1. Hard (5 stars, 417 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 670 notes)
3. Normal (4.47 stars, 259 notes)
4. P A N's Easy (3.2 stars, 154 notes)

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[P A N's Easy]

Nothing

[Normal]

00:48:359 (5) - NC 추가하는게 어떨까요?
00:58:682 (5) - ^
01:27:230 (5) - ^

01:38:521 (1) - 스핀이 01:40:617 - 여기까지 있어서 다음에 나올 노트랑 겹쳐지네요. 01:38:521 (1) - 여기까지 당기는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 01:40:617 - 여기다가는 노트를 하나 추가하는게 좋겠네요. 혹은 당겨둔 스핀이 조금 이상하다 싶으면 그냥 스핀을 없애고, 긴 슬라이더로 대체하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.

01:52:876 (5) - 노말치곤 좀 긴 것 같으니 NC를 추가하시는게...
02:03:037 (1) - ^
02:10:295 (5) - ^

[Hard]
AR+1

[Insane]

01:47:714 (1) - NC 제거 후에 01:48:198 (4) - 여기다가 NC를 추가해주세요

02:00:940 (13) - 개인적으로는 휘는 것 보단 그냥 일직선으로 내려가는게 보기 좋을 것 같아요.

02:01:585 (3) - 이 노트를 제거하고 02:01:263 (1,2) - 이 두개의 점프를 더 벌려보는건 어떤가요?

02:16:263 (6) - 여기서부터 NC가 시작하는게 좋을 것 같아요. 그렇게 되면 02:16:747 (1) - 여기 NC는 제거 !


딱히 지적할 만한게 없네요 ㅋㅋㅋ
좋은 맵인 것 같습니다

• 00:19:972 - 서클을 추가하심이 어떨까요 ?
  00:30:617 (2) - 이 슬라이더 모양을 00:29:327 (1) - 과 같게하는건 어떠신가요 ?
  00:40:295 (4) - (개인적으로)3그리드 위로 올리는게 더 예뻐보여요 >w<
  02:07:714 - 서클 추가
  
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:12:230 (1) - 시작 부분을 00:10:940 (1) - 과 완전히 겹치게 하는건 어떠신가요 ?
    00:48:037 (4) - 지워도 괜찮을 것 같아요 !
    01:22:069 (4) - (400,148)좌표로 옮기는게 나을 듯 해요.
    
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:04:972 - 서클 추가나 00:04:650 (7) - 리버스를 하나 만드는 건 어떠신가요 ?
      01:06:585 (6,7) - 약간 혼란스럽네요
      01:18:521 (4) - 이 서클을 01:19:166 (2) - 와 겹치게 하는 건 어떠신가요 ?
      01:22:876 (4) - Ctrl + H 그리고 디스턴스 수정
      
      
      [Insane]
      
      • 00:45:617 (7) - NC를 추가하심이..

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Hi, Sana! In game req!
전 모딩을 매우 못하기 때문에 모든 것이 추천입니다 :]

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[P A N's Easy]

Nothing 아 역시 굇매퍼

[Normal]

00:48:359 (5) - NC 추가하는게 어떨까요? Fixed
00:58:682 (5) - ^ Fixed
01:27:230 (5) - ^ Fixed

01:38:521 (1) - 스핀이 01:40:617 - 여기까지 있어서 다음에 나올 노트랑 겹쳐지네요. 01:38:521 (1) - 여기까지 당기는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 그리고 01:40:617 - 여기다가는 노트를 하나 추가하는게 좋겠네요. 혹은 당겨둔 스핀이 조금 이상하다 싶으면 그냥 스핀을 없애고, 긴 슬라이더로 대체하는 것도 좋을 것 같습니다.
음 딱히 문제되지는 않을거 같네요~

01:52:876 (5) - 노말치곤 좀 긴 것 같으니 NC를 추가하시는게... Fixed
02:03:037 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:10:295 (5) - ^ Fixed


[Hard]
AR+1 한번더 지적오면 수정하겠습니다

[Insane]

01:47:714 (1) - NC 제거 후에 01:48:198 (4) - 여기다가 NC를 추가해주세요 Fixed


02:00:940 (13) - 개인적으로는 휘는 것 보단 그냥 일직선으로 내려가는게 보기 좋을 것 같아요. Fixed

02:01:585 (3) - 이 노트를 제거하고 02:01:263 (1,2) - 이 두개의 점프를 더 벌려보는건 어떤가요?

02:16:263 (6) - 여기서부터 NC가 시작하는게 좋을 것 같아요. 그렇게 되면 02:16:747 (1) - 여기 NC는 제거 ! 다른 방식으로 수정!


딱히 지적할 만한게 없네요 ㅋㅋㅋ
좋은 맵인 것 같습니다

Rice wrote:

hey~

for M4M

General

1. Add "Dance & Scream" to source. You can also add the genres "screamo, digital hardcore, electronicore, post hardcore, metalcore" to tags if you want.
2. Since you just mapped half of the song, use a cut mp3 so that the filesize is reduced. You can use this one.

