230,1,0,0:0:0:0:

wow, it's a exciting band like "MAXIMUM THE HORMONE"
~Good Luck~[/spoilerbox]

모딩감사합니다~
Thanks for mod!

eniyan

107 posts

Joined September 2011

eniyan 2013-09-15T06:47:52+00:00

Hi

From my queue

[Easy]

in Easy,i think that you should avoid the act to change Slider Velocity by changing BPM...

[Normal]

i wasn’t able to find the point that you should fix

[hard]

00:34:811 (2,3) - I feel that distance is far for Hard...

00:56:747 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]

00:08:521 (2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

00:53:682 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

00:55:617 (7) - Ctrl＋g

00:57:714 (2) - Ctrl＋g

01:38:037 (1,2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

01:44:811 (5,1,2,3,4) - When you change it in this way, how about?

this way

At first,(5) Ctrl＋g. Then, replace 2 with 1.

thanks you for m4m

I cheer you so that this does ranked!

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-15T15:00:49+00:00

SPOILER

EnixYuki wrote:
Hi

From my queue

[Easy]

in Easy,i think that you should avoid the act to change Slider Velocity by changing BPM...
[Normal]

i wasn’t able to find the point that you should fix
[hard]

00:34:811 (2,3) - I feel that distance is far for Hard...
00:56:747 (2,3) - ^
[Insane]

00:08:521 (2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.
placement

00:53:682 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.
placement

00:55:617 (7) - Ctrl＋g
00:57:714 (2) - Ctrl＋g
01:38:037 (1,2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.
placement

01:44:811 (5,1,2,3,4) - When you change it in this way, how about?
this way
At first,(5) Ctrl＋g. Then, replace 2 with 1.

thanks you for m4m

I cheer you so that this does ranked!

Fixed some! Thanks~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-09-16T02:48:38+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

+1 star for M4M as mentioned in my queue

[Easy]
Consider AR: +1 cuz slider vel doesn't suit with the AR, and the song is fast
00:45:134 (2) - Make it stack, seperated is harder to read
00:52:230 (2) - Move a little above since it's quite close to 00:50:617 (3) - , or stack it
00:54:811 (2) - If possible don't make the slider go out of mapping box for easy
01:08:037 - Break starts here
01:16:585 - Continue leads here
01:23:198 - Add circle
01:24:327 (2) - Make it Ctrl+G so it fixes the flow, for example 02:17:714 (1,2) -
01:36:747 (2) - Stack

[Normal]
AR: +1, cuz fast song

01:08:037 - Break here
01:16:585 - Continue leads here

[Hard]
00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it to a line not jump, try it!
00:35:940 (2) - Ctrl+G looks better cuz the pattern is same with this 00:45:779 (2,3) -
00:37:392 (1,2,3) - Maybe slown down SV here? like 01:29:005 -
01:38:843 (2,3,4) - Make it 1 direction but different angle

[Insane]
00:24:811 (2) - Stick with 00:24:488 (1) - looks better like a stream
01:40:618 (7) - Stick to (6)
02:00:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the DS closer
02:19:488 (4,5) - Swap timing

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-09-16T08:53:16+00:00

m4m here =3=~

General
01:41:263 - kiai fountain here?

Pantsu's Easy
00:02:714 (4) - add clap too because heavy music here?
00:12:230 (3) - make symmetrical better here, maybe like http://puu.sh/4snL9.jpg or http://puu.sh/4snMB.jpg
00:12:230 (3) - you should give finish in tail if in head of slider have finish.. heavy music similar here
00:14:811 (3) - add clap in tail, it's fit with music imo
00:21:101 - you can't skip heavy music here, similar with 00:18:521 - . try http://puu.sh/4snTH.jpg
00:26:424 - here too, add note with finish
00:30:617 (2) - extend until 00:31:424 - and give finish in tail
00:45:134 (2,3) - this 1/2 is so hard for easy with high bpm.. remove (2)
00:46:263 (3) - should be finish in tail because heavy music
00:47:069 (1) - finish in head because music and kiai
00:50:617 (3,2) - don't make overlap here, at least move somewhere or stack them perfectly
00:52:876 (3) - tail 120,132 for blanket?
01:18:521 (1,1) - no need NC here actually
01:28:198 (1) - blue tick in repeat? no need hard rhythm for this , just make slider like http://puu.sh/4soe5.jpg, should be fine :3
01:30:779 (1) - should be finish in head, i heard cymbal
01:32:230 (3) - i'm not really like blue tick in Easy diff because can make newbie confuse and sound bad in easy, try http://puu.sh/4sopS.jpg ?
01:33:359 - and should be finish here
01:50:295 (1) - should be finish in tail , i know you know the reason why should finish here
02:13:843 (1) - no need finish in tail, just a normal music and not heavy music
02:19:811 (1) - finish in spin because heavy music again

Normal
00:13:521 (1) - finish here
00:15:940 (1) - finish in tail
00:24:488 (2,3) - try placement like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/986792 ? i'm feel better for flow
00:23:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try add clap hitsound in this part.. so feel empty here. try add clap in every 2nd and 4rd whitetick?
00:35:940 (2) - kinda hard for me imo, try delete and add note in 00:36:101 - ?
00:41:101 (5) - try add clap in head?
00:46:263 (5) - finish in tail
01:20:617 (1) - finish in head?
01:46:424 (5) - finish
02:12:876 (2,3) - try placement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/986817 ? hope have better flow in ur opinion
02:14:650 (6) - finish in tail
02:19:811 (1) - should finish too

from here , quick mod here (usually hitsound) , so busy asdf =_=

Hard
00:23:682 (2) - whistle in head? kinda feel plain/empty imo
00:26:101 (4) - finish in tail
00:28:198 - add note?
00:40:617 (5) - should be NC for consistency
00:46:424 (4) - finish?
00:49:650 (4) - finish? if too much loud, add clap instead
00:59:972 (6) - ^
01:02:553 (5) - should be finish here for consistency with 00:52:230 (4) -
01:20:617 (1) - same as 00:49:650 (4) -
01:54:166 (4) - ^
01:56:747 (5) - finish
02:17:230 (1) - finish in head

Insane
00:08:682 (3) - 388,212? at least easier to read
00:13:521 (1) - finish in head
00:44:327 (1) - finish instead clap
01:02:553 (1) - finish
01:19:488 (7,1) - swap NC for easier read jump
01:20:618 (3) - finish in head
01:54:166 (9) - finish in head
01:56:747 (7) - ^

Good Luck ~

sjoy

1,032 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-09-16T09:14:30+00:00

Hi from my extra rule

just some suggestions
[Insane]
00:10:134 (9) - move to 176 ,240?
00:11:585 (1,2) - how about ctrl+g? and 00:11:908 (1,2) - ctrl+g because 00:11:585 (1) - is too hard to play after 00:11:424 (2) -
00:18:198 (5) - ctrl+g?
00:50:617 (4) - move to 32,328?
01:04:650 (7) - move to 444,120?
01:42:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo it's not suitable to play long steam

