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ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-10-05T11:13:35+00:00

我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-05T11:21:22+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。
我也不知道怎么回事噗噗噗噗噗，已经改了
00:39:367 (5) - nc？ ok
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc ok
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 ok
挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的 thanks~

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。噗噗噗噗摆乌龙了哈哈哈

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-06T13:45:37+00:00

ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:
最近水平下降……随便摸两句._. 謝謝來摸
为什么感觉BG被纵向压过 我圖片壓縮不太拿手所以就這樣了._. 後面再想辦法..
[Insane]
00:02:701 (6,7) - 时间互换 fixed
00:10:867 (5) - ctrl+G fixed
00:29:201 (7) - 像这种直接从上面拷贝过来然后翻转比较好，后面类似的也是._. fixed
00:56:867 - 声太小了还有最后那个5% 别的diff也注意下 fixed
01:36:868 (1,2) - 顺着6的话 → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1018687 fixed
01:48:867 (8) - 顺下去 fixed
总体来看还有粗糙的感觉，修一下 Ok，這個難度錯的蠻大我會設法改改~~(找神modder改改?)~~

謝謝包子神的mod。

ts8zs wrote:
我居然忘了开not_ai_mod……一定是win8的错._.

win8沒用過呢..感覺不怎好用..介面太複雜..

OniJAM

OniJAM wrote:
Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion
General
Normal的kiai end没有压到白线上请往后拉2ms fixed
所有难度：00:05:867 - 从这里开始Volume可以放大一点到15左右 fixed

Normal
00:11:534 - 这里就更应该放大了放大到30左右吧 fixed
01:28:201 - clap? fixed
01:41:868 (3) - missing clap fixed
01:42:201 (1,2) - 开头clap或者连01:43:535 (3) - 一起改成结尾clap 改成3個結尾

Hard
00:38:867 (1) - NC move to 00:39:534 (3) - ? fixed
00:39:367 - add a note fixed

Insane
00:32:867 - 从这里开始到下一条绿线的Volume过小提高到55/60 fixed
01:36:701 (6,1) - flow太差又改了些
01:40:701 - Volume请提高到至少40最好60 fixed

音效做的不错了所以我没摸出什么出来謝謝啦但有些還沒放完全
Nice map Good luck~ 謝，第一次有這樣說

Hollow Wings

Hollow Wings wrote:
as ur req
[Yuki]
七十多个unsnap。。。打开aimod瞬间我就惊呆了，后来发现居然是因为bpm不一样，这图bpm居然是180.003，搞毛。。。改完以后全部物件都snap一下=。=|||，似乎song setup里很多都没统一比如letterbox和tag什么的，一点点都和别的diff弄一样。。。

00:39:367 (5) - nc？
00:40:784 (5) - 这个note删掉，打起来感觉更好，删的话建议00:40:867 (6) - 加nc
01:58:032 个人建议这里还是放一个note比较好，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍
挺不错的diff啊，我蛮喜欢的
[Insane]
kiai unsnap是闹哪样。。。调整一下绿线的位置。还有一个obj也没snap，fix一下。以后最好上传前自己先打开aimod看一下warning，一般硬伤的话modder会给你指出，不过能自己先搞定的还是先搞定吧 :3 OK
00:03:534 (9,1) - nc移动一下 fixed
00:05:867 (1,2) - 这里我也建议把nc移动一下 fixed
00:09:367 (4,5,1,2,3) - 可以做个圆弧轨迹 fixed
00:21:701 (1) - 这里的音其实是1/6，改成1/6折返吧，然后最好stack在之前滑条的尾下 fixed
00:30:784 (3) - 前后ds差的太多太明显了，微调一下 fixed
00:31:534 (8) - nc fixed
00:37:367 (7) - ^ fixed
00:39:534 (8) - ^ fixed
00:43:534 (7,1) - nc 移动一下 fixed
00:48:867 (8) - nc fixed
01:02:867 (4,5) - 这ds跟之前的滑条比起来感觉太小了，把5再放远一点 fixed
01:09:201 (5) - 略高，看看能不能放下来一点 fixed
01:10:201 (9) - 中间红线那拍建议还是map一下，这个长滑条可以改成3单点，单点+滑条或者折返都行 fixed 改成3單點
01:17:367 这里可以放个连打 fixed
01:22:367 (4,5) - 这个ds还是大一点比较好，把5放远 fixed
01:28:201 (3,1) - 以及 01:30:701 (4,1) - 的变ds其实不太推荐，要么stack在尾巴上要么放远，或者处理成00:45:867 (13,1) - 的样子感觉也不错 fixed 都放在尾巴堆疊了
01:36:034 (2,3,4,5,6) - 我建议这五个的位置不变，顺序改成34562 看不太懂..不過我有改了些
01:40:867 (8) - nc fixed
01:46:200 (7) - nc？似乎你是因为梗的原因不nc，这个你自己看吧，后同 fixed 後面也改了
01:55:201 (13,1,2) - 13全部换成连打，12的鼓点不变滑条跟着电子音走比较好。。。那串连打太长了，在01:54:868 (9) - 的地方nc吧，其实形状也可以搞个曲线什么的 12那句我看不懂等下問你..其餘fixed 曲線等會修

nc的话一般放在大段小节的重音开头，或者分割梗，虽然提前放也可以不过一般来说常规的放比较好，而且大多数情况下数字在10以内比较靠谱（除非长连打或者特殊梗的需要） Ok..好..重音..瞭解我試試
排版方面因为我有强迫症所以我觉得有些地方还可以加强一点比如00:28:701 (4,5,6) - 这种可以搞成圆弧什么的233 我也覺得不太美觀謝謝你的指點
[Hard]
00:41:867 (4,1) - 我有强迫症所以blanket this perfect pls orz fixed
00:45:534 (1,1) - 这个ds必须搞大点。。。你在重音后变小可以，但是这里强烈建议还是和之前一样 fixed
01:41:534 (3,1) - 这里果然还是stack搞搞好，不然看上去有点乱 fixed
01:43:201 (3,4,1) - 4的前后ds我强烈建议统一，跳的太大player不好掌握空一拍的节奏 fixed
01:57:867 (2,1) - 转盘头改成个note，转盘尾不变头向后移1/2拍 fixed
其实滑条那么多，blanket啊symm啊可以多弄一点的说symm不太懂其餘fixed了
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2,3,1) - 这三个完全可以互相blanket的说，2和1stack，3弄成圆弧吧？多个control point感觉没意义啊orz fixed
00:13:367 (2,1) - 这里也是可以blanket，后面我就不说了，只是为了好看而已不是什么大问题 fixed
01:58:034 (1) - 和hard里的处理方式一样fixed
嗯，kiai也没snap，fix一下fixed

我还是第一次看见bpm都不一样的233，传图过程中出什么问题了么，gd的运输安全要注意啊噗。。。哈哈會注意的(尷尬

good luck

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-07T05:55:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-10-06T18:30:45+00:00

m4m

General

这是180？你们能不能不要做得跟160一样
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
请修改所有5%的部分
这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分
我还是先删了bg再mod

Insane

00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4，考虑一下
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle
00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC
01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住请考虑
01:12:201 (4,7) - stack？
01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note
01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近，要么改成一个跳

Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
没啥问题

Hard

00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63
00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC
00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC
01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食请考虑修改
01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好其实可以像Normal一样留一个break
01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳
01:46:200 (4) - NC
01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲，建议改成1/2+note

Normal

没啥问题

Good luck~

- Jelly -

30 posts

Joined April 2013

- Jelly - 2013-10-06T18:38:37+00:00

Hi~

Yuki

HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

Insane

00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音，
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._.

Hard

00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。

Normal

00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返？

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸，
小船神麻婆不要介意 |||||

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-07T03:40:04+00:00

Flower wrote:
Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串结合下面的modder说的改了
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳我考虑下
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note ok
没啥问题花花这么说我很高兴0.0
另外花花你的那个160的消除能玩？

- Jelly - wrote:
Yuki
HP-1或者OD+1 nope
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读.. 多花1pc就可以读懂不改
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条 nope
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238 fixed
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。 hehe
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始改了
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变好

OniJAM wrote:
Yuki
00:09:701 (5,6,7) - 这里不妨也手动堆叠？好
00:23:534 (1) - whistle 好
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样的连打很糟糕换成普通的那种不好，我就想坑人家acc一把

EmingK

341 posts

Joined October 2012

EmingK 2013-10-07T12:26:12+00:00

小船早._.
来得有点晚QAQ

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.

Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore

[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥，在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个：
プロジェクトウタヒメ
~~作曲/编曲：ARM，作词：夕野ヨシミ，~~Vocal：miko，可以加进tags中。（来源：http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ）
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki]，所有的username中间不要有空格，需要用下划线代替。
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color？谁写的这么条规则这么蠢，我就提这么一句QAQ
~~怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话，建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小，不要直接缩放。~~网上找的图全是这个比例。。

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看，建议顺时针转120度
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好，关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好？
01:02:867 (3) - ^
01:52:201 (4) - ^
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧，和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是

Good luck!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-07T13:54:28+00:00

EmingK wrote:
[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？你看错了
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^ 这个你没看错 fixed
01:10:534 - 加个circle? 好
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是蛤蛤蛤蛤[/notice]

Good luck!

改的地方

打开osu文件吧hitobjects后面的全部复制成下面的就可以了

[HitObjects]
42,194,868,2,0,P|84:234|143:236,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,212,1534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,192,1701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,188,1868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,195,2034,2,0,P|422:213|463:270,1,120.000005024671,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
349,335,2701,6,0,P|321:347|291:351,1,60.0000025123357,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,352,3034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,344,3201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,326,3368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,371,3534,2,0,P|219:307|200:222,1,180.000007537007,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,127,4701,2,0,P|152:135|112:178,2,120.000005024671
95,274,5868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
95,274,6201,2,0,P|45:253|15:193,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,101,6868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,80,7034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,74,7201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,84,7368,2,0,P|217:99|277:93,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,78,7868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,48,8201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,52,8534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,56,8868,2,0,P|420:108|380:160,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,176,9368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,9701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,9867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,228,10034,2,0,P|456:279|441:344,1,120.000005024671
377,296,10534,2,0,L|321:316,1,60.0000025123357
274,329,10868,2,0,L|215:305,1,60.0000025123357
178,368,11201,2,0,L|167:308,1,60.0000025123357
113,56,11534,6,0,L|81:171,1,120.000005024671,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,350,12201,1,2,0:0:0:0:
81,301,12368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,274,12534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,257,12701,2,0,P|241:227|274:169,1,120.000005024671
286,55,13368,6,0,P|336:50|360:57,1,60.0000025123357
404,65,13701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,99,13868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,154,14034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,200,14201,2,0,P|412:267|444:375,1,180.000007537007,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,306,15034,6,0,L|438:286,1,60.0000025123357
388,279,15368,2,0,P|335:275|267:303,1,120.000005024671
237,346,15868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,354,16201,2,0,P|343:287|302:242,1,120.000005024671
163,248,16868,6,0,P|126:295|117:353,1,120.000005024671,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17534,1,2,0:0:0:0:
163,248,17701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,197,17868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,196,18034,2,0,P|139:144|228:167,1,180.000007537007
436,280,18868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,19201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,272,19534,2,0,B|500:204|488:120|488:120|408:149,1,240.000010049343,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,79,20368,2,0,L|327:99,1,60.0000025123357
256,192,20701,12,0,21868,0:0:0:0:
80,108,22201,5,2,0:0:0:0:
157,88,22368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,81,22534,2,0,L|234:68,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,88,22868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
233,67,23034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,71,23201,2,0,L|312:81,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,145,23534,5,2,0:0:0:0:
294,168,23618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,175,23701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,171,23784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,158,23868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,161,23951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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389,324,100534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
341,318,100618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,292,100701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,244,100784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,100868,6,0,P|288:177|274:140,1,80.000000298023
233,75,101201,2,0,P|261:102|275:139,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,75,101534,2,0,P|183:66|104:146,1,160.000000596046,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,268,102201,6,0,P|163:289|201:298,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,318,102534,2,0,P|353:284|362:246,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,115,102868,2,0,P|348:94|310:85,1,80.000000298023
179,65,103201,2,0,P|158:99|149:137,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,268,103534,5,0,0:0:0:0:
382,115,103868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,65,104368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
201,108,104451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,150,104534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,193,104618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,235,104701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,277,104784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,320,104868,2,0,P|335:345|374:350,1,80.000000298023
452,293,105201,6,0,P|422:267|383:262,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,320,105534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,369,105701,2,0,P|183:364|154:338,1,80.000000298023
99,259,106034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,167,106201,5,4,0:0:0:0:
109,79,106368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,157,106534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
127,69,106701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,51,106868,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,40,107034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,52,107201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,63,107368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,192,107868,6,0,P|465:153|450:116,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,177,108201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,157,108368,2,0,P|283:196|298:233,1,80.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,177,108701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,193,108868,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,157,109034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,212,109201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
261,176,109368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,96,109534,5,4,0:0:0:0:
337,285,109701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,273,109868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,84,110034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
363,71,110118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,67,110201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,69,110284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,81,110368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,103,110451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,129,110534,6,0,P|193:150|154:159,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,157,110868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,159,111034,2,0,P|181:184|194:237,1,80.000000298023,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,321,111368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,309,111534,6,0,P|332:299|368:306,1,80.000000298023,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,365,111868,2,0,P|456:329|458:290,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,267,112201,2,0,P|325:258|286:266,1,80.000000298023
200,310,112534,2,0,P|190:252|197:228,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,170,112868,5,0,0:0:0:0:
359,205,113034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,110,113201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
435,144,113368,5,0,0:0:0:0:
283,265,113534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,75,113701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,24,113868,6,0,P|158:60|165:110,1,80.000000298023,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,190,114201,1,4,0:0:0:0:
206,219,114284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,251,114368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,280,114451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
170,302,114534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,315,114618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,315,114701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,302,114784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,280,114868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,251,114951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,219,115034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,190,115118,2,0,L|113:190,3,40.0000001490115,0|8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,188,115534,6,0,P|228:166|266:156,1,80.000000298023
266,156,115784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,156,115868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,232,116034,2,0,P|361:167|338:93,1,160.000000596046
250,52,116534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,10,116701,2,0,P|384:18|407:46,1,80.000000298023
445,126,117034,5,0,0:0:0:0:
445,126,117118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,126,117201,1,8,0:0:0:0:
437,221,117368,2,0,P|422:259|393:288,1,80.000000298023
304,318,117701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,305,117868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
145,232,118034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,118201,12,4,120201,0:0:0:0:

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-08T07:39:59+00:00

Flower

Flower wrote:
m4m

General

这是180？你们能不能不要做得跟160一样沒辦法因為是渣圖剛才又改了些

Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
请修改所有5%的部分修了最低到15%

这bg太花了 note颜色又跟bg一样简直第一pc就想给1分抱歉我想想要設什麼顏色..別給一分呀;w;
我还是先删了bg再mod抱歉我combo顏色會改謝謝mod

Insane

00:21:701 (1) - 这里背景是1/4，考虑一下 fixed
00:40:867 (1,2,3,4) - 或许可以考虑改成soft+whistle fixed
00:43:534 (7,1) - 交换NC fixed
01:09:201 (5) - 部分被血条挡住请考虑 fixed
01:12:201 (4,7) - stack？ fixed
01:31:367 - 01:31:451 - 或许可以加note fixed
01:52:867 (1) - 建议要么stack或者放的更近，要么改成一个跳 fixed

Yuki

01:07:201 (1) - 这里有个音考虑下要不要改成串
01:13:201 - 建议加note然后改成跳
01:27:868 (2) - 不舒服不如改成1/2然后01:28:117 - 加note
没啥问题

Hard

00:42:867 (3,4) - 跳得不好不如不跳 4可以放到x:272 y:63 fixed
00:44:867 (1,1) - 可以左右完全对称然后00:45:534 (1) - 去NC fixed
00:51:534 (8,1) - 交换NC fixed
01:06:867 (6,7,8,9,1) - AR7下这个五角星跳基本是吃食请考虑修改 fixed 已改成連續note
01:20:867 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 离转盘太近了感觉不是很好其实可以像Normal一样留一个break fixed 已設成break
01:33:201 (4,5,6) - 跳的莫名也是AR7下往往会看成摆的不好的1/1 不如不跳 fixed 也是設成連續note
01:46:200 (4) - NC fixed
01:49:867 (2) - 这不合曲，建议改成1/2+note fixed 設成前面一長條+圈

Normal

没啥问题 3Q

Good luck~謝謝花花神麻婆

- Jelly -

- Jelly - wrote:
Hi~

[Yuki]
HP-1或者OD+1
00:45:201 (5,1) - 这里太容易误读..
00:58:534 (3,4) - 改成滑条
01:03:368 (4) - 和01:03:534 (1) - 对称一下。移动到451 238
01:05:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗打起来不舒服。。
01:06:868 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - 5连应该从01:07:034开始
01:18:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 音效做个渐变

[Insane]
00:12:367 (3,4) - 换一下位置 fixed
01:28:868 (1,2,3,4) - 做二分音， fixed
01:41:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这六边形可以用Alt+S摆。更好看。。 fixed 等下up
01:52:867 (1) - 和2stuck fixed 是stack吧..
怎么感觉这才是最高难度 ._. 哈哈..