P A N's Easy

1. 00:01:747 (3,1) - Move 1 grid to the left (Grid Size: Tiny)
2. 00:02:714 (1) - Remove NC
3. 00:03:682 (5) - NC
4. 00:26:747 (2) - ^
5. 00:48:359 (3) - This slider ends early, extend it by 1 snap like in 00:50:940 (1)
6. 00:56:101 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:57:392 (1) - NC
8. 01:18:037 (1) - Add a Finish
9. 01:20:617 (1) - ^
10. 01:31:585 (2,3) - Move 1 grid to the right (Grid Size: Tiny)
11. 01:44:166 (1,2,3,4) - the linear flow is kind of boring imo, change it if you want

Normal

1. 00:00:618 (1) - Add a Finish
2. 00:12:230 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern might be too hard for beginners, try changing it.
3. 00:34:005 (6) - NC
4. 00:35:456 (4) - Remove NC
5. 02:01:747 (1) - Move 1 grid to the right (Grid Size: Tiny)
6. 02:07:714 (1) - Move 2 grids to the left (Grid Size: Tiny)

Hard

1. 01:07:714 (1) - NC
2. 01:07:714 (1) - y u use silent hitsound? Add Clap
3. 02:14:650 (6,7) - CTRL + G and just switch the histounds

Insane

1. 01:07:714 (6) - Add Clap
2. 02:00:456 (7) - NC

Love the song so much~

good luck on this one ^^

[ Sana ] wrote:

Rice wrote:

hey~

for M4M

General

1. Add "Dance & Scream" to source. You can also add the genres "screamo, digital hardcore, electronicore, post hardcore, metalcore" to tags if you want.
2. Since you just mapped half of the song, use a cut mp3 so that the filesize is reduced. You can use this one.

P A N's Easy

1. 00:01:747 (3,1) - Move 1 grid to the left (Grid Size: Tiny)
2. 00:02:714 (1) - Remove NC
3. 00:03:682 (5) - NC
4. 00:26:747 (2) - ^
5. 00:48:359 (3) - This slider ends early, extend it by 1 snap like in 00:50:940 (1)
6. 00:56:101 (1) - Remove NC
7. 00:57:392 (1) - NC
8. 01:18:037 (1) - Add a Finish
9. 01:20:617 (1) - ^
10. 01:31:585 (2,3) - Move 1 grid to the right (Grid Size: Tiny)
11. 01:44:166 (1,2,3,4) - the linear flow is kind of boring imo, change it if you want

Normal

1. 00:00:618 (1) - Add a Finish
2. 00:12:230 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern might be too hard for beginners, try changing it.
3. 00:34:005 (6) - NC
4. 00:35:456 (4) - Remove NC
5. 02:01:747 (1) - Move 1 grid to the right (Grid Size: Tiny)
6. 02:07:714 (1) - Move 2 grids to the left (Grid Size: Tiny)

Hard

1. 01:07:714 (1) - NC
2. 01:07:714 (1) - y u use silent hitsound? Add Clap
3. 02:14:650 (6,7) - CTRL + G and just switch the histounds

Insane

1. 01:07:714 (6) - Add Clap
2. 02:00:456 (7) - NC

Love the song so much~

good luck on this one ^^

wow thanks a lot! <3

btw what map should i mod??

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ [ Sana ]

사나님 모든난이도 AI 모드 체크는 필수입니다! 체크하시는법 모르시면 알려드릴꺠요 'ㅂ'!!

[P A N's Easy]

Hi~ P A N

AI Mod Check

00:16:424 (1) - New combo off

00:48:359 (3) - Wrong Snap?

I recommend Shape

00:54:811 (2) -

x124 y136 More Good Shape

01:39:005 (1) - Wrong Snap?

More Good Shape

01:47:714 (1,2) - Go a little further down x156 y160

Good Map!!

[Normal]

00:07:876 (6) - HP 바 가리는지 확인해주시고 만약 가린다면 변경해주시는걸 추천합니다 'ㅅ'.. 전 안가리는뎅...

00:29:972 (2,3) - 위와 같은 내용이에요 'ㅂ' HP 바 가리는지 확인해주세요! 이건 가리네요 수정~

00:46:263 (5,6,1) - ^ 위와같음 이것도..

02:05:134 (1) - 꼬리부분이 점수판에 가리지않을까요? 안가림!

02:09:488 (4) - 완전히 겹쳐주시는게 좋을것같아요! 수정


[Hard]

01:07:714 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제 해주시는건 어때요? 수정

끝!! xD

전 인세인 모딩은 하지않습니다 .. 현재로서는...어서 우리같이 매핑 모딩을 접고 귀혼이나 하죠 'ㅂ'!! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ제 프사 보셈ㅋㅋ

1. I think AudioLeadIn: 1500

1. 00:28:359 (5) - finish at end
2. 00:40:617 (1) - I think not fit reverse. like that?
   