01:57:553 (4,5) - ctrl+g?
01:58:843 how about this http://puu.sh/4sGOz.jpg

good luck for rank

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2013-09-16T15:09:42+00:00

케이온이 생각나는군요

[ez]
00:45:134 (2,3) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sOoY.png , http://puu.sh/4sOr2.png , http://puu.sh/4sOu1.png , http://puu.sh/4sOvu.png
01:28:198 (1) - changing speed at here is looks strange.. how about keeping original speed? -> http://puu.sh/4sOJa.png
-> if you accept this, make [01:29:650 (2,3)]'s distance to x1.0 plz

-> for keeping consistence, plz make [01:34:166 (1)]'s speed to original speed too
01:36:908 (3) - how about make this slider's form to flatly? -> http://puu.sh/4sP1C.png
01:42:553 (3) - add finish sound to last point
01:50:295 (1) - ^
02:19:811 (1) - how about add finish sound?

yea

[NM]
00:36:908 (4,5) - 슬라이더로 만들어보는건 어떤가여?
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 1번 노트와 3번 노트만 남겨두고 위치를 적당하게 맞춰보는건 어떤가여?
01:46:424 (5) - 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[HD]
01:07:392 (3,4) - 리버스 하는 슬라이더 하나로 만들어보는건 어떤가요?
01:27:876 (4,5,6) - ^
01:28:198 (7) - NC!
01:29:005 (1) - NC제거
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[IS]
00:00:618 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시!
00:00:618 (1,2) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPyi.png
00:04:650 (7,8) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPBs.png , http://puu.sh/4sPCn.png , http://puu.sh/4sPDc.png
01:29:327 (2,3,4) - 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보 어떤가요?
-> 01:34:166 (1,2,3,4) - 만약 위 모딩을 하셨다면 통일성을 위해 이 부분도 서로 뉴콤보 시켜주세요~
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 여기도 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보?
02:03:037 (6) - NC
02:03:359 (1) - del NC
02:04:327 (6) - NC
02:04:972 (1) - del NC
02:05:617 (6) - NC
02:06:585 (1) - del NC
02:06:908 (5) - NC + 시작 부분에 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

모딩 끄읕

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-16T15:27:54+00:00

SPOILER

K i A i wrote:
케이온이 생각나는군요

[ez]
00:45:134 (2,3) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sOoY.png , http://puu.sh/4sOr2.png , http://puu.sh/4sOu1.png , http://puu.sh/4sOvu.png
01:28:198 (1) - changing speed at here is looks strange.. how about keeping original speed? -> http://puu.sh/4sOJa.png
-> if you accept this, make [01:29:650 (2,3)]'s distance to x1.0 plz
-> for keeping consistence, plz make [01:34:166 (1)]'s speed to original speed too
01:36:908 (3) - how about make this slider's form to flatly? -> http://puu.sh/4sP1C.png
01:42:553 (3) - add finish sound to last point
01:50:295 (1) - ^
02:19:811 (1) - how about add finish sound?

yea

[NM]
00:36:908 (4,5) - 슬라이더로 만들어보는건 어떤가여?
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 1번 노트와 3번 노트만 남겨두고 위치를 적당하게 맞춰보는건 어떤가여?
01:46:424 (5) - 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[HD]
01:07:392 (3,4) - 리버스 하는 슬라이더 하나로 만들어보는건 어떤가요?
01:27:876 (4,5,6) - ^
01:28:198 (7) - NC!
01:29:005 (1) - NC제거
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[IS]
00:00:618 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시!
00:00:618 (1,2) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPyi.png
00:04:650 (7,8) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPBs.png , http://puu.sh/4sPCn.png , http://puu.sh/4sPDc.png
01:29:327 (2,3,4) - 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보 어떤가요?
-> 01:34:166 (1,2,3,4) - 만약 위 모딩을 하셨다면 통일성을 위해 이 부분도 서로 뉴콤보 시켜주세요~
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 여기도 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보?
02:03:037 (6) - NC
02:03:359 (1) - del NC
02:04:327 (6) - NC
02:04:972 (1) - del NC
02:05:617 (6) - NC
02:06:585 (1) - del NC
02:06:908 (5) - NC + 시작 부분에 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

모딩 끄읕

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ그 동영상보고찍은맵

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

2,539 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-16T16:24:10+00:00

Hi
From my queue of M4M
Sorry for late for some days

[Insane]

my play

http://puu.sh/4sRw8.osr

00:33:521 (5) - move to 236,140
nothing else...I like the map, when I am playing the map, I enjoy the music and the map both.

[Hard]
00:27:714 (6) - 00:29:327 (3) - 00:30:295 (6) - 00:31:424 (4) - NC
00:28:359 (1,1) - remove NC
00:55:940 (6,7) - change it to a slider is better I think
01:59:811 (4,5) -

to

[Normal]
02:12:069 - Kiai? fix this please, or nake all your diffs with this kiai.
00:21:101 (1,2,3,4) - maybe a little hard in normal

[P A N's Easy]
00:23:198 (5) - move to 104,263
01:28:198 - although ×0.75, I suggest not to change sv in easy/normal ._.
01:30:779 (1,2) - blanket
01:36:747 (2,3) - change to a slider
01:58:037 (1,2,3) -

stared!~
good luck with your map~

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T02:52:22+00:00

Thank you for moddings!! <3

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-09-17T03:18:00+00:00

Hi, From my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Clear.

[Insane]

00:20:940 (7,8) - hmm, i think not fit the song and vocal here. like this?
00:26:263 (1) - suggestion. 1/1 slider is really fit here imo.
01:41:263 (1) - finish

nice diff.

[Hard]

HP+1
00:18:521 (1) - you forgot finish?
00:23:682 (2) - ^
00:25:134 (1) - i think that fit 1/2. bule line rhythm is not fit imo.
00:42:553 (1) - add finish.
00:55:940 (6,7,1) - hmm, i don't like that downbeat rhythm. like this?
01:41:263 (1) - finish
01:49:005 (1) - finish? Insane diff have finish here.
02:17:230 (1) - ^

[Normal]

i recommend AR+1.
01:02:553 (6) - remove finish? not found finish here in Hard diff and Insane diff.
01:41:263 (1) - really fit the finish here.
01:49:005 (1) - same comment in Hard diff.
01:56:747 (5) - same comment 01:02:553 (6) -
02:14:650 (6) - add finish in slider start.

not bad. but i felt this diff a bit hard.

[P A N's Easy]

OD-1 is better for me.
00:01:747 (3) - add finish in slider end. It's sound better.
00:19:972 (2) - try this rhythm. i think that better than current for me. if you fix here, 00:20:617 (3) - add finish in slider repeat.
00:24:166 (1) - suggestion for loud sound exist here 00:26:263 -
00:34:166 (1) - spinner start is 00:34:005 - better.
00:40:617 (1) - sound weird of slider repeat. not found sound here. so try this rhythm.
01:28:198 (1) - bule line's repeat is not fit. like this?
01:32:230 (3) - same above comment. try this.
01:50:295 (1) - add finish instead of clap. more fit the song.
02:00:617 (5) - try this.
02:02:230 (1,2) - hmm, i think this part follow the vocal. like this rhythm?
02:07:714 - add note and the slider 02:08:037 (1) - move to 02:08:198 - . slider end is 02:08:682 - more good rhythm imo.

