1. Futsuu (2.27 stars, 226 notes)
2. Inner Oni (3.9 stars, 534 notes)
3. Kantan (1.66 stars, 132 notes)
4. Muzukashii (2.74 stars, 320 notes)
5. Oni (3.49 stars, 418 notes)

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

Oni

00:01:813 - k
00:05:192 - delete 00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:10:055 - add k
00:15:742 - add d
00:19:615 - 00:19:698 - add d, 00:19:780 - k
00:22:747 - d
00:30:330 - d
00:58:764 - d, 00:58:846 - move to 00:58:929 -
00:58:929 - k
01:00:000 - d
01:00:000 - d
01:17:473 - d
01:27:363 - K

Inner Oni

00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:42:527 - d
00:56:538 - d
00:57:363 - k
00:57:527 - d
01:27:363 - K

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Mod request~

[Kantan]

00:29:505 (30) k ?
00:40:055 (41) k
00:46:648 (48) k ?

[Futsuu]

00:57:033 (114) d ?
01:07:582 (142) ^

[Muzukashii]

00:10:879 (32) move to 00:10:549 ?
00:36:758 (139) move to 00:36:593 - and use k ?
01:00:824 (240,241) k d ?

[Oni]

00:05:440 (16,17,18) kkd or dkd ?
00:46:648 (223) k ?
00:51:923 (252,253,254,255) k d k k (follow the vocal?)
01:12:857 (377,378,379) kkd ?

[Inner Oni]

00:20:275 (106) remove?
00:46:648 (267) k ?
00:50:110 (289) k ?
00:53:242 (312,313) d K ?
01:05:440 (409) k
01:20:357 add d ?

Good Luck qoot~

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, sorry for late, but here's my mod c:

[General]
Nothing.

[Inner Oni]
01:12:363 (458,459,460) - How about making this a kkd pattern to fit with vocals as you've been doing in the difficulty.

[Oni]
00:10:797 (40) - How about moving this to 00:10:467 and making the new triple ddd, I think it feels better for drums.
00:53:242 - I'd suggest to use a rhythm like this, it matches better with the guitar and somehow could feel more natural due beginning in a downbeat.

01:26:703 - How about this? I feel a bit weird having to hit that triple before the big don, also it fits nicely.


[Muzukashii]
00:31:648 - How about adding a don here, it'd fit nicely with the bass.
00:46:154 (177) - Move this to 00:46:484? To keep consistency in your kat for this part.
00:51:923 (202) - How about moving this 1/2 earlier and using a kat instead, to match with vocals?

[Futsuu]
00:02:802 - You could add a don here to follow the drums better.
00:05:440 - And maybe add a kat here for same reason as above.
00:57:857 (116) - You could remove this, the parts of vocals would accentuat even more imo.
01:03:956 - Maybe a don here, using syncopation here would play nice for drums.
01:09:560 (147,148) - How about moving both 1/2 beat later, yes, they are on vocals, but having gaps like this in a Futsuu feels a bit weird as players
would expect uniform rhythms. Also you could add a note in 01:09:890 if you don't want to move them.

[Kantan]
01:00:989 - As you're following mostly vocals on kiai, you could add a note here, this 3 beats gap feels a bit weird.
01:26:868 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 later, it would fit better.

That'd be all from my part, nice mapset overall, good luck <:

kantokun wrote:

Random mod~

[Kantan]

• 
  not thing
  
  need more note , take it 2 star
  
  so Nice Kantan!

[Futsuu]

• 
  01:15:659 (162) - suggest : D

[Mukashiizu]

• 
  00:03:626 (8) - remove
  00:26:044 (96) - move to 00:25:879 - ?
  00:35:110 (133) - d
  00:50:934 (198) - k
  00:01:813 (4) - over map

[Oni]

• 
  00:01:813 (4) - over map
  00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
  00:18:462 - add d
  00:53:407 - add note
  01:06:099 (338,339) - why 2 k ?
  01:24:890 (1) - if follow vocal , k

[Inner Oni]

• 
  00:01:813 (4) - over map
  00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
  00:05:027 - add d
  nice lol

nice map ;w;
GL

1. Tags: You can maybe add Opening here.
2. Make sure to disable the Widescreen Support (in all diffs.). Because it is completely useless.

1. 00:20:110 (19) - Use a kat here instead (? I think it'll make a better effect between vocals and the BGM.
2. 00:20:934 (20) - Move this 1/1 back instead, vocals are acting here and drums sounds higher than 00:20:934 - definetly.
3. 00:41:374 (42) - Move this one 1/1 back as well, and make this a kat instead. It'll remark the instrumental much better in my opinion (actually is not following anything really well I have to say)
4. 01:00:495 (8) - Remove this note maybe (? I think a 4/1 rest moment here will be a good thing for new players, really.
5. 01:07:747 (15,16,17) - Actually I think this pattern sounds a bit weird comparing with the music. You can maybe move (16) 1/1 back, or remove it entirely (in addition this pattern become repetitive, and as I said this don't remark the music really well).
6. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here to remark the music change.
7. 01:26:868 (1) - This sounds weird actually and it is not following the music in a very good way. I recommend you to move this one 1/2 forward, I think it won't be a complicated pattern for newbies, so you should try this.