3. 00:45:134 (2,3) - Stack
4. 00:48:359 (3) - reverse at 00:48:843 - and end at 00:49:327 - ?
5. 01:36:747 (2,3) - Stack

1. 02:14:650 (6) - finish?
2. 02:16:101 (3) - finish at begin
3. 02:17:230 (5) - ^

1. 00:34:811 (2) - Ctrl+G? fun jump
2. 00:45:779 (2,3,4) - like that? back sound in all drums sounds
   
3. 02:18:682 (5) - NC

1. 01:32:876 (6,7,8,9,1) - Spacing 01:33:118 (7,8) - 0.8x

sorry poor English

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi =D M4M There

[General]
02:01:747 - I think the Kiai Time can continue i'll consider about it


[Insane]
00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Messy, hard =(
01:44:327 (3) - Too much hide (maybe better at x:404 y:92) Fixed

That's it =D
Good luck *u*

DX5536 wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
00:07:876 (6,1) - del 1 and repeat 6 one time nope
is yes, 00:08:521 (7) - NC
00:12:230 (1,2,3,4,1) - these sliders are confusing. maybe like this Fixed

SPOILER

00:39:166 (1,2) - del 2 and start 1 at white tick after

[Hard]
00:15:456 (1) - remv NC nope
00:25:134 (1,2) - these are kinda off screen
Well made, my friend xD

[Insane]
Sorry, i can't mod insane with high BPM ;_;

That's all. This song rapes my ears T^T but good map. P A N T S U's Easy should use more white ticks since it's Easy.
Good luck~

litoluna wrote:

hi~
thanks request from game pm

[General]

1. I think AudioLeadIn: 1500

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 02:14:650 (6) - finish?yep
2. 02:16:101 (3) - finish at begin yep
3. 02:17:230 (5) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:34:811 (2) - Ctrl+G? fun jump Fixed
2. 00:45:779 (2,3,4) - like that? back sound in all drums sounds good but i thought about shape
   
3. 02:18:682 (5) - NC Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:32:876 (6,7,8,9,1) - Spacing 01:33:118 (7,8) - 0.8x

ohhh fixed
sorry poor English
cool song~
Good Luck

P A N wrote:

oh god so many mod lazy to reply D:
but fixed almost all for all thanks

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Take Me Out!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 47022
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 109005
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Take Me Out!!
TitleUnicode:Take Me Out!!
Artist:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
ArtistUnicode:Fear, and Loathing in Las Vegas
Creator:[ Sana ]
Version:P A N's Easy
Source:Dance & Scream
Tags:jpop P_A_N electronicore
BeatmapID:298178
BeatmapSetID:115358

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,67914,76597
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
618,322.58064516129,4,1,1,50,1,0
13843,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
14166,-100,4,1,1,35,0,0
15940,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
45779,-100,4,1,1,30,0,0
47069,-100,4,1,1,55,0,1
57311,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
57392,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
66585,-100,4,1,1,40,0,1
67069,-100,4,1,1,30,0,1
67714,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
78037,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
78117,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
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93359,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,50,0,0
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103843,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
111424,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
111585,-100,4,1,1,50,0,1
121747,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,68,162
Combo2 : 23,139,255
Combo3 : 176,96,96

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400,108,52230,2,0,L|308:92,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,116,52876,2,0,L|116:128,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,92,53521,6,0,P|48:156|104:208,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,32,54811,2,0,L|273:14,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,92,56101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,264,56747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,316,57392,6,0,L|372:308,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,268,58037,2,0,P|476:184|444:100,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,92,59005,6,0,P|284:88|228:40,2,135,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,180,60295,2,0,L|328:276,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,60940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,61263,6,0,L|168:132,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,92,62069,2,0,P|148:52|220:68,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,62876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,112,63198,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,184,63521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,152,63843,6,0,P|208:224|260:268,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,124,65134,2,0,P|104:192|124:264,2,135,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66263,12,4,67714,0:0:0:0:
96,72,78037,5,4,0:0:0:0:
136,196,78521,6,0,P|184:180|212:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,188,79166,2,0,P|284:236|304:288,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,324,79811,2,0,P|180:296|124:292,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,168,80617,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,112,81101,6,0,P|200:56|220:24,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,84,81747,2,0,P|332:104|356:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,172,82392,2,0,P|232:200|188:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,268,83359,6,0,L|16:368,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,84327,2,0,L|120:368,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,236,85295,2,0,L|224:372,2,135,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,86585,5,2,0:0:0:0:
244,68,86908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,40,87230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,48,87553,2,0,L|440:144,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,216,88198,6,0,P|456:220|500:196,2,84.3750032186509,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,132,89650,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,220,90295,1,4,0:0:0:0:
304,312,90779,6,0,P|352:352|436:340,1,135,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,267,91585,2,0,L|409:175,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,92230,2,0,P|431:93|491:141,2,157.5
192,60,94166,6,0,P|132:32|60:56,2,135.000005149842,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,172,95940,6,0,L|100:312,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,292,96747,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,280,96908,2,0,P|280:272|332:288,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,97553,2,0,P|416:288|392:348,2,135,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,99005,6,0,P|360:88|412:96,2,90,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,99972,2,0,B|188:192|154:149|154:149|112:212,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,101263,6,0,L|292:376,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,344,101908,2,0,L|364:256,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,168,102553,2,0,B|376:120|376:120|408:72|376:28|376:28|312:12|312:12|256:44|212:16|212:16|172:40,1,360,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,88,104166,6,0,P|96:132|104:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,268,104811,2,0,P|132:308|172:332,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,105456,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,330,105779,2,0,P|381:306|404:268,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,176,106424,6,0,P|416:132|408:88,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,132,107069,2,0,L|232:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,144,107714,6,0,P|124:88|144:8,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,109005,2,0,P|240:268|220:348,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,280,110295,6,0,P|120:196|304:200,1,360,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,280,111908,2,0,P|376:296|436:280,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,228,112553,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,144,112876,6,0,P|484:88|460:16,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,76,114166,2,0,P|316:48|224:80,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,115134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,208,115456,6,0,L|116:348,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,132,116747,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,100,117069,2,0,P|288:92|332:100,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,180,118037,6,0,P|288:280|360:320,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,119005,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,272,119327,2,0,P|440:172|368:132,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,92,120295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,140,120617,2,0,P|152:168|64:132,2,157.5,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,72,122230,6,0,B|352:120|380:156|380:156|432:136|476:168,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,123198,2,0,P|416:292|384:328,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,123843,2,0,P|264:228|192:260,2,135,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,320,125134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,192,125617,6,0,L|444:100,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,108,126263,2,0,L|336:20,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,56,126908,2,0,P|184:56|144:104,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,252,128037,6,0,B|84:300|140:284|140:284|168:312|168:312|216:308,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,288,129005,2,0,P|352:272|424:296,1,135,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,156,129972,6,0,P|448:108|440:60,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,96,130617,2,0,P|308:96|268:124,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,131263,2,0,P|360:228|400:244,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,132069,6,0,P|228:264|212:196,1,135,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,116,132876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,44,133198,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,28,133521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,104,133843,6,0,P|24:188|96:252,1,180,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,135134,2,0,L|356:320,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,135779,2,0,L|472:264,2,90,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,136747,2,0,P|320:92|360:24,1,135,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,64,137714,6,0,B|152:88|152:88|104:80|104:80|32:100,2,180,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,139327,2,0,L|320:120,1,90,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139811,12,0,142392,0:0:0:0:

caren_sk wrote:

good luck !!

Pizza Kun wrote:

Mod from your modding queue [M4M]


I love this background, and when i have a kudosu i'll shot you a star!

[Insane]

00:10:617 (5,2) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:11:424 (2,2) - Ctrl+G I think it is better in this way Fixed
00:14:488 (5) - Move in 236||144 Fixed
00:29:650 (4,6) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:31:424 (4) - Move in 236||140 Fixed
00:31:908 (5) - 2° anchor point in 24||208 and: 00:32:230 (6,8) - Ctrl+G nor fixed
00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - <3 love this
00:48:682 (4,6) - Stack better Fixed
00:55:617 (7,2) - ^ Fixed
01:21:424 (6,1) - Stack on end Fixed
01:59:811 (5) - Move to 332||84 change similar
I think is better this: 01:59:972 (5) - in 256||24 and this rithm: for shape

02:19:005 (2) - Ctrl+G Fixed

This map is awesome ^^ thanks><

baldrace wrote:

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Hi~hi~
as your req>.<

General
awesome as usual

P A N's Easy
01:50:295 (1) - add finish at the end of the slider
01:56:747 (2) - add finish
00:40:617 (1) - remove nc
00:39:972 (3) - nc here

Normal
00:52:230 (6) - finish
00:57:392 (1) - ^
01:02:553 (6) - ^
01:18:037 (1) - ^
01:56:747 (5) - ^

Hard
check finish in this diff and insane
01:28:117 (6) - remove it,the triplet start at white tick is not awesome
01:33:279 (7) - ^
or try other patterns

Insane
00:02:392 (6) - awesome
[spoilerbox][spoilerbox]
00:11:101 (2,2) - add whistle
00:11:747 (2,2) - add clap
02:00:940 (7) - make it straight
02:16:262 (2,2,2) - add clap
in kiai,I suggest you use default normal whistle

star

_AI wrote:

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[P A N's Easy]
Great~ no problem

[Normal]
4.39star for a normal difficult are kinda too high..
try to reduce it as much as possible

[Hard]
00:44:005 (2,3) - Ctrl + G , switch them
00:53:682 (2,3) - ^
02:13:682 (2,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:14:650 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:811 (7) - Add NC
00:45:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Increase DS and make it better curve (Suggestion)

Great mapset!
doesn't seem to have any much problem to me
;w; maybe this's my shortest mod ever
GL for the map to be ranked~ >.o/

yurunneram wrote:

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Love this artist =w= Mod requested in-game
Wow how great would it be to have a girlfriend with that accent

EASY

00:23:198 (5) - Move one grid square right (sry for being useless)

00:30:617 (2) - Extend to 00:31:424 ?