[Hard]
00:27:534 (1) - DS感觉没必要变化。。 fixed
01:28:201 (7) - 这里可做三连。做滑条感觉漏音。 fixed

[Normal]
00:44:867 (3) - 再做一次折返？ fixed

感觉简直是瞎mod QAQ (捂脸，還沒Ranked一張不神啦..
小船神麻婆不要介意 ||||| 不會

謝謝傑利神觸的mod

EmingK

EmingK wrote:
小船早._. 早
来得有点晚QAQ 沒關係@_@

. 一开始听这曲子我以为耳机坏了.. 這首歌蠻特殊..

This post is generated by EK's osu modpost generator.
Red=unrankable issue
Purple=Emphasis suggestion
Black=Suggestion
Gray=Feel free to ignore
[General]
Tags里单写一个Project干啥，在source里提到就不用写了。倒是可以写这个：
プロジェクトウタヒメ fixed
~~作曲/编曲：ARM，作词：夕野ヨシミ，~~Vocal：miko，可以加进tags中。（来源：http://www.giza10.com/soft/utahime/#3 ） fixed
Tags中的[Minakami Yuki]应改为[Minakami_Yuki]，所有的username中间不要有空格，需要用下划线代替。 fixed
似乎ranking criteria不让用与BG颜色相近的combo color？谁写的这么条规则这么蠢，我就提这么一句QAQ 花花說顏色相近不太好耶..
~~怎么感觉BG被纵向压过呢。。如果你有原图的话，建议用Photoshop的裁剪工具剪成相应像素大小，不要直接缩放。~~网上找的图全是这个比例。。還好吧這兩張..

[Normal]
00:04:701 (3,1) - 没包好 fixed
00:12:201 (1) - 遮挡起来不好看，建议顺时针转120度 fixed
00:30:534 (1,2) - 没包好，关了grid把(1)的中间控制点往左移 fixed
00:42:535 (3) - 尾部控制点移到x258 y208 fixed

[Hard]
00:17:867 (5) - 认真一点遮好？ fixed
01:02:867 (3) - ^ fixed
01:52:201 (4) - ^ fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5,1) - 叠歪了 fixed＿
01:49:867 (2) - ;w;在直线上加红点是要闹哪样咦沒紅點呀

[Insane]
00:06:201 (2,6) - 叠歪了 fixed
00:10:867 (5,1,3) - ^ fixed
00:50:201 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:58:867 (7,1) - ^ fixed
01:10:201 (9,10,11,1) - ^ fixed
00:26:034 (4,1) - 没包好 fixed
01:20:534 (2) - 还是做成直线好看
01:54:034 (6) - 换个地方摆吧，和(1)的间距有点坑

[Yuki]
00:35:034 (3,4) - 没叠好？
01:11:368 (2,4) - ^
01:10:534 - 加个circle?
01:47:201 (3,4) - 哦草这个坑死了后面那个也是

Good luck!謝謝E小K

Melt

Melt wrote:
Hi 嗨

[General]
combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz，试试这个：(196,136,255)
神麻婆果然很會選顏色

[Normal]
为什么要用tick2呢orz 想讓分數多點..不過改1了
00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些 fixed
00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket? fixed
00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了 fixed
01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好 fixed
[Hard]
感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点 fixed 改0.75 修了好久這邊....
00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好（逃 fixed (抓
00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢 fixed
00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁，比如这里 fixed
00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier fixed
01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0 fixed
01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc fixed
01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好 fixed
[Insane]
00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好 fixed
00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下 fixed
00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz fixed 我剛剛還以為這是原圖想說沒啥奇怪..結果回到自己的..咦 ?
00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好 fixed
01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o fixed 已刪
01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面 fixed

[Yuki]
00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好
:3 謝謝妹兒特的mod

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-09T16:23:31+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-10-08T13:02:48+00:00

Hi

[General]

combo colour应该是从背景取色?那combo colour3那个绿色是怎么回事orz，试试这个：(196,136,255)

[Normal]

为什么要用tick2呢orz
00:12:201 (1) - 个人觉得这样放要好些
SPOILER
00:15:367 (2) - 往左移一点for blanket?
00:34:201 (3) - 既然2copy1那3也copy1好了
01:17:867 (1) - 感觉还是结束于01:20:867比较好

[Hard]

感觉最开始的这一段sv稍微大了点
00:12:201 (2,3) - 没叠好（逃
00:15:867 (4) - 试试往下做弧呢
SPOILER
00:16:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 其实感觉很多小地方都可以调整一下让这个diff更整洁，比如这里
SPOILER
00:49:201 (3,1) - 因为这里不是高潮所以就harddiff来说感觉合成一个sldier
01:02:867 (3) - 这种要遮就遮好0.0
SPOILER
01:10:201 (8,1) - swap nc
01:35:534 (3,4,5) - 没叠好

[Insane]

00:12:701 (5) - 个人感觉往下放点比较好
SPOILER
00:15:034 (1,2,3,4) - 同样是细节上改动一下
SPOILER
00:24:867 (1) - 1这个角度实在是orz
SPOILER
00:44:534 (5,6) - 这个音乐的话5,6的ds再大点会更好
01:31:451 (2) - 感觉这个有点多余o.o
01:56:867 (3) - 感觉应该叠在2下面

[Yuki]

00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4)
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好

:3

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-08T14:25:03+00:00

Melt wrote:
[Yuki]
00:10:534 (8) - nc for consistence
00:16:868 (1) - 可以复制00:16:201(4) 本来就是复制的不过ctrl+G了一下
00:20:701 (1) - 这里可以上一个note然后让spin从00:20:784开始好
00:35:034 (3,4) - 稍微一动一下让3,4叠在00:33:201(2)上，移动前面的也行好
01:07:118 (9) - 听了很多遍都觉得这个note删掉比较好orz nope，听了很多遍确定有鼓点
01:30:868 (3) - 感觉有点鬼畜，试试3ctrl+g？我打起来毫无压力，nope
01:40:868 (1,2) - 没叠好 fixed
至于combo color，如果小船你要改的话，就顺便帮我一起改了吧

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2013-10-08T23:32:52+00:00

[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:

プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko

The combo colors in [Yuki] are inconsistent (not the same) as the others which it has to be is:

Combo1 : 192,192,192 
Combo2 : 128,255,255 
Combo3 : 18,124,255 
Combo4 : 128,204,51

[Normal]
00:05:867 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:06:201 (2) . It'll sound better.
00:10:534 (1) - Same as 00:05:867 (1) . Remove the new combo and add it to 00:11:534 (2) .
00:18:867 (1) - Maybe you can end the spinner at 00:21:534 so the players might have time to click 00:22:201 (1) .
00:32:534 (3) - Move the circle to x:332 y:188 for a perfect blanket.
00:52:201 (5) - Maybe a new combo here and remove the new combo to 00:53:201 (1) and a new combo to 00:53:534 (2) .
01:26:201 (1) - Move the little square on the slider's body to x:233 y:251, and the last little square on the tail (the end of the slider) to x:152 y:213 so 01:27:534 (3) could fit to the curve.
01:39:534 (5) - Add a new combo and remove the new combo to 01:40:534 (1) .
01:49:201 (3) - Move the second (2nd) little square to x:314 y:255.

