Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas - Take Me Out!! · forum

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-15T03:41:45+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Sorry is late..

레더박스 체크 해제할것

[P A N's Easy]

00:40:617 (1) - Why New Combo? Remove
00:45:134 (2,3,4) - Was not too difficult to beat the same rhythm. It is recommended to create something different
00:50:940 (1) - Remove NC 00:52:230 (2) - NC Here
00:59:005 (1) - Remove NC 01:00:295 (2) - NC Here
01:25:295 (3) - add clap here
02:14:811 - add note Not because the rhythm is to stand out If you want to create an easy fix should feel free

[Normal]

00:12:230 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:13:521 (1) - 클랩 제거 쿵짝짝짝 하면 더 흐름이 좋아질것 같아요
00:17:392 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거 불필요해 보입니다
00:47:069 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
00:49:650 (3) - ^
00:54:005 (3) - 끝부분에 클랩
00:59:972 (3) - 피니쉬 추가
01:22:876 (6) - 리듬의 흐름이 좋아지도록 이부분에 클랩 넣는것도 좋을듯 합니다
02:06:263 (3) - 이부분 일정하게 맞추는건 어떨까요 디스컨스는 일정한데 간격 안맞는경우 종종 있으니까요

[Hard]

00:18:198 (4) - 통일성을 위해 ctrl + g
00:52:230 (4) - 피니쉬
00:53:682 (2) - 클랩 있으니까 리듬이 이상해요 제거하시는게 좋을둣

GL~

SPOILER

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
Thanks for M4M!

[P A N's Easy]
02:07:714- add a note
[Normal]
01:36:424 (2) - how about this?
[Hard]
00:10:134- add a note
01:32:230 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - how about regular pentagon?
[spoilerbox]
348,174,92230,5,0,0:0:0:0:
370,257,92392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
457,259,92553,2,8,L|438:319,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
489,177,92876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
418,122,93198,1,0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:06:908 (5) - NC
01:29:005 (1,2,3,4) - DS is too shot imo

01:36:263 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about regular pentagon?

SPOILER

259,201,96263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,96343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,201,96424,2,8,P|272:154|311:127,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,95,96747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
222,104,96908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,97069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,38,97230,1,0,0:0:0:0:

wow, it's a exciting band like "MAXIMUM THE HORMONE"
~Good Luck~[/spoilerbox]

모딩감사합니다~
Thanks for mod!

eniyan

107 posts

Joined September 2011

eniyan 2013-09-15T06:47:52+00:00

Hi

From my queue

[Easy]

in Easy,i think that you should avoid the act to change Slider Velocity by changing BPM...

[Normal]

i wasn’t able to find the point that you should fix

[hard]

00:34:811 (2,3) - I feel that distance is far for Hard...

00:56:747 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]

00:08:521 (2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

00:53:682 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

00:55:617 (7) - Ctrl＋g

00:57:714 (2) - Ctrl＋g

01:38:037 (1,2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

01:44:811 (5,1,2,3,4) - When you change it in this way, how about?

this way

At first,(5) Ctrl＋g. Then, replace 2 with 1.

thanks you for m4m

I cheer you so that this does ranked!

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-15T15:00:49+00:00

SPOILER

EnixYuki wrote:
Hi

From my queue

[Easy]

in Easy,i think that you should avoid the act to change Slider Velocity by changing BPM...
[Normal]

i wasn’t able to find the point that you should fix
[hard]

00:34:811 (2,3) - I feel that distance is far for Hard...
00:56:747 (2,3) - ^
[Insane]

00:08:521 (2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.
placement

00:53:682 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.
placement

00:55:617 (7) - Ctrl＋g
00:57:714 (2) - Ctrl＋g
01:38:037 (1,2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.
placement

01:44:811 (5,1,2,3,4) - When you change it in this way, how about?
this way
At first,(5) Ctrl＋g. Then, replace 2 with 1.

thanks you for m4m

I cheer you so that this does ranked!

Fixed some! Thanks~

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2013-09-16T02:48:38+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

+1 star for M4M as mentioned in my queue

[Easy]
Consider AR: +1 cuz slider vel doesn't suit with the AR, and the song is fast
00:45:134 (2) - Make it stack, seperated is harder to read
00:52:230 (2) - Move a little above since it's quite close to 00:50:617 (3) - , or stack it
00:54:811 (2) - If possible don't make the slider go out of mapping box for easy
01:08:037 - Break starts here
01:16:585 - Continue leads here
01:23:198 - Add circle
01:24:327 (2) - Make it Ctrl+G so it fixes the flow, for example 02:17:714 (1,2) -
01:36:747 (2) - Stack

[Normal]
AR: +1, cuz fast song

01:08:037 - Break here
01:16:585 - Continue leads here

[Hard]
00:13:843 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it to a line not jump, try it!
00:35:940 (2) - Ctrl+G looks better cuz the pattern is same with this 00:45:779 (2,3) -
00:37:392 (1,2,3) - Maybe slown down SV here? like 01:29:005 -
01:38:843 (2,3,4) - Make it 1 direction but different angle

[Insane]
00:24:811 (2) - Stick with 00:24:488 (1) - looks better like a stream
01:40:618 (7) - Stick to (6)
02:00:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make the DS closer
02:19:488 (4,5) - Swap timing

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-09-16T08:53:16+00:00

m4m here =3=~

General
01:41:263 - kiai fountain here?

Pantsu's Easy
00:02:714 (4) - add clap too because heavy music here?
00:12:230 (3) - make symmetrical better here, maybe like http://puu.sh/4snL9.jpg or http://puu.sh/4snMB.jpg
00:12:230 (3) - you should give finish in tail if in head of slider have finish.. heavy music similar here
00:14:811 (3) - add clap in tail, it's fit with music imo
00:21:101 - you can't skip heavy music here, similar with 00:18:521 - . try http://puu.sh/4snTH.jpg
00:26:424 - here too, add note with finish
00:30:617 (2) - extend until 00:31:424 - and give finish in tail
00:45:134 (2,3) - this 1/2 is so hard for easy with high bpm.. remove (2)
00:46:263 (3) - should be finish in tail because heavy music
00:47:069 (1) - finish in head because music and kiai
00:50:617 (3,2) - don't make overlap here, at least move somewhere or stack them perfectly
00:52:876 (3) - tail 120,132 for blanket?
01:18:521 (1,1) - no need NC here actually
01:28:198 (1) - blue tick in repeat? no need hard rhythm for this , just make slider like http://puu.sh/4soe5.jpg, should be fine :3
01:30:779 (1) - should be finish in head, i heard cymbal
01:32:230 (3) - i'm not really like blue tick in Easy diff because can make newbie confuse and sound bad in easy, try http://puu.sh/4sopS.jpg ?
01:33:359 - and should be finish here
01:50:295 (1) - should be finish in tail , i know you know the reason why should finish here
02:13:843 (1) - no need finish in tail, just a normal music and not heavy music
02:19:811 (1) - finish in spin because heavy music again