00:34:166 (1) - Should start at 00:34:005

00:40:617 (1) - How about

00:54:811 (2) - Should make it curved like (1) since there's repetition in the music

That's all for easy

NORMAL

00:00:618 (1,2) - Move to x 284 y212 or hide it under (4) because it looks weird where it is now

02:14:650 (6,7) - How about slider first then circle

Your other two diffs had no problem to me (especially enjoyed hard) Star~ ;3

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Betsuto wrote:

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from M4M

[Insane]
00:04:972 (9)- I think you can NC for epic jump http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981248
00:08:359 (1,2,3,4)- make it epic jump (place 1 to 3, place 2 to 1, place 3 to 2) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/981255
00:26:263 (1)- forgot a Finish sound ?
00:36:585 (5)- NC here
00:41:747 (5)- forgot a Finish sound ?
00:42:553 (1,2,3,6)- forgot a Finish sound ?
01:02:553 (8)- NC here and remove NC at 01:02:876 (1)-
01:29:005 (3)- too slow note ... NC it
01:40:617 (1)- so epic stop the note remove it ?, then add NC here 01:41:263 (2)-
02:10:134 (1)- fhuu ~ so many NC spamming remove here and here 02:10:779 (1)-

[Hard]
00:15:456 (1)- epic NC remove it ?, then add NC here 00:15:940 (2)- and remove here too 00:16:424 (1)-
00:17:392 (4)- then ... NC here
01:18:843 (1)- I think remove NC will be better
01:34:166 (1,2,)- forgot a Finish sound ?

good mapping
Good luck ^^

user-RiSa wrote:

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모딩하러 왔습니다~XD
부족하지만..도움됬으면..ㅎ

[Normal]

00:11:908 (4) - 디스턴스 1.0로 전 노트들이랑 유지하는게 좋을꺼 같네여(별차이 없지만..)

00:47:714 (3) - ^

00:57:714 (2) - x:206 y:130 (디스턴스 유지관련)

00:58:037 (3) - x:316 y:130(^)

00:58:359 (4) - x:407y:68(^)

01:07:714 (6) - 디스턴스 유지

01:43:843 (8) - ^

[Hard]

00:44:005 (2,3) - 박자 위는 바꾸는건 어떨까여?? 더 자연스러울꺼 같은데

01:49:166 (2,3) - ^

02:13:682 (2,3) - ^

솔직하게 하드 잡을게 없는듯;; 제 실력으로는ㅠㅠ

이지는 잡을게 없고..인세인은 내가 완전 못하고;;그래서 패스합니다.

좋은 맵이에여!! 이런맵에는 별을 딱!!
랭 기대합니다+_

TaMul wrote:

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ㅠㅠ갑자기 서버 터졌네요 ㅠ

IRC MOD CHAT

22:43 TaMul: 전반적으로 힛사 소리가 너무 작은 거같아요
22:43 [ Sana ]: 앗
22:45 TaMul: 인세인입니다
22:45 TaMul: 00:05:134 (1,2,3,4) - 휘슬
22:45 TaMul: 00:05:456 (5) - 클랩
22:46 [ Sana ]: 00:05:456 (5) -
22:46 [ Sana ]: 피니쉬는 뺼까요?
22:46 TaMul: 안 빼도 괜찮을것같아요
22:46 [ Sana ]: 예압
22:47 TaMul: 00:12:392 (2) -
22:48 TaMul: 드럼 클랩힛사 넣는거
22:48 TaMul: 제안이요
22:48 TaMul: 00:12:714 (5) -
22:48 [ Sana ]: 드럼!
22:48 TaMul: 여긴 드럼 피니쉬 힛사 넣는거
22:48 [ Sana ]: 기본 드럼으로해도되죠??
22:48 TaMul: 00:14:327 ,00:14:488 -
22:48 TaMul: 옙 기본 드럼
22:49 TaMul: 00:12:392 (2) -
22:49 TaMul: 클릭하고
22:49 TaMul: 왼쪽에
22:49 TaMul: sampleset
22:49 TaMul: 에서 드럼만 맞추시면
22:49 TaMul: 타이밍포인트 추가할필요없이
22:49 TaMul: 드럼 힛사 넣을수있어요
22:50 [ Sana ]: 아 글쿤
22:51 TaMul: 00:14:327 -
22:51 TaMul: 하고
22:51 TaMul: 00:14:488 -
22:51 TaMul: 소리 증가시켜주세요
22:51 [ Sana ]: 네
22:51 TaMul: 60%,70%
22:51 TaMul: 요런식으로
22:51 TaMul: 00:18:924 - 노트 추가
22:53 TaMul: 00:24:488 (7) -
22:53 TaMul: 뉴콤보
22:53 TaMul: 드럼 클랩 힛사로 처리
22:53 TaMul: 00:24:811 (8) - 드럼 피니쉬 힛사로 처리
22:54 [ Sana ]: 다 피니쉬요??
22:54 [ Sana ]: 리버스까지?
22:55 TaMul: 음
22:55 TaMul: 그게 나을것같네요
22:55 TaMul: 음악 소리를 잘 들어보면
22:56 TaMul: 글자로는 표현 못하겠는데
22:56 TaMul: 음..그래요
22:56 [ Sana ]: 아 그런듯요
22:56 TaMul: 드럼 소리가 같은 음은 아니잖아요?
22:56 TaMul: 두두두두다다다다?
22:56 [ Sana ]: 네네
22:56 [ Sana ]: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
22:56 TaMul: 00:26:263 (1) -
22:56 TaMul: 피니쉬
22:57 [ Sana ]: 휘슬은요?
22:58 TaMul: 휘슬은..
22:58 TaMul: 소리가 파묻쳐서
22:58 TaMul: 안넣는게 나을것같아요
22:58 [ Sana ]: 아
22:58 [ Sana ]: 넵!
22:58 TaMul: 00:35:779 (3) - 클랩 뺴주세요
22:59 TaMul: 휘슬로 처리
22:59 TaMul: 00:36:263 (3) - 이것도
22:59 TaMul: 00:39:972 (4) - 클랩 제거
22:59 [ Sana ]: 우와 이런거 어케잡지 신기ㄷ
23:00 [ Sana ]: 햇어용
23:00 TaMul: 00:40:940 (2) - 클랩
23:00 TaMul: 00:41:747 (5) - 피니쉬
23:01 TaMul: 00:42:230 (2) - 클랩 빼고 휘슬
23:01 TaMul: 00:42:553 (1) - 슬라이드 머리,아니 시작부분에 클랩
23:01 TaMul: 그리고 끝 부분 클랩 제거
23:02 TaMul: 00:45:779 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
23:03 TaMul: 이런 부분도 드럼 힛사로 처리해주세요
23:03 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:03 [ Sana ]: 일반 드럼이요?
23:03 TaMul: 넵넵 당연
23:03 TaMul: 00:52:230 (7) - 피니쉬?
23:03 [ Sana ]: 아..제가
23:04 [ Sana ]: 스킨에 잇는 드럼 힛사를 노말힛사로 바꿔버려서
23:04 [ Sana ]: 무슨 소리가 나는지 모르겟어요ㅋㅋㅋ
23:05 TaMul: ㄴㄴ
23:05 TaMul: 타이밍포인트 추가할필요없이
23:05 TaMul: 힛사 넣을 노트 클릭하고
23:05 TaMul: 왼쪽에 샘플셋으로 드럼 힛사 넣으면되요
23:05 TaMul: 드럼 힛사라는건
23:05 [ Sana ]: 헐
23:06 TaMul: 기본 힛사말하는건데
23:06 TaMul: ㅇ;
23:06 [ Sana ]: 헐 저게 그거였구나
23:06 [ Sana ]: 처음알앗네요;;
23:06 TaMul: 00:57:069 (5) - 클랩
23:06 TaMul: 00:59:650 (7) - 클랩
23:07 TaMul: 01:07:069 (1,5) -
23:07 TaMul: 이걸 드럼 힛사로
23:09 [ Sana ]: 님님
23:10 TaMul: 네
23:10 [ Sana ]: 왼쪽에 두개있는데
23:10 [ Sana ]: 에디션은 뭐죠??
23:10 TaMul: 끙..
23:10 TaMul: 저도 잘 모르겠어요
23:10 TaMul: 업뎃 잘보면 있을것같은데
23:10 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:11 TaMul: 매핑하다가 어쩌다가 샘플셋 사용법을 알게되서
23:11 TaMul: 에디션이 추가라는 뜻이니까
23:11 TaMul: 더 추가적으로 힛사를 넣는...그런건가..?
23:12 TaMul: 01:25:456 (5) - 클랩
23:12 [ Sana ]: 아..
23:12 [ Sana ]: 두 가지소리가 한꺼번에 나는건가..
23:13 TaMul: 01:28:682 (2) - 클랩 뺴고 휘슬
23:13 TaMul: 01:29:005 (3) - 클랩 추가
23:13 TaMul: 01:30:295 (10) - 머리에 클랩
23:13 TaMul: 01:35:456 (10) -
23:13 TaMul: ^
23:14 [ Sana ]: !?
23:14 TaMul: 똑같이 클랩
23:15 TaMul: 02:14:972 (4) - 클랩 빠졋어요
23:15 [ Sana ]: 우와
23:17 TaMul: 하드~
23:17 TaMul: 00:14:327 (5,6,7) -
23:17 TaMul: 이부분도 소리 올려주세요
23:17 TaMul: 00:42:069 (9,10) -
23:17 TaMul: 휘슬로
23:18 TaMul: 00:44:327 (4) - 클랩 제거
23:18 TaMul: 00:57:392 (4) - 뉴콤보
23:18 TaMul: 00:58:682 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거?
23:19 TaMul: 01:07:069 (2,3) - 슬라 첫부분만 드럼 클랩 힛사
23:19 TaMul: 01:07:714 (4) - 피니쉬
23:20 [ Sana ]: 인세인도 피니쉬넣을까요?
23:20 TaMul: 음 .ㅇㅇ
23:20 [ Sana ]: 오키
23:22 TaMul: 01:50:456 (7) - 뉴콤보
23:23 TaMul: 02:00:940 (6,2) - 드럼 클랩
23:24 TaMul: 02:09:811 (2,3,4) - 클랩
23:24 TaMul: 슬라 끝
23:25 TaMul: 02:11:747 (5) - 클랩지우고 휘슬
23:25 TaMul: 잠시 앞으로 가서
23:25 TaMul: 00:51:424 (2) -
23:26 TaMul: 가운데 슬라이드 포인트 1 그리드 아래로
23:27 TaMul: 01:48:198 (4) -
23:27 [ Sana ]: 예ㅂ
23:27 TaMul: http://puu.sh/4qc0x.jpg
23:28 TaMul: 이런식으로 해서 5번 노트를 지긋히 안아주세요
23:28 TaMul: 01:59:488 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
23:28 [ Sana ]: 지긋히ㅋㅋㅋ
23:30 TaMul: 노멀 갑시다
23:30 [ Sana ]: 고고
23:30 TaMul: 아 그리고
23:31 TaMul: 보니까 osb파일 있던데
23:31 TaMul: SB안 썻죠?
23:31 [ Sana ]: 네
23:31 [ Sana ]: 이상하게
23:31 TaMul: 지워주세요
23:31 TaMul: 그냥
23:31 [ Sana ]: 지웟는데 자꾸 생기네요/.
23:31 TaMul: 그래요?
23:31 TaMul: 쩝
23:31 [ Sana ]: 네ㅠ
23:31 TaMul: 그냥 둬요
23:31 TaMul: 디자인 탭 건들면 그런가보네
23:31 [ Sana ]: 아하
23:33 TaMul: 00:12:230 (5,6,7) -
23:33 TaMul: 노멀엔 좀 어려운 패턴같네요
23:33 [ Sana ]: 00:12:714 (6) - 지울까요?
23:33 TaMul: 네
23:34 TaMul: 00:14:811 (5) -
23:34 TaMul: 슬라이드 몸통에 휘슬
23:34 TaMul: 00:17:392 (4) - 뉴콤보?
23:34 TaMul: 00:21:908 (2,3) -
23:34 TaMul: 이건 넘어가도되고
23:35 TaMul: 어려운 패턴인데
23:35 TaMul: 음
23:35 TaMul: 슬라로 처리?
23:35 [ Sana ]: 몸통에 휘슬이면
23:35 [ Sana ]: 하안줄말씀하시는거?
23:36 TaMul: 하얀줄?
23:37 [ Sana ]: 00:15:134 -
23:37 TaMul: 그부분이라고도 해도되고
23:37 TaMul: 구지 말하다면 00:14:892 ~00:15:376 -
23:37 TaMul: 이런 부분
23:38 TaMul: 00:42:069 (6,7) - 휘슬으로
23:39 TaMul: 00:46:263 (5,6,1) - 이 패턴도 노멀엔 힘들다고 봐요
23:39 TaMul: 5,6번을 슬라이드로 하는건 어떨까요
23:39 [ Sana ]: 네네
23:39 TaMul: 00:57:392 (1) - 피니쉬
23:40 TaMul: 01:07:069 (4) - 뉴콤보?
23:40 TaMul: 01:33:359 (5) - 피니쉬
23:40 [ Sana ]: http://puu.sh/4qcps.jpg
23:41 [ Sana ]: 이렇게되는건가..
23:41 TaMul: 네
23:43 TaMul: 02:11:585 (3) -
23:43 TaMul: 머리에 클랩
23:44 [ Sana ]: ㅇㅋ
23:46 TaMul: 음 여기까지 ㅎ