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3) - Stack the head of the slider with 00:28:534 (4) .
00:46:867 (3) - Move the slider to one grid to the left.
01:24:201 (3) - Move the last little square on the tail of the slider to x:188 y:144.

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) .
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect.
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240.

If you have any question on my mod, you can PM me. Good Luck.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-09T03:20:45+00:00

sheela901 wrote:
[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
fixed

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) . Sound Channel changed here, so I use NC, no change
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect. fixed, because the slider is copyed from 00:56:867 (1) - , make a little change to the two sliders
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240. move to x:276, y:225 instead

thanks!

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2013-10-09T13:20:32+00:00

早灣 >w<
M4M.

"re" 意思是 "remove"
黑色只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色是建議改掉
紅色是unrankable

[general]

對00:22:201 - 這個點的kiai time來說.. 能不能告訴我他的作用在哪裡... 我聽到一些點跟這裡音相同可是卻沒kiai time, 那不如把他移到00:24:867 - 副歌開始更合適...不是嘛?

[Normal]

無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:201 -
00:38:534 -
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
00:19:534 (1,1) - 對於一首高bpm的歌... spinner隔了一次1/1就出現了note, 對newbie來講困難些(以Normal來說)

試試看這樣的節奏吧, 可以讓這邊簡單些, 不必在Normal裡把節奏擺得這麼緊密, 如果general沒改請看這句劃線的-->~~但如果你改了這個... 這裡的kiai time就要砍掉了~~
00:26:534 (4) - 雖然不知道你是不是故意的... 在這slider的開頭和結尾加個clap. 因為後面也找到一些..類似的, 把他們總歸類在這
關於一些可以加clap的slider
00:30:534 (1) -
00:44:201 (2,3) -
01:46:535 (3) -
01:48:201 (2,3) -
01:51:868 (3) -
01:54:535 (3) -
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - ...這邊打起來沒有feel, 平平淡淡的.. 在這三個slider的開頭都加finish, 比較不乏味
00:41:201 - ~ 00:45:867 - 這裡跟前面相同的節奏or音...為甚麼音量比前面低了20%... 如果要改回60%直接刪掉就好, 要不然會變成多餘的綠線
00:46:201 - 試試30%的音量吧... 這裡到下一個綠線地方以前有些吵... 這裡聽起來就是要平緩點的..為甚麼音量比前面副歌還高..lol
00:46:201 - ~ 01:07:367 - ...我還是吐槽一下NC有點亂, 倘若要改就全改噢.. 別只改一個~ 於是開始:
00:49:201 (6,1) - , 00:51:867 (4,1) - , 00:58:867 (1,2) - , 01:00:867 (1,3) - , 交換NC ; 00:54:534 (3) - NC ; 01:02:867 (1) - re NC
01:28:534 (4) - 加個clap, 聽起來比現在沒音效還適合
01:39:534 (5,1) - 交換NC ... 這邊怎麼不是跟01:28:867 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡一樣
01:55:534 - 你為甚麼要放棄治療...哎不對! 你為甚麼要放棄音量... 這邊改成N:C1然後音量調成30%都比現在這個靜音好太多了.. 改了之後記得在01:56:367 (2,4) - (2)的開頭跟(4)加上clap

...要記得你copy的難度的綠線設置,改的時候沒有用的就刪掉, 還有NC規律要注意一些~ Normal節奏可以再放鬆點 :3

[Hard]

無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
01:34:201 -
01:40:701 -
01:42:201 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
00:10:867 (5) - 不覺得這slider怪怪的嘛... 結尾不是該在00:11:201 - ?
00:35:867 (4,1) - 交換NC, 這裡是一個音的定點...所以我想應該NC在這, 然後00:36:867 (3) - NC, 比較好讀圖
00:43:534 (5,1) - 交換NC, 不覺得音樂是在00:43:534 - 切換的嘛~. 01:04:534 (1,2) - , 01:05:534 (1,4) - 也是
01:55:534 - 同Normal

排列可以在美觀點...~~不知為甚麼我看出你這Hard是在趕完成度的狀態下做出來的...沒梗的話就休息, 不需像個無頭的猛放拍子..~~

[Insane]

無用的綠線:
綠線
00:41:201 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
00:12:367 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀出他的位置, 因為被00:11:534 (1) - 遮擋了
00:56:534 (1) - ...我大概知道你NC的意義.. 但總覺得很多餘, re NC吧
00:58:867 (7) - , 01:01:534 (7) - , 01:04:201 (3) - WTF! 開頭的finish你聽起來不感覺很奇怪?! 刪掉改成whistle...如果不想改, 請降低音量... 這麼大聲會起爭議的...
01:10:201 (9) - NC please..., 你這個anti-jump沒有任何提醒就出現了... 起碼NC來提醒player
01:20:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得改成這樣,簡單又順手...flow不會出現問題...
img
. 01:21:867 (1,2,3,4) - 也是
01:55:534 - 同Normal

大致上的問題是...flow跟排列美觀度, flow就是你的流暢感覺, 通常我都會試打, 看哪裡手移動時卡卡的, 那我會認定為flow有問題

[Yuki]

Unsnapped green line
green line
00:22:228 -
01:59:199 -
01:59:532 -
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果..
01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是

整體來說還不錯!

大致上就這些~
給小船:
對一個剛開始做譜的來說! 算不錯了~ 別看我這樣講而難過 ;w;
支持一個star!

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-10T03:29:33+00:00

sheela901

sheela901 wrote:
[General]
In the tags of the difficulty [Yuki], it need the same tags as the others difficulty which it has to be is:
プロジェクト プロジェクト ウタヒメ [Minakami_Yuki] Vocal miko
fixed
The combo colors in [Yuki] are inconsistent (not the same) as the others which it has to be is:
Combo1 : 192,192,192 
Combo2 : 128,255,255 
Combo3 : 18,124,255 
Combo4 : 128,204,51
fixed

[Normal]
00:05:867 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it to 00:06:201 (2) . It'll sound better. fixed
00:10:534 (1) - Same as 00:05:867 (1) . Remove the new combo and add it to 00:11:534 (2) . fixed
00:18:867 (1) - Maybe you can end the spinner at 00:21:534 so the players might have time to click 00:22:201 (1) . fixed
00:32:534 (3) - Move the circle to x:332 y:188 for a perfect blanket. fixed
00:52:201 (5) - Maybe a new combo here and remove the new combo to 00:53:201 (1) and a new combo to 00:53:534 (2) . fixed
01:26:201 (1) - Move the little square on the slider's body to x:233 y:251, and the last little square on the tail (the end of the slider) to x:152 y:213 so 01:27:534 (3) could fit to the curve. fixed
01:39:534 (5) - Add a new combo and remove the new combo to 01:40:534 (1) . fixed
01:49:201 (3) - Move the second (2nd) little square to x:314 y:255. fixed

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3) - Stack the head of the slider with 00:28:534 (4) . fixed
00:46:867 (3) - Move the slider to one grid to the left. fixed
01:24:201 (3) - Move the last little square on the tail of the slider to x:188 y:144. fixed

[Yuki]
00:05:868 (1) - Remove the new combo and add the new combo to 00:06:201 (2) .
00:59:201 (7) - Try to make the blanket perfect.
01:13:034 (2) - This anti-jump isn't best for the map. Move the circle somewhere at x:272 y:240.

If you have any question on my mod, you can PM me. okGood Luck.fixed Thanks sheela901

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-10T08:36:14+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-10T04:31:58+00:00

Loneight wrote:
[Yuki]
Unsnapped green line
green line
00:22:228 - 这个不改了这里的绿线就是停掉kiai喷泉效果的作用
01:59:199 - fixed
01:59:532 - fixed
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果.. 我打起来觉得没有不舒服0 0 ，不改惹
01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是有人说过，有NC就能读，不NC不能读，只能说明这个player还不够pro =。=所以这个地方我是不会改的~
整體來說還不錯![/notice]

Thanks for modding~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-10T09:32:32+00:00

Loneight wrote:
早灣 >w< 早喔：）
M4M.

