Autumn wrote:

很抱歉，来迟了
最近沉迷wow5.4 现在终于缓过来了 lol

[Replay]

* 00:37:072 (1,2,3,4) - 试试交换23 感觉挺变扭的

* 00:41:072 (6) - 包好 fixed

Picture

* 01:28:527 (1) - 可以缩一个四分拍加一个单点在前面：

Picture

好

* 01:58:527 (1,2,3,4) - 同样可以试试交换23 现在挺好的
* 02:03:618 (3,4,5,6) - 尝试一下以下排列 好

Picture

* 02:58:163 (1) - 这个头可以用S：C1的finish 感觉有点奇怪;w;

* 03:21:072 (6,7) - 这两个滑条的头尾都交换一下和前面的衔接会比较好，如果采纳的话03:21:436 (1) - 也要交换头尾（Ctrl+G即可）考虑一下
* 04:16:527 (5) - 这个距离啊..最好安排一个跳不然容易被认为是四分拍 fixed
* 04:22:527 (1) - 变速，NC 好
总体来说没什么特别多要吐槽的
很棒的音效和皮肤以及故事版
谱面方面的话对跳跃的安排似乎有点泛滥？我觉得有点散，不过能处理成这样也不错了
加油 Star 感谢支持！

Strawberry wrote:

discussed with mapper via irc.

18:00 Strawberry: 一开始的flask
18:00 Strawberry: *flash
18:01 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:02 sjoy: 一开始怎么了 0 0
18:02 Strawberry: 感觉渐隐的ending可以移到1436
18:03 Strawberry: 一上来就闪一下感觉会瞎
18:03 sjoy: 哦
18:03 Strawberry: 而且效果感觉不是很好
18:03 Strawberry: 别的小问题我就不提了...
18:04 sjoy: 好
18:04 sjoy: 大方向的问题
18:04 Strawberry: 00:21:163 (1) - 说实话这个spinner略莫名
18:04 Strawberry: 就算要spin我觉得也应该00:22:527 - 开始吧..
18:04 sjoy: 其实一开始从这里开始做的。发现时间不够
18:04 sjoy: 就添上前面了
18:05 Strawberry: 其实全map上也不错
18:05 Strawberry: 至少比塞spinner
18:05 sjoy: 好的
18:05 Strawberry: *个人意见
18:06 sjoy: 我主要想知道这图被RANK可能有多大 还是说需要REMAP我心里有个底线
18:06 sjoy: 先
18:06 Strawberry: 00:30:527 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种大spacing的等距梗也是可以再灵活一点..比如把(4)移到x~104 y~260
18:07 Strawberry: 我已经提这些问题了就说明基本不需要洗牌了..
18:07 Strawberry: 但是提升空间还很大
18:07 sjoy: 恩
18:07 sjoy: 我会继续努力的
18:09 sjoy: 一开始想跳就想到等间距233
18:09 Strawberry: o
18:09 Strawberry: 00:55:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这种一般都是135whistle特殊情况下24但是基本没有全下whistle的
18:10 Strawberry: 自己考虑下
18:10 sjoy: 我试试
18:11 Strawberry: 01:26:527 (1) - 这种slider
18:11 sjoy: 应该杜绝么
18:12 sjoy: 没什么经验拉描点
18:12 Strawberry: 多加一个锚点就会自然很多 i.e.http://puu.sh/4rNOg.jpg
18:12 sjoy: 一般来说红点就是在黄金比例线上么？
18:12 Strawberry: 01:30:890 (1,1) - 这里的话这两个既然是水平的01:32:345 (1) - 这个要么也水平要么换个形状..
18:12 Strawberry: 黄金比例线
18:12 Strawberry: .
18:13 Strawberry: 其实就是你怎么看着顺眼怎么来
18:13 Strawberry: 难道你每拉个slider还用尺子量去?>_>
18:14 sjoy: 比如1分1 滑条我都是选球跑到蓝线上然后取圆心下点。。
18:14 Strawberry: 没有定式.. 这取决于个人习惯和实际情况
18:15 sjoy: 哦
18:15 Strawberry: 01:52:890 (3,4) - 这里spacing又莫名缩了好多.. 而且还是在kiai段..
18:16 Strawberry: 包括后面那几个连打。。
18:16 sjoy: KIA之后不是应该减了么
18:17 Strawberry: 还没结束啊
18:17 Strawberry: .
18:18 sjoy: 我认为唱完就结束了._.
18:19 Strawberry: 02:32:345 (2) - slider的reverse箭头不要轻易遮。。
18:19 Strawberry: 很容易就unrankable
18:20 Strawberry: 不过这里勉强可以放过..因为custom skin大部分是透明区域..
18:20 sjoy: 打完也算遮么
18:20 sjoy: 必须等痕迹完全消失么。
18:21 Strawberry: 不是完全消失 到能接受的程度即可
18:22 Strawberry: 但是你这里repeat我个人感觉略无理.. 所以遮着会比较危险
18:22 sjoy: 那就移开好了。

感觉细节部分还能再提升. 加油囖.

