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搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了,感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明,沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦,要不要試試這樣?http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦,感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
posted

RandomEffect wrote:

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace" https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66372 This map is ranked, so no need to change the title.

    [Yuki]
    1. 01:42:034- add a note nope, there is no sound
    2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete I hear there is no sound, so deleted

quantum-rose wrote:

[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致 ok我改了
其餘完美
thanks for moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddding
posted
[general]
没啥大问题你个神马坡
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话

00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开


就是这样 加油 :):)
posted
As your pm request :)

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.


[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR,HP,OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的,建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好,而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪 到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊,不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到 408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠(强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :?
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状,不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度,我喜欢 :)

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That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久 :(  太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. :o 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
:arrow:不管怎么样,图不错。
Hope this helps :)
祝Rank~!
posted

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]

[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开 nope
01:20:701 (4) - finish 加了觉得难听
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效 我觉得不用啊._.
00:45:534 (2) - finish 这个可以

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉 这个让小船看-。-

_Kaiser wrote:

[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠(强迫症在此lol lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、好吧 fixed
00:20:701 (5) - Finish 我觉得这个不用加不过我觉得加在spin上不错
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :?这个不改惹,除非BAT要求改=.=
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状,不然好违和啊.. 哪里有∑( ° △ °|||)
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G 故意的(o゚ω゚o)
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好 fixed
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样 其实是一样的0.0
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些 还不圆滑么?我是复制ctrl+h,复制ctrl+j的……;w;
好多遮挡的难度,我喜欢 :)

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To _Kaiser:我的hard现在完成大概1分半了,再稍微等等撒~
Thanks for modiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing~
posted
[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下


[Insane]
  1. 00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图 我建议往下拉一点
  2. 00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑 重新拉下
  3. 00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍 我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
  5. 01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
  6. 01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

  7. 01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
  8. 01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
  9. 01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感


[Hard]
  1. 01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观 修改下
  2. 00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试


[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢?
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^


[Normal]
X

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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren
posted

Pandiar wrote:

Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this?

00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?

01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?

01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance

01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?

01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish


[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!

01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.

01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point


[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%?
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry :(
I hope that you will help
good luck!
Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar :)

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace"
  2. tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×2 ?

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
  2. 00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
  3. 00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
  4. 00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
  5. 00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
  7. 01:17:534- add a note?
  8. 01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
  9. 01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
  2. 00:36:701- add a note
  3. 01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)

[Insane]
  1. 01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
  2. 01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume

[Yuki]
  1. 01:42:034- add a note
  2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete


~Good Luck~
Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect :)

quantum-rose wrote:

PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了,感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明,沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦,要不要試試這樣?http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦,感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose :)

bokito wrote:

[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下


[Insane]
  1. 00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图 我建议往下拉一点
  2. 00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑 重新拉下
  3. 00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍 我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
  5. 01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
  6. 01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

  7. 01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
  8. 01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
  9. 01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感


[Hard]
  1. 01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观 修改下
  2. 00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试


[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢?
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^


[Normal]
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謝謝bokito 全修復了 不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到.. :o

_Kaiser wrote:

As your pm request :)

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.


[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR,HP,OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的,建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好,而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪 到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊,不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到 408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠(强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧 :?
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状,不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度,我喜欢 :)

--------------------------------------------------------
That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久 :(  太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. :o 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
:arrow:不管怎么样,图不错。
Hope this helps :)
祝Rank~!
謝謝_Kaiser 一些修復了 :)
posted

bokito wrote:

[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下

@smallboat


[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢?
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^ 好,和后面统一
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^
ttttttttttttttttthanks fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffor mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoding
posted
Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm?

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^
posted

Pandiar wrote:

Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this?

00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?

01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?

01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance

01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?

01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish


[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!

01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.

01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point


[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%?
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry :(
I hope that you will help
good luck!
Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar :)

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: "shining grace"
  2. tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×2 ?

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
  2. 00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
  3. 00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
  4. 00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
  5. 00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
  6. 00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
  7. 01:17:534- add a note?
  8. 01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
  9. 01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
  2. 00:36:701- add a note
  3. 01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)

[Insane]
  1. 01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
  2. 01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume

[Yuki]
  1. 01:42:034- add a note
  2. 01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete


~Good Luck~
Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect :)

quantum-rose wrote:

PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了,感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明,沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦,要不要試試這樣?http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦,感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美
Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose :)

bokito wrote:

[General]
  1. audio leadin不同 统一下


[Insane]
  1. 00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图 我建议往下拉一点
  2. 00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑 重新拉下
  3. 00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍 我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
  4. 00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
  5. 01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
  6. 01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

  7. 01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
  8. 01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
  9. 01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感


[Hard]
  1. 01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观 修改下
  2. 00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试


[Yuki]
  1. 00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽 元芳你认为呢?
  2. 00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:201 (1) - nc
  4. 01:06:534 (1) - ^


[Normal]
X

----------

謝謝bokito 全修復了 不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到.. :o

ZZHBOY wrote:

[general]
没啥大问题你个神马坡
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话

00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开


就是这样 加油 :):)
謝謝ZZHBOY 有些修復了 :)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm? GOOD !

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867 GOOD !
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^
Almost all fixed , thanks 10crystalmask01 :) Very thank your random mod , wonderful ! :idea:
posted
Modding as requested, will have to be in English though :P

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely.

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style)
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before?
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.
posted
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.