"re" 意思是 "remove"
黑色只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
藍色是建議改掉
紅色是unrankable
[general]
對00:22:201 - 這個點的kiai time來說.. 能不能告訴我他的作用在哪裡... 我聽到一些點跟這裡音相同可是卻沒kiai time, 那不如把他移到00:24:867 - 副歌開始更合適...不是嘛?
　　作用嘛。。凸顯效果？。。也不太對。。不過我已經取消了。但副歌就沒+了

[Normal]
無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:201 -
00:38:534 -
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
fixed
00:19:534 (1,1) - 對於一首高bpm的歌... spinner隔了一次1/1就出現了note, 對newbie來講困難些(以Normal來說)

試試看這樣的節奏吧, 可以讓這邊簡單些, 不必在Normal裡把節奏擺得這麼緊密, 如果general沒改請看這句劃線的-->~~但如果你改了這個... 這裡的kiai time就要砍掉了~~ fixed
00:26:534 (4) - 雖然不知道你是不是故意的... 在這slider的開頭和結尾加個clap. 因為後面也找到一些..類似的, 把他們總歸類在這
關於一些可以加clap的slider
00:30:534 (1) -
00:44:201 (2,3) -
01:46:535 (3) -
01:48:201 (2,3) -
01:51:868 (3) -
01:54:535 (3) -
fixed
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - ...這邊打起來沒有feel, 平平淡淡的.. 在這三個slider的開頭都加finish, 比較不乏味 fixed已加
00:41:201 - ~ 00:45:867 - 這裡跟前面相同的節奏or音...為甚麼音量比前面低了20%... 如果要改回60%直接刪掉就好, 要不然會變成多餘的綠線 fixed 阿沒注意到..
00:46:201 - 試試30%的音量吧... 這裡到下一個綠線地方以前有些吵... 這裡聽起來就是要平緩點的..為甚麼音量比前面副歌還高..lol fixed
00:46:201 - ~ 01:07:367 - ...我還是吐槽一下NC有點亂, 倘若要改就全改噢.. 別只改一個~ 於是開始:
00:49:201 (6,1) - , 00:51:867 (4,1) - , 00:58:867 (1,2) - , 01:00:867 (1,3) - , 交換NC ; 00:54:534 (3) - NC ; 01:02:867 (1) - re NCfixed
01:28:534 (4) - 加個clap, 聽起來比現在沒音效還適合 fixed
01:39:534 (5,1) - 交換NC ... 這邊怎麼不是跟01:28:867 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡一樣 fixed
01:55:534 - 你為甚麼要放棄治療...哎不對! 你為甚麼要放棄音量... 這邊改成N:C1然後音量調成30%都比現在這個靜音好太多了.. 改了之後記得在01:56:367 (2,4) - (2)的開頭跟(4)加上clap
fixed
...要記得你copy的難度的綠線設置,改的時候沒有用的就刪掉, 還有NC規律要注意一些~ Normal節奏可以再放鬆點 :3 ok 我會再鬆一點

[Hard]
無用的綠線:
綠線
00:38:701 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
01:34:201 -
01:40:701 -
01:42:201 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
fixed
00:10:867 (5) - 不覺得這slider怪怪的嘛... 結尾不是該在00:11:201 - ? fixed..咦?怎麼在藍線上..
00:35:867 (4,1) - 交換NC, 這裡是一個音的定點...所以我想應該NC在這, 然後00:36:867 (3) - NC, 比較好讀圖 fixed
00:43:534 (5,1) - 交換NC, 不覺得音樂是在00:43:534 - 切換的嘛~. 01:04:534 (1,2) - , 01:05:534 (1,4) - 也是 fixed
01:55:534 - 同Normal
fixed
排列可以在美觀點...~~不知為甚麼我看出你這Hard是在趕完成度的狀態下做出來的...沒梗的話就休息, 不需像個無頭的猛放拍子..~~
Ok，唔..也沒用趕的..有一邊想一邊做圖但做起來不知道為啥就怪怪得然後不符合人家的想法被噴一堆orz
[Insane]
無用的綠線:
綠線
00:41:201 -
00:41:367 -
00:43:867 -
00:44:034 -
01:31:534 -
01:34:201 -
01:42:201 -
01:45:367 -
01:47:867 -
01:48:034 -
01:50:534 -
01:50:701 -
01:53:201 -
01:53:367 -
fixed 順便說一句:感謝清理
00:12:367 (3) - NC, 比較容易讀出他的位置, 因為被00:11:534 (1) - 遮擋了 fixed
00:56:534 (1) - ...我大概知道你NC的意義.. 但總覺得很多餘, re NC吧 fixed
00:58:867 (7) - , 01:01:534 (7) - , 01:04:201 (3) - WTF! 開頭的finish你聽起來不感覺很奇怪?! 刪掉改成whistle...如果不想改, 請降低音量... 這麼大聲會起爭議的... fixed..的確蠻奇怪的..我竟然沒注意到這邊..orz (尷尬改成whistle了
01:10:201 (9) - NC please..., 你這個anti-jump沒有任何提醒就出現了... 起碼NC來提醒player fixed 改成重疊
01:20:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得改成這樣,簡單又順手...flow不會出現問題...
img
. 01:21:867 (1,2,3,4) - 也是 fixed 咦? 剛試滑一下真的還蠻順原來也可以這樣擺我怎沒想到orz
01:55:534 - 同Normal
fixed
大致上的問題是...flow跟排列美觀度, flow就是你的流暢感覺, 通常我都會試打, 看哪裡手移動時卡卡的, 那我會認定為flow有問題
Ok , 那我做一段會稍微test一下。
[Yuki]
Unsnapped green line
green line
00:22:228 -
01:59:199 -
01:59:532 -
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我不建議連打這樣堆疊...明明要有種緩緩前行的感覺,可是這邊卻被限制住了,然後後面00:35:534 (9,1,2,3,4) - 突然要來個大移動, 打起來不太舒服, 就像沒有做暖身運動就直接下場運動的結果..
01:47:201 (3) - ..這是個坑阿!NC 比較好讀圖. 01:49:868 (3) - 也是
整體來說還不錯!
大致上就這些~
給小船:
對一個剛開始做譜的來說! 算不錯了~ 別看我這樣講而難過 ;w; 恩，謝謝飛翔會盡所能的努力
支持一個star!謝謝QQ"

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2013-10-11T09:04:40+00:00

Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？

SPOILER

00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?

SPOILER

01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance

SPOILER

01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?

SPOILER

01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance

SPOILER

01:30:534 (3) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point

[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane?
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry

I hope that you will help
good luck!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-11T14:14:33+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？ I think that's not hard ;w;
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point ok
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1) same
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point ehhh. nope
00:39:201 (5) - how about this? sry
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider? ok
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm? sure
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern? it's square ><
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point ok
01:34:201 (1) - ^ ok
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful good
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance enn.nope
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point good idea
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this? that's not mistake :>
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish ok

thanks for modding

RandF

1,245 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2013-10-12T04:47:50+00:00

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]

Title: "shining grace"
tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?

[Normal]

00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
01:17:534- add a note?
01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?

[Hard]

00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
00:36:701- add a note
01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)

[Insane]

01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume

[Yuki]

01:42:034- add a note
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete

~Good Luck~

quantum-rose

quantum-rose 2013-10-12T05:41:28+00:00

PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-12T06:00:28+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[General]
Title: "shining grace" https://osu.ppy.sh/s/66372 This map is ranked, so no need to change the title.

[Yuki]
01:42:034- add a note nope, there is no sound
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete I hear there is no sound, so deleted

quantum-rose wrote:
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致 ok我改了
其餘完美

thanks for moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddding

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2013-10-12T10:05:56+00:00

[general]
没啥大问题~~你个神马坡~~
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话

SPOILER

00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开

就是这样加油

Spencers

98 posts

Joined August 2012

Spencers 2013-10-12T10:23:34+00:00

As your pm request

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.

[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR，HP，OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的，建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好，而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊，不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到　408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧

01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢

--------------------------------------------------------
That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久

　太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议..

原谅我不太会MOD音效。

不管怎么样，图不错。
Hope this helps

祝Rank~!