1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x-x) - Try adding notes in these places, I find them coherent with the difficulty of the map and with the music ofc. Give it a try, please.
2. 00:20:110 (39) - Hmm.. Maybe a finisher in this note it'll remark the vocals and drums at the same time.
3. 00:30:165 (61) - Move this note 1/2 back and then add a note in 00:30:330 - . It'll follow the music on a better way definetly.
4. 01:11:044 (154) - If I were you, I'd move this note 1/1 forward. I don't like a lot how it sounds where it is placed actually.
5. 01:23:571 (1) - Finisher as I said you in Kantan (?
6. 01:25:549 (3,4,5) - Use d d k instead, it'll follow better the higher and lower pitches in the music I think.

1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x - x) - Try adding notes in these places as I told you in Futsuu, they'll follow the music in a good way. If I were you, I'd try using dons in this difficulty.
2. 00:05:604 (11) - If you do the thing mentioned above, I think you can remove this note because it becomes a bit useless.
3. 00:53:736 (x) - Add a don here, and make the following note a don too, for a better rhythmical pattern and flow.
4. 00:54:890 (213,214,215,216) - Hmm.. this sounds a bit weird to me, try doing something like this instead
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:10:549 (279,280,281,282) - This pattern sounds weird as well, remove (279) and make a d d k in the following pattern for a better rhythm.
6. 01:12:363 (287) - Use a don here instead, this kat sounds pretty high comparing it with the music.
7. 01:23:571 (1) - You know.. Finisher (?
8. 01:25:055 (x) - This sounds really empty, you're missing a note here I think. So, try adding a don please.
9. 01:27:198 (1) - This note is not following the music in a good way, and provide a bad effect in the following big don. So, for a better sound effect, remove this note.

1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here (?
2. 00:11:703 (43,44,45,46) - Use d k k d instead, definetly (44) sounds higher than (43) and (46).
3. 00:15:659 (64,65,66,67) - I think you misplaced the 1/4 pattern here, because the sound over the blue tick is in 00:15:742 -. So, move (66) to this point instead.
4. 00:19:615 (x) - Add a kat here to emphasize the drums.
5. 00:59:341 (299,300) - k d instead (?
6. 01:16:978 - 01:17:060 (x-x) - Listening to drums, I think a pair of dons are necessary. Give it a try please.
7. 01:27:198 (2,3) - As I explained in Muzu, remove (2) and then use a big don in (3) instead of a big kat.

1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here, because the drum sound is really notable here.
2. 00:05:027 (x) - (^)
3. 01:22:582 (3) - Use a kat here instead.
4. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here as I said in the other diffs.
5. 01:27:115 (1,2,3) - Meh.. As I said before, remove (1,2) and use a big don in (3) instead.

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Hi! Sorry for the delay once again .. I was a bit busy with school lately

[General:]

1. Tags: You can maybe add Opening here.
2. Make sure to disable the Widescreen Support (in all diffs.). Because it is completely useless.

[Kantan:]

1. 00:20:110 (19) - Use a kat here instead (? I think it'll make a better effect between vocals and the BGM.
2. 00:20:934 (20) - Move this 1/1 back instead, vocals are acting here and drums sounds higher than 00:20:934 - definetly.
3. 00:41:374 (42) - Move this one 1/1 back as well, and make this a kat instead. It'll remark the instrumental much better in my opinion (actually is not following anything really well I have to say)
4. 01:00:495 (8) - Remove this note maybe (? I think a 4/1 rest moment here will be a good thing for new players, really.
5. 01:07:747 (15,16,17) - Actually I think this pattern sounds a bit weird comparing with the music. You can maybe move (16) 1/1 back, or remove it entirely (in addition this pattern become repetitive, and as I said this don't remark the music really well).
6. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here to remark the music change.
7. 01:26:868 (1) - This sounds weird actually and it is not following the music in a very good way. I recommend you to move this one 1/2 forward, I think it won't be a complicated pattern for newbies, so you should try this.

- Not bad, but I think you could work a bit more in the structure of your patterns, actually those 2/1 3-plets becomes pretty repetitive and sometimes don't follow the music in a correct way.