넵 굿럭!

PAN's Easy is noting to check! sorry

-Neipezi wrote:

hi sana From my M4M

사나님 제가 조언을 드리는 것은 수정하라고 강요하는 것이 아닙니다. "수정은 매퍼 마음이니까요."

[Normal]
재 생각은 노멀이 조금 어렵다고 느끼는 거같습니다.
예를 들어서 00:12:230 (5,6,7) - 이런거나 00:21:908 (2,3) - ,00:25:134 (4,5,6) - 이런 종류의 패턴이 많습니다.
리맵할까 생각중!

[Hard]
AR+1 ok
good
00:01:747 (4) - NC 추가? ok
00:04:327 (6) - ^ ok
00:06:908 (4) - ^ ok

[Insane]
00:10:940 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 멋진 점프십니다. 헉,,감사합니다
00:11:747 (2) - Clap 추가 ok
00:26:263 (1,2) - 1번 서클 삭제하시고 2번 슬라이드 앞으로 땡겨주세요. ok
00:26:585 - , 00:26:666 - 에 연타 넣어도 무관할꺼 같습니다. 앞에 스트림이 있어서 안넣는게 좋을거 같네요!
00:36:585 (5) - NC 추가? ok
00:58:601 (2) - x:256 y:324 로 이동 ok
00:58:682 (3) - x:292 y:312 로 이동 : 대각선이 되게 배치해보시는게 어떻십니까? ok
01:23:037 (1) - x:104 y:248 로 이동 ok
01:23:118 (2) - x:120 y:276 로 이동 : ^ok
01:30:779 (1) - 앞에 Finish 추가? ok
01:57:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 세모모양 만들실꺼면 잘 배치해주시길바랍니다. 헉 딱걸렷다ㄷㄷ

GL, 역시 프로가 따로 없네요 어므나><

1. 02:07:714- add a note

1. 01:36:424 (2) - how about this?
   