[Insane]
  1. 00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
  2. 00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
  3. 00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
  5. 01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
  6. 01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
  7. 01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
  8. 01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
  9. 01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
  10. 01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
  11. 01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
  12. 01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
  13. 01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  14. 01:28:867 (1) - ^
  15. 01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
  16. 01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
  17. 01:39:534 (4) - ^
  18. 01:57:034 (7) - like this?


    clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
    for example,
    01:23:867 -
    01:24:534 -
    01:25:201 -
    01:25:867 -
    01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff)

    but well done. nice diff.



[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

    beautiful placement this diff.



[Hard]
  1. 00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ?
  2. 00:20:867 (1) - add finish
  3. 00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet.



[Normal]
  1. 00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - )


Good luck :)
posted

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.[/notice]
ALL FIXED, THANKS

James2250 wrote:

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music Rhythm start here so I add it.
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)


Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.

Guy wrote:

[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.


beautiful placement this diff. THANK YOU~ALL FIXED~
posted
[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds?
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ :D
posted
Heya! :D Forgive me if I butcher any of my Chinese, haven't typed anything serious for a while. From PM request (for diffs Hard-Yuki).

[Hard]

用tick rate 2感觉的好一些,特别是在1/2上开始的slider (e.g. [Hard] 00:04:701 (5))。

01:09:701 - 加个circle? 这样flow的好一点。
01:41:534 (3,1) - 3最好不要完全盖住1的tail, 有的skin会看不出来有没有repeat.
01:50:201 (3) - 01:47:534里没有circle,所以我觉得这里也应该没有。
01:55:534 (1) - 用这里当head,改成1/1的slider?

玩的不错,跟音乐挺紧。

[Insane]

AR9觉的有点快,特别是开头的那个部分。用AR8试试?

00:24:034 (1) - circle比slider好一点。
00:31:867 (8) - 用4个circle,或者减去一个repeat & 把9放的远一点。
00:42:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow有点迷糊。改改位置?
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - 4-5的jump不是很自然。
01:20:867 (1) - 这里音乐比较轻,这些jump的fit不是很好
01:23:534 (1) - 这里可以加几个jump!

没有大问题,但是跟hard的难度差别有点高。

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低,但是难度比它高。。。
这里AR9也是有点快。

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低,快要听不见了
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump?
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来,藏在hitburst下面了

玩不了这个map,太难了XD

总共来说都不错, star~
posted

-APXH wrote:

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

Kytoxid wrote:

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低,但是难度比它高。。。 这是2nd insane,同样是insane =.=而且不是一个作者啊!
这里AR9也是有点快。 ar8完全不能玩

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。 不乱,就是往返梗,最后一个改个方向坑人一把
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低,快要听不见了 低么0 0
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump? 滑条判定松,其实很容易接上
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来,藏在hitburst下面了 :>
posted

James2250 wrote:

Modding as requested, will have to be in English though :POKAY, Thanks "LINK"! :)

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely. OKAY

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though. Well , I reduce HP-1, and have a little break.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change fixed
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style) fixed
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics fixed
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it fixed
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before? fixed
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it fixed
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.Okay, I try it!
Thanks James2250 mod my map in free time !

Guy wrote:

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.
fixed


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
  2. 00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
  3. 00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
  4. 00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
  5. 01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
  6. 01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
  7. 01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
  8. 01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
  9. 01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
  10. 01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
  11. 01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
  12. 01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
  13. 01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  14. 01:28:867 (1) - ^
  15. 01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
  16. 01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
  17. 01:39:534 (4) - ^
  18. 01:57:034 (7) - like this?


    clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
    for example,
    01:23:867 -
    01:24:534 -
    01:25:201 -
    01:25:867 -
    01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff) Okay

    but well done. nice diff.Thanks Guy :)


Almost fixed

[Yuki]
  1. 00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
  2. 00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
  3. 00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
  4. 01:02:201 (1) - add finish
  5. 01:04:868 (1) - ^
  6. 01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
  7. 01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

    beautiful placement this diff.



[Hard]
  1. 00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ? fixed
  2. 00:20:867 (1) - add finish fixed
  3. 00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet. fixed



[Normal]
  1. 00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - ) fixed


Good luck :)
Thanks Guy ! Good Luck ,too. :)

-APXH wrote:

[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds? Good idea , I fixed it!
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ :DNothing,nevermind!
Thanks -APXH mod !
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Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]
  1. The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
  2. Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
  3. Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.


[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

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The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY
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[General for every difficulty except for guest]
00:05:867 - I don't think that a volume increase is need here. The sound just switches sides that's it.

[Yuki]
Since I didn't have time last time. I forgot to put in this comment:
There's alot of mapping to uses the location of previous combos, which I call in my terms "History Mapping" or "Referencing"

00:57:534 (3) - Resnap
00:58:201 (1,2) - Not a good idea to put these two there just after the slider ended
00:58:534 (3) - Resnap
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - Place these circles more apart. It's confusing

[Insane]
00:56:887 - Resnap timing point
01:50:201 to 01:50:451 - You should do the same thing with the reduced volume with every hitsounds that I asked you to do in the first mod. I forgot to mention that.

[Hard]
AR is a bit slow
01:40:701 (3) - Resnap
01:41:534 (3) - Same as above
01:53:201 (1) - Sudden new combo

[Normal]
Can't really say much since I not one who specializes in Easy maps. I specialize in Insane maps...
01:23:534 (1) - Both ends have clap on them
01:58:034 (5) - Might as well most it up since they're all equal distance
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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

-APXH wrote:

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ
My idea is that you should do 00:22:201 (1,2,3) once, then reflect it. Or something like it. Read my newest mod to read my I'm saying thing.
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