Normal
00:13:521 (1) - finish here
00:15:940 (1) - finish in tail
00:24:488 (2,3) - try placement like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/986792 ? i'm feel better for flow
00:23:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try add clap hitsound in this part.. so feel empty here. try add clap in every 2nd and 4rd whitetick?
00:35:940 (2) - kinda hard for me imo, try delete and add note in 00:36:101 - ?
00:41:101 (5) - try add clap in head?
00:46:263 (5) - finish in tail
01:20:617 (1) - finish in head?
01:46:424 (5) - finish
02:12:876 (2,3) - try placement https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/986817 ? hope have better flow in ur opinion
02:14:650 (6) - finish in tail
02:19:811 (1) - should finish too

from here , quick mod here (usually hitsound) , so busy asdf =_=

Hard
00:23:682 (2) - whistle in head? kinda feel plain/empty imo
00:26:101 (4) - finish in tail
00:28:198 - add note?
00:40:617 (5) - should be NC for consistency
00:46:424 (4) - finish?
00:49:650 (4) - finish? if too much loud, add clap instead
00:59:972 (6) - ^
01:02:553 (5) - should be finish here for consistency with 00:52:230 (4) -
01:20:617 (1) - same as 00:49:650 (4) -
01:54:166 (4) - ^
01:56:747 (5) - finish
02:17:230 (1) - finish in head

Insane
00:08:682 (3) - 388,212? at least easier to read
00:13:521 (1) - finish in head
00:44:327 (1) - finish instead clap
01:02:553 (1) - finish
01:19:488 (7,1) - swap NC for easier read jump
01:20:618 (3) - finish in head
01:54:166 (9) - finish in head
01:56:747 (7) - ^

Good Luck ~

sjoy

1,025 posts

Joined April 2012

sjoy 2013-09-16T09:14:30+00:00

Hi from my extra rule

just some suggestions
[Insane]
00:10:134 (9) - move to 176 ,240?
00:11:585 (1,2) - how about ctrl+g? and 00:11:908 (1,2) - ctrl+g because 00:11:585 (1) - is too hard to play after 00:11:424 (2) -
00:18:198 (5) - ctrl+g?
00:50:617 (4) - move to 32,328?
01:04:650 (7) - move to 444,120?
01:42:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - imo it's not suitable to play long steam

01:57:553 (4,5) - ctrl+g?
01:58:843 how about this http://puu.sh/4sGOz.jpg

good luck for rank

K i A i

662 posts

Joined March 2011

K i A i 2013-09-16T15:09:42+00:00

케이온이 생각나는군요

[ez]
00:45:134 (2,3) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sOoY.png , http://puu.sh/4sOr2.png , http://puu.sh/4sOu1.png , http://puu.sh/4sOvu.png
01:28:198 (1) - changing speed at here is looks strange.. how about keeping original speed? -> http://puu.sh/4sOJa.png
-> if you accept this, make [01:29:650 (2,3)]'s distance to x1.0 plz

-> for keeping consistence, plz make [01:34:166 (1)]'s speed to original speed too
01:36:908 (3) - how about make this slider's form to flatly? -> http://puu.sh/4sP1C.png
01:42:553 (3) - add finish sound to last point
01:50:295 (1) - ^
02:19:811 (1) - how about add finish sound?

yea

[NM]
00:36:908 (4,5) - 슬라이더로 만들어보는건 어떤가여?
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 1번 노트와 3번 노트만 남겨두고 위치를 적당하게 맞춰보는건 어떤가여?
01:46:424 (5) - 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[HD]
01:07:392 (3,4) - 리버스 하는 슬라이더 하나로 만들어보는건 어떤가요?
01:27:876 (4,5,6) - ^
01:28:198 (7) - NC!
01:29:005 (1) - NC제거
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[IS]
00:00:618 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시!
00:00:618 (1,2) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPyi.png
00:04:650 (7,8) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPBs.png , http://puu.sh/4sPCn.png , http://puu.sh/4sPDc.png
01:29:327 (2,3,4) - 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보 어떤가요?
-> 01:34:166 (1,2,3,4) - 만약 위 모딩을 하셨다면 통일성을 위해 이 부분도 서로 뉴콤보 시켜주세요~
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 여기도 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보?
02:03:037 (6) - NC
02:03:359 (1) - del NC
02:04:327 (6) - NC
02:04:972 (1) - del NC
02:05:617 (6) - NC
02:06:585 (1) - del NC
02:06:908 (5) - NC + 시작 부분에 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

모딩 끄읕

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-16T15:27:54+00:00

SPOILER

K i A i wrote:
케이온이 생각나는군요

[ez]
00:45:134 (2,3) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sOoY.png , http://puu.sh/4sOr2.png , http://puu.sh/4sOu1.png , http://puu.sh/4sOvu.png
01:28:198 (1) - changing speed at here is looks strange.. how about keeping original speed? -> http://puu.sh/4sOJa.png
-> if you accept this, make [01:29:650 (2,3)]'s distance to x1.0 plz
-> for keeping consistence, plz make [01:34:166 (1)]'s speed to original speed too
01:36:908 (3) - how about make this slider's form to flatly? -> http://puu.sh/4sP1C.png
01:42:553 (3) - add finish sound to last point
01:50:295 (1) - ^
02:19:811 (1) - how about add finish sound?

yea

[NM]
00:36:908 (4,5) - 슬라이더로 만들어보는건 어떤가여?
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 1번 노트와 3번 노트만 남겨두고 위치를 적당하게 맞춰보는건 어떤가여?
01:46:424 (5) - 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[HD]
01:07:392 (3,4) - 리버스 하는 슬라이더 하나로 만들어보는건 어떤가요?
01:27:876 (4,5,6) - ^
01:28:198 (7) - NC!
01:29:005 (1) - NC제거
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

[IS]
00:00:618 (1) - 시작 부분에 피니시!
00:00:618 (1,2) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPyi.png
00:04:650 (7,8) - how about this? -> http://puu.sh/4sPBs.png , http://puu.sh/4sPCn.png , http://puu.sh/4sPDc.png
01:29:327 (2,3,4) - 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보 어떤가요?
-> 01:34:166 (1,2,3,4) - 만약 위 모딩을 하셨다면 통일성을 위해 이 부분도 서로 뉴콤보 시켜주세요~
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4) - 여기도 안티점프 표시를 위해 각각 뉴콤보?
02:03:037 (6) - NC
02:03:359 (1) - del NC
02:04:327 (6) - NC
02:04:972 (1) - del NC
02:05:617 (6) - NC
02:06:585 (1) - del NC
02:06:908 (5) - NC + 시작 부분에 피니시!
02:19:811 (1) - 피니시는 어떤가요?