1. 00:10:134- add a note
2. 01:32:230 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   

   348,174,92230,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   370,257,92392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   457,259,92553,2,8,L|438:319,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   489,177,92876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   418,122,93037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   418,122,93117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   418,122,93198,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:06:908 (5) - NC
2. 01:29:005 (1,2,3,4) - DS is too shot imo
3. 01:36:263 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   

   259,201,96263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   259,201,96343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   259,201,96424,2,8,P|272:154|311:127,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   391,95,96747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   222,104,96908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   364,196,97069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   304,38,97230,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:06:908 (5) - NC
2. 01:29:005 (1,2,3,4) - DS is too shot imo
3. 01:36:263 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   

   259,201,96263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   259,201,96343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   259,201,96424,2,8,P|272:154|311:127,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   391,95,96747,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   222,104,96908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   364,196,97069,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   304,38,97230,1,0,0:0:0:0:

1. in Easy,i think that you should avoid the act to change Slider Velocity by changing BPM...

1. i wasn’t able to find the point that you should fix

1. 00:34:811 (2,3) - I feel that distance is far for Hard...

1. 00:56:747 (2,3) - ^

1. 00:08:521 (2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

1. 00:53:682 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

1. 00:55:617 (7) - Ctrl＋g

1. 00:57:714 (2) - Ctrl＋g

1. 01:38:037 (1,2,3) - I suggest that replace 3 with 2.

placement

1. 01:44:811 (5,1,2,3,4) - When you change it in this way, how about?

this way

At first,(5) Ctrl＋g. Then, replace 2 with 1.

1. Clear.

1. 00:20:940 (7,8) - hmm, i think not fit the song and vocal here. like this?
   
   
2. 00:26:263 (1) - suggestion. 1/1 slider is really fit here imo.
   
   
3. 01:41:263 (1) - finish
   
   nice diff.

1. HP+1
2. 00:18:521 (1) - you forgot finish?
3. 00:23:682 (2) - ^
4. 00:25:134 (1) - i think that fit 1/2. bule line rhythm is not fit imo.
5. 00:42:553 (1) - add finish.
6. 00:55:940 (6,7,1) - hmm, i don't like that downbeat rhythm. like this?
   
   
7. 01:41:263 (1) - finish
8. 01:49:005 (1) - finish? Insane diff have finish here.
9. 02:17:230 (1) - ^

1. i recommend AR+1.
2. 01:02:553 (6) - remove finish? not found finish here in Hard diff and Insane diff.
3. 01:41:263 (1) - really fit the finish here.
4. 01:49:005 (1) - same comment in Hard diff.
5. 01:56:747 (5) - same comment 01:02:553 (6) -
6. 02:14:650 (6) - add finish in slider start.
   
   not bad. but i felt this diff a bit hard.

1. OD-1 is better for me.
2. 00:01:747 (3) - add finish in slider end. It's sound better.
3. 00:19:972 (2) - try this rhythm. i think that better than current for me. if you fix here, 00:20:617 (3) - add finish in slider repeat.
   
   
4. 00:24:166 (1) - suggestion for loud sound exist here 00:26:263 -
   
   
5. 00:34:166 (1) - spinner start is 00:34:005 - better.
6. 00:40:617 (1) - sound weird of slider repeat. not found sound here. so try this rhythm.
   
   
7. 01:28:198 (1) - bule line's repeat is not fit. like this?
   
   
8. 01:32:230 (3) - same above comment. try this.
   
   
9. 01:50:295 (1) - add finish instead of clap. more fit the song.
10. 02:00:617 (5) - try this.
    
    
11. 02:02:230 (1,2) - hmm, i think this part follow the vocal. like this rhythm?
    
    
12. 02:07:714 - add note and the slider 02:08:037 (1) - move to 02:08:198 - . slider end is 02:08:682 - more good rhythm imo.

Guy wrote:

SPOILER

Hi, From my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. Clear.

[Insane]

1. 00:20:940 (7,8) - hmm, i think not fit the song and vocal here. like this?
   yes..but i don't think it's matter when we play it
2. 00:26:263 (1) - suggestion. 1/1 slider is really fit here imo.
   fixed like this

   
   
   
3. 01:41:263 (1) - finish fixed
   
   nice diff.

thanks


[Hard]

1. HP+1 ok
2. 00:18:521 (1) - you forgot finish? maybe :p
3. 00:23:682 (2) - ^ fixed
4. 00:25:134 (1) - i think that fit 1/2. bule line rhythm is not fit imo.
   changed like this

   
5. 00:42:553 (1) - add finish. fixed
6. 00:55:940 (6,7,1) - hmm, i don't like that downbeat rhythm. like this?
   fixed!
   
7. 01:41:263 (1) - finish fixed!
8. 01:49:005 (1) - finish? Insane diff have finish here.fixed!
9. 02:17:230 (1) - ^ fixed!

[Normal]

1. i recommend AR+1.
2. 01:02:553 (6) - remove finish? not found finish here in Hard diff and Insane diff. fixed
3. 01:41:263 (1) - really fit the finish here.fixed
4. 01:49:005 (1) - same comment in Hard diff.Great
5. 01:56:747 (5) - same comment 01:02:553 (6) -fixed
6. 02:14:650 (6) - add finish in slider start.fixed
   
   not bad. but i felt this diff a bit hard.

Good luck