Good luck

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T04:37:28+00:00

Guy wrote:
SPOILER
Hi, From my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Clear.

[Insane]
00:20:940 (7,8) - hmm, i think not fit the song and vocal here. like this?
yes..but i don't think it's matter when we play it
00:26:263 (1) - suggestion. 1/1 slider is really fit here imo.
fixed like this

01:41:263 (1) - finish fixed

nice diff.
thanks

[Hard]
HP+1 ok
00:18:521 (1) - you forgot finish? maybe :p
00:23:682 (2) - ^ fixed
00:25:134 (1) - i think that fit 1/2. bule line rhythm is not fit imo.
changed like this
00:42:553 (1) - add finish. fixed
00:55:940 (6,7,1) - hmm, i don't like that downbeat rhythm. like this?
fixed!
01:41:263 (1) - finish fixed!
01:49:005 (1) - finish? Insane diff have finish here.fixed!
02:17:230 (1) - ^ fixed!

[Normal]
i recommend AR+1.
01:02:553 (6) - remove finish? not found finish here in Hard diff and Insane diff. fixed
01:41:263 (1) - really fit the finish here.fixed
01:49:005 (1) - same comment in Hard diff.Great
01:56:747 (5) - same comment 01:02:553 (6) -fixed
02:14:650 (6) - add finish in slider start.fixed

not bad. but i felt this diff a bit hard.

Good luck

Thanks! most fixed ><

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T05:08:49+00:00

Updated~!

-> Hard diff. remapped some part and add some beats.

LegendK_old

LegendK_old 2013-09-17T08:48:29+00:00

아이디 잠깐 빌린다.

code

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
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Version:Insane
Source:Dance & Scream
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283,68,93843,2,0,L|203:109,1,71.2500027179719,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,143,94166,5,2,0:0:0:0:
57,266,94488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,124,94811,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,238,95134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,254,95214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,270,95295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,287,95376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,302,95456,2,0,P|259:323|349:302,1,142.500005435944,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,332,95940,6,0,P|431:284|405:242,1,95
279,218,96263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,218,96343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,218,96424,2,8,P|282:170|308:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,93,96747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
223,105,96908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,197,97069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,38,97230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,19,97311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,12,97392,2,8,P|188:17|139:56,1,95
39,178,97714,2,8,P|85:171|123:143,1,95
65,67,98037,5,0,0:0:0:0:
39,178,98198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,277,98359,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,316,98521,6,0,B|244:329|244:329|288:315|288:315|333:336|389:315,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,317,98924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,317,99005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,174,99166,5,8,0:0:0:0:
422,147,99247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,120,99327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,93,99408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,66,99488,2,0,L|302:33,1,47.5
174,31,99650,2,0,L|210:63,1,47.5
275,120,99811,6,0,P|246:164|188:180,1,95
172,190,100053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,193,100134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,183,100214,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,158,100295,2,0,L|55:106,1,47.5
23,237,100456,2,0,L|35:288,1,47.5
57,366,100618,1,12,0:0:0:0:
57,366,101263,5,4,0:0:0:0:
126,301,101585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,272,101908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,289,102230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
385,345,102553,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,340,102634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
430,331,102714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,314,102795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,296,102876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,275,102956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,252,103037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,228,103118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,204,103198,5,0,0:0:0:0:
446,212,103279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,211,103359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,199,103440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,183,103521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,156,103601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,121,103682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,80,103763,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,42,103843,6,0,P|248:87|179:117,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,35,104166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,69,104327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,203,104488,2,0,P|178:202|139:176,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,229,104811,2,0,P|28:275|52:316,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,336,105134,5,0,0:0:0:0:
114,253,105295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,338,105456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,235,105618,2,0,P|361:237|406:276,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,347,105940,2,0,B|509:282|441:220|476:157,1,190
493,128,106343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
498,90,106424,2,0,P|470:54|400:35,1,95,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,169,106747,6,0,L|418:117,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,174,107069,2,0,L|278:89,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,228,107392,2,0,L|144:133,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,95,107634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,57,107714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,131,107876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,174,108037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,273,108198,5,0,0:0:0:0:
73,273,108279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,272,108359,2,0,P|107:306|153:317,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,260,108682,2,0,P|327:271|361:304,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,353,109005,5,12,0:0:0:0:
340,182,109166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,273,109327,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,266,109488,2,0,L|477:181,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,23,109811,2,0,L|409:114,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,182,110134,2,0,L|239:174,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
151,167,110456,5,0,0:0:0:0:
131,167,110537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,164,110617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,155,110698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,142,110779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,125,110859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,106,110940,5,8,0:0:0:0:
31,135,111021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,174,111101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
14,216,111182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,254,111263,2,0,P|59:289|107:309,1,95
248,206,111585,6,0,P|209:227|181:271,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,231,111908,2,0,P|341:186|317:140,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,295,112230,2,0,P|310:317|362:319,1,95
472,230,112553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
383,118,112714,5,0,0:0:0:0:
397,82,112795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,45,112876,2,0,P|362:31|307:49,1,95
279,128,113198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,209,113359,2,0,L|488:104,1,95
341,234,113682,2,0,L|403:307,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,288,114005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,275,114085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,263,114166,2,0,P|136:275|98:322,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,353,114488,5,8,0:0:0:0:
257,196,114650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,114,114811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,197,114972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,114,115134,2,0,P|189:65|146:30,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,114,115456,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,196,115617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,197,115779,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,106,115940,2,0,P|346:116|385:159,1,95
448,288,116263,2,0,B|417:208|485:173|449:101,1,190
428,71,116666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,116747,2,0,L|281:26,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,44,117069,5,8,0:0:0:0:
111,94,117230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,229,117392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,134,117553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,151,117714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,196,117876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,326,118037,6,0,L|310:281,1,95
290,195,118359,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,362,118521,2,0,L|410:251,1,95
383,181,118843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,195,119005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
481,164,119166,5,0,0:0:0:0:
481,164,119247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,165,119327,2,0,P|502:119|494:72,1,95
419,17,119650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
333,57,119811,2,0,P|366:94|412:107,1,95
179,57,120134,2,0,P|145:94|99:107,1,95
256,24,120456,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,62,120537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,99,120617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,137,120698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,175,120779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,120859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,249,120940,2,0,L|255:353,1,95
339,303,121263,5,8,0:0:0:0:
165,256,121424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,215,121585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,168,121747,6,0,B|110:168|83:217|83:217|34:211|5:172,1,190,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,105,122230,2,0,P|107:84|185:75,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,122553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,122714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,122876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,176,123037,6,0,P|360:140|348:60,1,95
256,108,123359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,203,123521,2,0,P|273:238|348:267,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,242,123843,5,0,0:0:0:0:
330,335,124005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,337,124166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,242,124327,2,0,P|92:218|17:220,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,306,124650,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,124,124811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,153,124972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,153,125053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,153,125134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
45,17,125295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,124,125456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,53,125617,6,0,P|257:53|321:80,1,95
461,108,125940,2,0,P|407:122|353:164,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,167,126263,2,0,P|272:194|314:249,1,95
350,326,126585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,342,126666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,350,126747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,347,126827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,333,126908,6,0,B|153:314|136:260|136:260|48:242,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,103,127392,2,0,L|134:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,140,127714,5,0,0:0:0:0:
170,49,127876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,215,128037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,201,128198,2,0,P|293:163|281:95,1,95
202,140,128521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,182,128682,2,0,L|466:208,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,129005,5,0,0:0:0:0:
297,115,129166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,89,129327,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,140,129488,2,0,P|143:144|96:118,1,95
0,82,129811,5,2,0:0:0:0:
15,116,129892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
31,150,129972,1,10,0:0:0:0:
54,291,130134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
77,262,130215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,233,130295,1,10,0:0:0:0:
143,96,130456,1,2,0:0:0:0:
173,119,130537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,140,130617,1,10,0:0:0:0:
287,191,130779,5,2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,130940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,229,131021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,191,131101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,153,131182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,120,131263,2,0,L|281:49,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,37,131585,5,0,0:0:0:0:
105,136,131747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,123,131908,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,42,132069,6,0,P|41:61|20:90,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,199,132392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,199,132472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,199,132553,2,0,P|66:227|112:231,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,187,132876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,323,133037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,288,133198,2,0,L|297:249,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,195,133521,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,308,133682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,287,133843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,138,134005,2,0,P|410:104|365:93,1,95
197,185,134327,2,0,P|239:175|278:129,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,90,134650,5,0,0:0:0:0:
286,242,134811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,234,134972,2,0,P|101:189|112:144,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,185,135295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
197,185,135376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,185,135456,2,0,L|310:216,1,95
410,286,135779,2,0,L|318:311,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,345,136101,5,0,0:0:0:0:
74,301,136263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,270,136424,5,8,0:0:0:0:
44,164,136586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,177,136747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
71,28,136909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,43,137069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,83,137230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,83,137311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,83,137392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,134,137553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,93,137714,2,0,P|360:82|417:105,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,223,138037,2,0,P|399:190|354:177,1,95
349,267,138359,2,0,P|384:305|392:366,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,346,138682,6,0,P|130:300|163:267,1,95
256,239,139005,2,0,L|256:334,1,95
183,163,139327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,162,139488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,36,139650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139811,12,4,142392,0:0:0:0:

왠만한건 거의 다 수정했어.
야 이거 랭킹 왜케 높냐;;

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-09-17T10:25:02+00:00

Hello!

From Your Request.

Modding

General

키아이 타임 시작하는곳 01:43:843 에서 01:41:263 으로??

P A N's Easy

00:01:747 (3) - move slider tail point (412,256)
00:22:230 (4) - move slider tail point (16,296)
00:22:230 (1) - NC, 00:24:166 (1) - Remove NC?
00:26:747 (1) - NC?
00:43:198 (2) - move tail point (332,184) , and if you fixed this mod, check 00:44:327 (1) - distance.
01:02:876 (3) - NC?
01:35:940 (1) - move (120,172)? because perpect blanket
01:59:327 (1) - NC?

Normal

00:04:811 (6,7) - 이부분 7번 노트 지우고 6번 슬라이더를 한번 리버스 하는건 어떠세요.
00:12:230 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거. 이건 음.. 앞에껀 음이 계속 이어지고 뉴콤보 중간 추가가 없는데 여긴 추가 되서... 근데 00:57:392 이부분이랑 뉴콤보 패턴이 같네요. 어... 이건 애매함ㅠㅠ
02:01:747 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분 (340,76) 이동?
02:03:037 (1) - 위에꺼 수정한다면 새로 대칭.

Hard

00:02:069 (2) - (336,292)로 이동? 00:01:424 (3) - 이거 때문에...

Insane

01:29:005 (1,2,3) - 이부분 지우고 대신 슬라이더 01:29:005 ~ 01:29:327 그리고 한번 리버스?? 했다면 뉴콤보 제거
02:11:585 (1,2) - 슬라이더로 대체?

Good Quality!

굿 퀄리티!

S.T.A.R

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-09-17T10:44:03+00:00

hi~ sana , PAN o/ Thanks for mod request!!

P A N's Easy

SPOILER

00:51:908 - whistle → clap ?
01:32:230 (3) - The proposal of a rhythm

01:33:359 - add finish ?
01:35:456 - whistle → clap ?
02:00:617 (5) - The proposal of a rhythm

Normal

SPOILER

00:25:456 - add whistle ?
00:25:940 - ^
00:31:101 - ^
00:32:392 (3) - ^
00:32:714 - ^
00:35:456 - add clap ?
00:35:779 - clap → whistle ?
00:36:263 - ^
00:36:585 - add finish ?
00:36:908 (4) - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:42:230 (7) - Delete clap ?
00:44:650 - add whistle ?
00:45:617 - ^
00:46:263 - ^
01:16:585 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:553 - ^
01:17:714 - add clap ?
01:20:617 - Delete clap ?
01:20:940 - add clap ?
01:21:101 - Delete clap ?
01:28:521 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:31:263 - add clap ?
01:31:908 - ^
01:33:682 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:36:424 - add clap ?
01:38:037 (6) - ^
01:41:585 (2,3,4) - add whistle ?
02:15:134 (4) - add clap ?

Hard

SPOILER

00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:59:650 (5) - add clap ?
01:02:230 - ^
01:28:521 - add whistle ?
01:28:682 (2) - clap → whistle ?
01:33:682 - add whistle ?
01:33:843 (7) - ^

Insane

SPOILER

00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 - clap → whistle ?
00:42:069 (1) - add whistle ?
01:28:521 - ^
01:33:682 - ^
01:33:843 - clap → whistle ?
02:00:295 - add clap ?
02:19:005 - ^
Nice Insane !! very very verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry fun!!

plz rank !! good luck

Last edited by iyasine 2013-09-17T10:49:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T10:44:27+00:00

Losertic wrote:
SPOILER
Hello!

From Your Request.

Modding
General
키아이 타임 시작하는곳 01:43:843 에서 01:41:263 으로??
P A N's Easy
00:01:747 (3) - move slider tail point (412,256)
00:22:230 (4) - move slider tail point (16,296)
00:22:230 (1) - NC, 00:24:166 (1) - Remove NC?
00:26:747 (1) - NC?
00:43:198 (2) - move tail point (332,184) , and if you fixed this mod, check 00:44:327 (1) - distance.
01:02:876 (3) - NC?
01:35:940 (1) - move (120,172)? because perpect blanket
01:59:327 (1) - NC?
Normal
00:04:811 (6,7) - 이부분 7번 노트 지우고 6번 슬라이더를 한번 리버스 하는건 어떠세요.
00:12:230 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거. 이건 음.. 앞에껀 음이 계속 이어지고 뉴콤보 중간 추가가 없는데 여긴 추가 되서... 근데 00:57:392 이부분이랑 뉴콤보 패턴이 같네요. 어... 이건 애매함ㅠㅠ
02:01:747 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분 (340,76) 이동?
02:03:037 (1) - 위에꺼 수정한다면 새로 대칭.
Hard
00:02:069 (2) - (336,292)로 이동? 00:01:424 (3) - 이거 때문에...
Insane
01:29:005 (1,2,3) - 이부분 지우고 대신 슬라이더 01:29:005 ~ 01:29:327 그리고 한번 리버스?? 했다면 뉴콤보 제거
02:11:585 (1,2) - 슬라이더로 대체?