모딩 끄읕

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ그 동영상보고찍은맵

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-09-16T16:24:10+00:00

Hi
From my queue of M4M
Sorry for late for some days

[Insane]

my play

http://puu.sh/4sRw8.osr

00:33:521 (5) - move to 236,140
nothing else...I like the map, when I am playing the map, I enjoy the music and the map both.

[Hard]
00:27:714 (6) - 00:29:327 (3) - 00:30:295 (6) - 00:31:424 (4) - NC
00:28:359 (1,1) - remove NC
00:55:940 (6,7) - change it to a slider is better I think
01:59:811 (4,5) -

to

[Normal]
02:12:069 - Kiai? fix this please, or nake all your diffs with this kiai.
00:21:101 (1,2,3,4) - maybe a little hard in normal

[P A N's Easy]
00:23:198 (5) - move to 104,263
01:28:198 - although ×0.75, I suggest not to change sv in easy/normal ._.
01:30:779 (1,2) - blanket
01:36:747 (2,3) - change to a slider
01:58:037 (1,2,3) -

stared!~
good luck with your map~

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T02:52:22+00:00

Thank you for moddings!! <3

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-09-17T03:18:00+00:00

Hi, From my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Clear.

[Insane]

00:20:940 (7,8) - hmm, i think not fit the song and vocal here. like this?
00:26:263 (1) - suggestion. 1/1 slider is really fit here imo.
01:41:263 (1) - finish

nice diff.

[Hard]

HP+1
00:18:521 (1) - you forgot finish?
00:23:682 (2) - ^
00:25:134 (1) - i think that fit 1/2. bule line rhythm is not fit imo.
00:42:553 (1) - add finish.
00:55:940 (6,7,1) - hmm, i don't like that downbeat rhythm. like this?
01:41:263 (1) - finish
01:49:005 (1) - finish? Insane diff have finish here.
02:17:230 (1) - ^

[Normal]

i recommend AR+1.
01:02:553 (6) - remove finish? not found finish here in Hard diff and Insane diff.
01:41:263 (1) - really fit the finish here.
01:49:005 (1) - same comment in Hard diff.
01:56:747 (5) - same comment 01:02:553 (6) -
02:14:650 (6) - add finish in slider start.

not bad. but i felt this diff a bit hard.

[P A N's Easy]

OD-1 is better for me.
00:01:747 (3) - add finish in slider end. It's sound better.
00:19:972 (2) - try this rhythm. i think that better than current for me. if you fix here, 00:20:617 (3) - add finish in slider repeat.
00:24:166 (1) - suggestion for loud sound exist here 00:26:263 -
00:34:166 (1) - spinner start is 00:34:005 - better.
00:40:617 (1) - sound weird of slider repeat. not found sound here. so try this rhythm.
01:28:198 (1) - bule line's repeat is not fit. like this?
01:32:230 (3) - same above comment. try this.
01:50:295 (1) - add finish instead of clap. more fit the song.
02:00:617 (5) - try this.
02:02:230 (1,2) - hmm, i think this part follow the vocal. like this rhythm?
02:07:714 - add note and the slider 02:08:037 (1) - move to 02:08:198 - . slider end is 02:08:682 - more good rhythm imo.

Good luck

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T04:37:28+00:00

Guy wrote:
SPOILER
Hi, From my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Clear.

[Insane]
00:20:940 (7,8) - hmm, i think not fit the song and vocal here. like this?
yes..but i don't think it's matter when we play it
00:26:263 (1) - suggestion. 1/1 slider is really fit here imo.
fixed like this

01:41:263 (1) - finish fixed

nice diff.
thanks

[Hard]
HP+1 ok
00:18:521 (1) - you forgot finish? maybe :p
00:23:682 (2) - ^ fixed
00:25:134 (1) - i think that fit 1/2. bule line rhythm is not fit imo.
changed like this
00:42:553 (1) - add finish. fixed
00:55:940 (6,7,1) - hmm, i don't like that downbeat rhythm. like this?
fixed!
01:41:263 (1) - finish fixed!
01:49:005 (1) - finish? Insane diff have finish here.fixed!
02:17:230 (1) - ^ fixed!

[Normal]
i recommend AR+1.
01:02:553 (6) - remove finish? not found finish here in Hard diff and Insane diff. fixed
01:41:263 (1) - really fit the finish here.fixed
01:49:005 (1) - same comment in Hard diff.Great
01:56:747 (5) - same comment 01:02:553 (6) -fixed
02:14:650 (6) - add finish in slider start.fixed

not bad. but i felt this diff a bit hard.

Good luck

Thanks! most fixed ><

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T05:08:49+00:00

Updated~!

-> Hard diff. remapped some part and add some beats.

LegendK_old

LegendK_old 2013-09-17T08:48:29+00:00

아이디 잠깐 빌린다.

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:Insane
Source:Dance & Scream
Tags:jpop P_A_N electronicore
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340,176,123037,6,0,P|360:140|348:60,1,95
256,108,123359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,203,123521,2,0,P|273:238|348:267,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,242,123843,5,0,0:0:0:0:
330,335,124005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,337,124166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
126,242,124327,2,0,P|92:218|17:220,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,306,124650,5,0,0:0:0:0:
32,124,124811,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,153,124972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,153,125053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,153,125134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
45,17,125295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
31,124,125456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,53,125617,6,0,P|257:53|321:80,1,95
461,108,125940,2,0,P|407:122|353:164,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,167,126263,2,0,P|272:194|314:249,1,95
350,326,126585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,342,126666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,350,126747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,347,126827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,333,126908,6,0,B|153:314|136:260|136:260|48:242,1,190,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,103,127392,2,0,L|134:128,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,140,127714,5,0,0:0:0:0:
170,49,127876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,215,128037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,201,128198,2,0,P|293:163|281:95,1,95
202,140,128521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,182,128682,2,0,L|466:208,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,268,129005,5,0,0:0:0:0:
297,115,129166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,89,129327,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,140,129488,2,0,P|143:144|96:118,1,95
0,82,129811,5,2,0:0:0:0:
15,116,129892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
31,150,129972,1,10,0:0:0:0:
54,291,130134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
77,262,130215,1,2,0:0:0:0:
101,233,130295,1,10,0:0:0:0:
143,96,130456,1,2,0:0:0:0:
173,119,130537,1,2,0:0:0:0:
203,140,130617,1,10,0:0:0:0:
287,191,130779,5,2,0:0:0:0:
377,264,130940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,229,131021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,191,131101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,153,131182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,120,131263,2,0,L|281:49,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,37,131585,5,0,0:0:0:0:
105,136,131747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,123,131908,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,42,132069,6,0,P|41:61|20:90,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,199,132392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,199,132472,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,199,132553,2,0,P|66:227|112:231,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,187,132876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,323,133037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,288,133198,2,0,L|297:249,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,195,133521,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,308,133682,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,287,133843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,138,134005,2,0,P|410:104|365:93,1,95
197,185,134327,2,0,P|239:175|278:129,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,90,134650,5,0,0:0:0:0:
286,242,134811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,234,134972,2,0,P|101:189|112:144,1,95,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,185,135295,5,0,0:0:0:0:
197,185,135376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,185,135456,2,0,L|310:216,1,95
410,286,135779,2,0,L|318:311,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,345,136101,5,0,0:0:0:0:
74,301,136263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,270,136424,5,8,0:0:0:0:
44,164,136586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,177,136747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
71,28,136909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,43,137069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,83,137230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,83,137311,1,0,0:0:0:0:
145,83,137392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,134,137553,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,93,137714,2,0,P|360:82|417:105,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,223,138037,2,0,P|399:190|354:177,1,95
349,267,138359,2,0,P|384:305|392:366,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,346,138682,6,0,P|130:300|163:267,1,95
256,239,139005,2,0,L|256:334,1,95
183,163,139327,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,162,139488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,36,139650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139811,12,4,142392,0:0:0:0:

왠만한건 거의 다 수정했어.
야 이거 랭킹 왜케 높냐;;

Losertic

461 posts

Joined May 2012

Losertic 2013-09-17T10:25:02+00:00

Hello!

From Your Request.

Modding

General

키아이 타임 시작하는곳 01:43:843 에서 01:41:263 으로??

P A N's Easy

00:01:747 (3) - move slider tail point (412,256)
00:22:230 (4) - move slider tail point (16,296)
00:22:230 (1) - NC, 00:24:166 (1) - Remove NC?
00:26:747 (1) - NC?
00:43:198 (2) - move tail point (332,184) , and if you fixed this mod, check 00:44:327 (1) - distance.
01:02:876 (3) - NC?
01:35:940 (1) - move (120,172)? because perpect blanket
01:59:327 (1) - NC?

Normal

00:04:811 (6,7) - 이부분 7번 노트 지우고 6번 슬라이더를 한번 리버스 하는건 어떠세요.
00:12:230 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거. 이건 음.. 앞에껀 음이 계속 이어지고 뉴콤보 중간 추가가 없는데 여긴 추가 되서... 근데 00:57:392 이부분이랑 뉴콤보 패턴이 같네요. 어... 이건 애매함ㅠㅠ
02:01:747 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분 (340,76) 이동?
02:03:037 (1) - 위에꺼 수정한다면 새로 대칭.

Hard

00:02:069 (2) - (336,292)로 이동? 00:01:424 (3) - 이거 때문에...

Insane

01:29:005 (1,2,3) - 이부분 지우고 대신 슬라이더 01:29:005 ~ 01:29:327 그리고 한번 리버스?? 했다면 뉴콤보 제거
02:11:585 (1,2) - 슬라이더로 대체?

Good Quality!

굿 퀄리티!

S.T.A.R

iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-09-17T10:44:03+00:00

hi~ sana , PAN o/ Thanks for mod request!!

P A N's Easy

SPOILER

00:51:908 - whistle → clap ?
01:32:230 (3) - The proposal of a rhythm

01:33:359 - add finish ?
01:35:456 - whistle → clap ?
02:00:617 (5) - The proposal of a rhythm

Normal

SPOILER

00:25:456 - add whistle ?
00:25:940 - ^
00:31:101 - ^
00:32:392 (3) - ^
00:32:714 - ^
00:35:456 - add clap ?
00:35:779 - clap → whistle ?
00:36:263 - ^
00:36:585 - add finish ?
00:36:908 (4) - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:42:230 (7) - Delete clap ?
00:44:650 - add whistle ?
00:45:617 - ^
00:46:263 - ^
01:16:585 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:553 - ^
01:17:714 - add clap ?
01:20:617 - Delete clap ?
01:20:940 - add clap ?
01:21:101 - Delete clap ?
01:28:521 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:31:263 - add clap ?
01:31:908 - ^
01:33:682 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:36:424 - add clap ?
01:38:037 (6) - ^
01:41:585 (2,3,4) - add whistle ?
02:15:134 (4) - add clap ?

Hard

SPOILER

00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:59:650 (5) - add clap ?
01:02:230 - ^
01:28:521 - add whistle ?
01:28:682 (2) - clap → whistle ?
01:33:682 - add whistle ?
01:33:843 (7) - ^

Insane

SPOILER

00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 - clap → whistle ?
00:42:069 (1) - add whistle ?
01:28:521 - ^
01:33:682 - ^
01:33:843 - clap → whistle ?
02:00:295 - add clap ?
02:19:005 - ^
Nice Insane !! very very verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry fun!!

plz rank !! good luck

Last edited by iyasine 2013-09-17T10:49:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T10:44:27+00:00

Losertic wrote:
SPOILER
Hello!

From Your Request.

Modding
General
키아이 타임 시작하는곳 01:43:843 에서 01:41:263 으로??
P A N's Easy
00:01:747 (3) - move slider tail point (412,256)
00:22:230 (4) - move slider tail point (16,296)
00:22:230 (1) - NC, 00:24:166 (1) - Remove NC?
00:26:747 (1) - NC?
00:43:198 (2) - move tail point (332,184) , and if you fixed this mod, check 00:44:327 (1) - distance.
01:02:876 (3) - NC?
01:35:940 (1) - move (120,172)? because perpect blanket
01:59:327 (1) - NC?
Normal
00:04:811 (6,7) - 이부분 7번 노트 지우고 6번 슬라이더를 한번 리버스 하는건 어떠세요.
00:12:230 (1) - 뉴 콤보 제거. 이건 음.. 앞에껀 음이 계속 이어지고 뉴콤보 중간 추가가 없는데 여긴 추가 되서... 근데 00:57:392 이부분이랑 뉴콤보 패턴이 같네요. 어... 이건 애매함ㅠㅠ
02:01:747 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리부분 (340,76) 이동?
02:03:037 (1) - 위에꺼 수정한다면 새로 대칭.
Hard
00:02:069 (2) - (336,292)로 이동? 00:01:424 (3) - 이거 때문에...
Insane
01:29:005 (1,2,3) - 이부분 지우고 대신 슬라이더 01:29:005 ~ 01:29:327 그리고 한번 리버스?? 했다면 뉴콤보 제거
02:11:585 (1,2) - 슬라이더로 대체?

Good Quality!
굿 퀄리티!

S.T.A.R
잘먹겠습니다 :3

모딩 감사합니다~

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-17T10:58:33+00:00

iyasine wrote:
SPOILER
hi~ sana , PAN o/ Thanks for mod request!!

