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Toyosaki Aki - Guitar ni Kubittake

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DJPop
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 กรกฎาคม 2552 at 10:49:58

Artist: Toyosaki Aki
Title: Guitar ni Kubittake
Source: K-ON!
Tags: anime toyosaki aki hirasawa yui k-on keion character song series
BPM: 185
Filesize: 5639kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (0.58 stars, 58 notes)
  2. Easy (3.42 stars, 125 notes)
  3. Hard (4.98 stars, 282 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 402 notes)
  5. Normal (4.59 stars, 211 notes)
Download: Toyosaki Aki - Guitar ni Kubittake
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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35th beatmap.

First song from Hirasawa Yui's character image song series.
Beginner = Because I couldn't make "Easy" easier >_>
Insane = Evil map with just 5m high score =P


EDIT 5: 12 Jul 2009
- Fixed note in Beginner.
EDIT 4: 11 Jul 2009
- Fixed notes.
EDIT 3: 08 Jul 2009
- Fixed notes.
Last edited by DJPop , edited 6 times in total.
_Kanbu
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_Kanbu
Im not that good in modding so may not find that much :)

[Beginner]

Fine

[Easy]

Song (not map) has parts which are inaccurate like 00:23:18 (3) - . You mapped it right but im not sure if its that easy to handel for starters. Also im not sure about that "tripplets" like 01:17:34 (2,3,4) maybe sliders fit in. Just suggestions :)

[Normal]

00:36:64 (5,6,7) - Jumps? *Maybe ok cause everyone is aware about your beatmaps :p
00:46:69 (1) - Spacing
01:07:45 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps again (*)
Anyway fun to play :D

[Hard]

Confuuuusse but cool :p so fine

[Insane]

Didnt expected anything easier lol. Looks fine (as far as i can tell ^^)

Star for sure
orioncomet
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orioncomet
i love k-on and DJPop map :P
Iluhiwizel
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Iluhiwizel
cool map :)
tieff
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tieff
Great work.

[Beginner]
00:35:01 (2,3) - Spacing?

[Easy]
00:57:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - I don't like this clap spam, but it's only me.
01:12:15 (2) - Add 3 return?
01:14:26 (2) - Really sory for nazi, but 1 grid up?

[Normal]
Cool hitsounds.
It's a bit hard for normal, but you have Beginner and Easy diff, so it's ok.
00:26:26 (5) - Whistle?
00:32:74 (2) - Clap on start.
00:33:23 (3) - Clap.
00:33:56 (4) - Make it 1/4 shortier, add clap on end and add note here 00:34:04 (x)?
00:35:66 (3) - Clap on start?
00:37:93 (2,4) - Claps.

[Hard]
00:32:42 (1) ~ 00:39:56 (7) - Hitsounds?
01:07:77 (2) ~ 01:08:42 (4) - Add raising volume?

[Insane]
It's awesome.
00:32:42 (1) ~ 00:36:15 (5) - Hitsounds?
01:07:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add raising volume?

Star'd.
Nachy
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Nachy
[Beginner]
Good practice for beginners indeed.

[Easy]
Really fun Easy here. No problems

[Normal]
Fun too with no problems

[Hard]
A bit claustrophobic and puzzling, otherwise still pretty fun.
00:24:086 (10) - Add whistle
00:29:245 (10)- Add whistle
00:54:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This part really felt kind of apart from the rest of the map's style, just a suggestion on trying to experiment on this part with different kinds of patterns. But not really necessary, just for the sake on something that could be better.

It's funny though, that Hard is a bit harder than Insane :V. At least for me.

[Insane]
Really fun and frantic. I like this.
00:24:024 (12) - Add whistle again :V
00:29:181 (12) - ^

Yeah, awesome map.
DJPop
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Yaahh wrote:

[Easy]
Song (not map) has parts which are inaccurate like 00:23:18 (3) - . You mapped it right but im not sure if its that easy to handel for starters.
Overall is not easy as the name =P
Also im not sure about that "tripplets" like 01:17:34 (2,3,4) maybe sliders fit in. Just suggestions :)
^

[Normal]
00:36:64 (5,6,7) - Jumps? *Maybe ok cause everyone is aware about your beatmaps :p
Fixed.
00:46:69 (1) - Spacing
Fixed.
01:07:45 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps again (*)
Fixed.

tieff wrote:

[Beginner]
00:35:01 (2,3) - Spacing?
They're far away so no problem.

[Easy]
00:57:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - I don't like this clap spam, but it's only me.
I usually use claps = snares.
01:12:15 (2) - Add 3 return?
Synced on guitar lead.
01:14:26 (2) - Really sory for nazi, but 1 grid up?
On the similar grid with previous pattern.

