2nd~ >w< っ★
Konpaku Sariel wrote:
Oni00:01:813 - k
00:05:192 - delete 00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:10:055 - add k
00:15:742 - add d
00:19:615 - 00:19:698 - add d, 00:19:780 - k
00:22:747 - d
00:30:330 - d
00:58:764 - d, 00:58:846 - move to 00:58:929 -
00:58:929 - k
01:00:000 - d
01:00:000 - d
01:17:473 - d
01:27:363 - KInner Oni00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:42:527 - d
00:56:538 - d
00:57:363 - k
00:57:527 - d
01:27:363 - K
Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:
Mod request~
[Kantan]
00:29:505 (30) k ?
00:40:055 (41) k
00:46:648 (48) k ?
[Futsuu]
00:57:033 (114) d ?
01:07:582 (142) ^
[Muzukashii]
00:10:879 (32) move to 00:10:549 ?
00:36:758 (139) move to 00:36:593 - and use k ?
01:00:824 (240,241) k d ?
[Oni]
00:05:440 (16,17,18) kkd or dkd ?
00:46:648 (223) k ?
00:51:923 (252,253,254,255) k d k k (follow the vocal?)
01:12:857 (377,378,379) kkd ?
[Inner Oni]
00:20:275 (106) remove?
00:46:648 (267) k ?
00:50:110 (289) k ?
00:53:242 (312,313) d K ?
01:05:440 (409) k
01:20:357 add d ?
Good Luck qoot~
almost fixed~DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi, sorry for late, but here's my mod c:
[General]
Nothing.
[Inner Oni]
01:12:363 (458,459,460) - How about making this a kkd pattern to fit with vocals as you've been doing in the difficulty.
[Oni]
00:10:797 (40) - How about moving this to 00:10:467 and making the new triple ddd, I think it feels better for drums.
00:53:242 - I'd suggest to use a rhythm like this, it matches better with the guitar and somehow could feel more natural due beginning in a downbeat.
01:26:703 - How about this? I feel a bit weird having to hit that triple before the big don, also it fits nicely.
[Muzukashii]
00:31:648 - How about adding a don here, it'd fit nicely with the bass.
00:46:154 (177) - Move this to 00:46:484? To keep consistency in your kat for this part.
00:51:923 (202) - How about moving this 1/2 earlier and using a kat instead, to match with vocals?
[Futsuu]
00:02:802 - You could add a don here to follow the drums better.
00:05:440 - And maybe add a kat here for same reason as above.
00:57:857 (116) - You could remove this, the parts of vocals would accentuat even more imo.
01:03:956 - Maybe a don here, using syncopation here would play nice for drums.
01:09:560 (147,148) - How about moving both 1/2 beat later, yes, they are on vocals, but having gaps like this in a Futsuu feels a bit weird as players
would expect uniform rhythms. Also you could add a note in 01:09:890 if you don't want to move them.
[Kantan]
01:00:989 - As you're following mostly vocals on kiai, you could add a note here, this 3 beats gap feels a bit weird.
01:26:868 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 later, it would fit better.
That'd be all from my part, nice mapset overall, good luck <:
kantokun wrote:
Random mod~[Kantan]
not thing
need more note , take it 2 star
so Nice Kantan![Futsuu]
01:15:659 (162) - suggest : D[Mukashiizu]
00:03:626 (8) - remove
00:26:044 (96) - move to 00:25:879 - ?
00:35:110 (133) - d
00:50:934 (198) - k
00:01:813 (4) - over map[Oni]
00:01:813 (4) - over map
00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
00:18:462 - add d
00:53:407 - add note
01:06:099 (338,339) - why 2 k ?
01:24:890 (1) - if follow vocal , k[Inner Oni]
00:01:813 (4) - over map
00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
00:05:027 - add d
nice lol
nice map ;w;
GL
mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi! Sorry for the delay once again .. I was a bit busy with school lately
[General:][Kantan:]
- Tags: You can maybe add Opening here.
- Make sure to disable the Widescreen Support (in all diffs.). Because it is completely useless.
- Not bad, but I think you could work a bit more in the structure of your patterns, actually those 2/1 3-plets becomes pretty repetitive and sometimes don't follow the music in a correct way.
- 00:20:110 (19) - Use a kat here instead (? I think it'll make a better effect between vocals and the BGM.