[ Sana ] wrote:

Go on extra rule~

result

lots of mistakes...lots of fun xD

my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115358

thanks~

HeShu wrote:

Extra rules

I'm not as good as [sana] but I did my best :3
Great map and too hard for my level yet (but perfect for approval imo)

There is my map :
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/116692

mintong89 wrote:

来了来了！

[Replay]

00:13:072 (3) - 如果是我的话, 我会直接stack住 (2) 然后用直线slider. 感觉这样比较有气派. (不对
00:14:163 (2,3,4) - 一样的Spacing怎么样? 已经一样了阿 ;w;
00:15:981 (3) - 这个违和感超级高, 用这个吧orz.

SPOILER

好
00:20:163 (2) - 这个slider和前两个不一样, 拉太弯了. fixed
00:21:072 (1) - 我觉得不用NC了 因为后面是spinner. 好
00:41:072 (6) - 感觉太靠近 00:40:709 (5) - 了 拉远了
00:41:799 (3,6) - 感觉这排发有点怪... 我再考虑一下;w;
01:21:254 (3,4,5) - 这个我建议stack住...现在的真的好奇怪... 好
01:22:163 (1,3) - 没包好 fixed
01:26:163 (5,1) - ^ fixed
01:46:163 - 加个note? 不然这样放着感觉很奇怪 已改了;w;怀疑版本不对;w;
第二个Kiai部分的好乱 感觉就像新人尝试做鬼畜图 然后做不成的感觉 233(

其他都还可以 加油!
对不起烂mod orz 只能射星了 感谢

S o a p wrote:

star~

ts8zs wrote:

随便来凑个数._.
00:05:254 (1) - Ｃｔｒｌ＋ｇ 感觉现在挺顺的
00:17:254 (2) - Ｃｔｒｌ＋ｇ 好麻烦后面都要调;w;
00:30:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990563 保留先，其实我这里节奏故意空1拍
00:32:709 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990575 ;w; 继续保留
00:33:799 (2) - move to 312,256
00:39:981 (1) - 下右移 好极了！
01:02:163 (3) - Ctrl+G 和2太挤了
01:24:345 (3) - Ctrl+G 先保留 4有点不顺
01:27:618 (5) - Ctrl+G 好
>01:27:981 (1) - Ctrl+G 以及微调 好
01:27:981 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990583 好
01:33:618 (1) - move to 352,184 保留
01:34:163 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990586 ^
01:39:436 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990594 好
01:45:072 (5,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990597 改了一部分

03:53:799 (3) - Ctrl+G 保留

ts8zs wrote:

没回的是什么情况._.

02:10:527 (3,4) - swap 好
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602 好
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48 no
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612 没改
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615改了下位置

这部分是咱的part..

ts8zs wrote:

继续,NO kd

没回的是什么情况._.

02:10:527 (3,4) - swap
02:25:799 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990602
02:30:890 (2) - move to 280,48
02:49:618 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990609 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990612
02:59:072 (3,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990615

04:21:072 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/991173 还要改后面的 111 好麻烦;w;
05:08:345 (1,1,1) - 难度突然大了
05:13:981 (3,4) - ^
以及后续的
就这样吧

CrazyErrorMan wrote:

Mod from my Que:
The only thing I could find is this slider at these time points.
01:22:163
01:22:527
The slider should be moved a bit, other then that, I have nothing else to say.

HelloSCV wrote:

as M4M sorry for delay

Replay

00:17:254 (2) - how about reverse this? better for palying o.o done!
01:07:254 (1) - remove this whistle? since there is no special sound here done!
02:02:709 (7) - it will be beter if you reverse this slider done!
02:59:618 (5) - ^ done!
03:00:709 (9,10) - i think a note after 1/2 slider is better so try reversing this rhythm done!
03:01:799 (3,4,5) - well this stack feels little bit boring for me, making a triangle or something else? done!

good luck~

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]

前3分

00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?

後3分

03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點

sjoy wrote:

smallboat wrote:

嗨 久等的MOD~ 抱歉這麼久


第一次看app lol

[General]

Nothing.