P A N's Easy
[spoilerbox]00:51:908 - whistle → clap ?
01:32:230 (3) - The proposal of a rhythm

01:33:359 - add finish ?
01:35:456 - whistle → clap ?
02:00:617 (5) - The proposal of a rhythm

Normal
SPOILER
00:25:456 - add whistle ?
00:25:940 - ^
00:31:101 - ^
00:32:392 (3) - ^
00:32:714 - ^
00:35:456 - add clap ?
00:35:779 - clap → whistle ?
00:36:263 - ^
00:36:585 - add finish ?
00:36:908 (4) - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:42:230 (7) - Delete clap ?
00:44:650 - add whistle ?
00:45:617 - ^
00:46:263 - ^
01:16:585 (1,2,3) - ^
01:17:553 - ^
01:17:714 - add clap ?
01:20:617 - Delete clap ?
01:20:940 - add clap ?
01:21:101 - Delete clap ?
01:28:521 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:31:263 - add clap ?
01:31:908 - ^
01:33:682 (1,2) - add whistle ?
01:36:424 - add clap ?
01:38:037 (6) - ^
01:41:585 (2,3,4) - add whistle ?
02:15:134 (4) - add clap ?

Hard
SPOILER
00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 (5) - clap → whistle ?
00:59:650 (5) - add clap ?
01:02:230 - ^
01:28:521 - add whistle ?
01:28:682 (2) - clap → whistle ?
01:33:682 - add whistle ?
01:33:843 (7) - ^

Insane
SPOILER
00:36:908 - add whistle ?
00:37:069 - clap → whistle ?
00:42:069 (1) - add whistle ?
01:28:521 - ^
01:33:682 - ^
01:33:843 - clap → whistle ?
02:00:295 - add clap ?
02:19:005 - ^
Nice Insane !! very very verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry fun!!

plz rank !! good luck [/spoilerbox]

lol all fixed! thank you iya <3

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-09-17T11:31:41+00:00

M4M
[General]
delete .osb file since there is no SB.
Inconsistent "Wide Screen Support"
[Easy]
Placement
Rhythm
00:44:327(1,2,3,4) for newbie, it looks difficult. try this rhythm, it looks simply.

SPOILER

00:57:069 blank looks weird since in this part I can hear vocal & sound clearly. so add a note?

Hit Sonud
00:47:069(1) add finish at head instead of whistle
01:32:230(3) add finish at end
[Normal]
Placement
00:58:307(3) nazi,1 grid down.
01:43:843(4,1) swap NC since KIAI starts.
Rhythm
01:16:585(1,2,3) I suppose it is hard to expect for newbie since this is followed red line, so maybe slider looks fine.

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:36:424(3) add finish at end
01:23:198(1) add finish at head
[Hard]
Rhythm
00:04:650(2) to make a jump, I suppose CTRL+G looks fine.
00:54:488(5)^
Hit Sonud
01:28:198(1) add finish at head instead clap
02:04:327(7) add finish at head
02:06:908(6)^
[Insane]
Placement
00:14:488(3,4) I'm expecting a jump here, so here is example.

SPOILER

00:21:263(8,1) swap NC to follow the downbeat.
01:48:682(4) try to CTRL+G, it would be more fine than current.
Rhythm
00:00:618(1) to be honestly, I don't follow this kick slider at 1st note. this flow looks not good, so replace 3 notes same as 00:03:198 to be consistence.
00:05:617(7) if you keep this note, consider to add a note at 00:03:037.
01:07:634 consider to add a note here since it sounds clearly.
Hit Sonud
01:23:198(3) add finish at head.
01:35:940(1)^
02:14:650(1) add finish

overall fine I suppose. good luck with star.

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-09-17T13:07:24+00:00

O M G so much mod

you know I lazy to reply but fix so much of you all :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Take Me Out!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47022
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 109005
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:Dance & Scream
Tags:jpop P_A_N electronicore
BeatmapID:298178
BeatmapSetID:115358

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,68117,76597
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
618,322.58064516129,4,1,1,50,1,0
13843,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
14166,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
15940,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
45779,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
47069,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
57311,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
57392,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
66585,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
67069,-100,4,1,1,30,0,1
67714,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
78037,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
78117,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
88198,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,40,0,0
90779,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
93359,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,50,0,0
95940,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
103843,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
111424,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
111585,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
121747,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,68,162
Combo2 : 23,139,255
Combo3 : 176,96,96