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-12T10:59:17+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
[general]

[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开 nope
01:20:701 (4) - finish 加了觉得难听
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效我觉得不用啊._.
00:45:534 (2) - finish 这个可以

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉这个让小船看-。-

_Kaiser wrote:
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、好吧 fixed
00:20:701 (5) - Finish 我觉得这个不用加，不过我觉得加在spin上不错
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧这个不改惹，除非BAT要求改=.=
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊.. 哪里有∑( ° △ °|||)
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G 故意的(oﾟωﾟo)
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好 fixed
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样其实是一样的0.0
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些还不圆滑么？我是复制ctrl+h,复制ctrl+j的……;w;
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢

--------------------------------------------------------
To _Kaiser：我的hard现在完成大概1分半了，再稍微等等撒~

Thanks for modiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing~

bokito

76 posts

Joined July 2010

bokito 2013-10-12T12:45:36+00:00

[General]

audio leadin不同统一下

[Insane]

00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图我建议往下拉一点
00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑重新拉下
00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56
01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感

[Hard]

01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观修改下
00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试

[Yuki]

00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
01:06:201 (1) - nc
01:06:534 (1) - ^

[Normal]
X

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EasyModder 1.4.2
Program By Weiren

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-12T14:06:48+00:00

Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:
Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point

[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry
I hope that you will help
good luck!

Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
Title: "shining grace"
tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
01:17:534- add a note?
01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
00:36:701- add a note
01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
01:42:034- add a note
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~

Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect

quantum-rose

quantum-rose wrote:
PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美

Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose

bokito

bokito wrote:
[General]
audio leadin不同统一下
[Insane]
00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图我建议往下拉一点
00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑重新拉下
00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观修改下
00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
01:06:201 (1) - nc
01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
X

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謝謝bokito 全修復了不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到..

_Kaiser

_Kaiser wrote:
As your pm request

Black - Advice and you'd better fix.
Red - Maybe unrankable,you should fix.

[General]
Normal的kiai's end isn't snapped.请查看AIMOD。
Normal的AR，HP，OD其实可以全减一。

[Insane]
00:12:367 (1) - 00:11:534 (1) - 这两个应该是不能完全重叠的，建议移动一下NOTE的位置。
00:18:034 (7) - 还是三点拉就好，而且这四点也没很好看。
00:26:034 (4,1) - 包好
00:28:201 (3,4) - 这两个可以包好
00:38:701 (2) - 要么加NC要么DELETE前面的NC00:36:034 (1) -
00:43:534 (1,2) - 弧度一样吧。
00:45:867 (13) - 第二个点的位置还是往里拉点吧不然很奇怪到(-24,228) 顺便可以NC。
00:59:534 (1) - 不要重叠啊，不开HD都会读错。
01:01:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:02:867 (4,5) - 弧度一样吧。01:03:201 (5) -
01:06:867 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - 还是摆成三角形吧。
01:08:867 (3,4) - 没包好。
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么像01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - 要么后面改吧
01:23:201 (2) - 可以移到　408 112
01:28:867 (1,2) - 弧度一样
01:36:701 (6,2) - 叠好
01:53:034 (2,4) - 弧度一样
[Yuki]
00:17:534 (2,3) - 那么小的渐变还不如重叠（强迫症在此lol
00:17:868 (4,5) - 你这两个是真没重叠..、
00:20:701 (5) - Finish
00:35:034 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好蛋疼的连打。。还是重叠或分开吧
01:08:201 (7) - 这个滑条可以弄成像01:08:868 (1) - 一样的弧度与形状，不然好违和啊..
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - ……怎么突然就变大间距了01:30:868 (3) - Ctrl+G
01:35:201 (4) - 还是重叠好
01:39:534 (1,2) - 弧度其实可以一样
01:54:451 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这地方连打弄圆滑一些
好多遮挡的难度，我喜欢

--------------------------------------------------------
That's all.
不好意思迟到了那么久　太忙了orz
只MOD了两难度..而且都是些无关紧要的建议.. 原谅我不太会MOD音效。
不管怎么样，图不错。
Hope this helps
祝Rank~!

謝謝_Kaiser 一些修復了

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-13T05:13:59+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-12T14:09:46+00:00

bokito wrote:
[General]
audio leadin不同统一下
@smallboat

[Yuki]
00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^ 好，和后面统一
01:06:201 (1) - nc 妥
01:06:534 (1) - ^ 妥

ttttttttttttttttthanks fffffffffffffffffffffffffffffor mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmoding

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2013-10-12T21:26:05+00:00

Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm?

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-13T01:47:57+00:00

Pandiar

Pandiar wrote:
Hi~ from my queue XD
I am japanese, Poor English sorry too, lol

[General]
OK

[Yuki]
00:02:701 (1) - i think hard to get the rhythm.how about this？
SPOILER
00:10:034 (7) - add whistle start point
00:13:368 (1) - same as 00:02:701 (1)
00:30:201 (1) - add finish start point
00:39:201 (5) - how about this?
SPOILER
01:16:534 (3) - reverse slider?
01:17:534 (3) - how about rhythm?
SPOILER
01:20:201 (1,2,3,4) - square pattern?
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:34:534 (2) - move x:252y:272 i think it'slooks more beautiful
01:42:034 (4) - add to note here :for instance
SPOILER
01:43:701 - i think add to note here.it is better flow
for instance stack 01:42:534 (2) start point
01:49:701 (2) - maybe mistake.how about this?
SPOILER
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:701 (6) - ^
01:58:034 (7) - add finish

[Insane]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:27:201 (4,5) - move x:340y:200?
00:27:534 (1) - add finish start point
00:30:201 (1) - ^
00:31:201 (5) - move x:376y:232?
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (5) - add finish start point
01:23:534 (1) - ^
01:28:701 - 01:29:867 i think more note and slider :for instance GOOD SUGGSETION!
SPOILER
01:30:534 (3) - how about this? No, sor.
SPOILER
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:39:367 - 01:40:534 same as 01:28:701 GOOD SUGGSETION!
01:45:201 - add finish and i think up the volume suddenly. how about 70%?
01:47:867 (1) - add finish
01:50:535 (5) - ^ start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (5) - add finish end point

[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - 00:10:867 (5) how about insert to whistle same as insane? Okay
00:24:867 (1) - add finish
00:41:201 - vol40%→50%？
01:23:534 (1) - add finish
01:28:868 (1) - add finish start point
01:33:867 (7) - remove finish
01:34:201 (1) - add finish start point
01:55:534 (1) - add finish
01:56:701 (4) - ^ start point
01:58:034 (3) - add finish

[Normal]
00:24:867 (1) - add finish start point
00:29:867 (5) - ^ end point
00:35:867 (1) - add finish
00:38:534 (1) - ^
00:41:201 (1) - ^
00:43:867 (1) - ^
01:23:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:34:201 (1) - ^
01:45:201 (1) - add finish
01:47:867 (1) - ^
01:50:534 (1) - ^
01:55:534 (1) - add finish start point
01:56:367 (2) - add finish end point
01:58:034 (5) - add finish

nice Normal!

poor mod sorry
I hope that you will help
good luck!