Good Quality!
굿 퀄리티!

S.T.A.R
잘먹겠습니다 :3

모딩 감사합니다~

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T10:58:33+00:00

iyasine wrote:
SPOILER
hi~ sana , PAN o/ Thanks for mod request!!

P A N's Easy
[spoilerbox]00:51:908 - whistle → clap ?
01:32:230 (3) - The proposal of a rhythm

01:33:359 - add finish ?
01:35:456 - whistle → clap ?
02:00:617 (5) - The proposal of a rhythm

Normal
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00:25:456 - add whistle ?
00:25:940 - ^
00:31:101 - ^
00:32:392 (3) - ^
00:32:714 - ^
00:35:456 - add clap ?
00:35:779 - clap → whistle ?
00:36:263 - ^
00:36:585 - add finish ?
00:36:908 (4) - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:42:230 (7) - Delete clap ?
00:44:650 - add whistle ?
00:45:617 - ^
00:46:263 - ^
01:16:585 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:553 - ^
01:17:714 - add clap ?
01:20:617 - Delete clap ?
01:20:940 - add clap ?
01:21:101 - Delete clap ?
01:28:521 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:31:263 - add clap ?
01:31:908 - ^
01:33:682 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:36:424 - add clap ?
01:38:037 (6) - ^
01:41:585 (2,3,4) - add whistle ?
02:15:134 (4) - add clap ?

Hard
SPOILER
00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:59:650 (5) - add clap ?
01:02:230 - ^
01:28:521 - add whistle ?
01:28:682 (2) - clap → whistle ?
01:33:682 - add whistle ?
01:33:843 (7) - ^

Insane
SPOILER
00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 - clap → whistle ?
00:42:069 (1) - add whistle ?
01:28:521 - ^
01:33:682 - ^
01:33:843 - clap → whistle ?
02:00:295 - add clap ?
02:19:005 - ^
Nice Insane !! very very verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry fun!!

plz rank !! good luck [/spoilerbox]

lol all fixed! thank you iya <3

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-09-17T11:31:41+00:00

M4M
[General]
delete .osb file since there is no SB.
Inconsistent "Wide Screen Support"
[Easy]
Placement
Rhythm
00:44:327(1,2,3,4) for newbie, it looks difficult. try this rhythm, it looks simply.

SPOILER

00:57:069 blank looks weird since in this part I can hear vocal & sound clearly. so add a note?

Hit Sonud
00:47:069(1) add finish at head instead of whistle
01:32:230(3) add finish at end
[Normal]
Placement
00:58:307(3) nazi,1 grid down.
01:43:843(4,1) swap NC since KIAI starts.
Rhythm
01:16:585(1,2,3) I suppose it is hard to expect for newbie since this is followed red line, so maybe slider looks fine.

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Hit Sonud
00:36:424(3) add finish at end
01:23:198(1) add finish at head
[Hard]
Rhythm
00:04:650(2) to make a jump, I suppose CTRL+G looks fine.
00:54:488(5)^
Hit Sonud
01:28:198(1) add finish at head instead clap
02:04:327(7) add finish at head
02:06:908(6)^
[Insane]
Placement
00:14:488(3,4) I'm expecting a jump here, so here is example.

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00:21:263(8,1) swap NC to follow the downbeat.
01:48:682(4) try to CTRL+G, it would be more fine than current.
Rhythm
00:00:618(1) to be honestly, I don't follow this kick slider at 1st note. this flow looks not good, so replace 3 notes same as 00:03:198 to be consistence.
00:05:617(7) if you keep this note, consider to add a note at 00:03:037.
01:07:634 consider to add a note here since it sounds clearly.
Hit Sonud
01:23:198(3) add finish at head.
01:35:940(1)^
02:14:650(1) add finish

overall fine I suppose. good luck with star.

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-09-17T13:07:24+00:00

O M G so much mod

you know I lazy to reply but fix so much of you all :3

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Take Me Out!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47022
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 109005
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:Dance & Scream
Tags:jpop P_A_N electronicore
BeatmapID:298178
BeatmapSetID:115358

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,68117,76597
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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14166,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
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111424,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
111585,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
121747,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,68,162
Combo2 : 23,139,255
Combo3 : 176,96,96

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156,132,116747,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,100,117069,2,0,P|288:92|332:100,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,180,118037,6,0,P|288:280|360:320,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,119005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,272,119327,2,0,P|440:172|368:132,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,120295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,120617,2,0,P|168:156|124:168,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,76,121263,2,0,P|176:36|244:40,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,72,122230,6,0,B|352:120|380:156|380:156|432:136|476:168,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,123198,2,0,P|416:292|384:328,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,123843,2,0,P|264:228|192:260,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,125134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,192,125617,6,0,L|444:100,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,108,126263,2,0,L|336:20,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,126908,2,0,P|184:56|144:104,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,252,128037,6,0,B|84:300|140:284|140:284|168:312|168:312|216:308,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,288,129005,2,0,P|352:272|424:296,1,135,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,129972,6,0,P|448:108|440:60,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,96,130617,2,0,P|308:96|268:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,131263,2,0,P|360:228|400:244,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,132069,6,0,P|228:264|212:196,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,132876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,44,133198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,28,133521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,104,133843,6,0,B|16:188|96:212|96:212|132:296,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,135134,2,0,L|356:320,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,135779,2,0,L|472:264,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,136747,2,0,P|320:92|360:24,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,64,137714,6,0,B|152:88|152:88|104:80|104:80|32:100,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,139327,2,0,L|320:120,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139811,12,4,142392,0:0:0:0:

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-09-17T19:05:06+00:00

Hi~ Sana ^^
[P A N's easy]
Nice~

[Normal]
Nice~

[Hard]
00:19:972 (1,2,3) - Try this?

SPOILER

Some stack issue:
00:20:456 (4) - X=321 Y=180
00:33:843 (2) - X=265 Y=287
01:07:069 (2) - X=269 Y=183
01:29:005 (3) - X=414 Y=112
01:34:166 (1) - X=265 Y=113
01:51:585 (1) - X=442 Y=76
01:55:940 (4) - X=56 Y=343
01:46:747 (1,2,3) - Try this:

SPOILER

02:11:908 (6) - Try clap?
02:13:843 (3) - Stack with 02:14:005 (4) - is better on the flow imo

[Insane]
00:35:617 (2,3) - May be exchange them to make it easier?
Some stack issue:
00:52:876 (2) - X=211 Y=179
01:50:134 (6) - X=340 Y=182
02:05:456 (7) - X=32 Y=124

Not much to say, really nice map ^^
GL!

haha5957

1,433 posts

Joined July 2010

haha5957 2013-09-18T02:51:34+00:00

이미 맵이 제가 모딩하기엔 너무 만들어진 것 같아요.. ㅋㅋ
세세하게 살펴보면 한두개정도야 찝을수 있을지는 모르겠지만 군대를 코앞에 둔 게 정신적으로도 생각보다 많이 바쁘네요..