[HitObjects]
192,108,618,2,0,P|256:92|324:108,1,135,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,192,1424,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,272,1747,2,0,P|368:280|408:268,2,90,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,200,2714,2,0,P|236:248|248:328,1,135,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,316,3682,6,0,L|92:216,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,4327,2,0,L|64:52,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,4972,2,0,B|180:116|248:100|248:100|304:72|364:108,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,184,6263,6,0,P|480:144|480:88,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,264,7230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,312,7553,2,0,B|280:284|232:316|232:316|184:288|120:328,1,225,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,8843,6,0,L|92:100,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,112,9488,2,0,L|172:212,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,280,10134,2,0,P|304:340|420:300,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,236,11263,6,0,P|480:192|480:144,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,11908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,32,12230,2,0,B|332:64|288:48|288:48|252:68|252:68|192:60,2,180,4|2|4,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,13843,6,0,L|464:160,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,14488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,292,14811,2,0,B|296:308|296:308|236:292|236:292|180:304,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,192,15940,5,4,0:0:0:0:
200,92,16424,2,0,B|256:56|316:88|316:88|380:52,2,180,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,18037,2,0,B|320:192|364:164|364:164|400:140,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,28,19005,6,0,B|436:72|456:100|456:100|488:144|460:208,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,280,19972,2,0,P|388:252|372:196,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,124,20617,2,0,P|280:96|220:120,2,135,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,21908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,22230,2,0,P|216:328|104:320,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,252,23198,2,0,L|120:116,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,60,24166,6,0,B|288:100|344:76|344:76|396:44|396:44|432:76|504:60,2,270,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,192,26747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,27392,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,192,28037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,132,28359,2,0,P|408:104|336:128,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,29327,6,0,P|176:264|84:228,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,56,30617,2,0,P|176:16|280:64,1,225,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,104,31908,6,0,P|440:148|440:192,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,168,32553,2,0,P|304:176|256:148,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,33198,2,0,P|336:48|380:24,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,34005,12,4,36585,0:0:0:0:
172,280,37392,2,0,P|256:308|348:268,2,180,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,316,39166,2,0,L|56:168,1,135,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,108,39972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,96,40295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,124,40617,2,0,B|320:124|320:124|364:96|416:116,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,196,41424,2,0,L|388:288,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,42230,6,0,L|268:352,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,196,43198,2,0,P|240:152|332:180,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,168,44327,6,0,L|480:32,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,40,45134,2,0,P|328:16|260:40,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,104,45940,2,0,L|320:240,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,47069,6,0,L|152:336,2,90,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,240,48037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,160,48359,2,0,L|108:24,2,135,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,49650,6,0,P|184:244|228:236,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,212,50295,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,164,50617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,232,50940,2,0,L|468:380,2,135,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,52230,6,0,L|300:148,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,52876,2,0,L|112:124,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,88,53521,6,0,P|44:152|100:204,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,54811,2,0,L|273:14,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,92,56101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,264,56747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,316,57392,6,0,L|372:308,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,58037,2,0,P|464:224|464:172,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,92,58682,6,0,P|436:36|360:4,2,135,10|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,96,59972,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,180,60295,2,0,L|328:276,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,60940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,61263,6,0,L|168:132,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,92,62069,2,0,P|148:52|220:68,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,62876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,112,63198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,184,63521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,152,63843,6,0,P|208:224|260:268,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,124,65134,2,0,P|104:192|124:264,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66263,12,4,67714,0:0:0:0:
96,72,78037,5,4,0:0:0:0:
136,196,78521,2,0,P|184:180|212:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,188,79166,2,0,P|284:236|304:288,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,79811,2,0,P|180:296|124:292,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,168,80617,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,112,81101,6,0,P|200:56|220:24,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,81747,2,0,P|332:104|356:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,172,82392,2,0,P|232:200|188:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,268,83359,6,0,L|16:368,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,84327,2,0,L|120:368,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,236,85295,2,0,L|224:372,2,135,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,86585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
244,68,86908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,40,87230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,48,87553,2,0,L|440:144,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,188,88198,6,0,P|456:220|360:168,1,168.750006437302,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,88,89650,2,0,P|228:144|240:224,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,90779,6,0,P|352:352|436:340,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,267,91585,2,0,L|409:175,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,188,92230,2,0,P|464:112|408:96,1,135,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,128,93037,2,0,P|308:172|260:192,1,90,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,44,94166,6,0,P|128:16|56:40,2,135.000005149842,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,95940,6,0,L|100:312,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,324,96747,2,0,P|252:280|316:292,1,135
372,224,97553,2,0,P|400:292|376:352,2,135,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,99005,6,0,P|356:92|412:104,2,90,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,99972,2,0,B|188:192|154:149|154:149|112:212,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,101263,6,0,L|292:376,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,344,101908,2,0,L|364:256,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,102553,2,0,B|376:120|376:120|408:72|376:28|376:28|312:12|312:12|256:44|212:16|212:16|172:40,1,360,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,88,104166,6,0,P|96:132|104:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,268,104811,2,0,P|132:308|172:332,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,105456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,330,105779,2,0,P|381:306|404:268,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,176,106424,6,0,P|416:132|408:88,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,107069,2,0,L|232:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,144,107714,6,0,P|124:88|144:8,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,109005,2,0,P|240:268|220:348,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,280,110295,6,0,P|120:196|304:200,1,360,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,280,111908,6,0,P|376:296|436:280,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,228,112553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,144,112876,2,0,P|484:88|460:16,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,76,114166,2,0,P|316:48|224:80,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,115134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,208,115456,6,0,L|116:348,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,116747,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,100,117069,2,0,P|288:92|332:100,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,180,118037,6,0,P|288:280|360:320,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,119005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,272,119327,2,0,P|440:172|368:132,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,120295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,120617,2,0,P|168:156|124:168,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,76,121263,2,0,P|176:36|244:40,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,72,122230,6,0,B|352:120|380:156|380:156|432:136|476:168,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,123198,2,0,P|416:292|384:328,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,123843,2,0,P|264:228|192:260,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,125134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,192,125617,6,0,L|444:100,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,108,126263,2,0,L|336:20,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,126908,2,0,P|184:56|144:104,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,252,128037,6,0,B|84:300|140:284|140:284|168:312|168:312|216:308,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,288,129005,2,0,P|352:272|424:296,1,135,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,129972,6,0,P|448:108|440:60,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,96,130617,2,0,P|308:96|268:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,131263,2,0,P|360:228|400:244,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,132069,6,0,P|228:264|212:196,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,132876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,44,133198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,28,133521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,104,133843,6,0,B|16:188|96:212|96:212|132:296,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,135134,2,0,L|356:320,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,135779,2,0,L|472:264,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,136747,2,0,P|320:92|360:24,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,64,137714,6,0,B|152:88|152:88|104:80|104:80|32:100,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,139327,2,0,L|320:120,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139811,12,4,142392,0:0:0:0:

Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2013-09-17T19:05:06+00:00

Hi~ Sana ^^
[P A N's easy]
Nice~

[Normal]
Nice~

[Hard]
00:19:972 (1,2,3) - Try this?

SPOILER

Some stack issue:
00:20:456 (4) - X=321 Y=180
00:33:843 (2) - X=265 Y=287
01:07:069 (2) - X=269 Y=183
01:29:005 (3) - X=414 Y=112
01:34:166 (1) - X=265 Y=113
01:51:585 (1) - X=442 Y=76
01:55:940 (4) - X=56 Y=343
01:46:747 (1,2,3) - Try this:

SPOILER

02:11:908 (6) - Try clap?
02:13:843 (3) - Stack with 02:14:005 (4) - is better on the flow imo

[Insane]
00:35:617 (2,3) - May be exchange them to make it easier?
Some stack issue:
00:52:876 (2) - X=211 Y=179
01:50:134 (6) - X=340 Y=182
02:05:456 (7) - X=32 Y=124

Not much to say, really nice map ^^
GL!

haha5957

1,433 posts

Joined July 2010

haha5957 2013-09-18T02:51:34+00:00

이미 맵이 제가 모딩하기엔 너무 만들어진 것 같아요.. ㅋㅋ
세세하게 살펴보면 한두개정도야 찝을수 있을지는 모르겠지만 군대를 코앞에 둔 게 정신적으로도 생각보다 많이 바쁘네요..

별 도움이 못되드려서 죄송합니다~ 잘 만들어진 맵엔 조용히 별을 떨구고 사라집니다!

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-18T05:03:02+00:00

Thanks for modding guys~xD

UPDATED!

Sylith

722 posts

Joined September 2012

Sylith 2013-09-18T15:41:57+00:00

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 대박

별을 쏘고 싶어도 쿠도스가 없는게 아쉽네요

GOOD LUCK!

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2013-09-18T18:16:43+00:00

Hi~
M4M request from in-game

Red: Unrankable / You should fix absolutely.
Orange: Strong Suggestion / I think you should fix it.
Black: Suggestion
Blue: message

[General]

●Source: Remove "Dance & Scream"
This is the album name. Therefore, It is not possible to add to the source. Anime and game name...etc can be added to the source.
You can add Tags to instead of the source :3 please add!

●Tags: Add "album"
Because it is a song of the album. Recommend that you add.