Almost all fixed , thanks Pandiar

RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
Title: "shining grace"
tags: Why do you include "プロジェクト" ×２　?
[Normal]
00:03:534 (2) - I prefer to end at 00:04:201
00:15:367 (2) - end at 00:16:201
00:18:867~00:19:201- it is better to add slider or notes
00:22:534 (1,2) - it is better to add some hit-sound
00:29:867 (5,1) - avoid overlap
00:33:534 (2) - it is better to change the symmetric slider about 00:32:867 (1) -
01:17:534- add a note?
01:27:534 (3,1,1) - I suggest to remap in such a way as not to overlap
01:57:701 (4,5) - how about changing a reverse slider?
[Hard]
00:00:868 (1) - I prefer to end at 00:01:201
00:36:701- add a note
01:07:367 (4,1) - uniform DS (1.1x) (hexagon-patternis OK, isn't it?)
[Insane]
01:17:867 (4) - it is better to end at 01:18:201
01:45:201~01:54:201- it is better to reduce hit-sound's volume
[Yuki]
01:42:034- add a note
01:43:701 (2) - I prefer to delete
~Good Luck~

Almost all fixed , thanks RandomEffect

quantum-rose

quantum-rose wrote:
PM
搜狗輸入法自動生成繁體
[Normal]
00:32:867 (1,2,3) - 可以搶救一下
00:44:867 (3) - 兩次折返會讓新手摸不著頭腦
01:54:535 (3) - 這滑條長得意義不明
[Hard]
kiai time節奏反而變稀疏了，感覺有點奇怪
不過我也沒什麽好的意見了TuT
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 這個三連感覺意義不明，沒啥必要吧
[Insane]
00:20:701 (3) - 不減下速嗎
00:28:201 (3) - 1和3連著兩個同樣的滑條我是覺得有點彆扭啦，要不要試試這樣？http://puu.sh/4NY6S.jpg
00:47:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 一大串單點不是很舒服啦，感覺可以參考下Yuki
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得分散開會更好看
01:41:201 (2) - 6分拍的目的是什麽._.
00:32:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 以及01:41:534 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 突然變緩打圖的時候有種強烈的違和感
[Yuki]
combo color和其他難度不一致
其餘完美

Almost all fixed , thanks quantum-rose

bokito

bokito wrote:
[General]
audio leadin不同统一下
[Insane]
00:17:534 (1,2) - 这里和前面我不建议overlap 有点难读图我建议往下拉一点
00:18:034 (3) - 有点丑重新拉下
00:20:201 - 这里是个空拍我建议把00:19:534 (3) - 拉成个1/4 slider 加上折返
00:30:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里距离没把握好 00:31:201 (5) - NC
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - add clap而不是whistle
01:40:784 (7) - x196 y56

01:48:117 (3) - x36 y188
01:54:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串可以加些音效进去
01:57:367 (1) - 有点为何感
[Hard]
01:13:534 (2,3) - 看上去有点不美观修改下
00:13:367 (1) - 改成个circle再在后面加个slider试试
[Yuki]
00:37:868 (3,4) - 这样弄我觉得更爽元芳你认为呢？
00:40:534 (3,4) - ^
01:06:201 (1) - nc
01:06:534 (1) - ^
[Normal]
X

----------

謝謝bokito 全修復了不過ins那一跟綠草..還沒找到..

ZZHBOY

ZZHBOY wrote:
[general]
没啥大问题~~你个神马坡~~
[insane]
连打ds好像不一样啊
01:10:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议换成三连加drum音效
01:12:867 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:35:867 (1) - finish
00:46:201 - finish
[yuki]
01:04:868 (1,2,3) - 建议移开
01:20:701 (4) - finish
01:12:034 - slidertick可以加上音效
00:45:534 (2) - finish

*01:34:201 - 其他难度也可以在这里加个喷泉

[hard]
01:20:701 - finish
01:28:201 (7,8,9) - 违和不过没啥问题
[normal]
00:03:534 - 跟vocal的话
SPOILER
00:21:867 - finish
00:29:867 (5,1) - 建议移开

就是这样加油

謝謝ZZHBOY 有些修復了

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello ^^ Random mod!

[Normal]
00:29:534 - 00:31:201 Re-arrange objects to this rhythm? GOOD !

Right now you've used 00:29:867 (5) - slider, which ends at 00:30:201. But here on 00:30:201 you hear the vocals place a long hold on the 'ru' in 'michiru', so 00:30:534 (1) - slider would sound better starting at 00:30:201 rather then 00:30:534. Add a note at 00:31:201.
00:46:201 (1) - Change to finish hitsound
00:56:867 (1) - ^ On the head?
01:01:534 (1) - ^ On the tail?
01:04:201 (3) - Add finish no the tail.
01:07:534 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:12:867 (3) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:39:534 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:29:534 (3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a 1/1 slider like 00:28:867 (1) - here instead, since 00:29:534 (3) - 's tail ends at 00:29:701, but the vocals are still holding on the 'mi' in 'michiru'. Then the 'chi' is heard at 00:29:867 GOOD !
00:32:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:35:867 (1) - ^
00:46:201 (1) - ^
01:02:201 (1,3) - Bad overlap, try this instead?

Or

*NOTE* you may need to move 01:03:367 (4) - a bit.
01:14:201 (3) - Remove finish on the head, isn't need here.
01:28:367 (8) - Remove this note so for consistency (with 01:25:368 (5,6,7) - )
01:39:535 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:47:867 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:867 (13) - Add finish on the tail.
00:56:867 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:02:201 (2) - ^
01:04:867 (5) - ^
01:12:867 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (4) - ^
01:17:867 (4) - ^
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:49:534 (1) - Remove NC.

[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.

Hope this helps~! ^^

Almost all fixed , thanks 10crystalmask01 Very thank your random mod , wonderful !

Last edited by smallboat 2013-10-13T11:10:23+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

James2250

osu! Alumni

4,059 posts

Joined July 2008

James2250 2013-10-13T03:27:31+00:00

Modding as requested, will have to be in English though

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely.

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style)
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before?
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-10-13T03:53:01+00:00

Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.

[Insane]

00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
01:39:534 (4) - ^
01:57:034 (7) - like this?

clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
for example,
01:23:867 -
01:24:534 -
01:25:201 -
01:25:867 -
01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff)

but well done. nice diff.

[Yuki]

00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]

00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ?
00:20:867 (1) - add finish
00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet.

[Normal]

00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - )

Good luck

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-13T04:04:36+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
[Yuki]
00:35:868 (1) - Add finish
00:46:201 (1) - ^ On the head.
01:02:201 (1) - ^
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:16:534 (3) - Soft finish on the head.[/notice]

ALL FIXED, THANKS

James2250 wrote:
[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music Rhythm start here so I add it.
OTHERS ALL FIXED,THANKS~
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.

Guy wrote:
[Yuki]
00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff. THANK YOU~ALL FIXED~

Aeonian Sonder

974 posts

Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-13T23:08:30+00:00

[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds?
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~

Kytoxid

osu! Alumni

1,369 posts

Joined April 2009

Kytoxid 2013-10-14T03:52:58+00:00

Heya!

Forgive me if I butcher any of my Chinese, haven't typed anything serious for a while. From PM request (for diffs Hard-Yuki).

[Hard]

用tick rate 2感觉的好一些,特别是在1/2上开始的slider (e.g. [Hard] 00:04:701 (5))。

01:09:701 - 加个circle? 这样flow的好一点。
01:41:534 (3,1) - 3最好不要完全盖住1的tail, 有的skin会看不出来有没有repeat.
01:50:201 (3) - 01:47:534里没有circle,所以我觉得这里也应该没有。
01:55:534 (1) - 用这里当head,改成1/1的slider?

玩的不错，跟音乐挺紧。

[Insane]

AR9觉的有点快,特别是开头的那个部分。用AR8试试？

00:24:034 (1) - circle比slider好一点。
00:31:867 (8) - 用4个circle,或者减去一个repeat & 把9放的远一点。
00:42:367 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - flow有点迷糊。改改位置？
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - 4-5的jump不是很自然。
01:20:867 (1) - 这里音乐比较轻,这些jump的fit不是很好
01:23:534 (1) - 这里可以加几个jump!

没有大问题，但是跟hard的难度差别有点高。

[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。
这里AR9也是有点快。

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump?
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了

玩不了这个map，太难了XD

总共来说都不错, star~

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2013-10-14T05:02:41+00:00

-APXH wrote:
[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

Kytoxid wrote:
[Yuki]

分数比Insane低，但是难度比它高。。。这是2nd insane，同样是insane =.=而且不是一个作者啊！
这里AR9也是有点快。 ar8完全不能玩

00:22:201 (1,2,3) - 我不是很喜欢这个pattern,但不是大的问题
00:43:534 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里有点乱。不乱，就是往返梗，最后一个改个方向坑人一把
01:07:534 - 这个section的hitsound太低，快要听不见了低么0 0
01:30:868 (3,4,5) - 1/4 jump? 滑条判定松，其实很容易接上
01:41:201 (2) - 这个slider看不出来，藏在hitburst下面了 :>

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

Topic Starter

smallboat 2013-10-14T12:32:55+00:00

James2250

James2250 wrote:
Modding as requested, will have to be in English though OKAY, Thanks "LINK"!