별 도움이 못되드려서 죄송합니다~ 잘 만들어진 맵엔 조용히 별을 떨구고 사라집니다!

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-18T05:03:02+00:00

Thanks for modding guys~xD

UPDATED!

Sylith

722 posts

Joined September 2012

Sylith 2013-09-18T15:41:57+00:00

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 대박

별을 쏘고 싶어도 쿠도스가 없는게 아쉽네요

GOOD LUCK!

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2013-09-18T18:16:43+00:00

Hi~
M4M request from in-game

Red: Unrankable / You should fix absolutely.
Orange: Strong Suggestion / I think you should fix it.
Black: Suggestion
Blue: message

[General]

●Source: Remove "Dance & Scream"
This is the album name. Therefore, It is not possible to add to the source. Anime and game name...etc can be added to the source.
You can add Tags to instead of the source :3 please add!

●Tags: Add "album"
Because it is a song of the album. Recommend that you add.

[P A N's Easy]

●01:35:940 (1) - spacing 1.09x. fix to 1.00x~

[Normal]

●00:13:521 (1,3,5) - Please have the same y-axis. Probably, move to y:112? Beautiful placement is the possible~
●00:13:843 (2,4) - ^ Probably, move to y:64? ^
●00:57:714 (2,3) - ^ Probably, move to y:132? ^
●01:07:069 (1,3) - ^ Probably, move to y:220? ^
...etc

●A little deviation occurs > Coordinate. It is really very small... recommend that you fix. please check~

[Hard]

●00:22:392 (5) - Add new combo. keep the consistency of the new combo.

[Insane]

●OD+1?

OD8 has become a mainstream.
●00:26:263 (1) - Add finish (start). will very fit the music~
●00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - good. I like this xD
●00:53:682 (2,3) - Ctrl+G. 00:54:005 (4) - move to x:388 y:256. I prefer this :3

image

●01:33:359 (1) - spacing 1.22x ⇒ 0.80x. will adjust the spacing with the previous object.

good luck =w=

Fuuko

486 posts

Joined June 2009

Fuuko 2013-09-18T18:48:54+00:00

General:

~~"Dance & Scream" should be in the tags, not in the source, since it's the album's name.~~
02:01:747 - At this part, it'd be better if you add another kiai fountain and make it go till the end of the song. It's a very strong part (in beats and vocals).

P A N's Easy

The audio lead-in in this diff is 1000, while in the other diffs it's 1500. Open the .osu and edit it to 1500 to match other diffs.

00:21:908 (4) - Push this one grid right and one down to make it centered with (3);
00:56:101 (3) - One grid up and one left to stack it with the previous (1);

Nothing much to say here, a very neat diff and good-looking. <3

Normal

00:02:876 (5) - Remove the finish and add a clap.
00:05:456 (7) - ^
00:07:876 (6) - Remove the finish on the end.
00:09:972 (4) - Add a clap.
00:10:295 (5) - Add a clap on the ending.
00:15:940 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:46:263 (5) - Remove the finish on the end.
01:02:553 (6) - Add a finish.
01:33:682 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:166 (3) - Add new combo.

It has a very nice flow and plays very well. Didn't have much to say about the notes or sugestions, so I focused on the hitsounds. Good job.

Hard

If you changed the hitsounds on the previous diff, do it on this one too.

00:48:359 (5) - New combo.

Nothing much to point out. A very challenging and fun diff. I enjoyed it a lot!

Insane

If you changed the hitsounds on the previous diffs, do it on this one too.

00:40:617 (1) - Move this a few grids right and down so it stacks with 00:39:166 (1);
00:41:101 (3) - If ^, then move this accordingly to get centered with that slider.
00:43:843 (3,4,5) - This jump is really high and hard to see it coming. Either new combo the (3), or switch (4) and (5) around.
00:49:811 (10) - Better add a new combo here and remove the new combo on the next note so this jump is easier to see.
00:51:747 (6) - Move this one grid and one right so the (4) will be centered;
01:34:166 (1,2,3) - It would play better if you put them close to each other like how you did at 01:29:005 -;
02:19:005 (2) - This note would look better if you made it symmetrical to the previous (6);
02:19:327 (3,4,5) - If ^, move these accordingly.

I think it's a bit overmapped, but the jumps and streams are very challenging and fun, plus most of them play nice.

Very good mapset. Hope you get it ranked soon. <3

-Edit-

Dammit, Gamu ninja'd me on the source.

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-09-19T07:31:52+00:00

HI~ [ Sana ] M4M from my queue

General:

you should cut the last part of the mp3 you are not using it

Insane:

00:05:134 (2,3,4,5) - I dont like how the whistles sound in the stream why you just use normal samples on they sound alot better
00:05:618 the sound here is realy low and dont play good why you dont try to convert it in a 1/2 slider with previous like this rhythm (also if you follow this you will improve the flow with next slider):
SPOILER
00:08:037 this almost touch the hp bar and is bad for game play IMO maybe you can consider to lower it 2 or 3 grids for better gameplay
00:13:198 remove whistle or make it soft audition plz
00:13:198 (10,1) - the flow here is kinda messy why you dont better try to 00:13:521 (1) - ctrl G and 00:13:843 ctrl g you will improve alot the cursor movement making a nice jumpy pattern
SPOILER
00:14:811 (2) - try to stack with 00:13:843 perfect actually look pretty bad
00:13:117 I cant hear nothing here better remove it? dont sound bad but is better follow the music properly
00:18:198 (5,1) - kinda nazi but this blanket is not perfect you can improve it alot imo
00:18:279 why you ignore the music here D: this should be mapped since you map almos all the triplets I dont see the reason why you dont this one :c
00:20:214 same as above
00:26:101 (11,1) - fix the distance here atleast to 1.0 is really confuse orz
00:34:811 add new combo plz this take me offguard when I was testing this is really confuse take in consideration you use a spaced stream orz
00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you can consider to use less spacng here is almost imposible to read in first try 2.0 2.20 gonna be nice
00:48:682 (4,6) - yeah nazi but stack this perfect
01:05:456 (3,5) - Same here
01:07:634 (1) - try to move the last point of the slider a little to the right to make it more fun:
SPOILER
01:25:618 (7,8,9) - stack this perfec too
01:29:972 (4,5,6,7,8) - make this a little curved that straight form break the cool flow or your map
02:00:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you reduce the spacing here to 0.60? for better playability
02:19:811 add a circle here then start the spinner in 02:19:892 doing this you follow alot better the song :3

Hard:

00:04:327 (1,3) - huehue stack they perfect
00:24:811 (5,3) - same as above
00:25:779 this should finish 1/4 back I guess i really dont like this extended sliders on hard diffs
00:35:940 this jump repeats are kinda difficulty for a hard diff just move this 00:35:940 to x:296 y:136 to avoid this and make it better
00:48:843 (6,7) - stack this perfect
00:55:940 (6) - I dont like how this 00:55:940 (6) - touch this 00:56:747 (2) - try to move a little the (6) maybe:
SPOILER
01:07:714 this should be new combo for consistency with your insane if not remove the one on insane
01:32:230 move this 2 grids to the left to avoid the overlap with 01:33:037
02:19:811 same as insane

Normal:

OD and HP should be 4 for better diff spread
00:00:618 (1,2) - unstack this newbies cant play stack also is just the start of the map lets they warm up xD
00:10:940 (1,5) - stack they perfect yup nazi
00:25:617 (5,6) - fic the distance is little but is better have all perfect imo
00:42:069 (6,7) - convert they two in a slider play and sound alot better
00:46:263 (5,1) - I cant agree with you this anti jumps are really hard to do for a newbie better keep the distance there

P A N Easy:

00:10:134 this should start 1/2 back in the downbeat imo sound alot better
00:53:521 (1,3) - stack they perfect actually look bad
01:35:940 (1) - fix the distance with previous
01:39:005 (1) - same as above
01:41:263 ^

Fun mapset GL!

TheVileOne

osu! Alumni

8,431 posts

Joined March 2010

TheVileOne 2013-09-19T21:37:38+00:00

Mod

General

Preview time should be here 00:47:069 -
Easy has a different audio-leadin. Make 1500 like the others.

Easy
Solid difficulty. I liked it.

00:57:392 (1,2,1) - Make spacing equal here. It bothers me.
01:18:521 (2) - New combo for consistency.
01:31:585 (2,3) - Blanket is uneven
01:39:972 (2) - Not sure about this shape. Anyways maybe move the second point 1 grid 4 to the right? I might try to smooth out the curve too.
01:51:908 (1) - Move to x 340 y 280. It will fix the spacing and the angle. Adjust spacing of part after.

Normal
Nice flow.

00:30:295 (3,4,1) - Kind of a meh transition. It would look better if 4 blanketted properly with 3. you would need to adjust the form of the next part to fix the spacing though.
00:38:037 (2,3) - Uneven blanket.
01:17:553 (2) - I think this needs to be moved 2 grid 4 units to the left to be properly aligned with the next slider. Maintaining proper alignment here is probably more important than keeping that slider centered IMO.
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Not very interesting. I would go for a more natural arc for the notes and then have opposite curves for 01:42:553 (1,2) - like you have done in other parts of the map. 00:58:682 (1,2) - <- like this?

Hard

00:27:876 - It feels weird without something here.
01:17:553 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - I would have done something that had a continuous flow. I guess this is fine, albeit slightly inaccurate to the actual beat.
01:45:617 (4,5,6) - Not that great to look at, flow is fine. It would be better if you could get it so that the slider is pointer more towards the note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/992583
02:11:263 (3) - Looks 1 grid 4 unit too far to the right. (Maybe less than a unit)

Insane

okay I need to be in a better mood to mod this.

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-09-21T00:51:10+00:00

M4M

[P A N's Easy]
01:35:940 (1) - Remove NC?
01:55:456 (1) - ^ and add it to 01:56:747 (2) - ?

[Normal]
00:52:230 (6) - NC?
01:06:262 (3) - Remove the repeat?

That's all I've got to say. Sorry if it isn't enough and/or useful.

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-21T05:44:41+00:00

Thank you guys for modding!

Updated where is PAN :p

Crier

Crier 2013-09-21T08:03:18+00:00

test play req

Insane

Hard

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

3,785 posts

Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2013-09-22T15:37:55+00:00

[P A N's Easy]
- Audio lead in here is 1000ms when other diffs are 1500ms.
- 00:01:747 (3) - [nazi] Doesn't blanket 00:01:424 (2) perfectly.
- 00:04:972 (3) - Just a personal preference, but the slider doesn't look that good...
- 00:15:940 (1) - I'm a bit concerned about the readability of this note given that it's on an offbeat (red tick) and this difficulty is an Easy. I would omit it entirely.
- 00:21:908 (4) - New combo here for consistency with your combos.
- 00:26:747 (2) - Same as above.
- 00:42:230 (1) - I would just start the combo at 00:42:553 where the vocal is. Starting it makes it a bit confusing.
- 00:53:521 (1) - Remove new combo here for consistency with your combo patterns.
- 00:54:811 (2) - New combo here. ^
- 00:58:682 (3) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 00:59:972 (1) - New combo here. ^
- 01:01:263 (4) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:02:876 (6) - New combo here. ^
- 01:03:843 (1) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:21:101 (1) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:44:166 (1,2) - The flow here is not that good. Move (1)'s end a bit so that it leads into (2). Like this
- 01:45:779 (4,1) - Do the same for these two. ^
- 01:47:714 (1) - Remove new combo here. Same reason as the others.
- 01:54:166 (4) - New combo. ^
- 01:55:456 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 01:56:747 (1) - New combo.
- 01:58:037 (3) - Remove new combo.
- 01:59:327 (5) - New combo.
- 02:07:714 () - I was expecting a note here given how strong the rhythm is here.

[Normal]
- 00:17:392 (4,5) - Make (4) lead into (5) for better flow. Like this
- 00:25:134 (4,5,6) - Similar to above. Like this If possible, do this to all similar types of sliders.
- 01:31:263 (1) - New combo here is unneeded.

[Hard]
- Good diff.
- 01:07:714 (1) - New combo here is unneeded.

[Insane]
- Good diff too.
- 00:11:908 (1,2) - I was expecting the spacing to increase, not decrease.

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-09-22T16:13:25+00:00

thanks all, fix all :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Take Me Out!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47022
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:
Tags:Dance & Scream jpop P_A_N electronicore
BeatmapID:298178
BeatmapSetID:115358

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,68037,76597
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
618,322.58064516129,4,1,1,50,1,0
13843,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
14166,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
15940,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
45779,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
47069,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
57311,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
57392,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
66585,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
67069,-100,4,1,1,30,0,1
67714,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
78037,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
78117,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
88198,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,40,0,0
90779,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
93359,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,50,0,0
95940,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
103843,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
111424,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
111585,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
121747,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,68,162
Combo2 : 23,139,255
Combo3 : 176,96,96