[P A N's Easy]

●01:35:940 (1) - spacing 1.09x. fix to 1.00x~

[Normal]

●00:13:521 (1,3,5) - Please have the same y-axis. Probably, move to y:112? Beautiful placement is the possible~
●00:13:843 (2,4) - ^ Probably, move to y:64? ^
●00:57:714 (2,3) - ^ Probably, move to y:132? ^
●01:07:069 (1,3) - ^ Probably, move to y:220? ^
...etc

●A little deviation occurs > Coordinate. It is really very small... recommend that you fix. please check~

[Hard]

●00:22:392 (5) - Add new combo. keep the consistency of the new combo.

[Insane]

●OD+1?

OD8 has become a mainstream.
●00:26:263 (1) - Add finish (start). will very fit the music~
●00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - good. I like this xD
●00:53:682 (2,3) - Ctrl+G. 00:54:005 (4) - move to x:388 y:256. I prefer this :3

image

●01:33:359 (1) - spacing 1.22x ⇒ 0.80x. will adjust the spacing with the previous object.

good luck =w=

Fuuko

486 posts

Joined June 2009

Fuuko 2013-09-18T18:48:54+00:00

General:

~~"Dance & Scream" should be in the tags, not in the source, since it's the album's name.~~
02:01:747 - At this part, it'd be better if you add another kiai fountain and make it go till the end of the song. It's a very strong part (in beats and vocals).

P A N's Easy

The audio lead-in in this diff is 1000, while in the other diffs it's 1500. Open the .osu and edit it to 1500 to match other diffs.

00:21:908 (4) - Push this one grid right and one down to make it centered with (3);
00:56:101 (3) - One grid up and one left to stack it with the previous (1);

Nothing much to say here, a very neat diff and good-looking. <3

Normal

00:02:876 (5) - Remove the finish and add a clap.
00:05:456 (7) - ^
00:07:876 (6) - Remove the finish on the end.
00:09:972 (4) - Add a clap.
00:10:295 (5) - Add a clap on the ending.
00:15:940 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:46:263 (5) - Remove the finish on the end.
01:02:553 (6) - Add a finish.
01:33:682 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:166 (3) - Add new combo.

It has a very nice flow and plays very well. Didn't have much to say about the notes or sugestions, so I focused on the hitsounds. Good job.

Hard

If you changed the hitsounds on the previous diff, do it on this one too.

00:48:359 (5) - New combo.

Nothing much to point out. A very challenging and fun diff. I enjoyed it a lot!

Insane

If you changed the hitsounds on the previous diffs, do it on this one too.

00:40:617 (1) - Move this a few grids right and down so it stacks with 00:39:166 (1);
00:41:101 (3) - If ^, then move this accordingly to get centered with that slider.
00:43:843 (3,4,5) - This jump is really high and hard to see it coming. Either new combo the (3), or switch (4) and (5) around.
00:49:811 (10) - Better add a new combo here and remove the new combo on the next note so this jump is easier to see.
00:51:747 (6) - Move this one grid and one right so the (4) will be centered;
01:34:166 (1,2,3) - It would play better if you put them close to each other like how you did at 01:29:005 -;
02:19:005 (2) - This note would look better if you made it symmetrical to the previous (6);
02:19:327 (3,4,5) - If ^, move these accordingly.

I think it's a bit overmapped, but the jumps and streams are very challenging and fun, plus most of them play nice.

Very good mapset. Hope you get it ranked soon. <3

-Edit-

Dammit, Gamu ninja'd me on the source.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-09-19T07:31:52+00:00

HI~ [ Sana ] M4M from my queue

General:

you should cut the last part of the mp3 you are not using it

Insane:

00:05:134 (2,3,4,5) - I dont like how the whistles sound in the stream why you just use normal samples on they sound alot better
00:05:618 the sound here is realy low and dont play good why you dont try to convert it in a 1/2 slider with previous like this rhythm (also if you follow this you will improve the flow with next slider):
SPOILER
00:08:037 this almost touch the hp bar and is bad for game play IMO maybe you can consider to lower it 2 or 3 grids for better gameplay
00:13:198 remove whistle or make it soft audition plz
00:13:198 (10,1) - the flow here is kinda messy why you dont better try to 00:13:521 (1) - ctrl G and 00:13:843 ctrl g you will improve alot the cursor movement making a nice jumpy pattern
SPOILER
00:14:811 (2) - try to stack with 00:13:843 perfect actually look pretty bad
00:13:117 I cant hear nothing here better remove it? dont sound bad but is better follow the music properly
00:18:198 (5,1) - kinda nazi but this blanket is not perfect you can improve it alot imo
00:18:279 why you ignore the music here D: this should be mapped since you map almos all the triplets I dont see the reason why you dont this one :c
00:20:214 same as above
00:26:101 (11,1) - fix the distance here atleast to 1.0 is really confuse orz
00:34:811 add new combo plz this take me offguard when I was testing this is really confuse take in consideration you use a spaced stream orz
00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - you can consider to use less spacng here is almost imposible to read in first try 2.0 2.20 gonna be nice
00:48:682 (4,6) - yeah nazi but stack this perfect
01:05:456 (3,5) - Same here
01:07:634 (1) - try to move the last point of the slider a little to the right to make it more fun:
SPOILER
01:25:618 (7,8,9) - stack this perfec too
01:29:972 (4,5,6,7,8) - make this a little curved that straight form break the cool flow or your map
02:00:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you reduce the spacing here to 0.60? for better playability
02:19:811 add a circle here then start the spinner in 02:19:892 doing this you follow alot better the song :3

Hard:

00:04:327 (1,3) - huehue stack they perfect
00:24:811 (5,3) - same as above
00:25:779 this should finish 1/4 back I guess i really dont like this extended sliders on hard diffs
00:35:940 this jump repeats are kinda difficulty for a hard diff just move this 00:35:940 to x:296 y:136 to avoid this and make it better
00:48:843 (6,7) - stack this perfect
00:55:940 (6) - I dont like how this 00:55:940 (6) - touch this 00:56:747 (2) - try to move a little the (6) maybe:
SPOILER
01:07:714 this should be new combo for consistency with your insane if not remove the one on insane
01:32:230 move this 2 grids to the left to avoid the overlap with 01:33:037
02:19:811 same as insane

Normal:

OD and HP should be 4 for better diff spread
00:00:618 (1,2) - unstack this newbies cant play stack also is just the start of the map lets they warm up xD
00:10:940 (1,5) - stack they perfect yup nazi
00:25:617 (5,6) - fic the distance is little but is better have all perfect imo
00:42:069 (6,7) - convert they two in a slider play and sound alot better
00:46:263 (5,1) - I cant agree with you this anti jumps are really hard to do for a newbie better keep the distance there

P A N Easy:

00:10:134 this should start 1/2 back in the downbeat imo sound alot better
00:53:521 (1,3) - stack they perfect actually look bad
01:35:940 (1) - fix the distance with previous
01:39:005 (1) - same as above
01:41:263 ^

Fun mapset GL!