[Futsuu:]

1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x-x) - Try adding notes in these places, I find them coherent with the difficulty of the map and with the music ofc. Give it a try, please.
2. 00:20:110 (39) - Hmm.. Maybe a finisher in this note it'll remark the vocals and drums at the same time.
3. 00:30:165 (61) - Move this note 1/2 back and then add a note in 00:30:330 - . It'll follow the music on a better way definetly.
4. 01:11:044 (154) - If I were you, I'd move this note 1/1 forward. I don't like a lot how it sounds where it is placed actually.
5. 01:23:571 (1) - Finisher as I said you in Kantan (?
6. 01:25:549 (3,4,5) - Use d d k instead, it'll follow better the higher and lower pitches in the music I think.

- You focused a lot on follow the 2-4 White ticks, for that reason you couldn't find a lot of rhythm variation. I think you should find some other variation, because actually those ''kats'' patterns become pretty repetitive.
Anyway, this diff. is not bad.

[Muzukashii:]

1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x - x) - Try adding notes in these places as I told you in Futsuu, they'll follow the music in a good way. If I were you, I'd try using dons in this difficulty.
2. 00:05:604 (11) - If you do the thing mentioned above, I think you can remove this note because it becomes a bit useless.
3. 00:53:736 (x) - Add a don here, and make the following note a don too, for a better rhythmical pattern and flow.
4. 00:54:890 (213,214,215,216) - Hmm.. this sounds a bit weird to me, try doing something like this instead
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:10:549 (279,280,281,282) - This pattern sounds weird as well, remove (279) and make a d d k in the following pattern for a better rhythm.
6. 01:12:363 (287) - Use a don here instead, this kat sounds pretty high comparing it with the music.
7. 01:23:571 (1) - You know.. Finisher (?
8. 01:25:055 (x) - This sounds really empty, you're missing a note here I think. So, try adding a don please.
9. 01:27:198 (1) - This note is not following the music in a good way, and provide a bad effect in the following big don. So, for a better sound effect, remove this note.

- I think sometimes the rhythm becomes weird.. but oh well. Try to check the things pointed out in my mod, and try to check the diff. in general to see if you can find some other ''weird'' rhythm.

[Oni:]

1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here (?
2. 00:11:703 (43,44,45,46) - Use d k k d instead, definetly (44) sounds higher than (43) and (46). i kept it,because 00:14:341 (59,60,61,62) - i mapped d d k d here
3. 00:15:659 (64,65,66,67) - I think you misplaced the 1/4 pattern here, because the sound over the blue tick is in 00:15:742 -. So, move (66) to this point instead.
4. 00:19:615 (x) - Add a kat here to emphasize the drums.
5. 00:59:341 (299,300) - k d instead (?
6. 01:16:978 - 01:17:060 (x-x) - Listening to drums, I think a pair of dons are necessary. Give it a try please.
7. 01:27:198 (2,3) - As I explained in Muzu, remove (2) and then use a big don in (3) instead of a big kat.

[Inner Oni:]

1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here, because the drum sound is really notable here.
2. 00:05:027 (x) - (^)
3. 01:22:582 (3) - Use a kat here instead. also kept,because i follow the guitar sound
4. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here as I said in the other diffs.
5. 01:27:115 (1,2,3) - Meh.. As I said before, remove (1,2) and use a big don in (3) instead.

Well, that's all.. I think Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu could imporve a bit more.
I think your other map is better than this one (maybe is just me xD).
Best of luck with this, qoot!

I remapped muzu diff . and kantan diff, i'll try to add some patterns
Really thanks for your mod~

• 
  I think 1/2 double seems not bad, It has enough rest.

1. 00:07:088 - change to normal to unify other diffs?
2. About the part from 01:00:165 - to 01:04:121 - . Seems a little breaking spread colors, but Its not great. seems better as singlediff.
   Try to focus more vocal rhythm?
   
   1. 01:01:813 - how about move to 01:00:824 - ?
   2. 01:02:143 - change to don,and..↓
   3. 01:02:308 - how about move to 01:02:802 - and chagne to k?
3. 01:05:440 - add don to unify the quantity with 00:54:890 - .
4. 01:14:341 - add don?
5. 01:16:154 - , 01:17:967 - (to avoid the long parttern) remove and 01:15:989 - add k, 01:16:319 - add k?
   
   • - I think you want to avoid the high quantity... but 4-beat is clear and seems airly with plays imo..

1. 00:48:791 (91,92,93) - d-K-d is on purpose?
2. 01:15:495 - remove...?

1. 00:37:088 - change to don seems better with flow imo because 1st kkd appearance is kiai(latter half) and it works 1/2 rhythm well too.
2. 00:39:231 - how about removing there? seems a bit busy with calmer imo.

1. 00:18:874 - ,00:19:121 - add kat,don to make a consistent with 00:13:599 - ~ hihat?
2. 00:26:456 - add...d? I was worried, but seems a bit bored 1/4 triple only there. try to add 5plet anywhere?
3. 00:45:000 - change to kat to follow the snare variation and 00:44:835 - add don too? seems better with plays imo ww.
4. 01:06:923 (392,393) - k seems better with vocal and accompaniment imo.

Flask wrote:

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