[HitObjects]
192,108,618,2,0,P|256:92|324:108,1,135,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,1424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,272,1747,2,0,P|368:280|408:264,2,90,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,200,2714,2,0,P|236:248|248:328,1,135,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,316,3682,6,0,L|92:216,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,4327,2,0,L|64:52,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,4972,2,0,B|180:116|248:100|248:100|304:72|364:108,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,184,6263,6,0,P|480:144|480:88,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,264,7230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,312,7553,2,0,B|280:284|232:316|232:316|184:288|120:328,1,225,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,8843,6,0,L|92:100,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,112,9488,2,0,L|172:212,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,280,10134,2,0,P|304:340|420:300,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,236,11263,6,0,P|480:192|480:144,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,11908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,32,12230,2,0,B|332:64|288:48|288:48|252:68|252:68|192:60,2,180,4|2|4,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,13843,6,0,L|464:160,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,14488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,292,14811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,296,15456,6,0,P|120:256|112:184,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,92,16424,2,0,B|256:56|316:88|316:88|380:52,2,180,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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448,28,19005,6,0,B|436:72|456:100|456:100|488:144|460:208,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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348,124,20617,2,0,P|280:96|220:120,2,135,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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116,192,26747,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,27392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,28037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,132,28359,2,0,P|408:104|336:128,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,88,33198,2,0,P|336:48|380:24,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,108,39972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,96,40295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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168,196,43198,2,0,P|240:152|332:180,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,168,44327,6,0,L|480:32,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,40,45134,2,0,P|328:16|260:40,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,104,45940,2,0,L|320:240,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,47069,6,0,L|152:336,2,90,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,48037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,160,48359,2,0,L|108:24,2,135,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,49650,6,0,P|184:244|228:236,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,212,50295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,164,50617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,232,50940,2,0,L|468:380,2,135,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,52230,6,0,L|300:148,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,52876,2,0,L|112:124,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,88,53521,2,0,P|44:152|100:204,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,88,56101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,260,56747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,316,57392,6,0,L|372:308,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,58037,2,0,P|464:224|464:172,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,92,58682,2,0,P|436:36|360:4,2,135,10|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,59972,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,180,60295,2,0,L|328:276,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,60940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,61263,2,0,L|168:132,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,92,62069,2,0,P|148:52|220:68,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,62876,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,112,63198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,184,63521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,66263,12,4,67714,0:0:0:0:
96,72,78037,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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272,172,82392,2,0,P|232:200|188:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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196,144,86585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
244,68,86908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,40,87230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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496,188,92230,2,0,P|464:112|408:96,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,93037,2,0,P|308:172|260:192,1,90,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,160,95940,6,0,L|104:300,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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380,344,101908,2,0,L|366:256,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,88,104166,6,0,P|96:132|104:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,104811,2,0,P|140:304|180:328,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,105456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,326,105779,2,0,P|373:302|396:264,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,106424,6,0,P|424:128|412:88,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,107069,2,0,L|240:128,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,140,107714,2,0,P|128:84|148:4,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,109005,2,0,P|240:268|220:348,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,280,110295,6,0,P|120:196|304:200,1,360,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,280,111908,6,0,P|380:296|440:280,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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212,116,132876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,44,133198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,28,133521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,139811,12,4,142392,0:0:0:0:

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-22T16:19:12+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:17:392 (4,5) - Make (4) lead into (5) for better flow. Like this Fixed
- 00:25:134 (4,5,6) - Similar to above. Like this If possible, do this to all similar types of sliders. Fixed all of them
- 01:31:263 (1) - New combo here is unneeded. Fixed

[Hard]
- Good diff.
- 01:07:714 (1) - New combo here is unneeded. Fixed

[Insane]
- Good diff too.
- 00:11:908 (1,2) - I was expecting the spacing to increase, not decrease. Fixed

Thanks for mod NoHitter!

Updated

P A N

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P A N 2013-09-22T16:29:59+00:00

Go Go Sana

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-09-23T09:09:35+00:00

Bubbled!

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-09-23T09:36:46+00:00

Go! Go! Sana!!

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-09-23T09:49:13+00:00

wow, cool gogo Sana :3

Reol

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Reol 2013-09-23T14:09:52+00:00

와, 벌써 버블;
축하드려요 XD

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-24T01:45:33+00:00

랭크 ㄱㄱ!@

Koiyuki

Beatmap Nominator

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Koiyuki 2013-09-24T18:52:55+00:00

oh
gratz for bubbled~!

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-09-26T14:31:37+00:00

Well, that was fast. Sorry about the delay, I don't think that you still need my mod

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-27T08:54:50+00:00

UPDATED!

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

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Frostmourne 2013-09-27T09:00:28+00:00

as for your ticket.
Fixed only a circle (NC) for better readability
The map is really decent one.

Ranked.

Norman

Norman 2013-09-27T09:01:27+00:00

첫랭 축하드려요

iyasine

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iyasine 2013-09-27T09:06:00+00:00

gratz!!!!! \o/

P A N

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P A N 2013-09-27T09:07:50+00:00

gratz

Reol

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Reol 2013-09-27T09:08:43+00:00

첫랭 축하드립니다 :3

litoluna

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litoluna 2013-09-27T09:36:38+00:00

Congratz~

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-09-27T09:39:11+00:00

Gratz!!

HabiHolic

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HabiHolic 2013-09-27T10:01:49+00:00

ㅊㅋㅊㅋ

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-09-27T10:05:49+00:00

Congratz Sana! :3

yurunneram

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yurunneram 2013-09-27T10:07:32+00:00

OMG been waitin for this to get ranked :3 Gratz!!~

<3 fear and loathing in las vegas

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2013-09-27T11:52:56+00:00

첫랭 축하요~

LQA20Ans

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LQA20Ans 2013-09-27T12:06:18+00:00

지젼 쩌네염... 첫랭 ㅊㅋㅊㅋ

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-09-27T12:22:26+00:00

gratz~

Rakuen

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Rakuen 2013-09-27T12:51:25+00:00

grats!

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2013-09-27T16:57:51+00:00

Gratz ~

Zare

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Zare 2013-09-27T17:05:38+00:00

Why do you overmap triplets like that? It makes no sense really

Lari

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Lari 2013-09-27T17:23:46+00:00

랭크 축하드립니다~

quiz-chan_DELETED

quiz-chan_DELETED 2013-09-27T20:11:37+00:00

SPOILER

Was about to mod this

...

NO LONGER NECESSARY \o/

kk congratz~~

Kin

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Kin 2013-09-27T20:41:23+00:00

Quiz-chan wrote:
Was about to mod this

congratz \o

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-27T21:30:09+00:00

Zarerion wrote:
Why do you overmap triplets like that? It makes no sense really

Most of players would not recognize that it is overmapped.
It means this triplets doesn't be problem for playing
Also overmap can be mappers own feature

Quilt

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Quilt 2013-09-27T22:36:48+00:00

Gratz

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2013-09-27T23:32:41+00:00

첫랭크 축하드려요~ 굿맵

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2013-09-28T04:47:28+00:00

gratz on the rank! sorry i didnt get the time to come around and mod this ><

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2013-09-28T06:57:34+00:00

gratz~

Zare

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Zare 2013-09-28T10:11:52+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Zarerion wrote:
Why do you overmap triplets like that? It makes no sense really
Most of players would not recognize that it is overmapped.
It means this triplets doesn't be problem for playing
Also overmap can be mappers own feature

I noticed, it made me not want to play this map any more
And that's the entire point, they don't make the map harder in any way, they do not add anything to it. They're just there and feel bad when playing. I don't see a reason for adding them.

DX5536

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DX5536 2013-09-28T15:06:03+00:00

congraz, Sana!

[-BAKA-]

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[-BAKA-] 2013-10-23T05:08:28+00:00

:3

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