[General]
Everything seems to check out nicely. OKAY

[Normal]
A nice difficulty for a Normal but I think this is pushing it for the easiest difficulty of the mapset (especially with 2 fairly hard Insane difficulties). I would turn the HP down by at least 1 and the AR down by 1-2. For a fast song it has quite a lot of continuous parts without any breaks which I wouldn't expect for the easiest difficulty. Other opinions needed here I guess. The map itself is well done though. Well , I reduce HP-1, and have a little break.

[Hard]
00:41:534 (3,4) - odd place for a spacing change fixed
00:48:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - soft part in the music, might as well keep the spacing the same between these (especially as the next combo keeps the same spacing and it's the same style) fixed
00:48:534 (2) - I would expect the new combo here to match the lyrics fixed
01:46:867 (5,6) - jump here isn't needed in my opinion and music doesn't call for it fixed
01:49:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:03:534 (1) - extend to 00:04:201 to match the others before? fixed
00:31:867 (8) - could be hard for people to see the slider repeats with all of the other notes around it fixed
00:55:867 (3,4,5) - why a jump here? No change in the music and and it stays peaceful sounding fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 - Kiai time isn't needed here in my opinion and it isn't as dramatic as later on in the music
00:33:868 (4,1) - I would either stack these or move them further away, it is just strange to see it so close after a stack
00:59:201 (7) - add clap to the start to match the pattern
01:07:201 (1) - new combo isn't really needed
01:29:868 (4) - clap?
01:45:701 (3) - clap at the end (I am guessing these are on purpose but it sounds strange to suddenly stop at certain points when the rest follows it exactly)

Some well done maps but I think the main problem right now is getting the overall difficulty spread looking a little better , have to be nice to beginners here. A few too many jumps done just to follow patterns which I usually think is a bad idea but otherwise a fun mapset to play.Okay, I try it!

Thanks James2250 mod my map in free time !

Guy

Guy wrote:
Hi! from my queue :3

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
Audio Lead-in too long. it is enough to 1500.
fixed

[Insane]
00:04:367 (2,3) - remove whistle? it is weird cuz that part is very quiet.
00:05:201 (2) - remove whistle of the slider start. same comment above.
00:19:534 (3) - add whistle of the slider start. i can hear the piano sound, also fitting the vocal imo.
00:21:701 (1) - i suggest add finish of the slider end. really fit the song imo.
01:12:867 (1) - add finish please.
01:13:201 (5) - move to 1 grid left.
01:13:534 (6) - add clap of the slider start. drum sound here. like a 01:15:867 (2) -
01:16:201 (3) - so, add clap of the slider end.
01:16:534 (4) - hmm, add finish instead of the clap.
01:17:534 (3) - add clap of the slider start.
01:17:867 (4) - finish is really fit here. ofcourse it is slider start.
01:18:534 (1) - i think that add clap from the your pattern ?
01:28:201 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
01:28:867 (1) - ^
01:30:701 (8) - remove clap?
01:38:867 (1) - add finish of the slider start.
01:39:534 (4) - ^
01:57:034 (7) - like this?

clap many wanted more of the Kiai-time.
for example,
01:23:867 -
01:24:534 -
01:25:201 -
01:25:867 -
01:26:534 - and so on. (like a Yuki's diff) Okay

but well done. nice diff.Thanks Guy
Almost fixed

[Yuki]
00:00:867 - 5% volume is too low. it is issue to confuse of players. i suggest a bit up the volume.
00:29:534 (3) - add finish of the slider start.
00:59:201 (7) - you forgot add clap of the slider start?
01:02:201 (1) - add finish
01:04:868 (1) - ^
01:29:868 (4) - add clap plz
01:45:701 (3) - ^ of the slider end.

beautiful placement this diff.

[Hard]
00:14:201 (4) - remove whistle of the slider end. and slider end move to 00:14:867 - ? fixed
00:20:867 (1) - add finish fixed
00:24:867 - a bit loud the volume. clap is noisy when the song like this quiet. fixed

[Normal]
00:01:534 (2) - if you follow the vocal, slider end is 00:02:034 - better. (like a 00:12:201 (2) - ) fixed
Good luck

Thanks Guy ! Good Luck ,too.

-APXH

-APXH wrote:
[Gerenal for insanes]
00:40:867 to 00:41:117 - Have you every thought about reducing the volume of the hitsounds? Good idea , I fixed it!
EX:
00:40:867 - VOL: 70%
00:40:951 - VOL: 55%
00:41:034 - VOL: 40%
00:41:117 - VOL: 25%

[Insane]
I absolutely love it! It's so fun to play!!
00:57:534 (3,4,5,6) - Try muting the ends of these sliders fixed

[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it...

Sorry, that's all I had time for. I need to eat dinner. I still owe you 2 mods~ Nothing,nevermind!

Thanks -APXH mod !

riffy

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riffy 2013-10-14T14:31:34+00:00

Yo, just a quick look at the map!

as you requested, only your diffs

[General]

The gray combo colour may confuse player. You get exactly the same colour if you fail a song in multiplayer
Slider Tick Rate 2 sounds really strange in the beginning of the map.
Hitsounds are a little bit too noisy, imo. Maybe it's just me, tho.

[Normal]
Diff itsef feels pretty nice. Some things have bugged me a lot, tho.
00:22:201 - well, I would map this beat. It's loud and quite important. It feels quite weird when you ignore it :<
00:35:034 - 01:44:367 - 01:44:367 - HP4 and map vocals there. It'll feel much better, imo.
01:27:534 (3,4,1,2,1,2) - seriously, it looks way too messy for the easiest diff and it's also out of your pattern.
01:57:367 (3,4,5) - (4) is too close, some players may hit it before hitting (3). Try to avoid such things on the easiest diff

Diff isn't bad, but comboing seems to be a bit inconsistent and flow is a bit strange sometimes. However, it's sitill a pretty good diff.

[Hard]
Pretty nice one, too.
OD/HP + 1 to make diff settings more balanced. You should also remember, that it's a [Hard] diff and it's supposed to be hard!

Your rhythm is fine, but there're actually two things that should be imporved. Visual appearance of the map and comboing. Patterns are a bit messy, just work on your blankets and things and try to make combos a bit more consistent.
Hint: you can listen to drums/guitar in the background music to make comboing more consistent.

[Insane]
Seems to be fine, but same mistakes. Patterns aren't really neat and you can improve it and comboing ;__; Also, try to check your rhythm, some notes are a bit overmapped.

Well, it's just some common mistakes. Try to fix them when you get some free time!

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The map is okay, but it could be much better, try to work on it a bit more!

Note: THIS IS NOT A MODPOST, IT'S JUST SOME GENERAL SUGGESTIONS AFTER A TESTPLAY

Aeonian Sonder

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Joined May 2012

Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-14T16:31:03+00:00

[General for every difficulty except for guest]
00:05:867 - I don't think that a volume increase is need here. The sound just switches sides that's it.

[Yuki]
Since I didn't have time last time. I forgot to put in this comment:
There's alot of mapping to uses the location of previous combos, which I call in my terms "History Mapping" or "Referencing"

00:57:534 (3) - Resnap
00:58:201 (1,2) - Not a good idea to put these two there just after the slider ended
00:58:534 (3) - Resnap
01:07:534 (1,2,3) - Place these circles more apart. It's confusing

[Insane]
00:56:887 - Resnap timing point
01:50:201 to 01:50:451 - You should do the same thing with the reduced volume with every hitsounds that I asked you to do in the first mod. I forgot to mention that.

[Hard]
AR is a bit slow
01:40:701 (3) - Resnap
01:41:534 (3) - Same as above
01:53:201 (1) - Sudden new combo

[Normal]
Can't really say much since I not one who specializes in Easy maps. I specialize in Insane maps...
01:23:534 (1) - Both ends have clap on them
01:58:034 (5) - Might as well most it up since they're all equal distance

Aeonian Sonder

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Aeonian Sonder 2013-10-14T16:33:26+00:00

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:
-APXH wrote:
[Yuki]
00:22:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Well, uh...Don't over do it... ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

My idea is that you should do 00:22:201 (1,2,3) once, then reflect it. Or something like it. Read my newest mod to read my I'm saying thing.

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