[Normal]
00:26:26 (5) - Whistle?
I tried it but didn't suit.
00:32:74 (2) - Clap on start.
No claps is better in the slow part.
00:33:23 (3) - Clap.
^
00:33:56 (4) - Make it 1/4 shortier, add clap on end and add note here 00:34:04 (x)?
Pattern will harder than Hard -_-"
00:35:66 (3) - Clap on start?
No claps is better in the slow part.
00:37:93 (2,4) - Claps.
^

[Hard]
00:32:42 (1) ~ 00:39:56 (7) - Hitsounds?
No claps is better in the slow part.
01:07:77 (2) ~ 01:08:42 (4) - Add raising volume?
Added.

[Insane]
00:32:42 (1) ~ 00:36:15 (5) - Hitsounds?
No claps is better in the slow part.
01:07:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add raising volume?
Added.

NachoPiggy wrote:

[Hard]
A bit claustrophobic and puzzling, otherwise still pretty fun.
What is claustrophobic mean?
00:24:086 (10) - Add whistle
I tried it but didn't suit.
00:29:245 (10)- Add whistle
^
00:54:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This part really felt kind of apart from the rest of the map's style, just a suggestion on trying to experiment on this part with different kinds of patterns. But not really necessary, just for the sake on something that could be better.
Fixed.

[Insane]
00:24:024 (12) - Add whistle again :V
I tried it but didn't suit.
00:29:181 (12) - ^
^
Thanks for modding & stars :)
pete2528
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pete2528
ติดตามผลงานตลอดครับ มาใ้ห้ดาว
XD
Cyril Scarlet
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โฉดๆแบบนี้ล่ะ ชอบ =w=
arien666
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arien666
Seems good. :)

I hope other people likes your maps :)

Star lol

ps.It's 8th star,isn't it?
Bluethefox
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Bluethefox
looks interesting, star'd ;)
Estelle18
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Estelle18
เพลง k-on อีกแล้ว *0*

djpop รับประกัน -3-
Larto
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Larto
Overall:

Offset is exactly 1300

00:54:47 - Remove Kiai here
01:04:85 - ^

Beginner is okay

Easy:
01:23:58 (5) - Move this note 1/4 earlier. I can see what you mapped it too, but it just sounds weird anyway.

Normal:
Kinda hard but okay

Hard:
00:32:26 (8,1,2,3) - I wouldn't change the spacing so rapidly here. I thought those notes were 1/4 apart from each other.
01:12:96 (8) - Repeat sounds weird
01:18:15 (8) - ^
01:23:34 (8) - ^
01:28:53 (8) - ^

Insanuh:
woah so sick
DJPop
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Larto wrote:

Overall:
Offset is exactly 1300
Fixed.
00:54:47 - Remove Kiai here
Fixed.
01:04:85 - ^
Fixed.

Easy:
01:23:58 (5) - Move this note 1/4 earlier. I can see what you mapped it too, but it just sounds weird anyway.
Either way, do what you told is sounds weird for me.

Hard:
00:32:26 (8,1,2,3) - I wouldn't change the spacing so rapidly here. I thought those notes were 1/4 apart from each other.
Fixed.
01:12:96 (8) - Repeat sounds weird
^Same with Easy
01:18:15 (8) - ^
Fixed.
01:23:34 (8) - ^
^Same with Easy
01:28:53 (8) - ^
Fixed.
Symbolic
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Symbolic
[Beginner]

00:44:26 (x) - Add break here.
01:06:39 (x) - ^


[Easy]

00:37:61 (1) - This isn't spaced right.
00:39:23 (2) - ^
01:12:15 (2) - Extend this slider 1 1/2.
01:13:20 (3) - Put this beat 3/4 later.
01:22:53 (2,3,4) - Make these a reverse slider.
01:27:72 (2,3,4) - Make these a reverse slider and extend it 4/4.


[Normal]

00:32:43 (TIMING SECTION) - Didn't see this slow down coming :( Maybe SB a sign or something like that.
00:32:75 (2) - Spacing isn't right.
00:33:24 (3) - ^
00:33:57 (4) - ^
00:34:38 (5) - ^
00:35:02 (1) - ^
00:35:35 (2) - ^
00:35:67 (3) - ^
00:36:65 (4) - ^
00:36:97 (5) - ^
00:37:29 (6) - ^
00:37:62 (1) - ^
00:37:94 (2) - ^
00:38:27 (3) - ^
00:38:43 (4) - ^
00:38:75 (5) - ^
00:39:57 (6) - ^


[Hard]

00:32:43 (TIMING SECTION) - Didn't see this slow down coming :( Maybe SB a sign or something like that.
00:32:43 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Isn't spaced right.
01:12:97 (8) - This sounds weird imo. You could change it.
01:23:35 (8) - ^


[Insane]

00:22:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Con... fu... sing...!!!!!!!!!!!11111111111 :'(
00:27:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:32:43 (TIMING SECTION) - Didn't see this slow down coming :( Maybe SB a sign or something like that.