TheVileOne

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8,431 posts

Joined March 2010

TheVileOne 2013-09-19T21:37:38+00:00

Mod

General

Preview time should be here 00:47:069 -
Easy has a different audio-leadin. Make 1500 like the others.

Easy
Solid difficulty. I liked it.

00:57:392 (1,2,1) - Make spacing equal here. It bothers me.
01:18:521 (2) - New combo for consistency.
01:31:585 (2,3) - Blanket is uneven
01:39:972 (2) - Not sure about this shape. Anyways maybe move the second point 1 grid 4 to the right? I might try to smooth out the curve too.
01:51:908 (1) - Move to x 340 y 280. It will fix the spacing and the angle. Adjust spacing of part after.

Normal
Nice flow.

00:30:295 (3,4,1) - Kind of a meh transition. It would look better if 4 blanketted properly with 3. you would need to adjust the form of the next part to fix the spacing though.
00:38:037 (2,3) - Uneven blanket.
01:17:553 (2) - I think this needs to be moved 2 grid 4 units to the left to be properly aligned with the next slider. Maintaining proper alignment here is probably more important than keeping that slider centered IMO.
01:41:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Not very interesting. I would go for a more natural arc for the notes and then have opposite curves for 01:42:553 (1,2) - like you have done in other parts of the map. 00:58:682 (1,2) - <- like this?

Hard

00:27:876 - It feels weird without something here.
01:17:553 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - I would have done something that had a continuous flow. I guess this is fine, albeit slightly inaccurate to the actual beat.
01:45:617 (4,5,6) - Not that great to look at, flow is fine. It would be better if you could get it so that the slider is pointer more towards the note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/992583
02:11:263 (3) - Looks 1 grid 4 unit too far to the right. (Maybe less than a unit)

Insane

okay I need to be in a better mood to mod this.

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-09-21T00:51:10+00:00

M4M

[P A N's Easy]
01:35:940 (1) - Remove NC?
01:55:456 (1) - ^ and add it to 01:56:747 (2) - ?

[Normal]
00:52:230 (6) - NC?
01:06:262 (3) - Remove the repeat?

That's all I've got to say. Sorry if it isn't enough and/or useful.

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-21T05:44:41+00:00

Thank you guys for modding!

Updated where is PAN :p

Crier

Crier 2013-09-21T08:03:18+00:00

test play req

Insane

Hard

NoHitter

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2013-09-22T15:37:55+00:00

[P A N's Easy]
- Audio lead in here is 1000ms when other diffs are 1500ms.
- 00:01:747 (3) - [nazi] Doesn't blanket 00:01:424 (2) perfectly.
- 00:04:972 (3) - Just a personal preference, but the slider doesn't look that good...
- 00:15:940 (1) - I'm a bit concerned about the readability of this note given that it's on an offbeat (red tick) and this difficulty is an Easy. I would omit it entirely.
- 00:21:908 (4) - New combo here for consistency with your combos.
- 00:26:747 (2) - Same as above.
- 00:42:230 (1) - I would just start the combo at 00:42:553 where the vocal is. Starting it makes it a bit confusing.
- 00:53:521 (1) - Remove new combo here for consistency with your combo patterns.
- 00:54:811 (2) - New combo here. ^
- 00:58:682 (3) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 00:59:972 (1) - New combo here. ^
- 01:01:263 (4) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:02:876 (6) - New combo here. ^
- 01:03:843 (1) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:21:101 (1) - Remove new combo here. ^
- 01:44:166 (1,2) - The flow here is not that good. Move (1)'s end a bit so that it leads into (2). Like this
- 01:45:779 (4,1) - Do the same for these two. ^
- 01:47:714 (1) - Remove new combo here. Same reason as the others.
- 01:54:166 (4) - New combo. ^
- 01:55:456 (1) - Remove new combo.
- 01:56:747 (1) - New combo.
- 01:58:037 (3) - Remove new combo.
- 01:59:327 (5) - New combo.
- 02:07:714 () - I was expecting a note here given how strong the rhythm is here.

[Normal]
- 00:17:392 (4,5) - Make (4) lead into (5) for better flow. Like this
- 00:25:134 (4,5,6) - Similar to above. Like this If possible, do this to all similar types of sliders.
- 01:31:263 (1) - New combo here is unneeded.

[Hard]
- Good diff.
- 01:07:714 (1) - New combo here is unneeded.

[Insane]
- Good diff too.
- 00:11:908 (1,2) - I was expecting the spacing to increase, not decrease.

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-09-22T16:13:25+00:00

thanks all, fix all :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Take Me Out!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47022
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:
Tags:Dance & Scream jpop P_A_N electronicore
BeatmapID:298178
BeatmapSetID:115358

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

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340,280,111908,6,0,P|380:296|440:280,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,228,112553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,144,112876,2,0,P|484:88|460:16,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,76,114166,6,0,P|316:48|224:80,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,115134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,208,115456,2,0,L|116:348,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,116747,5,4,0:0:0:0:
240,100,117069,2,0,P|288:92|332:100,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,180,118037,2,0,P|288:280|360:320,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,119005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,272,119327,6,0,P|440:172|368:132,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,120295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,124,120617,2,0,P|168:156|124:168,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,76,121263,2,0,P|176:36|244:40,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,72,122230,6,0,B|352:120|380:156|380:156|432:136|476:168,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,123198,2,0,P|416:292|384:328,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,123843,2,0,P|264:228|192:260,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,125134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,192,125617,6,0,L|444:100,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,108,126263,2,0,L|336:20,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,126908,2,0,P|184:56|144:104,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,192,127714,1,2,0:0:0:0:
44,248,128037,6,0,B|88:296|144:280|144:280|172:308|172:308|220:304,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,288,129005,2,0,P|356:272|428:296,1,135,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,129972,6,0,P|448:108|440:60,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,96,130617,2,0,P|308:96|268:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,131263,2,0,P|360:228|400:244,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,132069,6,0,P|228:264|212:196,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,132876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,44,133198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,28,133521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,104,133843,6,0,B|16:188|96:212|96:212|132:296,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,135134,2,0,L|356:320,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,135779,2,0,L|472:264,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,136747,2,0,P|320:92|360:24,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,64,137714,6,0,B|152:88|152:88|104:80|104:80|32:100,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,139327,2,0,L|320:120,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139811,12,4,142392,0:0:0:0:

Hanabi

Topic Starter

Hanabi 2013-09-22T16:19:12+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:17:392 (4,5) - Make (4) lead into (5) for better flow. Like this Fixed
- 00:25:134 (4,5,6) - Similar to above. Like this If possible, do this to all similar types of sliders. Fixed all of them
- 01:31:263 (1) - New combo here is unneeded. Fixed

[Hard]
- Good diff.
- 01:07:714 (1) - New combo here is unneeded. Fixed

[Insane]
- Good diff too.
- 00:11:908 (1,2) - I was expecting the spacing to increase, not decrease. Fixed