[Replay]

前3分

00:35:981 (2) - 滑條缺口對準 00:35:799 (1)
00:48:345 (4) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:49:072 (3) - 缺口對準 00:48:890 (2)
00:49:799 (6) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:52:709 (7) - 缺口對準 00:52:345 (6)
00:51:254 (5) - 前方whistle 使鼓聲加強
00:53:436 (2) - 重疊在1的滑條頭?
00:54:163 (5) - 前方whistle
00:57:072 (5) - ^
00:59:981 (5) - ^
01:04:345 (5) - 缺口對準4
01:11:618 (4) - + w or f
01:12:890 (4) - 尾端 + w 感覺不錯?
01:14:527 (6) - + w
01:15:981 (7) - 前端 +w
01:11:981 (1) - 缺口對準5 記得01:12:345 (2) 跟 01:11:981 (1) 等距
01:17:436 (3) - 前端w
01:18:890 (5) - ^
01:20:345 (5) - ^
01:21:799 (6) - ^
01:23:254 (4) - ^
01:24:345 (3) - 尾端w
01:26:163 (5) - 前端w
01:27:618 (5) - ^
01:56:890 (6) - 感覺應該是跟前面連在一起 沒有間距 (還是我水平太低 接不太到..)
01:57:072 (1) - 前端應該能+f?
02:02:709 (7) - 如同 01:56:890 (6)
02:02:890 (1) - ^
02:04:890 (3,5) - 加大一點聲音 讓whistle聲音表現出來
02:06:345 (3,7) - ^
02:08:709 (1) - 前端f?
02:10:345 (2,3,4) - 聲音大些
02:11:799 (2,3,4) - ^
02:14:527 (1) - ^
02:15:981 (1,2) - w聲再大一點
02:17:436 (1,2) -
02:59:254 (4,5) - 感覺4到5有點扭 ctrl+g?

後3分

03:09:799 (1) - 前端f?
03:24:163 (7) - 跟後面的1再近一點?
03:27:254 (1) - 前端f
03:34:709 (2,4) - 聲音大點
03:50:527 (1) - 前端f?
04:07:799 (4) - +w
04:09:072 (4) - 前端w
04:11:981 (4) - ^
04:42:890 (6) - +f
04:48:709 (1) - +w
04:54:527 (1) - ^
04:59:436 (3) - 到螢幕外了?
05:00:345 (1) - 前端w
05:01:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -都+w 1+尾端 ?
05:06:163 (1) - 稍微彎點?
05:09:618 (3,4) - 3尾端 4前端 +clap
05:14:890 (1) - 前端+f
05:15:527 (4) - +w
05:15:618 (5) - 前端+clap
05:16:709 (2) - 跟前端的1有點扭 ctrl+g?
然後05:17:072 (3) - 疊在(2)?
05:19:072 (1) - 前端f
05:26:527 (1) - 前端f
05:28:163 (2,6) - +w 還不錯
05:38:163 (1) - 前端f
05:40:799 (7) - +clap
05:42:345 (8) - 前端clap
05:51:254 (1) - 前端f
05:51:981 (5) - +f
05:52:709 (1) - 前端f
05:58:163 (6) - 滑條缺口對準(5) 較美觀?
06:01:436 (1) - 前端f
06:13:799 (5) - 前端clap

呼~完成! 希望能幫的到你 Good map . 祝Rank。 話說能mu ? 以後想跟你指點

感谢你那么细心的MOD
关于音效 WIS那一段我是故意之下2节奏的 4不下
关于BLANKET 并不是越多越好 有时候要看FLOW的
修复了一些

不知道為什麼就很專心的看 呵呵 看你做得很好 所以就慢慢看下去了
目前自己做的insane都好poor 不知該怎辦 QQ群也努力跟人請教中 希望你有空也能指點我一下

Garven wrote:

Did some quick IRC modding. I'll check up on the lyrics later if I get some time.

KSHR has graciously stepped up to help verify the lyrics are correct, so we'll wait on his ok.

Xinely wrote:

from m4m in my queue
Feel free to no kd my mod, this map already good and just opinion in here

• 
  General
  well because this is collab, make name mapper for collab in SB pls.. helpful to modder write who's part in their mod umm.We are the same group.We all decide not to do it

• 
  Replay
  00:01:436 (3,4) - try use this rhythm http://puu.sh/4xkMG.jpg ? follow music properly imo done
  00:06:527 (1) - 372,276? better for see based visual imo done
  00:08:163 (1,2,3,4) - try make them like http://puu.sh/4xkWd.jpg ? placement better imo done
  00:11:072 (4) - NC for consistency done
  00:15:981 (2,3) - try this overlap http://puu.sh/4y9Af.jpg ? done
  00:32:162 (5) - this placement make confuse imo, how about 152|248? keep
  00:35:254 (6) - NC because SV change keep
  00:44:344 (5) - add whistle in here because the music done
  00:51:254 (5) - ctrl+G for better flow to play? done
  01:25:254 (2) - better visual and more neat if you stacked with 01:24:163 (2) - ? done
  01:45:072 (5) - try ctrl+G this? done
  02:34:527 (7) - NC due SV change keep
  02:46:163 (7) - extend until 02:46:436 - ? sound better to me :3 keep
  03:58:890 - add note for follow vocal? I'll think about it
  04:19:254 (4) - ctrl+G for make jumpy and fun to play?keep
  04:33:436 (4) - NC for anti jump

Touhou :3
Good Luck ~

Garven wrote:

Bubble #1!

Scorpiour wrote:

just a warning:

different from hitsounds / mp3, You must get the permission from the skin-element maker BEFORE you use them in your mapset.