Awesome map, super-fun to play. Great job :D
Starred *
DJPop
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Symbolic wrote:

[Beginner]
00:44:26 (x) - Add break here.
01:06:39 (x) - ^
No problem even there is no break times.
HP Drain level is very low.

[Easy]
00:37:61 (1) - This isn't spaced right.
Fixed.
00:39:23 (2) - ^
Fixed.
01:12:15 (2) - Extend this slider 1 1/2.
X
01:13:20 (3) - Put this beat 3/4 later.
X
01:22:53 (2,3,4) - Make these a reverse slider.
I think they're fine.
01:27:72 (2,3,4) - Make these a reverse slider and extend it 4/4.
I think they're fine.

[Normal]
00:32:43 (TIMING SECTION) - Didn't see this slow down coming :( Maybe SB a sign or something like that.
I think it's fine.
00:32:75 (2) - Spacing isn't right.
00:33:24 (3) - ^
00:33:57 (4) - ^
00:34:38 (5) - ^
00:35:02 (1) - ^
00:35:35 (2) - ^
00:35:67 (3) - ^
00:36:65 (4) - ^
00:36:97 (5) - ^
00:37:29 (6) - ^
00:37:62 (1) - ^
00:37:94 (2) - ^
00:38:27 (3) - ^
00:38:43 (4) - ^
00:38:75 (5) - ^
00:39:57 (6) - ^
BPM changed part.

[Hard]
00:32:43 (TIMING SECTION) - Didn't see this slow down coming :( Maybe SB a sign or something like that.
I think it's fine.
00:32:43 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Isn't spaced right.
BPM changed part.
01:12:97 (8) - This sounds weird imo. You could change it.
X
01:23:35 (8) - ^
X

[Insane]
00:22:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Con... fu... sing...!!!!!!!!!!!11111111111 :'(
00:27:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
X D=
00:32:43 (TIMING SECTION) - Didn't see this slow down coming :( Maybe SB a sign or something like that.
I think it's fine.
Larto
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Larto
Okay then. After some IRC discussion, Bubble.
RemmyX25
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Easy:
01:13:21 (3) - This feels random, I can't tell what this is placed on in terms of music.

Normal:
While i'm here, may i recommend up'ing the hit circle size a notch?

Hard:
00:54:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Now THATS confusing :P
01:23:35 (8,9) - In terms of hit sounds, the slider sounds really weird. I'm not sure if its just lacking a hitsound, or just repeating at the wrong time. If thats the case, i would recommend taking out (9) and making the slider just a tick longer (1/4 snap divisor, of course)

Insane:
Aahh a true DJPop difficulty. Not much too say except it was difficult to keep up with.
DJPop
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RemmyX25 wrote:

Easy:
01:13:21 (3) - This feels random, I can't tell what this is placed on in terms of music.
Guitar lead.

Normal:
While i'm here, may i recommend up'ing the hit circle size a notch?
Looks a bit weird for me.
And I think it's fine since the spacings are very close.

Hard:
00:54:48 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Now THATS confusing :P
: P
01:23:35 (8,9) - In terms of hit sounds, the slider sounds really weird. I'm not sure if its just lacking a hitsound, or just repeating at the wrong time. If thats the case, i would recommend taking out (9) and making the slider just a tick longer (1/4 snap divisor, of course)
Fixed by the other way.
RemmyX25
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[22:02] <RemmyX25> DJPop: if i could make a recommendation for hard
[22:02] <RemmyX25> 01:23:67 (9) - stack this
[22:02] <RemmyX25> on top of the slider end


EDIT: re-bubbled
Takuma
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
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Takuma wrote:

This is nothing major but, in Beginner: 00:32:43 (1,2,3) - the combo is inconsistent. I think you should fix the position of (2) so that it is all even. Fix for a rank!
I haven't noticed that O__O
Fixed.
Takuma
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llKite
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Pretty Cool Map :)
Withouth counting the fact that Normal was harder than your previous Cagayake Girls! beatmap on Hard(and kinda shiny on the chorus,making me miss the same beat 3 times in a row xD),but still have 2 easier difficulties,so it's all fine to me(and hard is really mind-breaking) ^_^
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