- 00:20:934 (20) - Move this 1/1 back instead, vocals are acting here and drums sounds higher than 00:20:934 - definetly.
- 00:41:374 (42) - Move this one 1/1 back as well, and make this a kat instead. It'll remark the instrumental much better in my opinion (actually is not following anything really well I have to say)
- 01:00:495 (8) - Remove this note maybe (? I think a 4/1 rest moment here will be a good thing for new players, really.
- 01:07:747 (15,16,17) - Actually I think this pattern sounds a bit weird comparing with the music. You can maybe move (16) 1/1 back, or remove it entirely (in addition this pattern become repetitive, and as I said this don't remark the music really well).
- 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here to remark the music change.
- 01:26:868 (1) - This sounds weird actually and it is not following the music in a very good way. I recommend you to move this one 1/2 forward, I think it won't be a complicated pattern for newbies, so you should try this.
[Futsuu:]- You focused a lot on follow the 2-4 White ticks, for that reason you couldn't find a lot of rhythm variation. I think you should find some other variation, because actually those ''kats'' patterns become pretty repetitive.
- 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x-x) - Try adding notes in these places, I find them coherent with the difficulty of the map and with the music ofc. Give it a try, please.
- 00:20:110 (39) - Hmm.. Maybe a finisher in this note it'll remark the vocals and drums at the same time.
- 00:30:165 (61) - Move this note 1/2 back and then add a note in 00:30:330 - . It'll follow the music on a better way definetly.
- 01:11:044 (154) - If I were you, I'd move this note 1/1 forward. I don't like a lot how it sounds where it is placed actually.
- 01:23:571 (1) - Finisher as I said you in Kantan (?
- 01:25:549 (3,4,5) - Use d d k instead, it'll follow better the higher and lower pitches in the music I think.
Anyway, this diff. is not bad.
[Muzukashii:]- I think sometimes the rhythm becomes weird.. but oh well. Try to check the things pointed out in my mod, and try to check the diff. in general to see if you can find some other ''weird'' rhythm.
- 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x - x) - Try adding notes in these places as I told you in Futsuu, they'll follow the music in a good way. If I were you, I'd try using dons in this difficulty.
- 00:05:604 (11) - If you do the thing mentioned above, I think you can remove this note because it becomes a bit useless.
- 00:53:736 (x) - Add a don here, and make the following note a don too, for a better rhythmical pattern and flow.
- 00:54:890 (213,214,215,216) - Hmm.. this sounds a bit weird to me, try doing something like this instead
- 01:10:549 (279,280,281,282) - This pattern sounds weird as well, remove (279) and make a d d k in the following pattern for a better rhythm.
- 01:12:363 (287) - Use a don here instead, this kat sounds pretty high comparing it with the music.
- 01:23:571 (1) - You know.. Finisher (?
- 01:25:055 (x) - This sounds really empty, you're missing a note here I think. So, try adding a don please.
- 01:27:198 (1) - This note is not following the music in a good way, and provide a bad effect in the following big don. So, for a better sound effect, remove this note.
[Oni:][Inner Oni:]
- 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here (?
- 00:11:703 (43,44,45,46) - Use d k k d instead, definetly (44) sounds higher than (43) and (46). i kept it,because 00:14:341 (59,60,61,62) - i mapped d d k d here
- 00:15:659 (64,65,66,67) - I think you misplaced the 1/4 pattern here, because the sound over the blue tick is in 00:15:742 -. So, move (66) to this point instead.
- 00:19:615 (x) - Add a kat here to emphasize the drums.
- 00:59:341 (299,300) - k d instead (?
- 01:16:978 - 01:17:060 (x-x) - Listening to drums, I think a pair of dons are necessary. Give it a try please.
- 01:27:198 (2,3) - As I explained in Muzu, remove (2) and then use a big don in (3) instead of a big kat.
Well, that's all.. I think Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu could imporve a bit more.
- 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here, because the drum sound is really notable here.
- 00:05:027 (x) - (^)
- 01:22:582 (3) - Use a kat here instead. also kept,because i follow the guitar sound
- 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here as I said in the other diffs.
- 01:27:115 (1,2,3) - Meh.. As I said before, remove (1,2) and use a big don in (3) instead.
I think your other map is better than this one (maybe is just me xD).
Best of luck with this, qoot!
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